2011-11-14, 01:48 | Link #34902 |
Labda Prakarsa Nirwikara
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Remember to set up the correct angle of approach, match your velocity with hers, and then gradually decelerate, deary, otherwise the falling girl will become instant tomato paste
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2011-11-14, 02:42 | Link #34904 | |
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But i see quite a promising story Battle Fantasia will bring. If I ever get which chapter goes first and which will go next...
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2011-11-14, 09:06 | Link #34905 | |
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2011-11-14, 09:12 | Link #34906 | |
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I don't recall Signum knowing Floater Field. In any case, I'm very interested in the story. Looks like a bit of Madoka without making the realities worse than they needed to be, and now the magical girl is getting back-up of the best kind. Kind of like that excellent Sailor Moon / Nanoha crossover. |
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2011-11-14, 10:22 | Link #34907 | ||
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2011-11-14, 10:29 | Link #34908 |
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My biggest and perhaps only complaint about "White Devil of the Moon" is how it fumbles Yuuno's feelings for Nanoha.
Whatever your own opinions of that fic are, take my comment as a compliment. Heh. After reading the second chapter, if Fate wasn't grounded for life BEFORE, she certainly is NOW. And this time, she'd actually deserve it. The stuff with Hayate and the Wolkenritter was awesome. |
2011-11-14, 10:39 | Link #34909 |
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Yeah, a lot of that story is basically 'man, these girls sure do suck, good thing Nanoha, who is way better than Serena in every way, is here!', even if he intended otherwise.
Vivio beating up Rini was pretty funny though, so it's not all bad. |
2011-11-14, 10:40 | Link #34910 | |
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It's worse because he tries to pretend he isn't doing it. The Senshi are supposedly A-ranks now even though all four of them together struggled to take down even one of Precia's drones (the ones that Chrono and Nanoha cleaved through by the dozens in season 1), and they top out around AAA-rank in potential, which is pathetic for a set of MGs who are supposed to be the avatars of the planets themselves.
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2011-11-14, 10:51 | Link #34911 |
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To be clear, I did NOT say my complaint was that "White Devil of the Moon" developed a Nanoha/Fate pairing.
My complaint was how Yuuno's response to that was merely to shrug. And how, before that, news that Nanoha had almost killed herself was met with a sigh. In the first case, Yuuno should have been jealous and depressed. In the second case, he should have been frantic and rushing to help. Both of these are Yuuno's canonical reactions to Nanoha displaying any possibly-romantic interest in someone else (or someone else displaying the same for her) and for Nanoha being in danger. It's not a matter of shipping. In the same way, it would be out-of-character if Sayaka was not unhappy with Kyosuke seeing another girl, or was completely unphased by news that he had nearly died. |
2011-11-14, 10:53 | Link #34912 | ||
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...of course, she was unisoned with Rein at the time so we don't know if the spell belongs to Rein instead of her.
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2011-11-14, 13:14 | Link #34913 | |
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2011-11-14, 18:16 | Link #34917 | |
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*looks at Xellos, Dolphin, Riksfalto and Zelas.* Although These guys are bidding their time and waiting for the whole universe to stop wanting to live before Ragnarok begins...
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2011-11-14, 18:25 | Link #34918 | ||
Labda Prakarsa Nirwikara
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Nanoha is not a character that would be unfazed after taking a life. Quote:
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2011-11-14, 21:20 | Link #34920 |
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Whoa, that list o_O, it's mind boggling to think how much effort has been put into this Battle Fantasia.
That being said, collaborating to write a fic is just not my thing though, even though I can see much benefit from it.
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