2009-03-20, 13:55 | Link #19348 |
He Who Smites Shippers
Join Date: Mar 2008
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It's....
....actually, it's not bad at all. I'd ask why she's grinning evilly but I get the feeling I won't like the answer. The jacket isn't bad as far as design goes, but the rings on the staff make me think of Miroku from Inuyasha for some reason. The sketch could use a bit of cleaning up, but in general it's pretty good.
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2009-03-20, 14:00 | Link #19349 | |
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Germany
Age: 40
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The Device... Ok, I don't really know what the thing on the top is... is it a blade? If yes it is a little to small but if the Device is only a staff I think it works. btw. How old is Vivio on this picture? Her haircut looks like her loli haircut but... *looks at chest area*
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2009-03-20, 14:10 | Link #19350 |
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Hotsprings Resort
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I'm not a fan of Vivio's shoulders in the frontal view. They're kinda broad in comparison to the rest of her body. On the back view, it seems much better. The BJ itself doesn't look bad.
As for the device itself, I'd like a little more information on Vivio's magic before giving a better opinion. The rings on the shaft, I feel, are extraneous and do not look necessary.
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2009-03-20, 16:13 | Link #19351 |
Adeptus Animus
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Age: 36
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The cloth around her legs looks rather constricting to move in, less so in the front view, but more so in the hind view, I suggest placing the corner up a bit more to match the front view.
I agree with Tempest, I'd like to know a bit more about her magic before commenting on the device. Most importantly: Is it a melee device or a caster device? Last edited by Keroko; 2009-03-20 at 18:50. |
2009-03-20, 21:49 | Link #19352 | |
Worshipper of Nanoha...
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: In my imagination...
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Spoiler for Lack of Yuuno and...(TT_TT):
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2009-03-20, 22:47 | Link #19355 |
Worshipper of Nanoha...
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: In my imagination...
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Umm...I could but...it's from a H-doujinshi...well only the Yuunoha parts.
It's the only one I have that is translated and features a "normal" Yuuno and Nanoha. I can't give you the "direct" source because I don't remember how my friend got it (moved to Australia...). But I think it's from the Nanoha SEED series...hmmm... *thinks while looking through the computer's archive* Okay, I got it! PM me and I'll give you the link so you can download the Yuunoha parts...if you want...... Spoiler for Teaser for Tempest Dynasty...(^^):
And this is for everyone who just love CAPTAIN Nanoha... Spoiler for Petition to change TSAB uniform...:
I hope it isn't a repost...
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2009-03-20, 23:35 | Link #19357 | |
Worshipper of Nanoha...
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: In my imagination...
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Oops...my bad. I suck when it comes to military rankings... Spoiler for Wer're still friends right?:
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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Hmm... well, gonna do something with the clothe on her waist and with the rings on the device. Answering the questions this Vivio is around 16 years and her magic is ranged, the device was made taking Raiging Heart as main reference, gonna work with a version 2
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