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Tsuruya Tarot would be "The Sun"
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2009-10-11, 18:45 | Link #20462 |
Homo Ludens
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Canada
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Spoiler for September the Fifth, Day 4: The Park- Itsuko Pillow:
I thought that this was pretty awwwww. Note that eight is the highest number of points Kyonko can actually get with Itsuko, so that part of this scene only triggers if you were particularly nice to her. |
2009-10-11, 18:52 | Link #20463 |
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Hmm... I like it. And not because of the yuri overtones, either. A part of me was sort of hoping that Itsuko would unwind a bit and tell Kyonko what probably happened, but it wouldn't make too much sense in this situation (what with Yuuki and Mitsuuru around).
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2009-10-11, 19:01 | Link #20464 |
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My inspiration to rewrite the translation of "The Disappearance of Miku Hatsune" with Seitenkan-universe stuff has revived.
thx, kaisos. <3 Much loves in the form of candy to you. ...But I was thinking; I probably shouldn't include Haruki here, should I.
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2009-10-11, 19:33 | Link #20467 |
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'Kay, done. Remember, it doesn't sync up perfectly with the original lyrics 'cause it's just based off of a translation. I ended up including Haruki at the very end.
Spoiler for The Disappearance of Seitenkan:
Feel free to tell me how much it sucks. But seriously, if you see any improvements that can be made, I'd appreciate if you could point them out.
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2009-10-11, 19:53 | Link #20468 | ||
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In other words, the shadows from CHOMP CHOMP interlude. Anyway, the archive is updated, again. Kaisos, the last scene makes you my new favourite person. "Will you be my sister?" HNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGG Edit: By the way, happy thanksgiving to all you Canuckians out there. |
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2009-10-11, 20:02 | Link #20469 | |
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I don't know if I already said, but I really like your Mitsuuru. Is really lik a week guy who be treated the same way Mikuru is. As the oldest man (and, well, the only human man) it should be natural that him, not some annoying kohai take charge and protect the girls. Unfortunantly for him, his weekness don't disappear so fast. Your Yuuki was pretty good to. Well, beside that, you said there were only 8 Itsuko's point until that scene. However, unless you changed some other thing, I counted 9 in the flowchart (and neither scene was altered). However, you did say: and one point out nine was in a Kyon scene. So, I guess she have two variables? One for Kyonko and one for Kyon? Last edited by Heatth; 2009-10-11 at 20:25. |
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Homo Ludens
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It's the same variable set... technically you can have that one point on Day 4 and seven from the previous four days to get that scene... but it doesn't make much difference to how much gratitude Itsuko feels towards Kyonko. |
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2009-10-11, 20:54 | Link #20472 | ||
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I really spent like all of five minutes on this, unlike the Sighs Bad End fic, so please, everyone else, feel free to be brutally honest. Quote:
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2009-10-11, 20:57 | Link #20473 | ||
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I forgot to mention last post, but now I want a good end with Itsuko living in the 'real' world with Kyonko as her sister (and Kyon as her boyfriend?). We are having some good ends right (besides the 'lol reset' end, I mean)? The way you wirte it make me doubt it sometimes. Quote:
Yeah, I agree. It is good to not be too rash. I just ask to make sure. I tought I missed something. Last edited by Heatth; 2009-10-11 at 21:24. |
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2009-10-11, 21:03 | Link #20474 | |
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Throw in a scene of Haruhi forcing Kyonko into a goth loli (or sweet loli, both work) outfit for pure win. |
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2009-10-11, 21:51 | Link #20475 | |
Homo Ludens
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Location: Canada
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Crunch. Slurp.
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Itsuko would probably force Kyonko to call her "onee-chan", but I think Kyonko would probably prefer "Aneki" or something like that. More stuff. Spoiler for September the Fifth, Day 4, Interlude 09: Awakening:
Less epic than I had hoped it would be, but this is the sort of scene that music and visuals can really have an effect on. Poor everyone. Last edited by Tyabann; 2010-01-30 at 22:11. |
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2009-10-11, 22:12 | Link #20476 |
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Well, that certainly seals the ending possibilities to:
1) End of the (genderbent) World 2) Reset Button Adding this line of thinking to my "Haruhi forcing Kyonko to wear goth/sweet loli clothes"... Itsuko would not only allow it, but likely provide said outfit. |
2009-10-11, 22:27 | Link #20477 |
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*points back to his "The Disappearance of Seitenkan" song translation edit*
Hmm. Perhaps that the Haruki in the end of my edit is a different version? ...I want cereal. Too bad, y'know, I actually have to go downstairs, unlike some godlike boys who shall not be named.
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2009-10-11, 22:51 | Link #20478 | ||
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Spoiler for September the Fifth, Day 4: My Room- Sleeping (Headphones II):
The original song used, which could practically be Haruki's character song it's so perfect. Full translation here. There is one more scene I'll probably have up a lot later. It's the first part of Day 5 (not on the flowchart, don't ask) and it's called "Flashes in Space". |
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2009-10-11, 23:38 | Link #20479 | |
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And day 4 is brought to a close. Day 5 will bring an end to the common route and we can finally branch out to the other routes, provided the flowchart is still correct that is.
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2009-10-12, 00:06 | Link #20480 | ||
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I use my ipod for both my mood and for simple enjoyment.
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