Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[spawnofthejudge]

Originally Posted by Kaijo

This might actually be fun. I can see it now...

You just made NanoFate incest. I hope you realized that. Also, you apparently ship Lindy and Fate? I'm interested now.

[Thunderbird]

It would almost not matter where they are. Even if they were in the most TOP SECRET portion of Yuuno's library everyone in Section VI would think she was Fate and let her go almost anywhere. That kind of power is scawy XD

Edit: That starwars bit was funny as hell

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by spawnofthejudge

You just made NanoFate incest. I hope you realized that. Also, you apparently ship Lindy and Fate? I'm interested now.

Actually, I believe there's a fanfic on FF.net that is a Lindy/Fate pairing... hasn't been updated in awhile, though.

[Thunderbird]

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

Actually, I believe there's a fanfic on FF.net that is a Lindy/Fate pairing... hasn't been updated in awhile, though.

Yah there is. Its Testarossa Harlaown by Major Mike powell III. It hasnt been updated in forever though

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by Thunderbird

Yah there is. Its Testarossa Harlaown by Major Mike powell III. It hasnt been updated in forever though

Yeah, I remember. He reviews my fanfiction from time to time and always leaves nice comments. It's a pity he hasn't updated it in awhile, I rather liked the concept behind it and he was doing a good job developing it.

[Rising Dragon]

If I had to ship Lindy with anyone, it'd be Momoko. I blame Allquall for that one.

*shot*

Also, what? No page claim for 1000 pages? Shame on you guys.

[Satashi]

AlternativeS 1 AlternativeS 2 AlternativeS 3a AlternativeS 3b AlternativeS 4 AlternativeS 5

Spoiler for AlternativeS 6-1:

I could feel the pulsing vibrations through my hands as I gripped the steering wheel harder. My eyes were narrow, focusing on what was in front of me intently, scanning and taking in everything all at once. My engine was screaming and my hand stayed next to my shifter and hand brake, thumb pressed on a small red button. The kick was instant and the speed I was going started to move upwards at a rate that would have most people worried about control. I was used to this, however, and my ruby red eyes seemed to drink in the world in slow motion while I kept moving. My power over lightning gave me speed that, when combined with racing, made me quite a formidable opponent. The car to my left was passed and I wove in and out of cars on the road, speeding to the predetermined finish line while the other racers strained to keep their wits about them at this pace.

Alternatives VI
By: Satashi

The black car slid to a halt, skidding as the force died down from the sharp turn. Slowly the door opened and screams of victory came at once from around the woman getting out of her car. A crowd swamped to her, cheering and yelling while the rest of the street racers pulled into the designated area. When another car door open, the winner walked over to him, blond hair flowing out behind her. "Second place," she cooed out with a smile. "The first loser."

The man glared at the woman, fist opening and closing in his rage. "Why didn't they say you were racing tonight?"

"If they did," The woman replied casually, plucking her winnings from a man who came to her. "Then little boys like you would have went home."

"This race wasn't meant for you, Thunderbird!" He complained, pointing a finger at her. "There are rules!"

"I make my own rules." Turning, Thunderbird got back in her car. "Call me when there's a race worth winning." With that, the window rolled up and the engine turned. The people moved from the woman's path, allowing her to leave the scene without any more conversation. The vehicle moved back out onto the road and drove casually to a bar, where it parked away from the other cars.

The blonde got out and began walking to her favorite relaxing place before slowing down to a stop. "You have some nerve coming to see me in person after that little stunt you pulled."

A chuckle came from the shadows under a street light that couldn't seem to make up its mind on if it should be lit or not. In one of its flickerings, a man was revealed underneath it. Light purple hair that went to his shoulders came paired with a set of yellow eyes. A sick grin was set on his face and he showed no signs of fear from the girl. "I assure you, Alicia, I had no hand in what happened then."

Alicia scoffed. "Then why did your little trio attack me as I made the delivery, Jail?" Walking over to him, she stood before the man and glared. "You payed me to transfer the girl from your little secret lab to your base. On the way there, who should I come across other than The Loli Tri-force of yours. If you didn't inform them of me, how did they know I had relics with me, as well as what van I was driving?"

"Simple," Jail almost purred at her while holding up an ID tag smeared with blood. "One of the men who prepared your van was bought off by Erio."

Reaching out, Alica took the card an read the name. "Never cared for him anyway. Always wanted to put an underglow kit on my car." Pocketing the card instead of handing it back, Alicia crossed her arms. "Now, there is still the issue of my payment."

"You didn't make the delivery."

"As I recall, they got all three relics. I left with them, you got them. Delivery completed."

"I wanted the girl." Jail narrowed his eyes. "You failed to bring her to me."

"If your people wouldn't have attacked me, I would have." Her hand moved to jab a finger against his chest. "You pay me to do my job, and I do it. If you can't keep tabs on your little children, who's fault is that?"

"I have my reasons for not telling them about you, Alicia. They are concerned with Project F-"

"And I told you to never mention that name to me again!"

Jail didn't seem phased by the sudden outbreak. Instead he kept grinning while making eye contact. "I thought you would like an exception this time." Moving past her, he took a few steps away before looking over his shoulder. "What my boy Erio found while out will interest you greatly."

"Why do you think I care about him, or your little games you play?" Alicia turned around as well, glaring at him. "I'm a transporter, not a science enthusiast. Where I came from doesn't matter."

"Even if I told you he described you perfectly?" Jail's smirk rose up more, hands moving out in a helpless manor.

"Oh gee, He attacks my van and forces me to make myself scarce before the cops arrive so I don't get noticed. So what if he got a glance at me, he doesn't matter."

"The thing is, Alicia," Jail walked back towards her slowly. "He didn't see you then, nor when he recorded a conversation for me." Stopping right in front of the girl, he raised an eyebrow at her. "He talked to another woman. One who looks just like you, I should say... One who was born from Project F as well. From a very particular person, from my observation. You see, Alicia, from my years of research, I have managed to get a certain feel for clones and the process of making them. I can tell the difference between real and fake, you could say."

"And this interest me, why?"

"Because, my dear friend, with only the voice recordings and pictures that my dear Erio showed me... I know who this woman is."

"You have about three seconds to stop wasting my time."

"She, my precious Alicia... Is your sister. Or should I say twin?"

Alicia's eyes narrowed darkly as she reached out to grab his throat. "don't play your sick games with me, Jail!"

Undeterred by the grip on him, Jail simple lifted his hand, showing a small slip of paper in it. "Here is where she is staying. Once you meet her, I do hope you remember that you owe me a big, very big, favor for this information."

The girl growled at him before letting him go and snatching the paper from his hand. "If this is a trick, Jail, so help me, our partnership is over and ever location of your bases will become public knowledge so fast you won't have time to vacate them all before you're zerged with police."

"Have a good evening, Alicia." Jail called over his shoulder while walking away. "Give my regards to your sister."

Spoiler for AlternativeS 6-2:

~**~

"And this is where you came to?" Yuuno tapped a few buttons on his monitor while looking around at the park. "Strange place for a time shift."

"Not just time, but universe," Fate agreed. Her eyes scanned the area, finding nothing out of the ordinary. "Why was I here in the first place? A battle? But my jacket wasn't even touched."

Yuuno let out a breath while putting a hand on his hip. "Well there is a small spike of energies here, but nothing I can pin down. I need to know what the circumstances were that sent you here before I can really work on repeating the process..."

"I can't remember," Fate rubbed her temples. "Bardiche's memory log is completely blank as well."

"Devices sync to the world's time automatically. If you were sent to our universe, then Bardiche would have adjusted as soon as he was activated."

Fate looked down at her triangular gem. "Bardiche, have you adjusted your clock?"

"Yes Sir, twelve hours."

Fate blinked. "Out of sixteen... that means there are four hours where my memory lost. Bardiche, can you access those four hours?"

"No sir, there is corruption in the data bank."

Yuuno nodded. "I can imagine how that would happen. Our ships are designed to prevent the interference, so an unprotected device would suffer from it. What we really need is for you to recall what was going on that lead up to the rift. Can you remember anything? Anything at all?"

Fate stayed silent for a long moment for letting out a frustrated groan. "Nothing! I can't remember anything past sitting at my desk! Not even someone coming to me or being contacted!"

"Sir, last known contact was from Nanoha." Bardiche spoke up. "Requesting you to come to Hayate's office."

"Hayate...Hayate..." Face paced. "I was at my desk... eating a piece of candy... Hayate... Nanoha... Yes... Nanoha contacted me..." Hands went to closed eyes and rubbed. "She... she... she was nervous... and....and.... ARGH!"

"Calm down," Yuuno tried to sooth her. "Don't force it, just think calmly."

"Okay... okay..." Fate tried to steady herself.

"Maybe you should go to where your desk was in your world, see if it helps jog your memory. What candy were you eating as well?

"Why?"

"Taste brings back memories, much like smell. Its an aid that is proven to work."

"I... I see... Okay..." Fate nodded. "My favourite candy is Red Hots."

"Mine too," A voice made both people turn around to see a blonde walking towards them, red eyes shining as she looked at Fate. "Hello, Fate."

Fate's arms fell to her sides, breath catching in her throat. In front of her stood her mirror image, hair loose and flowing but bound near the bottom with a fluffy green ribbon. "Ali...cia...?"

Spoiler for AlternativeS 6-3:

"That's right," The woman answered with a hint of curiosity laced in her voice. She looked at the dumbstruck Fate for several moments before walking the rest of the way to her, circling the girl while inspecting. "Wow, you really are my twin."

"How...?" Fate breathed out, reaching to take Alicia's arm gently in her hand. "You should be dead..."

"I am very much alive," Alicia responded simply. "The question is, where did you suddenly come from and why haven't I met you before?"

"I...I..."

"Fate." Yuuno's voice made both girls look over at him. "Is this the person you were talking about?"

"Y...Yeah..." Fate nodded dumbly. "Alicia..."

Alicia hummed. "You seem to have known about me before now."

"Twenty years..."

The other girl licked her lips. "Twenty? So you knew me when you were one year old? Impossible."

"I'm twenty-nine," Fate revealed with wide eyes. "But you're only nineteen, aren't you?"

"That's correct." Alicia took the hand on her arm and inspected it. "So you're the older sister even though I was first? Were you born as an infant?"

Fate shook her head. "I was nine when I was born."

The other girl hummed to herself while thinking. "So you were born twenty years ago? That doesn't make sense, I always thought I was the one and only..."

"I... am a clone, a result of Project F that my mother was trying to create... I have your memories up until you... had your accident."

Alicia's mouth opened but she closed it again. After a few moments she finally spoke up once more. "I see. Well, this makes things interesting, doesn't it, Sis?" She grinned and couldn't help but laugh as she traced her fingers along Fate's face. "I sure age well."

Fate let out a small chuckle, shaking her head in disbelief. "This is surreal..."

Yuuno stepped up to the two girls after making sure to save all of his data. "Just out of curiosity, how did you know where to find us?"

The 'younger' sister looked at Yuuno and smiled. "I went to the base and someone there scolded me for making you wait on me at the park. I just came where Fate was supposed to be."

"How did you know her name?"

"Yuuno!" Fate chastised him. "She's my sister, why are you being so defensive!?"

"Because," Yuuno replied back, almost as sharply. "Vivio was terrified of her, and she placed him with Jail, a wanted criminal."

Alica glared at him. "I don't know you, but I really don't like you." Grabbing Fate's arm, she started pulling her away. "Come on, Sis, I want to talk to you in private.

"Ah, uhm," Fate stumbled as she tried to keep up. "Yuuno, tell everyone I will be back later, okay?" The male seemed like he was going to say something else but chose not to, allowing her to be dragged away some more before regaining her footing. "Alicia, where are we going?"

"Call me Sister, or at least Alicia-oneechan."

"Sis," Fate chose the same term that Alicia referred to her as. "Where are we going?"

"Lunch." Alicia pulled the girl closer and looped her arm through Fate's. "I just found out I have a twin, I want to get to know her. You're free, right?"

Fate couldn't help but laugh. "You ask after you drag me away." She got a giggle and was going to play a little more with the joke but stopped dead in her tracks when she saw a black sports car in front of her. "Is that an RX8?"

"Why yes." Alicia walked up to it and both doors opened. "Yes it is."

Fate slid into the passenger seat and inspected the glossy interior. "Wow, this brings back so many memories..."

Alicia grinned. "You have one?"

"Had," Fate mused while inspecting everything. It was almost as if she was in her old car, down to the very last custom detailing. "Nanoha borrowed it, blew it up."

"That's what happens when people who can't drive get in these things."

"No, I mean literally blew it up. Wasn't anything left but the frame, broken glass, and melted things." Fate grinned, despite the bad memory of the several days afterwords where she and Nanoha didn't speak to each other.

Alicia pushed the button to start the car, smiling even more as Fate continued to fawn over it. "What do you drive now?"

Fate hesitated, catching herself before she mentioned a car that hadn't been invented yet. "Nothing, I'm between cars currently."

"I have one you can drive. Its not quite as fun as this one, but it gets me by."

"You have more than one?" Fate blinked. "How can you afford that?"

"I have my ways." Alicia took Fate's hand and squeezed it. "But enough about me, tell me about you. Where have you been for so long, why didn't you try to find me?"

"I thought you died..." Fate whispered, reaching over to place her other hand on top of her sister's. "And I... I just wasn't around much here. Beleive me, if I could have done anything I would have!"

"So it doesn't creep you out?" Alicia asked softly, looking over at Fate sideways a moment before turning back to the road. "I mean, you said you were a clone, right? Does it make you feel weird knowing the real you is right here?"

"Not at all," Fate replied at once. "No matter how I was born, you're still Alicia and I'm Fate. We're twins."

Alicia kept her eyes ahead for a few moments before she looked at Fate once more, smiling at her honestly. "I'm glad."

~**~

"Yuuno-kun?" Nanoha called her friend's name curiously when he came to her raised platform she used to watch over her students. "I thought you were with Fate-chan?"

"Was, yeah," Yuuno replied back before stopping to stand next to her. "Remember how Vivio said Fate's sister's name? Alicia."

"Yes?"

"She found Fate at the park." Yuuno motioned with his hands while talking. "I couldn't believe it; they looked exactly the same. I mean... exactly."

"Well, Fate-chan did say that she was a clone..."

Yuuno nodded lightly. "She said that she came here first and was told to meet me at the park."

"That was her!?" Nanoha shrieked out, eyes wide. "But... but...!"

"I know," Yuuno crossed his arms. "I could only tell them apart by what they were saying, and Alicia had a green ribbon instead of black... But that's not the point. I'm concerned."

"About?"

"Vivio. Alicia obviously knows her, and Vivio didn't exactly seem pleased when she first met Fate. I mentioned it while there, but Alicia got mad and pulled Fate away."

"So she probably did do something to Vivio... but its so hard to imagine Fate-chan's sister to be bad..."

"We don't know her. Before we find out what the deal is, I don't want her to be unsupervised. She could very well be an enemy."

Nanoha looked down at the ground, weighing her feelings. "She's with Alicia-san now, isn't she?"

"Yeah."

"For now we'll just see how it goes. I'll talk to Fate-chan when she gets back...until then, I want to keep Vivio at my side and away from Alicia-san.

[spawnofthejudge]

Originally Posted by Satashi

AlternativeS 6-3

I have always wanted Alicia to be alive and a good person... and meeting Alicia, or at least AltS!Alicia anyway, might be good for Fate in the long run.

Satashi makes me happy with unexpected updates

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by Rising Dragon

If I had to ship Lindy with anyone, it'd be Momoko. I blame Allquall for that one.

*shot*

I always had the urge to try my hand at a Momoko/Misato fanfic after watching the Triangle Heart OVA, myself.

[SulliMike23]

Well that was better than what I expected.

[Dark Knight Gafgar]

Originally Posted by spawnofthejudge

I have always wanted Alicia to be alive and a good person... and meeting Alicia, or at least AltS!Alicia anyway, might be good for Fate in the long run.

Until the inevitable betrayal anyway.

[Nagumo]

Originally Posted by Dark Knight Gafgar

Until the inevitable betrayal anyway.

"Curse your sudden but inevitable betrayal"

[SulliMike23]

Originally Posted by Nagumo

"Curse your sudden but inevitable betrayal"

"Ah ha ha! Mine is an evil laugh! Now DIE!!!"

[Dark Knight Gafgar]

Originally Posted by SulliMike23

"Ah ha ha! Mine is an evil laugh! Now DIE!!!"

"Oh no, God, oh dear God in heaven...!"

[SulliMike23]

Originally Posted by Dark Knight Gafgar

"Oh no, God, oh dear God in heaven...!"

Haha! That was Shiny.

[RadiantBeam]

Shiny's deity status now, isn't she?

[spawnofthejudge]

Shiny: Firefly-ese for 'cool'.

[Rising Dragon]

You say that like she had any other status in the first place.

[RadiantBeam]

I just remember that she was promoted to deity status awhile ago. I don't know if she had any other status before that.

[Satashi]

Shiny has diety status, Angel has it, and I have it...

Though I think I'm the only one with a name. Slee-something-or-another

Page claim for Shiny, Angel, Diety status, and 20,001th post! (3,500 of them being mine lol)