2011-02-12, 11:43 | Link #182 |
Swordy Turkey
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Where turkeys can actually fly
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Wow, this thread is seriously lively.
People are making multiple posts a day. Anyway here are my character profiles. Spoiler for Asano Kazuki:
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Hmm, it seems that I'm the only one who's character uses a massed produced unit. @Terminator98 Thanks for the reply, though I have 2 more questions to ask you. How do you post the google docs the way you do and what's the show your avatar is from? Thanks in advance. |
2011-02-12, 14:35 | Link #184 |
Dictadere~!
Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: On the front lines, fighting for inderpendence.
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If that isn't tsundere I'm on some acid trip or other.
Nice drawing anyways! I wanted to be rid of Alice's EN chainsaw, and switch her to an entirely ranged role. Thus, I'm replacing it with a twin hip-mounted railgun coupled with a special bullet type which uses post-muzzle jet propulsion to further increase the velocity of a bullet to ridiculous speeds. Spoiler for New Osirus Weapon:
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2011-02-12, 14:49 | Link #185 | ||||
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And yeah... she does look kinda Yamato Nadesico... Sweet Gentle, etc... Off course, as you specified, over the top energy kinda makes her different. Quote:
What do you mean the way I post my google docs? The format? If that is so, I use the Verdana font, size 10 for standard writing, size 14 for Titles. To insert those lines, go into the "insert" tab and you'll see the the thing needed for that. If you meant how do I post google docs... Just google google docs (doh) and hit "create new". Better have a Gmail account I think to do that. As for the character in my avatar... It is actually a mech from Armored Core I personally designed and asked a buddy to draw for me. Here's the original sketch: Spoiler for Big Pic:
As I listened, this was what I pictured in my mind: 0:00 - 0:06 = Various shots of IS Academy 0:07 - 0:19 = Individual of each main chars in ISA 0:20 - 0:32 = Iinfite Stratos : Whatever Title we gonna put logo! 0:32 - 0:39 = Karon's dramatic pose scene 0:39 - 0:45 = Rachel and Jyun poses scene 0:45 - 0:48 = Helena! 0:48 - 0:52 = Erika! 0:52 - 1:00 = All the girls together doing various stuff 1:00 - 1:02 = Various Girls with their IS forms 1:02 - 1:08 = Saji plus possible x Karon 1:08 - 1:14 = Edward and Alex both their ISes appear in the background 1:14 - 1:30 = Various fight scenes and perhaps shipping scenes. There, total anime opening. :P Quote:
Maybe you could make it so that Magi's suit already has those hax abilities, Crest wants to test it with other ISes, thinks of sending Magi to the IS Academy (he could use it anyways, he's a bit newbie). They discuss with IS Academy, and come to a common agreement. Magi can come and deploy into the school, but her data will not only be heading to Crest's research lab, ISA will also get readings from it. Quote:
edit: Character Index updated Double edit: So far... possible order for the arrival of the characters: BEFORE THE STORY BEGINS: - Karon - Saji ALREADY AT IS ACADEMY AT THE BEGINNING OR ARRIVES SHORTLY AFTER THE BEGINNING: - Alice - Maria - Erika - Helena - Jyun - Rachel (we have a problem though... are we following her timeline? If that is so... all the main cast is in 2-1, and we are basically one year after the original story. I don't think a lot of us wrote our chars in this aspect) ARRIVE AFTER CHARLES ARRIVES - Alex - Edward NOT SURE WHERE TO PUT - Rachael Brown (US Instructor) - Lau Mey Ling (At some other place other than ISA) - Asano Kazuki (Same problem as his childhood friend) - Magi (Still elaborating on his origins so that he doesn't seem to drop out of a "camouflaged" dimensional hole) Hope this helps Meister.
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2011-02-12, 16:03 | Link #186 |
Dictadere~!
Join Date: Oct 2010
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Edited... Again. Woah, woah, woah. I've been missing out. I didn't know someone was making a fanfiction with all of our OC's! That's wonderful! So, yea, I just slipped in a transfer to the academy... Greedy me. I rid her of that brutish chainsaw and replaced it with the weapon I described earlier and added in a head-shot of Alice herself. Likely I'll redo the drawing of Osirus later.
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2011-02-12, 19:02 | Link #188 | ||||||||||||
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Location: 346Pro
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My Backlog Breaker Can't Be This Cute!!
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If you want a localized injector, adrenaline + lignocaine would suffice. Longer acting ones are -caine relatives, but they have a risk of causing heart attacks if they get absorbed into the central blood supply... Frankly, I'd go with just "M-fiber neuromodulator" that is built into the IS. That system deactivates M-fibers coming from the injured site with the use of the IS Field, safely and effectively killing pain without all the problems that come with pharmacology. And yes, I'm a Trekker. Quote:
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Rachel and Saji are being introduced soon on the airstrip, then we'll get to homeroom with the class there. I've understood that Saintess has the numbers flipped around by accident, so Rachel's actually with us in 1-2. Alex and Ed go to different classes, and they will appear later as stated. Magi would probably be the 'shadow in the corner' character. Mei and Kazuki can come in when Saji and Karon hold joint exercises with the US teams. I have an arc planned where the graduates of the ISA come back and do what I call a "service rotation". It involves a short teaching stint at the Academy, so Sherry, Marina and Hokusui (from the Singapore Lions) will appear there, along with Mei as well. Saji and Kazuki may meet earlier, as Saji attends IS symposiums which I believe Kazuki too. This is how I see everything fit together. The real question marks are the One Winged Angels... Quote:
I'd modify your profile slightly to say that Osiris is a national mass-production unit rather than a Personal IS, just to not dilute Rin being the only person in Class 1-2 with a personal unit. Apart from that, I'd use her profile more or less wholesale. If you don't want a storage form that is even better; Most of the characters I'm churning out store their IS units in a hangar, and Karon relies on either boarding the unit beforehand or Saji remotely flying the unit to her. (Need to update her profile as I recently only learnt of that difference) As a side note, I don't see why a properly-upgraded MPIS from the latest generation cannot give a personal a reasonable challenge in terms of power. (maybe I'm influenced by my own fanon's take on the whole personal vs MP schtick) ~~~New Intelligence Data Updated~~~ Now that IS: Shooting Star has an OP, we shall have the ED! You are my only Shooting Star...! The singing is instead done by all our OCs instead of 9nine. I'll even do a LOL version with the 5 guys (counting Charles for lol) acting cute once I have the chance. XD XD XD TV Size when I can find it.
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2011-02-13, 01:08 | Link #191 | |||||
NYAAAAHAAANNNNN~
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I would rather you use English names when in doubt. After all, SAF mixes their commands in both English and Malay. Quote:
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I think that design should be no problem since kuuderes are simply a subtrope of tsundere. I was subconsciously following the tsurime-tarime eye outlines and it achieved what I wanted her to be : prideful, strong-willed and stubborn. Of course : Spoiler for another sketch:
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2011-02-13, 02:48 | Link #192 | |
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Also I see we now have at least two other US OCs so I was thinking I might as well present some of my own ideas about the US IS scene for them to comment on. Spoiler for US IS Program:
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2011-02-13, 05:21 | Link #193 | |||
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Join Date: Jan 2011
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They're actually placed in an old US military installation in Japan , which was turned to an IS academy. I was actually considering the installation in Okinawa, but opted for the Misawa installation in the end. Though I did described it in detail in my fanfic which I posted earlier. So you could say they're in the canonverse, just not in the ISA (which lets me make as little ripples as possible in my fic) |
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2011-02-13, 06:08 | Link #194 | |||
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Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Germany
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Ah that's what you mean. Sorry, when I read Yamato Nadeshiko I think immediately of personality and not looks. Quote:
Certainly not Yui, but I think she is a little to young and diabolic for the job. I imagin her more like she voiced Oomura Yuki in Kobato. And this does not answer my initial question. Pettan! Pettan! Pettan! "Watashi wa pettan nai!!" >.< Hahaha that's gold. xD
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2011-02-13, 06:16 | Link #195 | |||||||||
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Heh... About messing with the neurology, I'd say that's easily handled by the IS Field. What I'm doing is handwaving it off, because nothing in modern science can kill pain like ketamine can. Quote:
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2011-02-13, 06:34 | Link #196 | |
Swordy Turkey
Join Date: Jan 2011
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Sorry, I just couldn't imagine my country actually up to date with their military tech. The last 'upgrade' we got to our arsenal was our one (and only) diesel engine submarine. |
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2011-02-13, 07:08 | Link #198 | ||
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Enjoy your free Tunku-type Armored Stratos. Quote:
I was thinking if she'd stand up to a rather arrogant 2nd year senior armed with a personal IS who is telling off a 1st year for bumping into her. That earns her some of that senior's wrath for being told by the weak. The lack of power of the 2 training IS users attracts Karon to step in, and when the senior gets violent: Spoiler for Sneak peak:
Hmm... Karon is about Rin's size, so when its bath time... >.>
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2011-02-13, 07:11 | Link #199 | |
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They just don't think women is that worthy enough to pilot such powerful weapon... |
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