2012-11-07, 10:29 | Link #38048 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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*Cecilia is shot down by Madoka*
Gentarou: What's so funny? M: Hahaha! Look at yourselves. All of you are so weak. Not soldiers, not warriors. Just arrogant civilians given a little toy. You should have just stayed at home and done your homework or something hahaha! Gentarou: Don't laugh! M:*laughs harder* Gentarou: What's wrong about being a civilian? What's wrong about doing homework? What's wrong about going to school? Everyday is fun. We laugh, we cry, we cheer and we whine. Every day we learn something new and experience things that make us whole. We gather up our memories and emotions that eventually lead us to each of our paths. Someday we'll become adults. But not like the ones you know. We won't forget who we are, who we were. Those memories we gather here today. WE WON'T FORGET OUR YOUTH! |
2012-11-07, 18:42 | Link #38050 | |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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2012-11-07, 19:08 | Link #38052 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Depends, really, is by this point Karon is 'mainstream'? Is this draft is to make her part of ensemble? If that so, then yes, Karon please!
EDIT: I need to make the antagonist OCs completely sympathetic. Can you help? Mostly with the motives and whatnot.
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2012-11-07, 19:55 | Link #38054 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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yes, yes, Ikaron please.
Well, the current list is > Chess-master with personal vendetta against the main antagonist (Louise) > Girl who doesn't even have memory (Aeon) she was using Charlotte's should-be-disposed original body in fact... > Young girl conscripted as I.S. pilot due to the family debt (Helen) > Cadet rep that did what her country demanded to (Amalia) > 'Evil' counterpart of Laura, well, not so much evil and more like raised horribly right to the core (Celeste) All does Heel face turn later, but only after fought with the protagonist.
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2012-11-07, 23:45 | Link #38057 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Question:
Should I swap the the Cake Party with Boxed and shipped to ISA? To add a little mystery on how he got there. edit: and jump straight into the action while the cake party is more of a flashback = I am trying to add element of sadness in. (remember: looking for sad and yet hopeful song few post back?) Which is why there is a slight shift in term of theme..... While it would still be light-hearted with the characters fooling around but there will be elements of darkness....which due to obvious reason (touchy subject), the characters try to avoid as much as possible. = Also adding fatal flaw to Watt (and hopefully other original characters)....Good Qualities turned into serious flaw due to excessive. Characters such as Watt are aware (due to being the cause) and is trying to change but will still display shades of the flaws....
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2012-11-08, 01:16 | Link #38059 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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I don't get the question....
Could you define what you mean by Entropy? But Seriously, Anything powered by normal stuff: Not much.... depending on how much energy we are talking about. = Even if we did have something like that, it is going to be ungodly expensive and difficult to make and to maintain (due to being one of its kind) With that in mind, where do you get the fund from? Edit: Yea... One sucky thing about real life is: Nothing last forever (If you look at the sheer amount of things at work, your mind would explode....heat loss, fragile stress, sheer stress...etc, Most engineers don't take all of them into account because that would make their mind explode or take years to design.... Every design have risks due to uncertainty which an engineer could not predict, they could only try their best to minimize the amount). Everything need maintenance.... otherwise they would break down. Even with maintenance, the older the said machine, the higher the maintenance cost.
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