2013-12-17, 19:00 | Link #2221 |
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Join Date: Oct 2011
Location: Vacationing in the southern isles.
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The chapter is OK, but it is kind of jarring without some sort of transition. One moment they are recovering from the festival and going back to school at the end of summer, and the next they are flying into snowy Hokkaido. The resolution of the relationships between the maidens can be worked out in the snow as well as on the beach, but we don't know what the reactions of the islanders were or even why they went north instead of to Tokyo, unless it has something to do with Mike's new film.
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2013-12-19, 22:29 | Link #2222 |
Confused. As usual.
Join Date: Jul 2010
Location: Flatlander.
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Were it not for the Author's track record(always keep 'em guessing!}, I'd be ready to quit this mess. Starshipw: The lack of a denowment for the previous story arc, and the lack of any introduction to this arc is very jarring. What the heck just happened! Why are we here NOW! We gain no more insight into the DG's powers and authority, we get no more understanding of the relational dynamic with the girls,the islanders, the elders (including Obaa) and how this chapter comes to pass.
If it hadn't been sooo good before! |
2013-12-20, 02:33 | Link #2223 |
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Join Date: Dec 2010
Location: Puerto Rico
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The way I see it, 1 of 2 things: special christmas chapters being part of the main story, or actually the beginning of post Dragon God ritual living for the girls, now that the choice was made that all of them will live on.
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2013-12-20, 02:50 | Link #2224 |
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Or... it could be one of those "Lets take a break from all the drama for a bit before biting into the details of the previous chapters" sort of thing. I'm fairly sure in the next chapters, the events between now and then will be filled in for us.
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2013-12-27, 12:21 | Link #2227 |
Confused. As usual.
Join Date: Jul 2010
Location: Flatlander.
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That's why we like him so much!
He plays with almost all of your preconceived ideas about the plot, and when you have it figgered out-POW! Here's an idea you didn't have. presented in a way you didn't expect! I'm shuttin' up now. Last edited by crossguy; 2013-12-27 at 12:23. Reason: forgot to finish sentence...... |
2014-01-10, 00:33 | Link #2235 |
Confused. As usual.
Join Date: Jul 2010
Location: Flatlander.
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Why do I get the feeling the roller-coaster is starting up again? Also, for a guy that teacher described as "cold", why is he so smiley and childlike in this chapter?
I just can't ever tell what is coming next. Oh? So you like that part too? |
2014-01-10, 11:20 | Link #2237 |
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Join Date: Dec 2010
Location: Puerto Rico
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I agree, but for now, let's enjoy the chilled atmosphere while it lasts, see what I did there? I could never understand people's rush to get into more drama when we just got out of a dramatic story. Slow your roll tootsies, and enjoy the ride.
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ecchi, harem, romance, rural, seinen |
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