2014-12-25, 21:53 | Link #1 |
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Kuro no senki
Hi, I am new here and a noob but i just want to share the Web novel that I am translating. And i want many other people to know about this WN.
Kuro no Senki: http://ncode.syosetu.com/n5214bb/ Synopsis: Chrono Crawford an aristocrat of Cepheus Empire has a secret. It was that he come from a different world modern Japan?! and came to this world. Almost like a cheat having knowledge and values of modern japan weapons, and aims to be Harem King! Commanding 1,000 of his subordinates against an army of 10,000. This is my blog site for the translation hope you take notice of it. http://wnoveltranslations.wordpress.com Only chapter one is translated for now but i will be updating chapters by parts. |
2014-12-26, 01:53 | Link #5 | |
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Btw the Author really is switching from an authors perspective to chronos perspective. Please leave a comment on the blog if you find any problems and comment on how you felt about the chapter. and thanks for reading Last edited by tigrexeliz; 2014-12-26 at 02:11. |
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2014-12-26, 02:58 | Link #6 | |
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If you have a better translation of the sentence i will appreciate it. BtW im new on translating so please go easy on me. Just finished editing the chapter 1, with the exception of the sentence you pointed out. Last edited by tigrexeliz; 2014-12-26 at 03:10. |
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2014-12-26, 05:13 | Link #8 | |
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and if f i can win, certainly, i want to fight proudly. even as a corpse. probing a little, how long have you been learning Japanese, Verb + たい is pretty basic as it goes. |
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2014-12-26, 06:24 | Link #12 | |
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"If I can win with that certainly, I will fight proud. Yes, even as a corpse " or "If I can win with that certainly, I will fight proud. ahh, leave the corpse" The second one makes more sense now TYVM!! I was actually thinking about the last part as well because ままで does mean leave as it is. 「……チートなし、あるのは領主の息子の地位と、役に立つかも分からない知識だけ」 without cheat,to have the status of being a nobles son,dont know the knowledge may be useful Last edited by tigrexeliz; 2014-12-26 at 07:14. |
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2014-12-26, 06:59 | Link #13 |
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One suggestion, don't rely on machine too much, if possible, try using Rikaichan only or TA since they have function to identify grammar, you would take a lot more time to have to search for grammar, but the accuracy is much higher, and you will learn faster. Do not ever, put word in MT to get instant output in English.
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2014-12-26, 07:20 | Link #15 | |
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i use http://nihongo.j-talk.com/ to better breakdown the sentence. |
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2014-12-26, 08:27 | Link #16 |
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well just reading it.... we all need sleep or it was just too rushed.... or even both.
putting things into english is hard anyway.... we got 'you' (now how can we make this more arrogant/kind/whatever) and can't do much with that, while there's a lot that could be done in japanese. Last edited by travelingbum; 2014-12-26 at 08:44. |
2015-12-30, 18:56 | Link #18 |
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I`ll end the 2º vol. soon, so i'm posting to revive this tread. This WN deserves some love. The best novel that i found this year, it has everything that I like: not OP MC, strategy, war, harem (with a hemaphrodite yandere heroine) and the best of all: a sly, not brave, efficient MC.
The first volume was all about how he gets his territory and his harem. The 2nd is war games, 'till where i read. I really recommend it. The bad things: it's not MT friendly and the chapters are long.
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2017-01-03, 13:48 | Link #20 |
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Not a bad senki series so far , although it does focus on the territory managment in the beginning as already mentioned it wasn't tiring and the buildup was nice.
Also this might've been the fastest snusnu I've ever seen in a non-hentai WN(chapter2, with a half-elf) and it all made perfect sense. Perfect. Really sad about the LN version from what I've been hearing though. Don't know what happened there but it seemed to have turned out like digested version with weird chronological order of events and missing descriptions/plotholes. |
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harem, strategy, web novel |
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