2012-02-03, 06:19 | Link #20702 |
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@'Demi - No, I suggest not doing that
Side note - Beautiful? Does this work: http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/...swap-gun-hair_ That's as far as you can go before it gets too ridiculous and he must've had sex change.
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2012-02-03, 06:21 | Link #20703 |
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There are only few actually. . Slash wound on the waist? now that's another story. There are larger artery that directly connected to the kidneys. harming that will cause a heavy bleeding that means cauterization is impossible. Slash attack might not strike that, but the resulting wound and bleeding still considered nasty, unless it's a very small cut.
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2012-02-03, 07:00 | Link #20710 |
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Vandam isn't that good, it starts off at the beginning of G3 ranks after all. But it was made by a brilliant creator who said that this one unit could cause the evolution of MPIS via the Invent System.
Even if its just a scrap of intel on the unit, other countries would kill for such a device. Which is why it occurred to me that Tatenashi might send Irish in to grab intel. He then turns his attention to the Kingdom of Ea for being the embodiment of everything he hates.
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2012-02-03, 07:12 | Link #20714 |
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I'm rewriting from scratch actually, so it goes like Cecilia monologuing about Houki's muscular body... and Houki staring at her breast commenting that foreigner has it easy
Seems like less of les-yay and more like awkward moment between girls...
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2012-02-03, 07:17 | Link #20716 |
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@ Senpai - A girl being jealous of another's body is normal. Kanzashi does it as well.
@ Demi - Lolz Well, some people are just born naturally effeminate. You have to take note that this has to go away at some point due to hormones. Side note - Cause people complain, that's why. Besides, you said he replaces it with the Setsura cannon, which looks like a megaman ripoff. Lastly, is it really vital that he lose his hand? If not, it just looks pointless.
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2012-02-03, 07:26 | Link #20718 |
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@ Demi - Then do what you want. I'm giving the excuse that his hormones are still suppressed, so he doesn't go through puberty yet even if he's 14. Besides, that guy there's wearing a wig
Most likely, yeah. Again, why is this required? Does losing his hand provide some awe inspiring metaphysical change in the story as opposed to keeping it?
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