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Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Canada
Age: 34
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At the least, I will say that she has rather an obsession with Itsuko. Given both Nagatos' ridiculous guitar talent, yeah. Awesome. Last edited by Tyabann; 2009-11-16 at 13:48. |
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Canada
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Sorry if this has been mentioned before but for those who didn't know, I just found a delightful Seitenkan webcomic recently here:
http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=66697 I've only had time to skim through it so far, and the art is very nice. ![]()
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This was actually posted a few pages ago. (not that anyone cared
![]() I haven't read yet, but it is very recent (the first page is from Oct 31). Somtehing that called my attention were Mitsuuru's name, being called there "Minoru". I remember that being one of the firts optiones, back when the project was borning last year, but does someone use that name nowadays? |
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Homo Ludens
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Canada
Age: 34
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After five days of procrastinating, an update!
Ja-jaaaaan! Spoiler for September the Sixth, Day 5: Flashes in Space (Restlessness/Melancholy):
And here we have the first makings of what Danchou and I refer to as the "Square", possibly the most important concept in this entire novel. Enjoy the read. Last edited by Tyabann; 2009-11-18 at 00:25. |
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Melancholic Swim Captain
Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: Pennyslvania
Age: 34
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That was great. Really allowed me to get into Haruki's head. Great job Kaisos.
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Nice scene. Haruki was certanly annoying eh? And a delinquent too, it certanly fits. Hmmm, he could be the protagonist of a crappy shoujo, funny.
Anyway, I liked a lot all Haruki's rasonings. It shows how his logic is really weird. Similarly, Kyon's snarks were very good. Anyway, is he remebering everything he is seeing? I wonder if he would ever realize what Haruki's tought about her(you should give her a name, you know) while dating other girls means for Haruhi. A last comment, just to be picky: the introduction line is not the same as the one in the rewrite. The comrade thing is officialy droped? This mean it should be another edit in the rewirte? |
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Nice Kaisos. Five days of procrastination must have let the creative writing juices flow. Stop trying to praise, you can't.
There were some formatting issues, and I'm to lazy to go back and find them to correct. True dat. But that's small stuff. Riiiiiight *e* I remember somewhere in the genderbent novels some character describing Haruki as a delinquent. cannot be trusted. *e2* Holden was a pain.
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GRADE 8 NIGHTMARE VORTEX
Join Date: Mar 2009
Age: 28
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That was indeed a good scene.
The hoes thing made me think of the witches-and-whores Bronove thing. Haruki doesn't need aliens, time travelers and espers when he's got a Ronove-voiced Kyon watching his back even if Kyon isn't really watching his back at all, it's probably more like the opposite of that! Yes. Yes, you are right. |
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Also, who is Holden?
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If I was in a mood for a drama-fest, I would imagine Haruki going to the extreme to search for his thrills, instead of tamely dating every girl in school. In middle school, he'll have tried smoking, drinking, going for home base with the girls and then fighting offended 'white knights' of the girls he dumped, and other testosterone infuelled aggressors. At the least.
But I'm never much in the mood for drama, so instead, I'll state my approval for an alien guitar battle. A guitar battle with guitars that are also chainsaws. ![]() |
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Land Down Under
Age: 32
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It's funny because Kaisos hasn't read Catcher in the Rye. |
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Sensei, aishite imasu
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Hong Kong Shatterdome
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