Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[XenahortCharybdis]

Originally Posted by Kagerou

Spoiler for KvK Episode 01:

Somewhere, in the middle of a planet called Outer Cadia, two bases rest. On one base, written in perfect Cadian, are the words "Kerokanon", written in blue. Across the canyon, is another base, with the word Khrack written on it messily in red.

Standing atop this base are two men; one wearing orange Knight Armor, and one wearing maroon Knight Armor. These two men are Lowegear and Aaron, respectively, two loyal, hardworking soldiers of Khrack.

...yeah, right.

"Hey," Aaron says to Lowegear.
"Yeah?" Lowe replies, his thoughts of cream-filled donuts ejected by the other Knight's interruption.

"Do you ever wonder why we're here?" Aaron asks, letting his spear touch the floor of the base's upper level.
"Well that's one of life's great mysteries, isn't it?" Lowegear answers, doing the same with his sword. "I mean, why are we here? I mean, are we a product of cosmic coincidence, or is there really a Goddess, watching everything? You know, with like a plan for us and stuff... that shit keeps me awake at night."

Aaron raises a confused eyebrow as Lowe turns back and stares at the enemy base across the canyon, his eyes thoughtful. The maroon knight just stares at his companion for a few seconds, trying to come up with a coherent answer to what he had just heard.

"...what?" is the best he can come up with. "I mean why are we here, in this canyon?" he asks, waving his arm with emphasis.

"Oh!" Lowe says, looking around. "Uh... yeah."
"...so what was all that stuff about Goddesses?" Aaron asks, still confused.
"Uh... hm? Nothing."

"...you wanna talk about it?"
"No."
"You sure?"
"Yeah."

Aaron sighs. "Seriously though, why are we out here? Far as I can tell, it's just a box canyon in the middle of Cadia, with no way in or out. And the only reason our base is here is because their base is over there!" He points to the base in the distance as it mocks them."

"Well no shit," Lowe says. "That's because we're, you know, at war."
"I know that," Aaron answers. "I mean, even if we were to pull out today, and they took our base, they would have two bases in the middle of this canyon! Whoopdefuckindo!"

"I know what you mean, but come on," Lowegear says. "When I signed up for this, all there was to do was write Khrack. And now that those Kerokanon fags have come in and ruined our fun, I haven't been able to write a thing since."

Meanwhile, on a cliff overlooking the Khrack base, two men stare down, watching them... well, one and a half men.

One of the mages is prone, looking down on the enemy by using a spell that enhances his vision. His effiminate features and girly cobalt Barrier Jacket cause some to look twice.

"What are they doing?" A voice next to him asks. Turning with an annoying look to stare at the guy in a teal Barrier Jacket behind him, who stares back expectantly.

"What?" The cobalt one says.
"I said, 'what-are-they-doing'?" The teal one, known as Nighty, repeats, putting force behind every word.
"God damnit!" the cobalt one, Keroko, growls. "I'm getting so sick of answering that question!"

"Hey, you have the fucking zoom spell, I can't see shit!" Nighty shouts. "Don't bitch at me because I'm not going to sit up here and play with my dick all day!"

"Okay, okay look." Keroko sighs. "They're just standing there, and talking, okay? That's all they're doing. That's all they ever do, is just stand there and talk. That's what they were doing last week, that's what they were doing when you asked me five minutes ago. So five minutes from now, when you ask me "What're they doing?" my answer's gonna be "They're still just talking, and they're still just standing there!"

Keroko narrows his(?) eyes at Nighty, waiting for a response.

"...so..." Nighty pauses. "What're they talking about?"
"You know what?" Keroko says. "I fucking hate you."
"Hey, don't get your panties in a bunch, Keroko." Nighty fires back.
"Damnit, I don't wear panties!"
"Haha, sure, okay."

Back on the ground, a man in red armor looks up at Lowe and Aaron, cradling his weapon gently on his right shoulder. "Ladies!" he hollers. "Front and center, on the double!"

"Fuck me," Lowegear rolls his eyes.
"Yes, sir!" Aaron calls out as he leads Lowe down.

...The main highlights...were the...conversations...

What is this?...

Go watch "How not to be Seen" by Monty Python or something...

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Ok...while I'm still writting chapter 23, here's a little something I did a little while ago

Spoiler for BreakerS SP OP2:

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha BreakerS

Using: Minami-ke Okawari Opening: Kokoro no Tsubasa


tashika na omoi wo tsutaetakute
(Wanting to communicate confident feelings)
The screen is all black, but then, several Mid-Childa circles and Belka triangles of different colors slide by.
The black disappears, revealing the Mid-Childa capital, zooming into a bulding surrounded by water, with a bridge connecting to the mainland, the Riot Force 6 Headquarters.
Further zooming leads to the cafeteria, where Koji is takes the first bite off his breakfast, tasting it, then Yui and Rein come in running.
That scene is followed by three shots: just before the impact, the momento of impact, followed by Koji falling and the last one is Koji on the floor, with Yui and Rein on top, hugging him tightly.


modoranai jikan ni oboreru you ni
(As if drowned in time that will never come back)
The scene changes to a forest, where it's raining heavily, Maren is leaning to a tree, taking shelter.

ima wo dakishimeyou
(Let's embrace the present)
She sighs and looks at the darkened sky, her expression becomes determined. Maren runs off into the rain.


sono hohoemi mo ittari kitari
(with your smile coming and going)
Koji is seen in a desert, near a dead gigantic sandworm, wielding Air Gladius.

soba ni itakute
(I want to stay by your side)
Standing up, he looks at the sky. the camera focuses on his left arm, where a black ribbon is tied to his wrist.


kono te wo nobasu saki ni wa
(At the end of my reaching hand)
Yui, lost in some ruins, walking along an endless corridor.

nani ga matteru darou
(I wonder what is waiting there)
She stops to rest, but as she sets her hand on the wall, a new passage is revealed, with light at the end.


owaranari story no mukou tobitate
(Fly away beyond your neverending story)
Three scenes are displayed in the following order: Maren running in the rain, Koji running in the desert, Yui running towards the exit, and Treize, opening her eyes as she reacts to their emotions.


At 00:42, everyone's devices flash by.


hontou no kimochi de tadoritsuku basho eto
(With your sincere feelings, towards the place you'll finally reach)
In the RF6 HQ, Subaru is seen running towards Teana, she trips and...

kokoro no tsubasa wo hirogete
(Spread the wings of your heart)
She raises her head and realizes that when she feel, she pulled Teana's skirt. Teana reacts by entering Tsun-Tsun-mode.


meguriyuku messeji
(It's a message coming back again and again)
A meadow is seen, the camera zooms at two figures.

shiawase wa koko ni aru yo
(Happiness is right here)
The camera slowly moves downward, showing Caro and Lutecia sleeping close to each other.


ato sukoshi no yuuki
(with just a little more courage)
Shamal wearing glasses, she passes them to Signum, who passes them to Ginga.

namida mo hitsuyou nano
(And some tears will be needed too)
Ginga is about to give the glasses to Shari when Hayate takes them and puts them on.


tsuyoku nareru chancu kamo ne
(It'll be a chance to become stronger, don't you think?)
In the skies over the RF6 HQ, Erio flies by, riding Fried.


nukumori no refrain
(It's a refrain of warmth)
Training grounds, Vivio is sitting on a stone watching Nanoha, Fate and Vita training.

kono taisetsu mo zutto mamoritai
(Want to protect what's important to me forever)
Not too far from there, is Vice, secretly taking photos of Nanoha and Fate.


kokoro wo kasaneteku kizuna wo kanjiteru
(Gathering hearts after another, feeling the bonds between them)
At the Saint Chruch, Carim along with her "volunteers", Schach and Acous, are trying on a few costumes, but Carim can't seem to find Altea...who is hiding on the roof.


daremo hitori ja nai dakara
(Because nobody out there is all alone)
Rein is seen running, begins to float and takes off.

[B]onaji sora no shita[/B]
(Under that same sky)
She flies high and pierces through the Cradle, making it explode, but then Rein is seen sleeping on top of Zafira's head, dreaming.


tashika na omoi wo tsutaetakute
(Wanting to communicate confident feelings)
The letters "Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha" slide from right to left, revealing someone behind.
The letters change format and go behind Koji, who is being hugged by Yui, and Maren, trying to hug him too.
Treize just stands there, looking at them, while next to the title, "BreakerS" appears.

So...

The things happening in the OP aren't scenes of things to come, just wrote them like that to have a metaphoric meaning, or just because it looked plain cool

Well...back to work
*runs*

QUOTED FOR WIN CHOREOGRAPHY AND MOONSPEAK SKILLZ!!!!

Originally Posted by LimitedEternal

Chaos, you probably bluff more then you tell the truth. No wonder she doesn't believe you. Then again, you bluff so much that you might be bluffing about bluffing, which means you're actually bluffing anyway.

I wanted to write Philosophy crack again, but not this time I guess.

Just this: You remind me of Lord Russell (the fella who proved that 1 + 1 = 2) when he said that "All Englishmen are Liars" when he, too, was English.

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

LOL What with the sudden existence of the IRC, and apparently with the new Haruhi gender-bending that's now happening, I suppose it's attracted a fair amount of attention, which will probably maintain a strong hold for some time before people go back into the routine.

Plus you've got to realize, cracked Nanoha is only funny for so long, before another series makes itself available to be the on the butt of everyone's crack ideas. :3

True. I realize that not everyone here has the comedic skill of a Durang or an Aristophanes...

After all, parody is much easier to generate than comedy. That's why it's considered pretty low on the literati-scale, prolly because it doesn't really generate any of the much-vaunted "thoughtful laughter" and "pleasurable disquietude" that all the comic philosophies seem to uphold.

However, I do see a way in which we could "comedize" Nanoha without making it too silly, but rather a clever satire of life, the army and politics. From the way I see it, the original premise of Nanoha already possesses such potential

I just don't know if I could garner up the creative power to do it in even 2-3 years.

(If I ever do, I'll apply for the Royal Thespian Society on the spot )

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Our Chemistry?

He and I have a Chemistry?????

Do explain please. It's late over here and I'm really not getting you...

Chemistry? As in mutated hemoglobin iron complex? or that someone put Cyanide into someone else's well?

MUTATED HEMOGLOBIN = BAD BLOOD
CYANIDE IN WELL = POISONING THE WELLS*

*"poisoning the wells" is a term for groundless accusation.

Oh, man, I crack academia now?

Originally Posted by Liingo

yep encouragement..XD Write as much as you want. It's not going to phase me.

I'll do my best, yeah! *pumps hand in the air*

*looks left and right to find himself on a certain ship's flight deck*

KIRK: Ship's phasers...fire!
XENA: Save that, unless you have FAZERS on you *waves hand*.
KIRK: ...

*runs*

Originally Posted by Liingo

People who co-operate are such darlings don't you think

Originally Posted by Liingo

Well the concept is neat. You're the first that I can remember that has gone and modified the BJ concept so kudos for that. Just that some if your layers had the potential for some very nasty combos.

I've done some other modifications as well to existing magic systems, and then melded it with other things to form up another magic system. I'll try to remove the more deadly combos, though.

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Good...
So far, you're the only one who hasn't SHAFTED me

This is what happens when someone mentions Zafira, T3H Shafted One, but not enough times to unshaft him

*runs*

I didn't shaft you either, pal, cheer up. That OP was good stuff.

Zafira? Zafira who?

*Nah, just kidding, I remember him clearly, and I sympathize with him. A LOT.*

*pats FSZ on the shoulder*

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OUT OF THE AXIOM FORGE:

- Thinking about the Xel'Naga again...
- Finished that fight scene in the middle of Executive Committee meeting. Refinement and Release soon.
- BABEL System: Construction in Progress...
- BABEL Triggers: Self-unh4xxing...
- BACKSTORY CHAPTER: Xel'Naga Aeterno: The Root of All Magic (WIP)...
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@Thread: A few questions:
1. Do we know who created the Lost Logia?
2. Do we know what the source of magic is?
3. Do we know what is in the un-administered planets?

Just some questions on things I might have missed somewhere...

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Kha

You and Anita think alike on this... And I still can't figure out how to kill a lock on a pally. Only outlast or survive 5 times longer before dying.

Me neither, they just keep dieing. Sometime's they're lucky though and manage to kill me when a someone else has taken out my summon and I'm low on mana.

I'm not sure what the situation is like now (haven't played WoW in months) but back then we really needed a nerf. Badly.

Originally Posted by LimitedEternal

What is up with Haruhi genderbending, anyway? I'm familiar enough with the series to know that yields extreme crack, but still...

It's because the various situations become far beyond awesome due to the genderbend.

Like this one, remember all the times when Itsuki get's close to Kyon? Change the genders and you get situations like this:



Semi implied Yaoi becomes implied Yuri, especially if you mix up the dialouge a bit more.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Pff, that's supposed to be Tesla? It doesn't look anything like her, bar the hair and eye color. The hair itself is completely different from Tesla's. Her face is too young, too.

Firt rule of image finding Chaos: apearance first. Hair and eye color can always be changed later.

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

I guess I'm your opposite then. I always play Chaotic Good warlocks...

*snrk* amateur.

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Wait...is this supposed to be Keroko's other Knight, Tesla?

The one who's relationship with Keroko is synonomous to the relationship shared by Fate and Signum?!

While the image Chaos provided is not exactly alike at all, yes, pretty much.

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

I'm not sore. I just know that Tesla's hair is blue and that she also has complete heterochromia.

You're confusing Tesla with Syn. Syn has blue, Lindy like hair and hetorochromia.

Originally Posted by Kagerou

Oh pff. My Swordsage > Your Warlock :3

Really? Should I mention that I have a few monk levels as well? I only became a Warlock after I blew up the Wizards Tower after all.

Such a nice explosion. All the arcane artefacts going haywire opened a demon portal as well. Last I hear the town is completely sealed by a magical dome these days.

Originally Posted by Kagerou

Is it gay if you <3 Kyonko?

Yes. Kyonko is mine, dammit!

[FlameSparkZ]

Originally Posted by XenahortCharybdis

QUOTED FOR WIN CHOREOGRAPHY AND MOONSPEAK SKILLZ!!!!

Originally Posted by XenahortCharybdis

I didn't shaft you either, pal, cheer up. That OP was good stuff.

Zafira? Zafira who?

*Nah, just kidding, I remember him clearly, and I sympathize with him. A LOT.*

*pats FSZ on the shoulder*

Yeah

Originally Posted by Keroko

It's because the various situations become far beyond awesome due to the genderbend.

Like this one, remember all the times when Itsuki get's close to Kyon? Change the genders and you get situations like this?:



Semi implied Yaoi becomes implied Yuri, especially if you mix up the dialouge a bit more.

WIN!!!

*goes back to writting*

[LoweGear]

*ehem*

Time to test out my latest weapon against Backlog!!!!

BREAKER TECHNIQUE!!!!!

Spoiler for Trans Am System Kidou!!!!!!:

OMNISLASH!!!!!!!!!!!!

Julie:

Originally Posted by Kha

Feels good to be eating the popcorn and not watching others doing so like usual.

Yes

Originally Posted by Kha

...and not only do both have it on the same side... Cinque is Kha the haremaker's imouto and Erio the loli-haremaker's VA as well... dakara...

... What are we getting at here?

Originally Posted by Kha

I meant Felt's colleague...

...ha? 1 more question: yours and others?

2nd Hint: Her creator's hardly around anymore

Originally Posted by Kha

It's hard to tell who's around you when you are getting Feared all over the shop!

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

I knew you were talking about something like that. No I haven't! Cuz if I did I'd have Keroko-tan unleashed upon me.

Though I'm pretty sure everyone here would love the chance to experience it.

TRUTH

*RUNS*

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Spoiler for possible young Signum:

...

*saves*

But I thought young Signum looked like Ca-

*radio static*

Originally Posted by XenahortCharybdis

Chemistry? As in mutated hemoglobin iron complex? or that someone put Cyanide into someone else's well?

MUTATED HEMOGLOBIN = BAD BLOOD
CYANIDE IN WELL = POISONING THE WELLS*

*"poisoning the wells" is a term for groundless accusation.

Oh, man, I crack academia now?

Well, that as well

Originally Posted by Keroko

It's because the various situations become far beyond awesome due to the genderbend.

Like this one, remember all the times when Itsuki get's close to Kyon? Change the genders and you get situations like this?:



Semi implied Yaoi becomes implied Yuri, especially if you mix up the dialouge a bit more.

...



DO WANT

*RUNS FASTER*

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Me neither, they just keep dieing. Sometime's they're lucky though and manage to kill me when a someone else has taken out my summon and I'm low on mana.

I'm not sure what the situation is like now (haven't played WoW in months) but back then we really needed a nerf. Badly.

It's still quite bad, cos after all the nerfing now I survive 10 times longer only to die again. Drain Mana makes it soo .

Originally Posted by Keroko

Yes. Kyonko is mine, dammit!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

*ehem*

Time to test out my latest weapon against Backlog!!!!

BREAKER TECHNIQUE!!!!!

Spoiler for Trans Am System Kidou!!!!!!:

OMNISLASH!!!!!!!!!!!!

Julie:

Gimmy: Oh...
Foy: My...
Taiyo: Dog...


Erio: Yatta-ze! Ni-chan! You've got it! You've got it!!!
Hiro: ...Gundam ni.



That aside, I'm just... Wow. Just wow. And it was exactly as I thought!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

... What are we getting at here?

Cinque's secondary IS: Invincible Charmer - Penta-shift?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

2nd Hint: Her creator's hardly around anymore

...Flamesparkz? Fuyu? Meophist? If it's Fuyu... Which one?!

Unless... Erio's harem?

*refers to list again*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

...

*saves*

But I thought young Signum looked like Ca-

*radio static*

Defin--

*static*

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Kha

Gimmy: Oh...
Foy: My...
Taiyo: Dog...


Erio: Yatta-ze! Ni-chan! You've got it! You've got it!!!
Hiro: ...Gundam ni.



That aside, I'm just... Wow. Just wow. And it was exactly as I thought!

Julie: Yes, it's really cool

Yes... Trans Am FTW

Originally Posted by Kha

Cinque's secondary IS: Invincible Charmer - Penta-shift?

The ability to create love pentagons in an instant?

Originally Posted by Kha

...Flamesparkz? Fuyu? Meophist? If it's Fuyu... Which one?!

Unless... Erio's harem?

*refers to list again*

Neil "Lockon" Dylandy as an OC was me and Erio's idea, so yeah

Now to guess which one

Originally Posted by Kha

Defin--

*static*

*taps radio*

Damn merc, just because he got himself a freaking Gundam...

[Kha]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Julie: Yes, it's really cool

Yes... Trans Am FTW

And I believe Shani shall feel Trans Am's full wrath.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

The ability to create love pentagons in an instant?

No she's just number 5.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Neil "Lockon" Dylandy as an OC was me and Erio's idea, so yeah

Now to guess which one

That narrows it down a lot.

*still looking*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

*taps radio*

Damn merc, just because he got himself a freaking Gundam...

Oh yeah, that Jinx he asked for.

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Kha

And I believe Shani shall feel Trans Am's full wrath.

If you're sticking with the characters, someone will feel the Trans Am's wrath.. but it won't be Shani

Originally Posted by Kha

No she's just number 5.

Originally Posted by Kha

That narrows it down a lot.

*still looking*

Gotta say though... we already got a one-sided rivalry between this girl and Teana planned, with the latter initiating

Originally Posted by Kha

Oh yeah, that Jinx he asked for.

When I said a Gundam, I meant it

*runs*

[Kha]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

If you're sticking with the characters, someone will feel the Trans Am's wrath.. but it won't be Shani

I thought that was referring to Exia's overdrive system... until I remembered Julie's Trans Am.

What's Exia's system called?

I first planned Hiro VS Shani in Rebuilt, since Keroko is in the Cradle. But if it is Keroko, then another Ex-Number will be fighting Hiro, maybe even Tre herself.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Gotta say though... we already got a one-sided rivalry between this girl and Teana planned, with the latter initiating

Ah I see. I'm still trying to find one who'd fit...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

When I said a Gundam, I meant it

*runs*

Eh WUUD?!

"I need a Sub, to go!"

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Kha

I thought that was referring to Exia's overdrive system... until I remembered Julie's Trans Am.

I guess you can say Trisha is Julie's equivalent of the system

What's Exia's system called?

It is the TRANS AM

Spoiler for Activation:

Originally Posted by Kha

Hiro VS Shani in Rebuilt, not so sure about Kerokanon. If it is Keroko, then another Ex-Number will be fighting Hiro, maybe even Tre herself.

If you see who the person Hiro Setsuna is smacking around in Zwei is...

Originally Posted by Kha

Ah I see. I'm still trying to find one who'd fit...

Suffice it to say, she's had lots of exposure

Eh WUUD?!

"I need a Sub, to go!"

[/QUOTE]

[Kha]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

I guess you can say Trisha is Julie's equivalent of the system

~~~~~~

It is the TRANS AM

Spoiler for Activation:

Note to myself: Never research a psycho-disorder while trying to recall things. It'll bug the system.

System noted, but I think I'll just stick to the original name, 0.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

If you see who the person Hiro Setsuna is smacking around in Zwei is...

Mike Trinity? Or is it Ali?

And if it's in the Nanohaverse, I simply cannot imagine Hiro smacking Mai in Throne Zwei...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Suffice it to say, she's had lots of exposure

Gwen...? No she's taken by Mai... Hmm...

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Kha

Note to myself: Never research a psycho-disorder while trying to recall things. It'll bug the system.

System noted, but I think I'll just stick to the original name, 0.

The Trans Am is a whole different beast to the 0 though

Originally Posted by Kha

Mike Trinity? Or is it Ali?

And if it's in the Nanohaverse, I simply cannot imagine Hiro smacking Mai in Throne Zwei...

Brotherly love?

*S&W lock and load Linebacker*

Originally Posted by Kha

Gwen...? No she's taken by Mai... Hmm...

Spoiler for On Kha's PC:

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Pff, that's supposed to be Tesla? It doesn't look anything like her, bar the hair and eye color. The hair itself is completely different from Tesla's. Her face is too young, too.

Firt rule of image finding Chaos: apearance first. Hair and eye color can always be changed later.

Normally, it's not a good idea to challenge a Creator at his own creation, but in this case...







The only thing I do agree is that she's younger in comparison...

Then again, so are alot of other people.

In defence for the colour, I can attribute it to the lightning of the environment.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

The Trans Am is a whole different beast to the 0 though

I'll have to see it in action then.

SUB FASTER, GUNDAM!!!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Brotherly love?

*S&W lock and load Linebacker*

Hiro: Sou...?

*chambers Blightcannon Bolt*

...

...With pleasure.



This pair of siblings not related by blood sure learn a lot from each other...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Spoiler for On Kha's PC:

!!!

*Kai drops everything and breaks out through the window, activating Out Frame on the way down.*

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Kha

I'll have to see it in action then.

SUB FASTER, GUNDAM!!!

I'll just give you a little something to look at while you wait...

Spoiler for Red really does make you three times faster:

Originally Posted by Kha

Hiro: If that's the case...

*chambers Blightcannon Bolt*

...

...gladly.



This pair of siblings not related by blood sure learn a lot from each other...

Because they all care

Originally Posted by Kha

!!!

*Kai drops everything and breaks out through the window, activating Out Frame on the way down.*

Damn, didn't get him

I think you have a better idea now <.<

[XenahortCharybdis]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Normally, it's not a good idea to challenge a Creator at his own creation, but in this case...







The only thing I do agree is that she's younger in comparison...

Then again, so are alot of other people.

In defence for the colour, I can attribute it to the lightning of the environment.

Somehow, Chaos, I think you're beginning to convince me...

[Kha]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

I'll just give you a little something to look at while you wait...

Spoiler for Red really does make you three times faster:

"I see your true colors, shining through..."

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Because they all care

Mai:
Hiro:

Gimmy: Hiro is smiling...
Taiyo: ...and Mai-san is nodding...
Foy: Same as before. Start running.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Damn, didn't get him

I think you have a better idea now <.<

Kai: Eight Ball, you got all that?

Eight: [Three steps ahead of ya! *screen flashes* But I AM NOT A LOUSY BALL!!! ]

Yeap. And considering Kai's baito at the Lowe Guild, is that who we think it is...?

And yes... Lowe Gear the OC shall make an appearance soon... ^^;

Fuyu, Nighty, Keroko, Lowe, Lingo, Darco, me... Now which Founding Father have I not Rebuilt? Ah yes Aaron and Reiji, if Aurion and Arcas don't count. ^^

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Kha

"I see your true colors, shining through..."

Now I know what to paint my HG Exia when I get one

Mai:
Hiro:

Gimmy: Hiro is smiling...
Taiyo: ...and Mai-san is nodding...
Foy: Same as before. Start running.

HEV: Emergency - User Death Imminent

Originally Posted by Kha

Kai: Eight Ball, you got all that?

Eight: [Three steps ahead of ya! *screen flashes* But I AM NOT A LOUSY BALL!!! ]

Yeap. And considering Kai's Lowe Guild baito, is that who we think it is...?

Even Hachi crossed over eh? the one said to have been discovered in Amuro's Core Fighter

Originally Posted by Kha

And yes... Lowe Gear the OC shall make an appearance soon... ^^;

And ironically enough, not by me

[Kha]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Even Hachi crossed over eh? the one said to have been discovered in Nanoha's Mage Splender that was destroyed by stealthbots?

Yeap.

..and fixed?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

And ironically enough, not by me

Fuyu the OC was first created by Satashi-nyan, and I've been following his footsteps. If you want or have plans, I can drop this.

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Normally, it's not a good idea to challenge a Creator at his own creation, but in this case...

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The only thing I do agree is that she's younger in comparison...

Then again, so are alot of other people.

In defence for the colour, I can attribute it to the lightning of the environment.

Yes, it's definetely not a good idea to challenge a creator at his own creation.

First, you only caught the top part of the image, and yet the hair already looks out of place. Tesla's hair is wilder, and has more peaks standing in different directions. From your cut it looks more like Natsuki then Tesla. If you take the whole picture and start looking down the hair, you'll notice a style that is completely different from Tesla's.

Second, the face is much rounder then Tesla's. Tesla's features are much more hardened then this girls.

Third, eye collor. You said you could defend yourself with the lightning, but the lightning makes everything apear darker, and yet her eyes are still far to bright green to be Tesla's, who has a darker shade of green.

fourth, hair color. While most of it can be defended due to lightfall, the strands that are obviously in the light are still an entirely different blue then Tesla's.