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Asuna's linker core has a property to it that causes linked mana processed by her core to reject other forms of mana, somewhat like a person's immune system, but applied both internally and externally whenever she uses magic. One of more interesting side effects of this is that Asuna can't benefit from her own enhancement magic and Boost Up enhancement spells from other mages at the same time, because her Void magic will automatically reject the foreign enhancement as soon as it's applied to her body. In regards to the request for help: I haven't been keeping up with GuardianS, unfortunately, so I probably won't be too much help with this. If I can find time, I'll go back and read over what I've been missing, but I'm about to go on a weekend-long vacation to the middle of nowhere, so I won't be around this weekend and there's the possibility I'll just forget... Quote:
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2008-07-03, 11:57 | Link #2242 | ||
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2008-07-03, 12:23 | Link #2244 | |||||
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Seems like one doesn't mean it is one. But thankfully, you accepted the other point of view. Bless you. *pats Comartemis on the head* Quote:
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The idea is sound as a defensive measure, but I don't think it goes well with offensive spells. Technically speaking, when her Linker Core processes the mana, it would no doubt have created the linked mana said to be capable of rejecting other forms of mana. It'd have also rejected the raw mana that she draws to form her magic. As a defensive measure, this can be part of her rare ability instead of a Linker Core attribute, therefore it doesn't interfere with her natural mana manipulation. If you really want to make it part of her offensive ability, I'd suggest that you omit any form of collection-type spell from her repertoire. We can go along the line of contamination effect (a similar concept from Keroko's Aspect magic) where the mana she uses are purely from her own body and it has inherent Void element, so they don't reject each other. She cannot use any type mana except her own, which would give her both advantages and disadvantages. Quote:
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*flees* Please do it when you're free and feeling up to it. I'll feel kind of bad if this takes up your time when you can better spend it. |
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But thanks for the warning about the angst! I'll make sure I don't touch GuardianS with a ten-foot pole! Quote:
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2008-07-03, 12:59 | Link #2247 |
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Location: Doing Anzu's paperwork.
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Some slight crack in progress.
Spoiler for Soldiers of the Wasteland trailer:
As for Meister-Device relationships, I had Hayareinrion crack written. Because Rein zwei is cute and Healthy Full Size All Woman Rein is HAWT.
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2008-07-03, 13:49 | Link #2249 |
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Join Date: May 2007
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@PF: Thoughts on my re-read of all of it below, separted into chapters and scenes for easy reference. Also random spelling points
C-> Chapter S-> Scene Prologue S2 Reason for the scene being 5 years earlier? Info in C3 S3 would suggest that the scene is in the present since they’ve gone and stolen a star before we know about the prophecy. C1 S2 How are you Mmilady (Milady) C1 S5 I advice (advise) you not to underestimate the GF <- Subaru C2 S5 I take it that you’re not altering the story to accommodate the new info about enforcers. Although it's easily solved since you don't have a slew of them in your story. 54 min pass between end of this scene and C3 S3? Seems a bit long... C3 S3 I find the shift from angst/despair etc to happy happy joy joy a little weird once they know Nanoha is at the door… but not really a major issue. C4 S3 Cont You know my father (knew) <- Chrono C4 S5 I’m amazed at the speed of bureaucracy shown in getting the unit together… 1000 members in less than 3-4 days. Where did they all come from? Or more importantly, do these 1000 members get used other than a 10th of them. - Couldn't see any major pitfalls while I was re-reading it all, but it'll be best to see what the others say first. - I do have questions on the plot... although i'm certain that those will be answered eventually in the next couple of chapters Liingo. |
2008-07-03, 15:01 | Link #2250 | |||||
the "Z" is for "Zeta"
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~~~~ So...hmm...yeah, still working on several things at the same time But progressing, though...Maybe I'll be able to post something in the near future :3 dewa... *warps away*
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2008-07-03, 15:40 | Link #2251 | |||
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[QUOTE=Kha;1698105But don't look at it that way. Somehow Grandis just doesn't fit into things as much as Aurion did; Keroko was the Ace who wasn't not a Sue; Kha was the Ace who wasn't a girl; Aurion was the Ace who isn't a frontliner. [/QUOTE] 'wasn't not a Sue?' Which is it? Quote:
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Though I'd love to see more Tesla. :3 Vivio got kidnapped again? Curiosity burning. |
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2008-07-03, 15:54 | Link #2252 | |
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<_< >_> What, you KNOW Nanoha would do that, especially over Vivio (So would Fate, though in her case it'd probably be more along the lines of " If anyone's going to put Vivio in Adorable Cosplay outfits it's going to be ME!) |
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2008-07-03, 16:08 | Link #2253 |
RUN, YOU FOOLS!
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Formerly Iwakawa base and Chaldea. Now Teyvat, the Astral Express & the Outpost
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Don't worry, Nanoha and Fate will don their barrier jackets and run across pipes and landscapes while beaming stupid turtles. And eat mushrooms to grow bigger.
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2008-07-03, 16:14 | Link #2254 | |
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Chrono: "Ah Keroko there you are. Yuuno said he couldn't make it at the last second so he asked me to replace him." Keroko:"Oh..I suppose it can't be helped then. Work takes precedence after all." Chrono: "Shall we ?" *around the corner Yuuno lies gagged and Struggle Bound* Yuuno: "Chrughh urgh urghtrd !"
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2008-07-03, 16:27 | Link #2255 | |||
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2008-07-03, 16:28 | Link #2256 | |
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Nanoha: But which is the real Vivio? The pink one, the blue one? Fate: I think its the rainbow one. All the pretty colors look~ it's a prettiful magical Kharckacorn let's ride on it! Wee! Everyone else: >.> Let's leave them here -_-; Stay away from 'shrooms kids they'll screw with your head. |
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2008-07-03, 16:46 | Link #2258 | ||
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Burning? Is it BURNING RED? IS THE EAST BURNING RED?! *RUNZ* Quote:
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2008-07-03, 17:53 | Link #2260 |
RUN, YOU FOOLS!
Join Date: Jun 2006
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Could be worse like.... Fate speeding across roller coaster-like levels to collect rings, free loli clones at the end of stages and giving a beating to Dr Jail. Then optionally turn into Super Fate after collecting the seven Jewel Seeds hidden all over the game.
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