2012-09-24, 10:22 | Link #23161 |
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I had an error screen pop up when unzipping, but that was all.
Reading it made me remember why I joined Animesuki for this thread in the first place (can't really say 'for' though, haven't done anything at all ) I really hope we could get the music first or something, because although I can stand reading plain text with a black background, the lack of BGM is kinda... unbearable . No offense. EDIT: Yet, the day zero greentext... AUGHH EDIT: And words like DAY ZERO END was added.
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2012-09-24, 18:54 | Link #23162 | |
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Wait, are these things you like or hate? Because I'm willing to make fixes if people don't like things.
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2012-09-24, 22:14 | Link #23163 | |
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Actually, the first one about the greentext is just being in agony over how self-aware it is. However, the DAY ZERO END sounds like a stage script being read out, like 'EXIT STAGE RIGHT'.... Although I guess there's no way of telling the difference with a black screen.
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2012-09-24, 23:09 | Link #23164 | |
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2012-09-26, 21:32 | Link #23166 | ||
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I'd like to go ahead and note that I'm just playing code monkey and minor editor here--no directing or whatnot. So as far as music selection goes, I don't really have an opinion, and I frankly wouldn't be qualified to give an opinion stronger than "That sounds okay" anyways. But if you have something to put in the game, send it to me and tell me how to use it and I'll figure out how to make it work. Quote:
I remember trying to decide if I should throw those into the middle of the screen instead of leaving them in the dialogue box, though I have no memory if I actually did or not. Also, ideally those scenes would work something like: Blah blah blah last lines of dialogue blah blah [wipe to black] END DAY X [pause] [fade to first scene of Day X+1]
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2012-10-18, 11:10 | Link #23167 |
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This is awesome so far (though I haven't finished it yet). I thought the blurred background looked sorta meh, though. It'd probably look a lot nicer if you'd filtered it or something instead. Or, even better, there are tons of free backgrounds for games online. And yeah, needs more music. But now I'm hyped. The green text confused me at first. Maybe that's what's supposed to happen. Anyway, there are a few things that could be fixed (like, spelling and flow on particular lines) but I'll save that for when I finish reading it. I feel bad for Itsuko though... ;-; |
2012-10-19, 16:59 | Link #23168 | |
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I'll put music in when I have some. What about the green text confused you? Also, spelling errors!? Where? I could've sworn they had all been caught between Jintor and I. ... Unless they have to do with apostrophes. Then there might be a good reason, having to do with why the 'Replace All' function is not your friend. Shut it! And yeah, line flow is a bit of a problem... I didn't spend too much time trying to refine that, as I was Finally, did anyone pick up on the text speed changes in the prologue? I spent awhile trying to get that working, and it'd make me sad if it ended up unnoticed.
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2012-10-20, 23:38 | Link #23171 | |
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The typos toward the beginning were more varied in nature, but as it went on, they tended to be just missing apostrophes, yeah. I'm making a list, although I should just correct the actual script, probably. (Particularly since I've not been clicking every choice and using rollback lately, since it feels kinda like cheating...) Then again, what if you need to add something? Then you have an outdated script that has no typos and an updated script with typos. >_<; And I didn't notice the text speed changes, actually... orz. EDIT: Uh, also, guys, just letting you know... I think all the art has poofed. ;_; Almost every link under Art File is broken. The Many Faces of Mitsuuru works, but I haven't found any others. I'll look more meticulously. EDIT: Okay, here is what's still there. If you want it, I'd strongly recommend saving it to your computer. Or maybe I will. The Many Faces of Mitsuuru Arceon's draft Proof that they are espers Bedroom Last edited by Aerii; 2012-10-21 at 00:10. |
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2012-10-21, 00:07 | Link #23172 | ||
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2012-10-21, 00:10 | Link #23173 |
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Oh, herp. >-< Sorry, then. Is Dropbox private now or something? Is that why the links are all broken..? I was feeling up to doing some art and noticed I couldn't access anything. That's why I was looking...
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2012-10-21, 00:36 | Link #23175 |
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I know, it's just... usually when I see links posted a long time ago and they're all broken, my first idea is that everything's just gone for good. Deleted due to inactivity or maybe the file host went down (not the case here, obviously)...
So the images are all still in the Dropbox and only the links to them are broken? Okay. Now if I could simply ask Binjovi to update the links or something like that, that wouldn't be a problem. But Binjovi doesn't appear to be active anymore... |
2012-10-24, 10:47 | Link #23176 |
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Managed to find time to get through Day 1, and I noticed a few things (at least in the choices I made) ...
1. When Taniguchi (F) and Kunikida (F) talk about Tsuruya (M) during lunch, mentions of 'Taniguchi' in the lines turns into 'TanF' for a bit. 2. Kyon (M) refers to Nagato as 'Yuki' during the morning when he meets Koizumi for some reason. Anyways, other than the distinct lack of... everything, the writing is still very good. :P Brings back memories of my lurking days...
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While your reaction doesn't surprise me, I'll second s07195's comment.
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