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ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-04, 09:02

Thanks for reminding me, I have that written on my notes. Actually, the plot is kinda different this time.

Thing is, the fight with golem is epic and filled with CMOA, but plotwise sounds like an anticlimax.

Assuming V8 didn't came before I reached that point (which says something) I can proceed with full blown plot regarding the war with PT and other shitstorm.

demino_hellsin · 2012-03-04, 09:03

By magnetic storm, I was referring to a chaotic magnetic field that has the polarity in every which way with polar intensity to pull objects by the tons...

Eratas123 · 2012-03-04, 09:05

Alright, first things first: Who gets owned by the Golem? Canonically, Tatenashi and Cecilia do, but owning Tatenashi means she can't kickstart the plot of V7 with Kanzashi and no attacking Squall.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-04, 09:21

Kanzashi plot is introduced earlier, as I said, I'll do it in V5 arc, if not then V6.

Summary as follow
> Tatenahsi introduction arc and lighthearted plot regarding Ichika's recruitment to student council
> Someone is kidnapped and brainwashed in the middle of V5
> Festival Shitstorm with Autumn & brainwashed someone
> Rescue arc at the beginning of V6
> Kanzashi introduction Arc
> Golem attack, Tate got owned
> Ichika's birthday, urban mecha brawl.
> V7 = More shitstorm with PT, Tate is recovering and encountering Squall.

Still considering the timeline, which mean I would also switch Cannonball and Tag tournament. Meaning attack on a public event (sorta) is the climax.

Eratas123 · 2012-03-04, 09:24

You really want to get to a shitstorm, don't ya >_<

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-04, 09:28

You know the game. Besides, Golem attack is still more subtle than terrorist attacking at public event.

StratoSpear · 2012-03-04, 09:31

I've seen that word so frequently that I'm beginning to imagine it happening in a literal manner... o3o

Also, prequel fic's looking fine so far, Box. :3

And my vacation to Malaysia didn't go without a waste, I got up some new sketches!(including the revamped Proioxis)

Eratas123 · 2012-03-04, 09:31

Just make sure not to turn it into Warhammer: IS edition. Main reason I'm re-writing the story is because of the narm.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-04, 09:34

Nah, it's still 50% twincest with supporting harem, the other 50% is plot and fighting

But first, nid to finish this goddamned V2.

Eratas123 · 2012-03-04, 09:37

You're still reading that? I'm just re-reading V4 now so I can do more Daydreams. Anyway, does doing a good thing for selfish or petty reasons count as anti-heroic?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-04, 09:41

Nope, I've read the novels up to V4 and sidestories (at least, the one that I read PROPERLY), what I mean is I struck at chapter 12 as of now, covering the events of V2.

More like Accidental heroism, or if you're an ass about it, type 2 or 3 anti-hero.

demino_hellsin · 2012-03-04, 09:41

Another probably stupid question. Would a flamethrower damage an IS?

Eratas123 · 2012-03-04, 09:46

Lasers barely dent it, you think a flamethrower can? Besides, all they'd have to do is fly and put out the fire.

@ Senpai - I need to make Irish more anti-heroic, so that means no corny or narmy pet the dog moments with Joshua till later. Any suggestions for anything?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-04, 09:46

Nah, not hot enuff. :3

@ Eras
If you think that's corny, then I don't know. Anti-hero is not my field and I'm afraid the result is worse than you want.

My only suggestion: Anti-hero =/= jerkass, though frequently overlap, the point of anti -hero is that they're not as idealistic as the hero, but still, all they did comes as greater good than harm.

Eratas123 · 2012-03-04, 09:51

I know they don't equal jerkass:3 I'm talking more about actions. Besides, your Ichika's a type 3/4.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-04, 09:56

Correct, Past ST!Ichika is type 3 and 4, current ST!Ichika swings between true hero and Type 2 anti-hero depending on circumstances. o3o

Eratas123 · 2012-03-04, 09:57

Okay, then give me tips for that. He needs to be Type 4 first and then gradually moves up to 3 in the story.

demino_hellsin · 2012-03-04, 10:01

hopefully my last stupid question for the night.

Is it common for a guy to have these reactions to these two somewhat related scenarios?

Peeking on girls in the hot springs - "Come on! We gotta go while they're still in!"

When a girl is basically crawling over the guy while taking their top off - "Uh... uh... wait! My heart isn't ready yet!"

Eratas123 · 2012-03-04, 10:04

Yes, actually. Many guys love seeing girls naked, but that doesn't meant they're looking for intimacy or sex. There's even some groups with this motto: "Unless you love someone, no sex or borderline acts."

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-04, 10:06

@ Eras
Okay, first thing fist, the fundamental aspect of Type IV is intention and method of achievement. They're not above kick the dog, but prioritizing revenge and paying evil into evil. In short, their heroic accomplishment is completely accidental/unintended.

The example where Irish want to give Victor his shit is one of the example, it'll work. :3

@ Demi
Err... how is that peeking the hot spring and undressing a guy is related? there has to be a filling between them, unless it's all for humor. (the girls are more perverted than the guys)

Also, see Eras' explanation above.

2012-03-04, 09:02	Link #24741
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Thanks for reminding me, I have that written on my notes. Actually, the plot is kinda different this time. Thing is, the fight with golem is epic and filled with CMOA, but plotwise sounds like an anticlimax. Assuming V8 didn't came before I reached that point (which says something) I can proceed with full blown plot regarding the war with PT and other shitstorm. __________________

2012-03-04, 09:05	Link #24743
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Alright, first things first: Who gets owned by the Golem? Canonically, Tatenashi and Cecilia do, but owning Tatenashi means she can't kickstart the plot of V7 with Kanzashi and no attacking Squall. __________________

2012-03-04, 09:21	Link #24744
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Kanzashi plot is introduced earlier, as I said, I'll do it in V5 arc, if not then V6. Summary as follow > Tatenahsi introduction arc and lighthearted plot regarding Ichika's recruitment to student council > Someone is kidnapped and brainwashed in the middle of V5 > Festival Shitstorm with Autumn & brainwashed someone > Rescue arc at the beginning of V6 > Kanzashi introduction Arc > Golem attack, Tate got owned > Ichika's birthday, urban mecha brawl. > V7 = More shitstorm with PT, Tate is recovering and encountering Squall. Still considering the timeline, which mean I would also switch Cannonball and Tag tournament. Meaning attack on a public event (sorta) is the climax. __________________

2012-03-04, 09:24	Link #24745
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	You really want to get to a shitstorm, don't ya >_< __________________

2012-03-04, 09:28	Link #24746
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	You know the game. Besides, Golem attack is still more subtle than terrorist attacking at public event. __________________

2012-03-04, 09:03	Link #24742
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	By magnetic storm, I was referring to a chaotic magnetic field that has the polarity in every which way with polar intensity to pull objects by the tons...

2012-03-04, 09:31	Link #24747
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	I've seen that word so frequently that I'm beginning to imagine it happening in a literal manner... o3o Also, prequel fic's looking fine so far, Box. :3 And my vacation to Malaysia didn't go without a waste, I got up some new sketches!(including the revamped Proioxis) __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2012-03-04, 09:31	Link #24748
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Just make sure not to turn it into Warhammer: IS edition. Main reason I'm re-writing the story is because of the narm. __________________

2012-03-04, 09:34	Link #24749
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Nah, it's still 50% twincest with supporting harem, the other 50% is plot and fighting But first, nid to finish this goddamned V2. __________________

2012-03-04, 09:37	Link #24750
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	You're still reading that? I'm just re-reading V4 now so I can do more Daydreams. Anyway, does doing a good thing for selfish or petty reasons count as anti-heroic? __________________

2012-03-04, 09:41	Link #24751
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Nope, I've read the novels up to V4 and sidestories (at least, the one that I read PROPERLY), what I mean is I struck at chapter 12 as of now, covering the events of V2. More like Accidental heroism, or if you're an ass about it, type 2 or 3 anti-hero. __________________

2012-03-04, 09:41	Link #24752
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Another probably stupid question. Would a flamethrower damage an IS?

2012-03-04, 09:46	Link #24753
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Lasers barely dent it, you think a flamethrower can? Besides, all they'd have to do is fly and put out the fire. @ Senpai - I need to make Irish more anti-heroic, so that means no corny or narmy pet the dog moments with Joshua till later. Any suggestions for anything? __________________

2012-03-04, 09:46	Link #24754
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Nah, not hot enuff. :3 @ Eras If you think that's corny, then I don't know. Anti-hero is not my field and I'm afraid the result is worse than you want. My only suggestion: Anti-hero =/= jerkass, though frequently overlap, the point of anti -hero is that they're not as idealistic as the hero, but still, all they did comes as greater good than harm. __________________

2012-03-04, 09:51	Link #24755
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I know they don't equal jerkass:3 I'm talking more about actions. Besides, your Ichika's a type 3/4. __________________

2012-03-04, 09:56	Link #24756
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Correct, Past ST!Ichika is type 3 and 4, current ST!Ichika swings between true hero and Type 2 anti-hero depending on circumstances. o3o __________________

2012-03-04, 09:57	Link #24757
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Okay, then give me tips for that. He needs to be Type 4 first and then gradually moves up to 3 in the story. __________________

2012-03-04, 10:01	Link #24758
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	hopefully my last stupid question for the night. Is it common for a guy to have these reactions to these two somewhat related scenarios? Peeking on girls in the hot springs - "Come on! We gotta go while they're still in!" When a girl is basically crawling over the guy while taking their top off - "Uh... uh... wait! My heart isn't ready yet!"

2012-03-04, 10:04	Link #24759
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Yes, actually. Many guys love seeing girls naked, but that doesn't meant they're looking for intimacy or sex. There's even some groups with this motto: "Unless you love someone, no sex or borderline acts." __________________

2012-03-04, 10:06	Link #24760
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Eras Okay, first thing fist, the fundamental aspect of Type IV is intention and method of achievement. They're not above kick the dog, but prioritizing revenge and paying evil into evil. In short, their heroic accomplishment is completely accidental/unintended. The example where Irish want to give Victor his shit is one of the example, it'll work. :3 @ Demi Err... how is that peeking the hot spring and undressing a guy is related? there has to be a filling between them, unless it's all for humor. (the girls are more perverted than the guys) Also, see Eras' explanation above. __________________