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Old 2010-07-04, 01:47   Link #25801
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Or, well, you can wait until after they guess correctly and then change the twist at the last minute when you're writing it. Hey, you're supposed to entertain the readers, nobody ever said you have to be nice to them.
Unfortunately that's hard to do when the twist is a major plot point

Still, what's more frustrating is that I know readers will think one thing, so I try to add stuff to prevent that. Like in Rise of the Daemon Kaiser I tried to not give off the impression that Yuuno got possessed, but the first two reviewers called it right away! I had considered changing it up, having Volvo look like Yuuno by pure coincidence, saying that he slept with a Scrya chick once, thus making Yuuno his descendant. Naturally this would mean Yuuno would have to stay dead, thus not having Fate and co be motivated to get him back, and Nanoha not getting her head messed with.

Plus it would make the Yuuno haters happy, and if there are people I don't want to be nice to, it's those guys Especially when they think I somehow owe them something.
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Old 2010-07-04, 05:46   Link #25802
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It still works, since it's clear in the drawing that levantein is clattering and that signum fell to her knees. As for sound effects I can't even draw them amusingly, I was only ever a mediocre drawer though...so yeah.
Thanks for the feedback! It's surprisingly easy to make cheesy sound effects... especially when you don't mean to!

And *blimp*, here's more:

-Before Dawn-


Spoiler for Page 7 (read right to left):


Previously:


Page 1
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Page 6
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Old 2010-07-04, 06:13   Link #25803
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Pretty uneventful day, so how about a new chapter!

Uploaded the previous one here with some added reference notes.

The Location of Happiness chapter 7

Spoiler for LoH chapter 6:


Spoiler for notes:
Haha, poor guy just can't catch a break can he? Anyway, maybe he needs to borrow Raising Heart and start Starlight Breaker-ing something. Anyway, nice job, hope to see the ending soon. With a side of Three's Company to go please.

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Unfortunately that's hard to do when the twist is a major plot point

Still, what's more frustrating is that I know readers will think one thing, so I try to add stuff to prevent that. Like in Rise of the Daemon Kaiser I tried to not give off the impression that Yuuno got possessed, but the first two reviewers called it right away! I had considered changing it up, having Volvo look like Yuuno by pure coincidence, saying that he slept with a Scrya chick once, thus making Yuuno his descendant. Naturally this would mean Yuuno would have to stay dead, thus not having Fate and co be motivated to get him back, and Nanoha not getting her head messed with.

Plus it would make the Yuuno haters happy, and if there are people I don't want to be nice to, it's those guys Especially when they think I somehow owe them something.
I called the Volvo one too, but I'm hoping Nannoha gets to kill him there and having to deal with the blood on her hands. I'm just evil sometimes.

Anyway, I have an idea in my head where Yuuno goes missing and a priority mission comes up to either find and retrieve him or to kill him and turn his brains to mush cause of all the important info in his head. The agent having to angst about having to kill (maybe) Yuuno...
I wonder if I will ever write that out, lol.
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Old 2010-07-04, 09:18   Link #25804
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Yeah, pretty much someone is gonna guess what happens. But the point is: "Who?" For instance, a couple of reviewers have guessed certain plot points in Future Tense... but who are they, and what guesses did they make?^^

And now, for a short, since I like to hit the holidays, although if you're not in the US, than the 4th of July doesn't mean much to you, heh. Didn't come out too humorous, but you may get a chuckle out of it.^^:;

Spoiler for Happy Fourth!:


In other news, I should be releasing chapter 9 of Future Tense tomorrow.^^
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Old 2010-07-04, 09:42   Link #25805
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Still, what's more frustrating is that I know readers will think one thing, so I try to add stuff to prevent that. Like in Rise of the Daemon Kaiser I tried to not give off the impression that Yuuno got possessed, but the first two reviewers called it right away! I had considered changing it up, having Volvo look like Yuuno by pure coincidence, saying that he slept with a Scrya chick once, thus making Yuuno his descendant. Naturally this would mean Yuuno would have to stay dead, thus not having Fate and co be motivated to get him back, and Nanoha not getting her head messed with.
Hee, hee... well, in that instance you were sort of hamstrung by the fact that people know you. Even the people who didn't guess the Ancient Spirit Possession angle (like my own genre blind self) probably assumed Yuuno wasn't actually dead-dead based on the name up there in the author category. We know you like the guy


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Yeah, pretty much someone is gonna guess what happens. But the point is: "Who?" For instance, a couple of reviewers have guessed certain plot points in Future Tense... but who are they, and what guesses did they make?^^

And now, for a short, since I like to hit the holidays, although if you're not in the US, than the 4th of July doesn't mean much to you, heh. Didn't come out too humorous, but you may get a chuckle out of it.^^:;

Spoiler for Happy Fourth!:


In other news, I should be releasing chapter 9 of Future Tense tomorrow.^^
Well, I called Subaru being among the fallen, but that wasn't much of a stretch. I mean, there's a limited number of things that are gonna make Teana flip out, and that one is right there at the top of the list. Currently, I'm hoping that I called Future!Vivio being the High Queen of Awesome.

As for the ficlet... well... let's be frank. We all knew it was only a matter of time until Nanoha did something like that. Everyone should just be happy it was pretty when it happened.
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Old 2010-07-04, 10:20   Link #25806
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Yeah, pretty much someone is gonna guess what happens. But the point is: "Who?" For instance, a couple of reviewers have guessed certain plot points in Future Tense... but who are they, and what guesses did they make?^^

And now, for a short, since I like to hit the holidays, although if you're not in the US, than the 4th of July doesn't mean much to you, heh. Didn't come out too humorous, but you may get a chuckle out of it.^^:;

Spoiler for Happy Fourth!:


In other news, I should be releasing chapter 9 of Future Tense tomorrow.^^
Nice one, happy 4th of July to you, don't go blowing up any moon though.
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Old 2010-07-04, 10:41   Link #25807
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In other news, I should be releasing chapter 9 of Future Tense tomorrow.^^
Sweet

You can't leave us hanging on this cliff forever you know.

If Vivio's not resistance leader, I call Chrono. There has to be a reason why he hasn't got a single mention yet,.
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Old 2010-07-04, 12:49   Link #25808
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Yeah, pretty much someone is gonna guess what happens. But the point is: "Who?" For instance, a couple of reviewers have guessed certain plot points in Future Tense... but who are they, and what guesses did they make?^^

And now, for a short, since I like to hit the holidays, although if you're not in the US, than the 4th of July doesn't mean much to you, heh. Didn't come out too humorous, but you may get a chuckle out of it.^^:;

Spoiler for Happy Fourth!:


In other news, I should be releasing chapter 9 of Future Tense tomorrow.^^
Heh, oh Nanoha, what will you explode next? Left an error in the quote I just had to point out.

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Hee, hee... well, in that instance you were sort of hamstrung by the fact that people know you. Even the people who didn't guess the Ancient Spirit Possession angle (like my own genre blind self) probably assumed Yuuno wasn't actually dead-dead based on the name up there in the author category. We know you like the guy
*Laugh* Well then, on that note...

The Location of Happiness Ending #2

Spoiler for LoH ending 2:


Spoiler for notes:
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Old 2010-07-04, 16:27   Link #25809
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Thanks for the feedback! It's surprisingly easy to make cheesy sound effects... especially when you don't mean to!

And *blimp*, here's more:

-Before Dawn-


Spoiler for Page 7 (read right to left):


Previously:


Page 1
Page 2
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5
Page 6
Is she gonna die. 'Cause severe blood loss and organ failure is serious and it would be a shame to see her die in a place like that.
On a less depressing note it was awesome

May get a chuckle, Kaijo. May get a chuckle, if I wasn't lying on my bed right now, I would of fallen out of my chair laughing. I saw the "blew something up by accident" 'cause of the whole 4th of July thing but what made me laugh was the religious symbol thing, that was funny.
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Old 2010-07-04, 23:33   Link #25810
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Spoiler for A Certain Divided Force 4:


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Old 2010-07-04, 23:36   Link #25811
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WAit a sec there, Einhart! I need to know!
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Old 2010-07-05, 00:24   Link #25812
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Old 2010-07-05, 06:09   Link #25813
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Also, embarrassed!Einhart is cute!Einhart :3
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Old 2010-07-05, 07:02   Link #25815
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Old 2010-07-05, 08:52   Link #25816
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Old 2010-07-05, 09:00   Link #25817
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The backlog, I fear it. Man, I've only been gone a few days.... I don't even know where to start for what I've missed.
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Old 2010-07-05, 09:57   Link #25818
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A lot can happen in a few days, you know?
Begin again as all things must...from where you left off.

I actually have something to share today,
Spoiler for Broken Freedom Ch 2:


First chapter was posted about 50 pages back without a title, so it's now on FF.net here
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Old 2010-07-05, 10:13   Link #25819
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Thanks for the feedback! It's surprisingly easy to make cheesy sound effects... especially when you don't mean to!

And *blimp*, here's more:

-Before Dawn-


Spoiler for Page 7 (read right to left):


Previously:


Page 1
Page 2
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5
Page 6
Nice, keep it up, lots better than me who can only draw stick figures.

Anyway, something new from me:
Spoiler for Nightmare:


Spoiler for Author's Notes:


Spoiler for Omake:


@Yasanagi:
A secret must not be kept, that is all

@shiroi mahotsukai
Interesting, let's see where this rabbit hole leads, hopefully not another 50 pages wait.
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Old 2010-07-05, 11:10   Link #25820
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Future Tense

Chapter 9: Point of Contention


In which we get off that cliff and have us some interesting confrontations...

Previous chapters can be found here.

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