Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[vic-vic]

Materails just need more love.
And less "Evil Admirals"... Poor Chrono.
Good job guys.

[Megaolix]

I simply cannot wait to see how the rest of the cast we know reacted to this. Especially Nanoha, Fate and Hayate themselves. And to think I imagined that Seikou would bring the situation back to something sane... Nope, she just dealt the finishing blow instead.

Apart from that, any chance for this to be all assembled in one place for quick reading?

[Yasanagi]

Originally Posted by Megaolix

I simply cannot wait to see how the rest of the cast we know reacted to this. Especially Nanoha, Fate and Hayate themselves. And to think I imagined that Seikou would bring the situation back to something sane... Nope, she just dealt the finishing blow instead.

Apart from that, any chance for this to be all assembled in one place for quick reading?

Me and Nanya have been placing episodes on the Anime Addventure too. You can easily collect all of them for reading by going to the latest episode and using the 'View Episode Chain' link to read it all the way from the beginning.

[Megaolix]

Originally Posted by Yasanagi

Me and Nanya have been placing episodes on the Anime Addventure too. You can easily collect all of them for reading by going to the latest episode and using the 'View Episode Chain' link to read it all the way from the beginning.

No offense, but Anime Adventure drove me to instead search your posts for all snippets here so that I will never have to return there.

[00-Raiser]

Yeah, I say you upload it to FF.net.

[DezoPenguin]

Originally Posted by 00-Raiser

How about the teleport-into-blasty part?

Originally Posted by Yasanagi

I doubt that the program actually saw Yuuno pull off that teleport spell.

Originally Posted by 00-Raiser

Poor Yuuno, his efforts were completely unnoticed!

Plus, Shamal and Arf were helping with that, too. Teamwork may help defeat monsters, but it never gets the press releases.

[Nanya01]

Spoiler for Material Days 16:

Genya stared at the television, before something occurred to him and he rushed to the front door. Looking at his children, all of them, Einhart, Teana and Touma were part of his family, he knew that they needed to know. “Everyone get in here!” It took them about three seconds to get the message, another three to let go of Touma, and five seconds more for all of them to get inside and sit down in the living room.

“Dad, what’s…” Subaru trailed off as he turned on the large television. Thankfully, or not, the television networks were still running what had just been played a few moments ago. “Nanoha-san?”

“She… Cut her hair…” Teana was kind of stunned, she thought that Nanoha… “Wait a second, that’s not Nanoha.” She was able to focus on the Hayate and Fate look-a-likes long enough to make that connection, it helped when the Nanoha look-a-like introduced herself as Seikou something-or-other.

After the connection was cut off, Dieci started to whimper horribly. “No fair…” When her sisters turned to her, she shivered. “Nanoha-san blew me up when I was a bad guy. Now I’m not a bad guy and evil Nanoha-san is going to blow me up.” Tears started to flow down her face. “I don’t wanna explode in pink again!”

Everyone in the living room sweat-dropped as Dieci started to go slightly catatonic.

Teana shook her head, she understood how Dieci felt. Hell, after Nanoha had blasted her, she couldn’t stand the sight of pink for days afterwards, and that had just been because she had been stupid with her training. She couldn’t imagine how bad it was for Dieci, who had taken a BLASTER-mode Excellion Buster to the face. “PTBD.” She patted the cyborg on her shoulder and wasn’t surprised when Dieci turned and hugged her, crying into her chest. “It’ll be okay, the scary pink beams won’t blow you up here.”

Even though he sweat-dropped at the sight, Genya walked up to Touma and put a hand on his shoulder. “Touma, I know that you wanted to leave right now, but, I’m sorry… With the terrorists running around on outlaying worlds and now this?”

Sighing, though seeing the looks on his sisters’ faces, he knew that even trying to get off-world would be impossible, and he didn’t think that they’d accompany him. Even if he liked this family, he really wanted to know just who was responsible for his home getting destroyed. Still…

“I won’t leave, not yet.”

“That’s all I ask.” Genya smiled before being forced to step back as Wendi tackled Touma, hugging him, which triggered off the rest of her sisters to hug him as well. Sighing, Genya wondered if maybe he should have found them all boyfriends by now, at least then they wouldn’t be so clingy to the poor boy.

__________________________________________________ _______

“Well, that was… Different…” Vita mumbled as she looked at the screen. Today had been her day off too, so she was spending it with Hayate at their home.

On the table, little Reinforce Zwei was starting to get nervous as she looked around, slightly panicky. “Ne, ne… What’s going on?” Something about those three was really familiar to her, and she wasn’t talking about the way they looked. Their names, those names seemed to “sing” out to her and she just couldn’t… Place it.

Walking out of the kitchen, Hayate Yagami, dressed in casual clothing and an apron, blinked at the concerned looks Vita and Rein were giving her. “What?” When Vita wordlessly pointed at the television, she walked over and looked, and stared, wide-eyed. “What the?! Tha.. That’s me… But, with different hair and her hair’s shorter and… Fate-chan? Nanoha-chan? What’s going on here?!”

“They aren’t you, but they are and… I don’t know what’s going on here!” Vita yelled, utterly baffled by the newest development in her life.

“Materials…” Reinforce Zwei mumbled, looking at everything and nothing as she thought about it. Something about it was just… There and wrong, what was it? “Nnngh…” And why did it feel like her head was about to explode the more she thought about it.

Even so, there was something about them that chilled her to the bone, and it wasn’t the fact that they looked like Nanoha, Hayate and Fate. The feelings she got as she looked at them were dark, cold and just wrong.

[Thunderbird]

Hoo boy here we go~ Rein is starting to remember things. Will she go join the materials as one of them I wonder. Not to mention the materials have just declared war

Can see it now, the battle between the aces and:

Material L - Brilliant Sea Operations Commander

Material D - Rugged Land Operations Specialist

Material S - Daring Air Operations Expert

All they need now is a space station called SkyVolt and *shot*

[00-Raiser]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Spoiler for Material Days 16:

Genya stared at the television, before something occurred to him and he rushed to the front door. Looking at his children, all of them, Einhart, Teana and Touma were part of his family, he knew that they needed to know. “Everyone get in here!” It took them about three seconds to get the message, another three to let go of Touma, and five seconds more for all of them to get inside and sit down in the living room.

“Dad, what’s…” Subaru trailed off as he turned on the large television. Thankfully, or not, the television networks were still running what had just been played a few moments ago. “Nanoha-san?”

“She… Cut her hair…” Teana was kind of stunned, she thought that Nanoha… “Wait a second, that’s not Nanoha.” She was able to focus on the Hayate and Fate look-a-likes long enough to make that connection, it helped when the Nanoha look-a-like introduced herself as Seikou something-or-other.

After the connection was cut off, Dieci started to whimper horribly. “No fair…” When her sisters turned to her, she shivered. “Nanoha-san blew me up when I was a bad guy. Now I’m not a bad guy and evil Nanoha-san is going to blow me up.” Tears started to flow down her face. “I don’t wanna explode in pink again!”

Everyone in the living room sweat-dropped as Dieci started to go slightly catatonic.

Teana shook her head, she understood how Dieci felt. Hell, after Nanoha had blasted her, she couldn’t stand the sight of pink for days afterwards, and that had just been because she had been stupid with her training. She couldn’t imagine how bad it was for Dieci, who had taken a BLASTER-mode Excellion Buster to the face. “PTBD.” She patted the cyborg on her shoulder and wasn’t surprised when Dieci turned and hugged her, crying into her chest. “It’ll be okay, the scary pink beams won’t blow you up here.”

Even though he sweat-dropped at the sight, Genya walked up to Touma and put a hand on his shoulder. “Touma, I know that you wanted to leave right now, but, I’m sorry… With the terrorists running around on outlaying worlds and now this?”

Sighing, though seeing the looks on his sisters’ faces, he knew that even trying to get off-world would be impossible, and he didn’t think that they’d accompany him. Even if he liked this family, he really wanted to know just who was responsible for his home getting destroyed. Still…

“I won’t leave, not yet.”

“That’s all I ask.” Genya smiled before being forced to step back as Wendi tackled Touma, hugging him, which triggered off the rest of her sisters to hug him as well. Sighing, Genya wondered if maybe he should have found them all boyfriends by now, at least then they wouldn’t be so clingy to the poor boy.

__________________________________________________ _______

“Well, that was… Different…” Vita mumbled as she looked at the screen. Today had been her day off too, so she was spending it with Hayate at their home.

On the table, little Reinforce Zwei was starting to get nervous as she looked around, slightly panicky. “Ne, ne… What’s going on?” Something about those three was really familiar to her, and she wasn’t talking about the way they looked. Their names, those names seemed to “sing” out to her and she just couldn’t… Place it.

Walking out of the kitchen, Hayate Yagami, dressed in casual clothing and an apron, blinked at the concerned looks Vita and Rein were giving her. “What?” When Vita wordlessly pointed at the television, she walked over and looked, and stared, wide-eyed. “What the?! Tha.. That’s me… But, with different hair and her hair’s shorter and… Fate-chan? Nanoha-chan? What’s going on here?!”

“They aren’t you, but they are and… I don’t know what’s going on here!” Vita yelled, utterly baffled by the newest development in her life.

“Materials…” Reinforce Zwei mumbled, looking at everything and nothing as she thought about it. Something about it was just… There and wrong, what was it? “Nnngh…” And why did it feel like her head was about to explode the more she thought about it.

Even so, there was something about them that chilled her to the bone, and it wasn’t the fact that they looked like Nanoha, Hayate and Fate. The feelings she got as she looked at them were dark, cold and just wrong.

Hm, interesting. But to be honest I'd rather have more scenes with the Materials than the other characters

[vic-vic]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Spoiler for Material Days 16:

Genya stared at the television, before something occurred to him and he rushed to the front door. Looking at his children, all of them, Einhart, Teana and Touma were part of his family, he knew that they needed to know. “Everyone get in here!” It took them about three seconds to get the message, another three to let go of Touma, and five seconds more for all of them to get inside and sit down in the living room.

“Dad, what’s…” Subaru trailed off as he turned on the large television. Thankfully, or not, the television networks were still running what had just been played a few moments ago. “Nanoha-san?”

“She… Cut her hair…” Teana was kind of stunned, she thought that Nanoha… “Wait a second, that’s not Nanoha.” She was able to focus on the Hayate and Fate look-a-likes long enough to make that connection, it helped when the Nanoha look-a-like introduced herself as Seikou something-or-other.

After the connection was cut off, Dieci started to whimper horribly. “No fair…” When her sisters turned to her, she shivered. “Nanoha-san blew me up when I was a bad guy. Now I’m not a bad guy and evil Nanoha-san is going to blow me up.” Tears started to flow down her face. “I don’t wanna explode in pink again!”

Everyone in the living room sweat-dropped as Dieci started to go slightly catatonic.

Teana shook her head, she understood how Dieci felt. Hell, after Nanoha had blasted her, she couldn’t stand the sight of pink for days afterwards, and that had just been because she had been stupid with her training. She couldn’t imagine how bad it was for Dieci, who had taken a BLASTER-mode Excellion Buster to the face. “PTBD.” She patted the cyborg on her shoulder and wasn’t surprised when Dieci turned and hugged her, crying into her chest. “It’ll be okay, the scary pink beams won’t blow you up here.”

Even though he sweat-dropped at the sight, Genya walked up to Touma and put a hand on his shoulder. “Touma, I know that you wanted to leave right now, but, I’m sorry… With the terrorists running around on outlaying worlds and now this?”

Sighing, though seeing the looks on his sisters’ faces, he knew that even trying to get off-world would be impossible, and he didn’t think that they’d accompany him. Even if he liked this family, he really wanted to know just who was responsible for his home getting destroyed. Still…

“I won’t leave, not yet.”

“That’s all I ask.” Genya smiled before being forced to step back as Wendi tackled Touma, hugging him, which triggered off the rest of her sisters to hug him as well. Sighing, Genya wondered if maybe he should have found them all boyfriends by now, at least then they wouldn’t be so clingy to the poor boy.

__________________________________________________ _______

“Well, that was… Different…” Vita mumbled as she looked at the screen. Today had been her day off too, so she was spending it with Hayate at their home.

On the table, little Reinforce Zwei was starting to get nervous as she looked around, slightly panicky. “Ne, ne… What’s going on?” Something about those three was really familiar to her, and she wasn’t talking about the way they looked. Their names, those names seemed to “sing” out to her and she just couldn’t… Place it.

Walking out of the kitchen, Hayate Yagami, dressed in casual clothing and an apron, blinked at the concerned looks Vita and Rein were giving her. “What?” When Vita wordlessly pointed at the television, she walked over and looked, and stared, wide-eyed. “What the?! Tha.. That’s me… But, with different hair and her hair’s shorter and… Fate-chan? Nanoha-chan? What’s going on here?!”

“They aren’t you, but they are and… I don’t know what’s going on here!” Vita yelled, utterly baffled by the newest development in her life.

“Materials…” Reinforce Zwei mumbled, looking at everything and nothing as she thought about it. Something about it was just… There and wrong, what was it? “Nnngh…” And why did it feel like her head was about to explode the more she thought about it.

Even so, there was something about them that chilled her to the bone, and it wasn’t the fact that they looked like Nanoha, Hayate and Fate. The feelings she got as she looked at them were dark, cold and just wrong.

Ho, so Materal-S got dimensional plane`s attention. I look for future development.

[Megaolix]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Spoiler for Material Days 16:

Genya stared at the television, before something occurred to him and he rushed to the front door. Looking at his children, all of them, Einhart, Teana and Touma were part of his family, he knew that they needed to know. “Everyone get in here!” It took them about three seconds to get the message, another three to let go of Touma, and five seconds more for all of them to get inside and sit down in the living room.

“Dad, what’s…” Subaru trailed off as he turned on the large television. Thankfully, or not, the television networks were still running what had just been played a few moments ago. “Nanoha-san?”

“She… Cut her hair…” Teana was kind of stunned, she thought that Nanoha… “Wait a second, that’s not Nanoha.” She was able to focus on the Hayate and Fate look-a-likes long enough to make that connection, it helped when the Nanoha look-a-like introduced herself as Seikou something-or-other.

After the connection was cut off, Dieci started to whimper horribly. “No fair…” When her sisters turned to her, she shivered. “Nanoha-san blew me up when I was a bad guy. Now I’m not a bad guy and evil Nanoha-san is going to blow me up.” Tears started to flow down her face. “I don’t wanna explode in pink again!”

Everyone in the living room sweat-dropped as Dieci started to go slightly catatonic.

Teana shook her head, she understood how Dieci felt. Hell, after Nanoha had blasted her, she couldn’t stand the sight of pink for days afterwards, and that had just been because she had been stupid with her training. She couldn’t imagine how bad it was for Dieci, who had taken a BLASTER-mode Excellion Buster to the face. “PTBD.” She patted the cyborg on her shoulder and wasn’t surprised when Dieci turned and hugged her, crying into her chest. “It’ll be okay, the scary pink beams won’t blow you up here.”

Even though he sweat-dropped at the sight, Genya walked up to Touma and put a hand on his shoulder. “Touma, I know that you wanted to leave right now, but, I’m sorry… With the terrorists running around on outlaying worlds and now this?”

Sighing, though seeing the looks on his sisters’ faces, he knew that even trying to get off-world would be impossible, and he didn’t think that they’d accompany him. Even if he liked this family, he really wanted to know just who was responsible for his home getting destroyed. Still…

“I won’t leave, not yet.”

“That’s all I ask.” Genya smiled before being forced to step back as Wendi tackled Touma, hugging him, which triggered off the rest of her sisters to hug him as well. Sighing, Genya wondered if maybe he should have found them all boyfriends by now, at least then they wouldn’t be so clingy to the poor boy.

__________________________________________________ _______

“Well, that was… Different…” Vita mumbled as she looked at the screen. Today had been her day off too, so she was spending it with Hayate at their home.

On the table, little Reinforce Zwei was starting to get nervous as she looked around, slightly panicky. “Ne, ne… What’s going on?” Something about those three was really familiar to her, and she wasn’t talking about the way they looked. Their names, those names seemed to “sing” out to her and she just couldn’t… Place it.

Walking out of the kitchen, Hayate Yagami, dressed in casual clothing and an apron, blinked at the concerned looks Vita and Rein were giving her. “What?” When Vita wordlessly pointed at the television, she walked over and looked, and stared, wide-eyed. “What the?! Tha.. That’s me… But, with different hair and her hair’s shorter and… Fate-chan? Nanoha-chan? What’s going on here?!”

“They aren’t you, but they are and… I don’t know what’s going on here!” Vita yelled, utterly baffled by the newest development in her life.

“Materials…” Reinforce Zwei mumbled, looking at everything and nothing as she thought about it. Something about it was just… There and wrong, what was it? “Nnngh…” And why did it feel like her head was about to explode the more she thought about it.

Even so, there was something about them that chilled her to the bone, and it wasn’t the fact that they looked like Nanoha, Hayate and Fate. The feelings she got as she looked at them were dark, cold and just wrong.

Poor Dieci never have it easy...

I do wonder how what will Yuuno do when he learns what just happened. He probably won't be able to convince them right away that the TSAB isn't bad, so where will they go next?

...Actually, what where the Materials doing before the whole attack?

[Yasanagi]

Originally Posted by Megaolix

Poor Dieci never have it easy...

I do wonder how what will Yuuno do when he learns what just happened. He probably won't be able to convince them right away that the TSAB isn't bad, so where will they go next?

...Actually, what where the Materials doing before the whole attack?

I haven't figured out the extent of their activities although I do have an interesting little ficlet I want to get to when I have a chance that gives a glimpse into what they were up to in between the end of A's and the timeframe of the fic.

[Evil Rick]

Wanted to share something:

http://evil-rick.deviantart.com/journal/33644365/

Any opinion please, PLEASE, do share.

[Nanya01]

Yasanagi actually wrote most of this out. I just added a few things here and there.

And, so everyone knows, what I did add, I ran by Yasanagi first.

Spoiler for More Material Days:

“What is it?” Yuuno was honestly confused at what suddenly crawled up Material-D’s butt (and it is quite the lovely rear but this is definitely not the appropriate time for perverted observations) to get her all flustered.

“It’s like everything I know about mana replenishment has been turned upside down!!” To say that she’s frustrated is putting it rather mildly.

“Eeehhh? Is it fun being upside down?” asked Material-L in that childish tone of hers.

“Just be quiet right now!!” snapped the Hayate replica.

“Wait a second,” interrupted Yuuno. “What’s the big deal about mana replenishment for you? Mana is automatically generated from your Linker Core! She just needs a good rest, that‘s all!” Even clones had them with the most obvious examples being Fate and Erio.

“It doesn’t work that way for us.”

Material-D’s sudden explanation quickly shattered the Librarian’s theory on these women being renegade clones. “W-what do you mean?”

“Well, I eat those funny orbs but even though they make my upset tummy feel better, they don’t taste so nice. It’s a little better when I eat them with chicken!”

The Fate clone‘s sudden explanation started making things a bit more clear. “So… you don’t have true Linker Cores of your own… and you have to absorb Linker Cores for mana?”

“Our Linker Cores work differently from what Yersinia Kreuz has said. We don’t have true mana generators. Instead, we have mana boosters which strengthens our magic and our Cores have self monitors to make efficient use of whatever mana we have in our bodies. Come to think of it, maybe that was the reason why we were attacked by those brutes.”

‘Unreal,’ thought Yuuno as he tried to absorb Material-D’s words.

“We can absorb mana from other sources but we often find ourselves having to hunt for other Linker Cores to survive. If we don’t… we start falling apart bit by bit,” said the Hayate replica as she pointed out the feverish Material-S and how bits and pieces of her barrier jacket were slipping away at a slow rate. “When our mana levels are low, we start fading away piece by piece. It’s basically a self-preservation reaction from our Linker Cores. It tries to stay alive as long as possible by absorbing us piece by piece.”

“It was why we were at that boring planet earlier. We found a whole bunch of weirdoes and were gonna use them for dinner when those meanies got there before us and had all the fun!” grumbled Material-L. “Aaaahhh… I wanted to be the one soaked in blood, not them!!”

He very nearly lost control of himself when he heard on what they had originally planned. In a way, the arrival of those Huckebein had been a blessing. After taking a breath to calm down, he addressed the Hayate replica to confirm what he heard. “So in order for her to make it through this, then she needs Linker Cores?”

“Yes… or so I thought. It seems we have another source of replenishment.” Material-D jabbed a finger right into the Librarian’s chest. “And that would be you.”

“Yuu-nii’s gonna feed us? Oooh!! Can you make chicken out of thin air?!” asked Material-L in an excited tone.

“He’ll have to help Material-S for sure. She needs to get a new injection of mana,” noted Material-D, not even noticing the shocked look on Yuuno’s face.

“Whawhawha?!?” He could not believe what he was hearing now.

“I don’t think I understand it myself but Yersinia Kreuz mentioned something about how new sources of Linker Cores come from the seeds of new life. I didn‘t even make the connection until Material-L made her mist comment.” Material-D sighed in frustration. “I swear, this is becoming something so stupid like…”

“…… some eroge?” Rai added “helpfully”, grinning the whole time.

Material-D’s only response to that was to slap her palm against her face.

Yuuno looked at the panting form of Seikou and grimaced, okay, so what they did wasn’t good, and he would never want anyone to suffer like that if he could help it. In fact, from what Yami had explained to him, it felt like they were familiars without a master to feed them continuous energy. Of course, making them into a familiar would be a bad idea, since he doubted anyone other than Hayate had the mana reserves needed to sustain high-powered familiars.

Yami looked at Yuuno and grimaced. “So, we have two choices, we can either take your Linker Core and use it to sustain ourselves…”

“I don’t wanna kill Yuu-nii!” Rai glomped Yuuno, causing him to stagger as tears fell out of her eyes. “I like him.”

Yuuno chuckled nervously as she did that. ‘Great, either I go with the other choice, or it’s death, huh?’ He really didn’t like either prospect, well, mostly the death part, he just wasn’t sure about the other prospect.

Rubbing her forehead, Yami sighed. “OR!” When she had Rai’s attention, she shook her head. “Or we can have him do what he did to Material-S, but more, since she seems to need a larger dose or a more direct contact with it.”

“Ah, um well, that is…”

Material-D growled, grabbed Yuuno and slammed him against the wall. “Listen you! If you don’t do what you did before to help her, I swear that I *will* take your Linker Core to make sure that she stays alive!”

“It doesn’t hurt, does it, Yuu-nii?” Rai looked at him, tilting her head. “Seikou needs it and if you don’t do it, she’ll die, and I don’t want her to die!” Her eyes lit up with tears as she clasped her hands in front of herself. “So, please… Help her.”

”This man, I know that I can trust him with my life.” Those words came to both Yuuno and Yami unbidden, making Yuuno look at Seikou while Yami wondered if the Material-S had made the right decision in trusting him.

“Can… Can we be alone then?”

Yami let go of him as she walked to the door. “I don’t care what you have to do, but she better be better soon or I will take more drastic steps.”

“You care for her, huh?” Yuuno blinked as she growled and stormed off in a huff.

“Don’t mind Yami, she just doesn’t like showing it.” Rai beamed at him. “Bai bai.”

[Thunderbird]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Yasanagi actually wrote most of this out. I just added a few things here and there.

And, so everyone knows, what I did add, I ran by Yasanagi first.

Spoiler for More Material Days:

“What is it?” Yuuno was honestly confused at what suddenly crawled up Material-D’s butt (and it is quite the lovely rear but this is definitely not the appropriate time for perverted observations) to get her all flustered.

“It’s like everything I know about mana replenishment has been turned upside down!!” To say that she’s frustrated is putting it rather mildly.

“Eeehhh? Is it fun being upside down?” asked Material-L in that childish tone of hers.

“Just be quiet right now!!” snapped the Hayate replica.

“Wait a second,” interrupted Yuuno. “What’s the big deal about mana replenishment for you? Mana is automatically generated from your Linker Core! She just needs a good rest, that‘s all!” Even clones had them with the most obvious examples being Fate and Erio.

“It doesn’t work that way for us.”

Material-D’s sudden explanation quickly shattered the Librarian’s theory on these women being renegade clones. “W-what do you mean?”

“Well, I eat those funny orbs but even though they make my upset tummy feel better, they don’t taste so nice. It’s a little better when I eat them with chicken!”

The Fate clone‘s sudden explanation started making things a bit more clear. “So… you don’t have true Linker Cores of your own… and you have to absorb Linker Cores for mana?”

“Our Linker Cores work differently from what Yersinia Kreuz has said. We don’t have true mana generators. Instead, we have mana boosters which strengthens our magic and our Cores have self monitors to make efficient use of whatever mana we have in our bodies. Come to think of it, maybe that was the reason why we were attacked by those brutes.”

‘Unreal,’ thought Yuuno as he tried to absorb Material-D’s words.

“We can absorb mana from other sources but we often find ourselves having to hunt for other Linker Cores to survive. If we don’t… we start falling apart bit by bit,” said the Hayate replica as she pointed out the feverish Material-S and how bits and pieces of her barrier jacket were slipping away at a slow rate. “When our mana levels are low, we start fading away piece by piece. It’s basically a self-preservation reaction from our Linker Cores. It tries to stay alive as long as possible by absorbing us piece by piece.”

“It was why we were at that boring planet earlier. We found a whole bunch of weirdoes and were gonna use them for dinner when those meanies got there before us and had all the fun!” grumbled Material-L. “Aaaahhh… I wanted to be the one soaked in blood, not them!!”

He very nearly lost control of himself when he heard on what they had originally planned. In a way, the arrival of those Huckebein had been a blessing. After taking a breath to calm down, he addressed the Hayate replica to confirm what he heard. “So in order for her to make it through this, then she needs Linker Cores?”

“Yes… or so I thought. It seems we have another source of replenishment.” Material-D jabbed a finger right into the Librarian’s chest. “And that would be you.”

“Yuu-nii’s gonna feed us? Oooh!! Can you make chicken out of thin air?!” asked Material-L in an excited tone.

“He’ll have to help Material-S for sure. She needs to get a new injection of mana,” noted Material-D, not even noticing the shocked look on Yuuno’s face.

“Whawhawha?!?” He could not believe what he was hearing now.

“I don’t think I understand it myself but Yersinia Kreuz mentioned something about how new sources of Linker Cores come from the seeds of new life. I didn‘t even make the connection until Material-L made her mist comment.” Material-D sighed in frustration. “I swear, this is becoming something so stupid like…”

“…… some eroge?” Rai added “helpfully”, grinning the whole time.

Material-D’s only response to that was to slap her palm against her face.

Yuuno looked at the panting form of Seikou and grimaced, okay, so what they did wasn’t good, and he would never want anyone to suffer like that if he could help it. In fact, from what Yami had explained to him, it felt like they were familiars without a master to feed them continuous energy. Of course, making them into a familiar would be a bad idea, since he doubted anyone other than Hayate had the mana reserves needed to sustain high-powered familiars.

Yami looked at Yuuno and grimaced. “So, we have two choices, we can either take your Linker Core and use it to sustain ourselves…”

“I don’t wanna kill Yuu-nii!” Rai glomped Yuuno, causing him to stagger as tears fell out of her eyes. “I like him.”

Yuuno chuckled nervously as she did that. ‘Great, either I go with the other choice, or it’s death, huh?’ He really didn’t like either prospect, well, mostly the death part, he just wasn’t sure about the other prospect.

Rubbing her forehead, Yami sighed. “OR!” When she had Rai’s attention, she shook her head. “Or we can have him do what he did to Material-S, but more, since she seems to need a larger dose or a more direct contact with it.”

“Ah, um well, that is…”

Material-D growled, grabbed Yuuno and slammed him against the wall. “Listen you! If you don’t do what you did before to help her, I swear that I *will* take your Linker Core to make sure that she stays alive!”

“It doesn’t hurt, does it, Yuu-nii?” Rai looked at him, tilting her head. “Seikou needs it and if you don’t do it, she’ll die, and I don’t want her to die!” Her eyes lit up with tears as she clasped her hands in front of herself. “So, please… Help her.”

”This man, I know that I can trust him with my life.” Those words came to both Yuuno and Yami unbidden, making Yuuno look at Seikou while Yami wondered if the Material-S had made the right decision in trusting him.

“Can… Can we be alone then?”

Yami let go of him as she walked to the door. “I don’t care what you have to do, but she better be better soon or I will take more drastic steps.”

“You care for her, huh?” Yuuno blinked as she growled and stormed off in a huff.

“Don’t mind Yami, she just doesn’t like showing it.” Rai beamed at him. “Bai bai.”

So...umm are they going to do the whole Fate Stay/Night Mana transfer process...? That would be interesting

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by Thunderbird

So...umm are they going to do the whole Fate Stay/Night Mana transfer process...? That would be interesting

Apparently.

[yuiseppe]

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

*blinks* ...bendy?

Well, in my fic I added a race of fox-people that live long, grow an additional tail for each 100 years and can freely change into human form (based on japanese folklore).
In that pic, the fox would be the woman (Maren), the father (Koji) is human and their child (Fuuko) is half.

If we have an intelligent (but mute?) humanoid insect (aka Garyuu), why not this too?
*runs again*

No no, I meant the sterility of OCs and CCs. Perfectly fine with inter-species cross breeding (hello elves, dwarves and halves!) :P

Originally Posted by isagrimorie

Ooooh. This is the first I've seen of it and it is incredibly awesome! I do love explorations about the Wolkenritter and their past!

Thanks! The Wolkies never get enough love.

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

I don't know, I rather liked this dialogue. Especially Signum's small speech about how she needs to survive to remember what has been seen and to pass it on. Very true to her character. Though, somehow, I get the feeling that one day she'll find herself regretting that she said that.

Oh you bet I'm saving up the irony

But... but.... I haven't written any lemons yet!

Hah! So you deny writing lemons...

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Wanted to share something:

http://evil-rick.deviantart.com/journal/33644365/

Any opinion please, PLEASE, do share.

Hmm, the 'voice in the head' plot device needs a little more exploration for it to be more than a hand wave I think.

Though speaking of handwaves, I was going to post the last 3 pages in one burst, but ... that will break my pace (or lack thereof).

-Before Dawn-

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Speech bubbles are murder.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by yuiseppe

Hmm, the 'voice in the head' plot device needs a little more exploration for it to be more than a hand wave I think.

Actually it do has more, Nanoha is actually linked to the device since she's the only one who can use it (if you read the full article, Dr. Fauts had the device but he was unable to activate it). But all this will be revealed trough the story.

Though speaking of handwaves, I was going to post the last 3 pages in one burst, but ... that will break my pace (or lack thereof).

-Before Dawn-

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So I guess this is reaching the end (actually I've been following this since the begining but do not coment a lot around these places on these days. I like the idea of getting into the wolkis past, even when it's only Signum, perhaps you should do the same for each one of them, well, just a sugestion.

Speech bubbles are murder.

Seconds that XD

[Megaolix]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Yasanagi actually wrote most of this out. I just added a few things here and there.

And, so everyone knows, what I did add, I ran by Yasanagi first.

Spoiler for More Material Days:

“What is it?” Yuuno was honestly confused at what suddenly crawled up Material-D’s butt (and it is quite the lovely rear but this is definitely not the appropriate time for perverted observations) to get her all flustered.

“It’s like everything I know about mana replenishment has been turned upside down!!” To say that she’s frustrated is putting it rather mildly.

“Eeehhh? Is it fun being upside down?” asked Material-L in that childish tone of hers.

“Just be quiet right now!!” snapped the Hayate replica.

“Wait a second,” interrupted Yuuno. “What’s the big deal about mana replenishment for you? Mana is automatically generated from your Linker Core! She just needs a good rest, that‘s all!” Even clones had them with the most obvious examples being Fate and Erio.

“It doesn’t work that way for us.”

Material-D’s sudden explanation quickly shattered the Librarian’s theory on these women being renegade clones. “W-what do you mean?”

“Well, I eat those funny orbs but even though they make my upset tummy feel better, they don’t taste so nice. It’s a little better when I eat them with chicken!”

The Fate clone‘s sudden explanation started making things a bit more clear. “So… you don’t have true Linker Cores of your own… and you have to absorb Linker Cores for mana?”

“Our Linker Cores work differently from what Yersinia Kreuz has said. We don’t have true mana generators. Instead, we have mana boosters which strengthens our magic and our Cores have self monitors to make efficient use of whatever mana we have in our bodies. Come to think of it, maybe that was the reason why we were attacked by those brutes.”

‘Unreal,’ thought Yuuno as he tried to absorb Material-D’s words.

“We can absorb mana from other sources but we often find ourselves having to hunt for other Linker Cores to survive. If we don’t… we start falling apart bit by bit,” said the Hayate replica as she pointed out the feverish Material-S and how bits and pieces of her barrier jacket were slipping away at a slow rate. “When our mana levels are low, we start fading away piece by piece. It’s basically a self-preservation reaction from our Linker Cores. It tries to stay alive as long as possible by absorbing us piece by piece.”

“It was why we were at that boring planet earlier. We found a whole bunch of weirdoes and were gonna use them for dinner when those meanies got there before us and had all the fun!” grumbled Material-L. “Aaaahhh… I wanted to be the one soaked in blood, not them!!”

He very nearly lost control of himself when he heard on what they had originally planned. In a way, the arrival of those Huckebein had been a blessing. After taking a breath to calm down, he addressed the Hayate replica to confirm what he heard. “So in order for her to make it through this, then she needs Linker Cores?”

“Yes… or so I thought. It seems we have another source of replenishment.” Material-D jabbed a finger right into the Librarian’s chest. “And that would be you.”

“Yuu-nii’s gonna feed us? Oooh!! Can you make chicken out of thin air?!” asked Material-L in an excited tone.

“He’ll have to help Material-S for sure. She needs to get a new injection of mana,” noted Material-D, not even noticing the shocked look on Yuuno’s face.

“Whawhawha?!?” He could not believe what he was hearing now.

“I don’t think I understand it myself but Yersinia Kreuz mentioned something about how new sources of Linker Cores come from the seeds of new life. I didn‘t even make the connection until Material-L made her mist comment.” Material-D sighed in frustration. “I swear, this is becoming something so stupid like…”

“…… some eroge?” Rai added “helpfully”, grinning the whole time.

Material-D’s only response to that was to slap her palm against her face.

Yuuno looked at the panting form of Seikou and grimaced, okay, so what they did wasn’t good, and he would never want anyone to suffer like that if he could help it. In fact, from what Yami had explained to him, it felt like they were familiars without a master to feed them continuous energy. Of course, making them into a familiar would be a bad idea, since he doubted anyone other than Hayate had the mana reserves needed to sustain high-powered familiars.

Yami looked at Yuuno and grimaced. “So, we have two choices, we can either take your Linker Core and use it to sustain ourselves…”

“I don’t wanna kill Yuu-nii!” Rai glomped Yuuno, causing him to stagger as tears fell out of her eyes. “I like him.”

Yuuno chuckled nervously as she did that. ‘Great, either I go with the other choice, or it’s death, huh?’ He really didn’t like either prospect, well, mostly the death part, he just wasn’t sure about the other prospect.

Rubbing her forehead, Yami sighed. “OR!” When she had Rai’s attention, she shook her head. “Or we can have him do what he did to Material-S, but more, since she seems to need a larger dose or a more direct contact with it.”

“Ah, um well, that is…”

Material-D growled, grabbed Yuuno and slammed him against the wall. “Listen you! If you don’t do what you did before to help her, I swear that I *will* take your Linker Core to make sure that she stays alive!”

“It doesn’t hurt, does it, Yuu-nii?” Rai looked at him, tilting her head. “Seikou needs it and if you don’t do it, she’ll die, and I don’t want her to die!” Her eyes lit up with tears as she clasped her hands in front of herself. “So, please… Help her.”

”This man, I know that I can trust him with my life.” Those words came to both Yuuno and Yami unbidden, making Yuuno look at Seikou while Yami wondered if the Material-S had made the right decision in trusting him.

“Can… Can we be alone then?”

Yami let go of him as she walked to the door. “I don’t care what you have to do, but she better be better soon or I will take more drastic steps.”

“You care for her, huh?” Yuuno blinked as she growled and stormed off in a huff.

“Don’t mind Yami, she just doesn’t like showing it.” Rai beamed at him. “Bai bai.”

To be quite honest, I'm not exactly sure I like that developpement. I mean, I see the potential for hilarity right there (I can only imagine Yuuno trying to expalin to Chrono that if he doesn't you-know-what, they'll attack people to survive), but... depending on it to not die or so that they won't have to attack people... Yeah, really not sure about this. I'll be frank and admit that I hope some sort of third option will pop up.

Or maybe I'm looking too much into it. Gotta have to wait and see how you'll write the matter.

[00-Raiser]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Yasanagi actually wrote most of this out. I just added a few things here and there.

And, so everyone knows, what I did add, I ran by Yasanagi first.

Spoiler for More Material Days:

“What is it?” Yuuno was honestly confused at what suddenly crawled up Material-D’s butt (and it is quite the lovely rear but this is definitely not the appropriate time for perverted observations) to get her all flustered.

“It’s like everything I know about mana replenishment has been turned upside down!!” To say that she’s frustrated is putting it rather mildly.

“Eeehhh? Is it fun being upside down?” asked Material-L in that childish tone of hers.

“Just be quiet right now!!” snapped the Hayate replica.

“Wait a second,” interrupted Yuuno. “What’s the big deal about mana replenishment for you? Mana is automatically generated from your Linker Core! She just needs a good rest, that‘s all!” Even clones had them with the most obvious examples being Fate and Erio.

“It doesn’t work that way for us.”

Material-D’s sudden explanation quickly shattered the Librarian’s theory on these women being renegade clones. “W-what do you mean?”

“Well, I eat those funny orbs but even though they make my upset tummy feel better, they don’t taste so nice. It’s a little better when I eat them with chicken!”

The Fate clone‘s sudden explanation started making things a bit more clear. “So… you don’t have true Linker Cores of your own… and you have to absorb Linker Cores for mana?”

“Our Linker Cores work differently from what Yersinia Kreuz has said. We don’t have true mana generators. Instead, we have mana boosters which strengthens our magic and our Cores have self monitors to make efficient use of whatever mana we have in our bodies. Come to think of it, maybe that was the reason why we were attacked by those brutes.”

‘Unreal,’ thought Yuuno as he tried to absorb Material-D’s words.

“We can absorb mana from other sources but we often find ourselves having to hunt for other Linker Cores to survive. If we don’t… we start falling apart bit by bit,” said the Hayate replica as she pointed out the feverish Material-S and how bits and pieces of her barrier jacket were slipping away at a slow rate. “When our mana levels are low, we start fading away piece by piece. It’s basically a self-preservation reaction from our Linker Cores. It tries to stay alive as long as possible by absorbing us piece by piece.”

“It was why we were at that boring planet earlier. We found a whole bunch of weirdoes and were gonna use them for dinner when those meanies got there before us and had all the fun!” grumbled Material-L. “Aaaahhh… I wanted to be the one soaked in blood, not them!!”

He very nearly lost control of himself when he heard on what they had originally planned. In a way, the arrival of those Huckebein had been a blessing. After taking a breath to calm down, he addressed the Hayate replica to confirm what he heard. “So in order for her to make it through this, then she needs Linker Cores?”

“Yes… or so I thought. It seems we have another source of replenishment.” Material-D jabbed a finger right into the Librarian’s chest. “And that would be you.”

“Yuu-nii’s gonna feed us? Oooh!! Can you make chicken out of thin air?!” asked Material-L in an excited tone.

“He’ll have to help Material-S for sure. She needs to get a new injection of mana,” noted Material-D, not even noticing the shocked look on Yuuno’s face.

“Whawhawha?!?” He could not believe what he was hearing now.

“I don’t think I understand it myself but Yersinia Kreuz mentioned something about how new sources of Linker Cores come from the seeds of new life. I didn‘t even make the connection until Material-L made her mist comment.” Material-D sighed in frustration. “I swear, this is becoming something so stupid like…”

“…… some eroge?” Rai added “helpfully”, grinning the whole time.

Material-D’s only response to that was to slap her palm against her face.

Yuuno looked at the panting form of Seikou and grimaced, okay, so what they did wasn’t good, and he would never want anyone to suffer like that if he could help it. In fact, from what Yami had explained to him, it felt like they were familiars without a master to feed them continuous energy. Of course, making them into a familiar would be a bad idea, since he doubted anyone other than Hayate had the mana reserves needed to sustain high-powered familiars.

Yami looked at Yuuno and grimaced. “So, we have two choices, we can either take your Linker Core and use it to sustain ourselves…”

“I don’t wanna kill Yuu-nii!” Rai glomped Yuuno, causing him to stagger as tears fell out of her eyes. “I like him.”

Yuuno chuckled nervously as she did that. ‘Great, either I go with the other choice, or it’s death, huh?’ He really didn’t like either prospect, well, mostly the death part, he just wasn’t sure about the other prospect.

Rubbing her forehead, Yami sighed. “OR!” When she had Rai’s attention, she shook her head. “Or we can have him do what he did to Material-S, but more, since she seems to need a larger dose or a more direct contact with it.”

“Ah, um well, that is…”

Material-D growled, grabbed Yuuno and slammed him against the wall. “Listen you! If you don’t do what you did before to help her, I swear that I *will* take your Linker Core to make sure that she stays alive!”

“It doesn’t hurt, does it, Yuu-nii?” Rai looked at him, tilting her head. “Seikou needs it and if you don’t do it, she’ll die, and I don’t want her to die!” Her eyes lit up with tears as she clasped her hands in front of herself. “So, please… Help her.”

”This man, I know that I can trust him with my life.” Those words came to both Yuuno and Yami unbidden, making Yuuno look at Seikou while Yami wondered if the Material-S had made the right decision in trusting him.

“Can… Can we be alone then?”

Yami let go of him as she walked to the door. “I don’t care what you have to do, but she better be better soon or I will take more drastic steps.”

“You care for her, huh?” Yuuno blinked as she growled and stormed off in a huff.

“Don’t mind Yami, she just doesn’t like showing it.” Rai beamed at him. “Bai bai.”

Well, the obvious conclusion is that they'll have to have sex. I don't like that idea, but then again you never outright said it so you're probably just leading us on. They certainly didn't do that the first time with that green mist stuff so it might be something else. Maybe they just have to kiss ala the Absolute Angels from Kyoushiro to Towa no Sora/Shattered Angels.

We'll see...

BTW, what's Yersinia Kreuz?

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