2011-01-26, 16:15 | Link #28861 |
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Speaking of Blood That Flows...
New Shine Parts 1-20 Shine Part 21 Shine Part 22 Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Shine Part 23:
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2011-01-26, 16:27 | Link #28862 | ||
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2011-01-26, 16:46 | Link #28863 | |
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Of course the fic must be placed bafore Shana's power up. Having the raw power to kill physical gods seems to be a pretty unfair advantage xDU. He can but the paint will probably fall out of the armour when he unleashes his true power. An interesting chapter, wonder is you take account of Zest's amazing "instant aproach strike"(i don't know the official name) move, you know, the one he uses to take down Vita cracking Graf Eisen in the process. I think it can be a pretty useful option against speedsters.
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2011-01-26, 16:48 | Link #28864 | |
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2011-01-26, 16:57 | Link #28865 | |
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2011-01-26, 17:16 | Link #28866 |
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So, my fic spawned brutal abortion topics and fighting pregnant women.
... I'll have to put out disturbing fics more often! And no, I'm not making a larger story out of it. Hell no. I got enough on my plate without trying to think of a story to make around that. Absolutely no. maybe No. |
2011-01-26, 18:17 | Link #28868 | ||||
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Though I've never really followed that exactly. If I did, then I'd only write NanoFate because that's what 'everyone' wants to see. So I'm not a total doormat. But it's still a multi faceted thing. I write because I want to entertain people but I also do it because I like it and I like getting praise. Any forcing I've done is only at the start of a session. Often I will want to write. I've been playing out scenes in my head all day and I tell myself "Okay, when I get home I'll write this all out" but when I actually sit infront of my computer lethargy takes over and it's like my body has no energy for the task. My mind wanders and I go "Okay, after I do these things I'll get to writing!" But then those things in question extend to hours and in the end I get nothing going. The off chance I do get going, I'll typically get it all out in one go. Quote:
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2011-01-26, 19:01 | Link #28870 |
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Yeah, those at least (I say at least because there's probably more) 2 people I mentioned are those I know, which makes me feel more guilty that I'm making them wait so long But at the same time I don't want to rush it and put out an inferior product so... Kind of a lose-lose situation here =/
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2011-01-26, 19:04 | Link #28871 |
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Probably my opinion doesen't matter much to you because of our differences in some threads and topics but i like your work Raiser, your narrating style is very good and your stories are catchy for the most part, also i like how you ventured to make stories about characters and pairings people don't usually accept and make them look plausible in your fics. I don't know you that much but probably part of why your fics seems to be so easy to read and understand is because you like what you're writing.
This is fanfiction, not an editorial company with bosses judging your work so i hope you don't take things too seriously(i know, it's sounds nearly hipocritical hearing that from me xDU), if you like the praise i think that is good too, giving the fanbase some candy to make them happy from time to time but don't let you being consumed by them. Like i frequently say on my reviews as "Li Daisuke" on ff.net: keep the good work.
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2011-01-26, 19:17 | Link #28872 | |
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Though I'm not doubting the quality of my work, I'm just struggling with not being able to get anything done.
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2011-01-27, 00:51 | Link #28875 |
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http://www.reddit.com/r/writing/ anyone use this? Seems there might be something useful there
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2011-01-27, 00:59 | Link #28876 | |
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First things first: How is Amemiya's attitude going to colour his interactions with the others? Does his disdain for Hayate and the Wolkies tar everyone else with the same brush?
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2011-01-27, 01:59 | Link #28877 | |
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.... Mwahahahahahahahahahah-oh shit *runs away from the remaining Worfenritters*
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2011-01-27, 02:17 | Link #28878 |
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I'm still considering Amemiya's general attitude towards the main cast. Initially his beef was supposed to be concentrated on Hayate and the Wolkenritter, but I've thought of changing it so his attitude is "everyone associated with the Book of Darkness is tainted."
What I'm clear on is that Amemiya would jump at the chance to discredit/harm Hayate whether via an internal investigation or punishing her circle of criminals (Wolkenritter). He may even be driven to remove her from this world (not like he could succeed). Right now I don't have an overall plan and that has plagued most of my earlier works. I plan perhaps 5 rather short chapters and then write myself into a corner or lose my vision. For now I'm (very slowly) working on the 3 OCs that will appear and developing Terrace Horizon. Then I'll map out the plot points with more detail. Any suggestions/help would be welcome. I also need to consider whether or not I want to observe the happenings in the post-StrikerS canon, such as Force and ViVid, or break away from that. I think incorporating aspects of the "Battle of the Aces" PSP game would work, mainly the Material-D/L/S, this would give TSAB brass an avenue to persecute Hayate and friends. Thanks for the feedback WarpObscura.
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2011-01-27, 02:51 | Link #28879 |
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Well, you might want to develop on how his hatred of Hayate and the knights developed into a general hatred of everyone involved. Most people don't wake up one day and abruptly declare a new hatred for things. It poses some interesting questions, like how the Bureau in general and characters in particular look on attempted fratricide. There aren't enough writers, nevermind good ones, who dare to take on the perspective of contrarian characters, ones who don't like the way the "canoners" operate. The only one I can really think of is Smiling Ivan's Black Boots.
You should have a clear goal. "Begin with the end in mind" as the Effective Habit has it. I'm not much good with suggesting what that goal should be, though. I have my own difficulties in setting out goals, which is why I have those effectively dead fics lying around and have been doing mostly snippets and drabs. Call me "Warp".
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