2008-07-20, 09:28 | Link #2881 | |
OC Belka Scriptor
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Germany
Age: 40
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Yes it does... but atm I try to concentrate on Memories of Blood and Sorrow.
But I still collect some nice Ideas for Nightfall. (I'm even working on the 'bossfights' already ) Quote:
Nice choice of music and some tasty Yuunoha :3 Ah! That reminds me... you wanted something translated right? Sorry, I went off before you could say anything. ^^; awesome!
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2008-07-20, 10:42 | Link #2882 | ||
He Who Smites Shippers
Join Date: Mar 2008
Age: 36
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Alex's character model is Gilgamesh from FSN, and in Classic and A's he strongly resembles Chibi-Gil from Hollow Ataraxia, but with slightly spikier hair and a rather different personality. Now fix that image in your mind, particularly his facial features. Now who else do you know who has golden blond hair, deep crimson eyes, and--most importantly--a father who is completely unaccounted-for in-series? Alexander Janus Gracia, and Fate Testarossa: victims of coincidence... or half-siblings?
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2008-07-20, 11:38 | Link #2885 | |
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Join Date: Mar 2008
Age: 36
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2008-07-20, 13:05 | Link #2887 | ||||
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00"
Age: 38
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Kouya's had several avatars going for him, and my choice was a were-wolfy kind of character... However, I decided to do someone some justice, and so Kouya is officially a fairer-skinned, more boyish and scrawnier Zafira, complete with big ears sticking out the sides. I also added/reinstated the theorized puppy form! Other than that, the visual changes are minimal for easy visualization. WTB pactio car--- wait. Unless making one with Nodoka is allowed... <.< / >.> Just a few more bites I winged out: Spoiler for Kouya battle synopsis:
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2008-07-20, 13:08 | Link #2888 | |
He Who Smites Shippers
Join Date: Mar 2008
Age: 36
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Also, Kha... these Thousand Items, what are they exactly?
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2008-07-20, 13:33 | Link #2889 | |
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Hotsprings Resort
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In Negima, I had a older dark magic kinda guy that helped care for and trained Evangeline when she was still a wee little sprout and freshly indoctrinated into vampirism, his position similar to Zelretch and Arcuied. He makes a reappearance in modern times as a sealed chain-bound Dark Knight that could only become active via willing Pactio summoning. Strangely enough, Konoka and Yue somehow got the Pactio. Once that got established, he took a position in Mahora as a cynical, stand-offish, and sarcastic history teacher. AMG... Had a Death character. Second class Unlimited. 10-dimensional scythe. Close friends with, of all people, Skuld.
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2008-07-20, 19:55 | Link #2891 |
~ I Do ~
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00"
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10D Scythe is a sickass Phase weapon. Though I got to remember we're dealing with gods here.
At the moment, I have 2 ideas: one is a suit of armor made of 11 items (I counted wrong last night ) at 1 for each body part + 1 necklace and 2 rings; the other is basically, the Millenium Items from Yugioh (which was what gave me the idea for the other items after developing the Thousand Cross) renamed Thousand Items and redesigned so that they are more like devices. Currently I'm leaning towards the second idea (Kouya'd then only have 1 item, the Cross), but the 1st is there because its more original... I think. I'm also still deciding what they do, but at the height of the Khrack, I was thinking if Kouya later learnt how to fight using deck-based magic.
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2008-07-20, 20:07 | Link #2892 |
He Who Smites Shippers
Join Date: Mar 2008
Age: 36
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Deck-based, you say? Sounds like my planned port of Kinomoto Sakura, using cards like Carim's, but inscribed with pre-cast spell templates for rapid-fire casting spells of all sorts. A "jack" of all trades, if you will.
I like the second idea better, myself; it rings of those legendary artifacts someone (dkellis?) posted a few dozen pages back. Lots of potential for usage as plot devices. For instance, if I were to give one such item to Alex, Kouya would come into conflict with him and become a part of the central story as an antagonist, at least for a little while... no telling how long it'd take for him to get Befriended for trying to smack around Nanoha's lancer, but probably not very long.
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2008-07-20, 20:09 | Link #2893 | |
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Sky of stone, floor of flame.
Age: 37
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2008-07-20, 22:13 | Link #2894 | |||
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00"
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And it would help if you don't point out how potentially powerful a thing is, but focus on its limits. People are allergic to power here. Quote:
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Spoiler for The Sakura Cards system used by Saber, Sankt Kaiser of Belka:
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2008-07-20, 22:48 | Link #2895 | |
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Age: 36
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Though now that I think on it, Sakura shows a large number of traits of Negima Eastern-style mages, if you think of the cards' physical manifestations as being her "demons" and the cards as her talismans. Several of the cards have effects that subscribe to the "disorient and confuse" label common to eastern mage tactics; The Maze, The Illusion, The Dark, The Loop (an identical effect is used in the Negima manga during the Kyoto arc), and The Sleep in particular.
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2008-07-20, 23:01 | Link #2896 | ||
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Join Date: May 2007
Location: Kangaroos live in my backyard =P
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@Cort: All I can really say is to take Kha's suggestion and work on melding one thing at a time. The concept behind it seems sound from what I've read, but I'm not going to be much help since I haven't read Negima and don't really plan to in the near future. |
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2008-07-20, 23:29 | Link #2897 | ||
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00"
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That's because the Cards were an ingenious method of combining eastern Ofuda magic with traditional western. Clow's thinking and Ken Akamatsu matched at this point, but the spell card system actually predated Negima; I developed it during CCS, for one of my OCs. Quote:
Now if only I knew what to improve it on really; all I have is ideas for future patches. So far, the system kind of favors burst mages a lot; I'm trying to tweak the system so that other slower deck archetypes can come in. However, Control decks work very well for this system due to the fast counterspells a card mage can have. Another point would be to include maybe a mana system so that I can add even more varied of strat, while restricting the type of magic cards the mage can have. But I don't want a mage with land cards floating all around them; its kind of... weird.
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2008-07-21, 05:25 | Link #2898 | ||||
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Age: 36
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I'm surprised nobody commented on the big red Relic floating on front of Keroko on her Pactio card.
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So her being exiled because she allied with the Demons was part of a greater plan? Quote:
It's the problem of wanting to make a character related to the most popular girl of the show: It's been done to death so many times its like an automatic Sue label. It's scary how much it actually computes. Quote:
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2008-07-21, 05:55 | Link #2899 |
RUN, YOU FOOLS!
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Formerly Iwakawa base and Chaldea. Now Teyvat, the Astral Express & the Outpost
Age: 44
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You know. I am thinking that Fate MAY not make a big deal of it. She is a clone of Alicia, sure. But the hidden sibling part may have worked IF she has both Alicia's memories AND personality, like a Ghola from the Dune books.
Sadly, or rather fortunately, it's not the case. And the most one could hope from a "Fate, I am YOUR father" scene would be a "lolwut? Yeah, right, whatever..." kind of reaction from Fate. She has grown up used to the idea and mindset that she is Fate, NOT Alicia, and that's good enough for her. However, I do agree that the "Fate's distant relative" card has been played way too much, to the point that it become as expected as Ryu throwing fireballs at you. |
2008-07-21, 06:24 | Link #2900 |
Adeptus Animus
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Age: 36
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Comparing Keroko's pactio to the other pactio's, I found one or two minor errors, here's the new, fixed version:
Spoiler for Keroko's pactio:
For people who are going to make pactio cards, note that the title needs to be all-caps. |
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