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Though very subtle, that person is truely more evil and cold than I can ever be... And techincally, I'm suppose to be busy, I've sacrificed my final year project to be doing this Quote:
I support that bring back from the dead and turn evil scenario... Only because she has to be dead first
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2007-09-21, 13:30 | Link #3043 | |
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2007-09-21, 15:19 | Link #3044 | ||
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Whew was worried it might be me. But having Flare in my name clearly would absovle me of being anyone cold . Just to avoid being off topic. Fanfics are great! In terms of careers...maybe they *really* like their jobs? Personally never happened to me but hey anything can happen.
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2007-09-21, 20:56 | Link #3045 | |
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2007-09-22, 09:39 | Link #3047 | |
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Given their career progression, when they reach the age of Satashi's Vivio story, they'd be around 29-30ish. 20 years of service ... them being a little faster than average ... they'd be either a Colonel or a Brigadier. Well, they won't be having much fun - neither of them seem like the paperwork type. To continue the joke, Hayate must be a General by then. |
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2007-09-22, 10:05 | Link #3048 | ||
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Join Date: May 2007
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Although considering how badly shafted Hayate has been in StrikerS, it seems that it starts pretty early at Lt. Colonel |
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2007-09-22, 11:36 | Link #3049 |
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Logically, though, they won't all progress like that. Nanoha/Fate/Hayate/Chrono are all prodigies in their field, whereas the forwards are just highly skilled. Gotta remember that, for example, Lutecia had to have almost the entire forward team plus vita to capture her, yet Fate at age 9 probably could have done it by herself if she was serious. Hayate is a rare ability user, and got promoted faster than the rest (as was started in StrikerS)
So I think the forwards will be around what the Ace's rank is right now when they are 30-ish, if they even do that, and depending on their career choices. Example: Tia can out rank Nanoha if she progressed along the line of enforcer, because Nanoha has her rank and position. the only way Nanoha can military rank up is if she goes out and does something else to deserve it. If she stays a teacher at section six, she will not get promoted. Such as Hayate out ranking Nanoha/Fate because she wanted to lead a unit, whereas the other two chose seperate paths ( enforcer/Instructor) Hayate progressed forward to get promoted, whereas Nanoha and Fate got what they wanted and stayed with it. Also, in 6th Division, please remember that I try to make it as realistic as possible. Look at the forwards, why are they there? Subaru/Tia were drafted by Nanoha. Elio/Caro were drafted by Fate. Nanoha/Fate/the Knights were drafted by Hayate. If Subaru wants to be an instructor like Nanoha, she would have to leave 6th Divison. if Tia wanted to be in the air force, she would also leave. Leave being request for transfer to another unit to progress towards their goals. So disregarding their rank, they may not even be there anymore ^.~
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2007-09-22, 11:58 | Link #3050 |
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Some good points there Satashi..
It does depend a lot on what they want to do.. a promotion may help or hinder their ambitions (usually help but as I mentioned before, there's a point where you are (usually) no longer are involved in field duties) In honour of Keroko-chan day, here's my conrtibution to the madness (reposted from the OC thread).. Prior knowledge of the characters not needed, although it can help a little Enjoy Spoiler for Uh oh....:
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2007-09-22, 23:26 | Link #3052 |
I eat your Cookiez!
Join Date: Mar 2007
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i just did read the three 6th Division Book I / II / III fanfics straight in 2 days w/o break and i'm amazed
there ARE people with enough Talent for proffesional work out there i enjoyed it a lot and i even was absent from some chores in MMO's to finish it have yet to read the other fanfics from Satashi ( especially the first-person start of each chapter was quite a change of scenary. all in all, i give the story a 8 out of 10. there were some things i didn't like much, but nothing all too major. i though you'd give subaru and tia a bit more screen time for their relationship, but, after all, they're not the main leads, so it was nothing but keeping the hope up ) so. i'll head to bed after not sleeping for almost 48 hours. keep the good work up |
2007-09-23, 22:48 | Link #3054 | |
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XD glad you liked it ^^ Tia and Subaru have a little more time, but it's still primarily Fate/Nanoha.[shamless self plug] check out Tourmaline Feelings if you want a Tia/Subaru story. [/end plug] I may try my hands at a Caro/Elio fic one of these days....... and yeah, world needs more Yuunohas
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2007-09-24, 03:02 | Link #3057 |
I eat your Cookiez!
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i'll take a break before reading the next fanfic, i got scolded like hell for being absent from chores XD''
another review to the 6th division: believe it or know i'd knew about 90% of the charackters/qoutes you'd make and it was quite funny. Nanoha saying "Beam me up scotty" was priceless. some charackters were chosen carefully, some were a bit random, such as Haseo. he's a emo, psychotic, "i WILL HAVE MY REVENGE GOOOAH" charackter and was hard to imagine as Waiter, lol and how i laughed when i saw Kha! i was like "wtf.. *looks up to animesuki* it's he.. LOL, it's really he!" i just happen to think, you used the whole .hack// system a bit too much. datatrain, kitee, tri-edge, i've read in a review about balmung etc i definitly need to find my fanfiction.net password before i'll spamm this thread xD as for me, not being english native, nor having any english classes on school, i had some times a little problem understanding the stuff but it was all in all really newb friendly written. from the start, i just had to think for a second, what you meant with "mou" and "che" or "shush" till i spoke they out loudly a few times, and someone in teamspeak asked me if i used some drugs. XD edit1: just to mention it before i got to work i personally think the actual show would be way more popular when tey used your fanfic as actual script. ( ok, more popular among the legion obviously *ehem* ) edit2: i'd like a bit less .hack// it seems they invaded nanoha-versum quite a bit. they need definitly a hit on the head. ( just don't let haseo turn intio some black-armor scyth wielding mob XD'' ) |
2007-09-24, 23:16 | Link #3059 | |
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Join Date: Apr 2007
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It's good to see that for once you're willing to rest early ^^ Good night, Satashi-san ^^
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2007-09-24, 23:21 | Link #3060 |
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Hmm... haven't had updates on my official Nanoverse fanfic (my Lyrical of Time saga is yet to continue) but I'm thinking of doing one on the canon characters. I can't reveal the details here yet, but right now my mind keeps seeing Vivio. So....
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