Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[ranran]

Hey guys, I've been around this thread since 2009 or so, but I've just decided to come out from hiding . Nice to meet you~

Anyway, I have this idea of making a fanfic that explores the Navy section of the TSAB with Fate as the main character, but I'm stumped on the details for it. I want to make it as close to canon as possible, so other than Nanohawiki is there anywhere else I can use for references? sorry, noob here ><

And another question is regarding Verossa. Since he's an inspector, is there any particular squad in TSAB he belongs to? He doesn't belong to the Saint Church does he?

Sorry for the questions, I usually write AU's that's why I'm totally stumped here

Edit: Page claim for...newbie? 8DD

[spawnofthejudge]

Originally Posted by ranran

Sorry for the questions, I usually write AU's that's why I'm totally stumped here

No being sorry for asking questions! Not when there's a fic at the end of the tunnel!

Various theories are posited around here in the forums, since there's a lot about the structure and basic rhythm of the TSAB (how they do things, what regulations are, etc.) that we don't know. So sometimes asking direct questions here can get you a debate rather than an answer .

Unfortunately, I don't really know of any English-language reference other than the Nanoha-wiki, and even that tends to be sparser than I would prefer.

...What kinds of AUs have you written? Any for Nanoha?

[mega1987]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Red 1-35

Red 36

Red 37

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Red 38:

"We've got a problem." Lina's voice was heard by all of them. "Seems that some rather strong Mazoku are heading our way."

"They wouldn't happen to have blue cloaks and charging right at us, would they?" Signum shot back to her.

"Probably."

"Swell." Signum muttered as she narrowed her eyes at the approaching figure. "You are?"

A large sword came out from the right sleeve of her soon-to-be opponent. "You can call me Saber."

Signum blinked a few times. "Where I'm from, that's a fictional character's name. Please tell me that you're not blonde with an incredibly flat chest."

"HOW DID YOU KNOW!?!" The Mazoku bellowed at her as it staggered back, as if struck.

Signum sweat-dropped slightly. "...I was kidding." Still, it would be best to end this now. "Astral Vine!" Snapping her sword up as it glowed slightly, she rushed forward and slashed at her opponent. Signum's eyes widened as Saber blocked the attack with the sword it was using, before throwing its cloak away, revealing a fairly muscular and green haired man grinning at her.

"As was I." Putting some force into his arms, Signum found herself pushed back in midair. "Although, I could take that form if it would make it easier for you to stomach a loss."

Signum shook her head. "I would rather you not, after all, if you were her, you would end up being tentacle raped in hundreds of badly drawn fancomics."

Saber sweat-dropped at that. "I have no idea what you're talking about." He shook his sword and pointed it at her. "But I would rather you start fighting and stop yapping." A moment later, Signum seemed to disappear, only to reappear in front of him, her sword clashing against his. "Impressive!" He could see her muscles and feel her magic straining against him. "The last time I got to fight, this wasn't nearly as much... FUN!"

"AHHNGH!" Signum yelled as she was tossed back by a burst of strength from the Mazoku. As she slid across the ground, her eyes widened as he rushed in, swinging his sword down, gripping Laevantein with both hands, she swung up to meet his one-handed swing downwards. The resulting shockwave from their swords clashing destroyed every Mazoku in a twenty meter radius.

"Not bad!" He let out a yell as he seemed to disappear, a moment later, he re-appeared, slamming his sword against hers before a knee slammed into her stomach, or tried to. "Interesting." He grinned as she slid against the soft ground. "Instantaneous barriers, huh?" This was starting to become fun and interesting.

Signum stared as he held his sword straight into the air. A moment later lightning crackled around the blade as he swung at her head. Swinging Laevantein in its path, Signum let out a groan of pain as the lightning crashed from his sword through Laevantein and onto her body, sending her crashing to the ground in a crackling, twitching heap.

"Is that all?" Saber said as he walked forward. "I expected more from you." The tip of his blade dragged on the ground as he narrowed his eyes. "Or maybe I thought you were far better than you were." Growling, he rushed forward and swung his sword down, only to miss as Signum rolled out of the way and swung her weapon back at him. His eyes widened as it elongated and spiraled around her before the tip seemed to disappear under the ground, before reappearing under his feet and aiming straight at his face.

Signum grunted and stared as she saw the results of that attack.

"Is that all?" He smirked at her as he held the tip of the blade in his hands. "A metal sword, even one that's magical, cannot hurt me the same way that you hurt those low level peons." He seemed to disappear before reappearing right in front of Signum and swinging down, shattering her weapon near the hilt and kicking her away. "Pathetic, really, I had expected more from you. Or maybe I thought too highly of your skills." He smirked as she took to the air. "That won't save you."

Signum's eyes widened as he appeared next to her, an open palm just under her breasts as he smirked at her. "Die." A moment later, searing hot pain erupted from her side as a blast tore a hole through her body and sent her to the ground in a spray of blood. "Pathetic, really." He watched her with narrowed eyes as she bled and gripped at her right side with her left hand. "To think that you were someone that my master thought was strong. Oh well, better to overestimate someone so pathetic than underestimate someone who's actually a threat."

Saber was about to turn away when a burst of fire caught his attention. Turning to look at Signum, he blinked as she was engulfed in fire, before she disappeared. "What the, AHHH!" He screamed as a slashing sensation cut at his back, turning around, he stared at Signum, who was panting slightly while holding her damaged side with her left hand and in her right hand... "I broke that weapon!"

"If I didn't learn a trick or two from Testarossa and Bardiche, I couldn't call myself competent." Signum pulled her hand away from her side to reveal that while her hand and side were covered in blood, the skin was no longer bleeding profusely.

"What the?"

"I had to cauterize the wound, otherwise I would have bled to death." Signum narrowed her eyes as he chuckled at her and pointed his sword at her again.

"Even if you can fix your weapon and your side like that, I'll make sure you never get up with my next move."

Grimacing, Signum held her sword to the side and panted softly. If he hit her with an attack like that again, she probably would die, as it was, she was having trouble not passing out. "I was going to save this for Shabranigdo, but I have no choice, Laevantein!"

"Ja!"

"Do it!"

"Böe-Modus."

Saber's eyes widened as Signum was engulfed in a bright light. When it was over, she swung her sword down and he stared at the new look to her body. Laevantein had gotten covered in some sort of silver-tinted metal, and her body's armor looked more metallic, however... "Pink and black coloring?"

"My master and sister," she really wasn't sure what her relationship with Hayate was, considering that Hayate had basically adopted her and the rest of the knights and given them her last name, "thought that pink and black flames were neat."

Saber had to nod at that, the pink on the bottom with black on top done in such a way that made it look like flames was neat. "Fine, but now you can die while looking 'neat'!" He yelled as he rushed forward, his sword crackling with lightning as he swung at Signum's weakened side.

What happened next wasn't something that he could explain.

As his sword got closer, a powerful barrier popped up, stopping his sword cold. Before he could react, Signum stabbed her sword straight into his chest and slashed outwards, lobbing off his right arm and tearing a hole in his side. As he started to fall to the ground, Saber looked up at Signum's impassive gaze. "But, you were... Wounded, how..."

Signum cut him off with a single slash, carving through his body and causing his body to fall apart in a moment. "Even if you break my weapon, cut up my body and pin me to the ground like an insect, I will never submit to someone like you."

Touching down on the ground, she grimaced at how badly her side was killing her. Still, she couldn't let anyone down. Looking around, she saw several Mazoku rushing towards her. A small grin appeared on her face. "Today is a good day to die... For you!" Letting out a yell, she rushed forward to deal with the Mazoku around her.

*Insert BGM: Ash to Ash*

I know... It's Lamia's BGM... who happens to be Signum's Expy... and it's also works the other way around.

Don't tell me you're gonna pull a Lamia on Signum... (near death, got brainwashed, fights her own comrade... got freed by another comrade, suffers from a heroic BSOD for a while, bounce back into the battlefield with her friends...)

I say we put some BGM shout out...
Steel Beowulf for Vita, Platinum Lucifer for Nanoha, etc... XD

[ranran]

Originally Posted by spawnofthejudge

No being sorry for asking questions! Not when there's a fic at the end of the tunnel!

Various theories are posited around here in the forums, since there's a lot about the structure and basic rhythm of the TSAB (how they do things, what regulations are, etc.) that we don't know. So sometimes asking direct questions here can get you a debate rather than an answer .

lol yeah, I noticed xDD. I think it'd prolly be better if I put it down in writing and have you all comment on it 8DD *went to read theories 20ish pages ago*

...What kinds of AUs have you written? Any for Nanoha?

Well, I haven't posted it up at fanfiction.net yet, but I've written a few...mostly romance though and err you guys prolly wont like it ><.

[spawnofthejudge]

Originally Posted by ranran

lol yeah, I noticed xDD. I think it'd prolly be better if I put it down in writing and have you all comment on it 8DD *went to read theories 20ish pages ago*

We are a decent source of feedback, I think.

Originally Posted by ranran

Well, I haven't posted it up at fanfiction.net yet, but I've written a few...mostly romance though and err you guys prolly wont like it ><.

Oh? Why not?

[ranran]

Originally Posted by spawnofthejudge

We are a decent source of feedback, I think.

more than decent

Oh? Why not?

well, coz its N/F? oh, and Subaru/Teana...but I'm trying to break free and explore other genres and couples...so yeah

[spawnofthejudge]

Originally Posted by ranran

well, coz its N/F? oh, and Subaru/Teana...but I'm trying to break free and explore other genres and couples...so yeah

Just 'cause a fic is NanoFate doesn't mean we hate it. This thread is generally only vicious at the people who spout crap about how NanoFate is the only way to write in Nanoha and that breaking them up would be a travesty etc etc.

We'll read NanoFate and even like it. We just advocate that shipping wars are tiresome and people can ship whoever they damn well please.

[ranran]

Originally Posted by spawnofthejudge

Just 'cause a fic is NanoFate doesn't mean we hate it. This thread is generally only vicious at the people who spout crap about how NanoFate is the only way to write in Nanoha and that breaking them up would be a travesty etc etc.

We'll read NanoFate and even like it. We just advocate that shipping wars are tiresome and people can ship whoever they damn well please.

Lol glad to hear that, was kinda worried there for a second xD

Now I can concentrate on whipping up something eligible to read, been stuck with a writer's block

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by ranran

Now I can concentrate on whipping up something eligible to read, been stuck with a writer's block

*Muse looks in, drops block on you, runs away with your muse, eating it.*

DAMMIT! STOP THAT!

*runs after muse*

[ranran]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

*Muse looks in, drops block on you, runs away with your muse, eating it.*

DAMMIT! STOP THAT!

*runs after muse*

Noooooooo I need my muuuuuseeeee *runs to follow after*

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by ranran

Noooooooo I need my muuuuuseeeee *runs to follow after*

*Gets your muse back, thankfully in one piece, but rather traumatized.*

My muse ate your muse's clothing.

[Shigan]

Originally Posted by ranran

well, coz its N/F? oh, and Subaru/Teana...but I'm trying to break free and explore other genres and couples...so yeah

I don't think those guys mind NanoFate (I certainly don't), I wrote one which nearly killed me and no one tried to crucify me for posting it here (Could of course be that they spent the nights punching nails into Shigan-voodoo dolls thou...).

But yeh, one-true-pairing crusaders are an annoying lot. -_-

[ranran]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

*Gets your muse back, thankfully in one piece, but rather traumatized.*

My muse ate your muse's clothing.

No wonder its nekkid *quickly puts in pocket*

Originally Posted by Shigan

I don't think those guys mind NanoFate (I certainly don't), I wrote one which nearly killed me and no one tried to crucify me for posting it here (Could of course be that they spent the nights punching nails into Shigan-voodoo dolls thou...).

But yeh, one-true-pairing crusaders are an annoying lot. -_-

lol (can I have one of those voodoo dolls? 8D) and yeah, I agree with you there. I've never seen a fandom with shipping wars as fierce as nanoha before

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by ranran

lol (can I have one of those voodoo dolls? 8D) and yeah, I agree with you there. I've never seen a fandom with shipping wars as fierce as nanoha before

Ranma 1/2

*Shudder*

There are characters that are STILL hated because of the shipping wars...

And that series ended in the early to mid 90s.

[NTFTH]

Is it okay to post Nanoha crossovers on this thread or is there a separate one for crossovers like on FF.net?(I had other questions but they were conveniently asked more or less by a previous poster XD)
Sorry if this is a stupid question I've only been on this website for a day or two and haven't really looked through this thread much.

[spawnofthejudge]

Originally Posted by NTFTH

Is it okay to post Nanoha crossovers on this thread or is there a separate one for crossovers like on FF.net?(I had other questions but they were conveniently asked more or less by a previous poster XD)
Sorry if this is a stupid question I've only been on this website for a day or two and haven't really looked through this thread much.

Considering that Nanya01 is posting a long term Slayers crossover, you'll be fine here.

What's it with?

ETA: For the record: If there's a chance we'll be getting a fic out of answering a question, there are no stupid questions. Period.

[NTFTH]

^ It's going to be a crossover with Naruto, I haven't really wrote much so far besides what I plan on doing since I keep getting distracted by another fic I'm working on.

[Shigan]

Originally Posted by NTFTH

^ It's going to be a crossover with Naruto, I haven't really wrote much so far besides what I plan on doing since I keep getting distracted by another fic I'm working on.

...I could totally live with having Fate and Sexy-no-Jutsu in the same universe. ^^

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by spawnofthejudge

Considering that Nanya01 is posting a long term Slayers crossover, you'll be fine here.

What's it with?

ETA: For the record: If there's a chance we'll be getting a fic out of answering a question, there are no stupid questions. Period.

There's only 100 chapters up on FF.Net...

....

I'll shut up now...

[ranran]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Ranma 1/2

*Shudder*

There are characters that are STILL hated because of the shipping wars...

And that series ended in the early to mid 90s.

They're really ruining a great series Who're the character that's still hated until now? Thought it all had gone down.

Originally Posted by Shigan

...I could totally live with having Fate and Sexy-no-Jutsu in the same universe. ^^

Amen to that.