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2012-07-23, 03:57 | Link #34582 |
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Yeah, what I meant is nobody used it yet, so you're safe
-------- "He is stranger to the word 'love', all he had is youthful passion and now it's gone too. Why do you think he act so weird? He has nothing left on him, that is. I'm sure you will understand, now or later" - Takatoshi Tsuda "Just because I scored with a girl or two doesn't diminish the fact that I'm just a sore loser" - Taizou Motemitsu
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2012-07-23, 05:04 | Link #34586 |
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Motemitsu say just because he's not a virgin doesn't mean he's a real man. And in the process, he already lose his innocence and thus he can't be longer act like a carefree teen he should be.
Tsuda is telling that to his FWB, who is just as distraught as Motemitsu himself. It's a matter of identity crisis than anything else. No lemon though so I'd stay with T rating despite the kinky theme :3
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2012-07-23, 05:12 | Link #34588 |
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No, it's not about ethics either.
Sex is just one part of the problem, not entirely. There's also losing one's dream and unable to fulfill his assigned role. In case of "he bang some girls", he's confused with the emptiness after he done the deed (the lack of required emotional attachment and support). He's a second year student, so Ichika & co learn from it when the problem is solved.
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2012-07-23, 05:18 | Link #34589 |
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So he realized he wasn't really a pervert but just someone really lonely. Then because he found his acts as both unnaceptable to himself and to society he's ostracizing himself by subconscious self-depreciation. Sounds about right for a lost teen.
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2012-07-23, 05:21 | Link #34590 |
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Ah yes, pretty much what I meant. In a way of throwing dog a bone, he managed to reconcile with his 'friend' and doing seemingly impossible achievement of defeating Tatenashi (its 2 on 1 match but still)
Now I need the choice of 'friend' in question, but I.S. cast has a shortage of girl that fill the qualification :|
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2012-07-23, 05:57 | Link #34593 |
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Very good, very good.
So would Laura and Gentarou quarrel due to difference in choice of tactics? EDIT: OMFG I suddenly imagined Clarissa visiting Japan to catch a glimpse of the guy who caught Chifuyu's heart. And the first person she bumps into the airport is Gentarou. Who embodies all of the standard shonen hero characters in the flesh. D: Or is Clarissa strictly into bishonens from shoujo? hmmm.... |
2012-07-23, 06:13 | Link #34596 |
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No problem with that, just remember there's a(n admittedly thin) line between superbly attractive and being a black hole sue.
Spoiler for Uhh.... context relevant:
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2012-07-23, 07:22 | Link #34598 |
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No, not only the story, the character themselves too. How many are drawn to him, how strong, how they behave around him, what's the reason, all determine this parameter.
For example, Kanzashi having crush on him is understandable. However your idea of Clarissa visiting for seeing him with her own eyes, if I have to be blunt, that's really absurd. I'd just say be careful with choices of character interaction, as well as spotlight and development
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2012-07-23, 07:30 | Link #34599 |
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Clarissa originally was interested in Chifuyu's type of guy. Because let's face it. Knowing Chifuyu the valkyrie goddess, what kind of guy would attract her? Normally it would be the other way around. Well it was just a passing thought but I just wanted to at least say my piece on it.
How much of a facepalm moment is it if a girl walks into a guy's room and tells him that she's pregnant with his baby. Then it is promptly corrected that the actual guy was the one in the next room whom they both barely knew. The act was drunken so memory could be hazy. :| |
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