2012-07-24, 08:21 | Link #34643 |
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I declared quote war.
"I will be kind and let you go home. I've already found a way. All you need to do is step through this door, without a word to anyone. Neither to the friends you've made or to the person who has become more to you."--Tabane Shinonono. |
2012-07-24, 08:43 | Link #34649 |
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Join Date: Nov 2011
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I was asking about the possibility of a fic where the story is steered away from IS for awhile except for passing mention. Then it starts drawing in the protag into the conspiracy concerning. Sort of like a side-story I guess.
"Gah! Too much Katakana!"--Gentarou, on the explanation of IS |
2012-07-24, 08:46 | Link #34650 |
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That's synchronicity The IS is mentioned as the reason St Lucia is near populated by only females. The closer he gets to Charles/Charlotte, the more weird things he finds out about the corporation.
"Why does it matter if I'm injured? Aria's the one who's going to succeed the Sashiki's, not me. She's not hurt so there shouldn't be a problem." - Saito Sarashiki.
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2012-07-24, 08:54 | Link #34651 |
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The idea was another xover. A boy genius goes to Japan for a normal highschool experience. Just so happens he's a genius and is accepted into a prestigious highschool. One that Ran attends when she heard Ichika signed up for it.
One day, a student comes across an internet virus floating around the net. It posts a challenge and if you can't solve the puzzle then it takes all your data. It also multiplies by taking the contacts of the last user and sends copies of itself to those on the address book. The boy solves the puzzle and effectively routes the whole strain. At that time Tabane gets an e-mail from an anonymous person with the subject being a little prank she did before she started researching the IS. It bore the message: "Good game. End of demonstration." ----------------------------------- "What's wrong with Chifu-chan? You didn't like Chi-chan, nor did you like Chifuyu. And I think Chifuyu-sensei would be a bit too stiff for buds right?"--Gentarou about to be served a sandwhich, not the sexist kind. |
2012-07-24, 08:57 | Link #34652 | |
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OH GOD THE IRONY
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2012-07-24, 09:04 | Link #34654 |
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"The truth of this universe is very simple.
In this dark world, those who dare to dream walk towards the light. But what is at the end of the light? When they reach the end, they'll wake up from their dream. What await is Horror and despair That's why.... We need stripped panties! The uniformity of the strips represent harmony. With harmony, everybody work towards a single goal: A bright future where everybody is happy. With every light, the world become brighter and if everybody hold up a candle in this dark world, the darkness will turn into light of happiness and there is no need to go towards the Light of Truth because..... Paradise is right here. that's why... STRIPPED PANTIES WILL SAVE THIS WORLD! WE NEED MORE STRIPPED PANTIES! BUT! your mother like lace and your daughter like ribbon.... I AM IN DESPAIR! WHY! Nemo! Go get stripped panties for your sister!" "Father..... I can't. Too much moe will cause moe critical..... the earth....no THE UNIVERSE will explode if there is to much moe in this world..... don't forget: Zettai Ryouiki. Right now, she(sister) has too much tsundere traits.... I can't give her anymore moe without causing the world to implode with MOE energy!" "If that is the case! I shall wear stripped boxer!"
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2012-07-24, 09:10 | Link #34656 |
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Can we stop the quote war? Most of the quotes I have are spoilers.
Anyway, foreshadowing isn;t hard. Just make sure to mention it off-hand. For example: A girl pocketing a tissue with your blood sample on it but you only mention it in one phrase.
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2012-07-24, 09:38 | Link #34659 |
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@eras: And I suddenly imagine a character breaking the 4th wall as to reveal when the foreshadowing to the plot twist occured. =))
----- Gentarou: Yo, Chifu-cha- *smacked* Chifuyu: Sit down. Gentarou: That huuuuuurts! That really hurt Chifu-chan! You did this! Fix it! Chifuyu: You're a man. Suck it up. Gentarou: Man or woman, it still hurts. Chifuyu: Sit down or you get another one. Gentarou: Chifu-chaaaaaaan T_T Chifuyu: ... Fine, let me see. girl A: Kya! Chifuyu-sama is taking care of his bump! girl B: Ah! Chifuyu-sama I fell off my chair, please check the bump on my bot- girl C: I scrapped my knee Chifuyu-sama please make it better by ki- girl D: I have a terminal disease! Please stay by my side alwa- Chifuyu: CUT IT OUT! |
2012-07-24, 09:41 | Link #34660 |
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Not really. I love making blatant foreshadowing (Kazuma's blood drying really fast and M commenting the last time she smelled that was when she slashed herself) just to see if anyone can figure it out.
The most important thing in foreshadowing is to make sure it's there but just enough that no one can see it too well.
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