Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Tiresias]

If Sette ever get out of jail, which occupation will she most likely choose: Bureau grunt, mercenary, or maybe something else?

[Koveras Alvane]

Originally Posted by Tiresias

If Sette ever get out of jail, which occupation will she most likely choose: Bureau grunt, mercenary, or maybe something else?

Whatever Tre would ask her to do.

[Crono_Cross]

Okay, Been thinking long and hard about this fic, it's still a little imperfect since I kinda sorta suck at fanfics.

This is the Pilot/Prologue Chapter for my first nanoha fic.

Read before Reading: Title of Story is only a sample,m is open to any suggestions. If it's fine let me know. Also Chapters won't come in that much since it took me a month and a half just to get this part dealt with.

Spoiler for Child of Jenova Chapter 0:

The incident known as the Jail Scaglietti Incident is very well known within Mid-Childa and the Dimensions.
It brought alot of things to light including the Combat Cyborgs, Project Fate. And even the Lost Logia known as;

The Saint's Cradle.

However, what no one knew was that a even greater threat was still around in the shape a secret organization.
This Group has been watching the events around the Precia Testarossa and the JS Incidents.

The Leader of this group stole information from several mage's including DNA samples and Device data from them for his new plan.

He calls this project 'Child of Jenova'

This 'Child' will be able to defy all Logic and understanding. it's power alone can hold back Dimensional currents and even Defy the Imaginary Space which is said to make all Magic useless.
With the use of a Lost Logia the creation of the 'Child of Jenova' has progressed even greater than any Cloning method used the Project F.

The Group was soon named after the project; Jenova.

Jenova believes that this 'Super' Artificial Mage can go above even SSS Rank to heights that rivals that of the Gods.

This Radical group will use this Clone to bend all dimensions to their knees.

But what if the Clone is not what they expected?

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A Figure stood in orbit looking over Unadministered Planet 50, Pop.1.5million. the Target for today's demonstration. Lifting up it's strange looking Device the voice said "Lets go, Ultima." the voice was that of a Young man.
The Device toned out; "937 747"{Yes Sir} it used numbers to talk making sound very strange, but the Figure understood it.

"Then let us begin: Initiate Planet Killer."
"78263 29"{stand by}

He lifted the Staff and a Sun-set yellow colored Mid-childa style Magic Circle appeared below him and behind, it's mass covered the whole side of the planet, he could hear the sirens from all the way down thanks to his Magic.

"Are you ready Ultima?"
"937"{yes}
"Fire."

"43553473"{Hellfire}
Suddenly all round the figure thousands of magic orbs that were a mixture of yellow, pink and white appeared and spanned for thousands of feet around him.
Silence ensued for the moment as if the Figure was rethinking this.

But all hesitation vanished, "Shoot."

"3473"{fire}

In a spectacular display of Magic, thousands of orbs flew down towards the planet. When they hit, the Figure saw the massive explosions erupting on the surface.

He let his device down saying, "Mission complete."
"937 747"{yes sir}
His device turned into a oddly shaped pendant with a chain that had the colors pink yellow and white and he placed it in his pocket before looking over the charred planet before teleporting back to the dimensional ship that was far away from Ground Zero

Any Comments and questions are welcome.(just don't ask how these guys are related to Jail anyway)

I'm not hoping for much but I kinda-sorta have the plot figured, just some parts I'm not sure of yet.

[Tiresias]

Originally Posted by Koveras Alvane

Whatever Tre would ask her to do.

Heh, forgot about her. I guess being a Bureau grunt is out of the question then (she's not against it, since she wasn't mad at the N2R, but she won't suggest it either). Aside from being a mercenary, is there any suggestion?

[deltago]

Does anybody know the FanFiction about Anti-TSAB?

[WarpObscura]

Elaborate, please. When you say Anti-TSAB do you mean rebels, an evil counterpart, or...?

[deltago]

Oh, sorry. I was meaning to fight against TSAB's corruption and evilish intentions from 'outside' organization who has rightuous goal.
Simply, TSAB [Evil] vs. (---) [Good]
<Please, don't get me wrong. I was not meaning as Anti-Nanoha and others, who I want them to be in the 'good' side or being controlled by TSAB [Evil] innocently.>

Personally, I have some 'doubt' about this TSAB's doings.
[1] I don't see their way to achieve the peace by sending children to the battlefield, while adults are giving them orders from back 'safely'.
[2] Throught out the Nanoha series [Second & Third], every culprit was from TSAB itself. Creating the criminals and, ironically, arresting them.
[3] Their view about magical weapons as 'relatively clean and safe'[while they see Mass Weaponry as 'Evilish' tools that leading the World End]. But what about Nanoha's Blaster System [which could burnden the body], Starlight Breaker [...Too much!!], and Arc-en-ciel [which is similar (maybe dangerous than) as nuclear weaponry].
Also, because of such 'nonsense' idea about this theory, there is 'too'shortage of manpower available for TSAB's combat capability, leading to send the children to the battlefield.
[4] Does TSAB ever think, whose great weapon is 'Magic', its hostile force/enemy force could develop some way to cancelling their 'Magic' completely.
[5] Promoting the (too) young aged to be high-ranking officer.
[6] Non-lethal Mode. Don't get me wrong, I love this Non-lethal Mode...But, I personally, this leading to make every TSAB combatant to be 'naive'. Remember, TSAB is military organization who could face deadly threats. I don't think they have similar determination as regular soldiers in our world, such as the willing to kill the threat and take the burden of it.

...I might think too seriously over 'Anime' unnecessary...but I just want to point out that 'Is TSAB doing what it should be.'
If anybody has 'positive' comments about TSAB, please give to me so I could correct some of my misunderstandings.
@Again, I was expressing my 'negative' expression toward the organization, TSAB, itself. Not Nanoha and others! I like them! <Except Nanoha's reaction toward Teana during the Training Incident.>

[Craxuan]

Lol, okay, I'll try and answer your questions.

1) It is a culture in Mid-Childa; children can choose to work in the military as soon as they're old enough. You must be able to distinguish between our culture and theirs, to them having kids working at the age of 9 is normal. Even a person like Lindy expressed positive will to recruit Nanoha when she saw her potential, not knowing that it's 'abnormal' for people on Earth. And, saying that adults simply gave orders from behind the scene while the kids do hard labor is also wrong; you should know that when you watched StrikerS or Force.

2) That's just introducing reality into the series. When the world does not have an 'ultimate evil' or 'common enemy' to face against, always the evil will spawn from within the good itself. That's just how we humans live and survive. An ideal does not equal reality.

3) Clean as in it won't pollute the environment like the old physical weapons, such as if you use nuclear it'll cause radiation etc. Your examples are all wrong. Blaster System is experimental at that time and not meant to be used in battlefield, but Nanoha take matters to her own hands. Starlight Breaker is a spell she developed herself and is totally independent from TSAB. Arc-en-Ciel are on of the weapons built with the old war still fresh in mind (I believe not even 100 years), and after that it was just technological advancement. Study some of our real history for reference.

4) Not quite sure what you're talking about so I'll just guess-answer. It's like throwing stones as a weapon until you see someone else shooting arrows. Or seeing a new color. It's called the, 'you won't know until you know' phenomenon. =3

5) Again, refer above. Difference in culture.

6) Seriously, I have to facepalm for this question. Naive? Policeman has to shout out warning before shooting. I'd call that stupid since that'll just well, give them warning so they could run, but it was necessary. Non-Lethal Mode was the choice of 'warning' the TSAB adopted to follow through their ideals. They're simply trying to avoid being the guys who 'shoots first, then talk'. That'll be no different than ruling tyrannically with an iron grip.

Unfortunately I don't think you've thought this through seriously enough, but I don't know your age so there's a lot of things you can't fill with your current knowledge and logic. It is a good thing though, since you're asking questions. I'm not exactly praising the TSAB for their good either (All organizations are corrupt in some ways or another), just stating out facts so you'd understand.

[deltago]

Thank you for your reply and sharing your knowledge and thinking [especially about mentioning the culture, which is critical].

I guess it was not the topic I should to discuss?
<Currently, in the Japanese FanFiction, there are numerous FanFictions about Anti-TSAB, where I was influenced from much>
If anybody got some anger from this post, I want to say sorry to him/her.

[bhl88]

Originally Posted by deltago

Thank you for your reply and sharing your knowledge and thinking [especially about mentioning the culture, which is critical].

I guess it was not the topic I should to discuss?
<Currently, in the Japanese FanFiction, there are numerous FanFictions about Anti-TSAB, where I was influenced from much>
If anybody got some anger from this post, I want to say sorry to him/her.

XD not really significant to me anyway XD

[Tiresias]

Originally Posted by deltago

Personally, I have some 'doubt' about this TSAB's doings.

Don't we all?

I don't see their way to achieve the peace by sending children to the battlefield, while adults are giving them orders from back 'safely'.

Ah yes, the child soldier thing. Yeah, even with the whole 'Midchilda has different culture' thing I still have doubts - it's like indoctrinating them when young so they'll stay loyal . But it would be wrong to say that adults never fight - the grunts are adults, and there are also Zest's former team which were also comprised of adults.

Throught out the Nanoha series [Second & Third], every culprit was from TSAB itself. Creating the criminals and, ironically, arresting them.

When they're the only interdimensional government in the verse, where else would the villains be?

Well actually they can always try a resurgent Belkan Empire or something but Tsuzuki can't write military so any full-scale war will be cringeworthy to read/watch

Their view about magical weapons as 'relatively clean and safe'

The 'safe' bit is more that magic can be set to STUN (there's no canonical explanation on how, but fanfic writers have their own speculations).

And there's also arms control into play. Normal weapons can be operated by anyone with healthy fingers, arms and eyes, but magic attacks depends on mana capacity and few people have the power to demolish city blocks. Controlling them with a leash limiters is easier than having to constantly regulate weapons ownership and such.

Does TSAB ever think, whose great weapon is 'Magic', its hostile force/enemy force could develop some way to cancelling their 'Magic' completely.

They should. The technology predates the Bureau, as shown by the Saint's Cradle, and this generation also has first-hand experience of it.

Promoting the (too) young aged to be high-ranking officer.

A way of buying the loyalties of high-powered mages so they won't switch to less legal but more profitable jobs. But yeah, promotion with little regard to actual command skill and experience (19 years old colonel? Really?) is supremely stupid.

Non-lethal Mode. Don't get me wrong, I love this Non-lethal Mode...But, I personally, this leading to make every TSAB combatant to be 'naive'. Remember, TSAB is military organization who could face deadly threats. I don't think they have similar determination as regular soldiers in our world, such as the willing to kill the threat and take the burden of it.

You must consider that real-life militaries are constantly seeking ways to reduce collateral damage and avoid civilian casualties, including increasing the use of non-lethal weapons. It's less naivety and more not wanting bad press.

[Rising Dragon]

Season 2 did not have a Bureau-created enemy. Graham or anyone else in the Bureau did not create the Book of Darkness, nor did they find it and give it to Hayate. It was sheer providence that Graham located the Book's newest master after Clyde's death, and he wasn't acting maliciously to stop it--he was trying to prevent another series of deaths and catastrophes from occurring again the only way he knew how. No one had been able to stop the Book of Darkness without loss of life before that. No one.

As for the Bureau itself, we must remember that it's current structure with a ban on mass-based weaponry and using magic entirely is relatively new. They're bound to run into problems. Given the scope of the conflicts before the current era, it's entirely possible that whatever knowledge on pre-war days anti-magic armaments and technologies was lost and only now being rediscovered. Can't fault them for that--the Saint Unification War and the wars before that were utterly brutal.

For the ages of their younger recruits, they are teaching them responsible and effective ways of using their magic, partly due to that age is the best effective time for magical growth and development. Why not promote them as they deserve while they become more mature and responsible with their powers? Most people in real life in our society don't have that level of power and thus that level of responsibility to be trained, and no part of us biologically that's truly mature, so of course we don't have soldiers that young. Mid-Childa and the other magic-capable societies, however, do.

[Tiresias]

Originally Posted by Rising Dragon

Why not promote them as they deserve while they become more mature and responsible with their powers?

Because military promotions has little to do with individual powers and more with leadership abilities. What is taken into consideration for promoting a person is not his ability to kill 100 people but to organize and command 100 people, and magic powers has nothing to do with that (unless she has related spells, but Hayate's magic are more known for their artillery values).

No, I don't say that they should not reward those who had distinguished themselves, I'm just saying that promotion is the wrong response. What should be given for individual achievement which has nothing to do with leadership or organization are awards and decorations - ribbons, medals, bonus pay etc.

Case in point: A private was a lone survivor of an ambush. He then somehow proceed to mow down an entire battalion alone. Is he awesome? You bet! Does this prove him as a leader? No.

Originally Posted by deltago

<Currently, in the Japanese FanFiction, there are numerous FanFictions about Anti-TSAB, where I was influenced from much>

Really? And here I thought the fans there would gobble everything Tsuzuki fed them Then again Betrayers was a japanese doujin...

Anyway, where are you bringing this train of question? Any fan fics in progress?

[WarpObscura]

Originally Posted by deltago

Thank you for your reply and sharing your knowledge and thinking [especially about mentioning the culture, which is critical].

I guess it was not the topic I should to discuss?
<Currently, in the Japanese FanFiction, there are numerous FanFictions about Anti-TSAB, where I was influenced from much>
If anybody got some anger from this post, I want to say sorry to him/her.

I'm interested in knowing more about the Japanese fanfic side of things. The disgrace that I am, I spend so much time on lao wai websites.

[Sunder the Gold]

Originally Posted by Tiresias

If Sette ever get out of jail, which occupation will she most likely choose: Bureau grunt, mercenary, or maybe something else?

Kindergarten teacher.

Originally Posted by Craxuan

1) It is a culture in Mid-Childa; children can choose to work in the military as soon as they're old enough. You must be able to distinguish between our culture and theirs, to them having kids working at the age of 9 is normal. Even a person like Lindy expressed positive will to recruit Nanoha when she saw her potential, not knowing that it's 'abnormal' for people on Earth. And, saying that adults simply gave orders from behind the scene while the kids do hard labor is also wrong; you should know that when you watched StrikerS or Force.

It's also worth noting that this special treatment is being extended to 9-year olds who are significantly more powerful than all but a rare few adults, and those adults are busy somewhere else.

What do you do with a child who can whup up on adults? Treat them like adults and give them some adult responsibilities.

Show them that you acknowledge how strong they are, but also that you expect them to be responsible with that strength.

This way, incredibly dangerous individuals grow up with reasonable expectations and manageable attitudes.

Originally Posted by Tiresias

Because military promotions has little to do with individual powers and more with leadership abilities.

*and stuff*

What Tiresias said.

[Nanya01]

StrikerS

Numbers 1-5

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Numbers 6:

"Hey, Nove," Nove turned to see a couple of people she hadn't seen in almost six months without a chaperon.

"Wendi! Dieci!" Nove ducked under a kick from punch from Subaru before doing a backflip and catching her sister in the chest. "Got'cha!"

Subaru grimaced, but nodded. "Dang, almost got you." At least she could take solace in the fact that she was stronger than Nove was, even if Nove could run circles around her if she tried hard enough. When Nove smirked, Subaru grinned and put the redhead in a headlock. "Hey, you guys." Subaru waved at Dieci and Wendi while Nove struggled to get free from the headlock.

Dieci laughed softly as she watched Nove try to escape from Subaru's headlock. "It's nice to see Nove having so much fun." When Nove yelled at her, she giggled. "Anyway, Nove, if you're done playing, Wendi and I were wondering if you'd like to come with us to meet up with Cinque later."

"How'd she get the day off from Hayate?" Nove asked as Subaru let go of the headlock. "I thought she was supposed to work for Hayate every day?"

Dieci scratched her cheek nervously. "Well, uh, it's not exactly that simple, apparently, mom, err, grandma, err..." She hung her head and her shoulders slumped helplessly. "I'm still not sure what to call her."

Subaru blinked at that. "Nanoha-san's mother? Isn't she your mother?"

Wendi sighed as Dieci blushed. "Technically, Lina is Dieci's grandmother and Nanoha's her mother. But it's too weird, and Dieci can't make up her mind if she should call Lina-san mother or grandmother yet." The Dragon cyborg shook her head and put Dieci in a headlock, causing the brown-haired girl to let out a squeak and flail her arms up and down. "I told you, didn't I? Just call her what you feel comfortable calling her." Wendi let go of the headlock and looked at Nove. "As for Cinque, Lina told Hayate that Cinque needed the day off, apparently. And Cinque apparently thinks that taking a day off is to spend the day babysitting Vivio and Arashi at the amusement park. Wanna come with?"

"Don't we all still need a chaperon?" Nove asked, and looked at Subaru, who shrugged at her. "You're a real help."

"Hey, my job is to rescue people and catch criminals, I don't pass judgements down." Subaru stuck her tongue out. "Speaking of which, I need to get going. Got to meet my new superior today."

"Later." Wendi said as she and Dieci waved Subaru off as she ran into the house to get dressed. "So, want to come with?"

Nove shrugged and turned to the house. "Hey, mom!"

"Yeah?" Quint, her hair still green, popped her head out of the kitchen window. "What's up, Nove?" The combination of her long hair and confused look made the older woman look like she was in her early twenties rather than her real age.

"Wendi and Dieci want me to go with them to the amusement park, is that okay, or are we still under house arrest?"

"Hang on," Wendi and Dieci stared as Quint jumped out of the kitchen window and did a roll as she touched the ground, before dusting herself off, "as for going to the amusement park, do you three have any money?"

Dieci looked at the window, and then at the front door and pointed at it with a shaky finger. "Um, why didn't you come out the door?"

Quint looked at the door and shrugged as she turned to look at them again. "Honestly, I don't know. Ever since my hair changed colors I've done some pretty weird things."

"Didn't Due do a bunch of weird stuff when Agito was bonded with her?" Nove asked no one in particular, getting a nod from Dieci and Wendi.

"Anyway, you can go without a chaperon, but," Quint narrowed her eyes at the three girls, "you aren't allowed to use your powers, outside of a Bureau agent requesting your help or an immediate threat to people's lives, understand?" All three nodded quickly and Quint grinned at them. "Good, I'll just go get some money and I'll be right back."

When Quint disappeared into the house, Wendi leaned in close to Nove. "Nove, your mom can be scary," Nove nodded and gulped slightly, "even if she has a great ass."

"Hey!" Nove whirled on Wendi, who was grinning. "Stop checking my mom out, you perv!"

Wendi chuckled at her. "What? Your mom's a total babe, ya know?"

Dieci just slapped her face and groaned. "Wendi, please stop talking about Quint like that, she's old enough to be all of our mothers." Dieci blinked and tilted her head. "Actually, in a way, isn't she our mother? I mean, her DNA was used to clone Subaru and Ginga, they're type Zero cyborgs and..." Dieci was suddenly tackled to the ground by Wendi. "Hmm?"

"No!" Wendi shook her head vigorously. "Nah uh, not listening, nope, she is NOT my mother at all."

Nove twitched before hanging her head. "Ugh... Wendi, you keep that up and I'll kick your ass all over the front yard."

Wendi got off of Dieci and pouted. "Oh, come on, it's not my fault that your mom is a looker."

"That's it!" Nove growled and jumped at Wendi, who yelped and rolled away, got up and started to run as Nove kicked up some dirt and chased after her. "Get back here!"

"No! You're just going to kick my butt."

"You'll be lucky if that's the only thing I kick!"

Sitting up, Dieci sighed as she watched Nove chase Wendi around the yard. "Those two never change." In a way, it was comforting, considering how things had changed so much from when they were working for the doctor. "...I wonder what happened to you, doctor." Dieci looked up into the sky. "Wherever you are, I hope things are going, EEEK!" Dieci's eyes widened, her hair stuck out and she jumped as something cold and damp touched the back of her neck. Spinning around, she gasped as Quint stood there with three cans with bits of ice sliding down the edges. "Wh, wh, what was that for?"

Quint giggled softly. "I'm sorry, I couldn't help myself, you were looking so serious there that I just wanted to tease you a little. You okay?" Dieci nodded, panting and Quint smiled as she watched Nove case Wendi around the yard. "So," Quint raised an eyebrow as Nove kicked Wendi in the butt before tackling her, "why is Nove chasing Wendi like that?"

"Wendi was teasing Nove about how good you look."

Quint blinked a few times at that, before smiling. "Well, that was nice of her." She blinked as Dieci suddenly fell over, her face crashing into the ground. "...Doesn't that hurt?"

Dieci just groaned and got back up. "How can you be so calm about this?" Quint just giggled at her. "What?"

"You'll understand one day, Dieci," Quint smiled and gave her a can, "it's just cola, but anyway, I don't care if someone thinks that I'm good looking, that makes me feel good," she winked at Dieci, who blushed and started to drink from her cola, "even if it's from someone as old as my daughter. Nove! Wendi, come on, you two, come get something to drink before you head out." She smiled as the two dusted themselves off and came over to get the sodas from her. "Here you, Nove, some money to get in and have some fun."

"Thanks, mom." Nove nodded as she pocketed the money and cracked the can open to take a drink.

"Oh, and Nove," Quint grinned at the younger girl, "if your friend wants to check out my ass, I might have to start wearing a bikini around here."

Quint fought the urge to laugh as Nove's eyes widened and she sprayed the soda out of her mouth, before doubling over and coughing, when she saw Wendi's grin and heard her giggling.

"What the hell, mom?!" Nove coughed a few more times as she stared at her mom like she had grown a second head and her skin had turn purple or something equally weird.

Quint just winked and turned around to go back inside. "Better get going before it gets too late."

Wendi continued to giggle as she watched Quint's ass sway with each step. "Lovely." She continued to giggle and even started drooling as she slowly raised her arms up, her free hand was twitching as if she wanted to grab Quint's rear end.

That lasted until she was slapped on the back of the head by both Nove and Dieci. "Oww! What the heck?!"

"Come on, you can perv out at the amusement park." Dieci rolled her eyes as she and Nove led Wendi out of the yard.

Spoiler for Comments:

After all that happened in StrikerS, I think that we can appreciate a funnier arc, no?

[biodude711]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

StrikerS

Numbers 1-5

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Numbers 6:

"Hey, Nove," Nove turned to see a couple of people she hadn't seen in almost six months without a chaperon.

"Wendi! Dieci!" Nove ducked under a kick from punch from Subaru before doing a backflip and catching her sister in the chest. "Got'cha!"

Subaru grimaced, but nodded. "Dang, almost got you." At least she could take solace in the fact that she was stronger than Nove was, even if Nove could run circles around her if she tried hard enough. When Nove smirked, Subaru grinned and put the redhead in a headlock. "Hey, you guys." Subaru waved at Dieci and Wendi while Nove struggled to get free from the headlock.

Dieci laughed softly as she watched Nove try to escape from Subaru's headlock. "It's nice to see Nove having so much fun." When Nove yelled at her, she giggled. "Anyway, Nove, if you're done playing, Wendi and I were wondering if you'd like to come with us to meet up with Cinque later."

"How'd she get the day off from Hayate?" Nove asked as Subaru let go of the headlock. "I thought she was supposed to work for Hayate every day?"

Dieci scratched her cheek nervously. "Well, uh, it's not exactly that simple, apparently, mom, err, grandma, err..." She hung her head and her shoulders slumped helplessly. "I'm still not sure what to call her."

Subaru blinked at that. "Nanoha-san's mother? Isn't she your mother?"

Wendi sighed as Dieci blushed. "Technically, Lina is Dieci's grandmother and Nanoha's her mother. But it's too weird, and Dieci can't make up her mind if she should call Lina-san mother or grandmother yet." The Dragon cyborg shook her head and put Dieci in a headlock, causing the brown-haired girl to let out a squeak and flail her arms up and down. "I told you, didn't I? Just call her what you feel comfortable calling her." Wendi let go of the headlock and looked at Nove. "As for Cinque, Lina told Hayate that Cinque needed the day off, apparently. And Cinque apparently thinks that taking a day off is to spend the day babysitting Vivio and Arashi at the amusement park. Wanna come with?"

"Don't we all still need a chaperon?" Nove asked, and looked at Subaru, who shrugged at her. "You're a real help."

"Hey, my job is to rescue people and catch criminals, I don't pass judgements down." Subaru stuck her tongue out. "Speaking of which, I need to get going. Got to meet my new superior today."

"Later." Wendi said as she and Dieci waved Subaru off as she ran into the house to get dressed. "So, want to come with?"

Nove shrugged and turned to the house. "Hey, mom!"

"Yeah?" Quint, her hair still green, popped her head out of the kitchen window. "What's up, Nove?" The combination of her long hair and confused look made the older woman look like she was in her early twenties rather than her real age.

"Wendi and Dieci want me to go with them to the amusement park, is that okay, or are we still under house arrest?"

"Hang on," Wendi and Dieci stared as Quint jumped out of the kitchen window and did a roll as she touched the ground, before dusting herself off, "as for going to the amusement park, do you three have any money?"

Dieci looked at the window, and then at the front door and pointed at it with a shaky finger. "Um, why didn't you come out the door?"

Quint looked at the door and shrugged as she turned to look at them again. "Honestly, I don't know. Ever since my hair changed colors I've done some pretty weird things."

"Didn't Due do a bunch of weird stuff when Agito was bonded with her?" Nove asked no one in particular, getting a nod from Dieci and Wendi.

"Anyway, you can go without a chaperon, but," Quint narrowed her eyes at the three girls, "you aren't allowed to use your powers, outside of a Bureau agent requesting your help or an immediate threat to people's lives, understand?" All three nodded quickly and Quint grinned at them. "Good, I'll just go get some money and I'll be right back."

When Quint disappeared into the house, Wendi leaned in close to Nove. "Nove, your mom can be scary," Nove nodded and gulped slightly, "even if she has a great ass."

"Hey!" Nove whirled on Wendi, who was grinning. "Stop checking my mom out, you perv!"

Wendi chuckled at her. "What? Your mom's a total babe, ya know?"

Dieci just slapped her face and groaned. "Wendi, please stop talking about Quint like that, she's old enough to be all of our mothers." Dieci blinked and tilted her head. "Actually, in a way, isn't she our mother? I mean, her DNA was used to clone Subaru and Ginga, they're type Zero cyborgs and..." Dieci was suddenly tackled to the ground by Wendi. "Hmm?"

"No!" Wendi shook her head vigorously. "Nah uh, not listening, nope, she is NOT my mother at all."

Nove twitched before hanging her head. "Ugh... Wendi, you keep that up and I'll kick your ass all over the front yard."

Wendi got off of Dieci and pouted. "Oh, come on, it's not my fault that your mom is a looker."

"That's it!" Nove growled and jumped at Wendi, who yelped and rolled away, got up and started to run as Nove kicked up some dirt and chased after her. "Get back here!"

"No! You're just going to kick my butt."

"You'll be lucky if that's the only thing I kick!"

Sitting up, Dieci sighed as she watched Nove chase Wendi around the yard. "Those two never change." In a way, it was comforting, considering how things had changed so much from when they were working for the doctor. "...I wonder what happened to you, doctor." Dieci looked up into the sky. "Wherever you are, I hope things are going, EEEK!" Dieci's eyes widened, her hair stuck out and she jumped as something cold and damp touched the back of her neck. Spinning around, she gasped as Quint stood there with three cans with bits of ice sliding down the edges. "Wh, wh, what was that for?"

Quint giggled softly. "I'm sorry, I couldn't help myself, you were looking so serious there that I just wanted to tease you a little. You okay?" Dieci nodded, panting and Quint smiled as she watched Nove case Wendi around the yard. "So," Quint raised an eyebrow as Nove kicked Wendi in the butt before tackling her, "why is Nove chasing Wendi like that?"

"Wendi was teasing Nove about how good you look."

Quint blinked a few times at that, before smiling. "Well, that was nice of her." She blinked as Dieci suddenly fell over, her face crashing into the ground. "...Doesn't that hurt?"

Dieci just groaned and got back up. "How can you be so calm about this?" Quint just giggled at her. "What?"

"You'll understand one day, Dieci," Quint smiled and gave her a can, "it's just cola, but anyway, I don't care if someone thinks that I'm good looking, that makes me feel good," she winked at Dieci, who blushed and started to drink from her cola, "even if it's from someone as old as my daughter. Nove! Wendi, come on, you two, come get something to drink before you head out." She smiled as the two dusted themselves off and came over to get the sodas from her. "Here you, Nove, some money to get in and have some fun."

"Thanks, mom." Nove nodded as she pocketed the money and cracked the can open to take a drink.

"Oh, and Nove," Quint grinned at the younger girl, "if your friend wants to check out my ass, I might have to start wearing a bikini around here."

Quint fought the urge to laugh as Nove's eyes widened and she sprayed the soda out of her mouth, before doubling over and coughing, when she saw Wendi's grin and heard her giggling.

"What the hell, mom?!" Nove coughed a few more times as she stared at her mom like she had grown a second head and her skin had turn purple or something equally weird.

Quint just winked and turned around to go back inside. "Better get going before it gets too late."

Wendi continued to giggle as she watched Quint's ass sway with each step. "Lovely." She continued to giggle and even started drooling as she slowly raised her arms up, her free hand was twitching as if she wanted to grab Quint's rear end.

That lasted until she was slapped on the back of the head by both Nove and Dieci. "Oww! What the heck?!"

"Come on, you can perv out at the amusement park." Dieci rolled her eyes as she and Nove led Wendi out of the yard.

Spoiler for Comments:

After all that happened in StrikerS, I think that we can appreciate a funnier arc, no?

Yay for comedy!!

[mega1987]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

StrikerS

Numbers 1-5

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Numbers 6:

"Hey, Nove," Nove turned to see a couple of people she hadn't seen in almost six months without a chaperon.

"Wendi! Dieci!" Nove ducked under a kick from punch from Subaru before doing a backflip and catching her sister in the chest. "Got'cha!"

Subaru grimaced, but nodded. "Dang, almost got you." At least she could take solace in the fact that she was stronger than Nove was, even if Nove could run circles around her if she tried hard enough. When Nove smirked, Subaru grinned and put the redhead in a headlock. "Hey, you guys." Subaru waved at Dieci and Wendi while Nove struggled to get free from the headlock.

Dieci laughed softly as she watched Nove try to escape from Subaru's headlock. "It's nice to see Nove having so much fun." When Nove yelled at her, she giggled. "Anyway, Nove, if you're done playing, Wendi and I were wondering if you'd like to come with us to meet up with Cinque later."

"How'd she get the day off from Hayate?" Nove asked as Subaru let go of the headlock. "I thought she was supposed to work for Hayate every day?"

Dieci scratched her cheek nervously. "Well, uh, it's not exactly that simple, apparently, mom, err, grandma, err..." She hung her head and her shoulders slumped helplessly. "I'm still not sure what to call her."

Subaru blinked at that. "Nanoha-san's mother? Isn't she your mother?"

Wendi sighed as Dieci blushed. "Technically, Lina is Dieci's grandmother and Nanoha's her mother. But it's too weird, and Dieci can't make up her mind if she should call Lina-san mother or grandmother yet." The Dragon cyborg shook her head and put Dieci in a headlock, causing the brown-haired girl to let out a squeak and flail her arms up and down. "I told you, didn't I? Just call her what you feel comfortable calling her." Wendi let go of the headlock and looked at Nove. "As for Cinque, Lina told Hayate that Cinque needed the day off, apparently. And Cinque apparently thinks that taking a day off is to spend the day babysitting Vivio and Arashi at the amusement park. Wanna come with?"

"Don't we all still need a chaperon?" Nove asked, and looked at Subaru, who shrugged at her. "You're a real help."

"Hey, my job is to rescue people and catch criminals, I don't pass judgements down." Subaru stuck her tongue out. "Speaking of which, I need to get going. Got to meet my new superior today."

"Later." Wendi said as she and Dieci waved Subaru off as she ran into the house to get dressed. "So, want to come with?"

Nove shrugged and turned to the house. "Hey, mom!"

"Yeah?" Quint, her hair still green, popped her head out of the kitchen window. "What's up, Nove?" The combination of her long hair and confused look made the older woman look like she was in her early twenties rather than her real age.

"Wendi and Dieci want me to go with them to the amusement park, is that okay, or are we still under house arrest?"

"Hang on," Wendi and Dieci stared as Quint jumped out of the kitchen window and did a roll as she touched the ground, before dusting herself off, "as for going to the amusement park, do you three have any money?"

Dieci looked at the window, and then at the front door and pointed at it with a shaky finger. "Um, why didn't you come out the door?"

Quint looked at the door and shrugged as she turned to look at them again. "Honestly, I don't know. Ever since my hair changed colors I've done some pretty weird things."

"Didn't Due do a bunch of weird stuff when Agito was bonded with her?" Nove asked no one in particular, getting a nod from Dieci and Wendi.

"Anyway, you can go without a chaperon, but," Quint narrowed her eyes at the three girls, "you aren't allowed to use your powers, outside of a Bureau agent requesting your help or an immediate threat to people's lives, understand?" All three nodded quickly and Quint grinned at them. "Good, I'll just go get some money and I'll be right back."

When Quint disappeared into the house, Wendi leaned in close to Nove. "Nove, your mom can be scary," Nove nodded and gulped slightly, "even if she has a great ass."

"Hey!" Nove whirled on Wendi, who was grinning. "Stop checking my mom out, you perv!"

Wendi chuckled at her. "What? Your mom's a total babe, ya know?"

Dieci just slapped her face and groaned. "Wendi, please stop talking about Quint like that, she's old enough to be all of our mothers." Dieci blinked and tilted her head. "Actually, in a way, isn't she our mother? I mean, her DNA was used to clone Subaru and Ginga, they're type Zero cyborgs and..." Dieci was suddenly tackled to the ground by Wendi. "Hmm?"

"No!" Wendi shook her head vigorously. "Nah uh, not listening, nope, she is NOT my mother at all."

Nove twitched before hanging her head. "Ugh... Wendi, you keep that up and I'll kick your ass all over the front yard."

Wendi got off of Dieci and pouted. "Oh, come on, it's not my fault that your mom is a looker."

"That's it!" Nove growled and jumped at Wendi, who yelped and rolled away, got up and started to run as Nove kicked up some dirt and chased after her. "Get back here!"

"No! You're just going to kick my butt."

"You'll be lucky if that's the only thing I kick!"

Sitting up, Dieci sighed as she watched Nove chase Wendi around the yard. "Those two never change." In a way, it was comforting, considering how things had changed so much from when they were working for the doctor. "...I wonder what happened to you, doctor." Dieci looked up into the sky. "Wherever you are, I hope things are going, EEEK!" Dieci's eyes widened, her hair stuck out and she jumped as something cold and damp touched the back of her neck. Spinning around, she gasped as Quint stood there with three cans with bits of ice sliding down the edges. "Wh, wh, what was that for?"

Quint giggled softly. "I'm sorry, I couldn't help myself, you were looking so serious there that I just wanted to tease you a little. You okay?" Dieci nodded, panting and Quint smiled as she watched Nove case Wendi around the yard. "So," Quint raised an eyebrow as Nove kicked Wendi in the butt before tackling her, "why is Nove chasing Wendi like that?"

"Wendi was teasing Nove about how good you look."

Quint blinked a few times at that, before smiling. "Well, that was nice of her." She blinked as Dieci suddenly fell over, her face crashing into the ground. "...Doesn't that hurt?"

Dieci just groaned and got back up. "How can you be so calm about this?" Quint just giggled at her. "What?"

"You'll understand one day, Dieci," Quint smiled and gave her a can, "it's just cola, but anyway, I don't care if someone thinks that I'm good looking, that makes me feel good," she winked at Dieci, who blushed and started to drink from her cola, "even if it's from someone as old as my daughter. Nove! Wendi, come on, you two, come get something to drink before you head out." She smiled as the two dusted themselves off and came over to get the sodas from her. "Here you, Nove, some money to get in and have some fun."

"Thanks, mom." Nove nodded as she pocketed the money and cracked the can open to take a drink.

"Oh, and Nove," Quint grinned at the younger girl, "if your friend wants to check out my ass, I might have to start wearing a bikini around here."

Quint fought the urge to laugh as Nove's eyes widened and she sprayed the soda out of her mouth, before doubling over and coughing, when she saw Wendi's grin and heard her giggling.

"What the hell, mom?!" Nove coughed a few more times as she stared at her mom like she had grown a second head and her skin had turn purple or something equally weird.

Quint just winked and turned around to go back inside. "Better get going before it gets too late."

Wendi continued to giggle as she watched Quint's ass sway with each step. "Lovely." She continued to giggle and even started drooling as she slowly raised her arms up, her free hand was twitching as if she wanted to grab Quint's rear end.

That lasted until she was slapped on the back of the head by both Nove and Dieci. "Oww! What the heck?!"

"Come on, you can perv out at the amusement park." Dieci rolled her eyes as she and Nove led Wendi out of the yard.

Spoiler for Comments:

After all that happened in StrikerS, I think that we can appreciate a funnier arc, no?

Me: Well.... Wendi's right... *Gazed at Quint.* She's hot.

Odin: As if she's the only good looking female in this story...

Me:

Reia: Hm.... Vivio and Arashi being babysit by Cinque... And about to go to the amusement park to meet up with Nove, Wendi and Dieci... Sounds like fun!

Odin: I wonder if there's someone else got plans for that day....

Me: *Imagines a Three-way date with Nanoha, Fate and Yuuno... An outing of Kuma, Amitie and Kyrie. Or a certain fruitcake decided to visit with his wife and daughters, just to appease the twins...*

[Nagumo]

Originally Posted by Tiresias

If Sette ever get out of jail, which occupation will she most likely choose: Bureau grunt, mercenary, or maybe something else?

I figured in my fanfic, she would train animals for social work or something.

Cute kitties and doggies, piled on top of her. All sorts and sizes, to the point she's buried under them! (Imagine Sette buried under a avalanche of cute animals)

... Unless she was allergic to animals, that would just suck.

[Nanya01]

Originally Posted by Nagumo

Cute kitties and doggies, piled on top of her. All sorts and sizes, to the point she's buried under them! (Imagine Sette buried under a avalanche of cute animals)

"Mr. Tadakishi! No! Get off of the nice woman! Wagh!"
"Poor Chiyo, her dog flattened her again."

Couldn't help myself!