Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Kha

Btw, now that you've pointed it out, I realized that AO said that that skill drained a lot of mana, so since she technically isn't close to Fate, and wasn't ordered by Serge, I'm not too surprised at the lack of altruism in this sense.

Yeah, that drains quite a lot, but:

- could be a spoiler but AO doesn't necessarily have to use its own or Serge's mana;

- AO's own mana reserves are unknown but at least roughly enough for it to survive another universal collapse at any given time;

- overall fixing the damage dealt to Fate would be much less costly than what AO did in part 6.5;

- AO didn't even mention that it was capable of such healing.

Anyway it's just to show that AO isn't exactly "good" and usually doesn't care about any living being around.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Kha

Kha: (regenerates enough to speak) Ow.

Carim: KHAAAAAAA!!! :cry:

Schach: You've hurt her.
Acous: You made her cry.
Hayate: You've brought her to tears.

That was random.

What have you been doing to Carym, huh?
I'm starting to sense CarymXKha frobidden rabu vibes

And I gotta stop thinking of Carim in terms of Gundam Stateswomen. I've made her cry like Cagalli, sing like Lacus, preach meaningless peace like Relena, and have the strict side of Lady Une. Bottomline: I NEED MORE SUBS! Episode 2 is not enough for Carim characterization!!!

How about Sayla? :3

Carym: (to Kha) Onii-san!
Kha: What?!

Originally Posted by Kha

You've just turned my Chidori Keroko intro upside down! But then again, since there's that other seldom-seen side to most characters I play with (violent Fate bordering on Precia, dere-Arisa, crying Carim, shouting Kha) and remembering how Keroko loved tech, I guess why not?

:3

Originally Posted by LoweGear

*lists down Aurion's weakness*

Keroko's Kawaii-Moe Double Put-Cry combo attack = Check
Nanoha's Stern Instructor Mode = Check

Yet of all of them, Fate WINS

I can imagine Aurion doing his best Kyon impression

Well, nobody is invincible. Though a girl has to be pretty close to him for the trick to work.

Well, you can throw Haman into the mix, and Carim's badassery will skyrocket

Battle mode?

Originally Posted by Kha

Haman, ka? Or maybe someone else...? Dang, you've just made me realize that I've casted Carim with all the weakest leading ladies... Gomenasi, Carim-sama...

Ah I feel an idea coming...

*poof*

ARGH!!! What just happened?! I just imagined Carim wearing the ":3" Konata face!!!

How about an OOC tsun-tsun Carym?

Originally Posted by Nightengale

More Joseth trivia this time round.

Spoiler:

- Although he isn't too anti-social within his extremely small circle of colleagues, his infamous response to non-friends who try to start a conversation with him generally end up hearing...

Joseth : I don't answer meaningless questions.
Joseth : Is that supposed to be a meaningful question?

Those who crossed the line of being annoying to being VERY annoying gets this 2 variations.

Joseth : Ever heard of shotgun reaction. *a kick to the groin*
Joseth : Shut. your. wapping. bitch. *deep throats her*

- He doesn't drink, he doesn't smoke, he never indulges in tomfoolery, and he never takes drugs, even non-lethal ones that's supposed to help him. In fact, he ONLY drinks mineral/boiled water.

- He goes out to the undergrounds and black-markets weekly to gather information from various sources, like hookers and stuff, but he never had sex with anyone of them, and rather gives them enough money to live a good life a whole 3 years in exchange for information, telling them to go fix their pitiful lives. However, when he goes back and see the same hooker he gives the money to still working there, he brutally beats them up and breaks every single finger to calm himself down.

- He's not weak towards alcohol, being able to drink when needed to as part of his work, but whenever he starts to get drunk, his character pulls A TOTAL 180. He turns very very social, to extents where people gets freaked out by it. Very few knows of it, and it never spread out beyond those few because...

- He's got a special book that specifically list down all the threat-worthy/bad-gossip material things of every "mildly important individual" he's met. Like how he once got Yuuno drunk and learned that he once slept and bathed together with Nanoha...stuff that would get the Air Force rookies ferret-crazy. Some are not even considered threat-worthy, but he keeps something for everyone anyway.

- The 3 things he hate the most are :
3. Stuff that cannot be explained by science and technology. AT. ALL. (( like Carim's prophecy, which he considers to be bullshit. ))
2. Artificial Intelligence (( Programs, A.I))
1. People who don't learn to help themselves.

- The 3 things he like the most are :
1. Himself.
2. Himself.
3. Technology.

- His OOC (( SUPER DERE DERE )) side when drunk... well, it's best seen and heard.

- He's only been in OOC mode twice in his life. Those who know consider it to be an exhaust of bottled up tsun-ness that occupies 99% of Joseth's social life.

- He doesnt' get TSAB's anti-conventional weapon phobia. In fact, he considers them to be works of art so much, he secretly retrofits some of his discovered weapons (( from his information webbing )) like missiles and cannons to his jets, helicopters, cars, and bikes, hidden like a true James Bond/Knight Rider vehicle.

- I am fond of the technological side of the human evolution/MACHINES are a man's romance!!! ~ TSUN/DERE

- Even in OOC mode, he's still as vain and arrogant as ever. Just expressed...differently.

You don't say.
This guy has an even worse attitude than stereotype villains!
And he becomes socio-Rock when drunk? Somebody call Keroko-chan! *ICB'd*
By the way, Nightengale, do you think the Aces' trump cards against Aurion make it fair enough?

Originally Posted by Liingo

Ahaha, that was great Bardich wins again

Two can play that game.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

More Joseth trivia this time round.

Spoiler:

- Although he isn't too anti-social within his extremely small circle of colleagues, his infamous response to non-friends who try to start a conversation with him generally end up hearing...

Joseth : I don't answer meaningless questions.
Joseth : Is that supposed to be a meaningful question?

Those who crossed the line of being annoying to being VERY annoying gets this 2 variations.

Joseth : Ever heard of shotgun reaction. *a kick to the groin*
Joseth : Shut. your. wapping. bitch. *deep throats her*

- He doesn't drink, he doesn't smoke, he never indulges in tomfoolery, and he never takes drugs, even non-lethal ones that's supposed to help him. In fact, he ONLY drinks mineral/boiled water.

- He goes out to the undergrounds and black-markets weekly to gather information from various sources, like hookers and stuff, but he never had sex with anyone of them, and rather gives them enough money to live a good life a whole 3 years in exchange for information, telling them to go fix their pitiful lives. However, when he goes back and see the same hooker he gives the money to still working there, he brutally beats them up and breaks every single finger to calm himself down.

- He's not weak towards alcohol, being able to drink when needed to as part of his work, but whenever he starts to get drunk, his character pulls A TOTAL 180. He turns very very social, to extents where people gets freaked out by it. Very few knows of it, and it never spread out beyond those few because...

- He's got a special book that specifically list down all the threat-worthy/bad-gossip material things of every "mildly important individual" he's met. Like how he once got Yuuno drunk and learned that he once slept and bathed together with Nanoha...stuff that would get the Air Force rookies ferret-crazy. Some are not even considered threat-worthy, but he keeps something for everyone anyway.

- The 3 things he hate the most are :
3. Stuff that cannot be explained by science and technology. AT. ALL. (( like Carim's prophecy, which he considers to be bullshit. ))
2. Artificial Intelligence (( Programs, A.I))
1. People who don't learn to help themselves.

- The 3 things he like the most are :
1. Himself.
2. Himself.
3. Technology.

- His OOC (( SUPER DERE DERE )) side when drunk... well, it's best seen and heard.

- He's only been in OOC mode twice in his life. Those who know consider it to be an exhaust of bottled up tsun-ness that occupies 99% of Joseth's social life.

- He doesnt' get TSAB's anti-conventional weapon phobia. In fact, he considers them to be works of art so much, he secretly retrofits some of his discovered weapons (( from his information webbing )) like missiles and cannons to his jets, helicopters, cars, and bikes, hidden like a true James Bond/Knight Rider vehicle.

- I am fond of the technological side of the human evolution/MACHINES are a man's romance!!! ~ TSUN/DERE

- Even in OOC mode, he's still as vain and arrogant as ever. Just expressed...differently.

So Joseth KaiHai BaMa turns into dere Rock when drunk?

That mention of Mr Deep Throat the CIA Superinformant was kinda surprising for his character really, especially his preference to helping people help themselves . If it weren't for his extremely holier-- okay maybe "higher-tech'd than thou" attitude he'd be a great Confessor.

I'd like to see Kha's entry in that book. I suppose Kha's dark secret is that he rips people off (I'm serious)? Fancies black underwear (I'm half serious)? Has a secret affair with Carim (I'm not serious! )?

As for Sophia's that's pretty obvious: listing any of the ways she gets turned into Kaleido-So--

*Hayate Harisen Mk 3 >>>> Creator-san*

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

Yeah, that drains quite a lot, but:

- could be a spoiler but AO doesn't necessarily have to use its own or Serge's mana;

- AO's own mana reserves are unknown but at least roughly enough for it to survive another universal collapse at any given time;

- overall fixing the damage dealt to Fate would be much less costly than what AO did in part 6.5;

- AO didn't even mention that it was capable of such healing.

Anyway it's just to show that AO isn't exactly "good" and usually doesn't care about any living being around.

I see... I think RH, the 4koma at least, falls into that category too.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

What have you been doing to Carym, huh?
I'm starting to sense CarymXKha frobidden rabu vibes

I don't know... She's the character that I want to play around with sooo much and yet I've sooo little data to run on.

And I'm starting to sense it too, though technically CarymxKha IS one of the possible endings of this New Velka harem game fic series.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

How about Sayla? :3

Carym: (to Kha) Onii-san!
Kha: What?!

Yeah and notice that Kha flies the Nu Gundam...

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

:3

Okaaaaay......

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Battle mode?

How about an OOC tsun-tsun Carym?

1. Good idea! Now to do a Lone-- MATTE!!! Will she meet canon combat? She's one of the AV Trinity after all; and I don't even what's her device.

But yeah I'll keep Haman in mind. :3

2. OOC tsun-tsun Carim? Why do I have a feeling I've done that before...?

Oh no that was heartbroken Carim.

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Kha

I see... I think RH, the 4koma at least, falls into that category too.

Heh, another thing they have in common

BTW did my forwarded PM of converstaion with SaintX reach you? Any comments?

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Kha

*poof*

ARGH!!! What just happened?! I just imagined Carim wearing the ":3" Konata face!!!

Gotta go watch another normal anime after Lucky Star...

Spoiler for Like this?:

...

*runs*

Originally Posted by Nightengale

More Joseth trivia this time round.

Spoiler:

- Although he isn't too anti-social within his extremely small circle of colleagues, his infamous response to non-friends who try to start a conversation with him generally end up hearing...

Joseth : I don't answer meaningless questions.
Joseth : Is that supposed to be a meaningful question?

Those who crossed the line of being annoying to being VERY annoying gets this 2 variations.

Joseth : Ever heard of shotgun reaction. *a kick to the groin*
Joseth : Shut. your. wapping. bitch. *deep throats her*

- He doesn't drink, he doesn't smoke, he never indulges in tomfoolery, and he never takes drugs, even non-lethal ones that's supposed to help him. In fact, he ONLY drinks mineral/boiled water.

- He goes out to the undergrounds and black-markets weekly to gather information from various sources, like hookers and stuff, but he never had sex with anyone of them, and rather gives them enough money to live a good life a whole 3 years in exchange for information, telling them to go fix their pitiful lives. However, when he goes back and see the same hooker he gives the money to still working there, he brutally beats them up and breaks every single finger to calm himself down.

- He's not weak towards alcohol, being able to drink when needed to as part of his work, but whenever he starts to get drunk, his character pulls A TOTAL 180. He turns very very social, to extents where people gets freaked out by it. Very few knows of it, and it never spread out beyond those few because...

- He's got a special book that specifically list down all the threat-worthy/bad-gossip material things of every "mildly important individual" he's met. Like how he once got Yuuno drunk and learned that he once slept and bathed together with Nanoha...stuff that would get the Air Force rookies ferret-crazy. Some are not even considered threat-worthy, but he keeps something for everyone anyway.

- The 3 things he hate the most are :
3. Stuff that cannot be explained by science and technology. AT. ALL. (( like Carim's prophecy, which he considers to be bullshit. ))
2. Artificial Intelligence (( Programs, A.I))
1. People who don't learn to help themselves.

- The 3 things he like the most are :
1. Himself.
2. Himself.
3. Technology.

- His OOC (( SUPER DERE DERE )) side when drunk... well, it's best seen and heard.

- He's only been in OOC mode twice in his life. Those who know consider it to be an exhaust of bottled up tsun-ness that occupies 99% of Joseth's social life.

- He doesnt' get TSAB's anti-conventional weapon phobia. In fact, he considers them to be works of art so much, he secretly retrofits some of his discovered weapons (( from his information webbing )) like missiles and cannons to his jets, helicopters, cars, and bikes, hidden like a true James Bond/Knight Rider vehicle.

- I am fond of the technological side of the human evolution/MACHINES are a man's romance!!! ~ TSUN/DERE

- Even in OOC mode, he's still as vain and arrogant as ever. Just expressed...differently.

This man's sense of justice is BRUTAL, although understandable in an unusual way (especially with the hookers part)

And Bond Car? Damn

And for some reason...

Joseth: *drunk* Whoa whoa whoa Keroko, Keroko...
You need to let your feelings go.
Joseth knows you have FEELINGS for him...

*runs from MASS ICB Barrage*

[Kha]

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

Heh, another thing they have in common

BTW did my forwarded PM of converstaion with SaintX reach you? Any comments?

1. Agreed

2. I'm not too sure of what to comment, but isn't Anti-Maigc already here and now, as in AMF? And the AMF's gotta be working on some fundamental principle of magic such that it can interfere with standard magic for 8 years (14 if Kha's Velka Desert POV is considered) with no counter measure, so it might work for AT?

And I thought of AT Field while running mental simulations of AT.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Spoiler for Like this?:

...

*runs*

AH!!! MY EYES!!! THEY BUUUUUUUUURN!!!

I think I've just glimpsed one of Kha's nightmares.

Ever wondered what dere Kleriker is like...? Funny how I've never done that image before...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Joseth: *drunk* Who who who Keroko, Keroko...
You need to let your feelings go.
Joseth knows you have FEELINGS for him...

*runs from MASS ICB Barrage*

JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK...

*tap dances around ICB's*

Looks like dere Keroko has a pretty low accura--

*Netherbreath >>>> Creator-san*

[Nightengale]

My very first Hayuuno fic EVAR. An unofficial sequel to Dark Yuuno/Baseball short, by Satashi. My POWAH doesn't even come close to the Supreme Power that is Satashi, but I was seriously tempted to try. :3

Spoiler for A 2nd rate's Hayuuno:

“Now then, both of you go get yourself cleaned up before going back home. You don’t want Nanoha and Fate to be worried, wouldn’t you? I’ll wait for you to finish, so go ahead and be nice children now.”

Yuuno lightly pressed them towards the direction of the park’s shower room, as Elio and Caro complied, smiling. “Hai, Yuuno-san!”

Turning around as they went their ways to the female’s bathroom and the male’s, Yuuno walked out of the park’s surroundings, as he settled himself nearby on a bench, looking up in the sky, letting his thoughts wander, daydreaming…

“Yuuno?”

“Wah-!” Yuuno’s thoughts instantly scrambled back home as he suddenly found Hayate leaning over, her face looming over his just centimeters away. Embarrassed, he reaffirmed himself back.

“Hayate? What are you doing here?”

“That’s my line! For some reason, Nanoha-chan and Fate-chan are up in a frenzy back at base, with Nanoha-chan walking around sobbing and not concentrating, while Fate-chan looked like she’s just made love with Nanoha 30 times non-stop, and their only words were you, Elio-kun, and Caro-chan.”

“Hahaha…” Yuuno could only laugh… looks like the wordplay was a little too hot for them…

“What’s going on?” Hayate had a mildly miffed up look now, with a slight pout on her face.

“Well, the truth is…” Yuuno leaned over to Hayate’s side as he whispered something.

*whisper whisper whisper*

She gasped. “You didn’t!”

“Oh yes I did.” He smirked.

“You’re evil.”

“Hey, it’s not my fault the little bunnies misinterpreted. I was only speaking the truth…the very literal truth.”

They both kept silent for a few seconds, as they leaned back and laughed at their predicament. Their eyes averted to their sides, as they smiled. Then, Caro and Elio came out from the park, noticing Yuuno and Hayate, they both waved and called out to them.

“Yuuno-san!! Yagami-taichou!!”

Elio called out to them, as they both awakened from their silent open-slumber, as the elder pair stood up, waving back to the little pair as well.

“Yagami-taichou? Were you and Yuuno-san out on a date as well?”

“Wha-“ Hayate could barely stutter out a word as a flush of pink rised to her face.

“No, Hayate just arrived to see how the both of you were doing. Come along; let’s go home now…Hayate?”

“…Hai.” Hayate said, as she nodded…sounding a little disappointed.

Elio and Caro energetically upped their pace even after their exhilarating game of bats and balls, walking further and faster ahead, while Hayate and Yuuno took their slow time, walking behind, eyeing those 2 little blossoming child up ahead.

“Time sure flies, doesn’t it?”

“Yeah, it feels like only yesterday we were 9...at an age where we’re unadulterated, simple, without a care in the world.”

“I don’t think those lines really fit to the both of us even when we’re 9 though.”

“That’s true.”

They both giggled slightly, as they continued to walk down. They paid their utmost attention at the little lovebirds in front of them, innocent as they talked to each other, smiling, happily. Even with their past, they could still put up such a beautiful smile and look forward to their future, guided by their 2 mothers.

“They’re adorable, aren’t they?” Hayate could only say so much, as she herself found herself mildly red, looking at the little children go at it.

“Yeah… I wonder if we’ll have children that adorable when we grow older.”

“!!!!!!” Hayate’s face, like a thermometer thrown into the sun, instantly shot up into a tomato’s ripened red, as she replayed Yuuno’s non-referential words in her head on a loop… our childen, our children, our children…
“Hayate…what’s wrong? Your face is red.” Yuuno asked, concerned as Hayate snapped out of her dreaminess, still red as she is.

“Oh, no…nothing. I’m perfectly fine. Really!”

“You expect me to buy that, when your breathing’s all ragged and your face is redder than Fate’s eyes? Come here.”

“It’s really o-ooh!”

Ignoring Hayate being typically Hayate, Yuuno pulled her closer to him and their foreheads touched, their noses just inches away, as Yuuno closed his eyes to get a feel on Hayate’s temperature, while Hayate was…being dreamy, red and almost foggy in her head.

“Hmm… there doesn’t seem to be a fever…” As his eyes opened, he realized he put Hayate in a mildly awkward position, as he quickly jumped back, “So-sorry, about that. I just did so without thinking.”

“No…it’s okay…” Hayate tried to reaffirm herself, but the direct-one-two-critical-hit combination from Yuuno’s innocent “children” talk that was self-amplified to “our children” along with the coolness of Yuuno’s forehead, the sound of his breathing was too much of a blood-rush for her face and brain to take as she covers her face, walking away quickly.

“Ah, Hayate, if you walk without looking, you’ll-“

“Trip…crash!”

“Too late.” Yuuno sighed, as he saw Hayate tripping herself over the grounds uneven walkway…

“Oow…” Hayate held her leg, as she squirmed a little in pain, from that trip that injured her ankle. Yuuno quickly went over to her side, as he removed her shoes, touching the part of the leg she twisted herself to…

“It’s twisted…Gimme a few seconds. I can heal this quickl-“ As Yuuno was about to conjure a magical circle to heal it, Hayate grabbed Yuuno’s arm, stopping it.

“Hayate?”

“…Carry me?” Hayate gave him that look, those kind of squinted eyes that’s childlike.

“So you want to be childish too?”

“...No?”

Rather than answering, Yuuno pulled her up to a piggyback position, as he silently, but surely carries her on his back. “You know I just can’t say no when you ask me like that. Just for today, kay?”

“Mmm!” Hayate nods with a smile, as she tightened her arms, coiled around Yuuno’s neck, resting her head towards his shoulders, feeling the comfort of being held…

Yuuno carried her the rest of the ways further, silently, as the sun slowly sets further and further, Elio and Caro already far ahead, leaving only the both of them walking through the street.

“Yuuno…will you always be there for me if I mess up again…like today?”

“Well…I can’t always be there…but anytime you need me, just ring me up, and I’ll be there without a doubt. We’re friends, aren’t we?”

“…Mmm!” Hayate answered as she smiled.

Nothing OC-related, but I'd thought I'd post it here as well.

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

My very first Hayuuno fic EVAR. An unofficial sequel to Dark Yuuno/Baseball short, by Satashi. My POWAH doesn't even come close to the Supreme Power that is Satashi, but I was seriously tempted to try. :3

Spoiler for A 2nd rate's Hayuuno:

“Now then, both of you go get yourself cleaned up before going back home. You don’t want Nanoha and Fate to be worried, wouldn’t you? I’ll wait for you to finish, so go ahead and be nice children now.”

Yuuno lightly pressed them towards the direction of the park’s shower room, as Elio and Caro complied, smiling. “Hai, Yuuno-san!”

Turning around as they went their ways to the female’s bathroom and the male’s, Yuuno walked out of the park’s surroundings, as he settled himself nearby on a bench, looking up in the sky, letting his thoughts wander, daydreaming…

“Yuuno?”

“Wah-!” Yuuno’s thoughts instantly scrambled back home as he suddenly found Hayate leaning over, her face looming over his just centimeters away. Embarrassed, he reaffirmed himself back.

“Hayate? What are you doing here?”

“That’s my line! For some reason, Nanoha-chan and Fate-chan are up in a frenzy back at base, with Nanoha-chan walking around sobbing and not concentrating, while Fate-chan looked like she’s just made love with Nanoha 30 times non-stop, and their only words were you, Elio-kun, and Caro-chan.”

“Hahaha…” Yuuno could only laugh… looks like the wordplay was a little too hot for them…

“What’s going on?” Hayate had a mildly miffed up look now, with a slight pout on her face.

“Well, the truth is…” Yuuno leaned over to Hayate’s side as he whispered something.

*whisper whisper whisper*

She gasped. “You didn’t!”

“Oh yes I did.” He smirked.

“You’re evil.”

“Hey, it’s not my fault the little bunnies misinterpreted. I was only speaking the truth…the very literal truth.”

They both kept silent for a few seconds, as they leaned back and laughed at their predicament. Their eyes averted to their sides, as they smiled. Then, Caro and Elio came out from the park, noticing Yuuno and Hayate, they both waved and called out to them.

“Yuuno-san!! Yagami-taichou!!”

Elio called out to them, as they both awakened from their silent open-slumber, as the elder pair stood up, waving back to the little pair as well.

“Yagami-taichou? Were you and Yuuno-san out on a date as well?”

“Wha-“ Hayate could barely stutter out a word as a flush of pink rised to her face.

“No, Hayate just arrived to see how the both of you were doing. Come along; let’s go home now…Hayate?”

“…Hai.” Hayate said, as she nodded…sounding a little disappointed.

Elio and Caro energetically upped their pace even after their exhilarating game of bats and balls, walking further and faster ahead, while Hayate and Yuuno took their slow time, walking behind, eyeing those 2 little blossoming child up ahead.

“Time sure flies, doesn’t it?”

“Yeah, it feels like only yesterday we were 9...at an age where we’re unadulterated, simple, without a care in the world.”

“I don’t think those lines really fit to the both of us even when we’re 9 though.”

“That’s true.”

They both giggled slightly, as they continued to walk down. They paid their utmost attention at the little lovebirds in front of them, innocent as they talked to each other, smiling, happily. Even with their past, they could still put up such a beautiful smile and look forward to their future, guided by their 2 mothers.

“They’re adorable, aren’t they?” Hayate could only say so much, as she herself found herself mildly red, looking at the little children go at it.

“Yeah… I wonder if we’ll have children that adorable when we grow older.”

“!!!!!!” Hayate’s face, like a thermometer thrown into the sun, instantly shot up into a tomato’s ripened red, as she replayed Yuuno’s non-referential words in her head on a loop… our childen, our children, our children…
“Hayate…what’s wrong? Your face is red.” Yuuno asked, concerned as Hayate snapped out of her dreaminess, still red as she is.

“Oh, no…nothing. I’m perfectly fine. Really!”

“You expect me to buy that, when your breathing’s all ragged and your face is redder than Fate’s eyes? Come here.”

“It’s really o-ooh!”

Ignoring Hayate being typically Hayate, Yuuno pulled her closer to him and their foreheads touched, their noses just inches away, as Yuuno closed his eyes to get a feel on Hayate’s temperature, while Hayate was…being dreamy, red and almost foggy in her head.

“Hmm… there doesn’t seem to be a fever…” As his eyes opened, he realized he put Hayate in a mildly awkward position, as he quickly jumped back, “So-sorry, about that. I just did so without thinking.”

“No…it’s okay…” Hayate tried to reaffirm herself, but the direct-one-two-critical-hit combination from Yuuno’s innocent “children” talk that was self-amplified to “our children” along with the coolness of Yuuno’s forehead, the sound of his breathing was too much of a blood-rush for her face and brain to take as she covers her face, walking away quickly.

“Ah, Hayate, if you walk without looking, you’ll-“

“Trip…crash!”

“Too late.” Yuuno sighed, as he saw Hayate tripping herself over the grounds uneven walkway…

“Oow…” Hayate held her leg, as she squirmed a little in pain, from that trip that injured her ankle. Yuuno quickly went over to her side, as he removed her shoes, touching the part of the leg she twisted herself to…

“It’s twisted…Gimme a few seconds. I can heal this quickl-“ As Yuuno was about to conjure a magical circle to heal it, Hayate grabbed Yuuno’s arm, stopping it.

“Hayate?”

“…Carry me?” Hayate gave him that look, those kind of squinted eyes that’s childlike.

“So you want to be childish too?”

“...No?”

Rather than answering, Yuuno pulled her up to a piggyback position, as he silently, but surely carries her on his back. “You know I just can’t say no when you ask me like that. Just for today, kay?”

“Mmm!” Hayate nods with a smile, as she tightened her arms, coiled around Yuuno’s neck, resting her head towards his shoulders, feeling the comfort of being held…

Yuuno carried her the rest of the ways further, silently, as the sun slowly sets further and further, Elio and Caro already far ahead, leaving only the both of them walking through the street.

“Yuuno…will you always be there for me if I mess up again…like today?”

“Well…I can’t always be there…but anytime you need me, just ring me up, and I’ll be there without a doubt. We’re friends, aren’t we?”

“…Mmm!” Hayate answered as she smiled.

Nothing OC-related, but I'd thought I'd post it here as well.

I'm not really sold on the entire Hayate/Yuuno thing, but DAMN Yuuno you pimp... somehow saying just the right words and knowing the right moves to make Hayate trip all over herself (especially with the children comment )

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Kha

I don't know... She's the character that I want to play around with sooo much and yet I've sooo little data to run on.

So she's your little plaything, huh?

And I'm starting to sense it too, though technically CarymxKha IS one of the possible endings of this New Velka harem game fic series.

Hoh? At least the Velka Chronicles is now closer to it's harem game roots.

Yeah and notice that Kha flies the Nu Gundam...

So you'd rather have Dio as Carym's brother?

Okaaaaay......

Blame yourself and Nightengale for teaching me the Konata face.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Spoiler for Like this?:

...

*runs*

That was......

Joseth: *drunk* Whoa whoa whoa Keroko, Keroko...
You need to let your feelings go.
Joseth knows you have FEELINGS for him...

*runs from MASS ICB Barrage*

Ah... The possibilities...
[Dodges Chain-ICB]

Originally Posted by Kha

JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK JxK...

*tap dances around ICB's*

Looks like dere Keroko has a pretty low accura--

*Netherbreath >>>> Creator-san*

That I want to see.
Hmm. Maybe I should make a tsun-tsun Nanoha...*SLB'd*

Originally Posted by Nightengale

My very first Hayuuno fic EVAR. An unofficial sequel to Dark Yuuno/Baseball short, by Satashi. My POWAH doesn't even come close to the Supreme Power that is Satashi, but I was seriously tempted to try. :3

Spoiler for A 2nd rate's Hayuuno:

“Now then, both of you go get yourself cleaned up before going back home. You don’t want Nanoha and Fate to be worried, wouldn’t you? I’ll wait for you to finish, so go ahead and be nice children now.”

Yuuno lightly pressed them towards the direction of the park’s shower room, as Elio and Caro complied, smiling. “Hai, Yuuno-san!”

Turning around as they went their ways to the female’s bathroom and the male’s, Yuuno walked out of the park’s surroundings, as he settled himself nearby on a bench, looking up in the sky, letting his thoughts wander, daydreaming…

“Yuuno?”

“Wah-!” Yuuno’s thoughts instantly scrambled back home as he suddenly found Hayate leaning over, her face looming over his just centimeters away. Embarrassed, he reaffirmed himself back.

“Hayate? What are you doing here?”

“That’s my line! For some reason, Nanoha-chan and Fate-chan are up in a frenzy back at base, with Nanoha-chan walking around sobbing and not concentrating, while Fate-chan looked like she’s just made love with Nanoha 30 times non-stop, and their only words were you, Elio-kun, and Caro-chan.”

“Hahaha…” Yuuno could only laugh… looks like the wordplay was a little too hot for them…

“What’s going on?” Hayate had a mildly miffed up look now, with a slight pout on her face.

“Well, the truth is…” Yuuno leaned over to Hayate’s side as he whispered something.

*whisper whisper whisper*

She gasped. “You didn’t!”

“Oh yes I did.” He smirked.

“You’re evil.”

“Hey, it’s not my fault the little bunnies misinterpreted. I was only speaking the truth…the very literal truth.”

They both kept silent for a few seconds, as they leaned back and laughed at their predicament. Their eyes averted to their sides, as they smiled. Then, Caro and Elio came out from the park, noticing Yuuno and Hayate, they both waved and called out to them.

“Yuuno-san!! Yagami-taichou!!”

Elio called out to them, as they both awakened from their silent open-slumber, as the elder pair stood up, waving back to the little pair as well.

“Yagami-taichou? Were you and Yuuno-san out on a date as well?”

“Wha-“ Hayate could barely stutter out a word as a flush of pink rised to her face.

“No, Hayate just arrived to see how the both of you were doing. Come along; let’s go home now…Hayate?”

“…Hai.” Hayate said, as she nodded…sounding a little disappointed.

Elio and Caro energetically upped their pace even after their exhilarating game of bats and balls, walking further and faster ahead, while Hayate and Yuuno took their slow time, walking behind, eyeing those 2 little blossoming child up ahead.

“Time sure flies, doesn’t it?”

“Yeah, it feels like only yesterday we were 9...at an age where we’re unadulterated, simple, without a care in the world.”

“I don’t think those lines really fit to the both of us even when we’re 9 though.”

“That’s true.”

They both giggled slightly, as they continued to walk down. They paid their utmost attention at the little lovebirds in front of them, innocent as they talked to each other, smiling, happily. Even with their past, they could still put up such a beautiful smile and look forward to their future, guided by their 2 mothers.

“They’re adorable, aren’t they?” Hayate could only say so much, as she herself found herself mildly red, looking at the little children go at it.

“Yeah… I wonder if we’ll have children that adorable when we grow older.”

“!!!!!!” Hayate’s face, like a thermometer thrown into the sun, instantly shot up into a tomato’s ripened red, as she replayed Yuuno’s non-referential words in her head on a loop… our childen, our children, our children…
“Hayate…what’s wrong? Your face is red.” Yuuno asked, concerned as Hayate snapped out of her dreaminess, still red as she is.

“Oh, no…nothing. I’m perfectly fine. Really!”

“You expect me to buy that, when your breathing’s all ragged and your face is redder than Fate’s eyes? Come here.”

“It’s really o-ooh!”

Ignoring Hayate being typically Hayate, Yuuno pulled her closer to him and their foreheads touched, their noses just inches away, as Yuuno closed his eyes to get a feel on Hayate’s temperature, while Hayate was…being dreamy, red and almost foggy in her head.

“Hmm… there doesn’t seem to be a fever…” As his eyes opened, he realized he put Hayate in a mildly awkward position, as he quickly jumped back, “So-sorry, about that. I just did so without thinking.”

“No…it’s okay…” Hayate tried to reaffirm herself, but the direct-one-two-critical-hit combination from Yuuno’s innocent “children” talk that was self-amplified to “our children” along with the coolness of Yuuno’s forehead, the sound of his breathing was too much of a blood-rush for her face and brain to take as she covers her face, walking away quickly.

“Ah, Hayate, if you walk without looking, you’ll-“

“Trip…crash!”

“Too late.” Yuuno sighed, as he saw Hayate tripping herself over the grounds uneven walkway…

“Oow…” Hayate held her leg, as she squirmed a little in pain, from that trip that injured her ankle. Yuuno quickly went over to her side, as he removed her shoes, touching the part of the leg she twisted herself to…

“It’s twisted…Gimme a few seconds. I can heal this quickl-“ As Yuuno was about to conjure a magical circle to heal it, Hayate grabbed Yuuno’s arm, stopping it.

“Hayate?”

“…Carry me?” Hayate gave him that look, those kind of squinted eyes that’s childlike.

“So you want to be childish too?”

“...No?”

Rather than answering, Yuuno pulled her up to a piggyback position, as he silently, but surely carries her on his back. “You know I just can’t say no when you ask me like that. Just for today, kay?”

“Mmm!” Hayate nods with a smile, as she tightened her arms, coiled around Yuuno’s neck, resting her head towards his shoulders, feeling the comfort of being held…

Yuuno carried her the rest of the ways further, silently, as the sun slowly sets further and further, Elio and Caro already far ahead, leaving only the both of them walking through the street.

“Yuuno…will you always be there for me if I mess up again…like today?”

“Well…I can’t always be there…but anytime you need me, just ring me up, and I’ll be there without a doubt. We’re friends, aren’t we?”

“…Mmm!” Hayate answered as she smiled.

Nothing OC-related, but I'd thought I'd post it here as well.

Hehehe. GREAT! Yuuno's playing with Hayate's emotions without even noticing it! And Hayate's Lovestruck mode is simply wonderful! The "trip+puppy eyes+carry me" combo worked so well.

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Kha

1. Agreed

2. I'm not too sure of what to comment, but isn't Anti-Maigc already here and now, as in AMF? And the AMF's gotta be working on some fundamental principle of magic such that it can interfere with standard magic for 8 years (14 if Kha's Velka Desert POV is considered) with no counter measure, so it might work for AT?

Well, I think you've got the wrong impression of Antimagic, but nevertheless my point there is that I'm against its introduction unless SaintX have something to change my opinion.

Regarding AMF, I'm not sure how exactly it works in canon. Anyway it's possible to overpower it. With my version of AT this is not the case - no magic particles mean no magic, Punkt. Though in general its first ability is indeed close to AMF.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

So she's your little plaything, huh?

Hoh? At least the Velka Chronicles is now closer to it's harem game roots.

So you'd rather have Dio as Carym's brother?

That I want to see.

1. E-eh?! Don't make it sound so er... Church girls are so pure and innocent... What a sight to be--

YAMATE!!! What's gotten into me seriously? How did I go from Fate-fanboyism to Carim, of which we've hardly seen much of her?!

2. True. Shall I start releasing the various endings? It'll also show something about Keroko...

3. Well... Now you've kicked off soooo many ideas, especially when you consider that programs don't die but power down, unless reformatted.

I see:

Dio: [Quatro Vageena]Are you... Kha?[/Quatro]
Kha: [Amuro]Dio ka?![/Amuro]

and that's just one when both work together until Dio disappears, then resurfaces in charge of the regrouped Neo Velka Army, in a battle named Dio's Counterattack, trying to drop a massive asteroid onto Mid Childa. Fate gets shot down, Alicia comes back to haunt both Kha and Dio...

OMG Imagination FULL DRIVE FTW.

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

Well, I think you've got the wrong impression of Antimagic, but nevertheless my point there is that I'm against its introduction unless SaintX have something to change my opinion.

Regarding AMF, I'm not sure how exactly it works in canon. Anyway it's possible to overpower it. With my version of AT this is not the case - no magic particles mean no magic, Punkt. Though in general its first ability is indeed close to AMF.

Okaaay. Now I really have no idea what to say. Some of the ideas were too ported from other series to be made fanon without becoming a full crossover.

But we'll see how. Now the only problem is, THERE'S ANOTHER POWER LEVEL ABOVE NOBLES?! I only intended the Nobles to have been the max power available to FW because of his X rank, which is only 1 rank above SSS. I don't want anything to go pass that point, because in my dictionary, X = Godlike, and theoretically nothing is Beyond Godlike, only in DotA.

[Nightengale]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

I'm not really sold on the entire Hayate/Yuuno thing, but DAMN Yuuno you pimp... somehow saying just the right words and knowing the right moves to make Hayate trip all over herself (especially with the children comment )

Well, I too am not completely sold (( my heart's with the 300 )), but as far as just 6th Division go, with the less-morbid and more-easily-embarrassed Hayate, and the more confident-playful Yuuno, I am sold. And besides...honestly, it's much easier to write, due to their characterizations. The very-very-good-platonic-friends that is connected in the hearts charm of Yuunoha somehow is so powerful it cannot be transcribed into my fingers. Or rather I just suck at making a romance story between 2 very good friends... like those millions and millions of HarryHermione stories out there.

And what's with the shipping of Joseth!? You guys are really set on making something out, aren't you?

And I fear the Carim thing if she pulls an Aizen in canon. Let's face it, it's possible.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

And I fear the Carim thing if she pulls an Aizen in canon. Let's face it, it's possible.

Ah that reminds me.

Remember my earlier comments about Carim launching off on some "misguided justice" trajectory, alienating Riot 6, back in Epi... 7 I think? if that's the case, imagine the angst of the 21st. And Kha would take another step closer to being Amuro.

Even:

Kha: [Amuro]Why Carim... I don't understand...[/Amuro]
Carim: [Quess]What do you understand? You're always talking so big... (charges beam cannon and fires) WHEN YOU NEVER EVEN TRIED FOR ONCE!!![/Quess]

And here I go again, Carym = Gundam girl.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Kha

1. E-eh?! Don't make it sound so er... Church girls are so pure and innocent... What a sight to be--

YAMATE!!! What's gotten into me seriously? How did I go from Fate-fanboyism to Carim, of which we've hardly seen much of her?!

We have Skane to thank for that.

2. True. Shall I start releasing the various endings? It'll also show something about Keroko...

Yes, please!

3. Well... Now you've kicked off soooo many ideas, especially when you consider that programs don't die but power down, unless reformatted.

I see:

Dio: [Quatro Vageena]Are you... Kha?[/Quatro]
Kha: [Amuro]Dio ka?![/Amuro]

and that's just one when both work together until Dio disappears, then resurfaces in charge of the regrouped Neo Velka Army, in a battle named Dio's Counterattack, trying to drop a massive asteroid onto Mid Childa. Fate gets shot down, Alicia comes back to haunt both Kha and Dio...

OMG Imagination FULL DRIVE FTW.

Hey, it's my specialty. Giving the spark and letting others fan it into a blaze.

But we'll see how. Now the only problem is, THERE'S ANOTHER POWER LEVEL ABOVE NOBLES?! I only intended the Nobles to have been the max power available to FW because of his X rank, which is only 1 rank above SSS. I don't want anything to go pass that point, because in my dictionary, X = Godlike, and theoretically nothing is Beyond Godlike, only in DotA.

PLEASE! Let's not go above rank X!!!!
The OC Nanohaverse is already way more dangerous than the Canonverse! Not to mention the Aces are no longer the trump cards of the TSAB! What more do you guys want?

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Well, I too am not completely sold (( my heart's with the 300 )), but as far as just 6th Division go, with the less-morbid and more-easily-embarrassed Hayate, and the more confident-playful Yuuno, I am sold. And besides...honestly, it's much easier to write, due to their characterizations. The very-very-good-platonic-friends that is connected in the hearts charm of Yuunoha somehow is so powerful it cannot be transcribed into my fingers. Or rather I just suck at making a romance story between 2 very good friends... like those millions and millions of HarryHermione stories out there.

Agreed on every point there. You actually gave me ideas for the Hayate and Aurion drama part in my scenarios. Thanks a lot!

And what's with the shipping of Joseth!? You guys are really set on making something out, aren't you?

We're trying to pair up every MR. ATTITUDE here with our lovely Bachelorette, Keroko-chan! *XYZ Shot and ICB'd*

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Kha

Okaaay. Now I really have no idea what to say. Some of the ideas were too ported from other series to be made fanon without becoming a full crossover.

But we'll see how. Now the only problem is, THERE'S ANOTHER POWER LEVEL ABOVE NOBLES?! I only intended the Nobles to have been the max power available to FW because of his X rank, which is only 1 rank above SSS. I don't want anything to go pass that point, because in my dictionary, X = Godlike, and theoretically nothing is Beyond Godlike, only in DotA.

What's the power level you're talking about? AT? It's not like its powers in my interpretation can be measured by current ranks, it's even more RPS than AO - users of regular magic (aka variants of Terran magic) have NO means to do anything against it, while it can do nothing to divine or chaotic spells either. Its second ability can be possibly measured by ranks though (and will depend on the wielder's capacity). If we go with SaintX's view and Antimagic, I'm not the one to explain it probably, I have no idea how it would work in ordinary worlds, so ranking is difficult too. Or do you mean The Creators race? They're no more except FW. They were basically what can be called Gods. FW doesn't have their former power in his current state though (I think we've come to an agreement with SaintX about FW's distant past). AO and AT were meant to have absolute power in their respective fields, but with the gradual evolution of Multiverse (appearance of new powers not present when they were created) and in abscense of their former energy source they're currently quite limited.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

What's the power level you're talking about? AT? It's not like its powers in my interpretation can be measured by current ranks, it's even more RPS than AO - users of regular magic (aka variants of Terran magic) have NO means to do anything against it, while it can do nothing to divine or chaotic spells either. Its second ability can be possibly measured by ranks though (and will depend on the wielder's capacity). If we go with SaintX's view and Antimagic, I'm not the one to explain it probably, I have no idea how it would work in ordinary worlds, so ranking is difficult too. Or do you mean The Creators race? They're no more except FW. They were basically what can be called Gods. FW doesn't have their former power in his current state though (I think we've come to an agreement with SaintX about FW's distant past). AO and AT were meant to have absolute power in their respective fields, but with the gradual evolution of Multiverse (appearance of new powers not present when they were created) and in abscense of their former energy source they're currently quite limited.

No. I was referring to Saint X's Royals, who are the upgraded Nobles, when I created Nobles as the maximum, then in Saint X's PM that appeared.

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Kha

No. I was referring to Saint X's Royals, who are the upgraded Nobles, when I created Nobles as the maximum, then in Saint X's PM that appeared.

Ah, found it. Well, they don't necessarily have to be X ... Maybe SSS+ Or like Nobles with a wider range of abilities ... I'm not the one who created them anyway They can be very limited in numbers, and if some are physically immortal (like possessing infinitely regenerating life force) they'd be perfect hosts for AT

EDIT:

They should also have some distinctive names and titles to be able to say:

???: Before you die, stubborn girl, I will tell you my name - I am *XXXXX*, Prince of *something*.

[unleashes his ultimate attack]

[Erio]

Sorry guys for not commenting on all the stuff that has been posted in the last couple days... I've been quite busy, at work, and at home.

I'll see if I can comment on some of the latest stuff later...

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

What's the power level you're talking about? AT? It's not like its powers in my interpretation can be measured by current ranks, it's even more RPS than AO - users of regular magic (aka variants of Terran magic) have NO means to do anything against it, while it can do nothing to divine or chaotic spells either. Its second ability can be possibly measured by ranks though (and will depend on the wielder's capacity). If we go with SaintX's view and Antimagic, I'm not the one to explain it probably, I have no idea how it would work in ordinary worlds, so ranking is difficult too. Or do you mean The Creators race? They're no more except FW. They were basically what can be called Gods. FW doesn't have their former power in his current state though (I think we've come to an agreement with SaintX about FW's distant past). AO and AT were meant to have absolute power in their respective fields, but with the gradual evolution of Multiverse (appearance of new powers not present when they were created) and in abscense of their former energy source they're currently quite limited.

Thinking in terms of regular magic/dark magic/divine magic, AO has absolute power over regular magic, right? What would be AT's field?

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Erio

Thinking in terms of regular magic/dark magic/divine magic, AO has absolute power over regular magic, right? What would be AT's field?

That's currently being discussed. My point of view regarding the power over magic particles: AO has the powers of Manipulation and Creation (though Creation is somewhat twisted - since it's impossible to create magic particles out of nothing now it needs to trade an equivalent amount of regular matter and/or energy to do this, thus the process would look like destruction for anybody who can't see magic particles; I've shown it in use once, the ability requires much more effort than manipulation); AT has the powers of Interdiction and Destruction (the first means it can make magic particles kind of inert, thus preventing any usage of them - the levels of effect may be different: from countering AO's manipulation to total ban on any regular magic being cast; the second initially was meant to turn magic particles into nothing, but now turns them into equivalent amount of regular matter and/or energy instead, thus the process would look like creation for anybody who can't see magic particles; may have combat and non-combat uses). So basically they both work around regular magic, but have different fields of influence. SaintX has another idea, which involves Antimagic; I won't be posting it without permission yet. Both AO and AT have no powers over divine or dark magic, as this kinds of magic appeared after their creation and are independent from Terran magic. Nevertheless both Devices can stand their own against divine/dark-users using indirect effects of their abilities.