2012-09-17, 05:32 | Link #36983 | |
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Then again, at least it would pitch up the element of surprise that way so I have no problem if anyone sees it in any way.
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2012-09-17, 05:38 | Link #36985 |
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Oh, alright then. I'll come back to that later...
Now back to my main issue; plot summary. Should I change it? Because if you've been reading the past 2-3 chapters I've posted closely, it feels that the story itself is straying off of the Plot summary. |
2012-09-17, 05:41 | Link #36987 |
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@ Jak
Wait, I still haven't read 7 and 8, the connection remember? I'll try to read it now (I have to return between college and a friend's home, in fact) @ Demi As in "What the fuck" level bad. Yes, I knew, Ichika is not amongst the best protagonist, doesn't meant he can go even lower to even stupider and weaker protagonist.
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2012-09-17, 06:08 | Link #36993 |
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@ Demi
To be fair, I didn't hate Shinji as himself because the (literal) God Forsaken situation he's in. (nobody is sane in that verse) If Shinji is in Ichika's place and he's still like that... well... I pray for your survival. @ Stratos I'm sometimes confused with what Beam Magnum means, probably a piercing weapon. But that's not the point. Rule of thumb is that I.S. weapon are 1.75 times the human equivalent. For example, a 50 BMG sniper is the equivalent of light hunting rifle in terms of size to I.S.
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2012-09-17, 06:09 | Link #36994 |
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You'd need to have mountain leveling beam cannons to actually give recoil as far as I know.
O.o The Ichika in my head has a trauma, one he buried since it was... trivial. As a kid, he was always in the Shinonono dojo and his only role model was Chifuyu. The equation gets muddled when a male senpai(faceless and never to be mentioned) becomes a brother figure to the boy and gives him this short creed "I still have my pride as a man.". This pushes Ichika to actually take pride in himself and strive to be the best he can be. That's why he could be badass and help those girls from the bullies. Eventually he mellows out but he still takes it to heart. The kidnapping breaks him when he hears that Chifuyu is being told to miss her Mondo Grosso Championship match for him. He tries to escape on his own and gets shot and tortured for his troubles. He gets a tongue lashing that sometimes no matter how hard you struggle or how much you believe that everything will be alright, there won't be a hero to save the day. The good guy will finish last, and the girl will be lost to the bad guy. Sometimes reality just happens and he was just too weak to do anything about it. They leave him roughed up and for Chifuyu to find later on. Ever since then, he always has this mentality that he can't fight. But overall he's still a nice guy. Last edited by demino_hellsin; 2012-09-17 at 06:19. |
2012-09-17, 06:24 | Link #36997 |
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@ Demi
Then that's justified, and the whole story can be justified. But him being suicidal really gave opposite view, more like, so careful he's a slowass. @ Hawke Reaction images are forbidden as per rule 3.3.,otherwise, I sort of agree... hence stay silent.
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2012-09-17, 06:29 | Link #36998 | |
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Spoiler for Spec Module:
Basically, add-ons for the Minerva. Remember that one scene where Inami asks why Jinrai's making seven copies of his combat data? They are for the add-ons, known as Specialist Modules, or Spec Modules. At the moment, there are six Modules in total: Spoiler for Spec Modules:
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2012-09-17, 06:29 | Link #36999 |
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I was actually just planning to have Ichika not go second shift at all and have the girls go into second shift.
It'll be funny as hell to imagine Blue Tear's high speed packet trailing behind normal Byakushiki. Though at that point Byakushiki is probably crumbling @zero: Actually, Ichika's mentality eventually devolves to... "If happy ends don't happen, then I'll make them happen. Even if I have to die for them." One thing he hates is a repeat of the incident again, ever. He becomes sort of bipolar. Super wimpy when switched off, suicidal supersoldier when triggered. |
2012-09-17, 06:36 | Link #37000 |
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@ Stratos
Just a little two cent to take a consideration, but this is not strictly necessary. Module weight is less about statistic and more about placement. So for a heavy pack concentrated on the back like that will cause huge imbalance and thus the practical performance will be less than 93% as he claim. @ Demi Up to you Before the frame can crumble, I think the compression chamber will blow up first unless it's really designed stupidly like that. Though, Hinatsu prototype aren't much better...
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