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RobotCat · 2013-09-22, 07:02

Assort Dis: Thanks for your feedback, glad the changes helped.

Pages 10-24 Draft v2, quite a bit of changes this time again too.

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RobotCat · 2013-09-23, 07:00

Pages 25-45 2nd draft. I'm pretty much not going to make any more change aside from some dialogue wording fixes and some text bubble fixes. Inking all of the pages before the deadline is going to be a pain.

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RobotCat · 2013-10-01, 20:37

Here's the finished entry:

http://www.xionsphere.com/danart/ShonenJump/Final/

...And I can't submit it because apparently the contest website operates on Japanese Time, so it stopped taking submissions even though it's still October 1st in the US. I already tried contacting everyone that's even remotely related to the contest. Maybe if enough other people also can't submit they might do something about it.

Anyways, the entry is still pretty rough in a lot of places. There's still a lot of things I need to work on. Hopefully they'll do the contest again next year and I'll start in June instead of August.

Vexx · 2013-10-01, 22:16

Fascinating read even in the rough draft state. Also very dynamic - great art. I'd ask you if you do commissions but you're neck deep in this I suppose. Good luck.

RobotCat · 2013-10-01, 23:01

Well I'm actually done. The deadline was today and I finished it, but ended up being unable to submit it =/.

Anyways, thanks for reading it. I don't do commissions because I generally want to work on my own projects in my free time. I've actually been wanting to do a lot of other stuff but have been focusing on this entry for the last 2 and a half months so now that I'm finished I want to work on some of those new things instead.

Vexx · 2013-10-02, 00:14

Tally Ho. Again, good luck

winhlp32 · 2013-10-03, 05:04

The final work looks great. Having everything cleaned up and "inked" really made a lot of difference. Too bad about the competition though.

Looking forward to whatever you come up with in the future!

RobotCat · 2013-10-07, 03:37

Thanks for the comments. Anyways, now that that's over I'm going back to the project before this contest, which was a Wuxia manga/novel hybrid. I'm going to be doing a series of 'shorts' that sort of layout the various martial arts that the different schools use, and also as way to do more sequential practice.

RobotCat · 2014-01-15, 05:41

Now that I know for sure they didn't receive my entry, I've decided to go ahead and try to make a webcomic that follows the first arc of the story that I originally planned for after the one shot.

I'm resigning the characters are a bit since the original designs were made to be more or less 'disposable'. I'll be designing the complete PVP ranks #1-15 in the upcoming weeks, as quite a few of them will show up in the first arc either as side characters or cameos.

2013-10-01, 22:16	Link #24
Vexx Obey the Darkly Cute ... Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: On the whole, I'd rather be in Kyoto ... Age: 67	Fascinating read even in the rough draft state. Also very dynamic - great art. I'd ask you if you do commissions but you're neck deep in this I suppose. Good luck. __________________ "It Really IS Rocket Science", Novel series rough drafts; vol. 1 thru vol. 3 complete Volume 4 in work, Visit the thread for short stories!

2013-10-02, 00:14	Link #26
Vexx Obey the Darkly Cute ... Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: On the whole, I'd rather be in Kyoto ... Age: 67	Tally Ho. Again, good luck __________________ "It Really IS Rocket Science", Novel series rough drafts; vol. 1 thru vol. 3 complete Volume 4 in work, Visit the thread for short stories!

2013-10-03, 05:04	Link #27
winhlp32 (¬‿¬) Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Boyzone	The final work looks great. Having everything cleaned up and "inked" really made a lot of difference. Too bad about the competition though. Looking forward to whatever you come up with in the future! __________________ 　　　　　　　　　　 \| 　　　＼　　( ^p^ )／　　　　￣￣ / 　　　　　　　/ 　　　　　／　＼\| 　　　　/

2013-10-07, 03:37	Link #28
RobotCat In a Box Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Somewhere on the west coast	Thanks for the comments. Anyways, now that that's over I'm going back to the project before this contest, which was a Wuxia manga/novel hybrid. I'm going to be doing a series of 'shorts' that sort of layout the various martial arts that the different schools use, and also as way to do more sequential practice. Last edited by RobotCat; 2013-10-10 at 01:43.

2014-01-15, 05:41	Link #29
RobotCat In a Box Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Somewhere on the west coast	Now that I know for sure they didn't receive my entry, I've decided to go ahead and try to make a webcomic that follows the first arc of the story that I originally planned for after the one shot. I'm resigning the characters are a bit since the original designs were made to be more or less 'disposable'. I'll be designing the complete PVP ranks #1-15 in the upcoming weeks, as quite a few of them will show up in the first arc either as side characters or cameos. Last edited by RobotCat; 2014-01-17 at 05:47.

2013-09-22, 07:02	Link #21
RobotCat In a Box Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Somewhere on the west coast	Assort Dis: Thanks for your feedback, glad the changes helped. Pages 10-24 Draft v2, quite a bit of changes this time again too. Images Sorry; dynamic content not loaded. Reload?

2013-09-23, 07:00	Link #22
RobotCat In a Box Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Somewhere on the west coast	Pages 25-45 2nd draft. I'm pretty much not going to make any more change aside from some dialogue wording fixes and some text bubble fixes. Inking all of the pages before the deadline is going to be a pain. Images Sorry; dynamic content not loaded. Reload?

2013-10-01, 20:37	Link #23
RobotCat In a Box Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Somewhere on the west coast	Here's the finished entry: http://www.xionsphere.com/danart/ShonenJump/Final/ ...And I can't submit it because apparently the contest website operates on Japanese Time, so it stopped taking submissions even though it's still October 1st in the US. I already tried contacting everyone that's even remotely related to the contest. Maybe if enough other people also can't submit they might do something about it. Anyways, the entry is still pretty rough in a lot of places. There's still a lot of things I need to work on. Hopefully they'll do the contest again next year and I'll start in June instead of August.

2013-10-01, 23:01	Link #25
RobotCat In a Box Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Somewhere on the west coast	Well I'm actually done. The deadline was today and I finished it, but ended up being unable to submit it =/. Anyways, thanks for reading it. I don't do commissions because I generally want to work on my own projects in my free time. I've actually been wanting to do a lot of other stuff but have been focusing on this entry for the last 2 and a half months so now that I'm finished I want to work on some of those new things instead.