Since no one's noticing me I may have to regain attention by doing the below:
Spoiler for preview:
“A cat?”
Both Nanoha and Fate nodded as to answer yes. Ginga scratched the back of her head and looked around, as if she had noticed something peculiar. Nanoha and Fate warily waited, and the anticipation rose as Ginga turned back to them.
“Well?” they asked.
“I think I may have seen one, but--” Ginga’s words were cut off when Nanoha and Fate bombarded her with questions regarding Fuuko, including descriptions on the lunar cat. “Ah! You must be talking about that fork-tailed cat, right?”
“Yes! Yes!” Nanoha and Fate replied. “So where did you see it?”
“Let me see…” Ginga put a finger upon her cheek and stared upward, thinking or remembering something. “I saw it-- ettou… what’s its name?”
“Fuuko,” Nanoha told her.
“I saw Fuuko entering the kitchen minutes ago,” Ginga said. “It must be looking for something to eat--”
“Let’s go, Fate-chan!”
Ginga was left with lots of questions circling around her head as Nanoha and Fate rushed to the said location without thanking her. She did not the chance to ask what had happened, and was dumbfounded for a few seconds. “Oh, well.” She resumed her trip to Officer Nakajima’s officer; she noticed a peculiar-looking tail jutting out of the T-junction. “That must be Fuuko.” Slowly she approached the tail from the behind but it disappeared without a trace. “Are? I thought it was here just now--”
“Meow.”
Ginga turned around. There it was, the fork-tailed lunar cat Nanoha and Fate were looking for. “Oh, hello, Fuuko-chan,” Ginga greeted. “Nanoha and Fate were looking for you just now.”
“Meow.”
“What’s the matter? Is there something wrong?” Ginga asked and approached Fuuko. The lunar cat’s response was playful as it pounced at the woman, trying to grab her leg. Ginga squealed in surprise and stepped back from Fuuko. “Fuuko-chan, what are you trying to do?” Fuuko meowed and jumped at Ginga again; this time it got leg and licked it, causing Ginga to gasp in shock. “Fuuko-chan, dame!” Ginga let go off the cat and ran down the alley; Fuuko merely meowed and chased after Ginga. The woman was heard whimpering in suggestive cries as she tried outrunning the lunar cat. “Iyaa! Dareka!”
They happened to run past several passing TSAB officers. Hearing her distressed cry caused them to rush toward her, only to be greeted by a scene like nothing else.
// ENTERING THEIR HEAD //
Ginga was laughing as she ran down the road. Her face was filled with expression of happiness and bliss, and there was bubbly effects surrounding her as she playfully outran Fuuko. “Ikuyo, Fuuko-chan!” she called out between her laughs.
“Meow…!” was Fuuko’s only reply
The two kept running and outrunning each other, oblivious of what was really happening around them.
// LEAVING THEIR HEAD //
Male officers nosebled and threw their fists into the air. “FUUKO-CHAN SAIKKO DESU!” they roared in approval. “BANZAI! BANZAI!”
Their female colleagues bashed the boys’ head with metal harisen. “BAAKA HENTAI!” they shouted.
“We aren’t doing anything!” male officers replied and were again hit on the head.
What do you think?
FUUKO-CHAN, BANZAI!!!
But wait, isn't Fuuko female?
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The Whistling Gale
Lyrical of Time Status: Charter 2 Progress: 35% Note: just resumed working on it after 2-month hiatus. Nothing much is going to be featured in the chapter, with the exception of Yuuno as the first half of the chapter's main focus. Then the story switches to Alexandra's first day of training at the bureau as a recruit. Guess who's going to train her?
Shin?
Nanoha?
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Originally Posted by USB500
Do you want some more?
YES!!!
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Spoiler for widuri's image?:
*gasp* It cannot be! Hikki really is a lucky bast---
*dodges Squall Breaker Unlimited Discharge*
Spoiler for Widuri & Hikki?:
Note that in the two pictures, Widuri's eye colour changes. That's because her eye can change colour.
*gasp*
Widuri looks WAY more beautiful than I ever imagined!!!
Hikki, you lucky guy!
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Originally Posted by KBTKaiser
@Aaron
If I fully copy the original personalities, Gouken will be so irritating that he'll probably eat crossfire shift from Teana daily.
Well, speed is his specialty, right?
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Spoiler for Atarana Bakusou!! Part B:
Throughout the 108th Base, alarms blared as the designated path was completely cleared with reports of the signals speeding up even further. The front desk was cleared, save for the single aide that contacted Genya. Additional orders were relayed and followed as an ID card scanner was placed so that someone could scan on the run while rushing past the front desk. Two seconds later, the open doors of the entrance rattled as the white streak sailed by, the speed vacuum sucking papers off the front desk as the ID card scanner registered two entries. The Aide looked at the display as the IDs were processed...
Aide: Seimonji Retsugou and Seimonji Goukon?
Meanwhile...
The white streak began to waver as the two began to fight for the lead. Just as they entered Genya's office, they crossed each other's knees and tangled up one foot as they lost their balance, rolling into the office and slamming into the wall, earning a wince from both Genya and Ginga.
Genya: Well, I guess you were right about not needing to stop them...
Ginga: I suppose I'll untangle them now?
Genya: I've got it covered...A-TEN-HUT!
Like the trained soldiers they were, the two brothers quickly seperated and stood straight as boards.
Red?: Seimonji Retsugou, reporting for duty!
Blue?: Seimonji Goukon, also reporting for duty!
Genya took one look at their overly nervous faces, smirked and burst out laughing as he composed himself and hit the button for the intercom.
Genya: All troops return to what you were doing. The emergency is over.
Ginga was also stifling a giggle as Genya shut off the intercom and looked at the two again. Retsugou was still maintaining his calm composure, but Goukon looked like he was about to burst.
Genya: At ease, boys. I see that your training has paid off. As of your time of reporting, you two are now assigned directly under Sgt. Ginga Nakajima. Dismissed...
As the two boys relaxed, Genya whirled behind them and grabbed them in a bear hug around the neck.
Genya: Damn, you two have grown. It's been a long time, boys.
Retsugou: The same to you, Genya-jisan. I see you've been keeping busy.
Goukon: Gah! Leggo, Uncle Genya! Gin-neechan, a little help here?
Ginga: Commander, don't choke my subordinates now...
Genya: Oh, right, sorry boys.
Genya let go, allowing the two brothers some air.
Genya: Alright, back to work now. Ginga, they're in your hands now.
Genya took a seat at his desk once more as Ginga ushered the two brothers out. The next item in his list raised an eyebrow as he pulled up a communications window and called in. The other side responded quickly, responding in audio only.
???: Yes, Captain Nakajima?
Genya: About your transfer request, I'd like to send two more people along as well. They recently transfered here today, but I think they'll perform better with your group.
???: I see...how much potential are we looking at?
Genya: A pair of brothers with self-customized devices, which I think is their 4th overhaul. Neo-Belkan magic type. I think they'll give your Lightning squad guard wing a run for his money in terms of speed.
???: Hmmm...I'll take them. Will you send their histories as well?
Genya: The requested personnel will hold the data. If you want some extra info, ask Subaru about a pair of speed demon brothers.
???: That I will. Good day, Nakajima-butaichou.
Genya: And you as well, Yagami-butaichou.
As the comm line cut, Genya reclined in his seat again.
Genya: Finally, some peace and quiet. If those two stayed here, I'd probably never hear the end of their arguements...
Hrm... another 2 parts, I think?
One for their military school/emergency response team history, and another for the RF6 transfer, I guess?
Sounds promising. Let's see how they interact with the Nakajima sisters!
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Originally Posted by Nightengale
Are you going to make a Takaba too? I've always like the Tri-series, especially the ZMC. The shonen-ness of the upgrade to ZMC was...
Yeah. Tri-dagger ZMC was really neat. (I still don't get why it still gets smashed by Broken Gigant though.)
And while your at it, why not make a spoiled brat with the Spin-series. Those may not have been the most popular, but the design where really slick. Thunder Drift was quite cool.
Or maybe, make the antgonists now.
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Originally Posted by KBTKaiser
I'm in the process of grabbing a torrent VOBs of all 153 eps and the 2 OVAs, totaling 24.94 GB.
In short, Mikuni and Takaba are gonna be the next set if I do create them. >>;
Well, I said that I did want to give Graham a make-over...so here it is. (( Note, this will be the template used to if I plan on creating my clone!Graham villain ))
Spoiler for Gil Graham:
Spoiler for Graham's Barrier Jacket:
After Purge/Take-Off (( like Chrono's blue jumpsuit ))
And this are well...characters I both plan and is still a little wary about introducing.
Spoiler for Alicia's Grandma/Precia's mother:
Spoiler for Teh evil Necromancer:
...or
Right now, I'm still not sure which template is better. Both are awesome.
Not to mention I'm having a hard time trying to think of a suitable image for Regius... what I have in mind is a 10~15 year old, less dorky and more angry version of...
Spoiler for this....:
If anyone can spare some ideas, please do...Let not only Chaos and Night be the lone wolfs out there.
__________________
Night~and~Gale: ~ The Final Mythology of the Man who Defied Destiny.
The sleeping lion shall awaken beyond the depths of time, crossing ten billion lights, come to Terra.
Not to mention I'm having a hard time trying to think of a suitable image for Regius... what I have in mind is a 10~15 year old, less dorky and more angry version of...
Spoiler for this....:
I can't believe this is the only picture I Recognized
Curse you, 'fat' cat!
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Originally Posted by Nightengale
If anyone can spare some ideas, please do...Let not only Chaos and Night be the lone wolfs out there.
Unfortunately, we're really alone in this The world suddenly feels so big and scary....
*cough*
Moving on, back to the topic -
Spoiler for Clyde's Barrier Jacket:
Just have to trade the RED with BLACK AND, he's going to use the 'mask'
Picture Hei from Darker than Black
As for Lindy, unless I can find more images of her as a Loli, I'll just go with this as default option...
Spoiler for Lindy's Barrier Jacket:
Of course, I'm open to more suggestions for her if you people have any
If I knew KhaxHarem is going to bring up a morality debate, I'd get it up sooner! Anyways...
I am the soul of my inspiration.
The pen is my blade, and ink is my blood.
I have written over a thousand crosses.
Unaware of loss.
Nor aware of gain.
Have seen enough to create many worlds.
And still waiting for one's arrival.
I have no regrets; this is my only path
So, as I pray, invoke my deepest strength...
"Unlimited Bluecheesium Works"
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- Beware of pulling an Athrun Zala... we all know what happened to Cagalli... and just because polygamy's okay doesn't mean the girls want it to be.
Then again, the thought of...Chrono Freedom-ing Kha for being unfaithful is pretty...enticing.
- Actually...no.
Spoiler for AFTER Saga:
Saga's and his knight's revival/awakening is ironically...around the same time Reinforce died.
1. I know. Dramaaaaa!!!
2. This scenario came to mind:
Spoiler for Chrono Freedom:
[Freedom]What are you doing? Do you think your actions are justified?! Fate-chan is crying![/Freedom]
I like.
3. Noted. Then Kha's Daddy, since Graham and him were old friends, when they were in the same unit during boot camp and kept in touch despite Tou falling out of favor and eventually leaving the force.
Touareg was a womanizer btw... A good one that never got caught... Probably even better than Clyde ever was. Should his son be any less?
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Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen
At least wait till my lone island scenario comes out first
Or are my ideas really that revolutionary?
They certainly influenced me for my Sakura ZakiXSyaoran Midorial Lonely Island Scenario.
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Originally Posted by Saint X
Spoiler for It only Happened Once:
AN: This following scene is gathered from the Mission Archives of the 'Gold Squad' - a unit similar to the Stars and Lightning of modern time- but with three Aces instead- and these Aces are known before the name Nanoha was even bestowed upon the still to be born Takamachi Daughter- but now forgotten- said aces now Mothers of their own, living on Earth- Even managing to nurture the next generation of bureau aces)
Unknown area, 97th Non-administrated world.
"C****o!!!"
Kyla's screams can be heard in the open yet dark meadow, her two other comrades, Lindy and Momoko- also known as Peach, unable to do anything. Kyla was being assaulted by an unknown person in a black cloak and wearing a black pointed hat to cover the head- a wooden stick pointed at said mage. The two others have two more of these stick-wielding men each restraining them, unable to use their devices- Peach's staff on the ground while Lindy's wings were unable to activate- some sort of spell have been cast upon them.
"Kyla!" Lindy could only yell as their comrade slumped to the ground, still in pain.
"You insolents... do you ever think that what you are doing is magic?" Kyla's torturer asked mockingly.
"You won't win..." Kyla managed to say between pain gritted teeth. "And we'll get that artifact you accursed beings have been protecting..."
Kyla's torturer increased the pain. and then after a few moments, Kyla's eyes became blank, and the struggling stopped. the torturer let go.
Kyla was unmoving...
no breathing...
she was...
"Dead... she did not even managed to feel the full power of my other curses..." the torturer said as he now moved to the other two "Now who will be next? Is it you Lady? or the Japanese?" he then asked the two, swinging his stick at Lindy and Peach. "Might as well kill the both of you then... A***a..."
Then, a sudden wind jolts all five dark men, rocking them of their feet- chance. Peach throws one far away and as the other one restraining her was surprised, she managed to pick up her eerily familiar red-orbed, golden framed, pink and white staff, change its form and aim it at the flying enemy.
[Divine Buster]
The move was flawless, target eliminated- earning the shock of the dark men.
"Why you! A***a K******a!" the torturer yelled, sending a bolt of green towards Lindy.
The spell was just a waste of energy- for Lindy's AT sickness was still there- and it bounced right back to the caster- earning a WTF gasp before being killed by his own bolt.
[Vacuum Field]
The as sudden as the turn of events, the remaining dark men collapsed, air knocked from their lungs. The two quickly went to a now recovering Kyla, with some marks appearing on the bare parts of her body- glowing profusely.
Back on the Starbreaker, they have managed to ger live feed back and Captain Rhea was shocked as she looked at Kyla and her marks...
"No... those are..."
- Suspense...
Ah... Yes... Parry Hotter... HE'S NOT EVEN BORN YET IF WE'RE USING THE STANDARDIZED TIMELINE!!!
Though that doesn't leave out the OWSNBM. Go figure.
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Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise
Here's a small update (mainly called update due to pictures) and kind of prelude to ... something
Spoiler for World's Colors, Prelude I:
World’s Colors
I was sitting in my new “office” in deep darkness. It was only 6 P.M. and the sun should’ve not set yet but the room had no windows. I didn’t turn any lights on and several working monitors were barely able to make their closest surroundings visible. I was working with one of them while the rest showed the outside view – a peaceful underwater landscape filled with all kinds of native life forms.
I’ve called the room my new “office” but it was actually a temporary substitute for my official apartments in the capital. And it was located underwater indeed, being the room designed to belong to the captain of Niddhogg. The massive battle cruiser was currently lying on the bottom of a nearby water body several hundred meters below its surface.
Such change of places was quite sudden but there were good reasons for it. And many of them were connected to the report I had in front of my eyes now. It consisted of two parts, first of which wasn’t exactly important at the moment, but I liked to deal with everything in the order of appearance, so I started with it.
It was a compilation of profiles on the members of my unit, but not the regular ones. These were the profiles used by the Tripartite to estimate the person’s capabilities and possible threat level and were not open to public. Normally only TSAB officers starting from the rank of Department’s Director had access to them, and it took me quite a while to get my hands on this data. I didn’t expect to find anything new for me there, but I wanted to know how the Tripartite regarded each of us.
I opened the file and saw that the data was arranged in three separate groups:
General Information
Combat Capabilities
Background Details
Spoiler for General Information:
Anatoly Belov
Full Name: Anatoly Aleksandrovitsch Belov
Spoiler for Image:
Occupation: Head Combat Instructor, TSAB Intelligence Department
Military Rank: Major
Official Mage Rank: S
Magic Style: Neo-Belkan
Specialization: close range combat and high-energy bombardment
Estimated Threat Level, personal: S+, former leader of an elite Enforcer unit, had a lot of real combat experience, never takes an opponent lightly; due to the Auto-Shield augmentation of his Device combines great offensive and defensive powers
Estimated Threat Level, overall: S+, no particular remarks
Mirian El Meyruun
Full Name: none, true name unknown, named Mirian after being recovered by TSAB, El Meyruun corresponds to the name of her world of origin
Spoiler for Image:
Occupation: Junior Investigator, TSAB Intelligence Department Special Section D
Military Rank: eq. Second Lieutenant
Official Mage Rank: AAA
Magic Style: Mid-Childa
Specialization: summoning, capable of support and healing magic
Estimated Threat Level, personal: S to SSS, possesses an unusual summoning ability theoretically allowing to bring anything into existence; threat level of currently observed capabilities can be ranked as S; if she is confirmed as the source of her home world’s demise the threat level can be raised up to SSS
Estimated Threat Level, overall: SSS, was a part of an eugenic project aimed to breed the ultimate summoner, which almost succeeded; as long as a sample of her DNA exists the threat of said project being resurrected remains high
Ramsus Lakarn
Full Name: Ramsus, adopted Lakarn
Spoiler for Image:
Occupation: Investigator, TSAB Intelligence Department Special Section D
Military Rank: eq. Captain
Official Mage Rank: AAA+
Magic Style: Mid-Childa
Specialization: long range sniping and area bombardment, capable of close range combat
Estimated Threat Level, personal: S+, possesses a Device with Magical Resonance augmentation, is a possible survivor of the Shepherd Project (inherited traits unknown)
Estimated Threat Level, overall: S+ to SS, depends on his actual relation to the Shepherd Project and its legacy
Sarah S’Zet
Full Name: Sarah Adelaide S’Zet IV
Spoiler for Image:
Occupation: Head of R&D Section, TSAB Intelligence Department
Military Rank: none
Official Mage Rank: AA
Magic Style: Mid-Childa and Neo-Belkan
Specialization: stealth and medium range combat, capable in almost any field of magic except summoning
Estimated Threat Level, personal: AAA+ to S, is a very versatile fighter, aside from magic frequently uses different high-tech gadgets including combat nanomachines; possibly has psyonic abilities (level unconfirmed)
Estimated Threat Level, overall: SSS, is the head and only living member of S’Zet family – the richest independent organization in known time-space, openly governing dozens of worlds and indirectly influencing an even bigger amount; possesses some of the most advanced research facilities and a personal army rivaling TSAB Ground Forces, Navy and Air Force combined
Serge Blanc Romardo
Full Name: Serge Louis Blanc, adopted Romardo
Spoiler for Image:
Occupation: Head Investigator, TSAB Intelligence Department Special Section D
Military Rank: eq. Colonel
Official Mage Rank: AAA
Magic Style: Mid-Childa
Specialization: Flow Manipulation and piercing attacks
Estimated Threat Level, personal: SS, possesses an extremely rare ability of Flow Manipulation, rendering almost any magical attack against him ineffective; his capabilities are further boosted by his Device – a Lost Logia capable of controlling magic particles; may also use high-tech gadgets and conventional weapons
Estimated Threat Level, overall: SSS+ or higher, his Device presumably doesn’t belong to the current Multiverse and already outlived an unknown number of them (impossible to confirm), thus possessing close to godlike powers; in case it finds a way around its current energy limitations the threat level can be raised up to X
“Well, quite interesting,” – I mumbled, - “but nothing unexpected. Let’s see what else they dug up …”
So the big boss... I wonder what he has got planned. And Serge's looking pretty cool, but I doubt he smokes, does he? Fits him if he did, and would also highlight his response to the dying wider-verse. As in, "We're all gonna die anyway, not even gods are eternal, so why bother denying yourself?", kind of thinking.
Just my random $0.02.
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Originally Posted by Nightengale
More spell list this time round. This time for Alia/Lotte. And also some combination attacks they possess.
Spoiler for Alia/Lotte:
Alia/Lotte Lieze:AAA+ ranked, age 5 (( S- when working together )) Device:Disposable Magic-contained Orbs
Spells
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General Spells
Round Shield — A powerful shield that can withstand a prolonged attack.
Transformation — Shapeshifting magic couple with form transformation for non-familiar/animal forms.
Physical Heal - A healing spell that heals wounds.
Ring Bind — A basic capture-type spell in which magic rings are used to hold the target in one place. Being a basic spell, it has a weak power. However, since it can be quickly casted and there is an advantage in its aplication (such as multiple targets 'lock-on', or deliberate delayed activation), it still is a very effective magic.
Dispel Force Field — Self-explainatory.
Temporal Force Field — In order to "mask" magical effects from public view.
Chain Bind — This binding magic can additionally cut through physical objects if "pulled" hard enough.
Sonic Move - Self-explainatory.
Link - Allows emphatic link to the amount of magic they're recieving from Graham or each other.
(( They are also capable of conventional offensive spells overall. ))
Alia Ranged Offensive Spells
(( All of the weapon forms are stored in the disposable orbs. She doesn't need them to shoot, but it saves energy consumption from the master ))
MG-47 - Storage channelling medium-rifle, as it works to channel and translate raw magical energy into condensed magical bullets. C- level of attack, used for general anti-conventional non-armored enemies.
Serpentia Double-G - Anti-Armor Double Gatling Storage-Disposable Device, Serpentia. It combines extremely weak diversion rounds along with powered piercing rounds to blow past armorings. B+ level of attack.
Tertiary Double-G - Anti-Tank Triple-Effect Combination Gatling Device. Each barrel from each load combines a leverage of piercing shells, anti-personell shells, and bomb-shells to triple boost the effects of 3-low powered continous barrage of magical shots into a powerful attacks. AAA level of attack.
G-Positron Shoot - Anti-Fortress Single Shoot Breaker Spell. Releases a direct, extremely long range magical blast attack, that can be guided and pinpointed to a target, and exploded at will. S+ level of attack.
Lotte's CQC Skills/Spells
Blade Dancer - Summons a pair of anti-protection dagger, along with the effects of Sonic Boost over the body's limbs and muscles and brain, making them extremely flexible and responsive. This brain-boost effect strangely gives her a temporary boost of hair length as well, making her look like Alia. Using the extra-heightened flexibility, she fights with the twin dagger like an elegant cat dancer. Said to be the only time she looks more feminine and elegant than her sister.
Sonic Boost - A speed and reaction boost internally inside particular body parts, effective boosting their general speed and strength more so than regular boost and speed spells. Only usable by Lotte, as normal human body can't take the over-worked stress of differing speed reactions of different body parts.
Sonic Overload - Just like Sonic Boost, but rather than speed, it boost strength.
Sonic Limit - A combination of Sonic Boost and Sonic Overload. However, it works for only ONE body part at a time, due to the sheer level of stress it puts on the body.
Counter-Orb - Lotte's ranged spell, utilizing the orbs as it works as a damage dampener, disposing the orb's kept-in magical properties and works as a counter-reflection as the orb turns into a flying dagger to shoot back at the attacker. Ineffective against non-agressive spells and physical attacks.
Alia/Lotte Combination Skills
Twin Flush Breaker (TFB) :... Royal Heart Breaker with neko-twin familiars instead. Graham puts the 2 familiars at 100% synchro-rate that allows them to share their skilled specialties one-at-a-time as they double-team the enemy at full-sncyro.
Ghost Scale :...Rampage Ghost...with Lotte playing Alteisen with flying daggers/and hard punches, while Alia plays Weiss with spam-weapons.
Maximum Charge :
(( Rumours has it that Graham personally taught Alia and Lotte these skills, so apparently he can join the combination, but it is never actually sighted. ))
Graham/Lotte/Alia Combinations
Exceed Charge :
Formation G : Formation R... with alternating roles depending on type of offensive needs.
Yes, rip-offs...I know.
Not like you're the first to do that. And ARIA looked like Heavy Arms in a bishoujo... until I got to KOSMOS.
The Youtube made things a lot easier to visualize... Maybe I should cook up some Graham-Touareg interactions, with some of Kia. Unfortunately, I haven't gotten into the heads of these 2 characters yet, so it's gonna take a while.
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
By the way, I think I've found a suitable reference on how Aurion looks like.
Fits, don't ya think? :3
Wait till Kha sees this!
Kha:... FATHER?!
Hell yeah never expected that! That's probably the first reaction of Kha's when they met for the first time. And explains why he's rather close to Aurion too.
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Originally Posted by USB500
Since no one's noticing me I may have to regain attention by doing the below:
Spoiler for preview:
“A cat?”
Both Nanoha and Fate nodded as to answer yes. Ginga scratched the back of her head and looked around, as if she had noticed something peculiar. Nanoha and Fate warily waited, and the anticipation rose as Ginga turned back to them.
“Well?” they asked.
“I think I may have seen one, but--” Ginga’s words were cut off when Nanoha and Fate bombarded her with questions regarding Fuuko, including descriptions on the lunar cat. “Ah! You must be talking about that fork-tailed cat, right?”
“Yes! Yes!” Nanoha and Fate replied. “So where did you see it?”
“Let me see…” Ginga put a finger upon her cheek and stared upward, thinking or remembering something. “I saw it-- ettou… what’s its name?”
“Fuuko,” Nanoha told her.
“I saw Fuuko entering the kitchen minutes ago,” Ginga said. “It must be looking for something to eat--”
“Let’s go, Fate-chan!”
Ginga was left with lots of questions circling around her head as Nanoha and Fate rushed to the said location without thanking her. She did not the chance to ask what had happened, and was dumbfounded for a few seconds. “Oh, well.” She resumed her trip to Officer Nakajima’s officer; she noticed a peculiar-looking tail jutting out of the T-junction. “That must be Fuuko.” Slowly she approached the tail from the behind but it disappeared without a trace. “Are? I thought it was here just now--”
“Meow.”
Ginga turned around. There it was, the fork-tailed lunar cat Nanoha and Fate were looking for. “Oh, hello, Fuuko-chan,” Ginga greeted. “Nanoha and Fate were looking for you just now.”
“Meow.”
“What’s the matter? Is there something wrong?” Ginga asked and approached Fuuko. The lunar cat’s response was playful as it pounced at the woman, trying to grab her leg. Ginga squealed in surprise and stepped back from Fuuko. “Fuuko-chan, what are you trying to do?” Fuuko meowed and jumped at Ginga again; this time it got leg and licked it, causing Ginga to gasp in shock. “Fuuko-chan, dame!” Ginga let go off the cat and ran down the alley; Fuuko merely meowed and chased after Ginga. The woman was heard whimpering in suggestive cries as she tried outrunning the lunar cat. “Iyaa! Dareka!”
They happened to run past several passing TSAB officers. Hearing her distressed cry caused them to rush toward her, only to be greeted by a scene like nothing else.
// ENTERING THEIR HEAD //
Ginga was laughing as she ran down the road. Her face was filled with expression of happiness and bliss, and there was bubbly effects surrounding her as she playfully outran Fuuko. “Ikuyo, Fuuko-chan!” she called out between her laughs.
“Meow…!” was Fuuko’s only reply
The two kept running and outrunning each other, oblivious of what was really happening around them.
// LEAVING THEIR HEAD //
Male officers nosebled and threw their fists into the air. “FUUKO-CHAN SAIKKO DESU!” they roared in approval. “BANZAI! BANZAI!”
Their female colleagues bashed the boys’ head with metal harisen. “BAAKA HENTAI!” they shouted.
“We aren’t doing anything!” male officers replied and were again hit on the head.
What do you think?
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The Whistling Gale
Lyrical of Time Status: Charter 2 Progress: 35% Note: just resumed working on it after 2-month hiatus. Nothing much is going to be featured in the chapter, with the exception of Yuuno as the first half of the chapter's main focus. Then the story switches to Alexandra's first day of training at the bureau as a recruit. Guess who's going to train her?
Nothing like a Cat on a rampage to grab male attention ne? And Ginga-sama... Poor girl, being forced to fall on her face in the 4koma everytime, and over here forcing every sane male running after her pantsu. I'm sure if this thread was made during A's, Fate-chan would've suffered this Fate.
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Originally Posted by Nightengale
Well, I said that I did want to give Graham a make-over...so here it is. (( Note, this will be the template used to if I plan on creating my clone!Graham villain ))
Spoiler for Gil Graham:
Spoiler for Graham's Barrier Jacket:
After Purge/Take-Off (( like Chrono's blue jumpsuit ))
And this are well...characters I both plan and is still a little wary about introducing.
Spoiler for Alicia's Grandma/Precia's mother:
Spoiler for Teh evil Necromancer:
...or
Right now, I'm still not sure which template is better. Both are awesome.
Not to mention I'm having a hard time trying to think of a suitable image for Regius... what I have in mind is a 10~15 year old, less dorky and more angry version of...
Spoiler for this....:
If anyone can spare some ideas, please do...Let not only Chaos and Night be the lone wolfs out there.
Oh you read those comics too. Too bad I can't read that kind of Chinese to be able to romanize the title.
One little problem: Graham is an Englishman.
Re: Necromancer - I'd go for the latter, but wearing the former's gear.
And since we're on Graham, I shall throw two more of his old friends in from Kha's past. Both dead of course:
Spoiler for Touareg Volks:
Yes I know, but this was what I had in my folder too...
Spoiler for Kia Alexei:
This is Kia in Highlanderform, where she awakens her Alhazred bloodline and changes her hair from brown to blue, and completely overhauls her Knight Armor.
So the big boss... I wonder what he has got planned. And Serge's looking pretty cool, but I doubt he smokes, does he? Fits him if he did, and would also highlight his response to the dying wider-verse. As in, "We're all gonna die anyway, not even gods are eternal, so why bother denying yourself?", kind of thinking.
Just my random $0.02.
Serge does smoke. Though he only started quite recently and he's not a chain-smoker (just a single cigarette from time to time). I wonder if I should write a short description of my OCs' hobbies, bad habits etc.
J as well, and starting as an enemy, as per requirement. ^^;
Great! But, maybe you should jack it up to Dragon Delta if your going against the Beat and Buster renditions of Magnum and Sonic.
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Originally Posted by Nightengale
Well, I said that I did want to give Graham a make-over...so here it is. (( Note, this will be the template used to if I plan on creating my clone!Graham villain ))
Spoiler for Gil Graham:
Hard to imagine.
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Spoiler for Graham's Barrier Jacket:
After Purge/Take-Off (( like Chrono's blue jumpsuit ))
Approved!
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And this are well...characters I both plan and is still a little wary about introducing.
Spoiler for Alicia's Grandma/Precia's mother:
Precia's mother? Wow...
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Spoiler for Teh evil Necromancer:
...or
Right now, I'm still not sure which template is better. Both are awesome.
Fitting.
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Not to mention I'm having a hard time trying to think of a suitable image for Regius... what I have in mind is a 10~15 year old, less dorky and more angry version of...
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BWAHAHAHA! Oh yes, please get a less dorky pic of that.
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If anyone can spare some ideas, please do...Let not only Chaos and Night be the lone wolfs out there.
What kind of ideas? I'm eager to see this project come into frution. (No, your not alone.)
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Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen
Unfortunately, we're really alone in this The world suddenly feels so big and scary....
Like I said, count me in this! I want to help so we can finally see this project in the air! (Once again, you two are not alone.)
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*cough*
Moving on, back to the topic -
Spoiler for Clyde's Barrier Jacket:
Just have to trade the RED with BLACK AND, he's going to use the 'mask'
Approved!
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As for Lindy, unless I can find more images of her as a Loli, I'll just go with this as default option...
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Ehehe. Hope you can find a more suitable pic. Still pretty darned cute, though.
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Of course, I'm open to more suggestions for her if you people have any
Suggestions about what particular aspect? Enemies, spells?
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Originally Posted by Kha
If I knew KhaxHarem is going to bring up a morality debate, I'd get it up sooner!
You don't say.
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Kha:... FATHER?!
The reaction was more extreme than I thought.
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Hell yeah never expected that! That's probably the first reaction of Kha's when they met for the first time. And explains why he's rather close to Aurion too.
Eh?
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And since we're on Graham, I shall throw two more of his old friends in from Kha's past. Both dead of course:
Spoiler for Touareg Volks:
Yes I know, but this was what I had in my folder too...
This has started to get unnerving.
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Spoiler for Kia Alexei:
This is Kia in Highlanderform, where she awakens her Alhazred bloodline and changes her hair from brown to blue, and completely overhauls her Knight Armor.
Well, I can't remember clearly since the manhwa never calls that particular character by his actual name (( rather a title )), but his childhood friend IS an Englishman...
Well, you know how those HK manhwas roll. EVERY male character has to look genericly styled with huge huge biceps, triceps, etc.
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
Hard to imagine.
Well... I've always thought Graham looked like a more mellow Big Boss, and well... I think Liquid Snake looks somewhat similar to the one the template is used, only without the huge biceps.
It's hard to get an appropriate image, so just configure to your own imaginations based on that template.
As for Lindy...well, she DOES has FAIRY WINGS...
Spoiler for possible BJs?:
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Night~and~Gale: ~ The Final Mythology of the Man who Defied Destiny.
The sleeping lion shall awaken beyond the depths of time, crossing ten billion lights, come to Terra.
Throughout the 108th Base, alarms blared as the designated path was completely cleared with reports of the signals speeding up even further. The front desk was cleared, save for the single aide that contacted Genya. Additional orders were relayed and followed as an ID card scanner was placed so that someone could scan on the run while rushing past the front desk. Two seconds later, the open doors of the entrance rattled as the white streak sailed by, the speed vacuum sucking papers off the front desk as the ID card scanner registered two entries. The Aide looked at the display as the IDs were processed...
Aide: Seimonji Retsugou and Seimonji Goukon?
Meanwhile...
The white streak began to waver as the two began to fight for the lead. Just as they entered Genya's office, they crossed each other's knees and tangled up one foot as they lost their balance, rolling into the office and slamming into the wall, earning a wince from both Genya and Ginga.
Genya: Well, I guess you were right about not needing to stop them...
Ginga: I suppose I'll untangle them now?
Genya: I've got it covered...A-TEN-HUT!
Like the trained soldiers they were, the two brothers quickly seperated and stood straight as boards.
Red?: Seimonji Retsugou, reporting for duty!
Blue?: Seimonji Goukon, also reporting for duty!
Genya took one look at their overly nervous faces, smirked and burst out laughing as he composed himself and hit the button for the intercom.
Genya: All troops return to what you were doing. The emergency is over.
Ginga was also stifling a giggle as Genya shut off the intercom and looked at the two again. Retsugou was still maintaining his calm composure, but Goukon looked like he was about to burst.
Genya: At ease, boys. I see that your training has paid off. As of your time of reporting, you two are now assigned directly under Sgt. Ginga Nakajima. Dismissed...
As the two boys relaxed, Genya whirled behind them and grabbed them in a bear hug around the neck.
Genya: Damn, you two have grown. It's been a long time, boys.
Retsugou: The same to you, Genya-jisan. I see you've been keeping busy.
Goukon: Gah! Leggo, Uncle Genya! Gin-neechan, a little help here?
Ginga: Commander, don't choke my subordinates now...
Genya: Oh, right, sorry boys.
Genya let go, allowing the two brothers some air.
Genya: Alright, back to work now. Ginga, they're in your hands now.
Genya took a seat at his desk once more as Ginga ushered the two brothers out. The next item in his list raised an eyebrow as he pulled up a communications window and called in. The other side responded quickly, responding in audio only.
???: Yes, Captain Nakajima?
Genya: About your transfer request, I'd like to send two more people along as well. They recently transfered here today, but I think they'll perform better with your group.
???: I see...how much potential are we looking at?
Genya: A pair of brothers with self-customized devices, which I think is their 4th overhaul. Neo-Belkan magic type. I think they'll give your Lightning squad guard wing a run for his money in terms of speed.
???: Hmmm...I'll take them. Will you send their histories as well?
Genya: The requested personnel will hold the data. If you want some extra info, ask Subaru about a pair of speed demon brothers.
???: That I will. Good day, Nakajima-butaichou.
Genya: And you as well, Yagami-butaichou.
As the comm line cut, Genya reclined in his seat again.
Genya: Finally, some peace and quiet. If those two stayed here, I'd probably never hear the end of their arguements...
Hrm... another 2 parts, I think?
One for their military school/emergency response team history, and another for the RF6 transfer, I guess?
You're planning to transfer these two speed demons under Fate's command? Elio's gonna have competition
And nice way to brake there
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Originally Posted by Nightengale
Well, I said that I did want to give Graham a make-over...so here it is. (( Note, this will be the template used to if I plan on creating my clone!Graham villain ))
Spoiler for Gil Graham:
DOES NOT COMPUTE
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Originally Posted by Nightengale
Spoiler for Graham's Barrier Jacket:
After Purge/Take-Off (( like Chrono's blue jumpsuit ))
DOES COMPUTE
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Originally Posted by Nightengale
And this are well...characters I both plan and is still a little wary about introducing.
Spoiler for Alicia's Grandma/Precia's mother:
Precia's mother a gunslinging MILF?!?!?! APPROVE
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Originally Posted by Nightengale
Spoiler for Teh evil Necromancer:
...or
Right now, I'm still not sure which template is better. Both are awesome.
For some reason, the right one looks better He looks awfully familiar though...
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Not to mention I'm having a hard time trying to think of a suitable image for Regius... what I have in mind is a 10~15 year old, less dorky and more angry version of...
Spoiler for this....:
*spits drink*
WTF?
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Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen
Spoiler for Clyde's Barrier Jacket:
Just have to trade the RED with BLACK AND, he's going to use the 'mask'
Picture Hei from Darker than Black
Clyde, you look kinda awesome there
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Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen
As for Lindy, unless I can find more images of her as a Loli, I'll just go with this as default option...
Spoiler for Lindy's Barrier Jacket:
Of course, I'm open to more suggestions for her if you people have any
I still wouldn't want to mess with her even with such a BJ
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Originally Posted by Kha
Kha:... FATHER?!
Hell yeah never expected that! That's probably the first reaction of Kha's when they met for the first time. And explains why he's rather close to Aurion too.
And since we're on Graham, I shall throw two more of his old friends in from Kha's past. Both dead of course:
Spoiler for Touareg Volks:
Yes I know, but this was what I had in my folder too...
Explains a lot
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Originally Posted by Kha
Spoiler for Kia Alexei:
This is Kia in Highlanderform, where she awakens her Alhazred bloodline and changes her hair from brown to blue, and completely overhauls her Knight Armor.
Ifureeta?! APPROVED
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Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen
I
Sigh, this is OC business is tough
You said it
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Against all the evil that hell can conjure, all wickedness that mankind can produce... We will send unto them, only you.
And of course the one on the right looks familiar coughavasigcough
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Night~and~Gale: ~ The Final Mythology of the Man who Defied Destiny.
The sleeping lion shall awaken beyond the depths of time, crossing ten billion lights, come to Terra.
Magic Type: Unknown
Magic Circle Color: Red
Device: Unknown
Magic specialty: Summoning
Notes: While Evangeline was a prime candidate for being Emeralda's portrait, she wasnt what I was looking for. Eva is quite different from how I picture Emeralda, too.
Oswald
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Height: 5’10’’
Hair: Silver
Eye Color: Brown
Magic Type: Unknown
Magic Circle Color: Black
Device: Unknown
Relic specialty: Unknown
Magic specialty: Unknown
Notes: Haha, not much info about him right now.
Anri
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Height: 5’3’’
Hair: Brown
Eye Color: Brown
Magic Type: Unknown
Magic Circle Color: Yellow
Device: Unknown, bow
Magic specialty: Bombardment
Notes: Another character design from Tony, this time from Shining Wind. She's so cute, ne? ...
Krynu
Gender: Male
Age: 28
Height: 6’1’’
Hair: Green
Eye Color: Green
Magic Type: Modern Belka
Magic Circle Color: Green
Device: An unnamed giant mace Armed Device
Magic Type: Unknown
Magic Circle Color: Blue
Device: none
Relic specialty: Unknown
Magic specialty: Unknown
Notes: A female android... who else could it be but KOS-MOS?!
Spoiler for Episode 06 - Part 1:
Episode 06: A New Threat – Part 1
I couldn’t take my eyes off the blue-haired girl that was flying towards us. She seemed like a regular girl from afar, but, once you see her clearly, her body was anything but human. Why would they bother making a robot look human, I wonder?
She arrived quickly to our location, and without uttering a single word she levitated beside us, staring at us without a blink.
I was scared… That eerie look on her eyes… it sent shivers down my spine… And that stench of blood… it made me sick to my stomach.
Without noticing, I quickly proceeded to hug myself… but suddenly I sensed a hand on my shoulder. “Oswald…” I said softly, as I looked at him. He gave me a smile and a small nod; as if assuring me that nothing is wrong… Did he notice I was disturbed…?
He then moved in between me and the android, and opened a holodisplay.
“Scaglietti, I hope you remember our agreement.”
“Yes, as a matter of fact I do. While originally I had intended to give my new little toy some real action, I won’t mind… if you can entertain me instead.”
He smirked. That made me so angry. Why would Oswald listen to someone as creepy and sick as him? “You sic—”
… I tried to say, but I noticed Oswald signaling me with his right hand not to continue. Oswald… aren’t you mad…? He’s using us and the one you love for his sick games… What does he really want?
“You don’t have to worry about that,” Oswald answered, calm as always. “You just make sure you keep your end of the bargain, or I can assure you we will blow this little toy of yours to pieces.”
“Hehehehe. As expected from a Dark Knight. I will keep that in mind.”
“Good.”
“Oh, and regarding him, the ‘seal’ has been unlocked.” The bastard continued. Won’t he leave us alone? “He should awaken in a few minutes.”
“I see. Well then, this concludes the first part of our deal. We don’t have anything else to say to you, so…” Oswald said, as he closed the holodisplay. Thank goodness.
“What an annoyin—” I was shouting, but again Oswald stopped me, this time closing my mouth with his left hand.
“Baka,” he whispered, “he can still see us, and probably even hear us.” He then released me.
“H-How?” I softly answered.
“The android… and probably even spy drones.”
“Who is this guy anyway?” I knew he is somehow involved with Oswald and Krynu, and the Relics they have inside. Still, I wanted to know more.
“We’ll tell you later…”
While I still wanted to hear more, I was quite happy about those words. Those sad and worried eyes he had a bit earlier… what was he thinking? What is he thinking now? At least now I know there will be… a ‘later’…
“Anri.” He was looking at me… Was he calling me before? “Anri!”
“W-What is it?” I asked.
“You too, do not join this fight.”
“What are you saying? I can fight!”
“This will be a battle between Relic users—”
“Are you saying I cannot handle a Relic user?” I interrupted him. I cannot believe he doubts my skills. Sure, I do not have this ‘Relic’ inside me, but I can hold my own, just like Krynu!
“I don’t doubt your abilities…” He paused for a moment, and then continued. “Look, just leave it to Krynu and me this time. Please.”
“…” I wanted to fight… no… I wanted to help him. But the look on his eyes… I couldn’t refuse… “… OK.”
“If the situation gets bad, promise me you will get away immediately.”
I was surprised by those words… Could it be…? “Are you implying that there is someone down there capable of defeating you?”
“That’s what I hope…”
What did he mean by that? He ‘hopes’ one of them can kill him…? Why…?
“Are you ready, Krynu?”
“Of course.”
I’m sorry Oswald, but I cannot promise you that.
I will stay by your side until the end.
Spoiler for Episode 06 - Part 2:
Episode 06: A New Threat – Part 2
Inside the cavern, the girls noticed that Rhea already came back with a couple buckets of water.
Rhea: *sigh* I was told not to fly so I wouldn’t draw any unnecessary attention… but I didn’t think this was going to be so tiring…
Gwendolyn: Rhea! Are you OK? Rhea: Huh? What do you mean? Ashelyn: Natalia said there were some people outside… Rhea: I didn’t see anyone…
Oswald: Gwendolyn! Gwendolyn: O-Oswald…? Is that you…?
Her eyes opened wider, as if in disbelief. She thought she’d never see him again. But even though she was happy, she could not help but think that something is wrong.
She then noticed Oswald’s companions: a tall, green-haired guy holding a giant mace with his right hand, a cute brunette in a yellow dress, and a weird looking girl with blue hair.
Emeralda: (This guy… Who is he?) Natalia: (I don’t know. I haven’t met him before.) Emeralda: (Hmm. They don’t seem to be coming just for a chat. Be careful.) Natalia: (Right…)
Oswald: Hey, hey. Have you forgotten about me already? Gwendolyn: But you look… somewhat different… Oswald: It has been almost a year since we last saw each other, hasn’t it? Gwendolyn: (That’s not it…)
He stopped for a moment, as he gazed at Gwendolyn’s eyes, but not because he didn’t know what to say. He knew there was no point in starting a conversation, since that was not his reason for coming here. So, he went straight to the point.
Oswald: I heard that Scaglietti also implanted a Relic in you… Gwendolyn: Yes… Oswald: Well then. I’ve come here… to test you.
The sudden change of his voice, as well as the now serious look in his face… it’s as if he was preparing for an attack… Gwendolyn did not know what to think.
Gwendolyn: W-What are you—? Iris:Kisama… Are you here to pick a fight? Oswald: … Yes. But first…
The knight in black armor looked at Rhea, who was standing next to the girls. Suddenly, something inside said boy started to glow. The yellow glow engulfed the boy as he moaned and tried to grab his own head to suppress the pain.
Ashelyn: Rhea! Gwendolyn: Rhea! What is going on? Iris: You bastard… what are you doing to him?! Oswald: I’m not doing anything. This is Scaglietti’s work. Iris: So you’re working for Scaglietti now?! Oswald: I am not. However, this is something I did ask him to do… The awakening of Gaia.
The glow stopped and the boy stood up as if nothing had happened. This time, however, the look on his face was completely different. From what was an innocent boy’s face, now it is serious and dark.
Gwendolyn: R-Rhea, are you OK? Gaia: Don’t call me that. My name is Gaia.
The boy had a slight smile on his face.
Iris and Ashelyn: *!* Gwendolyn: *!* What are you saying…? Oswald: I see… (He still has his memories… Good. That will make things easier.) Iris: You!!
Grabbing her glaive, Iris leaped towards Oswald, but before she was able to strike him, the green-haired knight parried the attack with the shaft of his giant mace.
Krynu: Sorry, girl. Oswald is taken already. Iris: Heh… That just means I’ll have to kill you first!
The man swung his mace at the attacker, but with the intention of making her jump away from the group so they could have more space to fight. The girl did just that, jumping to her right, and Krynu followed soon after.
Krynu: (Oswald also said good things about this girl… Let’s see what she’s got.) If you hold back… you’re going to die. Iris: The same for you!!
Oswald: You’re my opponent, Gwendo— Gaia: No, I will take care of them. Oswald: (What? Did Scaglietti order him to attack the girls?)
Gaia kneeled down and touched the ground. The immediate area round the boy shook and started to crumble.
Gwendolyn: *!* Jump everyone! Gaia:Earth Spikes!
A dozen spikes emerged from the floor at a very high speed. The girls were able to evade it thanks to Gwendolyn’s call. Natalia and Ashelyn moved to their right, near where Iris was, while Gwendolyn stayed in the air.
Gwendolyn: (Those spikes… They were aimed directly at our chest! He really intended to kill us…) Rhea! What’s wrong with you? Gaia: I told you… Don’t call me that!
The boy jumped towards Gwendolyn with a sword made out of hard stone.
Gwendolyn: When did he—?
Meanwhile, as Gwendolyn was able to set a barrier to block Gaia’s attack, Dr. Scaglietti was watching the events through the android’s eyes.
Scaglietti: Gaia… An Earth Elemental Relic… Normally, one would think that an Earth Mage is not very powerful; and that is true. However, my Gaia…
The doctor could not help but smirk as he looked at the holodisplay. One of his most precious toys, one that he had created himself, a kid specifically created to contain one of the most powerful Lost Logia has now fully awakened.
Scaglietti: He not only controls the two basic properties of Earth Magic. The first, Bind, the power to hold things together, to solidify… he’s able to enhance anything, from weapons to armor, and make them harder and stronger. And the second, Break, the power that can reverse that binding effect, the power to destroy, breaking things permanently apart. But also…
Gwendolyn was struggling to evade all of Gaia’s attacks. He used his stone sword and also his spells Earth Spikes and Stone Dagger.
Gwendolyn: Rhea… listen to me…! Gaia: How many times do I have to tell you, do not call me that! Natalia: That’s enough! Emeralda: (Idiot… don’t be so hasty!)
Natalia had gathered enough energy to fire an energy blast. With the size of a Divine Buster, the beam was aimed directly at Gaia.
The boy, however, did not even try to evade it. And instead, he smiled.
Gaia:Wailing Bonds.
An invisible wave, similar to a Barrel Shot, came out of Gaia’s body in the general direction of the attack. The energy beam was completely disintegrated as the outer layer of the wave touched it, leaving not a single sign of the spell in the air.
The wave reached Natalia, but, aside from sensing a bit of pressure, she was not harmed in any way.
Gwendolyn and Anri: *!* Oswald: (So he has full control over that now, huh?) Emeralda: *!* (No way…) Natalia: …What happened?
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Hehehehe…
But also… the Relic’s true power…
The ability to break the links between energy particles that form spells, effectively nullifying any offensive or defensive spells.
In a way, it works similarly to the Anti Magic-link Field; however, not only is it much stronger and effective, it is not a Field magic, and thus it does not have a range limit.
And one last thing… its side effect…
The energy particles become unstable and unresponsive, as if disoriented, preventing the use of spells that require energy gathering.
Brilliant…
Not only does he have the ultimate physical defense, but also the ultimate magical defense…
He is my best creation… My… masterpiece…
Next time, Oswald's Relic revealed, as well as (maybe) some Dark Energy explanations (still dont know if such explanation will fit... I'll probably have to use Scaglietti to explain some stuff again. This guy is quite useful, I tell ya! )
O-kay, that was rather unexpected... and a rather nasty defense.
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Originally Posted by LoweGear
Rather short profile for the day, LineBackers Part III up!
Spoiler for LineBackers III:
-Kay-
[Shinji, how’s it going there?]
[Not good, the two files were decoys. None of them contain anything!]
[That’s too bad. Continue searching, he must have them somewhere.
Rei! How’s those search spells?]
[Ether Scan ready.]
I hid on a convenient abandoned convenience store, since using Ether Scan requires me to stand still and cast a magic array. But this’ll sniff out any magical signatures in the area instantly.
[Scan!]
The display on Khaydarin shows 10 magic signatures asides from my own within a hundred meter radius. Four are large ones, belonging to Smith, Wesson, and Glock just north of my position, and forming as a single massive signature Mai and Xealot to my west. The six others are incredibly small yet distinct signatures. By its description, it’s apparent to that they’re Snipe Eyes planted there by Wesson.
And one of them was directly across the street, looking at us.
[High-speed object approaching.]
Rei warned just in time for me to dodge a Stinger Snipe as it smashed the counter behind me.
[Another approaching.]
“Flash Step!”
More Stinger Snipes darted past like comets, smashing the ground behind me as I blasted my way out. For someone with SS class accuracy sure can’t shoot well. You need to do better than that Wesson!
“SNIPE BETTER WESSON!!!!”
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-Glock-
“You hear that? Kaylin says I should snipe better.”
Oh Kay. It’ll take her a while to realize that none of Wesson’s shots are intended to hit. But from Wesson’s Snipe Eye footage, I can see that even they were, Kay would have no difficulty evading the shots with her Flash Step. Her earlier Ether Scan means she already knows our exact location. Just as planned.
“Maybe she’s right. Try aiming a little closer Wes.”
“Roger that! Relocating!”
As of current jump, Wesson was nested on the roof of a high-rise condominium in the middle of Forrest Square, an intersection with line of sight to every major road within a mile. Smith was several floors below, keeping watch to the south, Kay’s expected approach. And I posted myself at the foot of the building, just outside the entrance.
A holodisplay opens with Smith on the line.
“You sure about this plan Glock? Once Mai gets here you’re on your own.”
That was the weakness in our arrangement. Mai has the advantage of teleportation on her side. Along with Kay’s detection spells means she’s already on to us. Smith and Wesson would have to relocate often to evade Mai, as their weaknesses lay in their inability to cover themselves in melee combat. And it was worrisome that Mai was nowhere to be seen on Wesson’s surveillance.
“Keep moving, and keep me covered as long as possible until Mai catches up with you two. Our objective here is to tire Kay out and assess the capabilities of her Barrier Jacket configuration. I’ll engage once Kay gets near enough, and in the meantime you two keep Mai occupied."
“We can keep her occupied all day if you like!”
“And all night too-”
“Smith, Photon Cluster once Kay reaches 8th Avenue by the next intersection. She can’t get across it without exposing herself. ”
“Right! I’ll give her a big one! Load Cartridge!”
-------------------- -Kay-
This is strange… several times I’ve had to evade Wesson’s shots, and yet even those I didn’t or couldn’t evade didn’t hit me. Are they toying with me somehow?
Nah. I’m just too good.
I ran up to a wide intersection, with an island in the middle. I’ll have to cross through this plaza to proceed, but if I did I’ll be exposed for longer than I liked. Should I cross now?
An explosion by my feet forced my only option.
“Damn you Wesson…”
I ran across the street, more Stinger Snipes arced and weaved through the streets, blasting the ground behind me. Wesson could’ve nailed me with that shot, so why…
[Massive energy spike detected.]
A massive blue ball streaked across the sky towards us. And only one spell from the twin’s arsenal fit that description.
“Oh FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-!!“
The entire plaza erupted in a cacophony of explosions as the blue death rain fell down.
“ROUND SHIELD!!!”
More blue rain peltered the round shield, and even more blasting the concrete around me, choking the air with thick, grey smoke. It only lasted a few seconds, but it felt like eternity.
[That was close!]
[Damn good combo attack!]
[Barrier Jacket intact.]
Flushing me out with Stinger Snipe then pinning me down with Photon Cluster… these two are giving me massive headaches already. They won’t catch me next t-
“You alright there?!”
Glock. Even if I couldn’t see him through the thick smoke I knew he was nearby, watching.
“Impressive attack by your boys, but the same trick won’t work twice!”
“There is no next time.”
The smoke started to thin, his silhouette fading into view. And finally, a strong gust of wind cleared the place of smoke, and there Glock stood, Sophia in hand.
“What the...”
I had expected Glock to wear his standard Issue Barrier jacket, but instead he wore a tight-fitting sleeveless blue muscle shirt, and matching blue jeans. He looked more like a factory worker than a Clerk.
“What is up with that outfit?!”
“The rule state a direct hit to the barrier jacket equals defeat. The less barrier jacket to hit, the better the chances of winning.”
“Glock you cheat…”
“Balance Kay. I gave our team a handicap, so I must give myself an advantage.”
Technicalities. Maybe having a full body suit and scarf wasn’t the best choice for Buster Form. I must say, his BJ doesn’t look too bad, shows off his rugged physique pretty well…
…
…
Wait, what the hell am I thinking?!?!
[KAY!!! Don’t think such dirty things now!!!! I feel the same way you do now, and I’d rather not feel… disgusting towards Mr. Clerk Kent!!!]
[Glock… Glock is…]
[Rey get a hold of yourself!!!]
Oh boy…
“Glock, you’ll pay for making me think like this!!!!!!”
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Glock: Think like what?!
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Smith: Wesson…. Wesson: Yes Smith? Smith: This doesn’t look good…
*chainsaw revs*
Naughty naughty Kay. And Smith and Wesson are in touble, as usual.
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Originally Posted by LoweGear
ArtWork Time.... Two specials today!
First up, my initial design sketch for something that'll appear in the near future:
Spoiler for Linebacker Full Drive Prototype:
And second, is more of an improvement over a previous work featuring Kaylin, adding effects and such to her portrait, and some personal details, one of them being the emblem on her shoulder:
Spoiler for Kaylin Mathis III:
Very nice! What technique did you use for shading? Black layer with lower opacity? Or manual color?
Maybe the visor should be tweaked a bit... it looks as if it is higher on one side then the other.
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Originally Posted by Kha
[Yup at the moment Fate is well in the lead, and Kha loves Fate and even calls Vivio his "daughter", hence his super righteous emo mode during "Kha's Counterattack". But that doesn't stop the other girls from liking him. Ne?
Let's see, that makes 3 mothers for Vivio, 1 father and I'd be rather surprised if Aaron does not become an uncle... She's got a fast growing familly, ne?
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Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise
Here's a small update (mainly called update due to pictures) and kind of prelude to ... something
Spoiler for World's Colors, Prelude I:
World’s Colors
I was sitting in my new “office” in deep darkness. It was only 6 P.M. and the sun should’ve not set yet but the room had no windows. I didn’t turn any lights on and several working monitors were barely able to make their closest surroundings visible. I was working with one of them while the rest showed the outside view – a peaceful underwater landscape filled with all kinds of native life forms.
I’ve called the room my new “office” but it was actually a temporary substitute for my official apartments in the capital. And it was located underwater indeed, being the room designed to belong to the captain of Niddhogg. The massive battle cruiser was currently lying on the bottom of a nearby water body several hundred meters below its surface.
Such change of places was quite sudden but there were good reasons for it. And many of them were connected to the report I had in front of my eyes now. It consisted of two parts, first of which wasn’t exactly important at the moment, but I liked to deal with everything in the order of appearance, so I started with it.
It was a compilation of profiles on the members of my unit, but not the regular ones. These were the profiles used by the Tripartite to estimate the person’s capabilities and possible threat level and were not open to public. Normally only TSAB officers starting from the rank of Department’s Director had access to them, and it took me quite a while to get my hands on this data. I didn’t expect to find anything new for me there, but I wanted to know how the Tripartite regarded each of us.
I opened the file and saw that the data was arranged in three separate groups:
General Information
Combat Capabilities
Background Details
Spoiler for General Information:
Anatoly Belov
Full Name: Anatoly Aleksandrovitsch Belov
Spoiler for Image:
Occupation: Head Combat Instructor, TSAB Intelligence Department
Military Rank: Major
Official Mage Rank: S
Magic Style: Neo-Belkan
Specialization: close range combat and high-energy bombardment
Estimated Threat Level, personal: S+, former leader of an elite Enforcer unit, had a lot of real combat experience, never takes an opponent lightly; due to the Auto-Shield augmentation of his Device combines great offensive and defensive powers
Estimated Threat Level, overall: S+, no particular remarks
Mirian El Meyruun
Full Name: none, true name unknown, named Mirian after being recovered by TSAB, El Meyruun corresponds to the name of her world of origin
Spoiler for Image:
Occupation: Junior Investigator, TSAB Intelligence Department Special Section D
Military Rank: eq. Second Lieutenant
Official Mage Rank: AAA
Magic Style: Mid-Childa
Specialization: summoning, capable of support and healing magic
Estimated Threat Level, personal: S to SSS, possesses an unusual summoning ability theoretically allowing to bring anything into existence; threat level of currently observed capabilities can be ranked as S; if she is confirmed as the source of her home world’s demise the threat level can be raised up to SSS
Estimated Threat Level, overall: SSS, was a part of an eugenic project aimed to breed the ultimate summoner, which almost succeeded; as long as a sample of her DNA exists the threat of said project being resurrected remains high
Ramsus Lakarn
Full Name: Ramsus, adopted Lakarn
Spoiler for Image:
Occupation: Investigator, TSAB Intelligence Department Special Section D
Military Rank: eq. Captain
Official Mage Rank: AAA+
Magic Style: Mid-Childa
Specialization: long range sniping and area bombardment, capable of close range combat
Estimated Threat Level, personal: S+, possesses a Device with Magical Resonance augmentation, is a possible survivor of the Shepherd Project (inherited traits unknown)
Estimated Threat Level, overall: S+ to SS, depends on his actual relation to the Shepherd Project and its legacy
Sarah S’Zet
Full Name: Sarah Adelaide S’Zet IV
Spoiler for Image:
Occupation: Head of R&D Section, TSAB Intelligence Department
Military Rank: none
Official Mage Rank: AA
Magic Style: Mid-Childa and Neo-Belkan
Specialization: stealth and medium range combat, capable in almost any field of magic except summoning
Estimated Threat Level, personal: AAA+ to S, is a very versatile fighter, aside from magic frequently uses different high-tech gadgets including combat nanomachines; possibly has psyonic abilities (level unconfirmed)
Estimated Threat Level, overall: SSS, is the head and only living member of S’Zet family – the richest independent organization in known time-space, openly governing dozens of worlds and indirectly influencing an even bigger amount; possesses some of the most advanced research facilities and a personal army rivaling TSAB Ground Forces, Navy and Air Force combined
Serge Blanc Romardo
Full Name: Serge Louis Blanc, adopted Romardo
Spoiler for Image:
Occupation: Head Investigator, TSAB Intelligence Department Special Section D
Military Rank: eq. Colonel
Official Mage Rank: AAA
Magic Style: Mid-Childa
Specialization: Flow Manipulation and piercing attacks
Estimated Threat Level, personal: SS, possesses an extremely rare ability of Flow Manipulation, rendering almost any magical attack against him ineffective; his capabilities are further boosted by his Device – a Lost Logia capable of controlling magic particles; may also use high-tech gadgets and conventional weapons
Estimated Threat Level, overall: SSS+ or higher, his Device presumably doesn’t belong to the current Multiverse and already outlived an unknown number of them (impossible to confirm), thus possessing close to godlike powers; in case it finds a way around its current energy limitations the threat level can be raised up to X
“Well, quite interesting,” – I mumbled, - “but nothing unexpected. Let’s see what else they dug up …”
I keep being amazed at the speed some of you keep churning out OC's at times. I'm still in the process of refining Rogue Squadron's Wing 1.
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Originally Posted by Aaron008R
By the way, I think I've found a suitable reference on how Aurion looks like.
Fits, don't ya think? :3
Wait till Kha sees this!
Not exactly what I had imagined... but not to far off either. He's a bit tougher then I imagined.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nightengale
Well, I said that I did want to give Graham a make-over...so here it is. (( Note, this will be the template used to if I plan on creating my clone!Graham villain ))
Spoiler for Gil Graham:
Spoiler for Graham's Barrier [QUOTE=Nightengale;1036995:
Jacket]
After Purge/Take-Off (( like Chrono's blue jumpsuit ))
I oficially dub Graham GARham. The second Barrier Jacket is the best one, +6000 respect points for the old geezer.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nightengale
And this are well...characters I both plan and is still a little wary about introducing.
Spoiler for Alicia's Grandma/Precia's mother:
I she... related to Tia by chance?
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nightengale
Spoiler for Teh evil Necromancer:
...or
Right now, I'm still not sure which template is better. Both are awesome.
Hmm, hard one. Though I'd have to say I'm having trouble seeing a Necromancer in the first one, so my vote goes to the second.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nightengale
Not to mention I'm having a hard time trying to think of a suitable image for Regius... what I have in mind is a 10~15 year old, less dorky and more angry version of...
Spoiler for this....:
If I rake my brain my imagination can come up with something less... dorky.... but the round face keeps making me burst in fits of laughter.
Let's see, that makes 3 mothers for Vivio, 1 father and I'd be rather surprised if Aaron does not become an uncle... She's got a fast growing familly, ne?
Me? Not me. Aurion. And it'll be grandfather.
Quote:
Not exactly what I had imagined... but not to far off either. He's a bit tougher then I imagined.
The comical attitude seemed to give everyone the impression that he would have a non-rugged look. No way. Did you read the final part of the Perfect Void reminiscence? This old guy (is 34 old already?) has been through a LOT. If you already did, does the explanation of why Keroko and Kha are discomfited around him suffice? I was hoping for your input in the matter.
THE BACKLOG HAS RETURNED AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! :P
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Originally Posted by LoweGear
If you were to add Akilae, we'd have to bring in the Eldar into this mess, complete with a CraftWorld...
Considering some of the other OC villains around here, I think Skeith would fit in VERY WELL here...
Oh no, no craftworld needed There's a perfectly valid explanation to why Akilae is in the Nanohaverse... Just that I haven't had the time to write it up
It would be complete haxx with a craftworld behind him....
Question When's the necron story arc starting. I'll want to have Akilae involved as well
Agreed on Skeith. He/She is haxx but we've got plenty of haxx in here as well
Quote:
Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise
Here's a small update (mainly called update due to pictures) and kind of prelude to ... something
Spoiler for World's Colors, Prelude I:
World’s Colors
I was sitting in my new “office” in deep darkness. It was only 6 P.M. and the sun should’ve not set yet but the room had no windows. I didn’t turn any lights on and several working monitors were barely able to make their closest surroundings visible. I was working with one of them while the rest showed the outside view – a peaceful underwater landscape filled with all kinds of native life forms.
I’ve called the room my new “office” but it was actually a temporary substitute for my official apartments in the capital. And it was located underwater indeed, being the room designed to belong to the captain of Niddhogg. The massive battle cruiser was currently lying on the bottom of a nearby water body several hundred meters below its surface.
Such change of places was quite sudden but there were good reasons for it. And many of them were connected to the report I had in front of my eyes now. It consisted of two parts, first of which wasn’t exactly important at the moment, but I liked to deal with everything in the order of appearance, so I started with it.
It was a compilation of profiles on the members of my unit, but not the regular ones. These were the profiles used by the Tripartite to estimate the person’s capabilities and possible threat level and were not open to public. Normally only TSAB officers starting from the rank of Department’s Director had access to them, and it took me quite a while to get my hands on this data. I didn’t expect to find anything new for me there, but I wanted to know how the Tripartite regarded each of us.
I opened the file and saw that the data was arranged in three separate groups:
General Information
Combat Capabilities
Background Details
Spoiler for General Information:
Anatoly Belov
Full Name: Anatoly Aleksandrovitsch Belov
Spoiler for Image:
Occupation: Head Combat Instructor, TSAB Intelligence Department
Military Rank: Major
Official Mage Rank: S
Magic Style: Neo-Belkan
Specialization: close range combat and high-energy bombardment
Estimated Threat Level, personal: S+, former leader of an elite Enforcer unit, had a lot of real combat experience, never takes an opponent lightly; due to the Auto-Shield augmentation of his Device combines great offensive and defensive powers
Estimated Threat Level, overall: S+, no particular remarks
Mirian El Meyruun
Full Name: none, true name unknown, named Mirian after being recovered by TSAB, El Meyruun corresponds to the name of her world of origin
Spoiler for Image:
Occupation: Junior Investigator, TSAB Intelligence Department Special Section D
Military Rank: eq. Second Lieutenant
Official Mage Rank: AAA
Magic Style: Mid-Childa
Specialization: summoning, capable of support and healing magic
Estimated Threat Level, personal: S to SSS, possesses an unusual summoning ability theoretically allowing to bring anything into existence; threat level of currently observed capabilities can be ranked as S; if she is confirmed as the source of her home world’s demise the threat level can be raised up to SSS
Estimated Threat Level, overall: SSS, was a part of an eugenic project aimed to breed the ultimate summoner, which almost succeeded; as long as a sample of her DNA exists the threat of said project being resurrected remains high
Ramsus Lakarn
Full Name: Ramsus, adopted Lakarn
Spoiler for Image:
Occupation: Investigator, TSAB Intelligence Department Special Section D
Military Rank: eq. Captain
Official Mage Rank: AAA+
Magic Style: Mid-Childa
Specialization: long range sniping and area bombardment, capable of close range combat
Estimated Threat Level, personal: S+, possesses a Device with Magical Resonance augmentation, is a possible survivor of the Shepherd Project (inherited traits unknown)
Estimated Threat Level, overall: S+ to SS, depends on his actual relation to the Shepherd Project and its legacy
Sarah S’Zet
Full Name: Sarah Adelaide S’Zet IV
Spoiler for Image:
Occupation: Head of R&D Section, TSAB Intelligence Department
Military Rank: none
Official Mage Rank: AA
Magic Style: Mid-Childa and Neo-Belkan
Specialization: stealth and medium range combat, capable in almost any field of magic except summoning
Estimated Threat Level, personal: AAA+ to S, is a very versatile fighter, aside from magic frequently uses different high-tech gadgets including combat nanomachines; possibly has psyonic abilities (level unconfirmed)
Estimated Threat Level, overall: SSS, is the head and only living member of S’Zet family – the richest independent organization in known time-space, openly governing dozens of worlds and indirectly influencing an even bigger amount; possesses some of the most advanced research facilities and a personal army rivaling TSAB Ground Forces, Navy and Air Force combined
Serge Blanc Romardo
Full Name: Serge Louis Blanc, adopted Romardo
Spoiler for Image:
Occupation: Head Investigator, TSAB Intelligence Department Special Section D
Military Rank: eq. Colonel
Official Mage Rank: AAA
Magic Style: Mid-Childa
Specialization: Flow Manipulation and piercing attacks
Estimated Threat Level, personal: SS, possesses an extremely rare ability of Flow Manipulation, rendering almost any magical attack against him ineffective; his capabilities are further boosted by his Device – a Lost Logia capable of controlling magic particles; may also use high-tech gadgets and conventional weapons
Estimated Threat Level, overall: SSS+ or higher, his Device presumably doesn’t belong to the current Multiverse and already outlived an unknown number of them (impossible to confirm), thus possessing close to godlike powers; in case it finds a way around its current energy limitations the threat level can be raised up to X
“Well, quite interesting,” – I mumbled, - “but nothing unexpected. Let’s see what else they dug up …”
Nice pictures *sigh* another thing for me to do...
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Originally Posted by blitz1/2
I lost the document, so I have to write it again from scratch.
EDIT: Wow! This thread is going fast, the last time I checked was the previous 2 pages!
Damm that's harsh..
Welcome to crazy backlogs You'll get used to them eventually..
Quote:
Originally Posted by USB500
I've been forgotten! THIS IS MADNESS!
Since no one's noticing me I may have to regain attention by doing the below:
Spoiler for preview:
“A cat?”
Both Nanoha and Fate nodded as to answer yes. Ginga scratched the back of her head and looked around, as if she had noticed something peculiar. Nanoha and Fate warily waited, and the anticipation rose as Ginga turned back to them.
“Well?” they asked.
“I think I may have seen one, but--” Ginga’s words were cut off when Nanoha and Fate bombarded her with questions regarding Fuuko, including descriptions on the lunar cat. “Ah! You must be talking about that fork-tailed cat, right?”
“Yes! Yes!” Nanoha and Fate replied. “So where did you see it?”
“Let me see…” Ginga put a finger upon her cheek and stared upward, thinking or remembering something. “I saw it-- ettou… what’s its name?”
“Fuuko,” Nanoha told her.
“I saw Fuuko entering the kitchen minutes ago,” Ginga said. “It must be looking for something to eat--”
“Let’s go, Fate-chan!”
Ginga was left with lots of questions circling around her head as Nanoha and Fate rushed to the said location without thanking her. She did not the chance to ask what had happened, and was dumbfounded for a few seconds. “Oh, well.” She resumed her trip to Officer Nakajima’s officer; she noticed a peculiar-looking tail jutting out of the T-junction. “That must be Fuuko.” Slowly she approached the tail from the behind but it disappeared without a trace. “Are? I thought it was here just now--”
“Meow.”
Ginga turned around. There it was, the fork-tailed lunar cat Nanoha and Fate were looking for. “Oh, hello, Fuuko-chan,” Ginga greeted. “Nanoha and Fate were looking for you just now.”
“Meow.”
“What’s the matter? Is there something wrong?” Ginga asked and approached Fuuko. The lunar cat’s response was playful as it pounced at the woman, trying to grab her leg. Ginga squealed in surprise and stepped back from Fuuko. “Fuuko-chan, what are you trying to do?” Fuuko meowed and jumped at Ginga again; this time it got leg and licked it, causing Ginga to gasp in shock. “Fuuko-chan, dame!” Ginga let go off the cat and ran down the alley; Fuuko merely meowed and chased after Ginga. The woman was heard whimpering in suggestive cries as she tried outrunning the lunar cat. “Iyaa! Dareka!”
They happened to run past several passing TSAB officers. Hearing her distressed cry caused them to rush toward her, only to be greeted by a scene like nothing else.
// ENTERING THEIR HEAD //
Ginga was laughing as she ran down the road. Her face was filled with expression of happiness and bliss, and there was bubbly effects surrounding her as she playfully outran Fuuko. “Ikuyo, Fuuko-chan!” she called out between her laughs.
“Meow…!” was Fuuko’s only reply
The two kept running and outrunning each other, oblivious of what was really happening around them.
// LEAVING THEIR HEAD //
Male officers nosebled and threw their fists into the air. “FUUKO-CHAN SAIKKO DESU!” they roared in approval. “BANZAI! BANZAI!”
Their female colleagues bashed the boys’ head with metal harisen. “BAAKA HENTAI!” they shouted.
“We aren’t doing anything!” male officers replied and were again hit on the head.
What do you think?
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The Whistling Gale
Lyrical of Time Status: Charter 2 Progress: 35% Note: just resumed working on it after 2-month hiatus. Nothing much is going to be featured in the chapter, with the exception of Yuuno as the first half of the chapter's main focus. Then the story switches to Alexandra's first day of training at the bureau as a recruit. Guess who's going to train her?
Wee BANZAI!!!! GoGo Fuuko. have we found another shamisen....
The comical attitude seemed to give everyone the impression that he would have a non-rugged look. No way. Did you read the final part of the Perfect Void reminiscence? This old guy (is 34 old already?) has been through a LOT. If you already did, does the explanation of why Keroko and Kha are discomfited around him suffice? I was hoping for your input in the matter.
No no, I had imagined him a bit rugged, yours was just a bit more then my imagination told me.
The explanation does fit. Neltharion, who views himself as a god, fears little, but origin or nothingness itself will forver be beyond his grasp. Causing detah and destruction is his game, but sheer nothingness -while counterable depending on the source- is still something he fears.