2013-04-22, 00:07 | Link #41661 | |
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Edit: Okay, it seems that I might have to make some changes to the 2nd arc. Remember that I stated that the 2nd arc is where the Canon characters will get their spotlight back? I'm not so sure if that'll be the case. Unless if I lay out more chapters than planned... Little help? Last edited by DarkJak2050; 2013-04-22 at 01:11. |
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2013-04-22, 06:35 | Link #41664 |
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Right under the sternum, just hard enough not to dislocate anything
Even if they're not knocked out, the pain and shock is massive enough that they'll curl pitifully. To explain this: that part of body is full of nerve point, and the shock will be transferred directly to the target's heart. Ichika is supposed to do this against Laura later, as well as Tatenashi. In both cases, they're effectively defeated despite having no real injury whatsoever.
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2013-04-22, 06:45 | Link #41665 |
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So it's basically that little space at the bottom? Thing is, it's going to be a drone delivering the punch so hard it fractures/breaks the Minerva's armor and knocking out Inami. (And subsequently captured.)
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2013-04-22, 06:49 | Link #41666 |
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Yeah, the pizza slice-shaped area under the xiphoid. As for how Inami wasn't crushed to death, chalk it to luck and safety features.
Hmm, and for Gospel Arc, I think I'll have Ichika clinically dead... for a while.
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2013-04-22, 07:04 | Link #41670 |
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Just finished watching a few episodes of the Walking Dead.....and damn does it tug at your heartstrings. Best Zombie show ever. Hard to mercy kill a sibling even if you know they're dead.
Anyway, Future Imperfect is coming along, albeit very slowly. I'm still stuck in the scene with Charles and Celeste.
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2013-04-22, 07:04 | Link #41671 |
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^ wanna watch it but have no bandwith to spare.
----------------------------- Also feature a Sister unit of Gospel, so to speak, still deciding a name for it. preferably something majestic and related to Abrahamic religion, any suggestion? Effectively the opposite, Gospel is high-mobility bombardment type right? This one is deep strike high speed unit with decent melee and point-attack. So I can make an excuse that whereas Gospel is manned, the sister unit wasn't. The sister unit is effectively a slave to it (So one pilot can control two I.S. at once), but Tabane hijacked Gospel and thus influenced the Sister unit as well.
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2013-04-22, 07:12 | Link #41673 |
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Nah, during battle it's hardly the fastest (barely above speed of sound). It's just that Gospel dodges VERY well, far above most I.S. certainly.
This one is made to go as fast as possible, and not even AkaTsubaki can match it in second shift (ByakuShiki on the other hand, can)
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2013-04-22, 07:17 | Link #41675 |
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You have to remember that, by all accounts, the Silver Gospel had the mind of a rampaging child. The decreased speed during the fight could be attributed to it focusing on killing any perceived threat to Natasha than anything else.
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2013-04-22, 07:24 | Link #41678 |
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You know, I get the feeling Izuru has been looking at Metal Gear Rising. Seriously, Chifuyu donning a Cyborg Ninja outfit out of nowhere and Tabane suddenly gaining nanomachine powers when Chifuyu stopped her one-handed last time? I'm half expecting Raiden to pop out of the framework and fight Kuu in a Katana duel.
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2013-04-22, 07:31 | Link #41680 |
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Take into account that the faster you go the more fragile you are :/ in his case if he so much as bumps into a stop sign or a pebble then he's heavily wounded.
Probably not the best idea but setting the badguy up to be on the same level as squall would be hilarious. =)) |
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