Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Thesinwithin]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Nanoha. No time to read back post, I had to get this done.

Dedicated to those going through finals and exams.

WARNING: This one is romantic/slightly citrus splashed!!!!!!! NSFW tag included!!!!

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.16 ( I think/ NSFW):

"Nanoha" I moved slightly to look up at the girl I had just cuddled for that sweet come-on line. Her face was a cross between excited and sensual at the same time. "Do you... kiss on the fifth date?"

Fifth? Was this our... Fourth wasn't it? Or was she counting... Oh I see. Giving her a smile, I debated my answer. Was I really ready for my first kiss?

Seeing my hesitation, she changed her request. "May I... kiss your neck?"

"My neck?" I asked, shocked at how my words came out in a whisper. My heart started beating faster as she gently nuzzled my head to the side, body shifting to almost straddle mine. "Why...?"

"Because," The same reasoning yet again. "I am a vampire."

She rested her forehead against mine and opened her mouth to show me her fangs. "Are you..." I thought aloud, a little fearful. "One of those emo Gothic girls who really think they are a vampire?"

Fate closed her mouth and grinned. "I am a vampire," she stated again, leaning to breath against my neck. "That's the truth."

"What did I get into...?" I sighed out but gasped when Fate slid against me.

"May I?" She asked again, almost pleadingly. I didn't know what to say. Her small weight against my body, hot breath against my skin... Her hand was rubbing my side and hip snuggled against my legs. "Please?"

"Okay," I answered quickly, almost intoxicated by the rush of new feelings coursing through me. Instead of kissing, I felt her press against me more, mouth breathing against my collarbone. A small wet trail came and I realized, in a mix of shock and surprising anticipation, that she was licking me. Seconds later a kiss came.

It was wet, and flecked with her tongue again. Her body pushed harder against mine and our love seat slid back even more to recline fully. Her breath was against my damp skin, hand touching my side, body warmth seeping into me... It was almost too much, and I had to close my eyes and gasp to give it an outlet before it took over.

Another kiss, a third, a fourth, each one getting a little harder, a little more desperate. ' Just a little more' my mind told me. 'Just let her do a little more...'.

Fate started to suck, pulling my skin up and holding it. The rush of pleasure mixed with a sweet tang of pain made my back arch and her hand took the chance to snake under me. 'Just a little... you can stop later...'

She released the suction and immediately started again just above it. I started to lose track of what was going on, the new feelings overwhelming my sense of reason. 'It can stop later...'

A third nip and I was being pulled almost painfully against her. Fate's breath was panting almost, body rubbing against mine pleasantly. She lifted me up more and my head moved fully to the side on it's own to offer her more. My hand went to her hair, breathing slowed, heartbeat pounding.

Fate open her mouth wide, pressing it close to my skin, and stalled. Her pants were erratic, almost erotic... Her tongue tasted me again and once more she paused just as I felt her teeth touch me to nibble.

She pulled away and I looked slowly at her. Fate was flushed, breathing hard, and hips almost rocking against me. "We should stop," She panted desperately. "Or I'll... go too far."

"Oh... Okay..." My senses were coming back and I just looked at her. I felt strangely satisfied, and I had a new respect for her. She stopped where I couldn't, and respected me as a friend and a person she was interested in...

"Nanoha..." She took both my hands and squeezed them. It was almost as if she was coming down from a body blitz... "Please... be my girlfriend?"

I didn't have to think about it. Someone who could respect me this much and honestly try to make me happy and give me my space?

It was a dream come true.

"Yes."

A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate

-nosebleed- Alright you no more nosebleeds before eleven o'clock at night. Srsly. it's the middle of the day. -fans self- I vote B - but I also think that Nanoha, being so flattered, should really kiss Fate now. :3

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for NSFW lolness:

I found myself pushed face first into the pillows as weight came on my back. Arms snaked around my waist and the leash attached to the collar I was wearing was tugged, lifting my head. "Say my name," A voice demanded.

"Na...Nanoha..."

A spike of pleasure and the sound of a slap on my rear. Slowly a husky voice whispered into my ear. "I. can't. hear. you..."

Page claim for NSFW-ness!

Ryotaro: Again? What the hell is Satashi writing these days?

Shamsel: *shrug* Who knows. But there's definitely a lot more blood this time. Must've been better.

Evangeline: *grabs legs and drags* I swear...men

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

And here's what I did all afternoon to get rid of my writers block.
Looks like Chrono's the next in the long line of people looking after Vivio

Spoiler for And Before my eyes I became a babysitter:

*snip*

Do you plan on turning the entire cast into babysitters or something?

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Nanoha. No time to read back post, I had to get this done.

Dedicated to those going through finals and exams.

WARNING: This one is romantic/slightly citrus splashed!!!!!!! NSFW tag included!!!!

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.16 ( I think/ NSFW):

*snip*

A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate

Okay...that vampire confession if it had been thrown out at any other time would've definitely raised alarms.

I suppose the way Fate inserted that little tidbit right there during the mood offset it somewhat....

But besides that: *keels over from the waff*

[DaftEnigma]

Coming out of lurking in hopes that Nanoha will be seen with bite marks and the Paladins would attack her since Fate sees Nanoha as a special person and then Fate would have to protect her. Or is it possible to have Nanoha turned?

B

Spoiler for Apology to certain people:

I'd also like to apologize to a couple key people about how I had hoped to help with one thing or another through pm and never getting back to them. I had lost my password to not only this account but also to my email and since gmail is a bit annoying when you lose the password, it took some time.

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by DaftEnigma

Coming out of lurking in hopes that Nanoha will be seen with bite marks and the Paladins would attack her since Fate sees Nanoha as a special person and then Fate would have to protect her. Or is it possible to have Nanoha turned?

B

Spoiler for Apology to certain people:

I'd also like to apologize to a couple key people about how I had hoped to help with one thing or another through pm and never getting back to them. I had lost my password to not only this account but also to my email and since gmail is a bit annoying when you lose the password, it took some time.

Another Lurker who has been ousted by Satashi's works eh? :3

Welcome.

Enjoy your stay here on the FF.net thread :3

[Satashi]

AS much as I'd dearly love to reply to everyone's post one by one in a quote... I just don't have enough time T_T

Glad everyone liked it, and the discussion of when/where/if the lemon scene took place was greatly appreciated :3 got lots of input for it. To sum up my answer, it would be like SbtB was......... 130,000 words down the line and as a bonus. ^_^ I hope by now people don't think I would just throw an OoC lemon in it out of the blue for the sake of doing one T_T

Really pleased at everyone's speculations about V!F storyline. It's a great thing to see people going "this will happen" "no this will!" "but this will too!". It gives a sense of satisfaction to know people like it enough to actively debate what'll happen

A note, though: Nanoha wasn't bitten, just sucked on. She'll have hickies but not "bite marks". Fate, for some reason, respects Nanoha enough to get permission first...

and the more she pushes herself to wait, the more turned on she gets lol

Upcoming parts will start to progress the storyline. I plan on getting in Caro, Tia, and Subaru as well sometime. It won't make the storyline be not Nanoha/Fate anymore but it will add diversity. Everyone will have differnt ways of doing things and interacting with a larger cast.

I can't write during lunch right now, but I will say this:

Soon you will make a choice on a POV that will last for two updates. Think carefully, it's coming sooooooooon.

Originally Posted by DaftEnigma

Coming out of lurking in hopes that Nanoha will be seen with bite marks and the Paladins would attack her since Fate sees Nanoha as a special person and then Fate would have to protect her. Or is it possible to have Nanoha turned?

Welcome! I've seen your comments a lot, so I'm happy you decided to come to the forums! please enjoy your stay.

[Satashi]

Spoiler for micro fic! choose your own characters!:

"Hey?" my eyes opened to look up at the person who's lap I was laying on under the tree. "Kiss me?"

"What brings that up so suddenly?" My friend asked, amused. Blond hair fell across my face.

"They say kisses taste the best on bright sunny days like this," I informed with a smile.

"And that justifies a kiss?"

I was being teased. "Yes."

"You're silly."

"I know." I raised a hand up to touch a soft cheek. "Let's kiss?"

"okay," I raised as they lowered, our lips meeting briefly.

"It does taste good."

"It's the candy I'm..." an acusing glare.

I stuck the piece of candy I had snatched up to my lips before sucking it back in. "Thank you."

"Meanie."

I giggled.

[Evil Rick]

Chapter 43

Vatican Knights

Spoiler for Shadows of the past:

"Were... were are we? I asked to Nanoha, she didn't respond, but I saw a sad expresion in her face, she toke my hand and guide me through the coridors of that place, I saw nurses and medicines, beds with sick people resting on them, we were in some kind of Hospital

I saw some kind of Doctor

"Esciusmis, sr? Can you help us?" He didn't respond

"Sr?" I insisted, suddenly he walked in my direction and passed through me!

"What the...?!"

"They are shadows of the past, they can't see you neither hear you or even feel you" Nanoha said

"Why you bring me over here?" She didn't respond and olny pointed to a room in front of us, we entered in it, inside we saw a pregnad woman resting in a single bed, she was the only one in that room, judgin by her stomach, it seemed that she was going to give birth, I got close to her, her face looked quite familiar to me, but I couldn't recignise from were

A nurse came inside the room, pulling a little car with alchol and gauzes, the pregnam woman said to her

"My baby is going to born today... Is not wonderfull?"

"Yes... you are a lucky woman" With horror I recognize the voice of the nurse, I turned my sight to her, it was Nanoha, the white Devil (the big one) from the car she pulled out an arpoon, I knew what she was going to do

"No... NO!!!" I jumped over her, but I go through her and ended on the floor, when I rised my head I saw that Nanoha was impaling the arpoon in the stomach of the pregnad woman, another nurse came inside the room and when she saw wath was happening, she ran out of the room screaming for help

I couldn't do anything, I tried to hit her and to grab the arpoon but my hands only go through her body, I saw how the pregnad woman gave her last breath and died, Nanoha then grabed a knife and in her forehead marked the number "19"

She pulled out the arpoon and prepare to implae her stomach again, but before she could do that, several cops entered in the room and grabed her, they toke her out of the room, a doctor got close to the Pregnad woman

"She is dead" He said, then he looked her stomach

"Bring me hot water, we have to save the baby!!!" Several nurses weremoving, and then, I heared a voice who I recognize at the instant, Raphael's voice

"Out of my way! Out of my way!" In the room entered a younger Raphael, when he saw the corpse of the woman he screamed

"Soraya!!!" He ran at her and grabed her face, when he saw she was dead he screamed

"NOOOOOOO!!!!!!" Nurses and doctors were tring to grab him

"She is my wife!!! She is my wife!!!" Raphael keeped screaming with tears in his eyes

"Raphael!" I screamed and tried to got close to him, but then I felt that something was pulling me from my back

"Raphael!!!" I screamed again but the room was geting away from me

"36 have the key" Little Nanoha said to me after the door to that room got closed

I was launche out of the mirror and falled over my back, I was again in Dr. Van Hellsing's office

I rised my head, breathing heavy and the first thing I saw was Dr. Van Hellsing who was standing at my side

"Curiosity is not a sin Vivio... but it may bring you troubles" He said

"Doctor...?"

"Do you know what is this" He said at the time he passed his hand over the mirror "This is a mirror of lost souls, they are very strange, the legends say that it is posible that the lost souls who dwells the earth, show you unresolve things in this world through the mirror"

"Doctor... Nanoha's victim 19 was... the wife of Raphael?"

"Yes... she was..." He said with a sad expresion

"And Raphael's baby" I asked, Dr. Van Hellsing remained silent for a second and then he replyed

"Also died" He ther came with me and sited at my side, then he said

"I been tring to discover something I missed in the past, something that can explain why this kind of things are happening, but every time I think I have the answers, they escape from me again! It's quite desesperating!" He looked quite angry, feeling inpotent

"Doctor, the Little Nanoha I saw in Edmund's mansion, she toke me to that hospital, were Raphael's wife was murdered, and she told me... "36 have the key"

"he Doctor looked at me a bit concerned

"Key? You mean what Sasuke said that Nanoha was looking for?"

"Yes" I answered "Perehaps is in that hospital"

"Lichfield Hospital" The Doctor answered "Yes... may be, come Vivio" He asisted me to got up "May be we have something"

[Thesinwithin]

Originally Posted by Satashi

ZSoon you will make a choice on a POV that will last for two updates. Think carefully, it's coming sooooooooon.

BUM BUM BAHHHH!

So yeah, everyone remember Vivio's first boyfriend?

Spoiler for Oh, she wrote more :3:

“Vivio,” Nanoha said one morning not long after the dinner that they’d all shared with Marcus as Vivio sleepily made her way into the kitchen. She was heading straight for the coffee, no matter what her mother said about it staining her teeth and being bad for her. Nanoha was a bit of a health nut, and Vivio just wanted her caffeine. She had a paper in her hand, Vivio noticed, and a smile on her face that didn’t make Vivio feel very comfortable. “Your school has a formal coming up.”

Vivio set her coffee cup down on the countertop with a clatter and tried not to look as though she wanted to sink into the floor. “Y-yes?” she said, her voice shaky. “What of it?”

“Fate and I were wondering if you were going with Marcus,” Nanoha said, nibbling on the corner of her toast.

Vivio shot her a withering glare and concentrated on getting her coffee, loudly banging her way though the kitchen as she got her breakfast together. She could not believe her mother. Marcus had asked her weeks ago to go with him, and only now her mother was noticing? It was almost insulting really.

She set her coffee mug down on the table and stole Nanoha’s second piece of toast, “Yes, I’m going with him.” She said. She was feeling snappy and annoyed, not to mention not nearly caffeinated enough to be having this conversation.

Nanoha sighed and set down the papers she was going through. “Vivio, I know that you’re nearly an adult, but you’ve got to be careful. If Marcus asks you do to anything that you’re not comfortable with, you need to just tell him know.

Vivio’s face went bright red, “I know, mom, god.” She grabbed her breakfast things and stormed out of the kitchen.

She could not believe her, and as Vivio got her things together for school, she wondered what planet her mother had come from when they didn’t teach sex ed to their kids in middle school. She’d been sexually active for a while now, but she’d never mentioned it to either of her parents – and now she certainly was not going to.

Marcus picked her up for school and she practically ran out of the house, calling a goodbye to her mother and desperately trying to not seem as though she was running away from the house and the awkward conversations that awaited her there.

She slammed the car door closed behind her and flopped backwards into the seat, her school things in between her legs. “I hate my mother,” she announced as Marcus turned the heat down and started the engine once more. “She tried to give me the talk – the talk – this morning as I was getting breakfast!”

Marcus laughed and Vivio shot him an annoyed glare. “What did you do?” he asked with a grin.

“I ran away.” Vivio explained, toying with a lock of her hair that was sticking out of her pony tail. “Fata-mama’s never like this, she just smiles and nods when I talk about you. Mom on the other hand….”

“Always in your business?” Marcus asked, carefully navigating the streets of Mid as they headed towards their high school.

“Exactly. I think Fate-mama has no frame of reference for relationships other than the one she’s had with mom; but Mom’s got a pretty good idea what we do in our free time.” Vivio turned herself to face Marcus, her knee resting against the gearshift. “Do you think she suspects anything?”

“I don’t know, nor do I really want to find out, Vivio.” Marcus said, carefully downshifting around her knee. The car revved dangerously and Vivio lifted her knee so that it wasn’t in the way. “Your mother… scares me.”

Vivio grinned. “As well she should.”

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

BUM BUM BAHHHH!

So yeah, everyone remember Vivio's first boyfriend?

Spoiler for Oh, she wrote more :3:

“Vivio,” Nanoha said one morning not long after the dinner that they’d all shared with Marcus as Vivio sleepily made her way into the kitchen. She was heading straight for the coffee, no matter what her mother said about it staining her teeth and being bad for her. Nanoha was a bit of a health nut, and Vivio just wanted her caffeine. She had a paper in her hand, Vivio noticed, and a smile on her face that didn’t make Vivio feel very comfortable. “Your school has a formal coming up.”

Vivio set her coffee cup down on the countertop with a clatter and tried not to look as though she wanted to sink into the floor. “Y-yes?” she said, her voice shaky. “What of it?”

“Fate and I were wondering if you were going with Marcus,” Nanoha said, nibbling on the corner of her toast.

Vivio shot her a withering glare and concentrated on getting her coffee, loudly banging her way though the kitchen as she got her breakfast together. She could not believe her mother. Marcus had asked her weeks ago to go with him, and only now her mother was noticing? It was almost insulting really.

She set her coffee mug down on the table and stole Nanoha’s second piece of toast, “Yes, I’m going with him.” She said. She was feeling snappy and annoyed, not to mention not nearly caffeinated enough to be having this conversation.

Nanoha sighed and set down the papers she was going through. “Vivio, I know that you’re nearly an adult, but you’ve got to be careful. If Marcus asks you do to anything that you’re not comfortable with, you need to just tell him know.

Vivio’s face went bright red, “I know, mom, god.” She grabbed her breakfast things and stormed out of the kitchen.

She could not believe her, and as Vivio got her things together for school, she wondered what planet her mother had come from when they didn’t teach sex ed to their kids in middle school. She’d been sexually active for a while now, but she’d never mentioned it to either of her parents – and now she certainly was not going to.

Marcus picked her up for school and she practically ran out of the house, calling a goodbye to her mother and desperately trying to not seem as though she was running away from the house and the awkward conversations that awaited her there.

She slammed the car door closed behind her and flopped backwards into the seat, her school things in between her legs. “I hate my mother,” she announced as Marcus turned the heat down and started the engine once more. “She tried to give me the talk – the talk – this morning as I was getting breakfast!”

Marcus laughed and Vivio shot him an annoyed glare. “What did you do?” he asked with a grin.

“I ran away.” Vivio explained, toying with a lock of her hair that was sticking out of her pony tail. “Fata-mama’s never like this, she just smiles and nods when I talk about you. Mom on the other hand….”

“Always in your business?” Marcus asked, carefully navigating the streets of Mid as they headed towards their high school.

“Exactly. I think Fate-mama has no frame of reference for relationships other than the one she’s had with mom; but Mom’s got a pretty good idea what we do in our free time.” Vivio turned herself to face Marcus, her knee resting against the gearshift. “Do you think she suspects anything?”

“I don’t know, nor do I really want to find out, Vivio.” Marcus said, carefully downshifting around her knee. The car revved dangerously and Vivio lifted her knee so that it wasn’t in the way. “Your mother… scares me.”

Vivio grinned. “As well she should.”

Marcus... I'm thinkig right now in some ways to bring him the most horrible of the deads, incluiding some mutilations and electro shocks... yeah....

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

BUM BUM BAHHHH!

So yeah, everyone remember Vivio's first boyfriend?

Spoiler for Oh, she wrote more :3:

*snip*

Well that was quite adorable :3

I do feel sorry for Vivio through

[Thesinwithin]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

Well that was quite adorable :3

I do feel sorry for Vivio through

She sort of walks into these things. But Nanoha's her mom. Just imagine how awkward that would be, all the time.

Plus, I'm going for a bit of Fanon!Nanoha, the slightly crazy and overprotective Nanoha. On top of the fact that we don't know exactly how Nanoha would deal with a sixteen year old daughter.

[kasu1127]

Originally Posted by Satashi

WARNING: This one is romantic/slightly citrus splashed!!!!!!! NSFW tag included!!!!

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt.16 ( I think/ NSFW):

"Nanoha" I moved slightly to look up at the girl I had just cuddled for that sweet come-on line. Her face was a cross between excited and sensual at the same time. "Do you... kiss on the fifth date?"

Fifth? Was this our... Fourth wasn't it? Or was she counting... Oh I see. Giving her a smile, I debated my answer. Was I really ready for my first kiss?

Seeing my hesitation, she changed her request. "May I... kiss your neck?"

"My neck?" I asked, shocked at how my words came out in a whisper. My heart started beating faster as she gently nuzzled my head to the side, body shifting to almost straddle mine. "Why...?"

"Because," The same reasoning yet again. "I am a vampire."

She rested her forehead against mine and opened her mouth to show me her fangs. "Are you..." I thought aloud, a little fearful. "One of those emo Gothic girls who really think they are a vampire?"

Fate closed her mouth and grinned. "I am a vampire," she stated again, leaning to breath against my neck. "That's the truth."

"What did I get into...?" I sighed out but gasped when Fate slid against me.

"May I?" She asked again, almost pleadingly. I didn't know what to say. Her small weight against my body, hot breath against my skin... Her hand was rubbing my side and hip snuggled against my legs. "Please?"

"Okay," I answered quickly, almost intoxicated by the rush of new feelings coursing through me. Instead of kissing, I felt her press against me more, mouth breathing against my collarbone. A small wet trail came and I realized, in a mix of shock and surprising anticipation, that she was licking me. Seconds later a kiss came.

It was wet, and flecked with her tongue again. Her body pushed harder against mine and our love seat slid back even more to recline fully. Her breath was against my damp skin, hand touching my side, body warmth seeping into me... It was almost too much, and I had to close my eyes and gasp to give it an outlet before it took over.

Another kiss, a third, a fourth, each one getting a little harder, a little more desperate. ' Just a little more' my mind told me. 'Just let her do a little more...'.

Fate started to suck, pulling my skin up and holding it. The rush of pleasure mixed with a sweet tang of pain made my back arch and her hand took the chance to snake under me. 'Just a little... you can stop later...'

She released the suction and immediately started again just above it. I started to lose track of what was going on, the new feelings overwhelming my sense of reason. 'It can stop later...'

A third nip and I was being pulled almost painfully against her. Fate's breath was panting almost, body rubbing against mine pleasantly. She lifted me up more and my head moved fully to the side on it's own to offer her more. My hand went to her hair, breathing slowed, heartbeat pounding.

Fate open her mouth wide, pressing it close to my skin, and stalled. Her pants were erratic, almost erotic... Her tongue tasted me again and once more she paused just as I felt her teeth touch me to nibble.

She pulled away and I looked slowly at her. Fate was flushed, breathing hard, and hips almost rocking against me. "We should stop," She panted desperately. "Or I'll... go too far."

"Oh... Okay..." My senses were coming back and I just looked at her. I felt strangely satisfied, and I had a new respect for her. She stopped where I couldn't, and respected me as a friend and a person she was interested in...

"Nanoha..." She took both my hands and squeezed them. It was almost as if she was coming down from a body blitz... "Please... be my girlfriend?"

I didn't have to think about it. Someone who could respect me this much and honestly try to make me happy and give me my space?

It was a dream come true.

"Yes."

A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate

Why am I only thinking of what would happen if Nanoha's parents suddenly drop by to visit and sees the hickie. XD Or maybe it's because of my very wild theory that is her parents are paladins. I'm curious as to Fate's reaction so I vote... B

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Spoiler for And Before my eyes I became a babysitter:

Admiral Chrono Harlaown was one of the youngest Admiral’s in history. He was known far and wide for his courage, his leadership capabilities and his prowess in battle. Outside of work he was respected by his colleagues and loved by his friends and family for being a loyal, dotting husband and a loving father as well. So how was it somewhere along the line he had managed to get tied up from head to foot and stuck in his bathtub?

Chrono blamed Fate, and Arf, hell Zafira too. After all if they had just done their jobs Chrono would have been happily sipping tea and reading trashy romance novels.

It had all began that morning. Chrono had been blessed with one of his increasingly rare days off. There had only been one way he really wanted to spend it but, in a streak of incredible unluckiness, Amy was away for the week. So Chrono decided to spend it sleeping, reading and drinking tea.

After leaving his kids with Arf, who had practically raised them, Chrono had collapsed on the couch and started to nap the day away. Until the door bell rang.

Chrono had unwillingly lurched himself off the couch and answered the door with sleep filled eyes, ready to tell anyone who dared to bug him on his day off just what they could go do.

Luckily he looked before he cursed, “F-Fate? What’re you doing here?” The young enforcer stood in his doorway, still in uniform. She wasn’t alone though.

“Well you see… I need someone to look after Vivio,” she looked a bit desperate as if Chrono was her last choice.

Chrono blinked. “Wait what?”

“Onii-san please,” Fate grabbed the admiral’s hands, “Everyone else is on a mission.”

Chrono blushed, what was with the onii-san? They weren’t siblings. Well no they were but they weren’t blood siblings, even if they were closer then that, and the onii-san made him feel like some sort of pervert and a young one at that. He was an admiral damn it! “I-I.”

“It’ll only be for a few hours,” Fate looked apologetic but that didn’t stop her from requesting his help.

Chrono debated his options. Reject his sister and face the disappointment that would be inevitable or agree to it and ruin his day off but keep his sister happy. The choice was, of course, obvious. “Heh,” he rubbed the back of his head. “Sure no problem.”

She threw her arms around his neck, “I owe you.”

“Yes you do,” He shook his head.

Fate nudged Vivio forward and then bent down to her level, “Now be good for Uncle Chrono okay.”

Vivio saluted Fate in an adorable little way. “Yes sir mama!” Fate patted her head then with a final goodbye to Chrono headed off to wherever she was headed.

Vivio looked up at Chrono. She just stood there and stared at him. Chrono started to sweat. How was it a kid made him so uneasy? Chrono chuckled nervously. “So what do you like to do Vivio?”

Vivio shrugged.

Chrono scratched his head and crouched down meeting Vivio eye to eye like he would his subordinate. “Do you like to color?”

Vivio’s entire face brightened. “You have colors?” Her utter joy was evident.

Chrono grinned, kids were great at this age, “well yeah! My kids love them.”

Vivio grabbed his hand in a way reminiscent of the way Fate had grabbed his hand only a few minutes ago. “Let’s go!” She tried in vain to pull the twenty-five year up.

Chrono chuckled and stood allowing her to drag him around, “Do you even know where you’re going?”

She stopped, looked up at him and blinked. “No.”

Chrono shook his head, “they’re here in the closet.”

“Oh I see. Mm Mm.” She nodded so fast Chrono was afraid her head would fly off.

He opened up said closet and fetched his twins’ old crayons and some paper. “Here,” He handed it off to the eager five year old.

She immediately settled herself down at the table and began to draw what was obviously beautiful art in her head.

Chrono sat on the couch. He watched her for a moment then pulled out his book and started to read. All was right with the world.

Until about an hour later.



“CHRONO!” Slam!

Chrono nearly fell off the couch as his front door flew open, practically kicked in by Arf. Arf skid in front of him, carrying his two dirty, giggling twins under her arms.

“I… I…” she was panting, like she had sprinted all the way to his house.

Vivio looked up from her coloring to see what the fuss was.

“Well… I and he—we and well,” Arf was just rambling now.

Karel, Chrono’s little boy, grinned in a way that made him look exactly like his dad, “Big brother asked big sis out!”

Chrono tilted his head to the side, “Who?”

“Furry man!” Riela, his little girl, elaborated. She made a pair of floppy ears on top of her head with her hands.

“Zaffy?” Vivio asked now fully focused on the “discussion”.

“Yeah yeah!” The twins high-fived each other.

Chrono choked on the air, “Zafira asked you out!”

Arf turned as red as her hair. “N-no! He just wanted to go out for a friendly lunch!”

Chrono smirked, “Sure that’s exactly it. So what did you tell him?”

Arf opened her mouth to respond then stopped. “I forgot to answer.”

“So you just ran off.” Poor Zafira.

“Ran off. Ran off,” the twins echoed.

“Ran!” Vivio didn’t want to be left out.

Arf put down his kids. “Be right back.” She zoomed out the door.

“So… how’ve you been,” nice Chrono. Great way to talk to your kids.

“I had to stomp on a spider ‘cause Kar got scared,” Riela pointed at her brother and giggled.

Karel puffed out his cheeks, “I was not!”

Vivio walked over to her cousin and patted his arm, “Spiders,” She nodded wisely, “are scary.”

“Yeah they are!” Karel pumped his little fists in the air.

Chrono rolled up and strolled over to his kids. One hand went to Karel’s head, the other to Riela’s. “Son, trust me. There’s no shame in letting a girl protect you.”

“Me too,” Vivio popped her head underneath his chin not wanting to be left out.

“I’m back~!” Arf skidded back into the room. “I said yes!”

They all looked up at her.

“When are you going out?” Chrono stood back up much to the disappointment of his midgets.

“In,” Arf looked at the clock. “Ten minutes.” It was just then that the realization of what she had agreed to hit her. “Oh… but I have to look after the kids.” She deflated.

Chrono cursed his natural good guyness. “Don’t worry they can stay here.”

Arf lit up. “Thank you!” She then burst off again.

“I don’t get that girl.” Chrono looked down at the group of kids that had gathered around his legs. “And I don’t see how you guys got so dirty.”

Karel pointed at his sister, “Rie pushed me into the dirt!”

Riela pointed at Karel, “Kar pulled me in after him.”

“Vivio’s dirty too!” Vivio declared.

Chrono sighed. “I guess that means you guys need a bath.”

“Yay a bath!” Karel cheered.


“Yay!” Vivio followed his suite and cheered too.

Riela stuck out her tongue. “Yuck.”




Getting one kid in a bath was hard, getting two kids in a bath was harder, getting three kids in a bathtub was next to impossible and getting three kids in a bathtub when one had never seen a western style bath required heavy prayer. Somehow Chrono managed it, somehow.

He was thankful Vivio was blessedly calm and quiet, content to play with bubbles. His two demons on the other hand… Riela and Karel seemed positive if they didn’t remove as much water from the tub as possible they would all die. They also wanted desperately for their father to have a bath too.

Chrono had already removed his favorite black sweater and rolled up the sleeves of his black button up. His hair was already dripping and the mat beneath his black socks was soaking wet.

“Oh daddy you got some fluffol on you,” Riela splashed water at the pile of bubbles gathering on Chrono’s head. Fluffol was her word for anything white and fluffy.

“Fluffol fluffol,” Vivio repeated, also splashed water, albeit less, at her uncle.

“H-hey I’m not the one who rolled around in the mud.”

“Ugu,” Vivio shrunk down into the suds.

“Ugu?” Chrono repeated, raising an eyebrow.

“Ugu!” The twins exclaimed.

“You guys too?” Chrono splashed a tiny bit of water at them to wash off the excess “fluffol”.

“Ugu!”




It took another thirty minutes to get the energized little sprites into fresh clothes. Vivio had to be put back into her old ones but she hadn’t gone bathing in dirt so it was alright.

The now clean trio looked at him in anticipation of him doing something to amuse them. Chrono looked around for something entertaining, anything entertaining. “Um… well…”

“We’ll be the bandits,” Riela declared seemingly out of nowhere.

Chrono had no idea what she was talking about but Vivio and Karel apparently did.

“And you’ll be the good guy,” she said it like it was better to be a bandit, to her it probably was.

Chrono sighed, “Fine fine.”

She took one of his hands while Karel and Vivio took the other, together they began to lead him back to the bathroom.

“And what are you doing with me?”

Vivio answered because apparently she and the twins had set up a mental link, “You’re our hostage.”

“Really? Will I be a compliant hostage?”

“You better be,” Riela grinned wickedly. “Or we’ll shoot you.”

Chrono’s mouth hung open. Shoot him? What kind of creatures were his children? And who told them those kinds of things. It was probably their Aunt Nanoha and her ‘befriending’.

Once inside the bathroom, again, Karel pulled out a jump rope from seemingly no where. “Now be still dad.”

Vivio held Chrono’s hands together. “’scuse me Uncle Chrono.”

Chrono looked on in horror as his kids tied him up. “H-hey.” He couldn’t do much in the way of stopping them. After all he couldn’t fight his kids.

“Into the tub daddy,” Riela giggled and pushed Chrono back so he toppled in.

“Okay we’re going to have a serious chat as soon as I get out of these kids. Tying up people is best left in the bedro—to trained professionals!”

But they were already gone, leaving Chrono where we first found him. Chrono was suddenly thankful there was no one around to see him particularly not a certain—

“Chrono are you in here? Your door was open and I found—” speak of the freakin’ devil. Yuuno walked into the bathroom with Vivio in his arms and the twins around his feet. “Oh dear.”

“Get me out of these!”

The second Yuuno freed him from his jump rope chains Chrono jumped up. His kids tensed up and tried to slink away.

“Oh you better run.”

The kids ran down the stairs but Chrono hopped the railing (chipping the wood) and cut them off, so they went back up them (treading the dirt they had managed to get into).

“Cut them off Yuuno,” Chrono yelled as he bumped into a small table.

Yuuno moved to the side, as did Vivio, this was a problem for a parent and his children to work out.

Chrono cursed silently so as not to spoil any delicate ears then circled back around as his kids ran between his legs.

And so the children and their beloved father ran around in circles for a good hour until neither could walk any further and they were all tired of Yuuno and Vivio’s giggles.

They all collapsed in a tangled heap on the couch, Chrono too tired to be angry, the twins to worn out to be scared. Vivio snuggled in with them, not wanting to be left out of a group nap.

Yuuno chuckled, “This is probably not the right time to tell him Amy’s coming home early.”

“You say somethin’?”

“Not a word.”



Later that afternoon


Amy came home to the sight any mother would love, her two beloved children, snuggled up with their dad and even an adorable little Vivio as an added bonus. She was filled with a happy inner peace. Until she looked around that was. Her poor poor house.

“CHRONO!!!!!”

Just the thought of Chrono's own kids tying him up is enough to send me into a fit of giggles. By the way, the more I look at it, the more I think it should be "Kalel" though "Karel" definitely looks more like a name...

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

BUM BUM BAHHHH!

So yeah, everyone remember Vivio's first boyfriend?

Spoiler for Oh, she wrote more :3:

“Vivio,” Nanoha said one morning not long after the dinner that they’d all shared with Marcus as Vivio sleepily made her way into the kitchen. She was heading straight for the coffee, no matter what her mother said about it staining her teeth and being bad for her. Nanoha was a bit of a health nut, and Vivio just wanted her caffeine. She had a paper in her hand, Vivio noticed, and a smile on her face that didn’t make Vivio feel very comfortable. “Your school has a formal coming up.”

Vivio set her coffee cup down on the countertop with a clatter and tried not to look as though she wanted to sink into the floor. “Y-yes?” she said, her voice shaky. “What of it?”

“Fate and I were wondering if you were going with Marcus,” Nanoha said, nibbling on the corner of her toast.

Vivio shot her a withering glare and concentrated on getting her coffee, loudly banging her way though the kitchen as she got her breakfast together. She could not believe her mother. Marcus had asked her weeks ago to go with him, and only now her mother was noticing? It was almost insulting really.

She set her coffee mug down on the table and stole Nanoha’s second piece of toast, “Yes, I’m going with him.” She said. She was feeling snappy and annoyed, not to mention not nearly caffeinated enough to be having this conversation.

Nanoha sighed and set down the papers she was going through. “Vivio, I know that you’re nearly an adult, but you’ve got to be careful. If Marcus asks you do to anything that you’re not comfortable with, you need to just tell him know.

Vivio’s face went bright red, “I know, mom, god.” She grabbed her breakfast things and stormed out of the kitchen.

She could not believe her, and as Vivio got her things together for school, she wondered what planet her mother had come from when they didn’t teach sex ed to their kids in middle school. She’d been sexually active for a while now, but she’d never mentioned it to either of her parents – and now she certainly was not going to.

Marcus picked her up for school and she practically ran out of the house, calling a goodbye to her mother and desperately trying to not seem as though she was running away from the house and the awkward conversations that awaited her there.

She slammed the car door closed behind her and flopped backwards into the seat, her school things in between her legs. “I hate my mother,” she announced as Marcus turned the heat down and started the engine once more. “She tried to give me the talk – the talk – this morning as I was getting breakfast!”

Marcus laughed and Vivio shot him an annoyed glare. “What did you do?” he asked with a grin.

“I ran away.” Vivio explained, toying with a lock of her hair that was sticking out of her pony tail. “Fata-mama’s never like this, she just smiles and nods when I talk about you. Mom on the other hand….”

“Always in your business?” Marcus asked, carefully navigating the streets of Mid as they headed towards their high school.

“Exactly. I think Fate-mama has no frame of reference for relationships other than the one she’s had with mom; but Mom’s got a pretty good idea what we do in our free time.” Vivio turned herself to face Marcus, her knee resting against the gearshift. “Do you think she suspects anything?”

“I don’t know, nor do I really want to find out, Vivio.” Marcus said, carefully downshifting around her knee. The car revved dangerously and Vivio lifted her knee so that it wasn’t in the way. “Your mother… scares me.”

Vivio grinned. “As well she should.”

I do not want to think of what would happen to Marcus should Nanoha ever find out what her daughter does "in her free time." Yes, Marcus has every reason to be scared. XD

[illidan182]

Hmm... Ok, well this my first time actualy throwing one of my Nanoha fics up, didn't turn out quite like I wanted but still suitable.

I gotta thank TSS, for readin' his Bountyhunter!Yuuno teaser gave me the kick in the butt to finish mine which has been collecting dust on the hardrive for a while haha xD

Spoiler for Outlaw! Fate:

“Alright everyone! Put your hands in the air, this here is a stick up!” A black and blue dressed person slinked thru the middle isle of the train as its passengers cowered in their seats.

The second one followed behind, was dressed similarly, the only difference being their outfits color, a dark tan red. “If you don’t want to be shot here, put your valuables in this baggy o’ goodies!” An almost girlish giggle came out at the almost clever remark.

The robber who entered first face palmed, “Stop acting like a dummy. Just get the people to put their valuables in that bag and let’s get off this train already.” The black clad cowboy turned back and started threatening people again.

“Fine fine, as you say Harlaown.” Harlaown’s partner turned back and stuck up their gun, making the captives resume their one task.

“Excuse me?” A boy near the front of the car turned and looked behind his char at the two train robbers, “You said your name was Harlaown? The same one as on this poster?” Quickly he searched through a stack of wanted posters, and pulled out the one with the words ‘Wanted: Alive “Harlaown” $800’.

Harlaown looked at the boy sitting in the chair, and a brief sparkle caught their eye. A revolver handle was sticking out of its hoister at the teenager’s side.

“Great… A bounty hunter.”

“What did ya say Fa- err, Harlaown?” Harlaown’s partner stuck their head over their partners to see what had startled the normally calm person.

The teen who had been sitting in the front of the train car moved into the middle of the isle. His hand began steadily moving down to the butt of his revolver.

“Looks like we need to get out of here… else someone actually gets hurt.” Harlaown looked over at their partner. “Arf, we need to get out of here. When I turn around, run out to the back and climb the train’s ladder,” Harlaown whispered to the red dressed partner, and they nodded to each other understandingly.

“Now!” Throwing something at the brown haired bounty hunter, Harlaown and their partner Arf took off down the isle and towards the door.

As they reached the back of the car, Arf pulled the lever hard, freeing the door, allowing it to open properly. They shuffled out of the car as the smoke in the train began to dissipate. Allowing the bounty hunter to see the fleeing criminals.

“Stop! Stop right now!” The brunette teen shouted as he began to run after the two outlaws.

As the two train robbers scrambled up the ladder their bounty buddy had finally made it outside with them.

“Harlaown-san! Please stop running and just give up,” The boy yelled up at her pursuit, hoping they would listen to reason. “There’s no where for you to run now.” He spoke softly to the duo as he cornered them on the train’s roof.

The bandit known as Harlaown looked around, as the train sped over the tracks.

There!

“Arf, there’s a bridge coming up, it looks like the water there is deep enough for us to jump into to get away from this bounty head.” Slowly the two bandits backed farther down the train, their brown haired friend walking forward with them.

Arf looked to Harlaown who has just suggested something extremely crazy, but they had gotten through everything together before. “As you say…”

They were just about at the bridge as a gun shot was heard from the car. Startled by the sudden noise, the bounty hunters head jerked up, making him loose his balance. The young teen fell on the train’s roof, and began to roll off to the side of the fast moving locomotive.

“Dang it, I can’t let someone die because they chassed me…” Harlaown’s conscious came in to play. The wanted man leapt forward and grabbed the youth’s hand, keeping him from kneeling over the side and to his sure death.

“Harlaown! We go now,” Head looking to the side, and seeing Arf jump from the train it came back to the outlaw.

“Right!”

“Harlaown-san!!” The bounty hunter yelled at the two criminals as they jumped from the train.

The wind whistled in the outlaws face as they plummeted down to the lake from their jump. The blue water rushing up to meet them.

Thud!

Oi… that was worse then expected.

“Arf, are you ok?” Water dripped from both their body’s, as the two friends and partners pulled them selves out of the frigged water.

“Yeah, I’m ok, how about you Fate?” The two set their hats to the side, allowing their hair to fly freely in the wind that blew past. “That was a very dangerous idea…”

Fate looked at her long time friend, “I know I’m sorry I drag you on to all of these crazy ideas of mine Arf.” The unmasked girl grinned widely.

“Oh its ok, at least you’re smiling more then you used to.” The auburn haired woman crawled to her blond partner and slung her slender arms around the prone girl. “I rather like you like this anyways”

The two laughed together and looked to where the train they had tried to rob earlier had gone. Realization finally dawned on the blond.

“Arf… did you drop the gold and jewels when you hit the water?” She looked at the other girl as she paled, head hung down.

“Oh not again! Come on Arf, that’s the fifth time now! Mou~” Shaking her head the blond locks thrashed around. “I’m not going to hesitate to bring you next time, I swear.”

This is only prologue, and I have it on FF.net also lol

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by illidan182

Hmm... Ok, well this my first time actualy throwing one of my Nanoha fics up, didn't turn out quite like I wanted but still suitable.

I gotta thank TSS, for readin' his Bountyhunter!Yuuno teaser gave me the kick in the butt to finish mine which has been collecting dust on the hardrive for a while haha xD

Spoiler for Outlaw! Fate:

“Alright everyone! Put your hands in the air, this here is a stick up!” A black and blue dressed person slinked thru the middle isle of the train as its passengers cowered in their seats.

The second one followed behind, was dressed similarly, the only difference being their outfits color, a dark tan red. “If you don’t want to be shot here, put your valuables in this baggy o’ goodies!” An almost girlish giggle came out at the almost clever remark.

The robber who entered first face palmed, “Stop acting like a dummy. Just get the people to put their valuables in that bag and let’s get off this train already.” The black clad cowboy turned back and started threatening people again.

“Fine fine, as you say Harlaown.” Harlaown’s partner turned back and stuck up their gun, making the captives resume their one task.

“Excuse me?” A boy near the front of the car turned and looked behind his char at the two train robbers, “You said your name was Harlaown? The same one as on this poster?” Quickly he searched through a stack of wanted posters, and pulled out the one with the words ‘Wanted: Alive “Harlaown” $800’.

Harlaown looked at the boy sitting in the chair, and a brief sparkle caught their eye. A revolver handle was sticking out of its hoister at the teenager’s side.

“Great… A bounty hunter.”

“What did ya say Fa- err, Harlaown?” Harlaown’s partner stuck their head over their partners to see what had startled the normally calm person.

The teen who had been sitting in the front of the train car moved into the middle of the isle. His hand began steadily moving down to the butt of his revolver.

“Looks like we need to get out of here… else someone actually gets hurt.” Harlaown looked over at their partner. “Arf, we need to get out of here. When I turn around, run out to the back and climb the train’s ladder,” Harlaown whispered to the red dressed partner, and they nodded to each other understandingly.

“Now!” Throwing something at the brown haired bounty hunter, Harlaown and their partner Arf took off down the isle and towards the door.

As they reached the back of the car, Arf pulled the lever hard, freeing the door, allowing it to open properly. They shuffled out of the car as the smoke in the train began to dissipate. Allowing the bounty hunter to see the fleeing criminals.

“Stop! Stop right now!” The brunette teen shouted as he began to run after the two outlaws.

As the two train robbers scrambled up the ladder their bounty buddy had finally made it outside with them.

“Harlaown-san! Please stop running and just give up,” The boy yelled up at her pursuit, hoping they would listen to reason. “There’s no where for you to run now.” He spoke softly to the duo as he cornered them on the train’s roof.

The bandit known as Harlaown looked around, as the train sped over the tracks.

There!

“Arf, there’s a bridge coming up, it looks like the water there is deep enough for us to jump into to get away from this bounty head.” Slowly the two bandits backed farther down the train, their brown haired friend walking forward with them.

Arf looked to Harlaown who has just suggested something extremely crazy, but they had gotten through everything together before. “As you say…”

They were just about at the bridge as a gun shot was heard from the car. Startled by the sudden noise, the bounty hunters head jerked up, making him loose his balance. The young teen fell on the train’s roof, and began to roll off to the side of the fast moving locomotive.

“Dang it, I can’t let someone die because they chassed me…” Harlaown’s conscious came in to play. The wanted man leapt forward and grabbed the youth’s hand, keeping him from kneeling over the side and to his sure death.

“Harlaown! We go now,” Head looking to the side, and seeing Arf jump from the train it came back to the outlaw.

“Right!”

“Harlaown-san!!” The bounty hunter yelled at the two criminals as they jumped from the train.

The wind whistled in the outlaws face as they plummeted down to the lake from their jump. The blue water rushing up to meet them.

Thud!

Oi… that was worse then expected.

“Arf, are you ok?” Water dripped from both their body’s, as the two friends and partners pulled them selves out of the frigged water.

“Yeah, I’m ok, how about you Fate?” The two set their hats to the side, allowing their hair to fly freely in the wind that blew past. “That was a very dangerous idea…”

Fate looked at her long time friend, “I know I’m sorry I drag you on to all of these crazy ideas of mine Arf.” The unmasked girl grinned widely.

“Oh its ok, at least you’re smiling more then you used to.” The auburn haired woman crawled to her blond partner and slung her slender arms around the prone girl. “I rather like you like this anyways”

The two laughed together and looked to where the train they had tried to rob earlier had gone. Realization finally dawned on the blond.

“Arf… did you drop the gold and jewels when you hit the water?” She looked at the other girl as she paled, head hung down.

“Oh not again! Come on Arf, that’s the fifth time now! Mou~” Shaking her head the blond locks thrashed around. “I’m not going to hesitate to bring you next time, I swear.”

This is only prologue, and I have it on FF.net also lol

good start

Fate a wanted person

and it seems Yunno is also there
*I assume*
btw $800 is not much for a bounty

and what happened to the young bounty hunter?
fate caught his hand and then jumped from the train?

btw there is a typo in your summary on ff.net
investiaget <-- investigate

hope to see more

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

Someone needs to do a crackfic about this Nanoha in a can thing! er I mean Nanoha's blood in a can/wine bottle/carton/injection/tetra pack/vending machine/etc. Where's TheShinySword?? Paging TSS. Requesting for daily supply of crack on the thread.

Fate: I need my Nanoha fix.
Nanoha: oO;;

@Enraptured: really? @.@ I'm getting double vision already due to lack of sleep. must. sleep. now. must. resist. *passes out* And I visited your blog and I was literally LOLing at the Fate addiction. And about that faux "demonstration" with the uh... you know. you're funny.

edit: page claim. must be my lucky day. oO page claimed for lemony part of V!F and Nanoha's blood!

Did somebody call for CRACK!

Spoiler for Vampire!Fate Fanfiction Crack:

Hayate: *Who is now a paladin 'cause I said so :3* I know your weakness.
Fate: *smirk* I don't have one.
Hayate: *Reaches into pocket* I have here *Pulls out innocent looking soda can*
Nanoha brand soda!!!!
Fate: eh?
Hayate: heh heh *taps head* It's thirty percent blood!
Fate: BLOOD! *Tackle steal!* Neh he he he *runs away*
Hayate: TTATT Plan backfired!

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Do you plan on turning the entire cast into babysitters or something?

Only if I see a picture that inspires me

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

BUM BUM BAHHHH!

So yeah, everyone remember Vivio's first boyfriend?

Spoiler for Oh, she wrote more :3:

“Vivio,” Nanoha said one morning not long after the dinner that they’d all shared with Marcus as Vivio sleepily made her way into the kitchen. She was heading straight for the coffee, no matter what her mother said about it staining her teeth and being bad for her. Nanoha was a bit of a health nut, and Vivio just wanted her caffeine. She had a paper in her hand, Vivio noticed, and a smile on her face that didn’t make Vivio feel very comfortable. “Your school has a formal coming up.”

Vivio set her coffee cup down on the countertop with a clatter and tried not to look as though she wanted to sink into the floor. “Y-yes?” she said, her voice shaky. “What of it?”

“Fate and I were wondering if you were going with Marcus,” Nanoha said, nibbling on the corner of her toast.

Vivio shot her a withering glare and concentrated on getting her coffee, loudly banging her way though the kitchen as she got her breakfast together. She could not believe her mother. Marcus had asked her weeks ago to go with him, and only now her mother was noticing? It was almost insulting really.

She set her coffee mug down on the table and stole Nanoha’s second piece of toast, “Yes, I’m going with him.” She said. She was feeling snappy and annoyed, not to mention not nearly caffeinated enough to be having this conversation.

Nanoha sighed and set down the papers she was going through. “Vivio, I know that you’re nearly an adult, but you’ve got to be careful. If Marcus asks you do to anything that you’re not comfortable with, you need to just tell him know.

Vivio’s face went bright red, “I know, mom, god.” She grabbed her breakfast things and stormed out of the kitchen.

She could not believe her, and as Vivio got her things together for school, she wondered what planet her mother had come from when they didn’t teach sex ed to their kids in middle school. She’d been sexually active for a while now, but she’d never mentioned it to either of her parents – and now she certainly was not going to.

Marcus picked her up for school and she practically ran out of the house, calling a goodbye to her mother and desperately trying to not seem as though she was running away from the house and the awkward conversations that awaited her there.

She slammed the car door closed behind her and flopped backwards into the seat, her school things in between her legs. “I hate my mother,” she announced as Marcus turned the heat down and started the engine once more. “She tried to give me the talk – the talk – this morning as I was getting breakfast!”

Marcus laughed and Vivio shot him an annoyed glare. “What did you do?” he asked with a grin.

“I ran away.” Vivio explained, toying with a lock of her hair that was sticking out of her pony tail. “Fata-mama’s never like this, she just smiles and nods when I talk about you. Mom on the other hand….”

“Always in your business?” Marcus asked, carefully navigating the streets of Mid as they headed towards their high school.

“Exactly. I think Fate-mama has no frame of reference for relationships other than the one she’s had with mom; but Mom’s got a pretty good idea what we do in our free time.” Vivio turned herself to face Marcus, her knee resting against the gearshift. “Do you think she suspects anything?”

“I don’t know, nor do I really want to find out, Vivio.” Marcus said, carefully downshifting around her knee. The car revved dangerously and Vivio lifted her knee so that it wasn’t in the way. “Your mother… scares me.”

Vivio grinned. “As well she should.”

Poor poor guy

Spoiler for Poor Marcus:

Nanoha: Run little boy run!
Marcus: D: not again *runs*
Vivio: T-T why can't I just have a normal relationship

Originally Posted by illidan182

Hmm... Ok, well this my first time actualy throwing one of my Nanoha fics up, didn't turn out quite like I wanted but still suitable.

I gotta thank TSS, for readin' his Bountyhunter!Yuuno teaser gave me the kick in the butt to finish mine which has been collecting dust on the hardrive for a while haha xD

Spoiler for Outlaw! Fate:

“*snip

This is only prologue, and I have it on FF.net also lol

Awesome I'm proud to have inspired you.
Btw if you're interested in a crossover PM me XD.
Anyway I'm looking forward to seeing where this will go.
A couple of typos, if you need someone to Beta I offer my services.



and

B And it was hawt :3

All of the sudden I have the urge to go write some ZafiraxArf oO

[Satashi]

For some reason, whenever I think about what it would be like for Yuuno and Chrono to be bounty hunters, this always comes to mind....

Spoiler for Yuuno the Stampede:

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

For some reason, whenever I think about what it would be like for Yuuno and Chrono to be bounty hunters, this always comes to mind....

Spoiler for Yuuno the Stampede:

Yeah that'd be Bounty Hunter!Yuuno in a nut shell... The more I think about it the more I want to start writing XD

[illidan182]

Originally Posted by Gillian

good start

Fate a wanted person

and it seems Yunno is also there
*I assume*
btw $800 is not much for a bounty

and what happened to the young bounty hunter?
fate caught his hand and then jumped from the train?

btw there is a typo in your summary on ff.net
investiaget <-- investigate

hope to see more

heh yeah, Yuuno is the BH, but you dont really see him called by name untill later. The $800 dollar bounty is like that because shes just a minior outlaw and just does for fun.

To clarify, she pulls him back up as hes about to fall, and jumps off her self afterwards. If he fell like he was going to he would have died when he landed. Also, thanks for the typo in the summary lol, I typed that just before I went to sleep last night. xD

Awesome I'm proud to have inspired you.
Btw if you're interested in a crossover PM me XD.
Anyway I'm looking forward to seeing where this will go.
A couple of typos, if you need someone to Beta I offer my services.

Yeah I need to really look out for the typos, lol. I swear i read it over like 5-6 diffrent times and always end up missing some. =( As for someone to Beta read, that would be awesome, since... I'm the only one doing so haha.

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by illidan182

heh yeah, Yuuno is the BH, but you dont really see him called by name untill later. The $800 dollar bounty is like that because shes just a minior outlaw and just does for fun.

To clarify, she pulls him back up as hes about to fall, and jumps off her self afterwards. If he fell like he was going to he would have died when he landed. Also, thanks for the typo in the summary lol, I typed that just before I went to sleep last night. xD

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