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EthernalRain · 2011-10-29, 23:41

Have Kyuukai asleep in his workshop at the beginning. Have Aria zoom straight there to see if her father is there. Then have young Kyuukai break in to the workshop building due to recognising the seperate building as the dream workshop he designed when he was six. Create havoc from there.

You could also have young Kyuukai show up when Tabane goes to the school to check if her experiment worked not only on Kyuukai. He wouldn't know his father was dead, and he would quickly find a weapon: having broken into the workshop and stolen a gun and knife from his own armory.

Then he would probably either hide in the workshop or run to the nearest Onee-san figure for shelter. Preferably running straight to Houki when he sees her, because of the resemblance to his mother.

HasuMasu · 2011-10-29, 23:44

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

Actually, the don't mean the same thing. "Representative Candidate" means that they were chosen but they can easily be replaced if they find someone better, hence why they are Candidates. "Representative Cadet", on the other hand, are people who have already been given the position permanently due to their skill. The five heroines are candidates while Tatenashi is a cadet

No no no, Zero was right when he said they were interchangeable, the girls are candidates/cadets, they've been called cadets many times, and as for Tatenashi, no, she's not either, she's a country representative.

My time on the novel thread has given me infinite power.

DarkJak2050 · 2011-10-29, 23:51

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No no no, Zero was right when he said they were interchangeable, the girls are candidates/cadets, they've been called cadets many times, and as for Tatenashi, no, she's not either, she's a country representative.

My time on the novel thread has given me infinite power.

"Jeez louise, what the fuck!"
- Clayton Carmine (Gears of war 3)

Okay seriously, this is more confusing than hell. I don't know for sure if those two terms mean the same thing or are seperate now.

Sheesh... This is going to be a problem that might put a stop to my fic.

HasuMasu · 2011-10-30, 00:03

The infinite power of having trained for 1000000000 years in the novel thread tells me they're the same.

Eratas123 · 2011-10-30, 00:08

@ Rain - Writing Kyuukai's segment right now, it's just a draft since I'm rushing it but please read and review if you can.

EthernalRain · 2011-10-30, 00:12

@Eratas: Sure, I'll read it. After I take a shower though.

DarkJak2050 · 2011-10-30, 00:37

Uhh EthernalRain, did you even see my question on the last page?

Here it is again if you missed it.

Can Kyuukai fix/repair practically anything without any form of manuel/guide, if he has the right parts?

Even if it's something he never messed with, let alone touched before?

One of my OCs I mentioned before can. And what about decrypting data?

EthernalRain · 2011-10-30, 00:39

Oh, he can. As long as he has an idea of how what he is repairing works, then he can repair it. And he can decrypt data rather well.

Eratas123 · 2011-10-30, 00:41

@ Rain, Zero and Meister - Here's part Kyuukai's segment. Read and review. I have to do an essay so it'll be pretty short.

Spoiler:

EthernalRain · 2011-10-30, 00:47

Looking good! Very good!

Now I look forward to Kyuukai meeting his gun-nut, tsundere daughter, and more Tabane action.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-30, 00:49

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Rain, Zero and Meister - Here's part Kyuukai's segment. Read and review. I have to do an essay so it'll be pretty short.

Spoiler:

THE HELL! That's incredibly funny!!

DarkJak2050 · 2011-10-30, 00:50

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Originally Posted by EthernalRain

Oh, he can. As long as he has an idea of how what he is repairing works, then he can repair it. And he can decrypt data rather well.

Then I guess I'll say that my OC and Kyukai are virtually even.

Eratas123 · 2011-10-30, 00:51

@ Rain - Does Kyuukai's kid curse a lot? I was so tempted to put a cluster f bomb just to add some irony to her "Angelic" image.

@ Zero - Who should I do next? Any ideas?

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-30, 00:54

Nope, My GN Condenser is empty now, still recharging.

(P.S. I'll need it for second Trans Am)

blitz1/2 · 2011-10-30, 00:55

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Rain - Does Kyuukai's kid curse a lot? I was so tempted to put a cluster f bomb just to add some irony to her "Angelic" image.

@ Zero - Who should I do next? Any ideas?

Well, under the guise of making it dark, maybe some nations are aware of this development and will stop at nothing to take one of Ichika's children in order to force-breed male IS pilots.

Eratas123 · 2011-10-30, 00:56

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Nope, My GN Condenser is empty now, still recharging.

My choices now are:

Ichika - Yandere Jelly harem.

Irish - More angst fest.

Or Maximillian - More jokes with the st@rs.

Which one seems better?

@ Blitz - I'm trying to avoid darkness here. It's supposed to be a parody/comedy. There will be parts where the past versions are attacked/exploited since they're easier to tackle than the present versions.

EthernalRain · 2011-10-30, 00:57

@ Eratus: She curses, of course considering who her father is, but only in private due to worrying her mother would find out. But she does let out the occassional cluster F bomb in public when she's angry or frustrated.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-30, 00:58

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

My choices now are:

Ichika - Yandere Jelly harem. Boring, next!

Irish - More angst fest Heartwarming moment.

Or Maximillian - More jokes with the st@rs.

Which one seems better?

Please?

+10char

Eratas123 · 2011-10-30, 01:01

@ Zero - So who do you want? Max or Irish?

@ Rain - You mind if I put some ship tease with kid!Irish/Yuriko and Aria? Both Irish and Kyuukai are gonna go ballistic since they aren't exactly the best of friends.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-30, 01:03

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@ Zero - So who do you want? Max or Irish?

Hmmm, well, I don;t know that much about Max.... who's his kid's mother anyway?

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@ Rain - You mind if I put some ship tease with kid!Irish/Yuriko and Aria? Both Irish and Kyuukai are gonna go ballistic since they aren't exactly the best of friends.

THIS! THIS PLEASE!

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HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	The infinite power of having trained for 1000000000 years in the novel thread tells me they're the same. __________________

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Rain, Zero and Meister - Here's part Kyuukai's segment. Read and review. I have to do an essay so it'll be pretty short. Spoiler: As all this chaos was going on, a certain figure was oblivious to it all. "Zzzzzzzzzzz" Mostly because he slept through it all. He had stayed at the workshop since last night trying to improve Sonia's power out put to no avail. "Hehehehehehe, neko pajamas." And apparently he was dreaming of neko pajamas. "Damn toaster, why don't you fucking work?" Okay, he's having some odd dreams so maybe we sould go somewhere else for now. "Golden eye." Definitely go somewhere else. <----------> Location: IS academy hallways. A young girl no older than nine was walking though the hallways cautiously. Her silver hair combined with her white dress gave her the appearance of an innocent angel. "Where is it? I know it's here somewhere!" Of course, looks can be deceiving. "This is so annoying, this place is way too big!" The girl continued to look through the hallway until she managed to find another person. A 7 year old kid by the looks of it. "Hey you!" She yelled out to the other child. "W-What?" The child turned around at the voice and looked directly at the silver haired girl, she noticed that his features weren't Japanese. Not that odd in a place like IS academy "Do you know where the workshop is?" "Workshop?" He tilted his head to the side. "Yeah, my dad's probably there working on something new again." "Um...sorry. I'm new here too." "Alright then, come with me." She grabbed onto his hand and started pulling him along before he planted his feet on the ground, making them both stop in their tracks. "What is it?" She said in slightly annoyed tone. "Where are we going?" He asked her. "To dad's workshop" "But why do I have to come along?" "You're lost too right? I can't just leave you here." With that said, she started pulling him by the again. Ignoring all his protests that he wasn't lost. "Hey what's your name anyway?" She suddenly asked him. "...I don't want to say it." "Just say it, I won't laugh or anything." "It's......Yuriko." "..." "...Pfft." "Hey! You laughed!" "Hahahahaha, what kind of name is Yuriko anyway?" "Shut up, it's not like I picked it or anything." "Well, you can call me Aria." <---------> On the other side of the school, another figure was making his way to the workshop. "Hmm, I wonder how Kyuu's doing?" That figure was none other than the genius inventor, Tabane Shinonono. "I wonder if the experiment worked, hopefully he won't be-" "MOMMY!" Before she realized it, a small figure had crashed into her and held onto her legs. "Mommy! Where are we?" The figure was a small boy of of about seven years of age with black hair. His clothes consisted of a white shirt, blue shorts and white sneakers. Tabane could recognize that voice anywhere. "Kyuu?" "Mommy, I was looking for you all day!" He continued to cling to her legs even as she tried to balance herself. "W-What's going on? Only the future was supposed to be affected." "Mommy? What's wrong?" "It's nothing Kyuu, mommy just has some business to take care of." She tried to calm the nervous boy down. "Oh really?" A voice behind her remarked. Tabane froze as she heard the voice, she knew that voice anywhere. "C-C-Chi-chan! H-How are you doing?" Chifuyu Orimura stood behind her. Arms crossed with obvious anger on her face. "Chifuyu-nee? Is something wrong?" From behind her, another boy of about 7 years came out. "It's nothing Ichika." She told the young boy before turning back to Tabane, "You have a lot of explaining to do Tabane." "Ehehehehe.....oops?"

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Nope, My GN Condenser is empty now, still recharging. (P.S. I'll need it for second Trans Am) __________________

2011-10-29, 23:41	Link #5061
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	Have Kyuukai asleep in his workshop at the beginning. Have Aria zoom straight there to see if her father is there. Then have young Kyuukai break in to the workshop building due to recognising the seperate building as the dream workshop he designed when he was six. Create havoc from there. You could also have young Kyuukai show up when Tabane goes to the school to check if her experiment worked not only on Kyuukai. He wouldn't know his father was dead, and he would quickly find a weapon: having broken into the workshop and stolen a gun and knife from his own armory. Then he would probably either hide in the workshop or run to the nearest Onee-san figure for shelter. Preferably running straight to Houki when he sees her, because of the resemblance to his mother.

2011-10-30, 00:08	Link #5065
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Rain - Writing Kyuukai's segment right now, it's just a draft since I'm rushing it but please read and review if you can.

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EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	@Eratas: Sure, I'll read it. After I take a shower though.

2011-10-30, 00:37	Link #5067
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Uhh EthernalRain, did you even see my question on the last page? Here it is again if you missed it. Can Kyuukai fix/repair practically anything without any form of manuel/guide, if he has the right parts? Even if it's something he never messed with, let alone touched before? One of my OCs I mentioned before can. And what about decrypting data?

2011-10-30, 00:39	Link #5068
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	Oh, he can. As long as he has an idea of how what he is repairing works, then he can repair it. And he can decrypt data rather well.

2011-10-30, 00:47	Link #5070
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	Looking good! Very good! Now I look forward to Kyuukai meeting his gun-nut, tsundere daughter, and more Tabane action.

2011-10-30, 00:51	Link #5073
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Rain - Does Kyuukai's kid curse a lot? I was so tempted to put a cluster f bomb just to add some irony to her "Angelic" image. @ Zero - Who should I do next? Any ideas?

2011-10-30, 00:57	Link #5077
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	@ Eratus: She curses, of course considering who her father is, but only in private due to worrying her mother would find out. But she does let out the occassional cluster F bomb in public when she's angry or frustrated.

2011-10-30, 01:01	Link #5079
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Zero - So who do you want? Max or Irish? @ Rain - You mind if I put some ship tease with kid!Irish/Yuriko and Aria? Both Irish and Kyuukai are gonna go ballistic since they aren't exactly the best of friends.