Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by agetreme

Oh... so she is good now? No longer a Magnificent bitch?

Good? Understatement, she's true embodiment of idealist in current incarnate, see everything in black and white and tried to pull who's in the gray zone...

[Eratas123]

@ Treme - Yup, she's a good girl now. Everyone was too serious on the OC list so he dropped Magnificent Bitch Karon in favor of Genki Girl Karon.

@ Yachi - Have Laura and Ravena try to awkwardly bond. How about a scene where Laura tries to spend quality time with her but all she knows how to do is lecture her about proper gun maintenance and the importance of the knife.

@ Zero - Which of course is a problem for the Morally Gray Irish

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Yachiyo

Hey guys, I need help. How should I end this after this scene?

Spoiler for Scene:

(Normal POV)

“Wow Laura, that technique you used earlier was so cool!” Charlotte said.

“Huh?” she asked.

“What, you don’t know?” Charlotte asked her.

“Ah, you mean, the stopping scene?” she said.

“Yes! That one.” Charlotte replied.

“I actually really don’t know what happened. But I just felt something…” Laura said.

“I know it. Your IS woke up” Ravena said as she appeared. “Come on Regine, come out there,
and don’t be shy”

“WHAT?!”

Suddenly a girl with silver hair appeared.

“Eto…..” Regine said shyly.

“I want you to meet my friend. She’s Regine, Laura’s IS” Ravena said. “I’ve been talking to her
for---”

Regine quickly put her palm on Ravena’s mouth and made an awkward smile.

Tatenashi arrived and asked them

“How did your mission go?” Tatenashi asked.

“It went all fine.” Aden said.

“Who’re these 2?” she asked.

“This is Ravena (Refers to the blonde girl) and this is Regine (Refers to the silver-haired girl)”

Aden introduced them.

“Ra… Ravena?!” suddenly a green haired girl appeared and said. “RAVENA!!!!” she quickly
jumped and hugged her.

“Lady! Long-time no see!” Ravena said as she hugged her tightly.

“Wait, who is this?” Laura asked.

“She’s Lady, she’s my IS” Tatenashi said.

“Since when did she wake up?” Aden asked.

“When Rafael attacked the academy…” she replied.

Aden face palmed.

“Why didn’t you tell us this?” Aden asked.

“Well, it’s no big deal. And she requested it to me too. I didn’t think Ravena would be
Charlotte’s IS” Tatenashi said.

Suggest pls

*Losing the ability to talk because of the awesomeness*

I suggest you spiced up more emotion, it's after all an introduction of new character.

EDIT: ^What Eras said above.

[Yachiyo]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

*Losing the ability to talk because of the awesomeness*

I suggest you spiced up more emotion, it's after all an introduction of new character.

EDIT: ^What Eras said above.

That would be on the next chapter.

@Eratas, I'll try that especially Laura got a new technique.

EDIT: I'm also making a new fic about the pasts of the girls, after I publish chapter 2, I'm gonna take a break for Everything is Radiant

[Eratas123]

Originally Posted by Yachiyo

That would be on the next chapter.

@Eratas, I'll try that especially Laura got a new technique.

EDIT: I'm also making a new fic about the pasts of the girls, after I publish chapter 2, I'm gonna take a break for Everything is Radiant

I'm already doing something like that with Daydreams Hell, Rin's entire daydream was just backstory.

[Yachiyo]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

I'm already doing something like that with Daydreams Hell, Rin's entire daydream was just backstory.

Mine is not probably daydreams, but something like nightmare, pain of realization, or something like that.

BTW I'm looking forward for Char's daydream :P

[Eratas123]

Originally Posted by Yachiyo

Mine is not probably daydreams, but something like nightmare, pain of realization, or something like that.

BTW I'm looking forward for Char's daydream :P

I'll have to revise the plot since someone already did an amnesia fic

[Yachiyo]

There, I published the Chapter two now

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7486570/...ing_is_Radiant

Review please

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

I'll have to revise the plot since someone already did an amnesia fic

Who did that?

[Eratas123]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Who did that?

Dunno, you'll have to ask Hawke for that. He says he read one already.

[HasuMasu]

Zero needs to continue the author fic.

[Eratas123]

@ Rain - Can you give me the info on Aria now?

[EthernalRain]

I'm tired.. Got back from a fireworks shopping spree and testing period... There goes 600 bucks...

@ Eratus: Here's a quickly done profile for Aria.

- Silver hair that reaches her waist
- Heterochromia: Left eye is wine red while her right is hazel brown
- Pale skin
- Needs to wear reading glasses to see small print, glasses are large circular ones she hates
- Physically she looks like Laura at a young age, a petite build
- Much stronger than she looks, can take on anyone much bigger than her and still have a good chance to win
-Pilots a Seraphim IS, except instead of silver and white, it's colored black and red and sports the symbols of the Schwarzer Haze
-Carries a switchblade and a P229, both customized to fit her hands.
-Loves hot chocolate and anything sweet or salty. Refuses to eat anything bitter.
-Possessive of anyone who catches her attention, clings to them and sticks like glue at times: namely to her parents, Houki, her grandmother, and Irish(older)/Yuriko.
-Likes to pick fights/play/hang out with Ichika's kids of the Houki pairing timeline, due to coming from the same timeline possibility
-Has a strong dislike of Lingyin (for her yandereness) and Cecilia (for her cooking)
-She's a delinquent, paints grafitti of the Schwarzer Haze everywhere
-Admires Tatenashi, aspires to be more like her
-Has a strange attraction to bishonen and the androgynous, but normally ends up roughing them up for being too feminine

That should be good enough.

[Eratas123]

@ Rain - Attracted too bishonen and andorgynous? Fit's Yuriko perfectly The way he was raised means he ends up looking like the archetypal Bishie. Irish is just plain effeminate

Anyway, I'm also wondering what kind of personality she likes in a guy.

[EthernalRain]

@ Eratus: She likes guys who have similar qualities to that of her father. That, or she'll grab a guy, and start molding him to act, look, and even speak in typical shoujo manga/anime "dream boy" style.

[Eratas123]

Originally Posted by EthernalRain

@ Eratus: She likes guys who have similar qualities to that of her father. That, or she'll grab a guy, and start molding him to act, look, and even speak in typical shoujo manga/anime "dream boy" style.

What do you mean "dream boy"? Yuriko talks in a calm manner and tends not to get easily mad since he's used to dealing with crazy situations. He looks like a bishie but he's only seven so that's kind of expected. Could you please tell me what you mean by dream boy?

Side note - She sure is aware/mature for being a 9 year old.

[MeisterBabylon]

ATTENTION!

As my previous posts have been completely missed... I have an important announcement.

Originally Posted by agetreme

How nasty does Meister want Karon to be?

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Before she was a Magnificent bitch who acted cutesy to fool others. Now, she's a genki girl who loves getting into crazy hijinks.

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Good? Understatement, she's true embodiment of idealist in current incarnate, see everything in black and white and tried to pull who's in the gray zone...

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Treme - Yup, she's a good girl now. Everyone was too serious on the OC list so he dropped Magnificent Bitch Karon in favor of Genki Girl Karon.

Except that is now AU to the AU. I decided to put all that back in to that crack world, and leave it there. That also includes most of Class 1-2. The originals were too cracky, the remake didn't help, so I'm relegating all of them into that alternate universe.

In the alternate fanon, Tabane's character was interpretted to be a chessmaster, and messed with everyone so much that everything turned out like that. Shooting St@r further complicates matters.

In the active fanon, Tabane's, like Agex said, just an inventor trying to build and build and so did not mess with everyone. Most of the world-changing events in the Original Generation world then did not happen, such as the IS war, North vs South Korea, Metropolia being built, orbital elevators, and a space race. Much of the world remains like what it is now, apart from role reversals in some countries, what's status quo in 2011 is status quo in 2021, with the sole exception of the ASEAN Foundation, the militarization of EU, and the most destructive Republican president completely undoing Obama's 8 years of world.

In this world, most of the "Class 1-2" either never made it to ISA, are assigned to other classes, are dead, or did not turn out as campy. As such, Class 1-2 is filled with same Ichika-whoring flunkies as the rest of the school.

I'll also be doing a cast change, returning to the 1 focus IS I started with.

If its any consolation, this "active" fanon appears as a metafictional show within the alternate fanon.

[EthernalRain]

@ Eratus: I'm talking about the stereotypical "prince" kind of guy, the feminine, relatively handsome kind of guy that makes girls swoon and squeal via appearance, actions, and his infatuation with the heroine.

So basically, Aria's gonna take Yuriko and mold him into her perfect guy, so she can turn her life into the girliest shoujo plot ever, even though it contradicts her image of herself.

Anyway, her maturity stems from who her parents are. Kyuukai in the future becomes Commander of FRACTURE's military sectors, and Laura becomes his advisor. But Laura ends up having a bigger say in FRACTURE's matters than Kyuukai ever will.

[Eratas123]

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

ATTENTION!

As my previous posts have been completely missed... I have an important announcement.







Except that is now AU to the AU. I decided to put all that back in to that crack world, and leave it there. That also includes most of Class 1-2. The originals were too cracky, the remake didn't help, so I'm relegating all of them into that alternate universe.

In the alternate fanon, Tabane's character was interpretted to be a chessmaster, and messed with everyone so much that everything turned out like that. Shooting St@r further complicates matters.

In the active fanon, Tabane's, like Agex said, just an inventor trying to build and build and so did not mess with everyone. Most of the world-changing events in the Original Generation world then did not happen, such as the IS war, North vs South Korea, Metropolia being built, orbital elevators, and a space race. Much of the world remains like what it is now, apart from role reversals in some countries, what's status quo in 2011 is status quo in 2021, with the sole exception of the ASEAN Foundation, the militarization of EU, and the most destructive Republican president completely undoing Obama's 8 years of world.

In this world, most of the "Class 1-2" either never made it to ISA, are assigned to other classes, are dead, or did not turn out as campy. As such, Class 1-2 is filled with same Ichika-whoring flunkies as the rest of the school.

I'll also be doing a cast change, returning to the 1 focus IS I started with.

If its any consolation, this "active" fanon appears as a metafictional show within the alternate fanon.

So which one will you be doing first? The grim dark one or the crack sci-fi one?

[MeisterBabylon]

As a side effect of this change, I understand that many other characters will end up changed or not even appearing. I know most of the old characters will be dropped from the line-up. But they will at least have the consolation of existing in the Alpha World Line...