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DarkJak2050 · 2015-11-30, 04:53

Uh guys, I need some help with my Fic. here.

I know that the last thing I've officially released was the Prologue to Phase 2 of Project Silverback and it ended in one of my OCs getting ready for an emergency session with the world leaders.

The next chapter is set in that session to extent, but my issue is how should I have it go down? Any advice when it comes to discussing something major involving people of the highest status?

I tried using the Round Table Conference from Log Horizon as a reference, but I just can't get it down...

SRW-Otaku · 2015-11-30, 08:19

I'm bored, so I'm just throwing random shits here, Jakkie:
Have your OC go Gendo on everybody. Make it so that he's the only actual person who is physically in the room and not a hologram, yet somehow he's the one who everybody pays attention to. Make it so he plays on the strings of the others.

Chaos-Zero · 2015-11-30, 16:12

I may have an idea for the fanfic of IS. How about "Case of the Broken Computer"? The plot is that the girls in Ichika's harem came by at his house for the third time. Hoping one of them will get an alone time with him as well as to get closer to him. Then Ichika himself returns home with the groceries where his harem such as Houki, Cecilia, Rin, Charlotte, Laura and Tatenashi were for him. Once he came, the girls in their friendly manner as they wants to help him to put away the groceries. Ichika don't mind them to come over and he glad that they came. Then he goes to his room. Ichika scream as he discovers that his laptop computer has been broken. The girls came as they heard his scream only they witness Ichika become really upset about his broken laptop computer. Then the girls trying to explain how it happened. Tatenashi propose a mystery to solve of a case of a broken computer. Can Ichika and his harem find the culprit? Who or what have broke Ichika's computer? Find out as the mystery is about to be unfold.

What do you guys think?

lovetospoon73 · 2015-11-30, 16:25

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Originally Posted by Chaos-Zero

I may have an idea for the fanfic of IS. How about "Case of the Broken Computer"? The plot is that the girls in Ichika's harem came by at his house for the third time. Hoping one of them will get an alone time with him as well as to get closer to him. Then Ichika himself returns home with the groceries where his harem such as Houki, Cecilia, Rin, Charlotte, Laura and Tatenashi were for him. Once he came, the girls in their friendly manner as they wants to help him to put away the groceries. Ichika don't mind them to come over and he glad that they came. Then he goes to his room. Ichika scream as he discovers that his laptop computer has been broken. The girls came as they heard his scream only they witness Ichika become really upset about his broken laptop computer. Then the girls trying to explain how it happened. Tatenashi propose a mystery to solve of a case of a broken computer. Can Ichika and his harem find the culprit? Who or what have broke Ichika's computer? Find out as the mystery is about to be unfold.

What do you guys think?

that's good for a short story; but there is still some serious ?'s we need answers to. We don't even have any extra details about volume 10 of the light novel series

Chaos-Zero · 2015-11-30, 16:51

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Originally Posted by lovetospoon73

that's good for a short story; but there is still some serious ?'s we need answers to. We don't even have any extra details about volume 10 of the light novel series

I forgot to tell you that each girl in the IS harem will tell explain to Ichika about their respective parts of what happened. I pretty sure that one girl would put the blame on another about the wreckage of Ichika's computer on her part of the story.

Do you think that Kanzashi can fix the broken computer?

SRW-Otaku · 2015-11-30, 22:22

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Originally Posted by Chaos-Zero

Do you think that Kanzashi can fix the broken computer?

Maybe. Or she'll turn it into a mini version of the the Compatible Kaiser, judging her tendencies.

lovetospoon73 · 2015-11-30, 22:41

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Originally Posted by Chaos-Zero

I forgot to tell you that each girl in the IS harem will tell explain to Ichika about their respective parts of what happened. I pretty sure that one girl would put the blame on another about the wreckage of Ichika's computer on her part of the story.

Do you think that Kanzashi can fix the broken computer?

She's may not be in the same level of intelligence as tabane but there's a chance

SRW-Otaku · 2015-11-30, 23:21

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Originally Posted by lovetospoon73

She's may not be in the same level of intelligence as tabane but there's a chance

It's just a goddamn laptop. It's not a fucking EVA.

DarkJak2050 · 2015-12-01, 03:17

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Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

Uh guys, I need some help with my Fic. here.

I know that the last thing I've officially released was the Prologue to Phase 2 of Project Silverback and it ended in one of my OCs getting ready for an emergency session with the world leaders.

The next chapter is set in that session to extent, but my issue is how should I have it go down? Any advice when it comes to discussing something major involving people of the highest status?

I tried using the Round Table Conference from Log Horizon as a reference, but I just can't get it down...

Quote:

Originally Posted by SRW-Otaku

I'm bored, so I'm just throwing random shits here, Jakkie:
Have your OC go Gendo on everybody. Make it so that he's the only actual person who is physically in the room and not a hologram, yet somehow he's the one who everybody pays attention to. Make it so he plays on the strings of the others.

Any other suggestions?

agetreme · 2015-12-01, 07:28

One word: money.

The cost, potential benefit and losses.

lovetospoon73 · 2015-12-01, 16:59

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Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

Any other suggestions?

How about this for a short story for the light novel series: during a field trip, chifuyu starting to get pistes because ichika spent a WHOLE MONTH with the girls & hadn't got any alone time with him

, later decide to drink to calm her, which cause her to worry that ichika might leave FOR GOOD

end up so HAMMERED, well I'll let u guys decide what happen next

DarkJak2050 · 2015-12-02, 02:02

Quote:

Originally Posted by lovetospoon73

How about this for a short story for the light novel series: during a field trip, chifuyu starting to get pistes because ichika spent a WHOLE MONTH with the girls & hadn't got any alone time with him

, later decide to drink to calm her, which cause her to worry that ichika might leave FOR GOOD

end up so HAMMERED, well I'll let u guys decide what happen next

[Chucks it out the Window]

Not helping.

Fireminer · 2015-12-02, 08:55

http://www.cracked.com/personal-expe...t-fiction.html

Anyone think you're better than this, raise your left hand.

And anyone think you aren't better than this, raise your right hand.

(Raise both)

SRW-Otaku · 2015-12-02, 09:04

(Raise all three of my 'hands')

The 48th Ronin · 2015-12-02, 09:04

What if at some point Chifuyu met Saitama, just before the latter becomes a hero? Maybe as schoolmates in high school?

SRW-Otaku · 2015-12-02, 09:08

Then it will be kinda awkward when they met later on.
Chifuyu (Piloting the Cybuster): "Saitama-san?"
Saitama (about to OHKO a giant alien beast): "Chifuyu-san?"
Chifuyu:" What are you doing without your hair and that ridiculous outfit?"
Saitama:" What are you doing in that giant robot-bird thingy?"
Chifuyu:" Tabane made this for me with help from her cousin Nanoha."

The 48th Ronin · 2015-12-02, 09:12

^ That's quite a fun scene.

SRW-Otaku · 2015-12-02, 09:15

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Originally Posted by Captain Orange

^ That's quite a fun scene.

Why thank you. I used one brain cell to made that.

wavehawk · 2015-12-06, 06:22

...I think we should let Ichika watch Gundam Iron-Blooded Orphans. Just sayin'.

Fireminer · 2015-12-06, 11:23

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Originally Posted by wavehawk

...I think we should let Ichika watch Gundam Iron-Blooded Orphans. Just sayin'.

He still need a fedora. Or, know how how to keep it on his head.

Suck it! Maybe he should learn how to keep his head attached to his neck first.

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SRW-Otaku The Corniest Mecha Fanboy Join Date: Jun 2015 Location: SRX's Tronium Engine	I'm bored, so I'm just throwing random shits here, Jakkie: Have your OC go Gendo on everybody. Make it so that he's the only actual person who is physically in the room and not a hologram, yet somehow he's the one who everybody pays attention to. Make it so he plays on the strings of the others. __________________ The thing that formed my childhood...

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The 48th Ronin Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2015 Location: Anywhere. I'm a nomad.	What if at some point Chifuyu met Saitama, just before the latter becomes a hero? Maybe as schoolmates in high school? __________________ . "You can always die. It's living that takes real courage." .

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SRW-Otaku The Corniest Mecha Fanboy Join Date: Jun 2015 Location: SRX's Tronium Engine	Then it will be kinda awkward when they met later on. Chifuyu (Piloting the Cybuster): "Saitama-san?" Saitama (about to OHKO a giant alien beast): "Chifuyu-san?" Chifuyu:" What are you doing without your hair and that ridiculous outfit?" Saitama:" What are you doing in that giant robot-bird thingy?" Chifuyu:" Tabane made this for me with help from her cousin Nanoha." __________________ The thing that formed my childhood...

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DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Uh guys, I need some help with my Fic. here. I know that the last thing I've officially released was the Prologue to Phase 2 of Project Silverback and it ended in one of my OCs getting ready for an emergency session with the world leaders. The next chapter is set in that session to extent, but my issue is how should I have it go down? Any advice when it comes to discussing something major involving people of the highest status? I tried using the Round Table Conference from Log Horizon as a reference, but I just can't get it down...

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Chaos-Zero Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2014 Location: Florida Age: 39	I may have an idea for the fanfic of IS. How about "Case of the Broken Computer"? The plot is that the girls in Ichika's harem came by at his house for the third time. Hoping one of them will get an alone time with him as well as to get closer to him. Then Ichika himself returns home with the groceries where his harem such as Houki, Cecilia, Rin, Charlotte, Laura and Tatenashi were for him. Once he came, the girls in their friendly manner as they wants to help him to put away the groceries. Ichika don't mind them to come over and he glad that they came. Then he goes to his room. Ichika scream as he discovers that his laptop computer has been broken. The girls came as they heard his scream only they witness Ichika become really upset about his broken laptop computer. Then the girls trying to explain how it happened. Tatenashi propose a mystery to solve of a case of a broken computer. Can Ichika and his harem find the culprit? Who or what have broke Ichika's computer? Find out as the mystery is about to be unfold. What do you guys think?

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Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	http://www.cracked.com/personal-expe...t-fiction.html Anyone think you're better than this, raise your left hand. And anyone think you aren't better than this, raise your right hand. (Raise both)

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