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There's not much of a harem so far.
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2015-02-08, 00:54 | Link #42 |
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more info about that dimension patrol, please....
since it has been 8 years, everyone on Earth are now 'gifted' with the <Menu>? For the girls around the MC: personality-wise and how do they treat/interact with him? ...especially the teacher when she's not in her 'alter' mode...
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Chapter 01-02 is up!
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Basically a police that catches illegal crossers? Like u know..border police.. Menu? Nope it's just an equipment that displays stats. Used everywhere. The girls...hmm...the ojou-sama treats him like a person she wants to aim for. But can hardly properly interact with him because of her groupie. (she is the top in school after all) The fox girl acts like an unreliable caretaker. She has a very bright attitude and interacts with him unreservedly. Since she hardly has any friends in school. The teacher like every other battle maniac just keep on asking him for a fight. But they get along very well after that and she goes to him for advice. (be it relationships or fight tactics) I don't know, his features wasn't stated. But his name is Kaito...could be a jap but he could also be from another country. He's not the only one on earth to have fallen to Farandia. But in this case he was summoned...probably. Last edited by Haigi; 2015-02-08 at 08:30. |
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2015-02-08, 08:18 | Link #50 |
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I am slowly getting rather desilusioned about OP characters, especialy Narou related and just Kaito having some issues with self-esteem and other people aren't enough to completely convice me either.
That said it's enough for me give it a shot.
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2015-02-08, 12:43 | Link #51 |
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To the people who helped to comment on the edits, thank you very much.
But please don't quarrel (but a healthy debate is welcome!). I prefer to look through different opinions so that I can compare them so go ahead~(discuss all you want! ) Plus I'm not so well versed with grammar.....I just translate it as how I feel it and almost follow directly from the text so I'll be missing punctuation here and there and everywhere. I hope my translation is satisfactory enough for you readers out there How are you enjoying the story so far? The first few chapters were the one that caught my interest in the first place. psst: if you don't have an account here you can comment right at the bottom of the page your views or thoughts (i wonder if it's possible...) |
2015-02-08, 13:03 | Link #53 |
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Well, as it looks like from the spoilers here, the main part of psychological stuff in this novel seems fairly forced and overcomplicated. Even the main issue of MC with village massacre - if he was tricked into that evil god sealing, and right after the ritual (or whatever it was) that god went rampage - as trumatic as it had been it's still even partly not his fault. Him blaming himself for that issue - the same as if Naruto would blame himself for things the bijuu caused while he was infant or even before his birth.
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2015-02-08, 20:04 | Link #55 |
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yea, if i remember correctly the story is about him coming back and attending highschool? and I think it was mentioned he was 13 when he was spirited away to Farandia and that it was mentioned that 2 years passed for him before coming back so...he's 15 right? and ugh I still don't get WHY his mom is angry/upset about him being alive, I mean shouldn't she be happy that her son who whether or not he is alive or dead turned out to be alive? it'd be even worse if its true that she is upset because he is all D rank
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2015-02-08, 20:06 | Link #56 | |
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2015-02-08, 20:21 | Link #57 |
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Well, the shock the mother suffered just have greatly affected and the discussion with the father must have made far worse. I already saw similar cases(in my family to begin with). Well, if she continue like that them i will agree with you, she's just being bothersome.
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2015-02-08, 20:26 | Link #58 |
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I think I've seen a movie with that exact premise. Only with aliens instead of a fantasy world. He came back after 8 years had passed but didn't age a day. The mother refused to believe.
I want to say flight of the navigator, but I don't remember if that boy ended up with family problems. Overall though, it's a very believable situation if this were a real setting. |
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2015-02-08, 21:23 | Link #60 |
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he's the eldest sibling, right? if so, there are many cases in which the mother would dote on the eldest son.... so possibly upon discovering her son gone she went mental because she had just lost her 'precious' son . . . . . not sure how to word this since this is psychological, and I ain't a psychologist
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