Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

It's that time again :3 What time is that? RebelS time of course.

You may notice that well a good amount of what was in the preview isn't in this ch ><. The chapter just kept getting longer and longer so I cut it in two. It works better this way anyhow.

Without further ado...

Magical girl lyrical Nanoha RebelS
Chapter 2
Refusal

Spoiler for Ch 2:

Hayate’s house

Warm. There was something warm on top of Vivio. At first Vivio enjoyed the strange warmth on her chest that was until Vivio realized that the warmth didn’t belong there. As she sleepily opened her eyes she slowly noticed a strange little thing on her chest. As her eyes focused she noticed it was furry, with little furry paws and a little furry face.

“…” Vivio blinked. The little rodent was snoozing happily, unaware that he was in danger. “Ferret.”

[Can I crush it?] Falling Soul sounded like he was ready to make some ferret jerky.

“Mmm,” The ferret squirmed around, burying himself further into Vivio’s chest.

Vivio’s eye twitched. She grasped the little brown rodent by the tail and flung him off of her and the bed. It was lucky for him that he landed on Zafira’s puppy pillow. “Pervert!”

The ferret rose drowsily, waving his head this way and that, “hmm…” His little brow furrowed as he looked and Vivio, “Miss Takamachi? Why are you in my room?”

Vivio’s pure rage was replaced by confusion. “John?”

Ferret John looked down, confused by her confusion, a look of shock passed over himself when he saw his body. “I did it again,” he groaned and covered his face as best he could with his paws.

[And what is that? Sleep perving?]

“N-no,” John looked like he wanted to burrow into the pillow and stay there forever. “It’s like sleep walking except I perform magic, while I’m asleep.”

[Followed by the perving.]

“No I also sleep walk.” He looked so utterly ashamed that Vivio couldn’t help but believe he was telling the truth.

“So,” She moved on the bed so she was more comfortable, “you can also turn into a ferret?” The guy was quickly turning into her uncle’s clone.

The little ferret shook his head, “No no I’m just used a spell to look like this. Instant transformation like that is beyond me. I just happen to know a forced transformation spell and I suppose I used it on myself.”

[A likely story. I say we crush him Vi.]

[Could you be any louder?] The sound of a female AI caused the others to go silent. Her voice was cold and smooth like a melting ice cube. At the same time every word felt like she was shooting arrows into them. [I was in sleep mode but it seems I’m allowed to get any rest.]

“Sorry Slyph,” John jumped off of Zafira’s pillow and onto the bed where he ran up onto the bedside table where a small silver crescent shaped pin lay next to Falling Soul.

[If you’d be kind enough to quiet down sir perhaps I could rest.]

[Who’s the princess?] Falling Soul sounded more then a bit annoyed. [And we’re so sorry your highness.]

[I am Slyph the Silver Bow.]

Vivio and ferret John could only watch as their devices duked it out.

[Well I’m Falling Sou—]

She cut him off. [I don’t care.]

“She doesn’t mince words does she?” Vivio poked John’s side.

"No she doe-" He stiffened. “Please turn around Miss Takamachi.” He dove off of the table.

“Why? And don’t call me that.”

“Just do it pl—” John was cut off by a sudden popping noise followed by the sudden absence of ferret John, instead the regular John was back but he seemed to be lacking something important.

[I told you he was a pervert.]

---

Hayate’s kitchen table

“So there’s a timer?” Vivio looked like she was about to burst out laughing, though there was a blush on her cheeks.

“A magical one yes. I haven’t perfected the spell yet and I’ve been working on it a lot lately so I guess I just tried to fix it up in my sleep,” he chuckled nervously. He had put on casual clothes though Vivio didn’t know how he managed to keep his jeans and his button up shirt spotless.

“You work on spells?” Vivio tilted her head to the side.

John gave her a puzzled look. “Of course. What do you do?”

Vivio waved her hand in the air. “I just kind of picture the spell and Falling Soul helps me do the rest. Isn’t that how it always works?”

“Maybe it’s just support magic that works like this,” He offered with a small shrug.

“Yeah I guess,” She played with a napkin.

“So you must be pretty high ranked to be that accomplished with magic.”

Vivio’s face fell, “Oh…”

John looked concerned, “I’m sorry did I say something wrong?”

“No it’s just… I’m only ranked A,” she tapped her head on the table.

John didn’t know why she sounded depressed. “That’s two ranks right then me, I’m only a B.”

Vivio just groaned, “But you don’t come from a family where everyone was AAA when they were nine.”

“What unit are you part of?” John inquired. “Do you work with Aunt Hayate?”

Vivio shook her head, “I haven’t got around to enlisting yet.”

“What!” John stood up.

“There’s no reason to be so surprised kid,” Vita entered the kitchen dressed in only a very large t-shirt that fit her like a dress. She had obviously just woken up because her hair was unbraided. She opened the fridge taking out a small bottle of milk and proceeded to down it in a single gulp. “Vivio’s mom is Nanoha.” She reached for another one. “Nanoha doesn’t want Vivio in the military,” she chugged this one down too. “But we’re working on her.”

“That’s not true,” Vivio protested, “I just haven’t gotten around to asking her.”

“Wait why?” John turned around in his chair, his arms hanging over the edge.

Vita rapped him over the head with her knuckles. “That’s not your business.”

He flinched, “Sorry.”

“Just don’t be nosy,” she fell into the empty chair next to him. “Morin’ Zaffy.” She nodded at the wolf as he walked into the room, turning into a human in time to sit next to Vivio.

“Good morning and don’t call me that.”

“Don’t be so grumpy Zaffy,” Vivio offered him an apple from the fruit basket on the table.

The wolf man took the apple and bit into it, almost eating a whole half of it in one bite. He looked thoughtful as he chewed, finally speaking as he swallowed. “I missed my pillow.” Vivio had taken the room Zafira shared with Vita so he and Vita had gone to sleep with Hayate. “How was the couch John?”

John turned a bizarre shade of red, “It was fine, a bit… lumpy but it was… good.” He couldn’t look Zafira in the eyes.

Vivio considered him lucky that Falling Soul was upstairs or John might have had to face the wrath of her self-appointed guardians.

“I see.” Zafira left it at that. If he didn’t believe John he didn’t let it show.

“I should get going,” Vivio stood up, stretching. “I can’t let Nanoha-mama keep Fate-mama all to herself.”

John opened his mouth to speak but Vita interrupted. “If you’re gonna make a perverted comment don’t.”

“Who do you think I am?”

“A teenage boy.”

---

The Infinite Library, two days later

The infinite library was a busy place. After all it was home to millions of unique books that weren’t located anywhere else. John was surprised to see it like that though, with its head librarian missing. It seemed to be running as efficiently as it normally did. John had gotten his books in a matter of minutes as usual and despite the crowd, he managed to find an empty table.

And so John got right to work. As Hayate’s new unit had yet to start functioning John had a good deal of free time, more then he cared to have. So he had started his own little project.

John idly flipped through the stack of newspapers most dating back to MC 75. Most of the information he already knew, what he really needed was all classified. “How’s the search coming Slyph?”

[I’ve found 326 entries in my database for ‘cradle’. None of them appear to be useful unless you’ve gone and impregnated someone sir.]

“Nothing like that,” he said absently to the pin. “Pull them up please.” The screen popped up in front of him, the four entries showing. Indeed almost every single one of them was on the buying, selling and proper use of baby cradles. However, hidden among them was what John was looking for, “The Saint’s Cradle,” he muttered to himself.

[Do you need more information?]

“Do you think you can find it?”

[I know I can.] It was nice to have someone so confident around sometimes.

Within a minute she returned from her trip through cyberspace. [I found it. The Saint’s Cradle was an ancient Belkan Battleship.]

“That’s not possible if it was Belkan I would have heard of it,” John shook his head, Yuuno’s favorite subject was ancient Belka.

[No need to shoot the messenger I only give you information I don’t make it up.]

“Please continue,” His teacher probably just hadn’t had time to go over it with John, at least that was how John reassured himself.

[The Saint’s Cradle is several kilometers long and a truly powerful and advanced piece of technology. It is classified as a Lost Logia. In order to be operated it requires someone of the Saint’s Kaiser’s blood line. It was last activated in MC 75 during the Jail Scaglietti incident.]

“That can’t be right.”

[Again with the doubting me sir.]

“I’m sorry but if it happened in MC 75 it would be in these papers,” he motioned at the stacks.

[You’re too naïve sir.]

“Naïve?” John glanced down at the pin. “How so?”

[It’s a cover up.]

“That’s silly there’s no reason for it to be,” He shook his head. “There’s information on the event itself. If it was being covered up then we wouldn’t be taught about it in the academy.”

“Why are you so distrustful? The military has been nothing but kind to me, and you as well. Besides there’s another flaw in your information.”

[If you’re going to be so rude sir I might not bother to help you.]

He ignored her comment, “The Saint Kaiser’s blood line ran out centuries ago, that I know. I can get out genealogy charts if I need too. So if the Saint’s Cradle did run ten years ago it would have had to be running without the Saint Kaiser, and that’s impossible.”

[I suppose I’ll have to check the network.]

“The network?”

[The device network. Please don’t be as vain as to think our masters are the only ones in charge of information.] She was quiet again, having disappeared into her network.

John flipped through the papers again, taking one particular from the pile. “What I don’t understand,” he folded open the paper, searching for an article, “is what Miss Takamachi’s role in this was?” There on the page next to a small article was a picture of five year old Vivio.

“Whatcha doing?”

John threw the paper’s into the air as he nearly jumped out of his seat. “Arf!” he turned to the woman who had surprised him. “Don’t do that!”

Arf giggled and hopped into the chair next to him. In Yuuno’s absence John supposed Arf had had an important role in the library’s well being. “Sorry,” even so it was hard to take her seriously when she looked like a child.

John sighed, he had missed her while he was in the desert though. “Just a bit of research.”

Arf looked through his papers, she seemed to start sweating as she did, “A-ah… and why are you looking up information on such a boring event?”

“Boring?” John didn’t buy her act for a second.

“Y-yeah you know nothing exciting happened there,” She tried to gather his papers into a pile.

John raised an eyebrow, it seemed that someone had instructed Arf to make sure no one researched this particular subject. He contemplated arguing but it didn’t seem the papers would help him anymore. He stood up, “Can I count on you to put those away then Arf?”

She lit up, “Of course,” her tail wagged. “I’m glad I could help.” With a happy song being hummed she whisked the papers away.

[I’ve found something you might be interested in sir.] Slyph didn’t speak until Arf had disappeared from view.

“Good I’m ready for you.”

---

“Pretzel! Hot dog!” The hot dog cart’s owner called out from his position at the sidewalk’s edge, just where it hit the road.

“I’ll take one,” John took a pretzel from the man after paying him. John had skipped breakfast and was quite hungry after his hours of studying. He nibbled on it, making sure none of the crumbs would fall on himself, as he walked down the busy street. Most of the people around were tourists; the Infinity Library was a favorite destination of theirs, he’d forgotten that while he was away. John wondered what other secrets the city had created while he was gone, then again he wasn’t from Cranagan so maybe the secrets weren’t his to find.

The pretzels were still good, he was happy to discover, the perfect balance of salt and dough. He took another bite.

Ring! Ah yes the sound of bicycles driving along the roads, John remembered that sound too. He also remembered the honks. Honk! Honk! Beep! There were an awful lot of horns blowing. He turned but couldn’t see the cause of the commotion.

“’Scuse me! Sorry! Sorry! Coming through!”

[You know walking has a tendency not to get you killed.]

“Look out!”

John didn’t realize what was happening until he was hit full force.

[Slow force] It was lucky that Slyph paid attention to what was going on or John would have had a very painful landing. With the magic though he slowed to an easy thud.

[Way to go, you crushed a civilian.]

The girl on top of John groaned. “Shut up Falling Soul.”

“Miss Takamachi?”

Vivio straightened and turned around with sudden, painful (for John) motion. “John?!?”

---

Vivio ducked her head over her ice coffee, sipping it rather loudly while John drank his tea. Her skateboard and helmet were now still and by her side. She looked at John as she sipped her blush steadily growing bigger.

“So skateboards?” John raised an eyebrow.

Her shoulders rose up and her bangs fell over her eyes. After a minute she exclaimed, “Please don’t tell my parents!”

“Hiding it?”

[Vi just doesn’t want anyone to see how much she sucks.] Falling Soul sounded like it was laughing.

[A good device ensures his master is always safe.] Slyph retorted from her post.

Falling Soul had no response.

“He’s right,” Vivio fiddled with her straw. “I don’t want anyone to know until I get good.”

John’s eyes were laughing, “Then I suspect outside the Infinity Library isn’t the best place to practice.”

[She started out all the way up town.]

Vivio looked away, silently confirming what Falling Soul was saying.

“So I guess you have a lot of free time then?”

“Mmm I train most of the time but when I finish up with that I don’t have much else to do until Syn gets out of school.”

“Sin?” John raised an eyebrow.

“With a Y. She’s my,” Vivio searched for the right word.

[Girlfriend.]

Vivio glared at her device, “She is not. I bet you’d like that though, wouldn’t you.”

[I’m only a reflection of my—]

[You’re too noisy boy.] Slyph was not amused by their argument.

[And you’re too bossy.]

[I don’t care.]

The humans ignored their mechanical counterparts. “If you have so much time why haven’t you joined the TSAB yet? You seem like you want to,” the question had been on his mind ever since he learned Vivio hadn’t actually enlisted yet.

“I can’t decide what unit I want to joint. I could be an enforcer like Fate-mama, or I could go into the air force, or maybe even act as a ground unit if I wanted to. Why did you join the military?”

“Well you see there’s a debt I need to pay,” he rubbed the back of his head, “you see there’s someone I owe everything to and this is the only way I know to pay her back.”

Vivio smiled coyly. “You’re talking about Aunt Hayate aren’t you?”

John flinched, “Am I that easy to read?”

Vivio reached up and ruffled his hair, “Don’t worry it’s a nice trait to see when you’re around people who guard themselves all the time. So why did you work for Uncle Yuuno?”

John retied his hair, “After graduation he was the only one who would take me.”

If Vivio had questions she didn’t raise them. “So you’re going to work for Aunt Hayate?”

“It seems she needs forwards for something called Riot Force Six.”

“Riot Force Six!?!?” Vivio bolted up from the table. “Aunt Hayate’s making a new Riot Force Six!”

“That’s what she told Instructor Takamachi.”

“And mama’s joining up!” Vivio collapsed in her chair. “Why does no one tell me these things?”

“Maybe this is a sign,” John nodded wisely, “maybe you’re supposed to join up here and now.”

“I’m going to go talk to Aunt Hayate!” She started to run, “I’ll talk to you later!”

“Wait Miss Takamachi!”

“And don’t call me that! It’s Vivio!” And that was the last thing she said before she disappeared into the masses outside.

John left his seat, throwing down some money for their drinks as he did, “You forgot your skateboard.” He hit the edge of it with his foot, causing it to perfectly flip up and into his waiting hand. “I hope she joins, everything is so much more interesting with Miss Takamachi around.

---

“But why not!” Vivio leaned over Hayate’s desk looking at her aunt with pleading eyes. “I’m an established, registered civilian collaborator under TSAB law I’m allowed to enlist in any unit if the head officer approves!” No one could argue Vivio hadn’t done her homework.

“Vivio,” Hayate was utterly calm even though Vivio was raging, a talent she had acquired from years of needing it. “I don’t believe you’re prepared for this kind of job.”

She slammed her hands on the desk, “I’m ready! I’ve been ready! There just hasn’t been a job I’ve wanted!”

“I can’t take you on Vivio. You’re just too young.”

“John’s becoming one of your forwards,” Vivio protested.

“John’s a year older,” Hayate pointed out, “And he’s had more then a year of military training.”

“You didn’t.”

Hayate didn’t show anything but Vivio knew she had found a weak point.

“You and my parents were only nine when you joined,” Vivio crossed her arms, daring Hayate to tell her the situation was different, that Vivio’s years of training weren’t worth as much the things they had done.

Hayate sighed, “Alright. I’ll give you a chance,” she reached into her desk’s drawers and pulled out a stack of papers, “these are enlistment papers.” She was all business. Though with the speed she had given in with Vivio suspected this was what she had wanted all along.

Vivio snatched them up with the same speed she normally reserved for birthday presents. “I promise you won’t regret this!”

“Just remember,” business Hayate melted away and her playful Aunt returned, “I’m leaving telling Nanoha to you. Remember you’re underage still and need her permission to enlist.”

“Leave it to me!”

---

“No.”

Now it was in no way the first time Vivio had ever heard the word no. Her entire childhood had been filled with people, usually nuns, telling Vivio that no she wasn’t allowed solve her problems by punching, no she wasn’t allowed to skip class because she wanted to see the TSAB agents catch some bad guys and no she wasn’t allowed doodle barrier jacket designs when she was supposed to be taking history notes. This was however the first time Vivio had heard Nanoha growl the word with such ferocity it was as if Vivio had told Nanoha that she had just massacred a litter of kitties and eaten them with a nice white wine.

“Nanoha,” Fate’s voice was still it’s normal soft and gentle self but there was an underlying sternness Vivio didn’t quite recognize.

If Nanoha noticed she ignored it because she continued on. “Under no circumstances will you be joining.”

“But I’ve always planned to join! You’ve always known that! Why the hell—”

“Watch your language.”

“—would I go through that training if I wasn’t going to join?” Vivio stomped the ground not noticing she had started to cry.

Nanoha looked like she was trying to call me herself. “I wanted you to see that this isn’t something for a chil—”

“I’m not a child! I can do things for myself!” Vivio was reaching her boiling point fast. “You were nine!”

“I had no choice! You do!”

“This is my choice!” Vivio trembled.

“”I’m sorry but I won’t let you,” She wasn’t yelling, Nanoha didn’t need to yell, but she was stern.

Vivio quivered for a moment, opening and closing her mouth. She chose not to speak, only to run out the door and the house.

Nanoha started after her only to be caught around the waist by Fate.

“She needs to be alone right now,” Fate’s voice was reassuring but firm, she understood both of them needed to be apart.

“But she doesn’t understand,” Nanoha protested.

“Only because you refuse to tell her,” Fate stroked Nanoha’s hair in a calming manner, “don’t blame her for that and whether or not you approve she is going to join one day.”

“Then I’ll delay that day as long as possible.”

Fate sighed, “You only butt heads because you’re both so stubborn.”

---

Several Hours later

It was getting dark. Vivio should have headed home. But she couldn’t face Nanoha yet. So Vivio had retreated to her favorite place, the roof of one of the hightest buildings in the city. You could see everything from it, every alley, every building, she could even see the river that bordered the city’s side.

[I can’t believe you ran.]

Vivio didn’t answer her device. She sat with her knees pulled up to her chest and her eyes set ahead of her, looking through the chain link fence keeping her from the ground far below.

[You’re not a coward Vi. You should have held your ground and fought back!]

Vivio didn’t even look at him.

[Why won’t you answer? Come on you’re supposed to say something back and then I’ll outsmart you, like I always do! Come on Vi!]

“You don’t get it,” her voice was quiet and small.

[Come on you’ve made her angry before and you’ve never gotten like this!]

“But she wasn’t angry Falling Soul,” Vivio rubbed a tear away, “she was afraid.” She couldn’t rub them all away, “She was afraid. Was it me? Was she afraid of me or for me?”

Falling Soul was silent.

“You know that’s not how it is Vivio.”

Vivio turned her head.

Zafira stepped off of the roof’s fence and towards her. “She was only like that because she cares.”

“How’d you know I’d be here?” Vivio grumbled and tried to look sullen.

“Nanoha called Hayate and told us you hadn’t come back. We’ve all been looking for you.”

“That didn’t answer my question,” Vivio made a very teenageresc pout.

“Do you really think you have secrets I don’t know about?” Zafira raised an eyebrow.

“And now you’re going to make me go home aren’t you?” Vivio looked away from him.

“No.” He lowered himself onto the floor beside her. “I’m going sit here.”

Vivio looked at him strangely. “I-I don’t know what to do.”

“Is it that important for you to join us?” Zafira looked up at the cloudy sky with a contemplating expression. “The TSAB isn’t going away. It’ll be there in three years when you don’t need Nanoha’s permission to join.”

“But it won’t be the same!”

“Riot Force Six will wait for you Vivio.”

She shook her head, “It’s not the same as being there in the beginning.”

The giant man sighed and wrapped one of his arms around her in a sort of half hug. He didn’t say anything when she barreled into his chest and gripped him as if she wanted to split him in two. He also didn’t comment on the wetness that leaked through his shirt.

[I’m being crushed.]

Vivio looked up from Zafira’s chest and giggled, causing a low chuckle to come from her former babysitter.

“If you want you can stay with us for the night.”

“But doesn’t that mean John will be stuck on the couch again?”

“Couches build character,” Zafira grunted out.

“Then shouldn’t I sleep on the couch?”

[Vi you have enough character for all of us.]

Thanks to Black_Wolf for helping me out with naming Slyph.

You know with all this VivioxSyn talk it's funny that's she's not in this ch ^^; (and she's in the next scene too ><)

I finally finish!

Interesting chapter I must say, very emotive, I think I know why Nanoha doesn't want Vivio to join the TSAB, it's really obvius XD

At last Fallinf Soul was nice Although I wanted to see more of Niu, Hou or Mr. Long but well

That reminds me... here it is people!

Another render of a Shiny's OC

Spoiler for Mr. Long:

[markesellus]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Sorry it took so long! Here's the Hayate/Vita post A's (I'm assuming you meant pre StrikerS when you said that?)romance short I promised for solving my color road riddle.

I would have had it sooner but I was waiting until I really hit the mood to write it so it would be worth it. I really hope you enjoy!

Spoiler for Hayate Vita!:

Hayate was smiling. One of those moments where she was really happy. She just came back from a mission and was beaming with pride. She was sixteen now, and was already on the way to making her own unit. I had enlisted under the instructor position, much like Nanoha had, but I was doing it solely for her. My mistress.

I got a hug and a kiss to the cheek, making me blush darkly. We were alone right now and everyone else wouldn't be back for a couple of hours. Before I could ask her how the mission went, I found myself scooped up in her arms and carried off. "I missed you," She whispered softly against my ear.

"Hayate..." I knew what was going to happen. The same thing that happened every time we were parted for a week or so. I was laid down on the bed and straddled, lips claiming mine softly.

She was never rough, never frantic, never wanting just the pleasure. Hayate always looked into my eyes, always kissed me so gently. My hair was finger combed and our mouths parted just enough for us to take a breath. "So much..." She continued her previous statement before cupping my cheeks and beaming down at me. "Soon," She whispered, voice soft but audible. "Soon I'll have my own division. We'll be able to let everyone be together again all the time. Please bear with me a little longer?"

It was okay. I understand, Hayate. If anyone knew about us it would bring about questions. Moving every one of your friends into the same unit was questionable enough, but if people knew we were lovers then they would doubt her leadership abilities. Would she put her friends above her job? Would she turn down someone better to get her lover with her? would he be strong enough to send them into battle?

I knew better. You were doing it for all of us, not for yourself. If anyone got hurt, you wanted it to be on your hands, so you would know you did everything in your power to have prevented it. You love us all so much... And I love you the most. "Hayate..."

"Vita..." My name. The only time you spoke it by itself, in each others arms in the still of the night. Soft kissing, gentle rubbing, words of love whispering. We were one, no one needed to know right now. We loved each other and we knew it. I would always protect the woman in my arms, and would give anything to continue to see the smile on her face.

Snaa! Its so cute.

Originally Posted by Satashi

VEGAS STAKES CHAPTER 1 OMAKES

Spoiler for omake 1:

Nanoha: *pulls Shamal to the side while at a gas station* Shamal, um... I have a problem.
Shamal: What is it, Nanoha?
Nanoha: Well, you see, it's... *looks around quickly to make sure no one can see and then points downward at a large bulge in her shorts*
Shamal: Oh my! *blushes* I...seem to have given you the wrong pills.
Nanoha: *whispers frantically* Shamal! you gave mea magic futa pill, how do I reverse it!?
Shamal: Well... you need to *cough* orgasm
Nanoha: *shrieks* !!!!!!
Shamal: um.... um....

Fate: *walks out of the gas station and back into the heat. The wind catches her hair and blows it out behind her as she brings her bottle of water to her mouth. Lips part and the flow rushes in, spilling over her cheeks and running down her neck. The water trails between her breasts and the blond gasps, in slow motion of course, and fans her shirt out, flashing everyone lightly before bending over to move the cooler at the van door. Her shorts ride up, thong straps becoming visible, and reaches back lightly to adjust the straps before getting into the van*

Nanoha: *droooooooooooooooool*
Shamal: *blinks and looks down at Nanoha's stained shorts* Well...problem solved.

(For those of you who don't frequent the Nanoha chatroom you may be going "WTF!?" but for those who do... well, you're still probably going "WTF!?" but laughing more :3)

Lol, magic futa pill. That little Fate scene was hot!

Originally Posted by Allquall

So that she could unsheathe the *other* Levantine.

... you didn't just write that... LOL! That was so wrongly funny. I want some crack of this!

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

I finally finish!

Interesting chapter I must say, very emotive, I think I know why Nanoha doesn't want Vivio to join the TSAB, it's really obvius XD

At last Fallinf Soul was nice Although I wanted to see more of Niu, Hou or Mr. Long but well

That reminds me... here it is people!

Another render of a Shiny's OC

Spoiler for Mr. Long:

Isn't he lovely :3

I'm curious do you mind PMing me why you think Nanoha doesn't want Vivio to join the TSAB (I won't tell you if you're right or wrong I'm just interest) And there'll be more later of them don't worry :3

[wanwan1203]

......oO

w-wait... @_@

*transforms into................verb!Wan!!

;-; wanwaned: verb. refers to being exposed to a high amount of NSFW stuff to the point where you see the world with permanent wanwan goggles. It may also mean having an infected brain similar to that of wanwan's hopeless, unsalvageable pervy ones.

verb. becoming someone with the inability to get his/her mind out of the gutter.

....*shot*

@.@

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Isn't he lovely :3

I'm curious do you mind PMing me why you think Nanoha doesn't want Vivio to join the TSAB (I won't tell you if you're right or wrong I'm just interest) And there'll be more later of them don't worry :3

PMsed you alredy

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

......oO

w-wait... @_@

*transforms into................verb!Wan!!

;-; wanwaned: verb. refers to being exposed to a high amount of NSFW stuff to the point where you see the world with permanent wanwan goggles. It may also mean having an infected brain similar to that of wanwan's hopeless, unsalvageable pervy ones.

verb. becoming someone with the inability to get his/her mind out of the gutter.

....*shot*

@.@

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

......oO

w-wait... @_@

*transforms into................verb!Wan!!

;-; wanwaned: verb. refers to being exposed to a high amount of NSFW stuff to the point where you see the world with permanent wanwan goggles. It may also mean having an infected brain similar to that of wanwan's hopeless, unsalvageable pervy ones.

verb. becoming someone with the inability to get his/her mind out of the gutter.

....*shot*

@.@

Let me fix that up for ya

Wanwan: V. 1. To be exposed to a high amount of sensual material to the point where you see the world through permanent wanwan goggles 2. To have a brain that has been infected to the point of hopelessness, unsalvageableness and perverseness similar to Wanwan's. 3. Becoming someone with the inability to get his or her mind out of the gutter. Wanwaning, wanwaned
See also: Wanwan goggles

Used my dictionary :3

[Satashi]

"Sing, Fate-chan!" Hayate called out around the campfire outside of their cabin. "Sing!"

"Fate can sing?" Subaru asked curiously, looking over at the blond as Chrono passed teh accoustic guitar over to her. "And play!?"

Fate giggled to herself and sat down her beer bottle, taking the guitar. "Okay... Okay..hehehehehe."

Nanoha poked her side. "You're too drunk."

"Shush, I'm not drunk." The two looked at each other and snorted before giggling. "Okay, for real." She cleared her throat and looked at the people around her. "What to sing?"

Tia cheered first. "Make something up!"

"Yeah!" Nanoha agreed, scooting closer.

Fate giggled again and nodded. "Okay...um..." She started plucking a few notes and finally sang out ina soft voice after a few moments. "Here we are... dear old friend." She nudged Nanoha lightly, making herself miss a cord. "You and I, drunk again." She ignored the people laughing and continued, strumming. " Laughs have been had, tears have been shed, and maybe the whisky's gone to me head...."

The blond snorted and looked at Nanoha, strumming faster. "But if I were gay, I would give you my heart! And if i were gay, you'd be my work of art! And if i were gay, we would swim in romance...but I'm not gay, so get your hand out of my pants~" The group laughed hard as Nanoha quickly pulled her hand out from behind Fate.

Blushing but still smiling, Fate continued to strum and after a false start, began again while speaking towards Nanoha. " Its not that i don't care." She leaned closly to her and whispered. "I do." Moving back, she picked up her voice again as Nanoha slid her hand behidn Fate's guitar and onto her stomach. "I just don't see myself rubbing you. Another time, another scene, I'd be right behind you- if you know what i mean!" She laughed and strummed hard, singing over the cheering.

"'Cuz if i were gay, I would give soul! And if i were gay, I would give you my 'whole'... being." She snorted. " And if i were gay, It would be just you and me, but I'm Not gay...so wont you stop cupping my pus-hand." She stopped her word and Nanoha moved her other hand from behind Fate's guitar, red in the face.


Turning to Nanoha, she started singing more. "We've never hugged, we've never kissed. I've never been intimate with your fist. You have opened brand new doors!" Fate licked her lips. "So get over here and drop ... your ... Draaaaaaaaawwwweeeeeeerrrrrrrrrs!"

Fate strummed a few more times and stopped. "Thank you!" She appreciated the clapping all around her.

"Wow," Yuuno laughed out, amazed. "How did you get those lyrics so fast?" She watched Fate hand the guitar back to her brother before going to her jeans and zipping them before fastening the button. "....nevermind."

Spoiler for Stephen Lynch:

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Satashi

"Sing, Fate-chan!" Hayate called out around the campfire outside of their cabin. "Sing!"

"Fate can sing?" Subaru asked curiously, looking over at the blond as Chrono passed teh accoustic guitar over to her. "And play!?"

Fate giggled to herself and sat down her beer bottle, taking the guitar. "Okay... Okay..hehehehehe."

Nanoha poked her side. "You're too drunk."

"Shush, I'm not drunk." The two looked at each other and snorted before giggling. "Okay, for real." She cleared her throat and looked at the people around her. "What to sing?"

Tia cheered first. "Make something up!"

"Yeah!" Nanoha agreed, scooting closer.

Fate giggled again and nodded. "Okay...um..." She started plucking a few notes and finally sang out ina soft voice after a few moments. "Here we are... dear old friend." She nudged Nanoha lightly, making herself miss a cord. "You and I, drunk again." She ignored the people laughing and continued, strumming. " Laughs have been had, tears have been shed, and maybe the whisky's gone to me head...."

The blond snorted and looked at Nanoha, strumming faster. "But if I were gay, I would give you my heart! And if i were gay, you'd be my work of art! And if i were gay, we would swim in romance...but I'm not gay, so get your hand out of my pants~" The group laughed hard as Nanoha quickly pulled her hand out from behind Fate.

Blushing but still smiling, Fate continued to strum and after a false start, began again while speaking towards Nanoha. " Its not that i don't care." She leaned closly to her and whispered. "I do." Moving back, she picked up her voice again as Nanoha slid her hand behidn Fate's guitar and onto her stomach. "I just don't see myself rubbing you. Another time, another scene, I'd be right behind you- if you know what i mean!" She laughed and strummed hard, singing over the cheering.

"'Cuz if i were gay, I would give soul! And if i were gay, I would give you my 'whole'... being." She snorted. " And if i were gay, It would be just you and me, but I'm Not gay...so wont you stop cupping my pus-hand." She stopped her word and Nanoha moved her other hand from behind Fate's guitar, red in the face.


Turning to Nanoha, she started singing more. "We've never hugged, we've never kissed. I've never been intimate with your fist. You have opened brand new doors!" Fate licked her lips. "So get over here and drop ... your ... Draaaaaaaaawwwweeeeeeerrrrrrrrrs!"

Fate strummed a few more times and stopped. "Thank you!" She appreciated the clapping all around her.

"Wow," Yuuno laughed out, amazed. "How did you get those lyrics so fast?" She watched Fate hand the guitar back to her brother before going to her jeans and zipping them before fastening the button. "....nevermind."

Spoiler for Stephen Lynch:

XD awesome!!!! so funny.. *giggling so much* lol

[TheShinySword]

Stephan Lynch Crack FTW :3

My turn

Spoiler for SLC:

Spoiler for song:

The teacher opened the door to the classroom allowing a sergeant on through. "Hey kids I'm Vice." Vice took out his guitar and sat down in front of the class of kindergarteners. "You know what's cool. Superheroes."

The children looked at him funny.

"It's even funner to make up your own," He nodded and grinned. "I like to do that you can to."

"Can I be Starlight Breaker girl?" One little girl yelled out.

"If you want to be a violent little thing."

"What about Superman?" A boy in the back called out.

"Copyrighted kid. Let me help out," He started to strum his guitar.

"If I could be a superhero

I would be awesome man

I’d fly around the world fighting crime

According to my awesome plan

And if I saw criminals trying to lie

Hurting other people and making them cry

I’d haul them off to jail in my awesome van

‘Cause I would be awesome man"

"But why wouldn't you just breaker them all?"

"Or call the Wolkenritter they're awesome!"

"But not as awesome as Awesome Man kids. And they can't protect you from all the bad things in the world like drugs. Do you want to be a druggie kid?"

"Sergeant they're only 5," The teacher sighed.

Vice ignored her and moved on, "Just say no kids.

If I could be a superhero

I would be Drug-Free boy

Telling the world of the evils of drugs

And all of the lives they destroy

Well I would take all the junk

He’s getting so high

With their needles and bongs

And their sticks of tye

As I burn them alive I would squeal with joy

Because I would be drug-free boy."


"Isn't that mean?"

"No," Vice glared the child into silence.

"Maybe Miss Nanoha can befriend the junkies!"

"Nanoha's not god kid," Vice looked grumpier by the minute, "And you know what

If I could be a superhero

I would be justice guy

Making sure people get what they deserve

Especially women who steal time

Like if a girl took the screen and refused to share

With a cast of three dozen

And former main stars

And only let on a small moe blob

You can shaft them right off and ship them to the Arctic

Especially the blob

Then you would be justice guy

"Sir I'm going to ask you to leave now."

Vice was too into it to stop,

"Or you could be more subtle

No, I didn’t mean to be vague

Give her the boot

and put me in the spot "

Two large security guards picked Vice up but he didn't stop playing even as he was dragged out.

"I'd make a better main character then anyone

Especially the blob

Then you would be Justice Guy

Yes then you would be

a superhero like me"

[Kaix]

Originally Posted by Satashi

VEGAS STAKES CHAPTER 1 OMAKES

Spoiler for omake 1:

Nanoha: *pulls Shamal to the side while at a gas station* Shamal, um... I have a problem.
Shamal: What is it, Nanoha?
Nanoha: Well, you see, it's... *looks around quickly to make sure no one can see and then points downward at a large bulge in her shorts*
Shamal: Oh my! *blushes* I...seem to have given you the wrong pills.
Nanoha: *whispers frantically* Shamal! you gave mea magic futa pill, how do I reverse it!?
Shamal: Well... you need to *cough* orgasm
Nanoha: *shrieks* !!!!!!
Shamal: um.... um....

Fate: *walks out of the gas station and back into the heat. The wind catches her hair and blows it out behind her as she brings her bottle of water to her mouth. Lips part and the flow rushes in, spilling over her cheeks and running down her neck. The water trails between her breasts and the blond gasps, in slow motion of course, and fans her shirt out, flashing everyone lightly before bending over to move the cooler at the van door. Her shorts ride up, thong straps becoming visible, and reaches back lightly to adjust the straps before getting into the van*

Nanoha: *droooooooooooooooool*
Shamal: *blinks and looks down at Nanoha's stained shorts* Well...problem solved.

(For those of you who don't frequent the Nanoha chatroom you may be going "WTF!?" but for those who do... well, you're still probably going "WTF!?" but laughing more :3)

WTF!?? I don't want to know where that came from!

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for size:

"Sing, Fate-chan!" Hayate called out around the campfire outside of their cabin. "Sing!"

"Fate can sing?" Subaru asked curiously, looking over at the blond as Chrono passed teh accoustic guitar over to her. "And play!?"

Fate giggled to herself and sat down her beer bottle, taking the guitar. "Okay... Okay..hehehehehe."

Nanoha poked her side. "You're too drunk."

"Shush, I'm not drunk." The two looked at each other and snorted before giggling. "Okay, for real." She cleared her throat and looked at the people around her. "What to sing?"

Tia cheered first. "Make something up!"

"Yeah!" Nanoha agreed, scooting closer.

Fate giggled again and nodded. "Okay...um..." She started plucking a few notes and finally sang out ina soft voice after a few moments. "Here we are... dear old friend." She nudged Nanoha lightly, making herself miss a cord. "You and I, drunk again." She ignored the people laughing and continued, strumming. " Laughs have been had, tears have been shed, and maybe the whisky's gone to me head...."

The blond snorted and looked at Nanoha, strumming faster. "But if I were gay, I would give you my heart! And if i were gay, you'd be my work of art! And if i were gay, we would swim in romance...but I'm not gay, so get your hand out of my pants~" The group laughed hard as Nanoha quickly pulled her hand out from behind Fate.

Blushing but still smiling, Fate continued to strum and after a false start, began again while speaking towards Nanoha. " Its not that i don't care." She leaned closly to her and whispered. "I do." Moving back, she picked up her voice again as Nanoha slid her hand behidn Fate's guitar and onto her stomach. "I just don't see myself rubbing you. Another time, another scene, I'd be right behind you- if you know what i mean!" She laughed and strummed hard, singing over the cheering.

"'Cuz if i were gay, I would give soul! And if i were gay, I would give you my 'whole'... being." She snorted. " And if i were gay, It would be just you and me, but I'm Not gay...so wont you stop cupping my pus-hand." She stopped her word and Nanoha moved her other hand from behind Fate's guitar, red in the face.


Turning to Nanoha, she started singing more. "We've never hugged, we've never kissed. I've never been intimate with your fist. You have opened brand new doors!" Fate licked her lips. "So get over here and drop ... your ... Draaaaaaaaawwwweeeeeeerrrrrrrrrs!"

Fate strummed a few more times and stopped. "Thank you!" She appreciated the clapping all around her.

"Wow," Yuuno laughed out, amazed. "How did you get those lyrics so fast?" She watched Fate hand the guitar back to her brother before going to her jeans and zipping them before fastening the button. "....nevermind."

Spoiler for Stephen Lynch:

Haha, that was funny.

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Stephan Lynch Crack FTW :3

My turn

Spoiler for SLC:

Spoiler for song:

The teacher opened the door to the classroom allowing a sergeant on through. "Hey kids I'm Vice." Vice took out his guitar and sat down in front of the class of kindergarteners. "You know what's cool. Superheroes."

The children looked at him funny.

"It's even funner to make up your own," He nodded and grinned. "I like to do that you can to."

"Can I be Starlight Breaker girl?" One little girl yelled out.

"If you want to be a violent little thing."

"What about Superman?" A boy in the back called out.

"Copyrighted kid. Let me help out," He started to strum his guitar.

"If I could be a superhero

I would be awesome man

I’d fly around the world fighting crime

According to my awesome plan

And if I saw criminals trying to lie

Hurting other people and making them cry

I’d haul them off to jail in my awesome van

‘Cause I would be awesome man"

"But why wouldn't you just breaker them all?"

"Or call the Wolkenritter they're awesome!"

"But not as awesome as Awesome Man kids. And they can't protect you from all the bad things in the world like drugs. Do you want to be a druggie kid?"

"Sergeant they're only 5," The teacher sighed.

Vice ignored her and moved on, "Just say no kids.

If I could be a superhero

I would be Drug-Free boy

Telling the world of the evils of drugs

And all of the lives they destroy

Well I would take all the junk

He’s getting so high

With their needles and bongs

And their sticks of tye

As I burn them alive I would squeal with joy

Because I would be drug-free boy."


"Isn't that mean?"

"No," Vice glared the child into silence.

"Maybe Miss Nanoha can befriend the junkies!"

"Nanoha's not god kid," Vice looked grumpier by the minute, "And you know what

If I could be a superhero

I would be justice guy

Making sure people get what they deserve

Especially women who steal time

Like if a girl took the screen and refused to share

With a cast of three dozen

And former main stars

And only let on a small moe blob

You can shaft them right off and ship them to the Arctic

Especially the blob

Then you would be justice guy

"Sir I'm going to ask you to leave now."

Vice was too into it to stop,

"Or you could be more subtle

No, I didn’t mean to be vague

Give her the boot

and put me in the spot "

Two large security guards picked Vice up but he didn't stop playing even as he was dragged out.

"I'd make a better main character then anyone

Especially the blob

Then you would be Justice Guy

Yes then you would be

a superhero like me"

Nanoha and the Wolkenritter are taking all the spotlight from the more common superheroes. Awesome Man FTW!

[Evil Rick]

Chapter 75

Vatican Knights

Spoiler for Final Battle:

I couldn't belive what I was seing, that monster was enormus, it was giant, bigger than Los Ganados and even bigger than El Lago, I was only armd with my axe, not even a simple pistol, I couldn't win, I just couldn't

"IT'S OVER VIVIO" Nanoha said "DIE!!!!!!" She charged one of her's giant clubs against me, I avoided it, the simple hit of the descomunal weapon made the earth trumble

I was not even on foot again when she attacked me with the other club, I just saved myself by too close, I tried to hit her leg with my Axe but my Axe was unable to even cut her skyn, in retrivution, she tried to crush me with her feets, as if I were some kind of Ant, it was probably thanks to my "demon" speed and agility that I managed to dodge her

The only thing that I though to do was to climb a mountain that was at my side, Nanoha spoted me and hited the mountain with one of her clubs, I was almost throwed down but I managed to hold one and keep climbing, the mountain wasn't really big, I managed to reach the top

The skulls that were attached at the beast's chest leaved the main body and started to float around me, one by one they started to charge against me,they litterally hited the ground in wich I was with their entire... well, skull

They hurted me this time, the hit launched me away, throwing me out of the mountain, but before I hitted the ground, Nanoha catched me with one of her descomunal hands, my Axe falled to the ground while the beeast rised me making some kind or triumph roar, then he aproached me to Nanoha who was attached at the demon's chest

"NOW, MY DEAR..." She said "... I WILL CRUSH YOUR MIND"

Nanoha luaghed while I started to feel a horrible pain in my head, it was Nanoha, somehow she was inside it, in an instant, the memories of the deads of my friends started to pass in front of my eyes, one after one, again andf again, it was horrible

"Nooo!.... Pls.... Please! S-Stooop!" It was horrible, I can't descrive how horrible it was, I felt that my brain was going to tear apart

"I WILL ENJOY THIS VIVIO, I WILL ENJOY SEE HOW YOUR MIND WILL BE CRUSHING YOU, HOW EVERY SINGLE PAIN OF THE EXISTENCE WILL TURTURE YOU, AND ONLY UNTIL YOU BEG FOR ME TO KILL YOU, I'LL CONCIDERATE TO PUT A QUICK END TO YOUR EXISTENCE"

The images just keeped appearing in my mind, I couldn't hold anymore, I jus wanted to die, to stop that suffering at any cost, I just wanted to stop suffering

In an instant, I found my self naked into a place covered with darkness, I was so scared, I was cring, I was cring I feeled that I was alone

"Why?... I just want to... to live... to live in peace, why I can't? WHY?!" I was asking this to myself, when suddenly a familiar voice replyed to me

"Vivio, stand up, you'r not that weak" I recognise his voice and quickly raised my head

"Al... Alphonse?!" Another voice came behind him

"You are not alone, we are here with you"

"Helga..." I replyed when I saw her standing next to Alphonse

"You are strong, stronger than the white Devil"
Pink appeared also

"Pink..." Finally at my right I also heared his voice

"Are you going to let her do what she had planed?"

"Jasper!" They were there, my friends who died facing Nanoha, who gave their lives tring to stop her, suporting me in esence

"Vivio..." I felt an incredible sensation of Hapyness when I heared his voice cominf from behind me, I quickly turned to see him

"Dad!" I screamed while runing at the arms of my beloved father

"My little girl, don't fear, I'm here, I had been always here, fighnting beside you in all your battles, facing along with you everyone of your foes, don't surrender now, not now"

"Dady, please! Let me go with you!"

"No, not yet, therte is still someone else who needs you" I understood the words of my father, I clened my tears and looked himn at the eyes

"I will not faild you" I said, my father kissed my forehead and the the darkness who was surrounding me dissapeared, once again, I found myself traped on the hand of the enormus demon, but the thing were diferent now

"WHAT? WHAT IS GOING ON?" Nanoha asked confused watching that she has no longer power over my mind

"I'm not that weak! You will regret to had turned me into a demon, because I will kill you with the powers you gave me" A ball of fire appeared on my hands, slowly I turned it into a giant blade covered in flames

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Nanoha screamed while I swinged the enormus blade of fire decapitating her, the enormus beast screamed while realising me, I landed over my foots and watched how the enormus beast get involved in flames and banished leaving only a little mist of ashes

Nanoha, the white Devil was finally dead

I turned at the machine and saw that Karil awaked, she slowly standed up and walked away of the pedestal, she looked really confused

"Karil!" I called her while runing at her, but when I aproached I noticed that she looked sad

"Karil!" I repeated once more while tring to hug her, but she didn't allowed me to do it

"Karil? Wha-what is going on? Don't worry! It's over! Nanoha is dead!"

"No Vivio, it's not over" She replyed

"What? What are you..."

"Is time for you to choice Vivio, there is no salvation for me now, but you still can save yourself"

"What... what are you talking about?" Only in this instand I noiticed that the machine was still activated and that I was still a demon, with a sad voiuce, Karil told me

"You'll have to choose Vivio... Strike me down with your weapon in order to complete the ritual and you'll gain power as Nanoha dream to be, destroy the arm of sin to cast his evil away for ever, but if you choose to destroy the arm of sin, you will die"

"Karil..."

"Now... What you will do, my ldear Vivio?"

Next Chapter; final episode of Vatican Knights

[markesellus]

Originally Posted by Satashi

"Sing, Fate-chan!" Hayate called out around the campfire outside of their cabin. "Sing!"

"Fate can sing?" Subaru asked curiously, looking over at the blond as Chrono passed teh accoustic guitar over to her. "And play!?"

Fate giggled to herself and sat down her beer bottle, taking the guitar. "Okay... Okay..hehehehehe."

Nanoha poked her side. "You're too drunk."

"Shush, I'm not drunk." The two looked at each other and snorted before giggling. "Okay, for real." She cleared her throat and looked at the people around her. "What to sing?"

Tia cheered first. "Make something up!"

"Yeah!" Nanoha agreed, scooting closer.

Fate giggled again and nodded. "Okay...um..." She started plucking a few notes and finally sang out ina soft voice after a few moments. "Here we are... dear old friend." She nudged Nanoha lightly, making herself miss a cord. "You and I, drunk again." She ignored the people laughing and continued, strumming. " Laughs have been had, tears have been shed, and maybe the whisky's gone to me head...."

The blond snorted and looked at Nanoha, strumming faster. "But if I were gay, I would give you my heart! And if i were gay, you'd be my work of art! And if i were gay, we would swim in romance...but I'm not gay, so get your hand out of my pants~" The group laughed hard as Nanoha quickly pulled her hand out from behind Fate.

Blushing but still smiling, Fate continued to strum and after a false start, began again while speaking towards Nanoha. " Its not that i don't care." She leaned closly to her and whispered. "I do." Moving back, she picked up her voice again as Nanoha slid her hand behidn Fate's guitar and onto her stomach. "I just don't see myself rubbing you. Another time, another scene, I'd be right behind you- if you know what i mean!" She laughed and strummed hard, singing over the cheering.

"'Cuz if i were gay, I would give soul! And if i were gay, I would give you my 'whole'... being." She snorted. " And if i were gay, It would be just you and me, but I'm Not gay...so wont you stop cupping my pus-hand." She stopped her word and Nanoha moved her other hand from behind Fate's guitar, red in the face.


Turning to Nanoha, she started singing more. "We've never hugged, we've never kissed. I've never been intimate with your fist. You have opened brand new doors!" Fate licked her lips. "So get over here and drop ... your ... Draaaaaaaaawwwweeeeeeerrrrrrrrrs!"

Fate strummed a few more times and stopped. "Thank you!" She appreciated the clapping all around her.

"Wow," Yuuno laughed out, amazed. "How did you get those lyrics so fast?" She watched Fate hand the guitar back to her brother before going to her jeans and zipping them before fastening the button. "....nevermind."

Spoiler for Stephen Lynch:

Haha I like how Chrono asks how she came up with the lyrics so fast.
Its funny, I've been doing something like this all summer. But not this song! I'd pick three random chords, and make up words to it on the spot. My favorite so far: The Ninja Porn Song.

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Stephan Lynch Crack FTW :3

My turn

Spoiler for SLC:

Spoiler for song:

The teacher opened the door to the classroom allowing a sergeant on through. "Hey kids I'm Vice." Vice took out his guitar and sat down in front of the class of kindergarteners. "You know what's cool. Superheroes."

The children looked at him funny.

"It's even funner to make up your own," He nodded and grinned. "I like to do that you can to."

"Can I be Starlight Breaker girl?" One little girl yelled out.

"If you want to be a violent little thing."

"What about Superman?" A boy in the back called out.

"Copyrighted kid. Let me help out," He started to strum his guitar.

"If I could be a superhero

I would be awesome man

I’d fly around the world fighting crime

According to my awesome plan

And if I saw criminals trying to lie

Hurting other people and making them cry

I’d haul them off to jail in my awesome van

‘Cause I would be awesome man"

"But why wouldn't you just breaker them all?"

"Or call the Wolkenritter they're awesome!"

"But not as awesome as Awesome Man kids. And they can't protect you from all the bad things in the world like drugs. Do you want to be a druggie kid?"

"Sergeant they're only 5," The teacher sighed.

Vice ignored her and moved on, "Just say no kids.

If I could be a superhero

I would be Drug-Free boy

Telling the world of the evils of drugs

And all of the lives they destroy

Well I would take all the junk

He’s getting so high

With their needles and bongs

And their sticks of tye

As I burn them alive I would squeal with joy

Because I would be drug-free boy."


"Isn't that mean?"

"No," Vice glared the child into silence.

"Maybe Miss Nanoha can befriend the junkies!"

"Nanoha's not god kid," Vice looked grumpier by the minute, "And you know what

If I could be a superhero

I would be justice guy

Making sure people get what they deserve

Especially women who steal time

Like if a girl took the screen and refused to share

With a cast of three dozen

And former main stars

And only let on a small moe blob

You can shaft them right off and ship them to the Arctic

Especially the blob

Then you would be justice guy

"Sir I'm going to ask you to leave now."

Vice was too into it to stop,

"Or you could be more subtle

No, I didn’t mean to be vague

Give her the boot

and put me in the spot "

Two large security guards picked Vice up but he didn't stop playing even as he was dragged out.

"I'd make a better main character then anyone

Especially the blob

Then you would be Justice Guy

Yes then you would be

a superhero like me"

Lol, Vice teaching the kids. That's awesome.

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Chapter 75

Vatican Knights

Spoiler for Final Battle:

I couldn't belive what I was seing, that monster was enormus, it was giant, bigger than Los Ganados and even bigger than El Lago, I was only armd with my axe, not even a simple pistol, I couldn't win, I just couldn't

"IT'S OVER VIVIO" Nanoha said "DIE!!!!!!" She charged one of her's giant clubs against me, I avoided it, the simple hit of the descomunal weapon made the earth trumble

I was not even on foot again when she attacked me with the other club, I just saved myself by too close, I tried to hit her leg with my Axe but my Axe was unable to even cut her skyn, in retrivution, she tried to crush me with her feets, as if I were some kind of Ant, it was probably thanks to my "demon" speed and agility that I managed to dodge her

The only thing that I though to do was to climb a mountain that was at my side, Nanoha spoted me and hited the mountain with one of her clubs, I was almost throwed down but I managed to hold one and keep climbing, the mountain wasn't really big, I managed to reach the top

The skulls that were attached at the beast's chest leaved the main body and started to float around me, one by one they started to charge against me,they litterally hited the ground in wich I was with their entire... well, skull

They hurted me this time, the hit launched me away, throwing me out of the mountain, but before I hitted the ground, Nanoha catched me with one of her descomunal hands, my Axe falled to the ground while the beeast rised me making some kind or triumph roar, then he aproached me to Nanoha who was attached at the demon's chest

"NOW, MY DEAR..." She said "... I WILL CRUSH YOUR MIND"

Nanoha luaghed while I started to feel a horrible pain in my head, it was Nanoha, somehow she was inside it, in an instant, the memories of the deads of my friends started to pass in front of my eyes, one after one, again andf again, it was horrible

"Nooo!.... Pls.... Please! S-Stooop!" It was horrible, I can't descrive how horrible it was, I felt that my brain was going to tear apart

"I WILL ENJOY THIS VIVIO, I WILL ENJOY SEE HOW YOUR MIND WILL BE CRUSHING YOU, HOW EVERY SINGLE PAIN OF THE EXISTENCE WILL TURTURE YOU, AND ONLY UNTIL YOU BEG FOR ME TO KILL YOU, I'LL CONCIDERATE TO PUT A QUICK END TO YOUR EXISTENCE"

The images just keeped appearing in my mind, I couldn't hold anymore, I jus wanted to die, to stop that suffering at any cost, I just wanted to stop suffering

In an instant, I found my self naked into a place covered with darkness, I was so scared, I was cring, I was cring I feeled that I was alone

"Why?... I just want to... to live... to live in peace, why I can't? WHY?!" I was asking this to myself, when suddenly a familiar voice replyed to me

"Vivio, stand up, you'r not that weak" I recognise his voice and quickly raised my head

"Al... Alphonse?!" Another voice came behind him

"You are not alone, we are here with you"

"Helga..." I replyed when I saw her standing next to Alphonse

"You are strong, stronger than the white Devil"
Pink appeared also

"Pink..." Finally at my right I also heared his voice

"Are you going to let her do what she had planed?"

"Jasper!" They were there, my friends who died facing Nanoha, who gave their lives tring to stop her, suporting me in esence

"Vivio..." I felt an incredible sensation of Hapyness when I heared his voice cominf from behind me, I quickly turned to see him

"Dad!" I screamed while runing at the arms of my beloved father

"My little girl, don't fear, I'm here, I had been always here, fighnting beside you in all your battles, facing along with you everyone of your foes, don't surrender now, not now"

"Dady, please! Let me go with you!"

"No, not yet, therte is still someone else who needs you" I understood the words of my father, I clened my tears and looked himn at the eyes

"I will not faild you" I said, my father kissed my forehead and the the darkness who was surrounding me dissapeared, once again, I found myself traped on the hand of the enormus demon, but the thing were diferent now

"WHAT? WHAT IS GOING ON?" Nanoha asked confused watching that she has no longer power over my mind

"I'm not that weak! You will regret to had turned me into a demon, because I will kill you with the powers you gave me" A ball of fire appeared on my hands, slowly I turned it into a giant blade covered in flames

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Nanoha screamed while I swinged the enormus blade of fire decapitating her, the enormus beast screamed while realising me, I landed over my foots and watched how the enormus beast get involved in flames and banished leaving only a little mist of ashes

Nanoha, the white Devil was finally dead

I turned at the machine and saw that Karil awaked, she slowly standed up and walked away of the pedestal, she looked really confused

"Karil!" I called her while runing at her, but when I aproached I noticed that she looked sad

"Karil!" I repeated once more while tring to hug her, but she didn't allowed me to do it

"Karil? Wha-what is going on? Don't worry! It's over! Nanoha is dead!"

"No Vivio, it's not over" She replyed

"What? What are you..."

"Is time for you to choice Vivio, there is no salvation for me now, but you still can save yourself"

"What... what are you talking about?" Only in this instand I noiticed that the machine was still activated and that I was still a demon, with a sad voiuce, Karil told me

"You'll have to choose Vivio... Strike me down with your weapon in order to complete the ritual and you'll gain power as Nanoha dream to be, destroy the arm of sin to cast his evil away for ever, but if you choose to destroy the arm of sin, you will die"

"Karil..."

"Now... What you will do, my ldear Vivio?"

Next Chapter; final episode of Vatican Knights

~snaa! I love how everyone was supporting her. Who exactly is her dad? Or is that not really important? Anyways I can't believe Nanoha is dead, I was expecting a little more after Vivio got the huge demon sword. The ending is quite a twist. I'm sure she'll destroy the arm of sin, unless the demon part of her starts taking over. But I don't want her to die!! I can't believe Vatican Knights is going to be over. T.T But I'm excited to see what will happen!


On a random note~ I had a interesting idea while half asleep in the car this morning. Involving Fate being in a street gang and Nanoha getting in some trouble. Also I had a dream, in which everyone on the FFT somehow met up and found out what their username was. I can't remember what happened after that though, I just know it was weird.

[Kaix]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Chapter 75

Vatican Knights

Spoiler for Final Battle:

I couldn't belive what I was seing, that monster was enormus, it was giant, bigger than Los Ganados and even bigger than El Lago, I was only armd with my axe, not even a simple pistol, I couldn't win, I just couldn't

"IT'S OVER VIVIO" Nanoha said "DIE!!!!!!" She charged one of her's giant clubs against me, I avoided it, the simple hit of the descomunal weapon made the earth trumble

I was not even on foot again when she attacked me with the other club, I just saved myself by too close, I tried to hit her leg with my Axe but my Axe was unable to even cut her skyn, in retrivution, she tried to crush me with her feets, as if I were some kind of Ant, it was probably thanks to my "demon" speed and agility that I managed to dodge her

The only thing that I though to do was to climb a mountain that was at my side, Nanoha spoted me and hited the mountain with one of her clubs, I was almost throwed down but I managed to hold one and keep climbing, the mountain wasn't really big, I managed to reach the top

The skulls that were attached at the beast's chest leaved the main body and started to float around me, one by one they started to charge against me,they litterally hited the ground in wich I was with their entire... well, skull

They hurted me this time, the hit launched me away, throwing me out of the mountain, but before I hitted the ground, Nanoha catched me with one of her descomunal hands, my Axe falled to the ground while the beeast rised me making some kind or triumph roar, then he aproached me to Nanoha who was attached at the demon's chest

"NOW, MY DEAR..." She said "... I WILL CRUSH YOUR MIND"

Nanoha luaghed while I started to feel a horrible pain in my head, it was Nanoha, somehow she was inside it, in an instant, the memories of the deads of my friends started to pass in front of my eyes, one after one, again andf again, it was horrible

"Nooo!.... Pls.... Please! S-Stooop!" It was horrible, I can't descrive how horrible it was, I felt that my brain was going to tear apart

"I WILL ENJOY THIS VIVIO, I WILL ENJOY SEE HOW YOUR MIND WILL BE CRUSHING YOU, HOW EVERY SINGLE PAIN OF THE EXISTENCE WILL TURTURE YOU, AND ONLY UNTIL YOU BEG FOR ME TO KILL YOU, I'LL CONCIDERATE TO PUT A QUICK END TO YOUR EXISTENCE"

The images just keeped appearing in my mind, I couldn't hold anymore, I jus wanted to die, to stop that suffering at any cost, I just wanted to stop suffering

In an instant, I found my self naked into a place covered with darkness, I was so scared, I was cring, I was cring I feeled that I was alone

"Why?... I just want to... to live... to live in peace, why I can't? WHY?!" I was asking this to myself, when suddenly a familiar voice replyed to me

"Vivio, stand up, you'r not that weak" I recognise his voice and quickly raised my head

"Al... Alphonse?!" Another voice came behind him

"You are not alone, we are here with you"

"Helga..." I replyed when I saw her standing next to Alphonse

"You are strong, stronger than the white Devil"
Pink appeared also

"Pink..." Finally at my right I also heared his voice

"Are you going to let her do what she had planed?"

"Jasper!" They were there, my friends who died facing Nanoha, who gave their lives tring to stop her, suporting me in esence

"Vivio..." I felt an incredible sensation of Hapyness when I heared his voice cominf from behind me, I quickly turned to see him

"Dad!" I screamed while runing at the arms of my beloved father

"My little girl, don't fear, I'm here, I had been always here, fighnting beside you in all your battles, facing along with you everyone of your foes, don't surrender now, not now"

"Dady, please! Let me go with you!"

"No, not yet, therte is still someone else who needs you" I understood the words of my father, I clened my tears and looked himn at the eyes

"I will not faild you" I said, my father kissed my forehead and the the darkness who was surrounding me dissapeared, once again, I found myself traped on the hand of the enormus demon, but the thing were diferent now

"WHAT? WHAT IS GOING ON?" Nanoha asked confused watching that she has no longer power over my mind

"I'm not that weak! You will regret to had turned me into a demon, because I will kill you with the powers you gave me" A ball of fire appeared on my hands, slowly I turned it into a giant blade covered in flames

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Nanoha screamed while I swinged the enormus blade of fire decapitating her, the enormus beast screamed while realising me, I landed over my foots and watched how the enormus beast get involved in flames and banished leaving only a little mist of ashes

Nanoha, the white Devil was finally dead

I turned at the machine and saw that Karil awaked, she slowly standed up and walked away of the pedestal, she looked really confused

"Karil!" I called her while runing at her, but when I aproached I noticed that she looked sad

"Karil!" I repeated once more while tring to hug her, but she didn't allowed me to do it

"Karil? Wha-what is going on? Don't worry! It's over! Nanoha is dead!"

"No Vivio, it's not over" She replyed

"What? What are you..."

"Is time for you to choice Vivio, there is no salvation for me now, but you still can save yourself"

"What... what are you talking about?" Only in this instand I noiticed that the machine was still activated and that I was still a demon, with a sad voiuce, Karil told me

"You'll have to choose Vivio... Strike me down with your weapon in order to complete the ritual and you'll gain power as Nanoha dream to be, destroy the arm of sin to cast his evil away for ever, but if you choose to destroy the arm of sin, you will die"

"Karil..."

"Now... What you will do, my ldear Vivio?"

Next Chapter; final episode of Vatican Knights

I think I know what Vivio will choose. Still, where are Raphael and Black Wolfness? I don't know, I though seeing Nanoha finally dead would be more fulfilling because she was an interesting villain this far, but now she decreased into the common evil overlord category. >.> Which made her death totally expected after Vivio's boost in confidence.

What did you mean to say here?

the memories of the deads of my friends started to pass in front of my eyes,

^ deeds or deaths?

Now that you're saying that the next chapter is the final one, I'm starting to feel a little sad myself. T_T

Just curiosity: Why was Vivio naked in her imaginary reunion?

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by markesellus

On a random note~ I had a interesting idea while half asleep in the car this morning. Involving Fate being in a street gang and Nanoha getting in some trouble. Also I had a dream, in which everyone on the FFT somehow met up and found out what their username was. I can't remember what happened after that though, I just know it was weird.

Sugestion: Watch what you eat on dinner XP

The idea of Gan Fate sounds cool! You should try it

OH, and no, the Name of Vivio's Father is not really inportant but I think that I mencionated it in chapter 1

Originally Posted by Kai the Reaper

What did you mean to say here?
^ deeds or deaths?

Ups! My mistake, I tried to write deaths

Originally Posted by Kai the Reaper

Just curiosity: Why was Vivio naked in her imaginary reunion?

It's like saing "Naked on the darkness" In other words: without protection in the darkness XD a bit too philosofic

[Saharet]

Originally Posted by Satashi

"Sing, Fate-chan!" Hayate called out around the campfire outside of their cabin. "Sing!"

"Fate can sing?" Subaru asked curiously, looking over at the blond as Chrono passed teh accoustic guitar over to her. "And play!?"

Fate giggled to herself and sat down her beer bottle, taking the guitar. "Okay... Okay..hehehehehe."

Nanoha poked her side. "You're too drunk."

"Shush, I'm not drunk." The two looked at each other and snorted before giggling. "Okay, for real." She cleared her throat and looked at the people around her. "What to sing?"

Tia cheered first. "Make something up!"

"Yeah!" Nanoha agreed, scooting closer.

Fate giggled again and nodded. "Okay...um..." She started plucking a few notes and finally sang out ina soft voice after a few moments. "Here we are... dear old friend." She nudged Nanoha lightly, making herself miss a cord. "You and I, drunk again." She ignored the people laughing and continued, strumming. " Laughs have been had, tears have been shed, and maybe the whisky's gone to me head...."

The blond snorted and looked at Nanoha, strumming faster. "But if I were gay, I would give you my heart! And if i were gay, you'd be my work of art! And if i were gay, we would swim in romance...but I'm not gay, so get your hand out of my pants~" The group laughed hard as Nanoha quickly pulled her hand out from behind Fate.

Blushing but still smiling, Fate continued to strum and after a false start, began again while speaking towards Nanoha. " Its not that i don't care." She leaned closly to her and whispered. "I do." Moving back, she picked up her voice again as Nanoha slid her hand behidn Fate's guitar and onto her stomach. "I just don't see myself rubbing you. Another time, another scene, I'd be right behind you- if you know what i mean!" She laughed and strummed hard, singing over the cheering.

"'Cuz if i were gay, I would give soul! And if i were gay, I would give you my 'whole'... being." She snorted. " And if i were gay, It would be just you and me, but I'm Not gay...so wont you stop cupping my pus-hand." She stopped her word and Nanoha moved her other hand from behind Fate's guitar, red in the face.


Turning to Nanoha, she started singing more. "We've never hugged, we've never kissed. I've never been intimate with your fist. You have opened brand new doors!" Fate licked her lips. "So get over here and drop ... your ... Draaaaaaaaawwwweeeeeeerrrrrrrrrs!"

Fate strummed a few more times and stopped. "Thank you!" She appreciated the clapping all around her.

"Wow," Yuuno laughed out, amazed. "How did you get those lyrics so fast?" She watched Fate hand the guitar back to her brother before going to her jeans and zipping them before fastening the button. "....nevermind."

Spoiler for Stephen Lynch:

oO
*Starts laughing too hard to speak*
WIN!

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Stephan Lynch Crack FTW :3

My turn

Spoiler for SLC:

Spoiler for song:

The teacher opened the door to the classroom allowing a sergeant on through. "Hey kids I'm Vice." Vice took out his guitar and sat down in front of the class of kindergarteners. "You know what's cool. Superheroes."

The children looked at him funny.

"It's even funner to make up your own," He nodded and grinned. "I like to do that you can to."

"Can I be Starlight Breaker girl?" One little girl yelled out.

"If you want to be a violent little thing."

"What about Superman?" A boy in the back called out.

"Copyrighted kid. Let me help out," He started to strum his guitar.

"If I could be a superhero

I would be awesome man

I’d fly around the world fighting crime

According to my awesome plan

And if I saw criminals trying to lie

Hurting other people and making them cry

I’d haul them off to jail in my awesome van

‘Cause I would be awesome man"

"But why wouldn't you just breaker them all?"

"Or call the Wolkenritter they're awesome!"

"But not as awesome as Awesome Man kids. And they can't protect you from all the bad things in the world like drugs. Do you want to be a druggie kid?"

"Sergeant they're only 5," The teacher sighed.

Vice ignored her and moved on, "Just say no kids.

If I could be a superhero

I would be Drug-Free boy

Telling the world of the evils of drugs

And all of the lives they destroy

Well I would take all the junk

He’s getting so high

With their needles and bongs

And their sticks of tye

As I burn them alive I would squeal with joy

Because I would be drug-free boy."


"Isn't that mean?"

"No," Vice glared the child into silence.

"Maybe Miss Nanoha can befriend the junkies!"

"Nanoha's not god kid," Vice looked grumpier by the minute, "And you know what

If I could be a superhero

I would be justice guy

Making sure people get what they deserve

Especially women who steal time

Like if a girl took the screen and refused to share

With a cast of three dozen

And former main stars

And only let on a small moe blob

You can shaft them right off and ship them to the Arctic

Especially the blob

Then you would be justice guy

"Sir I'm going to ask you to leave now."

Vice was too into it to stop,

"Or you could be more subtle

No, I didn’t mean to be vague

Give her the boot

and put me in the spot "

Two large security guards picked Vice up but he didn't stop playing even as he was dragged out.

"I'd make a better main character then anyone

Especially the blob

Then you would be Justice Guy

Yes then you would be

a superhero like me"

Oh god... *facepalms* Good one, Vice trying to gain more importance than the female characters... *snickers*
FAIL!

[Advent000]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Chapter 75

Vatican Knights

Spoiler for Final Battle:

I couldn't belive what I was seing, that monster was enormus, it was giant, bigger than Los Ganados and even bigger than El Lago, I was only armd with my axe, not even a simple pistol, I couldn't win, I just couldn't

"IT'S OVER VIVIO" Nanoha said "DIE!!!!!!" She charged one of her's giant clubs against me, I avoided it, the simple hit of the descomunal weapon made the earth trumble

I was not even on foot again when she attacked me with the other club, I just saved myself by too close, I tried to hit her leg with my Axe but my Axe was unable to even cut her skyn, in retrivution, she tried to crush me with her feets, as if I were some kind of Ant, it was probably thanks to my "demon" speed and agility that I managed to dodge her

The only thing that I though to do was to climb a mountain that was at my side, Nanoha spoted me and hited the mountain with one of her clubs, I was almost throwed down but I managed to hold one and keep climbing, the mountain wasn't really big, I managed to reach the top

The skulls that were attached at the beast's chest leaved the main body and started to float around me, one by one they started to charge against me,they litterally hited the ground in wich I was with their entire... well, skull

They hurted me this time, the hit launched me away, throwing me out of the mountain, but before I hitted the ground, Nanoha catched me with one of her descomunal hands, my Axe falled to the ground while the beeast rised me making some kind or triumph roar, then he aproached me to Nanoha who was attached at the demon's chest

"NOW, MY DEAR..." She said "... I WILL CRUSH YOUR MIND"

Nanoha luaghed while I started to feel a horrible pain in my head, it was Nanoha, somehow she was inside it, in an instant, the memories of the deads of my friends started to pass in front of my eyes, one after one, again andf again, it was horrible

"Nooo!.... Pls.... Please! S-Stooop!" It was horrible, I can't descrive how horrible it was, I felt that my brain was going to tear apart

"I WILL ENJOY THIS VIVIO, I WILL ENJOY SEE HOW YOUR MIND WILL BE CRUSHING YOU, HOW EVERY SINGLE PAIN OF THE EXISTENCE WILL TURTURE YOU, AND ONLY UNTIL YOU BEG FOR ME TO KILL YOU, I'LL CONCIDERATE TO PUT A QUICK END TO YOUR EXISTENCE"

The images just keeped appearing in my mind, I couldn't hold anymore, I jus wanted to die, to stop that suffering at any cost, I just wanted to stop suffering

In an instant, I found my self naked into a place covered with darkness, I was so scared, I was cring, I was cring I feeled that I was alone

"Why?... I just want to... to live... to live in peace, why I can't? WHY?!" I was asking this to myself, when suddenly a familiar voice replyed to me

"Vivio, stand up, you'r not that weak" I recognise his voice and quickly raised my head

"Al... Alphonse?!" Another voice came behind him

"You are not alone, we are here with you"

"Helga..." I replyed when I saw her standing next to Alphonse

"You are strong, stronger than the white Devil"
Pink appeared also

"Pink..." Finally at my right I also heared his voice

"Are you going to let her do what she had planed?"

"Jasper!" They were there, my friends who died facing Nanoha, who gave their lives tring to stop her, suporting me in esence

"Vivio..." I felt an incredible sensation of Hapyness when I heared his voice cominf from behind me, I quickly turned to see him

"Dad!" I screamed while runing at the arms of my beloved father

"My little girl, don't fear, I'm here, I had been always here, fighnting beside you in all your battles, facing along with you everyone of your foes, don't surrender now, not now"

"Dady, please! Let me go with you!"

"No, not yet, therte is still someone else who needs you" I understood the words of my father, I clened my tears and looked himn at the eyes

"I will not faild you" I said, my father kissed my forehead and the the darkness who was surrounding me dissapeared, once again, I found myself traped on the hand of the enormus demon, but the thing were diferent now

"WHAT? WHAT IS GOING ON?" Nanoha asked confused watching that she has no longer power over my mind

"I'm not that weak! You will regret to had turned me into a demon, because I will kill you with the powers you gave me" A ball of fire appeared on my hands, slowly I turned it into a giant blade covered in flames

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Nanoha screamed while I swinged the enormus blade of fire decapitating her, the enormus beast screamed while realising me, I landed over my foots and watched how the enormus beast get involved in flames and banished leaving only a little mist of ashes

Nanoha, the white Devil was finally dead

I turned at the machine and saw that Karil awaked, she slowly standed up and walked away of the pedestal, she looked really confused

"Karil!" I called her while runing at her, but when I aproached I noticed that she looked sad

"Karil!" I repeated once more while tring to hug her, but she didn't allowed me to do it

"Karil? Wha-what is going on? Don't worry! It's over! Nanoha is dead!"

"No Vivio, it's not over" She replyed

"What? What are you..."

"Is time for you to choice Vivio, there is no salvation for me now, but you still can save yourself"

"What... what are you talking about?" Only in this instand I noiticed that the machine was still activated and that I was still a demon, with a sad voiuce, Karil told me

"You'll have to choose Vivio... Strike me down with your weapon in order to complete the ritual and you'll gain power as Nanoha dream to be, destroy the arm of sin to cast his evil away for ever, but if you choose to destroy the arm of sin, you will die"

"Karil..."

"Now... What you will do, my ldear Vivio?"

Next Chapter; final episode of Vatican Knights

What a choice.

[Satashi]

Spoiler for Here I come to save the da~y:

Fate parked her car and walked forward to the group of policemen taking cover behind their vehicles that were currently being blasted occasionally with magic bullets. "Hello," She greeted kindly to the person with the most badges. "I was passing by a few blocks away and heard the situation on my police scanner. Need some assistance?"

"Who are you?" The man looked at the blond who was dressed in casual street clothes consisting of a pair of blue jeans and short sleeved black shirt.

"Oh, forgive me for being out of uniform." She laughed softly as a bullet bounced off her barrier that was previously invisible before being struck. "Fate T. Harlaown of section six."

"A mage?" He asked, amazed.

"Yes, S-rank but currently limited to AA."

"Fate-chaaaaaaaan!" Nanoha ran up behind her and stood by her friend. "Hayate-chan told me you'd be here!" She saluted the man in front of them. "Nanoha Takamachi of section six, rank AA currently- down from S."

"Two mages! By golly we're saved!"

Nanoha looked at the bank building. "Hostiges?"

"None."

"Anyone else besides them in there?"

"No ma'am."

Nanoha blinked. "What's the problem?"

"We can't get close enough without being shot back. We were thinking od deploying a few select people inside while distracting- eh!?" He looked at the charging ball of pink energy in Nanoha's hand.

"This is faster!" She told him cheerily, pointing her palm facing to the door and sending the blast.The resulting explosion shook the ground and blew a few closer parked cars backwards. Dust and degree flew thick along with the scared screams of the people scrambling to get away from the zone. "There, now just go pick them up!" She told the shocked man casually before turning to Fate. "By the way, can you get some milk while you're at the store? Vivio drank the last of it this morning."

Fate face palmed. "Nanoha...." The officer looked at Fate, leaving it to her to scold the rash action and thousands of dollars in repair bills. "I told you to check before I left," the blond continued, putting a hand on her hip. "I already went to the store, you'll have to go without tonight."

The officer fell down.

[Preston]

Well, I had a strange idea. An unusual (all things considered) but clichéd idea. I wouldn't usually write an AU, but here one is. Or at least, a teaser/prologue or sorts. I said I could make it work on IRC, and I'll do my best to get it to do so. Preston presents...

SWAT!Fate

Spoiler for Prologue:

2.00PM
Police Headquarters, SWAT Department
Firing Range

Fate took aim, holding her handgun tightly, her right hand around its grip while the left supported it, took a deep breath, waited for the beating of her heart to slow, and finally fired between them. The bullet pierced the painted forehead of the wooden target she had been aiming for, and she relaxed.

“Congratulations!”

Fate turned around, removing her ear defenders and safety glasses. A short pink haired girl was smiling at her.

“You didn’t miss a single shot,” said the girl, pleased.

Fate shrugged before replying modestly: “The targets do move rather slow, Caro.”

“What nonsense! Fate is team leader for a reason.” Caro stuck out her tongue. “Lightning quick reflexes, infallible aim-“

“Stop it, Caro,” said Fate, blushing lightly. “I’m not that good…”

∞

2.00PM
Nexus Commercial Bank
Lobby

Hayate was tired. She’d only had to deal with two of the long line of impatient clientele, and she was already longing for her first break of the day.

The customer she was attending to finished filling in their form and slid it under the glass pane that separated them from her.

She looked at the form briefly before nodding to the customer. “The normal processing time is two working days. You will receive notification when your request is completed.”

The customer departed without any expression of gratitude, and Hayate sighed. There were times when she did not enjoy her job in the slightest.

Another customer approached. “I want to make a withdrawal.”

∞

2.00PM
Nexus Commercial Bank
Female Customer Toilets

Nanoha slammed the fake marble cubicle door behind her, and slid the bolt across to lock it shut. She flicked the toilet lid down with her foot and threw the rucksack she carried down upon it. With precious little room to do so, she pulled her pink tank-top over her head, rolled it up in an untidy ball and dropped it onto her bag. She kicked off her sandals and removed her khaki shorts, before squeezing them all into a black plastic bag, which she hid inside the toilet cistern.

She proceeded to remove from her rucksack a grey boiler suit, which she climbed into awkwardly, nearly falling face first against the toilet seat when she caught her foot inside one of the trouser legs. At last she had the bland clothing on and zipped tightly up. It was too large for her, and noticeably baggy around her midriff and arms. Satisfied, she took from the bag a pair of heavy boots, which she slid her small feet into and tied up in double knots, making sure to pull the laces uncomfortably tight.

Taking a small pocket mirror the suit’s breast pocket, she scrutinised her appearance. Contended, she removed a piece of black cotton fabric, which she unfolded. It was a balaclava, with only a thin slit for her eyes. She pulled it over her head, aligning it carefully so it did not interfere with her sight, making especially sure that it was seated properly over her tied-back hair, and that no loose strands strayed into her eyes.

Reaching into her bag for a final time she withdrew first a pair of mirrored sunglasses, which she opened with a flick of her wrist, and slid them on. With her right hand around its grip, she lifted a weapon from the bag; an AK assault rifle. She unfolded the stock, and then slapped a magazine into it before stuffing a further two into her pockets.

There was a sudden cry of surprise from outside her cubicle: “Hey! What’re you doing in here? Try the next-”

The cry was cut short with a reverberating crunch, followed by the sound of something heavy sliding down the wall and onto the floor.

“Is it time?” asked Nanoha, directing her voice toward the cubicle door.

“It is,” replied a deep voice.

I'm still working on my other fiction. This is just something unrefined (although I shall leave nothing crucial unexplained by the end) I thought would be entertaining.

[NorthernFallout]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Here I come to save the da~y:

Fate parked her car and walked forward to the group of policemen taking cover behind their vehicles that were currently being blasted occasionally with magic bullets. "Hello," She greeted kindly to the person with the most badges. "I was passing by a few blocks away and heard the situation on my police scanner. Need some assistance?"

"Who are you?" The man looked at the blond who was dressed in casual street clothes consisting of a pair of blue jeans and short sleeved black shirt.

"Oh, forgive me for being out of uniform." She laughed softly as a bullet bounced off her barrier that was previously invisible before being struck. "Fate T. Harlaown of section six."

"A mage?" He asked, amazed.

"Yes, S-rank but currently limited to AA."

"Fate-chaaaaaaaan!" Nanoha ran up behind her and stood by her friend. "Hayate-chan told me you'd be here!" She saluted the man in front of them. "Nanoha Takamachi of section six, rank AA currently- down from S."

"Two mages! By golly we're saved!"

Nanoha looked at the bank building. "Hostiges?"

"None."

"Anyone else besides them in there?"

"No ma'am."

Nanoha blinked. "What's the problem?"

"We can't get close enough without being shot back. We were thinking od deploying a few select people inside while distracting- eh!?" He looked at the charging ball of pink energy in Nanoha's hand.

"This is faster!" She told him cheerily, pointing her palm facing to the door and sending the blast.The resulting explosion shook the ground and blew a few closer parked cars backwards. Dust and degree flew thick along with the scared screams of the people scrambling to get away from the zone. "There, now just go pick them up!" She told the shocked man casually before turning to Fate. "By the way, can you get some milk while you're at the store? Vivio drank the last of it this morning."

Fate face palmed. "Nanoha...." The officer looked at Fate, leaving it to her to scold the rash action and thousands of dollars in repair bills. "I told you to check before I left," the blond continued, putting a hand on her hip. "I already went to the store, you'll have to go without tonight."

The officer fell down.

The White Devil strikes again! *facedesks*

Originally Posted by Preston

Well, I had a strange idea. An unusual (all things considered) but clichéd idea. I wouldn't usually write an AU, but here one is. Or at least, a teaser/prologue or sorts. I said I could make it work on IRC, and I'll do my best to get it to do so. Preston presents...

SWAT!Fate

Spoiler for Prologue:

2.00PM
Police Headquarters, SWAT Department
Firing Range

Fate took aim, holding her handgun tightly, her right hand around its grip while the left supported it, took a deep breath, waited for the beating of her heart to slow, and finally fired between them. The bullet pierced the painted forehead of the wooden target she had been aiming for, and she relaxed.

“Congratulations!”

Fate turned around, removing her ear defenders and safety glasses. A short pink haired girl was smiling at her.

“You didn’t miss a single shot,” said the girl, pleased.

Fate shrugged before replying modestly: “The targets do move rather slow, Caro.”

“What nonsense! Fate is team leader for a reason.” Caro stuck out her tongue. “Lightning quick reflexes, infallible aim-“

“Stop it, Caro,” said Fate, blushing lightly. “I’m not that good…”

∞

2.00PM
Nexus Commercial Bank
Lobby

Hayate was tired. She’d only had to deal with two of the long line of impatient clientele, and she was already longing for her first break of the day.

The customer she was attending to finished filling in their form and slid it under the glass pane that separated them from her.

She looked at the form briefly before nodding to the customer. “The normal processing time is two working days. You will receive notification when your request is completed.”

The customer departed without any expression of gratitude, and Hayate sighed. There were times when she did not enjoy her job in the slightest.

Another customer approached. “I want to make a withdrawal.”

∞

2.00PM
Nexus Commercial Bank
Female Customer Toilets

Nanoha slammed the fake marble cubicle door behind her, and slid the bolt across to lock it shut. She flicked the toilet lid down with her foot and threw the rucksack she carried down upon it. With precious little room to do so, she pulled her pink tank-top over her head, rolled it up in an untidy ball and dropped it onto her bag. She kicked off her sandals and removed her khaki shorts, before squeezing them all into a black plastic bag, which she hid inside the toilet cistern.

She proceeded to remove from her rucksack a grey boiler suit, which she climbed into awkwardly, nearly falling face first against the toilet seat when she caught her foot inside one of the trouser legs. At last she had the bland clothing on and zipped tightly up. It was too large for her, and noticeably baggy around her midriff and arms. Satisfied, she took from the bag a pair of heavy boots, which she slid her small feet into and tied up in double knots, making sure to pull the laces uncomfortably tight.

Taking a small pocket mirror the suit’s breast pocket, she scrutinised her appearance. Contended, she removed a piece of black cotton fabric, which she unfolded. It was a balaclava, with only a thin slit for her eyes. She pulled it over her head, aligning it carefully so it did not interfere with her sight, making especially sure that it was seated properly over her tied-back hair, and that no loose strands strayed into her eyes.

Reaching into her bag for a final time she withdrew first a pair of mirrored sunglasses, which she opened with a flick of her wrist, and slid them on. With her right hand around its grip, she lifted a weapon from the bag; an AK assault rifle. She unfolded the stock, and then slapped a magazine into it before stuffing a further two into her pockets.

There was a sudden cry of surprise from outside her cubicle: “Hey! What’re you doing in here? Try the next-”

The cry was cut short with a reverberating crunch, followed by the sound of something heavy sliding down the wall and onto the floor.

“Is it time?” asked Nanoha, directing her voice toward the cubicle door.

“It is,” replied a deep voice.

I'm still working on my other fiction. This is just something unrefined (although I shall leave nothing crucial explained by the end) I thought would be entertaining.

Ohh, this is interesting. AK's and Nanoha the Renegade...or something

The only small, little nit-picky thing I didn't find...fitting was Caro. She wasn't simply in character imo. But that's such a small note I wouldn't bother to change.

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Here I come to save the da~y:

*snip*

Outsiders just don't know what to do about two.

The spoiler title made me think Mighty Mouse

Originally Posted by Preston

Well, I had a strange idea. An unusual (all things considered) but clichéd idea. I wouldn't usually write an AU, but here one is. Or at least, a teaser/prologue or sorts. I said I could make it work on IRC, and I'll do my best to get it to do so. Preston presents...

SWAT!Fate

Spoiler for Prologue:

2.00PM
Police Headquarters, SWAT Department
Firing Range

Fate took aim, holding her handgun tightly, her right hand around its grip while the left supported it, took a deep breath, waited for the beating of her heart to slow, and finally fired between them. The bullet pierced the painted forehead of the wooden target she had been aiming for, and she relaxed.

“Congratulations!”

Fate turned around, removing her ear defenders and safety glasses. A short pink haired girl was smiling at her.

“You didn’t miss a single shot,” said the girl, pleased.

Fate shrugged before replying modestly: “The targets do move rather slow, Caro.”

“What nonsense! Fate is team leader for a reason.” Caro stuck out her tongue. “Lightning quick reflexes, infallible aim-“

“Stop it, Caro,” said Fate, blushing lightly. “I’m not that good…”

∞

2.00PM
Nexus Commercial Bank
Lobby

Hayate was tired. She’d only had to deal with two of the long line of impatient clientele, and she was already longing for her first break of the day.

The customer she was attending to finished filling in their form and slid it under the glass pane that separated them from her.

She looked at the form briefly before nodding to the customer. “The normal processing time is two working days. You will receive notification when your request is completed.”

The customer departed without any expression of gratitude, and Hayate sighed. There were times when she did not enjoy her job in the slightest.

Another customer approached. “I want to make a withdrawal.”

∞

2.00PM
Nexus Commercial Bank
Female Customer Toilets

Nanoha slammed the fake marble cubicle door behind her, and slid the bolt across to lock it shut. She flicked the toilet lid down with her foot and threw the rucksack she carried down upon it. With precious little room to do so, she pulled her pink tank-top over her head, rolled it up in an untidy ball and dropped it onto her bag. She kicked off her sandals and removed her khaki shorts, before squeezing them all into a black plastic bag, which she hid inside the toilet cistern.

She proceeded to remove from her rucksack a grey boiler suit, which she climbed into awkwardly, nearly falling face first against the toilet seat when she caught her foot inside one of the trouser legs. At last she had the bland clothing on and zipped tightly up. It was too large for her, and noticeably baggy around her midriff and arms. Satisfied, she took from the bag a pair of heavy boots, which she slid her small feet into and tied up in double knots, making sure to pull the laces uncomfortably tight.

Taking a small pocket mirror the suit’s breast pocket, she scrutinised her appearance. Contended, she removed a piece of black cotton fabric, which she unfolded. It was a balaclava, with only a thin slit for her eyes. She pulled it over her head, aligning it carefully so it did not interfere with her sight, making especially sure that it was seated properly over her tied-back hair, and that no loose strands strayed into her eyes.

Reaching into her bag for a final time she withdrew first a pair of mirrored sunglasses, which she opened with a flick of her wrist, and slid them on. With her right hand around its grip, she lifted a weapon from the bag; an AK assault rifle. She unfolded the stock, and then slapped a magazine into it before stuffing a further two into her pockets.

There was a sudden cry of surprise from outside her cubicle: “Hey! What’re you doing in here? Try the next-”

The cry was cut short with a reverberating crunch, followed by the sound of something heavy sliding down the wall and onto the floor.

“Is it time?” asked Nanoha, directing her voice toward the cubicle door.

“It is,” replied a deep voice.

I'm still working on my other fiction. This is just something unrefined (although I shall leave nothing crucial explained by the end) I thought would be entertaining.

:3
I'm interested

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