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Such units are limited because of the cost to build and operate them, so there's a long waiting line. But in Singapore, or in SEA in general, connections help. I inferred its existence from the speed at which Cecilia and Rin recovered from getting bashed around by Laura.
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2011-11-10, 21:48 | Link #7122 |
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@ Jak: I'll keep that in mind.
@ Eratas: Sure! Though it would be funny to see if the guys have quirks that happen to them while they're drunk. For example, Akira when drunk is more honest to the point he cannot lie, and Kyuukai acts surprisingly more calm, almost subdued. He's more meek, easily startled, and like his brother-figure, is more open to tell the truth on whatever is asked of him. Also, he'll DO whatever is asked of him. Which is why he once woke up in Laura's bed, half naked, missing a chunk of his memory and having a hangover from hell while two scantilly clad girls hang from both of his arms. But he's still a virgin of course. |
2011-11-10, 21:54 | Link #7123 |
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@ Rain - I made a small draft on it about 200 pages ago. Everybody acts OOC
Ichika - Acts like a sad drunk and wishes he could get a girlfriend Irish - Acts very irrational and constantly says retarded things. Also has no restrictions when it comes to crossdressing. "Charles" - Speaks very loudly and constantly blurts out the fact that he's a girl. Nobody listens and tells "him" to shut up. You can expect everyone's gonna get in trouble come morning though. The fact that they're all hammered isn't gonna be easy to hide. @ Meister - Sounds interesting I wish I had something like that in Shadow.
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2011-11-10, 21:56 | Link #7124 |
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@ Eratas: And then comes Chifuyu Punishment Time...
I think cracky things will happen, very cracky things. That, and Kyuukai might avoid punishment because hides his breath with enough mouthwash to bleach a tree. It would be funny to read how the rest of the gang tries to get their way out of their situation. |
2011-11-10, 22:00 | Link #7125 | ||
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In my planning, the advancement of nanotechnology indeed bleeds directly to medical science. Aside from making microscopic surgery possible and/or easier (such as treatment of cancer) medicines also became even more potent (to the point that hair-loss treatment became so effective that nobody is bald except by choice). Every freaking single of medicine and health supplement contains word 'Nano' in it's package or label. The same goes to cosmetic as well. Quote:
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2011-11-10, 22:06 | Link #7128 |
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@ Rain - No one escapes! Their actions were recorded the previous night. Everyone has different "executioners"
Kyuukai - Tabane Ichika - Chifuyu Irish - Maya "Charles" - Chifuyu as well. If you're wondering what they did. It involves a lot of ho-yay, embarassing confessions and a viral video that make's Yaoi fangirls faint when they see it. The way they woke up isn't any better. Ichika - On the same bed as "Charles". Cue harem barging into the room. Kyuukai - On Laura's room, sleeping in the same bed. Irish - Tatenashi's bed. No upper clothing for some reason. @ Zero - I'll add that in! Though the wording is ambigous enough that no one can tell if he means in a romantic sense or a platonic one.
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2011-11-10, 22:12 | Link #7129 |
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@ Eratas: Kyuukai already sleeps with Laura ocassionally (no 18+ stuff though), so he won't feel bad about that.
What he will feel bad and seriously regret is the video. Have it so that Koyomi found it on the internet and showed her mother. Then have Tabane go ballistic for seeing her baby "poison" himself and others, not to mention her daughter witnessing the whole thing. Kyuukai has more control when drunk. He becomes meek and subdued and loses a large chunk of his confidence. You could also have him pronounce his love for Laura and the fact they sleep together. Though the rest of the world doesn't need to know that they don't do it per say.... Chaos. I envision chaos in our protagonists future. |
2011-11-10, 22:17 | Link #7130 |
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@ Rain - The confessions are more on the embarassing experienes like Ichika saying his first kiss was accidentally with Chifuyu and Irish mentionsn he had to act like loli bait for a pervert to get more info.
The viral video is ho-yay to the max since they're more touchy feely when drunk and the red faces don't help anything.
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2011-11-10, 22:23 | Link #7135 |
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@ Rain - You got it! I'll even add that he keeps a picture of Laura wearing the pajamas umder his pillow. How would Tabane punish him though? Ichika does the usual laps while Irish gets grounded (stripped of his weapons) by Maya.
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2011-11-10, 22:31 | Link #7136 |
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@ Zero: That too.
@ Eratas: Kyuukai won't be stripped of his weapons, because he really does need them, but he will be stripped of a few things. Dignity will be one. Imagine, what if Ichika's harem and the rest of IS Academy get to have a butler at their beck and call? That's right. Kyuukai will be an on loan servant to whoever signs up for his services. The service lasts for a day, of which they can have Kyuukai do whatever they want. Second will be his pride. Tabane's going to write up a novel containing all Kyuukai's little quirks from his childhood and post them up on the internet as an anonymous writer. And last but not least: Laura's reaction and what he can salvage of their relationship. Of course, they'll still be dating, as Kyuukai spends more time looking at that one photo than most of his "collection". He'll be asked to burn it (The collection, but he'll keep that photo as a mercy), but he just hides it in his armory, taking peeks at it occassionally when he gets to work in his workshop. He gets at least one reprieve, doesn't he? |
2011-11-10, 22:38 | Link #7137 |
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@ Rain - That'll work All the other protags will be screwed over too. The butler thing will apply to all 4 of them in order to pay back any property damage for the previous night. The 4 butlers of IS academy
All the others include: Ichika being rumored to possible be gay or a sis-con, Irish getting harassed for being loli-bait and forced to dress as a maid, and Charles getting glares from all the girls. @ Zero - Anything you can add?
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2011-11-10, 22:40 | Link #7138 | |
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2011-11-10, 22:42 | Link #7139 |
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Something like Ichika asked Irish to 'shop' a picture of younger Chifuyu with I.S. academy uniform aside current him? At that time, Ichika is so smashed that his logic goes backward.
Oh god, how the hell the draft become THIS cracky?
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2011-11-10, 22:44 | Link #7140 | |
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Side note - How about the punishments? Ichika gets of pretty easy compared to the others.
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