2009-02-23, 19:00 | Link #741 |
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Punish me Yayoi, punish me!
Ahem. right. I still think Yayoi's motives are to irrevocably split Touya and Yuki by showing Yuki how completely unfaithful he is. She'll get him into bed then *FLASH* off go the cameras. But still. Yayoi is hot... in a kind of creepy slightly sinister way... but I like that...! This series has been a bit of a slow burner for me, but I think my patience is being rewarded. |
2009-02-23, 22:10 | Link #742 | |
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Yeah.. too many spoiler tags. Its hard to judge with a single topic for a while series but this is general stuff everyone should know by now.
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2009-02-23, 22:23 | Link #743 |
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I still do not truly understand why people criticize this show so much. It just seems to me that they wanted forced/contrived drama, much like a series such as Clannad, and those expectations have not been met. This show is all about subtlety and tension, just like in real life, where things are not necessarily explicit.
That is why I find White Album great, it does not try to throw anything on you, but rather lets you absorb and interpret the many interactions on your own. One can say things like "oh, maybe Rina likes Touya," and that is its brilliance. In other shows you KNOW if someone likes another person most of the time. You cannot read the emotions of every character, much like you can't read those of anyone in real life too easily. This is a refreshing method of storytelling in this genre of anime.
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2009-02-23, 22:26 | Link #744 | |
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And I'm still pissed over that photo shoot.
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2009-02-23, 22:32 | Link #745 | |
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2009-02-23, 22:34 | Link #746 |
You are Next
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People were expecting something more melodramatic and got impatient with the pacing. The series is kicking into overdrive with the last episode. Criticism is also a part of 'venting', we all have our issues, enjoyments and insights to share with series.
And yeah, that photo shoot was kind of exploiting her. Maybe a 'pure' image isn't quite what they're aiming for. Touya may be an idiot, but eiji... rage level rising. I wonder what'll happen to the lil manipulator. |
2009-02-24, 00:33 | Link #747 |
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The only real problem I have with this show is that the believability factor is pretty low. Other than that it's not bad, but then it's not great or anything either. I guess it's showing it's eroge roots or something.
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2009-02-24, 01:12 | Link #748 | |
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But then there's stuff like this bit with Yayoi. I like the fact that they're finally shifting into action, but to make her the catalyst? That doesn't do anything at all for me because her character is frankly uninteresting, and there's no emotional attachment to the situation. Heck, it doesn't even have the proper feel of a self-destructive move on Touya's part. It's not just you. The show goes for extra style points for the sake of having style points, so there's a detached feeling to the whole shebang - a lot of the scenes feel like they're just going through the motions. On top of that, the transitions (even for flashbacks) are often pointlessly obscure and indistinct.
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Uninteresting is in the eye of the beholder. In fact she's the girl with the highest remaining mystery potential. The reason why she's loaded is still unclear. Or why Eiji affectionally calls her Yayoi-neesama. The reason why she's so extreme in her protection of Yuki. And the reason why she's been getting mail addressed to "Yayoi-sama". There's still more backstory here, I'm sure - and I have this feeling that she might have had some time in the limelight too, probably cut short due to management problems. Finally, read again what you wrote. A more classic example "I don't like that the show does it different to what I wanted/expected it to" can hardly be found. Quote:
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2009-02-24, 04:07 | Link #750 | |
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As for the series kicking up in the pace: Spoiler for for important events from the game that has yet to happen:
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2009-02-24, 05:14 | Link #752 |
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Angsty? More like vapid and lacking of any soul.. It's the ANTI-emo.
Also, what the heck is up with Mana-chan and acting like a total airhead in terms of romance and people-recognition skills? Next time around, she's going to mistake a man as Yuki.. |
2009-02-24, 05:49 | Link #753 | |
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My problem with WA is that I totally hate Touya. He is so indecisive and his wishy-washiness is affecting badly all the girls around him. I know this is typical of the harem genre but sometimes it grates on my nerves. He should have taken the opportunity to speak with Yuki to clarify their relationship but no... he kept everything bottled up. Then he goes around screwing with his gf's manager. The same woman he defined a "cold doll" just two episodes ago. Go die in a fire, Touya. Now I'm looking forward to a School Days-like ending.
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2009-02-24, 05:58 | Link #754 |
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Yeah, that totally irks me about Mana. She assumes EVERYTHING there is to Yuki and runs with it. Just so willfully ignorant, it's ridiculous.
As for Touya, he IS indecisive and all, but it's not helped when the rest of the cast is just as insecure if not even MORE so than him. And people like Haruka haven't really made a serious case to be his girlfriend, Mana just assumes EVERYTHING about Touya, Yuki keeps thinking she needs to imprison herself with her idol career, Misaki kept shoving herself into a corner until she needed rescuing by Touya.. damn, the list goes on. |
2009-02-24, 07:41 | Link #755 |
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Hm. Highly enjoyed the stylistic decisions made for episode 8 - the scene splits worked for the most part. Fantastic moment with Touya & Yuki sitting on the bench with 'why? why? why?' floating around above them.
I must admit I definitely don't have really any hate for Touya at the moment, not in context. He's going through a relatively unstable period in his life, emotional and otherwise, and definitely isn't thinking straight... or being straight-laced, either. He's behaving much as I expect someone in his situation to do, and indeed as people I've seen in (relatively) similar situations behave. It'll be interesting to see how it all turns out. Of course, the eroge roots do show at times, and I wish that White Album had given more of a Canvas 2 style treatment to it's 'less likely' heroines... by which I mean the people other than Rina & Yuki. Still, they aren't the only ones to ever make that mistake. -Andiyar
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2009-02-24, 07:59 | Link #756 | |||||
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Mana is the goddamn Batman. One minute she's there, the next minute you turn around and she's gone.
Ep 8 I still can't see a reason to abandon my earlier predictions about this turning into melodrama driven by weak characters making stupid decisions. So, we've gotten to the point where we've established that these are weak characters. Now I just hope this show isn't pretentious enough to think that the audience can sympathize with them unless there are drastic changes in their behaviour and thought processes (and even then it'll be difficult). I'm trying to figure out just what type of drama this show could go for now to still be engaging (making the tentative assumption it was engaging in the first place). It can't go for a brand of drama that requires the audience to sympathize with the characters, since it's almost safe to assume that's long gone. It'll have a lot of difficultly going for a brand of drama that makes sweeping and insightful commentaries and analyses of its characters, because most of its important characters are either pretty flat or resemble archetypes. What are we left with... oh, right, the melodramatic trainwreck. Choo choo, here we come! So much for subtlety, amirite? Quote:
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This isn't about implict/explicit. You're muddying the waters to attribute yourself the high ground by making the suggestion that only people who like this show "get it", which implies that you're on some sort of a higher cognitive plane than the lowly peons who are frustrated and angry at how their struggling to process the most basic details of the expansive and intricate frameworks of these characters' inner workings, which has been painted with such a fine brush that it's indiscernible to the average watcher. I can't speak for other critics of this show, but boy do I want to bring you down a peg. Why don't you get off your high horse. I'm watching the exact same show you are, I've seen all the same details about these characters that have been on display throughout this anime, their relationships, their inability to interact with each other like reasonable adults, their flimsy justifications for their actions, and I have seen virtually nothing worth liking about them. That makes this a mediocre drama. You have low standards, you like soap operas, just admit it already. There's nothing wrong with that, but don't act like a pretentious know-it-all that has a penchant for "implicit storytelling" and "subtlety" just because other people have better taste. Wait, I mean, don't act like a pretentious know-it-all especially when other people have better taste.
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2009-02-24, 08:01 | Link #757 | |
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Actually, Mana is one of the sharpest characters in the show. Naturally she doesn't believe Touya's claim that the famous idol Yuki Morikawa is his GF, but at the same time she has been seeing him try to meet someone, so Touya DOES have a GF - presumably with the name of Yuki. And what's wrong trying to find out who that might be? Makes sense from Mana's perspective. If I had been in her position, I would have assumed that the girl he was shopping with was his GF. It's not THAT much of a deal either, so she mentioned it to him in a "by the way" manner. And with Haruka, she didn't _assume_, she wondered "is THAT Yuki?", in other words, she isn't sure. Fine with me aswell. For a middle schooler she's pretty perceptive. She managed to save Haruka from the thugs quite skillfully (took alot of guts, btw), and she also correctly called Haruka's dazed moping as more than merely an issue of an "oniichan". Nothing about that is ignorant in the least. She's clearly lonely (a recurring theme in this show by the way), and she decided to adopt Touya as her OWN oniichan. What's kinda hilarious is that she bought Touya's grandstanding tirade about coping so well after being kicked out of the house. I suspect that this will come back to bite him in the rear later. |
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2009-02-24, 08:17 | Link #758 | |
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And can we please stop bringing Clannad in it? The way it tells its story, portray the characters and the goal of the story is way more different from White Album. |
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2009-02-24, 08:50 | Link #759 | ||||||
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There we go again...
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Example: Clannad. A show I'm working on too, a show I like, and so I'm certainly not unduly biased. Here, we have teary heartstring-tugging scenes when Tomoya goes into a long tirade oh how badly he has always misjudged his father. Moe bundle Ushio asks daddy why he's crying. Aww. And sure, it worked - my eyes watered up too. Nice execution. But entirely 100% precooked. There is no margin of judgment for the viewer. We're dragged along exactly like the writer wants us to. And the little doubts in the back of my head "all it took was a little talk from Baachan, and after the years of raging hatred, all of a sudden Tomoya has a total reversal of heart?" are never allowed to materialize. The shows I like best are those which don't lead the viewer by the nose, but those that do NOT employ technical tricks to coerce the viewer to "care" in a preconceived way. Shows like Clannad do exactly that. WA does not. So what's the better show? What's the better drink? Beer, wine, fruit juice or water? Quote:
It's a simple fact that there have been alot of extremely differing interpretations of what happened and why. And just as I wrote, several comments have indicated that major parts of the episode simply haven't been understood (since you're so intent on finding flaws in the show - this is one I'd recognize). And yes, it's also a simple fact that along all those I discussed the show with, those with a higher age, life experience and yes, also social skills have had much less of these instances of "err, no, that's not what happened". Take this simply as a neutral fact, not a criticism. The show IS not simple. Quote:
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I also disagree with your personal interpretation. Just because characters act in a way I dislike doesn't make me "not care" about them. What a shallow concept. Right now, I'm interested in how the show plays out for each of the characters involved. Even though Touya lost bigtime with his behavior last episode. Even though I personally don't like characters like Misaki very much. Even though Yayoi is way out of line IMHO (I'm particularly curious about her backstory that made her tick like this). Even though I pity Haruka, who has serious issues. If you want a show where you can like all characters, for the love of god pick another show. If you don't like watching a fairly detailed setup as a neutral spectator, for the love of god look elsewhere. But your stubborn insistence to criticize an apple for not being an orange doesn't lead anywhere, in my most humble opinion. Quote:
[Alot of furious ad hominem disposed of] I think you simply got me wrong. Even with the brightest intellect and most awesome perception and communicative skills, it's perfectly possible to totally dislike the show. No problem in the least. I also never claimed that because I like the show and its style, I'm smarter and with higher social skills than others who don't. What I simply recognized is that this show is _difficult_. It is very easy to miss important details (which I then later find out in discussions with friends watching the show too), it happens to me all the time. And those who do NOT have these friends and do NOT have life experience which helps you to recognize certain behaviour patters of characters in the show, it's just getting even harder. That's all. However, what I really enjoy _is_ going through the show indepth with like-minded people. I can NOT recall which other show in the recent past really made me do that, at least not in this scope. This is the downside of Clannad-style storytelling: There isn't really much to debate over. The story tells you like it is, FULL STOP. There is no room for interpretation and judgment. WA does. Simple as that Last edited by Mentar; 2009-02-24 at 09:01. |
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2009-02-24, 09:41 | Link #760 |
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Well since iv come this far there is no point in dropping it now so i will finish it out.
I guess im in the minority here but I personal feel that Touya's actions in episode 8 were deplorable. This just shows that shows focus on weak minded characters actually drives the story. I had respect for him each and everytime he resisted Yayoi's advances. He may be weak minded at times and oblivious to certain things but he has a strong enough sense not to seek physical comfort in another womens arms i respected this and he destroyed it. Through everything that has happened all that tough talk to Yayoi he kept trying to see Yuki and persisted in trying to do something with their relationship this episode he gave up. To go see Rina at the same work place as Yuki was not only stupid but honestly RUDE!!! I understand feeling depressed about ones relationship and needing comfort im not going to be total bastard. However the split second moment of comfort he is seeking from Yayoi will pale to the guilt he will feel later and HE will dwell on it because thats what he does. This will not bother Yayoi because she a heartless ice queen with no emotions this business for her plain and simple and not to mention the letters she threw away. I honestly dislike her in every sense of the word she may have a nice body the lack of personality makes her unattractive to me. I find her character pitiful at best and thats me being nice a whore is a whore no matter what spin you put on it. I did enjoy Touya's interactions with Mana and Rina though. Especially Rina's opening up to her about what her brother thinks of her and how he thinks. She mad it sound like she was a pet project of her brothers and now that shes complete she is of no more use. Yuki on the other hand still needs to be molded she is something he can craft like an artiest. This alone has given me cause to question weather he is a good person or not. Mana still continues to intrig me by her way of speech and her mannerisms. I find it numerous out of all the girls Touya could take shopping he took her and then said "well you are a girl arent you?" when its painfully obvious shes a tomboy just look at what she stopped to look at in the store. The hunch about her using Touya as a replacement for her brother was correct as she mentions that he is not her boyfiend but her Onii-san her older brother. Shes just an interesting character especially how she got into Touya's bed ninja style by climbing up veranda lol i laughed my ass off. well iv got nothing else to add Im still unhappy with how i feel towards majority of the characters and how i find it hard to care about most of them but the show has its own appeal besides the characters. Im looking forward to seeing Touyas reactions to what he has just done and what Yayoi will say even though whatever she says will be heartless and robotic so it wont matter since im not emotionally invested in her character.
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