2007-08-27, 11:59 | Link #7921 | |
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Now how to do it effectively indeed... Are we allowed to change how Vivio appeared?
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2007-08-27, 12:06 | Link #7923 |
物語は、もう、おしまい……?
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Ah! I almost forgot .
Additional point to Guideline 3: Feel free to develop the original cast in anyway you like, so as long as they don't deviate too much from their given characteristics. I think the MSLN mangas should be very helpful here. Hmm, I think we'll keep that unchanged. Maybe another challenge would be to explain how the drones were destroyed after making contact with Vivio (whether she blew them up up herself or has her own Garyuu, etc, is up to you all). This is yet another thing that Seven Arcs have conveniently forgotten to explain so far .
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2007-08-27, 12:17 | Link #7924 | |
Hiromi
Join Date: Apr 2007
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One way I would go about doing this is to make Vivio awaken much earlier, and that is before she BEFRIENDS Nanoha. Vivio would start messing everything up the moment she wakes up. |
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2007-08-27, 12:23 | Link #7926 | |
Adeptus Animus
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I think I won't mess around with RF6's living habbits, though. This is the TSAB, after all, not the earth millitary. Now what to do, what to do.... Using Keroko would go against guideline 3, despite the fact that she follows guideline 1 pretty much to the letter... Hmm.... Not now, maybe, but Nighty has hinted this before as Vivio 'awakening' after becomming infused with the relic by scaglieti. |
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2007-08-27, 12:37 | Link #7927 | |
物語は、もう、おしまい……?
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Konata is already 17~18, but she still has the body of a six-grader. Maybe the same applies to Vivio as well? But I think it's okay if you want to make her 4 or 5. Folks, shall we decide her age?
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2007-08-27, 13:06 | Link #7929 | |
the "Z" is for "Zeta"
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And I think I recall in StrikerS that Vivio was around 6 years old
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2007-08-27, 13:23 | Link #7930 |
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Well, the matter of Vivio's "age" is clearly a matter of debate, but, as said, it can be altered by others to go along with their work...I believe her official "age", however, is 4-6.
Again, expect another alternate V scene soonish. I'll base it before the Bureau's assault on the Cradle, but there'll be some changes, so to speak. |
2007-08-27, 13:42 | Link #7931 |
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After watching Episodes 14 and 15 (? I think) the Two parter I had a surge of inspiration to write a teaser for the next portion of Minea's Diaries. This is the prelude to what is going to occur over the next installments leading to the introduction of Division Six. Enjoy!
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2007-08-27, 14:10 | Link #7932 | |
Hiromi
Join Date: Apr 2007
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I wonder what she's going to do with Hayate's data... And a drug? I wonder what kind of drug you have in mind... |
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2007-08-27, 15:17 | Link #7933 | |
the "Z" is for "Zeta"
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So Celesti has connections with Scaglietti...makes sense. Nice relationship they have there
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2007-08-27, 15:30 | Link #7934 | |
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Also the main cited example isn’t as bad as it might appear at a glance in my view for one it doesn’t seem to have any sort of kitchen (since all of them seem to eat in a mess) or possibly even a bath room. (Or at least showers as we see Vivio using the communal one used by the forwards at some point as I recall.) Which basiclly just renders it a somewhat oversized dorm room. Still slightly over the top perhaps, but not exactly a luxury condo or anything either. I happen to support a more martial ethos and bent, but I don’t think the living accommodations are the issue here. Lack of discipline, scatter brained doctrine and lack of clear purpose (are they bodyguards, commandos, detectives!? Make up your mind!), sometimes poor decision making, an abysmal lack of intelligence throughout large portions of the series, and a radically inadequate size for it’s intended mission seem like much bigger issues then the fact some of it’s officers have pretty big rooms. Portraying competency, to me at least, doesn’t really entail having them all sleep in little concrete cubes. Also being TOO competent can be a problem in a story. If the heroes are ultra competent and figure everything quickly, make all the right moves, and win overwhelmingly… well militarily that’s great, from a story perspective, it sucks. Just like bad guys can't be TOO competent (or you know, they'd WIN) neither can the good guys because they'd win too fast. Me I accepted long ago that in fiction people on both sides are going to, from time to time, act kinda stupid for the sake of the plot and drama. I really don't mind that anymore, could I think of better things to have done? usually, but most of those tend to result in some huge story altering event. (For instance sure Tarkin should have sent out ALL, or at least enough of his fighters to utterly defeat the threat no matter how small the attacking force, but if he did all the heroes die under a mountain of TIEs and the rebels get blasted, end of saga, not exactly acceptable.) |
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2007-08-27, 16:37 | Link #7935 | ||||
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At that time, I hadn't thought of revealing the others just yet, but now I will... Quote:
And the 'Exterminator' was more like a pun Remember what was Cero's device's name? Quote:
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OR, maybe because I was describing them too well cause none of them I had any intention of going above AAA in terms of damage
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2007-08-27, 17:59 | Link #7937 |
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Very intriguing piece there, AImost Pure. Leaves me wondering just what plans Celesti has with the Doctor. Two well-accomplished scientists in cahoots, especially in the case of Scaglietti and Celesti, is always interesting.
And, to Tk, I'm not being condescending, but it's only a series- you can't expect to it follow the actual layout of a military facility, as you have said, to the letter. And as for flaws made by the Riot Force in the series, that's the doing of the directors, and they do what they must...although, yes, some situations the characters were in could have required a bit more tactical thought by higher ups in the Bureau. I'm just saying, that's all. And, presented here is a little conversion by between alternate V, the Numbers, and others. This is before the Bureau assault on the Cradle. I also plan to make one around the time the Numbers first show up, and a "Dark V" vs. Nanoha (!) scene in the future. Spoiler for The Curtain Rises:
Uh...hm... Now that I review this piece, I see quite a few flaws. I'm not exactly sure about the structure of it all, and I made up excuses for a few things (the new suit being an example- that is part of a proposed "upgrade scheme", but even then that's rather far-fetched...even though I like the new suit). I also feel that this scene is somewhat random. The Numbers also have a lack of words. Cinque doesn't speak much, neither does Sette, but Tre's a more talkative one, albeit in serious terms. Sigourney is usually taciturn, but Theodore...he could've done with a few words. All in all, though, I leave the fate of this piece in the hands of you, the readers. Give an honest opinion on this one. EDIT: Please don't tell me I kinda killed this thread. Last edited by Dream_Traveller; 2007-08-27 at 19:43. |
2007-08-27, 19:43 | Link #7938 | |
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@Erio: Although the evil mage is similar to orochimaru but I'll be damnned if i made him like Orochimaru lol. (The way he engraves the seal is not the same as orochimaru cause for one, he doesn't have a neck that can stretch like 40m) =p
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2007-08-27, 19:48 | Link #7939 | |||
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If I recall correctly, Sette doesnt talk unless someone asks her something, so I guess that's OK. As for Cinque, I wish there was more of her in the anime. I like Cinque's upgrade, BTW. As for the piece itself, it'll be hard to make Teana and Erio to be Sigourney and Theo's rivals, since then you would have to relocate a bunch of Numbers and reassign them to do other tasks... I'm interested to see how you handle that. Quote:
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2007-08-27, 19:59 | Link #7940 | |
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