Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Despite the Zerg having been in this thread since the beginning, I think this is the first time we've seen them in action. And the Trio does not dissapoint in delivering the epic stylish smackdown!

Hehhh~

So that's what he meant when he said that "The Zergs are back..."

When were they used before?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Damn, had an idea on the Dimensional Lockbox sometime ago, beat me to writing it though

Another specialty of the Destroyers, they play around alot with dimensional distortion. There's a limit of course, depending on their skill level.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Also, nice rhyme

It's not a exactly a Destroyer's tradition, but Jeno has a habit of casting a field magic to play rock music whenever he's on a rampage

[Dream_Traveller]

@Saint X:

Psh. That cannon is normal compared to the might that is...

THIS!

Spoiler for Zero:

And I also picked up on a possible upgrade for Sein...

Spoiler for Idea::

Octocamo, anyone?

*Flees.*

[AImost Pure]

Originally Posted by Kha

Did I just read that Celesti intends to remove Hayate's Yaten no Sho? That's a hell load of confidence! But then again, it was refered to as his and he, so probably not. But I know of no male Admirals other than Chrono...

The plot thickens! Now this is what I call a mole, not some measly wind bag that has somehow blocked/restricted the amount of force on the capital planet of the free world! The latter doesn't make sense!

Nonono, she plans to remove the admiral from her facility. And no, she just wanted information on Hayate, nothing to do with taking her device or anything from her.

As for the last part, it's all in reference to Constance and Malakai since they're internal affairs.

[Aaron008R]

Whew.
Looks like backlog'll be waiting for me after the upcopming Final Exam.

Just some short comments:

@Estavali: Welcome! Though I'm not as confident as others in improving the storyline. Looking forward to your OC.

@Wibbles: Input in a few more hours. One more exam to go and I'm home free.

@Key Board: I like the concept so far. Keep it up.

@Kha: Kha is a preacher, yet easily succumbs to the charms of the Aces? (Not that you can blame him. That Harem-hug Breaker scenario got out of hand like the Scare tactic scenario. Lots of males will be mowing down Kha due to jealousy.)

@LoweGear: Finally, welcome back. I'd like to talk about those scenarios about S&W setting Aurion up with a girl. I'm planning on the female to be an assassin tasked to kill Aurion. Lotsa Rush Hour style running involved.

@Dream_Traveller: Dark V is doing quite well. Though it's quite surprising that he can block Trident Smasher and Excelion Buster with little effort.

@Chaos: The scenario is APPROVED! That's what you call extermination with lotsa style! The music is a major plus.


More later...

[Key Board]

[msg deleted]

[haiz123321]

@Dream_traveller: OMG DUDE U STOLE ARCHER'S SWORDS XD

and is 18 out in subs yet?

[Kha]

@Aaron: I quoted it once, and I'll quote it again, from the WH40K codex: Clerics "can only not feel irrational anger, hate and bitterness". So attraction wise... Kha can feel it, but like the other Clerics he doesn't chase skirts because each feels its appropiate to over-indulge in such worldly pleasures.

And that the more you chase, the worse things get... ^_^;

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Hehhh~

So that's what he meant when he said that "The Zergs are back..."

When were they used before?

They were mentioned in Kha's profile, along with several other aliens from Macross, Mospesda, Robotech, Starcraft and Tiberium Wars. He's a daemonjaeger after all...

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

And if I wanted to do ultimate h4xx, I would more than gladly give Cinque these:

Spoiler for Size:

*Runs.*

She can still use her IS perfectly well with newer, more potent weapons- said weapons also allow her to have more of an edge in close combat than with her knives. A good increase of her abilities all round. I might make a slight update to Rumble Detonator, too, though I think it's good as it is.

And a possible upgrade for Dieci...

Spoiler for Size again:

*Runs again.*

Ah yes, the dual blades of Sophia's Dauer...

And who ripped the Hyper Mega Particle Launcher off of the Dendrobium?

Originally Posted by Saint X

That cannon is...

Random Logos: Level 2 Reaction!!!

What? You wanted to use the Denbrobium gun?

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

Spoiler for Zero:

And I also picked up on a possible upgrade for Sein...

Spoiler for Idea::

Octocamo, anyone?

*Flees.*

1. And thus Kha Azanable -Kluize Shift- appears in the thread...

2. Not too farfetched, but Quattro already has that function. Silver Curtain can create illusions and hide the target, so no need for that.

Originally Posted by Key Board

Key Chronicles

Scene 0: click

Scene 1: Twilight and Dawn

this scene might give you further detail hints of the timeline, for those of you who luuuv~ a grand unified timeline theory

Spoiler:

A long time ago in the land of origin
There was once a prosperous kingdom in the far east
A kingdom in which each year was more bountiful than the last

But perhaps she was too prosperous

The kingdom soon found itself with mighty enemies
h ttp://img172.imageshack.us/img172/1351/tale1be9.gif

Far too mighty...
h ttp://img169.imageshack.us/img169/1654/tale2he6.gif

Driven by despair, the kingdom stole its own sunlight
h ttp://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3807/tale3eg6.gif

and with it, wrecked its enemies
h ttp://img169.imageshack.us/img169/6342/tale4ki7.gif

This was later known as the final twilight...
The darkness sinked and killed the land...
and I was there to witness it
h ttp://img441.imageshack.us/img441/9683/tale5pi7.gif

...
...
...

Ryhen: it runs on magic?
Karl: that's what they say

Ryhen: incredible, that's just incredible!
Ryhen: out of all possible major breakthroughs they could have achieved with clean recyclable energy, they make a weapon out of it

Karl: non-lethal environmentally safe reliable weapons...
Karl: it's a powerful political tool... assuming it does what it claims to do...

Ryhen: bah, it's still a tool of force, I say. So, what are these benevolent weapons called?
Karl: for know they're called "devices"
Ryhen: Rather unimaginative...

Karl: There are rumors suggesting they might have been reverse-engineered from lost civilization technology...
Ryhen: !

Karl: Yes, Alhazred...
Ryhen: ...

bleep bleep bleep

Karl: Well, I guess that concludes our day.
Ryhen: ...

Karl: Come on, Ryhen. Let's get something to eat.
Ryhen: ...

Karl:Ryhen!

Ryhen: Oh, Sorry... Could we make one last detour before we lock down the lab?
Karl: Saying good night to Ford?

Ryhen: Well, more or less

...
...
...

And so... they come here once again

Ryhen: ...

...

Ryhen: Where did you come from, Ford? What were you made for?

...

Ryhen: Why are you here? Tell me, was your home destroyed by war?

...

Ryhen: ... I don't know where you came from, but I know you made a long journey here.

Karl: Here he goes again...

Ryhen: It's such a pity that we can't even welcome you properly... all this tension and battles tend to bring out the worst in our kind, I'm afraid.

...

Ryhen: On behalf of Belka, I apologize for this.

...

Ryhen: *sigh*, well that's it for today. Let's lock down this place, Karl

Karl: I hope this doesn't become a habit, Ryhen
Ryhen: Ah Karl, you lack sensitivity

Karl: I guess you make up for my lack of it, then.
Ryhen: Ha ha, that may be true

why?

Karl: ah?!
Ryhen: !?

Why do wish to know?

Karl: It...
Ryhen: talked....

h ttp://img503.imageshack.us/img503/7463/xjpglx1.gif

Karl: Perhaps we have seen something we shouldn't have, Ryhen

Hmm... This is definitely still during the reign of Seiou-sama...

But at Ford. IT'S HUGE!!!

Originally Posted by haiz123321

@Dream_traveller: OMG DUDE U STOLE ARCHER'S SWORDS XD

Sophia's Dauer are falchions too, since they were inspired by Archer. But for Dauer, they resemble Laevantine since the cartridge loader was modelled after Laevantine's.

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Erio

@Lowe Welcome back! ...But clear your box dangit!

In my haste to get out (needed to go somewhere), forgot to clear the inbox

Originally Posted by Erio

How about... DRILL KNUCKLES??



*runs*

DRILLS ARE A MAN'S ROMANCE!!!!

Originally Posted by Kha

[B]He prefers getting down on the ground. Besides, divine power can't be transmitted by psynet.

And yeah this entry will go into Codex: Daemonjaeger. For a preview, here's...

CODEX: DAEMONJAEGER (Beta 1).

Erio's got a peek at it because he needed some info for his work...

But before you click on that, I must warn you, even at 80% completion, it's Bluecheesium power must not be estimated...

Having seen your Bluecheesium powers before, I wouldn't be surprised. But let's see how formidable this one is

Originally Posted by Estavali

Ehh, someone once told me that this place is the pit of madness (and Kha isn't really helping to alleviate that image ), and that I'd be safer staying away from here.

Now that I'm in, I should say that this pit looks a bit more bottomless than those of Hell .

Btw, can anyone please enlighten me on how things are done here? If I'm to input my own characters here, am I supposed to keep to the OC fanon timeline, or can I create my own based on Nighty's official timeline? I have some already in mind that may or may not conform with the OC timeline Kha has provided.

(I humbly confess I have not yet undertake the daunting task of going through nearly 400 pages of supposed madness .)

Bottomless indeed We've existed for far shorter than the image thread, and yet we've reached the same amount of posts all under our own efforts and power

And as already said, you're not required to conform. It's more fun if you do, to try and integrate and interact, but around here, everything and anything goes

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

@Erio: Ah, yes, Drill Knuckles.

Ginga obviously took a leaf out of Lagann's book...

Ivory took a page out of my Ginga Drill Breakers!

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

@Lowe:

Well, scimitars are a good guess. I was thinking more along the lines of falchions, though those aren't exactly a foot long...and, what the heck, they and scimitars are rather similar, only the scimitar has a thinner blade with more of a curve.

And if I wanted to do ultimate h4xx, I would more than gladly give Cinque these:

Spoiler for Size:

*Runs.*

She can still use her IS perfectly well with newer, more potent weapons- said weapons also allow her to have more of an edge in close combat than with her knives. A good increase of her abilities all round. I might make a slight update to Rumble Detonator, too, though I think it's good as it is.

And a possible upgrade for Dieci...

Spoiler for Size again:

*Runs again.*

Archer's swords? Nice Would love to see Cinque use them

So Dieci's ripping off the Dendrobum Hyper Mega Cannon huh? I think the Zeta High Mega Launcher would've been a much smaller and better alternative

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Hehhh~

So that's what he meant when he said that "The Zergs are back..."

When were they used before?

Kha and Keroko have referenced them a few times before, but never in any scenarios as far as I know.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Another specialty of the Destroyers, they play around alot with dimensional distortion. There's a limit of course, depending on their skill level.

You'd like the Necrons then (which your Destroyers more than resemble already... in fact, in one of my scenarios I referred to a Necron Lord as "Destroyer" )

Wanted to do a Dimensional Lockbox concept for my main OC Kay, to explain some of the things she does (she somehow never brings anything along with her )

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

It's not a exactly a Destroyer's tradition, but Jeno has a habit of casting a field magic to play rock music whenever he's on a rampage

Lyrical Magic? We have a winner!

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

@LoweGear: Finally, welcome back. I'd like to talk about those scenarios about S&W setting Aurion up with a girl. I'm planning on the female to be an assassin tasked to kill Aurion. Lotsa Rush Hour style running involved.

Tito Lowe is back!

What do you have in mind specifically for the set-up scenario? And an assassin? Nice, should allow S&W to put their sniping skills and brains to the test

Originally Posted by Key Board

Key Chronicles

Scene 0: click

Scene 1: Twilight and Dawn

this scene might give you further detail hints of the timeline, for those of you who luuuv~ a grand unified timeline theory

Spoiler:

A long time ago in the land of origin
There was once a prosperous kingdom in the far east
A kingdom in which each year was more bountiful than the last

But perhaps she was too prosperous

The kingdom soon found itself with mighty enemies
h ttp://img172.imageshack.us/img172/1351/tale1be9.gif

Far too mighty...
h ttp://img169.imageshack.us/img169/1654/tale2he6.gif

Driven by despair, the kingdom stole its own sunlight
h ttp://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3807/tale3eg6.gif

and with it, wrecked its enemies
h ttp://img169.imageshack.us/img169/6342/tale4ki7.gif

This was later known as the final twilight...
The darkness sinked and killed the land...
and I was there to witness it
h ttp://img441.imageshack.us/img441/9683/tale5pi7.gif

...
...
...

Ryhen: it runs on magic?
Karl: that's what they say

Ryhen: incredible, that's just incredible!
Ryhen: out of all possible major breakthroughs they could have achieved with clean recyclable energy, they make a weapon out of it

Karl: non-lethal environmentally safe reliable weapons...
Karl: it's a powerful political tool... assuming it does what it claims to do...

Ryhen: bah, it's still a tool of force, I say. So, what are these benevolent weapons called?
Karl: for know they're called "devices"
Ryhen: Rather unimaginative...

Karl: There are rumors suggesting they might have been reverse-engineered from lost civilization technology...
Ryhen: !

Karl: Yes, Alhazred...
Ryhen: ...

bleep bleep bleep

Karl: Well, I guess that concludes our day.
Ryhen: ...

Karl: Come on, Ryhen. Let's get something to eat.
Ryhen: ...

Karl:Ryhen!

Ryhen: Oh, Sorry... Could we make one last detour before we lock down the lab?
Karl: Saying good night to Ford?

Ryhen: Well, more or less

...
...
...

And so... they come here once again

Ryhen: ...

...

Ryhen: Where did you come from, Ford? What were you made for?

...

Ryhen: Why are you here? Tell me, was your home destroyed by war?

...

Ryhen: ... I don't know where you came from, but I know you made a long journey here.

Karl: Here he goes again...

Ryhen: It's such a pity that we can't even welcome you properly... all this tension and battles tend to bring out the worst in our kind, I'm afraid.

...

Ryhen: On behalf of Belka, I apologize for this.

...

Ryhen: *sigh*, well that's it for today. Let's lock down this place, Karl

Karl: I hope this doesn't become a habit, Ryhen
Ryhen: Ah Karl, you lack sensitivity

Karl: I guess you make up for my lack of it, then.
Ryhen: Ha ha, that may be true

why?

Karl: ah?!
Ryhen: !?

Why do wish to know?

Karl: It...
Ryhen: talked....

h ttp://img503.imageshack.us/img503/7463/xjpglx1.gif

Karl: Perhaps we have seen something we shouldn't have, Ryhen

At the forefront of the dawn of the development of magical devices? Nice

What exactly is Ford though? He's freaking huge!

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Kha and Keroko have referenced them a few times before, but never in any scenarios as far as I know.

I had to make a choice:

1) Zerg
2) Xenomorphs
3) Floods
4) Bugs (Starship Troopers)

Originally Posted by LoweGear

You'd like the Necrons then (which your Destroyers more than resemble already... in fact, in one of my scenarios I referred to a Necron Lord as "Destroyer" )

Lol... Where are the 'Necrons' from?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Wanted to do a Dimensional Lockbox concept for my main OC Kay, to explain some of the things she does (she somehow never brings anything along with her )

I had that idea years ago when I watched one episode of "Rave"

(Yeah, long before Nanoha ever came)

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Lyrical Magic? We have a winner!

LOL!

Usually it's rock, very rarely they use rap

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

I had that idea years ago when I watched one episode of "Rave"

(Yeah, long before Nanoha ever came)

I once had something similar from an anime pen-&-paper RPG, but it was only available to females. You could say this was one of their racial skills, since men have an overpowered GAR (Basic) racial buff.

Anyway, in that RP, females have:

Angry Female Strike - An instant attack made when enraged that grants +3 to attack roll. Ignores defence values of male targets and immediately hits for damage. Tsunderes, a unique racial class available only to females, have abilities that enhance this skill.

Hidden Female Pocket - A special interdimensional space to store items and gear. Its the reason why females can lug around bags and bags of items with only a tot bag. Tsunderes can equip a harisen-type weapon on top of another piece of equipment in the Hidden Female Pocket.

It was fun!

Now, to go really off topic:

Guys have these racial ability:

GAR (Basic) - A flaming soul that burns up as the battle rages on, powering the person up further and further. Many male classes use this basic skill to the max. Others, like Super Mecha Hero, have GAR (White Hot).

BUt now, I'm inclined to create GAR (Kamina), in memory of a great man...

I can't quite remember the other skills, apart from Super Mecha Familiarity, Advanced Gattai Proficiency and Mecha Piloting +5, which are more like racial skills that a Male Super Mecha Hero has...

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

LOL!

Usually it's rock, very rarely they use rap

Rock still counts. In fact, Kha's "YOU CAN'T STOP US!!!" Lyrical Magic Gattai "Pray" is considered rock...

More GL rips for GGGfied DSM... Help me...

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

I had to make a choice:

1) Zerg
2) Xenomorphs
3) Floods
4) Bugs (Starship Troopers)

Ooooh nice choices Yup, Zerg would be my preferred choice given these options

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Lol... Where are the 'Necrons' from?

Education time!

Necrons

They're from Warhammer 40000 (WH40K), and strangely enough, one of the main enemies in OC's Crosys Arc, basically the TSAB vs Necrons

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

I had that idea years ago when I watched one episode of "Rave"

(Yeah, long before Nanoha ever came)

To be fair, someone's bound to use hammerspace here sooner or later

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

LOL!

Usually it's rock, very rarely they use rap

LOL Rap huh... hmmmm...

Anyways, "Lyrical Magic" came from this entry:

*cough* self-promotion *cough*

Rhythm Edge 1
Rhythm Edge 2

Originally Posted by Kha

I once had something similar from an anime pen-&-paper RPG, but it was only available to females. You could say this was one of their racial skills, since men have an overpowered GAR (Basic) racial buff.

Anyway, in that RP, females have:

Angry Female Strike - An instant attack made when enraged that grants +3 to attack roll. Ignores defence values of male targets and immediately hits for damage. Tsunderes, a unique racial class available only to females, have abilities that enhance this skill.

Hidden Female Pocket - A special interdimensional space to store items and gear. Its the reason why females can lug around bags and bags of items with only a tot bag. Tsunderes can equip a harisen-type weapon on top of another piece of equipment in the Hidden Female Pocket.

It was fun!

Now, to go really off topic:

Guys have these racial ability:

GAR (Basic) - A flaming soul that burns up as the battle rages on, powering the person up further and further. Many male classes use this basic skill to the max. Others, like Super Mecha Hero, have GAR (White Hot).

BUt now, I'm inclined to create GAR (Kamina), in memory of a great man...

I can't quite remember the other skills, apart from Super Mecha Familiarity, Advanced Gattai Proficiency and Mecha Piloting +5, which are more like racial skills that a Male Super Mecha Hero has...

So that's where the Angry Female Strike came from And nice alternative name for Hammerspace

*salutes for Lord Kamina*

And GAR, (Guy Shishio) , for GREAT JUSTICE!!!!! :P

Originally Posted by Kha

Rock still counts. In fact, Kha's "YOU CAN'T STOP US!!!" Lyrical Magic Gattai "Pray" is considered rock...

More GL rips for GGGfied DSM... Help me...

Yup, as long as it's music of any kind. Even a simple nursery rhyme can be made devastatingly effective in the hands of a Lyrical Magic user

[Dream_Traveller]

@Aaron: Well, the "good" V is on par with the Aces on his normal level, so he can block the attack sent at him. Shields of a matching rank of the attack do nullify said attack.

@Kha: Yup, the Dendrobium's cannon...perfect in my books. You know the old phrase, "The bigger the better!", right?

And...wait...this Wing Zero-inspired "Kluize Shift" has me wondering, good sir...namely wondering when he procures a magic buster blasts whoever he's facing.

About the Octocamo, Quattro's IS can hide the target, yes, but, as we all know, she isn't suited to stealth ops. If upgraded to something like that, Sein can perform her duty without Quattro having to be in the nearby vicinity, just saying.

And, to you and Lowe, I did take Kanshou and Bakuya, yes. But! I stated that Cinque would only use them if I wanted to be h4xx on several levels.

...Well, sometimes I am, but you get the point. It would indeed be interesting, though, to see Cinque wielding them...yes...

C: "Our souls hard yet firm, our power tearing the mountains, our swords splitting the water-"

*Legs it.*


There is, however, a less h4xx choice for a weapon which, as luck might have it, is rarely used by its wielder. This:

Spoiler for Caladbolg II::

*Raises anti-h4xx shield expectantly.*

Wait...

Fate/stay Night...applied with something...adding something...

To the congregation, I present to you my belief of what Cinque might do you if you piss her off. Namely...

THIS!

Spoiler for Size::

Just replace ol' Gilgamesh with Cinque, imbue each of the weapons with explosive power...

*Raises anti-H4xx shield fearfully.*

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

And, to you and Lowe, I did take Kanshou and Bakuya, yes. But! I stated that Cinque would only use them if I wanted to be h4xx on several levels.

...Well, sometimes I am, but you get the point. :heh It would indeed be interesting, though, to see Cinque wielding them...yes...

C: "Our souls hard yet firm, our power tearing the mountains, our swords splitting the water-"

*Legs it.*


There is, however, a less h4xx choice for a weapon which, as luck might have it, is rarely used by its wielder. This:

Spoiler for Caladbolg II::

*Raises anti-h4xx shield expectantly.*

Wait...

Fate/stay Night...applied with something...adding something...

To the congregation, I present to you my belief of what Cinque might do you if you piss her off. Namely...

THIS!

Spoiler for Size::

Just replace ol' Gilgamesh with Cinque, imbue each of the weapons with explosive power...

*Raises anti-H4xx shield fearfully.*

Kh- erh Kluize would be proud!!!!!

Although Cinque simply detonating such precious Noble Phantasms and weapons for a much larger bang is such a waste

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by haiz123321

Spoiler for The Coach:

Character's name: Xeith
Alias: Xei, Xei-sensei

Gender: Male

Spoiler for Looks:

Rank in MagicZ:
SS Class

TSAB coach for Velka specialities/users

Age:
40 in (MagicZ)

Height n weight:
40:195 cm 80kg(MagicZ)

Background:
Having served the TSAB for 14 generations, Xeith continues the "tradition" and coaches forwards/mages with Velka specialities/users. When he was 27 years old, he was taking his usual evening stroll when he found Koumyou, with tattered clothes and some wounds. Pitying him, he brought him back to the TSAB to nourish him back to health. During the time, he had a personal intrest in Koumyou and decided to train him.

Personality:
Calm-thinker, strategist mind. Plots everything out first before executing it. (Be it battle/assignments/paperwork)

Intrests:
Doesn't have much intrest in anything, but goes fishing every weekend(sometimes on saturday sometimes on sunday)

Ok done with the mentor of my OC.

EDIT: Removed the stacking spoilers

Coaching? Don't you mean training? Coaching makes it sound like we are talking about a soccer team.

Originally Posted by Estavali

Ehh, someone once told me that this place is the pit of madness (and Kha isn't really helping to alleviate that image ), and that I'd be safer staying away from here.

Now that I'm in, I should say that this pit looks a bit more bottomless than those of Hell .

Btw, can anyone please enlighten me on how things are done here? If I'm to input my own characters here, am I supposed to keep to the OC fanon timeline, or can I create my own based on Nighty's official timeline? I have some already in mind that may or may not conform with the OC timeline Kha has provided.

(I humbly confess I have not yet undertake the daunting task of going through nearly 400 pages of supposed madness .)

Well, most of us interact with the main OC-thread fanon, but there are quite a few who make their own timelines. And we are usually more then ready to jump between timelines if we like what we see.

There are no real set rules you have to stick to. That's what made this thread so succesfull.

Originally Posted by Key Board

Key Chronicles

Scene 0: click

Scene 1: Twilight and Dawn

this scene might give you further detail hints of the timeline, for those of you who luuuv~ a grand unified timeline theory

Spoiler:

A long time ago in the land of origin
There was once a prosperous kingdom in the far east
A kingdom in which each year was more bountiful than the last

But perhaps she was too prosperous

The kingdom soon found itself with mighty enemies
h ttp://img172.imageshack.us/img172/1351/tale1be9.gif

Far too mighty...
h ttp://img169.imageshack.us/img169/1654/tale2he6.gif

Driven by despair, the kingdom stole its own sunlight
h ttp://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3807/tale3eg6.gif

and with it, wrecked its enemies
h ttp://img169.imageshack.us/img169/6342/tale4ki7.gif

This was later known as the final twilight...
The darkness sinked and killed the land...
and I was there to witness it
h ttp://img441.imageshack.us/img441/9683/tale5pi7.gif

...
...
...

Ryhen: it runs on magic?
Karl: that's what they say

Ryhen: incredible, that's just incredible!
Ryhen: out of all possible major breakthroughs they could have achieved with clean recyclable energy, they make a weapon out of it

Karl: non-lethal environmentally safe reliable weapons...
Karl: it's a powerful political tool... assuming it does what it claims to do...

Ryhen: bah, it's still a tool of force, I say. So, what are these benevolent weapons called?
Karl: for know they're called "devices"
Ryhen: Rather unimaginative...

Karl: There are rumors suggesting they might have been reverse-engineered from lost civilization technology...
Ryhen: !

Karl: Yes, Alhazred...
Ryhen: ...

bleep bleep bleep

Karl: Well, I guess that concludes our day.
Ryhen: ...

Karl: Come on, Ryhen. Let's get something to eat.
Ryhen: ...

Karl:Ryhen!

Ryhen: Oh, Sorry... Could we make one last detour before we lock down the lab?
Karl: Saying good night to Ford?

Ryhen: Well, more or less

...
...
...

And so... they come here once again

Ryhen: ...

...

Ryhen: Where did you come from, Ford? What were you made for?

...

Ryhen: Why are you here? Tell me, was your home destroyed by war?

...

Ryhen: ... I don't know where you came from, but I know you made a long journey here.

Karl: Here he goes again...

Ryhen: It's such a pity that we can't even welcome you properly... all this tension and battles tend to bring out the worst in our kind, I'm afraid.

...

Ryhen: On behalf of Belka, I apologize for this.

...

Ryhen: *sigh*, well that's it for today. Let's lock down this place, Karl

Karl: I hope this doesn't become a habit, Ryhen
Ryhen: Ah Karl, you lack sensitivity

Karl: I guess you make up for my lack of it, then.
Ryhen: Ha ha, that may be true

why?

Karl: ah?!
Ryhen: !?

Why do wish to know?

Karl: It...
Ryhen: talked....

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Karl: Perhaps we have seen something we shouldn't have, Ryhen

Urk... Image tags please, it would make this so much easier to read.

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You know what I realized? When the Nanoha OC-thread has surpassed the Nanoha Image thread, the Nanoha OC-thread will not just be the largest thread on the Nanoha forums, it will be the largest thread on the entire Animesuki forums!

We need a kiriban for this! Something! Anything!

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Wibbles

Aaron? Are you there? If you are, I need your input for a moment.

I'm back now.

Originally Posted by AImost Pure

After watching Episodes 14 and 15 (? I think) the Two parter I had a surge of inspiration to write a teaser for the next portion of Minea's Diaries. This is the prelude to what is going to occur over the next installments leading to the introduction of Division Six. Enjoy!

Spoiler for Minea's Diaries Spoiler:

Celesti sat alone in her office on a warm morning. Her holographic computer displayed charts and information, with a photograph of Minea, displaying the increases in her magic level, Lost Logia Activity, and Astral Heaven’s connection to Minea. Slowly, but surely, she was finding the results she needed. Tomorrow began a new string of testing on Minea to see what properties the Astral Heaven has gained since its last use.

Celesti made a motion with her hand for the diagrams to vanish, but a familiar face appeared before her; a real time image communications from a colleague and acquaintance. Thanks to the trouble this man was stirring she was able to perform more elaborate experiments and research without being uncovered. A sinister, mad scientist grin wide on his thin lips, narrow eyes glaring at whoever fell in front of him, and shoulder length, grayed purple hair resting on white clothed shoulders. Celesti smiled a delightful reaction. “Scaglietti, what do I owe the pleasure of this communication?” She spoke confidently while her hands ideally drew back her deep jasmine hair. Red eyes stared forward catching any movements in Scaglietti’s face.

“My fear, Celesti, still trying to look like Precia did, hmm?’ He spoke with a chuckle at the end of his words. “I remember when you used to have the most beautiful chestnut hair. And your eyes the color of sapphires.” His voice rang with a soft reminiscing sound. “But, your admiration for Precia lead you to alter your own genetic code to look so much like her.’

Celesti was visibly moved by the words that he spoke of, speaking of the past in such a fashion. The smile she gave had a hint of longing twitching at the bottom tier. “Yes, but if you recall, I admired her but I loved you. That was not meant to be, our work was more important, is more important then any romance between two demented minds.”

“How true. How are my daughters?” The mad scientist replied.

“They are not your daughters, my dear Scaglietti, only Minea is related to another.”

“They are my daughters, regardless what you may think. My Project Fate did make them. Never the less, using Precia’s DNA and your own to create Minea, how ever did you get her permission for such a thing?”

“Unfortunately, I didn’t.” Celesti sighed pushing her self back some from her desk, her right leg rising crossing to hand down besides her left. “I took it during an accident where she bled. But no matter, the ends justify the means. After your attack that brought the TSAB such fear yesterday, I am now able to go ahead with my next string of experiments on Minea.”

“How is that coming along? Still working to abuse her to break her into a submissive kitten? You know, there was someone else who did that due to her insanity… and her little daughter clone went and turned on her.”

Celesti felt shear hatred fill her body the moment that one word was spoken: Failure. She shook her head at the possibility that such a thing would happen. “No, I have changed my idea and have ordered Alexandria to begin acting as a token big sister.

“And the cat ears you put on Minea… Why did you do that again? Ah yes, to honor the only friend you had growing up; your dear cat. It’s too bad those ruffians when you were little skinned the little dear.” Scaglietti so enjoyed tearing into Celesti’s wounds.

“Yes, I do remember who helped me through the hard times. Unlike someone whom I am now speaking too, I have yet to fail or be forced to hide away like a villain in the night.” She smirked lightly shaking her head ruffling the black locks from her eyes. “Oh how we get along so well, my dear.”

“Yes, quite right. But there are other matters I have wanted to discuss.”

“What would that be?”

“I am willing to give you two pieces for one piece. Information and data on the Book of the Night Sky, and something you may want to know. In exchange? All I ask for is combat data on Alexandria and the cyborgs that you built with my plans.” Scaglietti replied bringing a hand to rub his chin.

“Due to the chaos you created yesterday, the Admiral here has become quite nervous lately and caused some movement in the forest last night. This created an alarm that has forced my daughter to explore the surrounding forest with her unit. I will have the data for you when they return.”

“Excellent, I am sending the information on the Book and its owner now. As for the other piece, I believe you will be ecstatic to know that someone is investigating your facility. I do not know who, but they are already there keeping an eye on both you and the Admiral.” Scaglietti laughed lightly watching for Celesti’s reaction.

Celesti coyly grinned at this news. “Is that right? Good. It will make it much easier now to remove that incompetent admiral from his position now. His business work on the side has no further use for me, and my Artificial Mages are more powerful then his drug could ever create.”

“Drug?” Scaglietti questioned with an inquisitive tone.

“I’ll send the data over. If you like, I will even remove the Admiral’s Lost Logia from his possession.”

“Please do. Good luck, my Dear Celesti.”

“Good luck to you as well. May our goals be reached.”

She knows Scaglietti!
And lotsa revalations there. I wonder what does she plan to do with the yate no Sho's data...

Originally Posted by Tk3997

I happen to support a more martial ethos and bent, but I don’t think the living accommodations are the issue here. Lack of discipline, scatter brained doctrine and lack of clear purpose (are they bodyguards, commandos, detectives!? Make up your mind!), sometimes poor decision making, an abysmal lack of intelligence throughout large portions of the series, and a radically inadequate size for it’s intended mission seem like much bigger issues then the fact some of it’s officers have pretty big rooms. Portraying competency, to me at least, doesn’t really entail having them all sleep in little concrete cubes. Also being TOO competent can be a problem in a story. If the heroes are ultra competent and figure everything quickly, make all the right moves, and win overwhelmingly… well militarily that’s great, from a story perspective, it sucks.

Just like bad guys can't be TOO competent (or you know, they'd WIN) neither can the good guys because they'd win too fast. Me I accepted long ago that in fiction people on both sides are going to, from time to time, act kinda stupid for the sake of the plot and drama. I really don't mind that anymore, could I think of better things to have done? usually, but most of those tend to result in some huge story altering event. (For instance sure Tarkin should have sent out ALL, or at least enough of his fighters to utterly defeat the threat no matter how small the attacking force, but if he did all the heroes die under a mountain of TIEs and the rebels get blasted, end of saga, not exactly acceptable.)

I agree with most of the points here. You should have seen the episodes 17 to 22 threads. A number of people completely buried RF6 in a avalanche of accusations of military and tactical incompetency. While I do agree that an extent of realism is indeed mandatory, and that Ivory/Seven Arcs portrayed the protagonists in a not too favorable way in the military sense, one shouldn't go so far as to nitpick every single freakin minor detail (Please excuse my harshness. I'm exagerating it a bit much to release some... no, A LOT of stress.) about how the protagonists seem to be inadequate in REAL LIFE standards. Besides, this is a Mahou Shoujo anime.

But, as they say, freedom of speech in the net.

I'd rather nitpick about the character development and pacing, which I see is much more relevant to the story as a whole

Originally Posted by Wibbles

I wrote up two new scenes. Enjoy!

Spoiler for Aftermath:

The assembled members of Section Six stood silently before the ruins of the transport train. Two of their members were not present, one missing and presumed dead, the other was kneeling amidst the wreckage, cursing himself and whatever gods were there.
“Ignatius…” Subaru and Hikaru made to move towards the older boy ahead of them, but were stopped short by Teana and Signum. Teana shook her head softly.
“Not now, Subaru. Not now. If we go over there now…” The gunslinger paused, as if remembering something. “If we go to him now, he’ll lash out at us.”

Spoiler for Grim Reunion:

Ignatius jumped over Nove’s attack, and let loose a cartridge from Flame Braver, charging power into his fist as he approached the panicking cyborg with a fiery gleam in his eye.
“It’s over!” And with that, he swung his now blazing fist at Nove, who closed her eyes in preparation for the end. The fist got closer… then stopped, blocked by a set of familiar claws attached to a familiar person in a black bodysuit. Ignatius was silent for a moment, processing the person before him with a shocked and hopeful stare.
“Katsuhito…. You’re alright!” Ignatius whispered, joyously. Katsuhito was quiet, then he looked up, and shattered every hope the older boy had. The face was Katsuhito’s, but it wasn’t his. Where Katsuhito’s eyes were calm and gentle, the eyes on the face in front of Ignatius held the glint of insanity, and a hint of circutry. The mouth twisted into a sadistic, feral grin.
“It’s been a while… Aniki!”
Katsuhito swung the other claw down.

The more serious scenes, I see. They look good.

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

And, presented here is a little conversion by between alternate V, the Numbers, and others. This is before the Bureau assault on the Cradle. I also plan to make one around the time the Numbers first show up, and a "Dark V" vs. Nanoha (!) scene in the future.

Spoiler for The Curtain Rises:

There were few souls present in the now deserted lab in the Cradle. Most of the mobile Numbers had proceeded to head to the mission point- teleportation upwards to the vessel. The Doctor, busy as he generally was, left for "business" to attend to, he said, with Uno following along behind him.

This left V, standing silently at the front of the lab, his eyes skimming across the multitude of tubes in the dimly lit facility. He stayed like that a while, then turned to his companions, the others present in the spacious room. These were none other than the Numbers suited for close combat, the most of them in the least- Tre, Cinque and Sette. Theodore and Sigourney stood to attention beside them. The masked man opened up a communications window- Quattro answered, with Dieci by her side.

"Ah, V-san", she said, cheerily. "Is everything going to plan?", she asked, inquisitively. "Or are you stalling for once?"

"I don't need any of your trite remarks, Quattro", he replied, strictly. "And yes, everything is running as scheduled. I don't need t tell you anything more- you and the others have already acertained what they have to do." His tone was demanding. "Don't dilly-dally, for our sake- just move, with haste."

The Number only nodded silently in response, and closed window herself. V about-turned to those gathered. "And then there are our orders", he exclaimed, sharply. "What the old team must perform to keep this place intact..." He glanced at each of his allies, smirking under his porcelain mask.

"No doubt all of you are up to the task", he uttered. "From what the Doctor has gathered, the enemy has sent their best..."

"Hopefully better after their downfall", he stated to himself.

"Yes, their best", he mused. "Along with several clusters of air mages, purportedly." He started pacing up and down in a line across the group. "Also, cross-plane disturbances have detected the presence of a rather sizable Bureau fleet. But!", he cried, turning swiftly to those he faced. "That matters not", he concluded.

He strode over to Cinque, who had Stoff situated next to her, spear in hand. "I do not doubt your ability, my sweet", he said, coyly. "I just don't want you to get in too deep." He leaned forward. "Remember what happened last time?"

Cinque looked down and grimaced. That Nakajima girl losing her temper on her, to put it flatly, hadn't done the best for her. She had been spared major damage when V stepped in, and it was because of him that she had been allowed to continue ops, but it was a near-death experience nonetheless.

"All too well..." she replied, reminiscing. The eye-patched girl tilted her head upwards again. "But there'll be no mistakes this time."

V nodded in glee. "Good, good!", he shouted, sauntering over to Tre and Sette, but not before taking a brief amount of time to examine Cinque's new weapons (foot-long knives, curved) and suit, which the other Numbers bore.

He smiled slyly under his facial covering. "Red and black work nicely" he thought, "Works well with the upgrade, I must say..." He suppressed a chuckle.

"As for the two of you..." V directed a question at the duo. "Looks like your sister is coming..." He outstretched his hand, and another window formed, showing a blond-haired mage- Fate- on the other side. "Try to greet her into our domain without obliterating her hm?" Tre and Sette exchanged glances of slight annoyance.

V noticed this, and continued, somewhat cautiously. "Although I know you don't go over the top, of course, usually. But with all due seriousness, don't fully pulverize her- she could be of use."

Tre bobbed her head up and down in apprehension. "I am sure father would think the same thing", she replied. "Just as we understood his orders, we understand yours...in his absence", she noted. V nodded, remembering the fact that Jail had granted him only temporary command over some of the Numbers in his leave. Sette remained silent, yet V suspected she showed signs of inner concern.

"And, in your case..." He looked at Sigourney and Theo. "You act as per usual...support, in this case. Looks like your rivals are being towed along." Theodore's fist tightened at the mention of the one who wielded Strada, and Sigourney nodded in taciturnity, and snapped a salute. The two wheeled round and left the vicinity.

"Well then, my sisters..." He stepped back to the small cluster of Numbers, and viewed them admirably, evidenced by his tone. "All is set up on the Doctor's end, and the same holds true for us. Make or break time is upon us."

He took his place back at the front of the room, and murmured coldly and slowly:

"Let's get started...shall we?"

Uh...hm...

Now that I review this piece, I see quite a few flaws. I'm not exactly sure about the structure of it all, and I made up excuses for a few things (the new suit being an example- that is part of a proposed "upgrade scheme", but even then that's rather far-fetched...even though I like the new suit).

I also feel that this scene is somewhat random. The Numbers also have a lack of words. Cinque doesn't speak much, neither does Sette, but Tre's a more talkative one, albeit in serious terms. Sigourney is usually taciturn, but Theodore...he could've done with a few words.

All in all, though, I leave the fate of this piece in the hands of you, the readers. Give an honest opinion on this one.

My opinion, he does his job as the boss quite well.
Way to go with the interactions. Thuogh RF6 should already be screaming, "IMBA!IMBA! IMBA! IMBA!" due to their being overmatched.

Originally Posted by Key Board

sketches for my story so far, which hereby will be known as the Key(board) Chronicles.. har har har...

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Spoiler:

The setting if you haven't figured out already, takes place during the pre-TSAB ancient Belkan era.

Ryhen and Karl wear headpieces decorated with Belkan triangles

bio:

Ryhen: Belkan Archaeologist. Male, mid 40s. Dubbed Model T Case 1 as "Ford". Ryhen yearns for a more peaceful era and is extremely interested in the lost civilization of Alhazred.

Karl: Belkan Archaeologist. Male, mid 40s. A methodical thinker, although some might consider him to be rather unfriendly.

Model T Case 1: Artifact of unknown origin currently being studied under the supervision of archaeologist Ryhen and Karl.

Interesting. And...
Those two look like Brainiac.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

But in terms of skill level? Yeah, those aren't as easy as it seems

The thing I'm going for with Jeno's spell is that I want to make them versatile, so rather than have alot of flashy moves for different actions, I want one solid spell that could easily be used in a number of situations.

In terms of skill, Jeno is the best out of the three.
In terms of Magic potential, Cero has the highest.
In terms of Devices, Lance's is the most powerful.

Noted. At least you gave them some proper balancing.

Originally Posted by haiz123321

Spoiler for The Coach:

Character's name: Xeith
Alias: Xei, Xei-sensei

Gender: Male

Spoiler for Looks:

Rank in MagicZ:
SS Class

TSAB coach for Velka specialities/users

Age:
40 in (MagicZ)

Height n weight:
40:195 cm 80kg(MagicZ)

Background:
Having served the TSAB for 14 generations, Xeith continues the "tradition" and coaches forwards/mages with Velka specialities/users. When he was 27 years old, he was taking his usual evening stroll when he found Koumyou, with tattered clothes and some wounds. Pitying him, he brought him back to the TSAB to nourish him back to health. During the time, he had a personal intrest in Koumyou and decided to train him.

Personality:
Calm-thinker, strategist mind. Plots everything out first before executing it. (Be it battle/assignments/paperwork)

Intrests:
Doesn't have much intrest in anything, but goes fishing every weekend(sometimes on saturday sometimes on sunday)

Ok done with the mentor of my OC.

EDIT: Removed the stacking spoilers

Heheh. Lancer as mentor. The idea is so weird it's cool!

Originally Posted by Wibbles

I updated Hikaru's profile:

Spoiler for Riot-1:

Name: Hikaru von Lieben
Nicknames: Hii-chi (he hates this name)
Sex: Male
Age: 17
Birthday: March 3
Homeworld: Earth
Relatives: Jakob von Lieben, Naomi Shimamura
Occupation/Rank: TSAB, Private
Unit: Section 6
Code Name: Riot-1
Mage Rank: B
Magic Type: Kaleidoscope
Magic Circle Color: Varies
Favored Element: Varies
Height: Around 5'8
Weight: About 125lbs
Hair: Long and black
Eye Color: Green/blue
Build: Lean, athletic
Personality: Easy-going, friendly

Device Name: Doppleganger (first form), Doppleganger Geist (second form)
Device Appearance: Gun (both forms)
Barrier Jacket: Is normally a white trenchcoat, but is apt to change
Ultimate Atttack: Copy Gate

Background: Hikaru von Lieben is the only child of Rabbi Jakob von Lieben and Naomi Shimamura (yes, his dad is a rabbi, making Hikaru Jewish). Hikaru grew up happily, and was recruited into the TSAB at age 15 (his parents were under the pretense of it being an elite boarding school). He got good grades, and was well-liked by his classmates.

Not much of Hikaru’s past is notable. He lived in Germany, and went to Japan often. The reason he is well known is because of his current affiliation with Section 6 as the prime member of the Riot Squad, and his extremely unusual device, Doppleganger (who is a character in his own right). Hikaru is normally seen working with Nanoha Takamichi’s Stars team along with Riot-2, Miria Hasser, with whom he shares a good relationship with (unbeknownst to either of them, the entirety of Section Six is placing bets on when they’ll become a legitimate couple. The bookie in charge of the bets is Doppleganger).

Better than the previous versions.

Originally Posted by Tk3997

What I’m getting at is from a military point of view a fair fight is a BAD fight, you want it as ludicrously lopsided as possible. You don’t fight at all unless it’s stacked in your favor or you’re back is to the wall, only losers make last stands after all. But from a story telling perspective… well curbstomps might be the ideal of military planning and tactics, but they aren’t exactly fun to read about. Go read about some world war two tank battle it’ll have swirling masses of tanks, almost evenly matched, with the potential for the contest to swing either way based on skill, minor variations in equipment, tactics, or even luck.

Now read about the Gulf War where a few US Cavalry troops rolled into several brigade sized enemy tank unit and kills almost ALL of them, for the loss of like 1 IFV and 1 soldier… The later is massively preferable from a military and tactical perspective, but it’s not exactly exciting to write about one side basiclly sitting in place plinking the enemy from beyond the range their opponents can even SEE them, never mind fight back and winning in a basiclly inventible landslide. So their in lies the problem, from a military perspective lopsided curb stomps and overwhelming force are good, from a story telling and drama perspective their boooring…

Plus as an added downer all the damn rules and regs and etiquette you need to follow lest you be booted out make for some pretty bland interaction and situations Yes Sir, No Sir, Right away Sir. Even allot of people in the military role their eyes at some of the more shit they hand down. (One guy on another board over in Iraq was talking about how the assholes in charge of his base was trying to get carbonated beverages banned, because some idiot drank too much coke and not enough water and passed out.)

So that’s my issue with trying to apply heavy amounts of real military thinking, strategy, and behavior to stories that are supposed to be fun. I’ve been writing a fic on and off (it’ll probably never be published) for like a year and I started out wanting to try and keep the military in it pretty realistic… then I started to realize that you know what? The real military is BORING for the most part, in fact the only parts of it that are exciting tends to involve units and people that are somewhat OUTSIDE the normal armed forces, like Special Forces and stuff.

I’d like to see a slightly higher emphasis placed on the fact they ARE in a military, but at the same time I don’t think it should be a huge aspect of the story nor should it be slammed over your head like them all having their heads shaved and yelling HOOOAH (!!!) all the time. I also think you need to realize that RF6 is way closer to say, Delta Force, then an line infantry division so some allowance HAS to be made for their status as what amounts to Special Forces which often includes relaxed rules with regards to rank, somewhat loser discipline, and a certain disregard for the rules set out for “normal” troops.

So it's a REAL fine line. Totally ignoring the fact they are technically in what amounts to an armed service isn't an option, but trying to delve too heavily into that aspect or make it a big deal is a great way to induce bordem. (Go read some Clancy's more techno thrillers, fairly accurate, but BOOOORING.) So you don’t want them to act like stooges, but having them plan everything in minute detail and only use established military protocols and strategies and stuff is going to get old fast. The show has a military aspect, but it’s still ultimately about magic girls flying around without airplanes and firing off magic spells, it isn't Band Of Brothers nor should it be IMO so I don't think we should get too caught up with the largely background military aspect and try to bring that to the fro or whine how it isn't like the "real" military, RF6 might be part of a military but it ain’t a military like any WE’VE ever known.

*nods head several times*
I almost wish that you were in the previous episode discussions.
As much as I try, I can't deliver my ideas about these matters the way you can.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

I guess everyone has their own catch phrase




Jeno: "Hehhh~ ?"

And I have a trademark regulatory attack against excessive HAXX.

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

Well, scimitars are a good guess. I was thinking more along the lines of falchions, though those aren't exactly a foot long...and, what the heck, they and scimitars are rather similar, only the scimitar has a thinner blade with more of a curve.

And if I wanted to do ultimate h4xx, I would more than gladly give Cinque these:

Spoiler for Size:

*Runs.*

She can still use her IS perfectly well with newer, more potent weapons- said weapons also allow her to have more of an edge in close combat than with her knives. A good increase of her abilities all round. I might make a slight update to Rumble Detonator, too, though I think it's good as it is.

And a possible upgrade for Dieci...

Spoiler for Size again:

*Runs again.*

Kanshou and Bakuya? Approved!

Dendrobium Cannon?!?!
I think the Hyper Mega Launcher of the zeta Gunam would be more fitting. Plus, it can be used as a beam bayonet.

Originally Posted by Saint X

Just don't do the following: invoke the name of the yuri-hitora and bring in any of his bunnies here... WE HAVE PROTOSS WARSHIPS Watchng over this thread- all under my command

And excessive HAXX. Let's not forget that.

Originally Posted by Key Board

Key Chronicles

Scene 0: click

Scene 1: Twilight and Dawn

this scene might give you further detail hints of the timeline, for those of you who luuuv~ a grand unified timeline theory

Spoiler:

A long time ago in the land of origin
There was once a prosperous kingdom in the far east
A kingdom in which each year was more bountiful than the last

But perhaps she was too prosperous

The kingdom soon found itself with mighty enemies
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Far too mighty...
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Driven by despair, the kingdom stole its own sunlight
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and with it, wrecked its enemies
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This was later known as the final twilight...
The darkness sinked and killed the land...
and I was there to witness it
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...
...
...

Ryhen: it runs on magic?
Karl: that's what they say

Ryhen: incredible, that's just incredible!
Ryhen: out of all possible major breakthroughs they could have achieved with clean recyclable energy, they make a weapon out of it

Karl: non-lethal environmentally safe reliable weapons...
Karl: it's a powerful political tool... assuming it does what it claims to do...

Ryhen: bah, it's still a tool of force, I say. So, what are these benevolent weapons called?
Karl: for know they're called "devices"
Ryhen: Rather unimaginative...

Karl: There are rumors suggesting they might have been reverse-engineered from lost civilization technology...
Ryhen: !

Karl: Yes, Alhazred...
Ryhen: ...

bleep bleep bleep

Karl: Well, I guess that concludes our day.
Ryhen: ...

Karl: Come on, Ryhen. Let's get something to eat.
Ryhen: ...

Karl:Ryhen!

Ryhen: Oh, Sorry... Could we make one last detour before we lock down the lab?
Karl: Saying good night to Ford?

Ryhen: Well, more or less

...
...
...

And so... they come here once again

Ryhen: ...

...

Ryhen: Where did you come from, Ford? What were you made for?

...

Ryhen: Why are you here? Tell me, was your home destroyed by war?

...

Ryhen: ... I don't know where you came from, but I know you made a long journey here.

Karl: Here he goes again...

Ryhen: It's such a pity that we can't even welcome you properly... all this tension and battles tend to bring out the worst in our kind, I'm afraid.

...

Ryhen: On behalf of Belka, I apologize for this.

...

Ryhen: *sigh*, well that's it for today. Let's lock down this place, Karl

Karl: I hope this doesn't become a habit, Ryhen
Ryhen: Ah Karl, you lack sensitivity

Karl: I guess you make up for my lack of it, then.
Ryhen: Ha ha, that may be true

why?

Karl: ah?!
Ryhen: !?

Why do you wish to know?

Karl: It...
Ryhen: talked....

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Karl: Perhaps we have seen something we shouldn't have, Ryhen

I like this style. It's like a slide show. And HOLY- Fords GIGANTIC!

Originally Posted by Kha

@Aaron: I quoted it once, and I'll quote it again, from the WH40K codex: Clerics "can only not feel irrational anger, hate and bitterness". So attraction wise... Kha can feel it, but like the other Clerics he doesn't chase skirts because each feels its appropiate to over-indulge in such worldly pleasures.

And that the more you chase, the worse things get... ^_^;

Don't worry, I understand. It's just that I used that as an opening to mentisn the Aces' Harem-Hug Breaker status. I assure you, several people will be screaming in frustration because of Kha's luck.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Tito Lowe is back!

What do you have in mind specifically for the set-up scenario? And an assassin? Nice, should allow S&W to put their sniping skills and brains to the test

Tito! May pasalubong po kayo?

Ahem!

I was thinking of a scenario where S&W are bodyguards for Aurion. he's going undercover so he needs to avoid using magic. So he'll be doing some running ala-Rush Hour 3.

Originally Posted by Kha

I once had something similar from an anime pen-&-paper RPG, but it was only available to females. You could say this was one of their racial skills, since men have an overpowered GAR (Basic) racial buff.

Anyway, in that RP, females have:

Angry Female Strike - An instant attack made when enraged that grants +3 to attack roll. Ignores defence values of male targets and immediately hits for damage. Tsunderes, a unique racial class available only to females, have abilities that enhance this skill.

Hidden Female Pocket - A special interdimensional space to store items and gear. Its the reason why females can lug around bags and bags of items with only a tot bag. Tsunderes can equip a harisen-type weapon on top of another piece of equipment in the Hidden Female Pocket.

It was fun!

Now, to go really off topic:

Guys have these racial ability:

GAR (Basic) - A flaming soul that burns up as the battle rages on, powering the person up further and further. Many male classes use this basic skill to the max. Others, like Super Mecha Hero, have GAR (White Hot).

BUt now, I'm inclined to create GAR (Kamina), in memory of a great man...

I can't quite remember the other skills, apart from Super Mecha Familiarity, Advanced Gattai Proficiency and Mecha Piloting +5, which are more like racial skills that a Male Super Mecha Hero has...
Rock still counts. In fact, Kha's "YOU CAN'T STOP US!!!" Lyrical Magic Gattai "Pray" is considered rock...

*notes down*

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

@Aaron: Well, the "good" V is on par with the Aces on his normal level, so he can block the attack sent at him. Shields of a matching rank of the attack do nullify said attack.

Okay...

There is, however, a less h4xx choice for a weapon which, as luck might have it, is rarely used by its wielder. This:

Spoiler for Caladbolg II::

*Raises anti-h4xx shield expectantly.*

Wait...

Fate/stay Night...applied with something...adding something...

To the congregation, I present to you my belief of what Cinque might do you if you piss her off. Namely...

THIS!

Spoiler for Size::

Just replace ol' Gilgamesh with Cinque, imbue each of the weapons with explosive power...

*Raises anti-H4xx shield fearfully.*

Caladbolg!
GATE OF BABYLON: RUMBLE DETONATOR SHIFT!!!

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

@Kha: Yup, the Dendrobium's cannon...perfect in my books. You know the old phrase, "The bigger the better!", right?

And...wait...this Wing Zero-inspired "Kluize Shift" has me wondering, good sir...namely wondering when he procures a magic buster blasts whoever he's facing.

I was joking about it... It's because Kha Aznable of the Twist's Fate timeline is a "sort of" older brother of the Numbers, packed full of equipment just because Scagletti wanted to see how far Kha could go, and Kha wanted to become stronger for more noble reasons. And in that timeline, Kha hi-jacked a top-secret TSAB Knight Armor that took the form of ***dam Wing Ver.Ka. Now that armor was incomplete, but when completed... Let's just say it has 2 Nuclear Barrels instead of one...

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

There is, however, a less h4xx choice for a weapon which, as luck might have it, is rarely used by its wielder. This:

Spoiler for Caladbolg II::

*Raises anti-h4xx shield expectantly.*

No need; in CrosyS, and many other scenarios, shooting Caladbolg II is Sophia's standard Weapon Summon because its so cheap. Uses Falchions too. She's a Archer Weapon Summoner after all.

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

Wait...

Fate/stay Night...applied with something...adding something...

To the congregation, I present to you my belief of what Cinque might do you if you piss her off. Namely...

THIS!

Spoiler for Size::

Hmm... Where is that image...? I had it somewhere... The one of Kluize and all the Devices being flung out... Anyone seen it? It supposed to be in this thread or the image thread somewhere...

Originally Posted by Keroko

You know what I realized? When the Nanoha OC-thread has surpassed the Nanoha Image thread, the Nanoha OC-thread will not just be the largest thread on the Nanoha forums, it will be the largest thread on the entire Animesuki forums!

We need a kiriban for this! Something! Anything!

How about...

the official release of

CODEX: DAEMONJAEGER

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Keroko

You know what I realized? When the Nanoha OC-thread has surpassed the Nanoha Image thread, the Nanoha OC-thread will not just be the largest thread on the Nanoha forums, it will be the largest thread on the entire Animesuki forums!

We need a kiriban for this! Something! Anything!

Even more reason for us to surpass the image thread quickly!!!

And we're nearing 8000 in only a few posts!!!

[Dream_Traveller]

@Aaron:

Don't you know? Being outnumbered is a key factor for the eventual amounts of ownage the allies will deliver! It is what all protagonists strive for!

Well, what with the Numbers being upgraded, and the Doctor having an Ace-level combatant on his side, that's a problem, yes. But I'll find ways to even out the equation.

Another Dendrobium Cannon, hm? Well, as said, "The bigger the better". I can only imagine what destructive power Dieci would have if she was upgraded have a cannon of that standard... Just be thankful it isn't the god-like Wing Zero cannon. Now that is a monster.

Heh, the Gate of Babylon works well when applied to Cinque, does it not? As for Caladbolg...I have no idea what I might use its design for. Further weapons in her arsenal?

And speaking of Gilgamesh, I can somehow picture Nove snapping and doing this:

Spoiler:

Nove: ENUMA ELISH!!

Right, I gotta stop this now.

And, to Lowe, it matters not- the bigger the bang, the swifter the job, right? There's uncountable amounts of weapons in the Vault last time I checked on Gate of Babylon...

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

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Tito! May pasalubong po kayo?

Ahem!

I was thinking of a scenario where S&W are bodyguards for Aurion. he's going undercover so he needs to avoid using magic. So he'll be doing some running ala-Rush Hour 3.

Wala, kuripot ako eh

Bodyguards huh? So S&W would be running along with Aurion then. How long's this mission's gonna last... but first, what is the mission anyway?

I'm gonna love this

Originally Posted by Kha

How about...

the official release of

CODEX: DAEMONJAEGER

Your draft is already a formidable exercise of EPICSIUM OUTBREAK

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

And speaking of Gilgamesh, I can somehow picture Nove snapping and doing this:

Spoiler:

Nove: ENUMA ELISH!!

Right, I gotta stop this now.

And, to Lowe, it matters not- the bigger the bang, the swifter the job, right? There's uncountable amounts of weapons in the Vault last time I checked on Gate of Babylon...

Image Does Not Compute

I can imagine Nove doing Bloody Road imitations, but not that

Still a waste though... better just stick to Metal Dust Airburst bombs for the big bang

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

@Aaron:

Don't you know? Being outnumbered is a key factor for the eventual amounts of ownage the allies will deliver! It is what all protagonists strive for!

Well, what with the Numbers being upgraded, and the Doctor having an Ace-level combatant on his side, that's a problem, yes. But I'll find ways to even out the equation.

Another Dendrobium Cannon, hm? Well, as said, "The bigger the better". I can only imagine what destructive power Dieci would have if she was upgraded have a cannon of that standard... Just be thankful it isn't the god-like Wing Zero cannon. Now that is a monster.

Heh, the Gate of Babylon works well when applied to Cinque, does it not? As for Caladbolg...I have no idea what I might use its design for. Further weapons in her arsenal?

And speaking of Gilgamesh, I can somehow picture Nove snapping and doing this:

Spoiler:

Nove: ENUMA ELISH!!

Right, I gotta stop this now.

And, to Lowe, it matters not- the bigger the bang, the swifter the job, right? There's uncountable amounts of weapons in the Vault last time I checked on Gate of Babylon...

DOES NOT COMPUTE!!! Nove doesn't use flail chain thingys!

I'm so glad Cindy never learnt Unlimited Imperium Vault. All of Kluize's hard work would've gone down the drain really fast, if she comes close to those epic blades.

EDIT: WOOT 8K POST!!!