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2008-02-15, 11:39 | Link #82 | |
It's the year 3030...
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@Spectacular - In regards to your post in the picture thread...if ever there was a time for Hinata-licious to be a word, the end of this story is it!
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2008-02-15, 22:52 | Link #83 | |
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2008-02-17, 23:47 | Link #85 |
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Quzor: Man those new chapters were so good that I just read straight through from 2-4 and looked and only 20 minutes went by I had read them so fast. I can't get enough of the story. I'm extremely interested in Tsubashi's training of the men, but I'm a little confused. In one of the chapters you talked about the men dumping the body of the one that mouthed of to Mitsurugi, but it appeared that when you told of them dumping him it was during the flashback before he had learned the technique he had used to kill him. But anyway I can't wait for your next chapter.
Adediran242: I read yours finally. Very well written, the air element weapons(not sure what else to call them) are awesome. The fight was excellently described and gave a nice clear image of what was happening. Two thumbs up. Keep on writing. Reith: Read the chapter of "Super Squad 7". Was pretty funny, like most of you other works.It made me laugh when after all the fighting was over Naruto was still rolling on Choji, I also like his nickname. Katoso_Shunin:Nice work! I like how the story is turning out. The fight wth Joko was great, and I like how they figured out how to blow up his tank, that was cool. I'm also enjoying the development between Kanji and Katoso. Well I believe that's everyone. Well everyone but KurayamiLeader, still trying to catch up on all those chapters, it's just that some of them are so big. I want to catch up to where you are and give you a nice big fat review. By the way KurayamiLeader, I happen to remember 3 or 4 so pages back someone saying they were gearing up to read my chapters and would leave a review, what happened? Not trying to be naggy or anything just would like to know what you think of my material, no rush you don't have to review it if you really don't want to, I'll live.
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2008-02-18, 01:02 | Link #86 | |
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On another note, thank you for the feedback! I can only hope that your response will motivate other people to follow suit *emo glare at everyone*
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2008-02-18, 01:13 | Link #87 | |
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2008-02-18, 17:37 | Link #89 |
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Thanks Zaku, I wanted it to be a suped up version of Asuma's technique with the trench knives, hopefully I pulled it off alright. I really shold be writing, but my girlfriend is soaking up my free time like a sponge (she says i'm on the computer too much), but I'll get round to chapter 3. I warn you now, it will NOT be interesting, but it will be VERY integral.
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2008-02-19, 18:05 | Link #90 |
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Well, it was supposed to be out yesterday, but I got lazy. So it's here today instead. Chapter 5 of "The Devil's Offspring."
http://narutofic.org/viewstory.php?sid=7521&chapter=5 Please enjoy, and if you have any feedback, I'd certainly love to hear it
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2008-02-19, 23:31 | Link #91 | |
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2008-02-19, 23:41 | Link #92 | |
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2008-02-19, 23:47 | Link #93 |
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Ya that would be funny to see, but at least I haven't gone that far in writing mine ok maybe just a couple moves But anyway maybe next time you should tape yourself and send it to us so we can all see, lol.
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2008-02-19, 23:56 | Link #95 | |
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ff topic: we hit 100 posts woohoo
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2008-02-20, 00:01 | Link #99 | |
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I better stop talking about this, I'm too enthralled with the idea now
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