2012-08-28, 12:20 | Link #83 |
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7112821/57
Another chapter is up. I wonder what happened in this chapter..
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2012-08-28, 12:46 | Link #84 | |
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2012-08-29, 06:10 | Link #87 |
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For all the talk of evil americans, while the CIA are assholes America as a whole is being ruthlessly pragmatic in taking care of its interests and fighting BETA. Contrast that to the Japanese... *shakes head*
Which is why it still bugs me that the yanks never loaded orbital diver pods with FAE bombs or nukes. -__-
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2012-08-29, 06:19 | Link #89 | |
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Regardless, now that the emperor is now dead, the system of Japan will change and I hope there wouldn't be anymore of that Japanese pride, 'For the Shogun/Emperor/etc' or anything like that anymore since they'll get usurped into UN... I think?
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2012-08-29, 06:53 | Link #90 |
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I'm reminded of what a certain butler once said: Some men just want to watch the world burn.
To be fair, Ikaruga looks like he's working to fuck up whatever Yuuhi's planning on doing in TDA...
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2012-08-29, 09:03 | Link #91 | |
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As for the misguided Yamato Damash (Patriotism) ..... Those morons just want a place die in the false glory of there ideals, which wasted precious time and wasted lives ..... Then we get the five royal houses and the "regency" which decides who's going to be next shogun more back stabbing ..... all that i can said the back door politics is quite extreme Last edited by kaizerknight01; 2012-08-29 at 09:35. |
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2012-09-03, 05:33 | Link #93 |
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So I abandoned my fic for a while and then decided to get back to it. It's been expanded with a small prologue and the first chapter has been slightly rewritten to fit the prologue, along with some polishing, so I'm reposting it. Chapter 2 is basically done as well, though it hasn't undergone any beta'ing.
I acknowledge the prologue might have benefited from another PoV... but as I have other projects to focus on I need to finish this one in its entirety. The final chapter should be done soon-ish. Prologue Chapter 1 Chapter 2
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2012-09-03, 20:09 | Link #94 |
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8314408/1/A-Cadets-Account
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8314408/2/A-Cadets-Account I have done the unthinkable. I have actually made the first two episodes of Total Eclipse relevant. |
2012-09-04, 01:14 | Link #95 | |
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With that said, the kind of contrivance that would have to go into an Imperial Royal Guardsman nobody somehow ending up in or even accompanying a top secret UN task force that only draws from rigorously pre-screened candidates at Yokohama, on a mission where the plan explicitly arranged for them to do it alone, simply boggles the mind. And TSFs deploying sentry turrets with bombs having yield a third of the size of a standard S-11? The XG-70's main guard unit somehow managing to end up on the "other side of the hive"? Granted, making up virtually impossible scenarios and breaking continuity willy-nilly is kind of par for the course where fanfiction in general is concerned, but. No offense, it's your fanfiction and you're free to make up whatever you like to contrive your own preferred scenario. By the way, the first two episodes are, in my opinion, by no means irrelevant at present, but you're entitled to your own opinion on that, since your views are already practicaly on public record at this point, and there is nothing that can be said on that topic that has not already been said. I don't mean to be a killjoy. Last edited by DoomRavager; 2012-09-04 at 01:49. |
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2012-09-04, 02:20 | Link #96 | |
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-after reading- Dammit, i was hopeful that she get a happy ending. All i got was a tearjerking Heroic Sacrifice.
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2012-09-04, 02:30 | Link #97 | |
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How is Izumi being on the Valkyrie Squad a problem in canon, particularly she has UN connections through Yui and Yamashiro, Yuuhi is vouching for her from the Japan side, and she's in a final offensive mission where the rest of the squad are using exchanged Royal Guard Takemis? And isn't going from the Royal Guard to a special UN team precisely what happened when Yui was assigned to Project Prominence in canon? As for everything else... Spoiler:
I think you're testing me because you know I'm a secondary. Last edited by Hagoshod; 2012-09-04 at 02:52. |
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2012-09-04, 03:01 | Link #98 | |
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