2012-08-06, 10:17 | Link #81 | ||
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It seems that they are in the Unlimited Neutral Field, judging from the number of Burst Linkers. However, that would have to mean that all of them were connected to the hospital's local net to be able to meet there. You also have to be at least level 4 to go into the Unlimited Neutral Field. |
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2012-08-06, 17:46 | Link #82 | ||
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(apologies if me habit of using medical conditions annoys anyone. ) Though if that's not accurate, then this becomes a clue as to who Burgundy and Maya really are. They were in or around the hospital at the time. Quote:
Perhaps, have Burgundy come after the match to have a chat with Gold and invite him to another viewing gallery? After all, he did set the whole thing up to mess with Golden.
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2012-08-06, 21:37 | Link #83 |
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I believe you're immediately logged out the moment the match ends though. Might want to make it as though someone challenged him again after his match against the two, though it can't be the two who do it as you can only challenge a certain Linker once per day.
The only way you can view a match is if you subscribe to a linker so that you're transported to the gallery when the match happens, since each match only lasts 1.8 seconds in real life. |
2012-08-07, 00:46 | Link #85 | |
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Brb.
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2012-08-07, 03:03 | Link #86 | |
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Cyan Pile's Parent was <<Executed>> at the Blue Legion, and lost all Burst Points. To tell the truth, before knowing about Judgement Blow, I thought <<Execution>> meant that the whole Legion took a turn fighting the DA, each member taking the culprit's points, and then when the BP were at critical, the Legion Master would deal the final blow. So yeah, there are other ways to pass judgement on someone than Judgement Blow atm, I'm working on my OCs...and by that, I mean appearance. I'm doing some sketches of them, then their DAs
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2012-08-07, 11:08 | Link #88 | |
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This is mainly the reason for his scar for "never missing" and his devotion to endure pain so that others can live. If you don't like this kind of character, that fine by me. I like spoil douches that slow turn into more mature and moral people. I had another idea character, but didn't fit my description. Gray Phantom is a bit off my style. He is an orphan that has been through a lot of trauma: the lost of his family, the burning of his orphanage and the death of a close friend. He believe him is cursed and he deserves no one. He hardly ever cries anymore and tries to make a living of his own. He uses his "curse" to people that deserved it. He want to live in a better world than his real one (hence got into AW). His scar is his mental trauma and that he believes he is a cursed spirit that punishes the wicked...in other words a phantom. That's as far as I went. If you can make it better, than do it. Even though I made him, I lost interest in finishing it. |
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2012-08-07, 20:24 | Link #89 |
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Another Promotional Snippet for The Revived Legend of the Black Swordsman <<Side A>>. :3
Spoiler for An early draft. Some things were fixed in the FF chapter:
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2012-08-08, 00:41 | Link #90 | |
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For instance, especially at the end, what is the reaction of the rest of the room when Haru plugged on the Neurolinker. What of physical descriptions? Beautiful doesn't simply cut it, for example - what does Haru think of that kind of beauty? What is Haru feeling? What is the mood of the rest of the room? There's a lot of small little touches you can make to improve this Snippet. How does this Haru look like? Still short and obese? Or perhaps physically different ( less pudgier, still short, but not grossly fat, etc, etc.) after his time in Tokyo? It's a respectable effort, with an interesting premise that I hope will derail canon quickly, but there's quite alot of room of improvement. The premise grips me, but your writing hasn't exactly yet. |
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2012-08-08, 03:40 | Link #91 |
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Okay, just finished checking the piece that I'm about to post, so here goes.
[Accel World: Under the Cloudless Sky] Prologue Chapter 01 Spoiler for AW:UtCS - Ch 02 (Part 1):
That's it for now...need to work on the Duel Avatar designs, as I'm not used to drawing robot-like characters. Also, I may have missed some mistakes, so do point them out so I can fix them
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2012-08-08, 05:02 | Link #93 | |
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I assume that if it's just something trivial as a small text file, then it can be sent to someone without need of Global Net connection. This is confirmed by the scene where Kuroyukihime sent the optical screenshot to Haru in ep 2.
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2012-08-10, 14:24 | Link #95 |
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I don't see too many things wrong with Carbon Arrow's user, Taiyou. He started out a rich life and then it all blew up (literally). I already told you his weakness is trusting people. He basically has a wall around himself. He feels uneasy around other Burst Linkers (he hates ones that abuse the game). Him using Incernate System is obvious after spend "5 years of hell". Also the guy is trying to be social which he isn't good at. He's been scarred mentally and physically. I'm not saying he's "super", it's just he has his moments. His surviving skills in real life made him a better burst linker. He also was a Black Lotus fan as a kid, however now he is not sure of it. The guy mainly became somewhat emo. At least this character is better than my "Shadow Tesla" character.
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2012-08-12, 18:43 | Link #97 |
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I think I know what is bugging me about the last part - it's the fragmentary nature of the very last section - it feels hanging, and I think you might want to shift it to the next chapter, or continue with the entire Brain burst Installation process and explanation.
The other problem is that your writing fills a little stilted at times, and your phrasing can be a little awkward. |
2012-08-13, 18:13 | Link #98 |
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Just finished, scanned and upped the drawing I did of one of my OCs: Renka's school network avatar
Had it in my head for a while, and couldn't focus on drawing the duel avatars so I had to do it Like Kuroyukihime's, Renka's avatar is a replica of her appearance, plus the obvious additions The outfit is mostly red with gold trimmings, except for the inner part that is black and white. Well then, back to sketching DAs
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2012-08-13, 18:48 | Link #99 | |
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2012-08-14, 00:53 | Link #100 |
Tenshi's Defense Squadron
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I wonder if I should start do something of a crossover between Transformers (plotwise) and Accel world.
I mean, I can so picture a more of an all out war after Kuroyuki's call to everyone to fight. And resulting in MASSIVE amounts of people losing their Brain Burst, causing a crash in the system....
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