Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[Keroko]

You know... I noticed something in the translation of Vivio's profile.

Originally Posted by humbug23

I believe it's Kaiser Vivio you guys want?

Sanckt Kaiser Vivio (Yay 'Saint King' is correct!)
Birthright: Lineage of the Saint King (By genetic restoration)
Ability: Data collecting magic combat
Role: Defence of Cradle Throne
Special capabilities: Defence Skill - Armour of the Saint King

As a 'Saint King' specially crafted for the activation of the Cradle, she eliminates threats to the throne by taking in energy given by the engine/reactor and using(which powers?not said here) her invincible defence skill 'Armour of the Saint King' which nullifies attacks with high-speed analysis. The rainbow-coloured energy that emanates from her when she uses magic, commonly occurs in the bloodline and is termed 'Kaiser Falbe'(I don't know German).

The key to the Cradle, Vivio who has awakened as the protector of the throne. Having been made a 'Relic Weapon' by implanting a Relic core inside her, Quattro forcibly linked her to the Cradle and made her mentally activate it, after which she awakened with instantaneous growth as part of a transformation into a battle-ready appearance. Her Barrier Jacket's appearance is influenced off the one who, within the original Vivio's memories, 'she admires and loves, and is a symbol of strength'

So not only is Keroko canon, she also lived 300 years ago in the Belkan ages.

So... many... ideas....

Edit: Fals alarm. Humbug meant the present Vivio. Of course, this doesn't mean that I still can't use this. Dual meanings for the win.

[Kha]

*a loud scream echoes through the skies*

KHAAAAAA IMPAKUTO!!!

Originally Posted by Mirificus

Weren't you looking for something like this Keroko?

I hope Keroko releases his take on Keroko based on that, and maybe once I find vector-Archer I'll be able to jump in as well.

Originally Posted by Tormenk

My brain's combusted after thinking up of ideas for this guy.

Here is the first of my first OC. Second part will deal with larger chunk of his personal history up to near StrikerS. which I have decided to omit for now due to incompletion and perhaps off-point.

Spoiler for The Black Fist - part 1:

Basic Information
Name: Gen Ealin
Gender: Male
Home World: Mid Childa
Birth date: August 1st
Age: 45
Relatives: Deceased
Eye color: brown
Hair color: black
Height: 182cm
Appearance:

Spoiler for for Gen Ealin:

Mage Information
Rank/Position: Former Captain/Striker
Affiliations: TSAB Navy

Magic Type: Neo-Belkan
Magic Color: Black
Mage Rank: S
Element Affiliation: None
Barrier Jacket:
Device Name: Eva and Avatar
Device Type: Armed Device (Eva), Storage Device (Avatar)


Background/History:

Gen Ealin was orphaned at the age of 12 following the disastrous failed containment of a Lost Logia on one of Mid Childa’s southern continent, taking an entire island along with it and leaving a crater on Mid Childa visible from space. With his parents’ death, he had no means of support and joined the Mid Childa Ground Forces.

As a recruit, Gen was a loner who did not get along with others, his parents death leaving a permanent mark on him. Nevertheless, he was a driven cadet who produced excellent results, as noted by many of his instructors. Attaining the ground mage rank of A at age 14, Gen was not happy with his current status as merely part of the ground forces, one which he found to be lacking. Training and practicing in between missions for the mage tests, he manage to attain AAA status in 3 years by the time he left the ground forces, opting to join the Navy as a Enforcer.

A full fledged Enforcer with 6 years of field missions under his belt, Gen was still the loner he was but by now he had a high handed approach to whatever he did, namely during his missions dealing with the common weapons smuggler or space pirate. His actions were questioned several times by his officers but as he likes to say, “The ends justify the means”. The higher ups overlooked his actions after reviewing his excellent track record in the field and the many successful missions he undertook.

Might include the spell list together with part 2. If my brain can still function tomorrow.

Comments, inconsistencies, mistakes. Feel free to point them out and tell me what you think, fellow denizens.

Looks well

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Ah ha, so Belka calls their King "Kaiser" after all.

Uh huh, and all the more proof that Seiou isn't the real name, but a translation of it... And I insist that Sanckt Kaiser can be translated to God Emperor/Empress in ENGLISH!

Originally Posted by Keroko

Yeah, Thrawn goes through a variety of apearances depending on the artists. I like this version the best, as it shows a rather charming side.

THAT was his charming side...?

Pardon the bluntness... I've no idea about this guy at all... So going by impression...

Originally Posted by asaqe

I agree, I was amazed Seven Arcs didnt seal the deal on the relationship. Hopefull Season 4 will have more yunnoha to compensate...

Spoiler for Between the legion:

Of course, between 300 and I, it was secretly FxYxN all along (looks at vivio)

That last scene hints at it actually.

Yuuno, Nanoha, Vivio and the house pet Arf...

Looks like Erio's not the only person pulling familiar theft...

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

I don't think he'll be busy IMMEDIATELY after StrikerS, which is when LegendS takes place. But that's why the 21st isn't up front for most of the series - but if you need me to, I can replace the 21st with the 216th (if Satty'll let me).

And re: your procrastination -

[Konata] No motivation! Wanna play! Rely on others in a pinch![/Konata]

Actually he will be... to the point of incapacitation, and only Artei and Sophia would be available.

Originally Posted by Erio

If its after StrikerS, meaning after the timeskip and all, then there shouldnt be any problems.

If its after StrikerS's last battle, then it will be a bit hard... and even if Kha can participate, you'll have to keep in mind various changes to Kha's character and personality during this period of time. You'll have to tell me and Kha how you're going to use him. Also dont expect Kha to be at his maximum power... cant say more or I will spoil his character development.

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

Regarding my use of Kha & the 21st: They won't be playing a very large role in LegendS. Their main usage will be in the two immense battles that'll take place during the series; otherwise, they're in the background a la StrikerS Acous & Yuuno.

Any confusion here?

No confusion, is just that as long as Kha isn't at two places at the same time, otherwise we're gonna have to call in Avenger.

Originally Posted by Erio

I was never confused about the timeline, no worries. And BTW, DestinyS/StargazerS is not part of that list because they are AU...unless a Season 4 is never made, of course.

I was just letting you know about Kha's usage during those two times I mentioned. Reiterating, no problems if you use Kha after the timeskip; however, if you will use Kha just after StrikerS' final battle, then there will be a few problems... right now I'm thinking maybe you can use the 21st without Kha, because Kha wont be able to fight at this point in time... Letme see what I can come up with, but of course I need Kha's input about this too.

We agree here.

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

This quartet is the Galgenritter- Galgen means "Gallows" in German or, in the Nanohaverse, Belkan. They were named so for fighting as mercenaries on the enemy side against Belka in...well, the history of the world itself is vague, but a recent war can be conjured up.

That said, I don't think they'll act in the open too much- if the Ritter know of them, that is.

As per usual, appearances:

Spoiler for Galgenritter:

Eins: Graegor Pennwitz.



Zwei: Pascal Blossy.



Drei: Claire Oeille.



Vier: Miro-Karl Frenzen.

Easy to guess who here...

And, since the references are easy to guess, who supports me making a fifth member...

Spoiler for Eto...:

*Runs like heck.*

And I had the craziest idea for a kind of familiar...

Spoiler for ...:

"The universe once cowered at the name of M*******, and it shall do so again!"





*Flees.*

I couldn't get most of the Knights () but Shana does right alarms. Like X has mentioned, Urusai fight?

*evil Mekha-nical laughter*

Originally Posted by Erio

Lets see what Kha says once he comes back.

I have spoken.

Originally Posted by USB500

ASK, AND YE SHALL RECEIVE!

DIARY OF A WINDTALKER
SUMMER ARC SPECIAL, CHAPTER VII PART A

Spoiler for at Mobile Command Post:

“You can’t be this serious, can you?”

Sitting Dragon handed over the documents to Alexandra. “There is indeed a street performer named Yutaro Wakamoto, and his identity and personality are similar to those used by Hikki,” he explained.

“How can this be happening?” Alexandra murmured. “Tell me this is coincidental, Dragon. Please.”

“I’m afraid it isn’t,” Sitting Dragon replied. “Prior to the incident, the Wind Talkers had discussed with the Real Yutaro to have his troupe invited to the bureau’s autumn open day. It seemed Hikki may have overhead the deal, so…”

“But he used the name purely by chance! There’s no way he can know anything about Yutaro,” Alexandra insisted.

“That’s what I’m worried of,” Sitting Dragon spoke. “He never spoke directly to the troupe or had close contact with Yutaro. What’s more surprising about this issue is that Yutaro and his troupe was scheduled to visit Lucky Star Cape when he had to be hospitalized due to diarrhoea.”

“Then we must let him know of Hikki’s impersonation!” Alexandra pleaded. “We don’t know what will happen if he ever gets his hand on this matter.”

“The Wind Talkers have handled this matter, Miss Alex,” Sitting Dragon assured. “Azali and Faye are visiting Yutaro as we speak. They’ll inform him that his reputation will not be tarnished.”

Alexandra frowned. “I’m only worried of Hikki… I just hope he will be alright…”

“As for now, let’s keep this matter secret from him,” Sitting Dragon said and approached the control panel. “We don’t want him to be personally devastated by this.” He stared at the satellite image of Hikki helping Freya with her yukata. “I just wonder whether Hikki can keep up with that form for long enough…”

Spoiler for the moe is strong within this one:

Hikki had done with his assistance. Now he was waiting outside the room for Freya with Erio, E and Takeru. He was concerned not of how long he had to wait for his girlfriend to finish with her make-up, but of how he was supposed to spend the whole day with her.

“This waiting is beginning to kill me,” E mumbled and headed outside. Erio and Takeru followed his lead, and Hikki was left alone inside the building. Tormented, humiliated and mentally beaten, he almost given up his holiday trip and had considered returning to the headquarters. He could not help cursing Poseidon for its handiworks, and almost wanted to kill the tiger for the fault.

“Have you told her yet?”

He looked up to see Widuri approaching her in all her splendour in yukata. He blushed at the woman’s gorgeous beauty and broke eye contacts with her. “I still… have to wait for the right time. So…”

Widuri giggled and patted him on the head. “The right time… you say?”

“Don’t… don’t get me wrong! It won’t be like what happened this morning,” he murmured and cringed when Widuri pulled him into her maternal embrace. “Miss Widuri, please… don’t do this to me!”

“Yutaro… don’t be too shy to love someone…” she whispered and softly rubbed his back. “If you really love her, then don’t wait until it’s too late…”

That’s right, he thought. He always told himself of this whenever he had the liking towards someone. It was true, he felt, that he loved Mai but he also deeply cared of Nanoha and Widuri. What Widuri was doing was the indication that he should let Freya know how he felt towards her.

Widuri let go off Hikki. “Come. Let’s wait for Freya-chan at the outside.”

“Err… okay.”

Hikki and Widuri went to the outside and met up with the rest of Riot Force 6. They, especially the Aces, looked splendid in their yukata and Hikki could not help ogling each and ever one of them in interest. “They surely look pretty, don’t they?” he said.

“The same can’t be said by the boy whose girlfriend took the initiative step before he did,” Hayate sneered.

“At least I’m not interested in wearing weird clothes,” Hikki replied and pointed to the strange Lolita-styled yukata Vita was donning.

Hayate twitched at the comment. “You have the guts to undermine my great design,” she murmured.

“What’s the point of having great designs when they all fail to impress the audience?” Hikki jeered.

Hayate tried suppressing her anger. “You just don’t know who you’re talking to, boy,” she uttered, veins popping out of her forehead and knuckles.

“Who are we supposed to wait now, anyway?” Keroko asked.

“Freya’s almost done, I think,” Hikki answered. “She should be ready by-”

“Guess who?”

Hikki removed the hands that were covering his eyes. He turned around and grinned to see Freya in the brand-new yukata. “How many times you’ve posed in front of the mirror back there?” he teased.

Freya replied with a poke on his nose before she walked to the front. “So,” she spoke and spun on her feet as to show off her yukata. “How do I look?”

Hikki was awed. So did Erio, E and Takeru as the three boys stared at the Gemini Sister in admiration. “So… so cute…” they murmured.

Freya giggled and threw a wink to Hikki. “You do find me cute, don’t you Yutaro?” The young Gale Whistler blushed at the teasing gesture and became lost in his imagination. Erio, E and Takeru took a look at him and shook their head in amusement. Even Widuri giggled at the boy’s reaction.

“Can’t handle Aura’s twin sister’s charm, huh?” the gunslinger boy uttered.

Erio kept ogling Freya before Annabelle swatted his head with paper fan. “Pervert.”

Hikki shook his head. “What do you think you’re saying? It’s just natural for a boy to be smitten by his girlfriend’s beauty, isn’t it?” he insisted.

Freya blushed to hear the statement, although she chuckled at what Hikki was saying. “Yutaro…” she spoke his name and poked the boy’s nose again as she approached him. “Thank you.”

They later heard Nove’s protesting voice as she pulled Cinque from inside the villa. “Come on, Oneesama! Everyone’s waiting already!” the red-haired girl exclaimed. “Come on! Or we’ll miss the fireworks!”

“But Nove… the dress doesn’t suit me…” Cinque complained.

“Stop complaining and come out!” Nove urged. “Everyone wants to see you in that yukata! Come on!”

Everybody waited, and it was worth it when Cinque finally came out of the door (only because Nove was dragging her out of the building). The boys and the girls suddenly blushed at the sparkly sight of yukata Cinque and became infatuated by the undoubted beauty of the eye-patched Number.

“So moe…!” Erio mumbled. “So moe I think I’m going to die!”

Caro, Annabelle and Lutecia glared at Erio. “Erio-kun…” they murmured in threatening voice. “You dare ignoring us for the eye-patched girl?????”

E bled his nose, although he did throw a thumb’s up to Cinque. “Nice!”

Cinque noticed how long Erio was staring at her. Embarrassingly she turned away and fiddled with her fingers. “Mou… Erio-kun, dame…”

Erio bled his nose. Caro, Annabelle and Lutecia turned into little green monsters of jealousy. “He nose-bled because he thinks Cinque is cuter than us…” Caro growled.

“By the way, Nove,” E said and pointed to the dress she was wearing. “I thought you’d wear yukata as Cinque does.”

Nove blushed and tried covering her bust that was visibly jutting out of the sweater. “I don’t really like wearing flamboyant clothes…” she spoke, referring to Cinque’s yukata. “I… I’d rather wear this kind of dress--”

“NOVE’S HOTNESS IS MADE OF PURE GOLDEN WIN!!!!!!” Erio declared.

Caro Lu Rushe and Annabelle Gato killed Erio Mondial with Sky Uppercut.

Lutecia simply approached the knocked out Erio. Her response to his lechery was to summon Garyuu and commanded it to chase after Erio. With Erio outrunning Garyuu, E arguing with Nove and Hikki blushing when Freya seized his arm, Takeru was the only boy in the group to remain his sanity.

Or so it was.

“Ta… Ke… Ru… Kun!”

The gunslinger boy turned around. He was instantly bathed in nasal blood at the sight of moe Aura and beautiful Frieda. The sight of his girlfriend in yukata was already astounding, but he was totally overwhelmed by the fact that his adoptive mother, his prey turned into the most beautiful woman he had ever come across, and he was knocked out cold due to the unwilling fan service.

“Takeru-kun!” Aura hurriedly approached the blissfully unconscious Takeru and shook his body as wildly as she could. “Takeru-kun! Don’t die on me! Takeru-kun! Takeru-kun!”

“Frieda’s beauty… is over the rating…” Takeru murmured in dizziness.

“Mou! Takeru-kun, what about me?” Aura protested in cute manners.

E, Hikki and Freya approached Takeru. “Comrade Takeru, please report,” Hikki spoke.

“I think he’s sinking,” E replied.

“Poor Takeru,” Freya and Frieda uttered.

Regarding yukata-Cinque, it would somewhat be better if I could wait for FlameSparkz' sketch on her, but it seems I cannot make everyone wait. So......

In Part B, we'll get to see Poseidon revealing the truth about Yutaro and the critical decision he has to make before it all becomes too late.

By the way, I has struck home run. Now where's my prize?

Good thing I'm taking a break from HnG... The service overload is incredibly destructive to attention...

Originally Posted by Saint X

for me it's

all >>>>>>>> AlternateS II

the time, and preparations are now under way

We've frozen the dam thing long enough... TIME FOR SUUPAA KHAAAAA TAIMUUU!!!

(runs)

Originally Posted by Saint X

OMG!!!

Burning Eyes Shana vs Burning Arisa!!!

"urusai! urusai! urusai!" battle?

*runs*

Originally Posted by Saint X

and in line with DT's character introdutions... might as well add some to mine..

Spoiler for GDI: Elite Team: Unknown:

Spoiler for Dike: The Midchildan Patron Goddess of Mages: One of Danaan's Trias:

When in a pinch...


"I Hate You Evil... So DIE!!"

*runs from h4xx police*

REC eh... Random Enforcer Club?

(runs from Solty-blast)

Originally Posted by Keroko

You know... I noticed something in the translation of Vivio's profile.

So not only is Keroko canon, she also lived 300 years ago in the Belkan ages.

So... many... ideas....

Edit: Fals alarm. Humbug meant the present Vivio. Of course, this doesn't mean that I still can't use this. Dual meanings for the win.

Never mind that. Things do get lost in translation...

As for me, this does help a lot, including the downfall of the original Belka Imperium!

EDIT:

WAIT A MINUTE!

If I think I see where you are going, does that mean that Keroko is going to be Kha's spirit mother?! Or Empress Dowager?!?!?!

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Kha

I hope Keroko releases his take on Keroko based on that, and maybe once I find vector-Archer I'll be able to jump in as well.

*tilts head* My take on Keroko? What do you mean by that?

Originally Posted by Kha

Uh huh, and all the more proof that Seiou isn't the real name, but a translation of it... And I insist that Sanckt Kaiser can be translated to God Emperor/Empress in ENGLISH!

God... Emperor....

Originally Posted by Kha

THAT was his charming side...?

Pardon the bluntness... I've no idea about this guy at all... So going by impression...

I think it is. Thrawn is an Imperial Grand Admiral, after all. There's only so much charming you can cram into that, and Thrawn definetly stands at the peak.

Originally Posted by Kha

That last scene hints at it actually.

Yuuno, Nanoha, Vivio and the house pet Arf...

Looks like Erio's not the only person pulling familiar theft...

I still love how berserk they went over a 5 second scene.

Originally Posted by Kha

Never mind that. Things do get lost in translation...

As for me, this does help a lot, including the downfall of the original Belka Imperium!

EDIT:

WAIT A MINUTE!

If I think I see where you are going, does that mean that Keroko is going to be Kha's spirit mother?! Or Empress Dowager?!?!?!

While I'm not sure what you mean with the Empress Dowagar, imagine it like this: I never revealed anything concering Keroko's parents before, she is aparrently powerfull enough to withstand a force that killed every living thing in the area, she and Vivio show a stunning resemblance, Vivio's barrier jacket is 'inspired by one whom she admires and loves' and most illegal magic developments take place on unadministered worlds.

It all fits.

[Dream_Traveller]

Originally Posted by Kha

*a loud scream echoes through the skies*

KHAAAAAA IMPAKUTO!!!

I hope Keroko releases his take on Keroko based on that, and maybe once I find vector-Archer I'll be able to jump in as well.

Looks well

Uh huh, and all the more proof that Seiou isn't the real name, but a translation of it... And I insist that Sanckt Kaiser can be translated to God Emperor/Empress in ENGLISH!

THAT was his charming side...?

Pardon the bluntness... I've no idea about this guy at all... So going by impression...

That last scene hints at it actually.

Yuuno, Nanoha, Vivio and the house pet Arf...

Looks like Erio's not the only person pulling familiar theft...

Actually he will be... to the point of incapacitation, and only Artei and Sophia would be available.



No confusion, is just that as long as Kha isn't at two places at the same time, otherwise we're gonna have to call in Avenger.

We agree here.

I couldn't get most of the Knights () but Shana does right alarms. Like X has mentioned, Urusai fight?

*evil Mekha-nical laughter*

I have spoken.



Good thing I'm taking a break from HnG... The service overload is incredibly destructive to attention...

We've frozen the dam thing long enough... TIME FOR SUUPAA KHAAAAA TAIMUUU!!!

(runs)



REC eh... Random Enforcer Club?

(runs from Solty-blast)

Never mind that. Things do get lost in translation...

As for me, this does help a lot, including the downfall of the original Belka Imperium!

EDIT:

WAIT A MINUTE!

If I think I see where you are going, does that mean that Keroko is going to be Kha's spirit mother?! Or Empress Dowager?!?!?!

Hm, hm. Perhaps this fight will be in order, yes...

And...Keroko as who I think she is to Vivio, after hearing that armor bit?

Odd...

Yet, at the same time, interesting.

@USB: Well, 'tis a shame that no further stage production has been set, but your other works come first. Keep up the good work, good sir!

And, yes, V has...another side in theatrical terms...



@SaintX:

More Solty, hm? Good to see.

I wonder what part those four will play...

EDIT:

To Keroko, what an Empress Dowager is, from ol' Wiki:

Empress Dowager was the title given to the mother of a Chinese, Japanese, Korean, or Vietnamese emperor.

The title was also given occasionally to another woman of the same generation, while a woman from the previous generation was sometimes given the title of Grand Empress Dowager. Numerous empress dowagers held regency during the reign of an underage emperor. Many of the most prominent empress dowagers also extended their control for long periods after the emperor was old enough to govern. This was a source of political turmoil according to traditional view of Chinese history.

[Nightengale]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Short yet nicedly done profile for this loner here Although like Erio pointed out, Neo-Belkan was only created about 10 years pre-StrikerS. Need more details on his profile though.

Well, cartridges and shooting arts which has Belkan nature in them were already used 11 years ago... just not in Intelligent Devices, I presume.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

And all of Nighty's personalities have finally arrived, even Nightdarkness. Will we be seeing him destroy trolls and flamers once Gundam 00 airs?

Nightengil and Nighterman though are

Well, there's also Nighty en Galetannia.

Nighty en Galetannia commands all of you to start watching "Towards the Terra" NOW, WITH ALL YOUR STRENGTH!

It is everything StrikerS can only dream to achieve. In a span of merely 24 episodes, it made a cast of no less than 30 characters shine beautifully, from main, major to side all on their own right, be it the emotionally grabbing to the ass-hats, each one worthy characters on their own right when StrikerS couldn't even do for 10 in 26. It shone life into 3 different worlds and settings, when StrikerS couldn't even make Mid-childa alive. Protagonist, antagonist, everything beautiful, and if your eyes are not wet from the emotional roller coaster in 16-17 and the last 4 episodes, your heart is colder than absolute zero ice.

Best show this year, hands down. Yes, I think it's better than Gurren Lagann by a little bit thus far, so sue me. StrikerS in comparison is like comparing... hell putting these 2 names together is a sin.

Originally Posted by USB500

Spoiler for fan service, you say?????:

“Don’t worry, Cinque… I’ll be gentle…”

“E-Erio-kun… dame! Ittai yo… ah~!”

“ERIO!!!”

“CINQUE!!!”

Everybody rushed to their place. “WHAT THE HELL DO BOTH OF YOU THINK YOU’RE DOING?????!!!!!” Fate and Nove screamed.

Erio looked confused. “What? I’m giving her some massage,” he spoke, his hand rubbing Cinque’s feet. “She twisted her ankle, you see.”

Everybody crashed onto the ground. “So that’s what happened…”

Erio turned to Cinque. “You’re feeling okay now?”

Cinque was gasping for as she nodded. “Thank you, Erio-kun…” she spoke, her face flushing greatly.

“Erio-kun…”

The red-haired boy turned around and saw Caro, Annabelle and Lutecia staring at him in the angriest gaze he thought he could face.

“What?”

Their gaze became droopy. “We twisted our ankle, too…” they murmured.

Erio twitched. “But… but…”

“Erio-kun…” They stared deeply into his eyes, caringly, affectionately, alluringly. Then, in the saddest voice intonation they could muster, they murmured: “…dame?”

There. Is this not enough for you?

Oldest trick in the book.

You should do one where E hears Nove 'massaging' Cinque, and he thinks it's yuri-dom, and jumps in asking if he can join... only to be...

*radio-static*

Originally Posted by USB500

*goes to save all pictures*

Nove-cha~~~~~~n

*Nove >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> USB500*

But that Numbers-Phase Blast consumed 95% of I-XIII energy... needs to go and look for some more.

Originally Posted by Keroko

You know... I noticed something in the translation of Vivio's profile.



So not only is Keroko canon, she also lived 300 years ago in the Belkan ages.

So... many... ideas....

Edit: Fals alarm. Humbug meant the present Vivio. Of course, this doesn't mean that I still can't use this. Dual meanings for the win.

Besides, since Vivio knows Keroko in our fanon, can't you just take it that it's an amalgam of Fate, Nanoha AND Keroko?

So... it can really be dual-meaning in a way.

Originally Posted by Keroko

*tilts head* My take on Keroko? What do you mean by that?

Demonstrate your L33T photoshop skillz, and make a Keroko-profile page based of the StrikerS character page.

I think.

Originally Posted by Keroko

I still love how berserk they went over a 5 second scene.

The funny thing is that 300 didn't even say anything, they cried on their own, until Chaos decides it's funny and goes to poke their lifeless bodies as they try to calm themselves down.

Rational 300s know that that scene means nothing special, but to Yuribears... well, I guess the lack of any legit NFanservice in the last episode pained them.

Originally Posted by Keroko

While I'm not sure what you mean with the Empress Dowagar, imagine it like this: I never revealed anything concering Keroko's parents before, she is aparrently powerfull enough to withstand a force that killed every living thing in the area, she and Vivio show a stunning resemblance, Vivio's barrier jacket is 'inspired by one whom she admires and loves' and most illegal magic developments take place on unadministered worlds.

It all fits.

EDIT : Not to mention the fact that with Sei-oh's genetic data is sent all over places, every evil Tom and Harry probably has a copy of one... yet after so many years, only Vivio is the one that's seemingly successful which implies that there are 'failures' all around worlds on their own right...

It wouldn't be strange if there's one who while did not inherit the Armor, however inherits the natural instinct of a fighter, the natural biological composition that allows her to have something 'foreign' inside their bodies... and a genetic screw-up made her hair red...

[Jimmy C]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Not to mention the fact that with Sei-oh's genetic data is sent all over places, every evil Tom and Harry probably has a copy of one...

Something I pointed out in the ep20 discussion already, I'm proud to say.

It wouldn't be strange if there's one who while did not inherit the Armor, however inherits the natural instinct of a fighter, the natural biological composition that allows her to have something 'foreign' inside their bodies... and a genetic screw-up made her hair red...

I think I know what you're implying, but there's a problem in that the genetic data was only stolen 10 years ago. I get the impression that this particular someone has been alive for longer than that?

[Nightengale]

Originally Posted by Jimmy C

I think I know what you're implying, but there's a problem in that the genetic data was only stolen 10 years ago. I get the impression that this particular someone has been alive for longer than that?

Oops, I forgot that point.

Well, it's Keroko's game to pad his character with supporting canon info, not mine. I'm just waiting for SS03 for the Rein-related Ion Canons, and I already got the Knight Garb thing going for my character's techniques. I'm just giving reassurance to the counter-punch by humbug's mistranslation and Keroko's misinterpretation.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

The funny thing is that 300 didn't even say anything, they cried on their own, until Chaos decides it's funny and goes to poke their lifeless bodies as they try to calm themselves down.

Yes, it was stupid. Yes, it was immature. Yes, it's probably not worth the warning message.

But damn did it do wonders for 20 weeks of build up frustration.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Rational 300s know that that scene means nothing special, but to Yuribears... well, I guess the lack of any legit NFanservice in the last episode pained them.

Yuri-Nazis.

And though we know it's nothing special... It's still... To a microscopic extend... Kinda nice...

... Sort off.


P.S - Halo 3 is wicked sick !

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Demonstrate your L33T photoshop skillz, and make a Keroko-profile page based of the StrikerS character page.

I think.

Ah, I'll go do that then.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

EDIT : Not to mention the fact that with Sei-oh's genetic data is sent all over places, every evil Tom and Harry probably has a copy of one... yet after so many years, only Vivio is the one that's seemingly successful which implies that there are 'failures' all around worlds on their own right...

It wouldn't be strange if there's one who while did not inherit the Armor, however inherits the natural instinct of a fighter, the natural biological composition that allows her to have something 'foreign' inside their bodies... and a genetic screw-up made her hair red...

Originally Posted by Jimmy C

I think I know what you're implying, but there's a problem in that the genetic data was only stolen 10 years ago. I get the impression that this particular someone has been alive for longer than that?

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Oops, I forgot that point.

Well, it's Keroko's game to pad his character with supporting canon info, not mine. I'm just waiting for SS03 for the Rein-related Ion Canons, and I already got the Knight Garb thing going for my character's techniques. I'm just giving reassurance to the counter-punch by humbug's mistranslation and Keroko's misinterpretation.

I've got that one covered. We all know that Vivio's genetic data got stolen 10 years ago, but we also know that it only takes someone from the royal bloodline to move the Cradle, not neccisarily Vivio. So who is to say Jail did not get his hands on other material before, say, another member of the Royal Familly? He did mention there were 'a lot of failures' and science is a trial-and-error busines, it would not suprise me if he made an atempt himself.

The current version (subject to edit) is that Jail got his hands on genetic data of the royal familly, from which he created Keroko on earth, 15 years before StrikerS. However, due to Neltharion's unfortunate arival, the lab was destroyed and the sample he had created was corrupted, preventing him from inserting a Relic and tainiting the genetic data. This forced him to abandon the location on earth and seek out another source of genetic information, and since Keroko was now pretty much worthless to him, he abondoned her.

Keroko survived, but only because the Armour of the Saint King shielded the worst of the corrupted energies. Constantly keeping the energies at bay required the full concentration of the armour, which explains why Keroko is so pathetic at defensive magic.

I'm still working out who Keroko's original used to be, but as it stands it's going to be someone whom the original Vivio admired and loves. Possibly an older sister.

Hehe, this is going to make writing Rescue Mission 3 sooo much easier, thank you Seven Arcs!

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Keroko

*tilts head* My take on Keroko? What do you mean by that?

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Demonstrate your L33T photoshop skillz, and make a Keroko-profile page based of the StrikerS character page.

I think.

That's what I meant indeed.

Originally Posted by Keroko

God... Emperor....

Oh yes, I remembered that you did a spittake when I revealed Kha's "unleashed" armor. I've since decided to go ahead with it.

Originally Posted by Keroko

I think it is. Thrawn is an Imperial Grand Admiral, after all. There's only so much charming you can cram into that, and Thrawn definetly stands at the peak.

Ah kk.

Originally Posted by Keroko

I still love how berserk they went over a 5 second scene.

Deshou? They'd kill themselves off, leaving us alone to conquer the fanon world!

Originally Posted by Nightengale

EDIT : Not to mention the fact that with Sei-oh's genetic data is sent all over places, every evil Tom and Harry probably has a copy of one... yet after so many years, only Vivio is the one that's seemingly successful which implies that there are 'failures' all around worlds on their own right...

It wouldn't be strange if there's one who while did not inherit the Armor, however inherits the natural instinct of a fighter, the natural biological composition that allows her to have something 'foreign' inside their bodies... and a genetic screw-up made her hair red...

THIS IS A GREAT IDEA!

One inherits one of her powers (Vivio), one inherited her fighting instinct (Keroko), and one inherited her spirit (Kha)!

And not only just that; this makes Keroko and Kha cousins, if not siblings!

Originally Posted by Keroko

While I'm not sure what you mean with the Empress Dowagar, imagine it like this: I never revealed anything concering Keroko's parents before, she is aparrently powerfull enough to withstand a force that killed every living thing in the area, she and Vivio show a stunning resemblance, Vivio's barrier jacket is 'inspired by one whom she admires and loves' and most illegal magic developments take place on unadministered worlds.

It all fits.

I meant that Keroko is the Empress before Kha, as implied by DT's wiki.

But interesting how two bids for the throne came from the same person: Vivio. My justification was a hint from Nighty actually:

Spoiler for Portrait of an Empress:

The Portrait of an Empress

Spoiler for Author's Notes...:

Think about it. Vivio's green eye (genetic cloning screw up made the other one lose its pigment, turning it red like an albino), her golden mane, Barrier of the Saint King...

In fact, you could say Chibi-Sakura is actually the playful, babyish part of Vivio's soul, and Vivio in turn is Sakura's daughter. In fact, I've even a crack dream sequence of Kha's visions involving Syaoran, Sakura and Vivio!!!

And so, here was the theory borne from Nighty's crack. Barring some minor canon adjustments after I've done watching StrikerS and reading the manga, this would become Sakura's background when I get around to doing it.

Brief Background Prototype

Sakura Zaki was born as another name, Arthura Pendragon. But due to Saber's actions in the future, the Servant's wish was granted: Arthura never chose to pull Caliburn from the stone.

And so instead, her cousin of Alhazred descent, H***** S******* , returned from her endless travels where she had become known as the Blau Glotten and picked up the blade. That set Midchilda on a completely different trajectory from Terra: overtechnology, magic discovery, sentokijin production, the whole nine yards Earth was denied of.

This timeline's Saber felt guilty, even though the chosen Saint King withdrew Caliburn willingly in her stead, for making her sworn sister responsible for her burden, and vowed to be Sanckt Kaiser's eternal Knight. Since H***** was near-immortal, the God Empress gave her blade and her sheath Avalon to Arthura, giving Arthura the same immortality as her while she and Merlin forged the improved sword, the Armed Device X-Caliber (Excaliber was never forged), for herself.

The God Empress carried her blade prominently as a symbol of sovereign regalia; Arthura however, to hide her true identity, used her bloodline magic Barrier of the Saint King to turn her blade invisible and assumed a new identity, choosing to name herself after the Cherry Blossom tree, hence her current name Sakura Zaki.

And so, for close to one perfect century, Sanckt Kaiser and Sakura ruled what would become the Holy Belka Imperiallum.

The Vidalia Heresy

In a way, Primarch Vidalia was correct. The Seiou wasn't the true Seiou, but a stand-in. On those grounds, H***** did not have the divine upper hand that always ensured her victory and was gravely wounded by Vidalia. But that was not before heartbroken H***** managed to slay and cast out her favorite son. The God Empress, knowing that her passing would be the demise of the Empire, then sealed her fading body in the Golden Throne. Sakura, who had been out fighting the Mid-Childa alliance as well as her own mixed feelings for Syaoran the Prince of Midea, arrived too late to save her friend. She went into a frenzy, and for 7 days and 7 nights, slaughtered Heresy on Childea relentlessly, until "the sky turned gray and the fields were dyed black with tainted blood."

As a sign of her divine heritage, Sakura single-handed destroyed a doomstar-class warship in one slash, earning her nickname in Ancient Belka legends as the Mooncleaver.

On the 7th night, as the last bastion of Heresy fell under her blade, Caliburn broke. That woke Sakura from her bloodlust and she was quickly overcome with dispair; the breaking of Caliburn was a sign that the rule of Belka had come to an end.

True enough, in the months that ensued, the Darth Lords of Chaos swept through once-Ordered Space, plunging all into an ever-deepening abyss of self-destruction, as maddened brother turned on maddened brother. At the same time on Midea, the High Temple, long stifled by the God Empress, had become a powerful political entity, further complicating matters for the dying Saint King and her Knight.

Finally, no longer able to see her people suffer for her selfishness, Sakura asked for, and is granted, the X-Caliber and would begin a campaign to save a doomed kingdom.

H***** then declared to Sakura of the Adeptae Belkarum and Brother-Captain Raito of the Licht von Belka:

"In time, the will of the Naaru will see a new Kaiser, the Star Child, born to lead the New Belka into another era of even greater Light."

"The Star Child would be of Alhazredian descent like herself, but will have royal Belka blood like Arthura's running through his/her veins."

"The Star Child would be the perfect combination of two worlds..."

With that, sealed herself and the Golden Throne in Closed Space, leaving the ship that bore H***** to Midea, the Cradle, and the four Tausend Items in Sakura's hands.

The Last Stand

During the course of the Crusade, Avalon would be stolen and lost, and while delivering the Tausend Items to the Mid-Childa Alliance, Sakura was ambushed by six hundred and sixty six Charters of the Chaos Legion. Even the Fallen Titan Sageras himself came down upon Sakura in an attempt to crush her.

For the first time, and the last time, Sakura fought for her people like the Empress she was born to be.

Sakura and the few Cleric-knights who stood by her side to the very end, defeated the Legion in warpspace and forced Sageras to retreat and gather his forces for a second assault.

However, the Cradle had crashed onto Midea. The Tausend Items, 4 legendary Devices able to restore the Seiou and repel Chaos, were lost in the warp forever. The last of the Licht von Belka had perished valiantly, and Sakura herself, without Avalon, lay adrift in space, mortally wounded and knowing that her last ditch effort had only bought Humanity a few months of time.

Syaoran only managed to warp to Sakura's side just as she was drawing her last breaths while she dragged her broken body back to the Materium. There, Sakura learned that Syaoran had discovered who she really was, and that did not change his love for her.

But Sakura knew it was too late for her or her people. While she entrusted the future of Belka in Midchilda hands, Sakura swore by the Light that if only she could have a second chance (it would be the third chance from our POV) she would want to once again have the strength to protect the people that she had so wilfully let down.

And like before, the Naaru granted that wish. In time, Sakura would rise again, as the sword of a Cleric of a new era.

The Implosion

Without any bastion of law or order, the Imperiallum collapsed spontaneously. The Midchilda Alliance moved to fill the power vacuum and restore order to known Space, but it still took them years to get it done.

Before then, Syaoran buried Sakura in a grand sacophagus, wrapped in parchment, and declared that "Here lies the Sanckt Kaiser of Belka". Three days later, the coffin was found open and empty, leaving only the bloodstained parchment we now see enshrined in Monarch Church, and from which Vivio was cloned.

The Messiah of New Belka

In the 71st year of the 1st millenium of the Modern Calender, the promised Second Coming of Sanckt Kaiser occured. However, as Sakura was unaware that she had been called Sanckt Kaiser post-mortem, she was too ashamed of her living self and continued to use her pseudonym. From within the Tausend Kreuz, Sakura watched over Kha and the soul of her spirit daughter Sak-chan, guiding them and fighting by them, and through them hopefully seeked atonement for her sins.

The Hand of the Naaru

As time passed, the Naaru sought more and more challenges to test and grow their new champion. And with each pasing day, Sakura began to realize that Kha was growing closer, and closer to the prophesized Star Child. However, so did Keroko at that time, leaving her unable to make a firm conclusion. Vivio's appearance only made matters worse and Sakura continued to ponder about these three children and their possible links to her friend's words...

Only time will tell who is the Star Child...

Oooh yeah, I've been high on cheese crack ever since Nighty responded to me whining about coloration screw up.

EDIT:

AAAAAAH! KEROKO!!! Did we just contradict each other?!

My theory was that Keroko must've descended from a lost Primarch, but that might or might not work!

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Kha

That's what I meant indeed.

Working on it, editting Vivio is a sinch. It's the backpage that poses the eyespins.

Originally Posted by Kha

Oh yes, I remembered that you did a spittake when I revealed Kha's "unleashed" armor. I've since decided to go ahead with it.

You WHAT?!

You're making Kha the Chaos god of order?!?!

Originally Posted by Kha

THIS IS A GREAT IDEA!

One inherits one of her powers (Vivio), one inherited her fighting instinct (Keroko), and one inherited her spirit (Kha)!

And not only just that; this makes Keroko and Kha cousins, if not siblings!

The current idea already makes Keroko and Vivio pretty much sisters, can't see why Kha should be left out.

Originally Posted by Kha

I meant that Keroko is the Empress before Kha, as implied by DT's wiki.

Hmm, let me dub on that a bit more. Thoughts are still highly subjective to crack.

Originally Posted by Kha

But interesting how two bids for the throne came from the same person: Vivio. My justification was a hint from Nighty actually:

Spoiler for Portrait of an Empress:

The Portrait of an Empress

Spoiler for Author's Notes...:

Think about it. Vivio's green eye (genetic cloning screw up made the other one lose its pigment, turning it red like an albino), her golden mane, Barrier of the Saint King...

In fact, you could say Chibi-Sakura is actually the playful, babyish part of Vivio's soul, and Vivio in turn is Sakura's daughter. In fact, I've even a crack dream sequence of Kha's visions involving Syaoran, Sakura and Vivio!!!

And so, here was the theory borne from Nighty's crack. Barring some minor canon adjustments after I've done watching StrikerS and reading the manga, this would become Sakura's background when I get around to doing it.

Brief Background Prototype

Sakura Zaki was born as another name, Arthura Pendragon. But due to Saber's actions in the future, the Servant's wish was granted: Arthura never chose to pull Caliburn from the stone.

And so instead, her cousin of Alhazred descent, H***** S******* , returned from her endless travels where she had become known as the Blau Glotten and picked up the blade. That set Midchilda on a completely different trajectory from Terra: overtechnology, magic discovery, sentokijin production, the whole nine yards Earth was denied of.

This timeline's Saber felt guilty, even though the chosen Saint King withdrew Caliburn willingly in her stead, for making her sworn sister responsible for her burden, and vowed to be Sanckt Kaiser's eternal Knight. Since H***** was near-immortal, the God Empress gave her blade and her sheath Avalon to Arthura, giving Arthura the same immortality as her while she and Merlin forged the improved sword, the Armed Device X-Caliber (Excaliber was never forged), for herself.

The God Empress carried her blade prominently as a symbol of sovereign regalia; Arthura however, to hide her true identity, used her bloodline magic Barrier of the Saint King to turn her blade invisible and assumed a new identity, choosing to name herself after the Cherry Blossom tree, hence her current name Sakura Zaki.

And so, for close to one perfect century, Sanckt Kaiser and Sakura ruled what would become the Holy Belka Imperiallum.

The Vidalia Heresy

In a way, Primarch Vidalia was correct. The Seiou wasn't the true Seiou, but a stand-in. On those grounds, H***** did not have the divine upper hand that always ensured her victory and was gravely wounded by Vidalia. But that was not before heartbroken H***** managed to slay and cast out her favorite son. The God Empress, knowing that her passing would be the demise of the Empire, then sealed her fading body in the Golden Throne. Sakura, who had been out fighting the Mid-Childa alliance as well as her own mixed feelings for Syaoran the Prince of Midea, arrived too late to save her friend. She went into a frenzy, and for 7 days and 7 nights, slaughtered Heresy on Childea relentlessly, until "the sky turned gray and the fields were dyed black with tainted blood."

As a sign of her divine heritage, Sakura single-handed destroyed a doomstar-class warship in one slash, earning her nickname in Ancient Belka legends as the Mooncleaver.

On the 7th night, as the last bastion of Heresy fell under her blade, Caliburn broke. That woke Sakura from her bloodlust and she was quickly overcome with dispair; the breaking of Caliburn was a sign that the rule of Belka had come to an end.

True enough, in the months that ensued, the Darth Lords of Chaos swept through once-Ordered Space, plunging all into an ever-deepening abyss of self-destruction, as maddened brother turned on maddened brother. At the same time on Midea, the High Temple, long stifled by the God Empress, had become a powerful political entity, further complicating matters for the dying Saint King and her Knight.

Finally, no longer able to see her people suffer for her selfishness, Sakura asked for, and is granted, the X-Caliber and would begin a campaign to save a doomed kingdom.

H***** then declared to Sakura of the Adeptae Belkarum and Brother-Captain Raito of the Licht von Belka:

"In time, the will of the Naaru will see a new Kaiser, the Star Child, born to lead the New Belka into another era of even greater Light."

"The Star Child would be of Alhazredian descent like herself, but will have royal Belka blood like Arthura's running through his/her veins."

"The Star Child would be the perfect combination of two worlds..."

With that, sealed herself and the Golden Throne in Closed Space, leaving the ship that bore H***** to Midea, the Cradle, and the four Tausend Items in Sakura's hands.

The Last Stand

During the course of the Crusade, Avalon would be stolen and lost, and while delivering the Tausend Items to the Mid-Childa Alliance, Sakura was ambushed by six hundred and sixty six Charters of the Chaos Legion. Even the Fallen Titan Sageras himself came down upon Sakura in an attempt to crush her.

For the first time, and the last time, Sakura fought for her people like the Empress she was born to be.

Sakura and the few Cleric-knights who stood by her side to the very end, defeated the Legion in warpspace and forced Sageras to retreat and gather his forces for a second assault.

However, the Cradle had crashed onto Midea. The Tausend Items, 4 legendary Devices able to restore the Seiou and repel Chaos, were lost in the warp forever. The last of the Licht von Belka had perished valiantly, and Sakura herself, without Avalon, lay adrift in space, mortally wounded and knowing that her last ditch effort had only bought Humanity a few months of time.

Syaoran only managed to warp to Sakura's side just as she was drawing her last breaths while she dragged her broken body back to the Materium. There, Sakura learned that Syaoran had discovered who she really was, and that did not change his love for her.

But Sakura knew it was too late for her or her people. While she entrusted the future of Belka in Midchilda hands, Sakura swore by the Light that if only she could have a second chance (it would be the third chance from our POV) she would want to once again have the strength to protect the people that she had so wilfully let down.

And like before, the Naaru granted that wish. In time, Sakura would rise again, as the sword of a Cleric of a new era.

The Implosion

Without any bastion of law or order, the Imperiallum collapsed spontaneously. The Midchilda Alliance moved to fill the power vacuum and restore order to known Space, but it still took them years to get it done.

Before then, Syaoran buried Sakura in a grand sacophagus, wrapped in parchment, and declared that "Here lies the Sanckt Kaiser of Belka". Three days later, the coffin was found open and empty, leaving only the bloodstained parchment we now see enshrined in Monarch Church, and from which Vivio was cloned.

The Messiah of New Belka

In the 71st year of the 1st millenium of the Modern Calender, the promised Second Coming of Sanckt Kaiser occured. However, as Sakura was unaware that she had been called Sanckt Kaiser post-mortem, she was too ashamed of her living self and continued to use her pseudonym. From within the Tausend Kreuz, Sakura watched over Kha and the soul of her spirit daughter Sak-chan, guiding them and fighting by them, and through them hopefully seeked atonement for her sins.

The Hand of the Naaru

As time passed, the Naaru sought more and more challenges to test and grow their new champion. And with each pasing day, Sakura began to realize that Kha was growing closer, and closer to the prophesized Star Child. However, so did Keroko at that time, leaving her unable to make a firm conclusion. Vivio's appearance only made matters worse and Sakura continued to ponder about these three children and their possible links to her friend's words...

Only time will tell who is the Star Child...

Oooh yeah, I've been high on cheese crack ever since Nighty responded to me whining about coloration screw up.

EDIT:

AAAAAAH! KEROKO!!! Did we just contradict each other?!

My theory was that Keroko must've descended from a lost Primarch, but that might or might not work!

No wait, it can work. Primarchs are basically artificial children created by the God Empress herself, right? So instead, the original Keroko was one of those primarchs, making her the original Vivio's sister. Of course, the original Vivio would look up to the original Keroko with her being a general of the God Empress army (and thereby linking to the admired in the profile). This also explains Keroko's natural combat and leading instincts, is all genetical.

Keroko probably would have died somewhere in the war, possibly holding back an enourmous force spurring forth from the warp, and hundreds of years after her death, Jail found the genetical data. Neltharion arived, screwing up the original plan, but since Jail found the genetical data of the true heir, it mattered little.

Oh yes, the crack is high indeed.

[Tormenk]

Revised and toned down to better fit what I think is a more accurate profile.

P.S:
I'm using the image as a visual reference only. It is in no way a port of the person howsoever.

Spoiler for The Black Fist:

Basic Information
Name: Gen Ealin
Nickname: The Black Fist
Gender: Male
Home World: Mid Childa
Birth date: August 1st
Age: 45 as of MC 075
Relatives: Deceased
Eye color: brown
Hair color: black
Height: 182cm

Mage Information
Magic Type: Neo-Belkan, with strong Mid-type influence
Magic Color: blueish-black
Mage Rank: S
Combat style: close range
Element Affiliation: None
Device Name: Eve and Avatar
Device Type: Armed Device (Eve), Intelligent Device (Avatar)


Background/History:

Gen Ealin was orphaned at the age of 12 following the disastrous aftermath of a meteor striking Mid Childa’s southern continent, taking an entire island along with it and leaving a crater on Mid Childa visible from space. A school trip to the capital had spared him the same fate as his parents, while his parents and his island home were vaporized. With his parents’ death, he had no means of support and joined the Mid Childa Ground Forces.

As a recruit, Gen was a loner who did not get along with others, his parents death leaving a permanent mark on him. Nevertheless, he was a driven cadet who produced excellent results, as noted by many of his instructors. Attaining the ground mage rank of A at age 14, Gen was not happy with his current status as merely part of the ground forces, one which he found to be lacking. Training and practicing in between missions for the mage tests, he manage to attain AAA status in 3 years by the time he left the ground forces, opting to join the Navy as a Enforcer.

A full fledged Enforcer with 6 years of field missions under his belt, Gen was still the loner he was but by now he had a high handed approach to whatever he did, namely during his missions dealing with the common weapons smuggler or space pirate. His actions were questioned several times by his officers but as he likes to say, “The ends justify the means”. The higher ups overlooked his actions after reviewing his excellent track record in the field and the many successful missions he undertook.


Coincidentally, a year later, Gen was one of the many Enforcers onboard the TSAB ship Hestia, guarding the sealed Book of Darkness and its captured master. Gen was guarding the captured mage when he detected a device the prisoner had managed to somehow retain despite his arrest and under heavy restrain.

Confiscating the device, Gen was on the way to the bridge to report the device he found when the Book went berserk. Chaos ensued as the rampaging Book of Darkness went on to rapidly consume and take over the control of the Hestia. Admiral Clyde Harlaown orders the evacuation of the Hestia. Gen escapes the Hestia before Admiral Gil Graham, commander of the convoy guarding the Book, gives the order to fire the Arc En Ciel and destroys the infested Hestia with Admiral Harlaown and the Book’s master onboard.

Gen returns to TSAB HQ shortly after the incident to find out more about the Book of Darkness, which has plagued the TSAB for decades. Searching through the databanks of the HQ regarding information on the Book, Gen had uncovered a file hidden deep within hidden archives, dated MC 042.

The Book of Darkness’ last known incarnation had materialized on Mid Childa itself. The Book was running amok on an island near the southern continent and it was decided the risk of the Book of Darkness running loose on and consuming Mid Childa was too great and the sole measure of containment was to destroy it with one of the Arc En Ciel fitted warships currently near the TSAB’s home planet.

The orders were given and the shot fired. Hundreds of kilometers of the planet surface were eradicated in an instant, killing thousands of people along with it. The repercussions of a failed containment of the Book and the firing of such a weapon that wiped out so many lives were unthinkable, hence the people involved decided on a massive cover-up, citing a small meteor had struck the island. The local media was used to great effect to enforce that the local populace held the general impression. Citizens of Mid Childa mourned the passing of so many and happening of a great tragedy; unaware of the lies they were fed.

Gen held the same expression throughout his perusal of the file but he was burning with cold fury inside. The monstrosity of such a fabrication and the utter ineffectiveness of the TSAB at handling the Book combined was a unforgivable mistake, his parents among those who paid the ultimate price of such a mistake, when it was no fault of theirs. Gen decided to track and strike down the people who had been involved in the incident 12 years ago. He would make those responsible pay for their crimes and their lies. He no longer had spare time, devoting all his efforts and resources available to finding out who was responsible, finding out their names and tracking their current whereabouts, in the days to come that he might have his complete revenge fulfilled.

Ironically, 4 years after the last Book of Darkness incident, Gen was given the distinction of being a “Striker”, by the very same TSAB he had promised to wreak vengeance upon. Names still eluded him at this point as to who were the real culprits. There was no complete record of the incident so many years ago and he had to resort to hacking and digging through the many databanks scattered through out the administered worlds to gather the necessary information. Progress was slow but Gen was patient. Meanwhile he continued his role as a TSAB lackey to great lengths, even getting promoted to Captain during this period of time.

7 years later, news of the permanent sealing of the Book of Darkness spread throughout the TSAB. Gen’s interest was caught by the fact that the fearsome Book had been sealed away by three mages from the 97th non-administered world known as “Earth”. Gen had applauded the 3 young mages for their incredible feat but at the same time, was deeply disgusted by the TSAB’s total incompetence, letting the Book run amok again and relying on outsiders to finish their work.

A year later, Gen began to take an active interest to the “Neo-Belkan” magic system , attracted by the ideal conditions with close range combat in mind and the focus on anti-personnel attacks and spells that were tuned towards boosting and augmenting both mages and devices in melee combat. Most promising of all was the cartridge system installed on the newly developed Armed Devices, which allowed for instantaneous increase in magic power.

Gen began training in the Neo-Belkan system, at the same time developing his device assembly and modification skills, developing an Armed Device fitted to his personal needs. By the end of twelve months, Gen’s device reached completion, a pair of gauntlets he named “Eve”. Shortly after Eve’s completion, Gen successfully completed his next mage test, using Eve and the Neo-Belkan magic system to great proficiency.

MC 067 June 12th was recorded as the disappearance of Gen on his home world. Search efforts were futile and he was marked as AWOL. Unknown to others, Gen was preparing to strike down the culprits at the annual conference taking place at Ground Forces Central, all of them who were to be conveniently gathered like lamp to the slaughter for him.

MC 067 September 12th marked a terrible day in the history of Mid Childa. Gen Ealin had slipped past security personnel to arrive at the conference nearly unopposed, save for the few measly ground force grunts, as he literally crushed them like insects. Gen stormed into the conference room, going straight for the culprits, gutting them with Eve at full power. Those inside could only bear witness as Gen slaughtered 6 high-ranking officials, helpless as devices were forbidden within GFC. His revenge wrought, Gen sought his escape, leaving a trail of bloody bodies in his wake. Gen then escaped off world quickly with a preset dimensional teleport spell.

Navy Enforcers sent out to track and apprehend Gen were either killed or heavily injured in their attempts to pursue and capture him. By the 3rd month of his escape, the pursuers had completely lost trace of the Black Fist, as they took to calling him because of the pure black color of his device Eva, which he uses to take out many of his pursuers.

Over the years, Gen has been spotted on many planets. Their target proved to be adept at evading them or quickly escaped even when he was cornered. As of the current date, his whereabouts and motives remain unknown.


Personality/Behavior
Brusque to the point of being rude, Gen was a person who others kept at arm’s length. He spoke little and when he did, it was either to respond to orders or to insult the random person who drew his ire. His cold and unchanging demeanor unnerved many of his peers who resorted to outcast him from any events. This was fine by him, as Gen viewed many of them to be naïve and believed human relationships to be fragile matters, preferring to hone his skills instead of wasting time in the company of others. When not in missions or training, Gen was often by his lonesome reading a book or off to the vast mountain regions of Mid Childa to take in the natural scenery. Other than that, his only other notable interests are in philosophy and music.

Gen maintained his uncaring attitude throughout his adult life and into his work life as an
Enforcer. After returning from the Book of Darkness incident of MC 054, he became visibly more irritable and displayed a growing aggressive streak both in and out of combat.

Likes: Silence, rain, nature, to be alone, crossing his hands in front of him to cover his mouth when sitting down
Dislikes: Noise, crowds, for someone to call his name, idealistic people

Fighting Style
Suffering in range and reach when engaging in close combat compared to other combatants favoring weapons such as swords and spears, Gen’s prefers fast and hard-hitting single strikes rather than agile blows. Being a experienced user of the Mid system before he switched over to Neo-Belka, he is able to fight on par with mages in aerial combat or range engagements. He is still much suited for fighting in enclosed spaces and urban environments though.

Barrier Jacket
Orange-tinted glasses. A black round-collared long sleeved jacket with gold highlights on the sleeves, shoulders and linings reaching all the way to the back of is knees. A black sleeveless vest covers his body. A belt containing 24 cartridges. Loose black pants that go all the way into his combat boots complete the set.

Intelligent Device: Avatar
The device was fashioned after the golden cross on the infamous Book of Darkness. Interrogating the mage under torture and death threats, he managed to get the vital information he wanted. The device was created to replicate the Book of Darkness impressive abilities, which encompassed the ability to capture Linker Cores to fill its pages, the Guardian Knight System, the Defense Program and of course its ability to reincarnate for all eternity.

The current master was skilled in device creations besides being a powerful mage; he had tried to replicate the Book but failed due to the standards of current technology and the immense complexity of the Ancient Belkan magic and technology which was applied to the creation of the Book. Still, the mage was able to recreate two aspects of the Book using Mid Childian technology and magic. First was the enormous storage capability of spells and programs and second was the function to channel and store large amounts of mana into the device.

Shortly after going back to active service, Gen had discovered the proper usage of the device he had in possession. The “Avatar”, as he had named it, serves to augment a mage’s prowess through more efficient handling and processing of spells, ensuring a more refined output. Adding to that was the ability to store more spells than any other storage or intelligent device known. Avatar also serves to regulate and control the flow of mana into Eva when Gen is using more demanding spells such as Bloody Blades, Alkeid Buster.

The unique aspect of Avatar would be the method it acquires and process mana. Normal devices would channel mana from the mage and supply it to form the spell desired. Avatar could absorb and store residual mana from its surroundings into its chambers, albeit at a rate slow enough to discount this property in combat. Gen instead channels his own mana into Avatar for storage, providing a larger reserve possible. This lengthens the magical stamina of Gen in combat quite a fair bit, since he mostly sticks to melee spells, which are less demanding compared to the battery and buster spells common among Mid-mages and also acts as an external storage device of mana, similar to the Card system, which the user inputs mana into a card-shaped device with a pre-programmed spell but available only as one time usage.

Avatar's mana chambers has a finite capacity but Gen has to be careful to abstain from combat on days when he is using Avatar to store mana since the process of channeling mana from the Linker Core into a device drains him substantially, ranging from mild side effects of headaches to more serious signs of fatigue. Also possible is the dangerous effect of "burn out", the permanent condition where the Linker Core is damaged by drawing out mana more than it is safe to do so, so much so the Linker Core is rendered unable to produce mana for usage anymore.

Gen had the misfortune to have a taste of it, after being confronted by 6 Enforcers, shortly after storing mana into Avatar. The ensuing fight had taken all he had to finish them off and escape. He spent the next few days in tremendous pain, unable to draw on any more mana from his Linker Core, for fear of the massive feedback into his system.

Gen now is careful to secure a location where he can hide when he wants to store mana into Avatar, often resting for a full day when he does so.

Storage form
Avatar takes the form of a card with the exact golden cross of the Book of Darkness on its front. The rest of the card is a pitch black.

Device form
Takes the form of a black visor with golden framings


Armed Device: Eve
Eve was created while Gen was still within the TSAB as a Striker. Gen created Eve to take the form of gauntlets, with sharp claw-like edges on the end of each finger and a sharp length of metal reaching all the way to the elbow. Fitted with cartridge slots on each gauntlet, Gen uses Eve to great effect when in melee combat, crushing opponents’ defenses to quickly beat them into submission. Eve is also able to extend its reach on command. A nasty surprise that has caught many unprepared before.

Eve, being an Armed Device, is unable to channel the energy needed to form massive bombardment or buster spells as compared to her Storage or Intelligent devices counterparts. Gen’s options at mid to long range are severely limited by this but he makes up by programming new spells that enable him to shorten the distance quickly and punish with a enhanced Eve or at least to bring his short range spells available to him. Each gauntlet can store up to 4 cartridges at once.

Storage Form
Black gloves with a single diamond on the back of the glove

Device Form
Eve sets up as a pair of clawed armor gauntlets, covering from fingers all the way to the elbow, also known as Gauntlet Form. Eva's core takes the form of a red diamond inset to the back of each hand

Blade Form
Eva now sports triple retractable blades from the wrist, each blade nearly half a meter in length. Requires one cartridge to change to this form.

Claw Form
Eve's Full Drive. Requires two cartridges to change into this form. Eve is significantly bulked up here and has heavy armoring all the way to the shoulders, ending in a fin-like exhaust point on each side. The finger parts are now longer and end in sharp blade-like claws with a charging element in the center of each palm.

Ability: Blocker
Blocker is activated when Eve is successful in using a barrier or shield spell to block an attack, be it a melee attack or range spell. The energy that is used to form the protection spell is instantly absorbed back into Eva and is used to boost Eva’s power for the next attack or spell and to a very slight extent, Gen’s movement speed for the next 5 seconds.


Spells


Movement

Sonic Move
Increases the user’s speed dramatically (but only temporarily) to the point where it cannot be followed by the human eye.

Sonic Step
Increases the user’s speed as much as Sonic Move does. Has a shorter travel distance but allows for consecutive Sonic Steps with a delay of 2 seconds in between each Step.

Rusher
Boosts the user’s movement speed by a quarter up to a minute. Using Sonic Move or Sonic Step however dispels Rusher’s effects on the caster.

Defensive

Defender
An auto-guard field spell that wraps around the mage.
Defense: AA

Defender Plus
Simple but sturdy barrier with slightly higher defensive strength and larger area than the average barrier spell.
Defense: AA+
Area: four meters

Triangle Shield
A rotating shield with the Belkan spell sigils is materialized. Singular direction only but has a longer reach.
Defense: AA
Area: two meter area in front of caster

Iron Wall
Powerful barrier spell that materializes as a dome while on ground or a sphere in air. Useful against long lasting bombardment or buster spells.
Defense: AAA
Area: radius of three meters from the caster as the center

Offensive spells

Defense Shatter
A specialized spell for breaking down the defensive spells. Energy is concentrated onto the point of impact to break down the defensive spell quickly. Effective on barrier, shield and field defensive spells.
Power: AA
Range: Melee

Bloody Blade
A battery attack spell, similar to spells like Stinger Blade and Plasma Lancer. Energy blades of pure black are form and directed towards a single target. The blades are either used as piercing weapons or detonated upon impact. Gen has no control after its release so it can only travel in a single direction. Maximum of eight blades per cast
Power: B
Speed: A
Control: AA+
Range: B+

Bloody Blade: Termination Shift
Up to 48 Bloody Blades are conjured and directed towards an area.
Power: A+
Speed: A
Control: AAA
Range: B+

Tracker
A fast bolt of energy that Gen controls to ambush opponents once he has them tied up. Up to three can be formed with the assistance of both devices.

Power: A
Speed: AA
Control: AA~S
Range: A+

Imbue
Charges Eva with magical energy, improving the power of each strike. One cartridge is used up maintaining 30seconds of the spell.
Power: A
Speed: A
Range: Melee

Crushing Grip
Gen uses Eva to execute a tight hold on whatever he is holding and discharges large amount of magical energy into the object. The discharge can disrupt devices and render them less effective over a period of time and usually has the side effect of crushing whichever part of the device it is. When used on a mage, it can disorientate or even knockout the mage, depending on the amount of energy discharged.
Power: B~AA-
Speed: AA
Range: Melee
Control: AAA

Black Fist
Eva is charged with a large amount of energy for a single strike. Consecutive strikes are possible with the expenditure of one cartridge per strike.
Power: AA
Speed: A
Range: Melee
Control: AA+

Progressive Edge
Not usable in Gauntlet Form. The blades or claws start to vibrate at very high frequency, enabling the blades to cut through solid objects easily and break down magical defenses more easily. One cartridge maintains the effect for 60 seconds.
Power: A+
Speed: AA
Range: Melee
Control: A+

Alkeid Buster
Gen’s buster spell. Channeled by Eva alone, the spell is produced as a wave of energy much like Subaru’s Divine Buster. Regulated and assisted by Avatar, the buster spell improves in power and becomes a coherent beam of energy, similar to Nanoha’s DB when using Raging Heart.
Power: B~AA
Speed: B
Range: A
Control: AA

Dire's Strike
A powerful anti-personnel spell. A six second charge is required for this to work, four if both devices are working in tandem for the charge.

Power: S
Speed: C
Range: melee
Control: S


Tactical/Support spells

Black Fort
A capture type barrier used to keep mages in or keep intruders out.

Power: AAA
Speed: AA+
Range: A radius of 4 kilometers with initial casting point as the center.
Control: AAA
Duration: Lasts until the barrier is broken or the caster dispels the spell.

Capture Bind
Binds the target mage, restricting movements when complete.
Binding power: A
Binding speed: A
Range: AA
Control: AA

Struggle Bind
A powerful bind that serves as a magical ‘ground‘. It can restrict a target from using their magical capabilities. It can also dispel magical effects like transformation magic or any buffs the mage may have on them.
Binding power: AA~S depending on number of cartridges used
Binding speed: B
Range: B-
Control: AAA

Torment Bind
Gen’s variation of Struggle Bind. Not only does it have the effects of said bind, the more the mage struggles, the tighter the bind goes, causing great magical feedback to the mage and often suffocating the bound mage.
Binding power: AA~AAA
Binding speed: B+
Range: B
Control: AAA+

Sonic Scream
A powerful disruption spell. Serves to disorientate and confuse others in the vicinity by exposing them to overwhelming amounts of auditory feed.
Power: AA+
Speed: A
Range: AA+
Control: AAA

[Dream_Traveller]

Originally Posted by Tormenk

The Black Fist's complete profile. I will edit and tweak it from time to time depending on the need to fine tune him and future changes.

Spoiler for the Black Fist:

Basic Information
Name: Gen Ealin
Nickname/Alias: The Black Fist
Gender: Male
Home World: Mid Childa
Birth date: August 1st
Age: 45 as of MC 075
Relatives: Deceased
Eye color: brown
Hair color: black
Height: 182cm
Appearance:

Spoiler for for Gen Ealin:

Mage Information
Rank/Position: Former Captain/Striker
Affiliations: TSAB Navy
Magic Type: Neo-Belkan
Magic Color: Black
Mage Rank: S
Magic potential: 1.5milion
Combat style: melee to short range, preference for melee
Element Affiliation: None
Barrier Jacket:
Device Name: Eva and Avatar
Device Type: Armed Device (Eva), Intelligent Device (Avatar)


Background/History:

Gen Ealin was orphaned at the age of 12 following the disastrous aftermath of a meteor striking Mid Childa’s southern continent, taking an entire island along with it and leaving a crater on Mid Childa visible from space. A school trip to the capital had spared him the same fate as his parents, while his parents and his island home were vaporized. With his parents’ death, he had no means of support and joined the Mid Childa Ground Forces.

As a recruit, Gen was a loner who did not get along with others, his parents death leaving a permanent mark on him. Nevertheless, he was a driven cadet who produced excellent results, as noted by many of his instructors. Attaining the ground mage rank of A at age 14, Gen was not happy with his current status as merely part of the ground forces, one which he found to be lacking. Training and practicing in between missions for the mage tests, he manage to attain AAA status in 3 years by the time he left the ground forces, opting to join the Navy as a Enforcer.

A full fledged Enforcer with 6 years of field missions under his belt, Gen was still the loner he was but by now he had a high handed approach to whatever he did, namely during his missions dealing with the common weapons smuggler or space pirate. His actions were questioned several times by his officers but as he likes to say, “The ends justify the means”. The higher ups overlooked his actions after reviewing his excellent track record in the field and the many successful missions he undertook.


Coincidentally, a year later, Gen was one of the many Enforcers onboard the TSAB ship Hestia, guarding the sealed Book of Darkness and its captured master. Gen was guarding the captured mage when he detected a device the prisoner had managed to somehow retain despite his arrest and under heavy restrain.

Confiscating the device, Gen was on the way to the bridge to report the device he found when the Book went berserk. Chaos ensued as the rampaging Book of Darkness went on to rapidly consume and take over the control of the Hestia. Admiral Clyde Harlaown orders the evacuation of the Hestia. Gen escapes the Hestia before Admiral Gil Graham, commander of the convoy guarding the Book, gives the order to fire the Arc En Ciel and destroys the infested Hestia with Admiral Harlaown and the Book’s master onboard.

Gen returns to TSAB HQ shortly after the incident to find out more about the Book of Darkness, which has plagued the TSAB for decades. Searching through the databanks of the HQ regarding information on the Book, Gen had uncovered a file hidden deep within hidden archives, dated MC 042.

The Book of Darkness’ last known incarnation had materialized on Mid Childa itself. The Book was running amok on an island near the southern continent and it was decided the risk of the Book of Darkness running loose on and consuming Mid Childa was too great and the sole measure of containment was to destroy it with one of the Arc En Ciel fitted warships currently near the TSAB’s home planet.

The orders were given and the shot fired. Hundreds of kilometers of the planet surface were eradicated in an instant, killing thousands of people along with it. The repercussions of a failed containment of the Book and the firing of such a weapon that wiped out so many lives were unthinkable, hence the people involved decided on a massive cover-up, citing a small meteor had struck the island. The local media was used to great effect to enforce that the local populace held the general impression. Citizens of Mid Childa mourned the passing of so many and happening of a great tragedy; unaware of the lies they were fed.

Gen held the same expression throughout his perusal of the file but he was burning with cold fury inside. The monstrosity of such a fabrication and the utter ineffectiveness of the TSAB at handling the Book combined was a unforgivable mistake, his parents among those who paid the ultimate price of such a mistake, when it was no fault of theirs. Gen decided to track and strike down the people who had been involved in the incident 12 years ago. He would make those responsible pay for their crimes and their lies. He no longer had spare time, devoting all his efforts and resources available to finding out who was responsible, finding out their names and tracking their current whereabouts, in the days to come that he might have his complete revenge fulfilled.

Ironically, 4 years after the last Book of Darkness incident, Gen was given the distinction of being a “Striker”, by the very same TSAB he had promised to wreak vengeance upon. Names still eluded him at this point as to who were the real culprits. There was no complete record of the incident so many years ago and he had to resort to hacking and digging through the many databanks scattered through out the administered worlds to gather the necessary information. Progress was slow but Gen was patient. Meanwhile he continued his role as a TSAB lackey to great lengths, even getting promoted to Captain during this period of time.

7 years later, news of the permanent sealing of the Book of Darkness spread throughout the TSAB. Gen’s interest was caught by the fact that the fearsome Book had been sealed away by three mages from the 97th non-administered world known as “Earth”. Gen had applauded the 3 young mages for their incredible feat but at the same time, was deeply disgusted by the TSAB’s total incompetence, letting the Book run amok again and have outsiders to finish their dirty work.

A year later, the “Neo-Belkan” magic system was developed. Gen was intrigued by the system, suited for close range combat that features anti-personnel attacks and spells that were tuned towards boosting and augmenting mages and devices in melee combat. Most promising of all was the cartridge system installed on the newly developed Armed Devices, which allowed for instantaneous increase in magic power.

Gen began training in the Neo-Belkan system, at the same time developing his device assembly and modification skills, developing an Armed Device fitted to his personal needs. By the end of twelve months, Gen’s device reached completion, a pair of gauntlets he named “Eva”. Shortly after Eva’s completion, Gen successfully completed his next mage test, using Eva and the Neo-Belkan magic system to great proficiency.

MC 067 June 12th marked the disappearance of Gen on his home world. Search efforts were futile and he was marked as AWOL. Unknown to others, Gen was preparing to strike down the culprits at the annual conference taking place at Ground Forces Central, all of them who were to be conveniently gathered like lamp to the slaughter for him.

MC 067 September 12th marked a terrible day in the history of Mid Childa. Gen Ealin had slipped past security personnel to arrive at the conference nearly unopposed, save for the few measly ground force grunts, as he literally crushed them like insects. Gen stormed into the conference room, going straight for the culprits, gutting them with Eva at full power. Those inside could only bear witness as Gen slaughtered 6 high-ranking officials, helpless as devices were forbidden within GFC. His revenge wrought, Gen sought his escape, leaving a trail of bloody bodies in his wake. Gen then escaped off world quickly with a preset dimensional teleport spell.

Navy Enforcers sent out to track and apprehend Gen were either killed or heavily injured in their attempts to pursue and capture him. By the 3rd month of his escape, the pursuers had completely lost trace of the Black Fist, as they took to calling him because of the pure black color of his device Eva, which he uses to take out many of his pursuers.

Over the years, Gen has been spotted on many planets. Their target proved to be adept at evading them or quickly escaped even when he was cornered. As of the current date, his whereabouts and motives remain unknown.



Personality/Behavior
Brusque to the point of being rude, Gen was a person who others kept at arm’s length. He spoke little and when he did, it was either to respond to orders or to insult the random person who drew his ire. His cold and unchanging demeanor unnerved many of his peers who resorted to outcast him from any events. This was fine by him, as Gen viewed many of them to be naïve and believed human relationships to be fragile matters, preferring to hone his skills instead of wasting time in the company of others. When not in missions or training, Gen was often by his lonesome reading a book or off to the vast mountain regions of Mid Childa to take in the natural scenery. Other than that, his only other notable interests are in philosophy and music.

Gen maintained his uncaring attitude throughout his adult life and into his work life as an
Enforcer. After returning from the Book of Darkness incident of MC 054, he became visibly more irritable and displayed a growing aggressive streak both in and out of combat.


Likes: Silence, rain, nature, to be alone
Dislikes: Noise, crowds, for someone to call his name, idealistic people


Barrier Jacket:
Orange-tinted glasses. A black round-collared long sleeved jacket with gold highlights on the sleeves, shoulders and linings reaching all the way to the back of is knees. A black sleeveless vest covers his body. A belt containing 24 cartridges.
Loose black pants that go all the way into his combat boots complete the look.

Intelligent Device: Avatar
The device was fashioned after the golden cross on the infamous Book of Darkness, which struck Gen’s immediate interest. Interrogating the mage under torture and death threats, he managed to get the vital information he wanted. The device was created to replicate the Book of Darkness impressive abilities, which encompassed the ability to capture Linker Cores to fill its pages, the Guardian Knight System, the Defense Program and of course its ability to reincarnate for all eternity.

The current master was skilled in device creations besides being a powerful mage; he had tried to replicate the Book but failed due to the standards of current technology and the immense complexity of the Ancient Belkan magic and technology which was applied to the creation of the Book. Still, the mage was able to recreate two aspects of the Book using Mid Childian technology and magic. First was the enormous storage capability of spells and programs and second was the function to channel and store large amounts of mana into the device.

Shortly after going back to active service, Gen had discovered the proper usage of the device he had in possession. The “Avatar”, as he had named it, serves to augment a mage’s prowess through more efficient handling and processing of spells, ensuring a more refined output. Adding to that was the ability to store more spells than any other storage or intelligent device known. Eva also serves to regulate and control the flow of mana into Eva when Gen is using more demanding spells such as Bloody Blades and

The unique aspect of Avatar would be the method it acquires and process mana. Normal devices would channel mana from the mage and supply it to form the spell desired. Avatar could absorb and store residual mana from its surroundings into its chambers at a moderate speed. Any expulsion of magic in its vicinity can be used, be it from its wielder or from a foreign mage. This considerably lengthens the magical stamina of the mage who wields Avatar and also acts as an external storage device of mana, similar to the Card system, which the user inputs mana into a card-shaped device with a pre-programmed spell but available only as one time usage.

Storage form: Avatar takes the form of a card with the exact golden cross of the Book of Darkness on its front. The rest of the card is white, with the area the cross is on being highlighted in black.

Device form: Pending




Armed Device: Eva
Eva was created while Gen was still within the TSAB as a Striker. Gen created Eva to take the form of gauntlets, with sharp claw-like edges on the end of each finger and a sharp length of metal reaching all the way to the elbow. Fitted with cartridge slots on each gauntlet, Gen uses Eva to great effect when in melee combat, crushing opponents’ defenses to quickly beat them into submission. Eva, being an Armed Device, is unable to channel the energy needed to form massive bombardment or buster spells as compared to her Storage or Intelligent devices counterparts. Gen’s options at mid to long range are severely limited by this but he makes up by programming new spells that enable him to shorten the distance quickly and punish with a enhanced Eva or at least to bring his short range spells available to him. Each gauntlet can store up to 4 cartridges at once.


Storage Form: black gloves with a single diamond on the back of the glove

Device Form: Eva sets up as a pair of clawed armor gauntlets, covering from fingers all the way to the elbow, also known as Gauntlet Form (closest example I can think of is Dark Saber’s armor covering her arms)

Claw Form: Eva now sports triple retractable blades from the wrist, each blade having a length of 50cm. Requires one cartridge to change to this form.

Full Drive: Pending

Ability: Blocker
Blocker is activated when Eva is successful in using a barrier or shield spell to block an attack, be it a melee attack or range spell. The energy that is used to form the protection spell is instantly absorbed back into Eva and is used to boost Eva’s power for the next attack or spell and to a very slight extent, Gein’s movement speed for the next 5 seconds.



Spells:

Movement
Sonic Move: Increases the user’s speed dramatically (but only temporarily) to the point where it cannot be followed by the human eye.

Sonic Step: Increases the user’s speed as much as Sonic Move does. Has a shorter travel distance but allows for consecutive Sonic Steps with a delay of 3 seconds in between each Step.

Rusher:
Boosts the user’s movement speed up to 25% more for a minute. Using Sonic Move or Sonic Step however dispels Rusher’s effects on the caster.

Defensive

Defender:
An auto-guard spell. Simple but sturdy barrier. Singular direction only.
Defense: AA+
Speed: S
Area: two meters

Defender Plus:
Slightly higher defensive strength and larger area. Singular direction only.
Defense: AAA
Speed: S
Area: six meters

Triangular shield:
A black rotating shield with the Belkan spell sigils is materialized. Singular direction only.
Defense: AAA-
Speed: AAA
Area: 2 meter area in front of caster

Wall of Babylon: Powerful barrier spell that materializes as a dome while on ground or a sphere in air. Useful against long lasting bombardment or buster spells.
Defense: S
Speed: AA
Area: radius of three meters from the caster as the center

Offensive spells
Defense Shatter:
A specialized spell for breaking down the defensive spells. Energy is concentrated onto the point of impact to break down the defensive spell quickly. Effective on barrier, shield and field defensive spells. Activated by the command phrase “Shatter”.
Power: AAA
Speed: S
Range: Melee

Bloody Blade:
A battery attack spell, similar to spells like Stinger Blade and Plasma Lancer. Energy blades of pure black are form and directed towards a single target. The blades are either used as piercing weapons or detonated upon impact. Gen has no control after its release so it can only travel in a single direction. Maximum of eight blades per cast. Activated by the command phrase “Fire”.
Power: A
Speed: A+
Control: AA+
Range: A+

Bloody Blade: Termination Shift
Up to 48 Bloody Blades are conjured and directed towards an area.
Power: AA+
Speed: A+
Control: AAA
Range: A+

Imbue:
Charges Eva with magical energy, improving the power of each strike. One cartridge is used up maintaining 30s of the spell.
Power: A
Speed: A
Range: Melee

Crushing Grip:
Gen uses Eva to execute a tight hold on whatever he is holding and discharges large amount of magical energy into the object. The discharge can disrupt devices and render them less effective over a period of time and usually has the side effect of crushing whichever part of the device it is. When used on a mage, it can disorientate or even knockout the mage, depending on the amount of energy discharged.
Power: B~AA+
Speed: AA
Range: Melee
Control: AAA

Black Fist:
Eva is charged with a large amount of energy for a single strike. Consecutive strikes are possible with the expenditure of one cartridge per strike.
Power: AA
Speed: A
Range: Melee
Control: AA+

Progressive Edge:
Available only in claw form. The blades start to vibrate at very high frequency, enabling the blades to cut through solid objects easily and break down magical defenses more easily. One cartridge maintains the effect for 60 seconds.
Power: AA
Speed: AA
Range: Melee
Control: A+

Alkeid Buster
Gen’s buster spell. Channeled by Eva alone, the spell is produced as a wave of energy much like Subaru’s Divine Buster. Regulated and assisted by Avatar, the buster spell improves in power and becomes a coherent beam of energy, similar to Nanoha’s DB when using Raging Heart.
Power: B~AA+
Speed: B
Range: A
Control: AA

Diabolic Diffusal
Gen’s AOE and single most powerful spell. Used when Gen wants to make a big hole in whatever he wants. Channeling large amounts of energy through both Eva and Avatar, a black ball of swirling energy forms in Gen’s hands. With both devices working in tandem, the casting time is cut down to a mere 6 seconds. Upon release, the ball rapidly expands into a giant sphere and consumes any objects within the area of the sphere. Cartridges can be used to increase the power channeled into the spell but not its casting time. Gen is immune to the discharge.
Power: S
Speed: C
Range: twelve meters in any direction
Control: S



Tactical/Support spells

Blood Fort Andromeda:
A capture type barrier used to keep mages in or keep intruders out. Everything within the barrier has a reddish haze to it.
Power: AAA
Speed: AA+
Range: A radius of 4 kilometers with initial casting point as the center.
Control: AAA
Duration: Lasts until the barrier is broken or the caster dispels the spell.

Capture Bind:
Binds the target mage, restricting movements when complete.
Binding power: A
Binding speed: A
Range: AA
Control: AA

Struggle Bind:
A powerful bind that serves as a magical ‘ground‘. It can restrict a target from using their magical capabilities. It can also dispel magical effects like transformation magic or any buffs the mage may have on them.
Binding power: AA~S depending on number of cartridges used
Binding speed: B
Range: B-
Control: AAA

Torment Bind:
Gen’s own variation of the powerful Struggle Bind. Not only does it have the effects of said bind, the more the mage struggles, the tighter the bind goes, causing great magical feedback to the mage and often suffocating the bound mage.
Binding power: AA~S
Binding speed: B+
Range: B
Control: AAA+


Sonic Scream:
A powerful disruption spell. Serves to disorientate and confuse others in the vicinity by exposing them to overwhelming amounts of telepathic and auditory feed.
Power: AA+
Speed: AAA
Range: AA+
Control: AAA

I had more crackpot ideas such as Gen to be the one responsible for the the Book of Darkness going berserk during its last rampage of year MC 054 and him trying to expose the incident to the worlds under the TSAB but I couldn't fit those in so I left it out.

Comments, corrections, inconsistencies and suggestions are welcome. I did try to link up to some canon events so there might be mismatches here and there.

Also, any suggestions for Avatar's device form and Eva's Full Drive form are welcome.

Hm, hm...Gendou, eh?

Does Gen do the classic pose?



I have one problem, though...aren't there way too many spells above A rank? I mean, perhaps it's part of the Neo-Belka system, but I just have a feeling he's somewhat h4xx...

Aside from that, a good character nonetheless.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Working on it, editting Vivio is a sinch. It's the backpage that poses the eyespins.

If its the Japanese, the don't bother; I intend to do mine in English like how Triad did until they dropped StrikerS. It looks like the background is rather easily replicatable.

Originally Posted by Keroko

You WHAT?!

You're making Kha the Chaos god of order?!?!

No! I meant True Schneiderform, not the Chaos-mutated one:



Of course Kha's Knight Armor isn't going to be that thing, but the fact that he has access to it means...

(runs)

Originally Posted by Keroko

The current idea already makes Keroko and Vivio pretty much sisters, can't see why Kha should be left out.

Okay gimme a while to get the family tree straight.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Hmm, let me dub on that a bit more. Thoughts are still highly subjective to crack.

Crack is GOOD, and the h4xx produced can always be toned down post-mortem/release.

Originally Posted by Keroko

No wait, it can work. Primarchs are basically artificial children created by the God Empress herself, right? So instead, the original Keroko was one of those primarchs, making her the original Vivio's sister. Of course, the original Vivio would look up to the original Keroko with her being a general of the God Empress army (and thereby linking to the admired in the profile). This also explains Keroko's natural combat and leading instincts, is all genetical.

Keroko probably would have died somewhere in the war, possibly holding back an enourmous force spurring forth from the warp, and hundreds of years after her death, Jail found the genetical data. Neltharion arived, screwing up the original plan, but since Jail found the genetical data of the true heir, it mattered little.

Oh yes, the crack is high indeed.

Hmmm... Vivio's original is Sakura, and Sakura was really close to most of the Primarchs, especially the Even Numbers (The Odd Numbers were guys.). But are they considered friends, or cousins, or nieces or sisters? No matter; we know that they were close and that's it.

Maybe Sakura should be a lot warmer to Keroko than I think she is, especially since Keroko's a blast from the past.

Also, I imagined that Vivio's armor, because it was so black and not gold and shiny as one would expect, was part Raumritter and part Nanoha/Keroko; this makes it even more so possible for Keroko's to be a some type of power armor. Maybe even Terminator/Retributor power armor!

And looking at Keroko now, I'd say the original died because she held back from slaying her brother who had defected along with Horus Vidalia, and ultimately kamikazed with him. OH THE DORAMA!

And high crack is GOOOOD.

Originally Posted by Tormenk

The Black Fist's complete profile. I will edit and tweak it from time to time depending on the need to fine tune him and future changes.

Spoiler for the Black Fist:

Basic Information
Name: Gen Ealin
Nickname/Alias: The Black Fist
Gender: Male
Home World: Mid Childa
Birth date: August 1st
Age: 45 as of MC 075
Relatives: Deceased
Eye color: brown
Hair color: black
Height: 182cm
Appearance:

Spoiler for Gen Ealin:

Mage Information
Rank/Position: Former Captain/Striker
Affiliations: TSAB Navy
Magic Type: Neo-Belkan
Magic Color: Black
Mage Rank: S
Magic potential: 1.5milion
Combat style: melee to short range, preference for melee
Element Affiliation: None
Barrier Jacket:
Device Name: Eva and Avatar
Device Type: Armed Device (Eva), Intelligent Device (Avatar)


Background/History:

Gen Ealin was orphaned at the age of 12 following the disastrous aftermath of a meteor striking Mid Childa’s southern continent, taking an entire island along with it and leaving a crater on Mid Childa visible from space. A school trip to the capital had spared him the same fate as his parents, while his parents and his island home were vaporized. With his parents’ death, he had no means of support and joined the Mid Childa Ground Forces.

As a recruit, Gen was a loner who did not get along with others, his parents death leaving a permanent mark on him. Nevertheless, he was a driven cadet who produced excellent results, as noted by many of his instructors. Attaining the ground mage rank of A at age 14, Gen was not happy with his current status as merely part of the ground forces, one which he found to be lacking. Training and practicing in between missions for the mage tests, he manage to attain AAA status in 3 years by the time he left the ground forces, opting to join the Navy as a Enforcer.

A full fledged Enforcer with 6 years of field missions under his belt, Gen was still the loner he was but by now he had a high handed approach to whatever he did, namely during his missions dealing with the common weapons smuggler or space pirate. His actions were questioned several times by his officers but as he likes to say, “The ends justify the means”. The higher ups overlooked his actions after reviewing his excellent track record in the field and the many successful missions he undertook.


Coincidentally, a year later, Gen was one of the many Enforcers onboard the TSAB ship Hestia, guarding the sealed Book of Darkness and its captured master. Gen was guarding the captured mage when he detected a device the prisoner had managed to somehow retain despite his arrest and under heavy restrain.

Confiscating the device, Gen was on the way to the bridge to report the device he found when the Book went berserk. Chaos ensued as the rampaging Book of Darkness went on to rapidly consume and take over the control of the Hestia. Admiral Clyde Harlaown orders the evacuation of the Hestia. Gen escapes the Hestia before Admiral Gil Graham, commander of the convoy guarding the Book, gives the order to fire the Arc En Ciel and destroys the infested Hestia with Admiral Harlaown and the Book’s master onboard.

Gen returns to TSAB HQ shortly after the incident to find out more about the Book of Darkness, which has plagued the TSAB for decades. Searching through the databanks of the HQ regarding information on the Book, Gen had uncovered a file hidden deep within hidden archives, dated MC 042.

The Book of Darkness’ last known incarnation had materialized on Mid Childa itself. The Book was running amok on an island near the southern continent and it was decided the risk of the Book of Darkness running loose on and consuming Mid Childa was too great and the sole measure of containment was to destroy it with one of the Arc En Ciel fitted warships currently near the TSAB’s home planet.

The orders were given and the shot fired. Hundreds of kilometers of the planet surface were eradicated in an instant, killing thousands of people along with it. The repercussions of a failed containment of the Book and the firing of such a weapon that wiped out so many lives were unthinkable, hence the people involved decided on a massive cover-up, citing a small meteor had struck the island. The local media was used to great effect to enforce that the local populace held the general impression. Citizens of Mid Childa mourned the passing of so many and happening of a great tragedy; unaware of the lies they were fed.

Gen held the same expression throughout his perusal of the file but he was burning with cold fury inside. The monstrosity of such a fabrication and the utter ineffectiveness of the TSAB at handling the Book combined was a unforgivable mistake, his parents among those who paid the ultimate price of such a mistake, when it was no fault of theirs. Gen decided to track and strike down the people who had been involved in the incident 12 years ago. He would make those responsible pay for their crimes and their lies. He no longer had spare time, devoting all his efforts and resources available to finding out who was responsible, finding out their names and tracking their current whereabouts, in the days to come that he might have his complete revenge fulfilled.

Ironically, 4 years after the last Book of Darkness incident, Gen was given the distinction of being a “Striker”, by the very same TSAB he had promised to wreak vengeance upon. Names still eluded him at this point as to who were the real culprits. There was no complete record of the incident so many years ago and he had to resort to hacking and digging through the many databanks scattered through out the administered worlds to gather the necessary information. Progress was slow but Gen was patient. Meanwhile he continued his role as a TSAB lackey to great lengths, even getting promoted to Captain during this period of time.

7 years later, news of the permanent sealing of the Book of Darkness spread throughout the TSAB. Gen’s interest was caught by the fact that the fearsome Book had been sealed away by three mages from the 97th non-administered world known as “Earth”. Gen had applauded the 3 young mages for their incredible feat but at the same time, was deeply disgusted by the TSAB’s total incompetence, letting the Book run amok again and have outsiders to finish their dirty work.

A year later, the “Neo-Belkan” magic system was developed. Gen was intrigued by the system, suited for close range combat that features anti-personnel attacks and spells that were tuned towards boosting and augmenting mages and devices in melee combat. Most promising of all was the cartridge system installed on the newly developed Armed Devices, which allowed for instantaneous increase in magic power.

Gen began training in the Neo-Belkan system, at the same time developing his device assembly and modification skills, developing an Armed Device fitted to his personal needs. By the end of twelve months, Gen’s device reached completion, a pair of gauntlets he named “Eva”. Shortly after Eva’s completion, Gen successfully completed his next mage test, using Eva and the Neo-Belkan magic system to great proficiency.

MC 067 June 12th marked the disappearance of Gen on his home world. Search efforts were futile and he was marked as AWOL. Unknown to others, Gen was preparing to strike down the culprits at the annual conference taking place at Ground Forces Central, all of them who were to be conveniently gathered like lamp to the slaughter for him.

MC 067 September 12th marked a terrible day in the history of Mid Childa. Gen Ealin had slipped past security personnel to arrive at the conference nearly unopposed, save for the few measly ground force grunts, as he literally crushed them like insects. Gen stormed into the conference room, going straight for the culprits, gutting them with Eva at full power. Those inside could only bear witness as Gen slaughtered 6 high-ranking officials, helpless as devices were forbidden within GFC. His revenge wrought, Gen sought his escape, leaving a trail of bloody bodies in his wake. Gen then escaped off world quickly with a preset dimensional teleport spell.

Navy Enforcers sent out to track and apprehend Gen were either killed or heavily injured in their attempts to pursue and capture him. By the 3rd month of his escape, the pursuers had completely lost trace of the Black Fist, as they took to calling him because of the pure black color of his device Eva, which he uses to take out many of his pursuers.

Over the years, Gen has been spotted on many planets. Their target proved to be adept at evading them or quickly escaped even when he was cornered. As of the current date, his whereabouts and motives remain unknown.



Personality/Behavior
Brusque to the point of being rude, Gen was a person who others kept at arm’s length. He spoke little and when he did, it was either to respond to orders or to insult the random person who drew his ire. His cold and unchanging demeanor unnerved many of his peers who resorted to outcast him from any events. This was fine by him, as Gen viewed many of them to be naïve and believed human relationships to be fragile matters, preferring to hone his skills instead of wasting time in the company of others. When not in missions or training, Gen was often by his lonesome reading a book or off to the vast mountain regions of Mid Childa to take in the natural scenery. Other than that, his only other notable interests are in philosophy and music.

Gen maintained his uncaring attitude throughout his adult life and into his work life as an
Enforcer. After returning from the Book of Darkness incident of MC 054, he became visibly more irritable and displayed a growing aggressive streak both in and out of combat.


Likes: Silence, rain, nature, to be alone
Dislikes: Noise, crowds, for someone to call his name, idealistic people


Barrier Jacket:
Orange-tinted glasses. A black round-collared long sleeved jacket with gold highlights on the sleeves, shoulders and linings reaching all the way to the back of is knees. A black sleeveless vest covers his body. A belt containing 24 cartridges.
Loose black pants that go all the way into his combat boots complete the look.

Intelligent Device: Avatar
The device was fashioned after the golden cross on the infamous Book of Darkness, which struck Gen’s immediate interest. Interrogating the mage under torture and death threats, he managed to get the vital information he wanted. The device was created to replicate the Book of Darkness impressive abilities, which encompassed the ability to capture Linker Cores to fill its pages, the Guardian Knight System, the Defense Program and of course its ability to reincarnate for all eternity.

The current master was skilled in device creations besides being a powerful mage; he had tried to replicate the Book but failed due to the standards of current technology and the immense complexity of the Ancient Belkan magic and technology which was applied to the creation of the Book. Still, the mage was able to recreate two aspects of the Book using Mid Childian technology and magic. First was the enormous storage capability of spells and programs and second was the function to channel and store large amounts of mana into the device.

Shortly after going back to active service, Gen had discovered the proper usage of the device he had in possession. The “Avatar”, as he had named it, serves to augment a mage’s prowess through more efficient handling and processing of spells, ensuring a more refined output. Adding to that was the ability to store more spells than any other storage or intelligent device known. Eva also serves to regulate and control the flow of mana into Eva when Gen is using more demanding spells such as Bloody Blades and

The unique aspect of Avatar would be the method it acquires and process mana. Normal devices would channel mana from the mage and supply it to form the spell desired. Avatar could absorb and store residual mana from its surroundings into its chambers at a moderate speed. Any expulsion of magic in its vicinity can be used, be it from its wielder or from a foreign mage. This considerably lengthens the magical stamina of the mage who wields Avatar and also acts as an external storage device of mana, similar to the Card system, which the user inputs mana into a card-shaped device with a pre-programmed spell but available only as one time usage.

Storage form: Avatar takes the form of a card with the exact golden cross of the Book of Darkness on its front. The rest of the card is white, with the area the cross is on being highlighted in black.

Device form: Pending




Armed Device: Eva
Eva was created while Gen was still within the TSAB as a Striker. Gen created Eva to take the form of gauntlets, with sharp claw-like edges on the end of each finger and a sharp length of metal reaching all the way to the elbow. Fitted with cartridge slots on each gauntlet, Gen uses Eva to great effect when in melee combat, crushing opponents’ defenses to quickly beat them into submission. Eva, being an Armed Device, is unable to channel the energy needed to form massive bombardment or buster spells as compared to her Storage or Intelligent devices counterparts. Gen’s options at mid to long range are severely limited by this but he makes up by programming new spells that enable him to shorten the distance quickly and punish with a enhanced Eva or at least to bring his short range spells available to him. Each gauntlet can store up to 4 cartridges at once.


Storage Form: black gloves with a single diamond on the back of the glove

Device Form: Eva sets up as a pair of clawed armor gauntlets, covering from fingers all the way to the elbow, also known as Gauntlet Form (closest example I can think of is Dark Saber’s armor covering her arms)

Claw Form: Eva now sports triple retractable blades from the wrist, each blade having a length of 50cm. Requires one cartridge to change to this form.

Full Drive: Pending

Ability: Blocker
Blocker is activated when Eva is successful in using a barrier or shield spell to block an attack, be it a melee attack or range spell. The energy that is used to form the protection spell is instantly absorbed back into Eva and is used to boost Eva’s power for the next attack or spell and to a very slight extent, Gein’s movement speed for the next 5 seconds.



Spells:

Movement
Sonic Move: Increases the user’s speed dramatically (but only temporarily) to the point where it cannot be followed by the human eye.

Sonic Step: Increases the user’s speed as much as Sonic Move does. Has a shorter travel distance but allows for consecutive Sonic Steps with a delay of 3 seconds in between each Step.

Rusher:
Boosts the user’s movement speed up to 25% more for a minute. Using Sonic Move or Sonic Step however dispels Rusher’s effects on the caster.

Defensive

Defender:
An auto-guard spell. Simple but sturdy barrier. Singular direction only.
Defense: AA+
Speed: S
Area: two meters

Defender Plus:
Slightly higher defensive strength and larger area. Singular direction only.
Defense: AAA
Speed: S
Area: six meters

Triangular shield:
A black rotating shield with the Belkan spell sigils is materialized. Singular direction only.
Defense: AAA-
Speed: AAA
Area: 2 meter area in front of caster

Wall of Babylon: Powerful barrier spell that materializes as a dome while on ground or a sphere in air. Useful against long lasting bombardment or buster spells.
Defense: S
Speed: AA
Area: radius of three meters from the caster as the center

Offensive spells
Defense Shatter:
A specialized spell for breaking down the defensive spells. Energy is concentrated onto the point of impact to break down the defensive spell quickly. Effective on barrier, shield and field defensive spells. Activated by the command phrase “Shatter”.
Power: AAA
Speed: S
Range: Melee

Bloody Blade:
A battery attack spell, similar to spells like Stinger Blade and Plasma Lancer. Energy blades of pure black are form and directed towards a single target. The blades are either used as piercing weapons or detonated upon impact. Gen has no control after its release so it can only travel in a single direction. Maximum of eight blades per cast. Activated by the command phrase “Fire”.
Power: A
Speed: A+
Control: AA+
Range: A+

Bloody Blade: Termination Shift
Up to 48 Bloody Blades are conjured and directed towards an area.
Power: AA+
Speed: A+
Control: AAA
Range: A+

Imbue:
Charges Eva with magical energy, improving the power of each strike. One cartridge is used up maintaining 30s of the spell.
Power: A
Speed: A
Range: Melee

Crushing Grip:
Gen uses Eva to execute a tight hold on whatever he is holding and discharges large amount of magical energy into the object. The discharge can disrupt devices and render them less effective over a period of time and usually has the side effect of crushing whichever part of the device it is. When used on a mage, it can disorientate or even knockout the mage, depending on the amount of energy discharged.
Power: B~AA+
Speed: AA
Range: Melee
Control: AAA

Black Fist:
Eva is charged with a large amount of energy for a single strike. Consecutive strikes are possible with the expenditure of one cartridge per strike.
Power: AA
Speed: A
Range: Melee
Control: AA+

Progressive Edge:
Available only in claw form. The blades start to vibrate at very high frequency, enabling the blades to cut through solid objects easily and break down magical defenses more easily. One cartridge maintains the effect for 60 seconds.
Power: AA
Speed: AA
Range: Melee
Control: A+

Alkeid Buster
Gen’s buster spell. Channeled by Eva alone, the spell is produced as a wave of energy much like Subaru’s Divine Buster. Regulated and assisted by Avatar, the buster spell improves in power and becomes a coherent beam of energy, similar to Nanoha’s DB when using Raging Heart.
Power: B~AA+
Speed: B
Range: A
Control: AA

Diabolic Diffusal
Gen’s AOE and single most powerful spell. Used when Gen wants to make a big hole in whatever he wants. Channeling large amounts of energy through both Eva and Avatar, a black ball of swirling energy forms in Gen’s hands. With both devices working in tandem, the casting time is cut down to a mere 6 seconds. Upon release, the ball rapidly expands into a giant sphere and consumes any objects within the area of the sphere. Cartridges can be used to increase the power channeled into the spell but not its casting time. Gen is immune to the discharge.
Power: S
Speed: C
Range: twelve meters in any direction
Control: S



Tactical/Support spells

Blood Fort Andromeda:
A capture type barrier used to keep mages in or keep intruders out. Everything within the barrier has a reddish haze to it.
Power: AAA
Speed: AA+
Range: A radius of 4 kilometers with initial casting point as the center.
Control: AAA
Duration: Lasts until the barrier is broken or the caster dispels the spell.

Capture Bind:
Binds the target mage, restricting movements when complete.
Binding power: A
Binding speed: A
Range: AA
Control: AA

Struggle Bind:
A powerful bind that serves as a magical ‘ground‘. It can restrict a target from using their magical capabilities. It can also dispel magical effects like transformation magic or any buffs the mage may have on them.
Binding power: AA~S depending on number of cartridges used
Binding speed: B
Range: B-
Control: AAA

Torment Bind:
Gen’s own variation of the powerful Struggle Bind. Not only does it have the effects of said bind, the more the mage struggles, the tighter the bind goes, causing great magical feedback to the mage and often suffocating the bound mage.
Binding power: AA~S
Binding speed: B+
Range: B
Control: AAA+


Sonic Scream:
A powerful disruption spell. Serves to disorientate and confuse others in the vicinity by exposing them to overwhelming amounts of telepathic and auditory feed.
Power: AA+
Speed: AAA
Range: AA+
Control: AAA

I had more crackpot ideas such as Gen to be the one responsible for the the Book of Darkness going berserk during its last rampage of year MC 054 and him trying to expose the incident to the worlds under the TSAB but I couldn't fit those in so I left it out.

Comments, corrections, inconsistencies and suggestions are welcome. I did try to link up to some canon events so there might be mismatches here and there.

Also, any suggestions for Avatar's device form and Eva's Full Drive form are welcome.

Is this AU? Cos I don't remember anyone dying on 912.

Also, a device that can draw mana from the air with no cost is moderately h4xx (since doing that takes a lot of effort on Aurion's side) unless the device is barely capable of doing something else.

The rest looks fine. Nice to have a cool villian like Gendou, who in the live action trailers of ADV's Evangelion is Agent Smith with a beard.

[Tk3997]

WEEE Halo, don't expect shit from me for the next day or two!

*Boots up the campigan*

Before I zone out though I need to say this and I’ll be blunt:
Keroko, Kha watch the crack there’s “integrating” or “borrowing” and then their just absurd unrealistic contrivances. This is getting stupid IMO it’s beyond “cool” and into cheesy and contrived IMO. I don’t like the idea that such large swaths of the cast of OC and CCs are becoming bizarrely linked to people that have been dead for centuries or linked to universe changing events at ever turn.

You’re crossing over into Sue territory here IMO.

He finds random DNA from a person dead for 300 years, he sets his lab up on an low tech back water for little reason, an evil Dragon supposedly seen only once ever couple thousands years or whatever blunders upon the scene and screws up the plan? Then later he just happens to revive ANOTHER person from random 300 year old DNA that’s basiclly a sister? Reading it like that can you not see how absurd this sounds?

I like Keroko's original back story, I don’t like this change AT ALL.

[Nightengale]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Oh yes, the crack is high indeed.

All this crack is spawning more crack ideas inside me as well... even more so if I tie it with my story of the first Empress taking in orphans who are linked to the bloodline of the Kaiser across the oceans while in Ancient South Mid-childa lies the original lands where ancient Vivio, Keroko, Kha and Crono (( my unnamed OC in the Saga der Saga )) roamed...



Damnit, am I losing it? This is not helping my sanity for the new OC I plan to create soon. >_<

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

All this crack is spawning more crack ideas inside me as well... even more so if I tie it with my story of the first Empress taking in orphans who are linked to the bloodline of the Kaiser across the oceans while in Ancient South Mid-childa lies the original lands where ancient Vivio, Keroko, Kha and Crono (( my unnamed OC in the Saga der Saga )) roamed...



Damnit, am I losing it? This is not helping my sanity for the new OC I plan to create soon. >_<

That's sooooo gonna rock!!!

[Mekhatron]Join us... MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA...!!![/Mekhatron]

[Jimmy C]

I sense a possible contradiction here

Originally Posted by kha

With that, sealed herself and the Golden Throne in Closed Space,

Before then, Syaoran buried Sakura in a grand sacophagus, wrapped in parchment, and declared that "Here lies the Sanckt Kaiser of Belka".

The question of course, is how much do people know about the events beween H***** falling during the Heresy and the sarcophagus appearing. I mean, if they knew she had sealed herself away in closed space, wouldn't they be suspicious about the sarcophagus?
Needs elaboration.

I have my doubts about the Cradle crashing. If it had been structurally compromised, I think it's unlikely the Doctor would have been able to repair it and field his drone army at the same time and keep both projects hidden. Especially since he was hiding the Cradle from the High Council as well.

[Dream_Traveller]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

All this crack is spawning more crack ideas inside me as well... even more so if I tie it with my story of the first Empress taking in orphans who are linked to the bloodline of the Kaiser across the oceans while in Ancient South Mid-childa lies the original lands where ancient Vivio, Keroko, Kha and Crono (( my unnamed OC in the Saga der Saga )) roamed...



Damnit, am I losing it? This is not helping my sanity for the new OC I plan to create soon. >_<

Losing it? By no means, Gale.

You're opening more doors and creating more awesomeness!

Seriously though, you are- and all of this makes me anticipate more crack ideas from you.

@Kha:

True Schneiderform:

DAMN.

One fearsome armor there...and a nice choice, too.

Now, for you all...what say you to me possibly making a design based off of this chap?

Spoiler for Erm...:

Quite the...eccentric...

Or this one, who looks a tad eccentric/odd as well.

Spoiler for Double Erm...:

*Runs like the wind.*

[Erio]

Originally Posted by Kha

THIS IS A GREAT IDEA!

One inherits one of her powers (Vivio), one inherited her fighting instinct (Keroko), and one inherited her spirit (Kha)!

And not only just that; this makes Keroko and Kha cousins, if not siblings!

So Kha is now 1/4 Naaru, 1/4 Seiou, 1/4 another divine being and 1/4 human?

Since when did Kha inherit the Seiou's spirit? The one who is supposed to be related to the Seiou is Sakura, not Kha, right?

Kha was created as half Naaru, half human, and then he swallowed the Relic... I dont recall you saying he was also part Seiou...