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Old 2008-11-25, 17:31   Link #11181
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Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.49:


First post on Lappy-chan!
This is a pretty interesting situation right now. Obviously with that career path this sort of thing does make sense. Could be a bit tough since I'm sure Syn doesn't want to just slash 3/4 of the options right out of it. Well I'm sure both will work on a middle ground kind of thing. Still could be a pretty entertaining chapter in terms of negotiations. Content aside discussing career situations isn't something strange for a relationship at that stage.

Great job as always Satashi.

And yay for a page claim .
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Old 2008-11-25, 17:44   Link #11182
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A whole weekday without my Satashi fic fix? This is sick and wrong!

...

Anyway, on to different matters. I thought this one up in the shower last night. I don't know why every time I go into the shower I seem to come up with ideas for Fate-based crack fics. My wife may need to investigate this phenomenon. I suspect she may bring the rolling pin on this investigation.

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Old 2008-11-25, 17:50   Link #11183
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A whole weekday without my Satashi fic fix? This is sick and wrong!

...

Anyway, on to different matters. I thought this one up in the shower last night. I don't know why every time I go into the shower I seem to come up with ideas for Fate-based crack fics. My wife may need to investigate this phenomenon. I suspect she may bring the rolling pin on this investigation.

Spoiler for Who Let Bardiche Surf the Web?:


I...er...ah...

*beats head against the wall*

I don't know if I can ever look at Riot Zamber the same way again...

*dawns a large, yellow hat and blue robe before impaling DezoPenguin's head with a blue dagger*
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Old 2008-11-25, 17:54   Link #11184
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I'm surprised it took you thid long to make the link, Eva. I wen't "Sword Chucks, yo!" the first time Riot Mode appeared on the screen.

Two blades, connected by a magical cable?

Fate definitely encountered Fighter somewhere along her Enforcer duties.
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Old 2008-11-25, 18:00   Link #11185
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Hey now... -_- ()

Let's just hope that none of his, uh, expert fighting skills, cunning logic, and intellect rubbed off on her...
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Old 2008-11-25, 18:34   Link #11186
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Hey now! There's absolutely nothing wrong with Fighter's fighting skills, this is the guy who held of Ancient Demons that none could so much scratch, slaughtered armies of dragons, and invented Sword Chucks.
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Old 2008-11-25, 18:41   Link #11187
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Oh fine, fine . Though it might be a bit weird to see Fate get in a fight with herself... >_>
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Old 2008-11-25, 19:04   Link #11188
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A whole weekday without my Satashi fic fix? This is sick and wrong!

...

Anyway, on to different matters. I thought this one up in the shower last night. I don't know why every time I go into the shower I seem to come up with ideas for Fate-based crack fics. My wife may need to investigate this phenomenon. I suspect she may bring the rolling pin on this investigation.

Spoiler for Who Let Bardiche Surf the Web?:
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Good Lord. I think your wife really needs to start investigating where you come up with this awesome, hilarious stuff.

Bardiche's last line was just pure win. The thought of him saying "Yo" is enough to make me fall out of my chair with laughter.
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Old 2008-11-25, 19:29   Link #11189
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A double post? Egads...

But anyway. A quick short that came to me today in school during study hall and wouldn't leave me alone. It's set in my Bless the Broken Road timeline, so Nanoha is only about... 12, I'd say, since it occurs after Elise gives her a gun. Consider this a gift to enjoy until I actually turn out the chapter itself.

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Old 2008-11-25, 19:38   Link #11190
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A whole weekday without my Satashi fic fix? This is sick and wrong!

...

Anyway, on to different matters. I thought this one up in the shower last night. I don't know why every time I go into the shower I seem to come up with ideas for Fate-based crack fics. My wife may need to investigate this phenomenon. I suspect she may bring the rolling pin on this investigation.

Spoiler for Who Let Bardiche Surf the Web?:
Fate:Two fisted monkey Style!
Tia: What's that!?
Nanoha: I hope it involves their pants staying on....

P.S: I wrote today, just no internet to upload. as soon s I get lappy-chan up and going, I'll post it here.
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Old 2008-11-25, 20:35   Link #11191
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Old 2008-11-25, 21:55   Link #11192
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O.O ZOMG teh plot THICKENS! *does the happy-happy dance*
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Old 2008-11-25, 22:22   Link #11193
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@Evangelion Xgouki, Keroko, RadiantBeam Satashi:Glad you enjoyed it. But really, Fate does need to limit Bardiche's internet access...today sprite comics, tomorrow...fanfiction! *shudder*

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A double post? Egads...

But anyway. A quick short that came to me today in school during study hall and wouldn't leave me alone. It's set in my Bless the Broken Road timeline, so Nanoha is only about... 12, I'd say, since it occurs after Elise gives her a gun. Consider this a gift to enjoy until I actually turn out the chapter itself.

Spoiler for This Is The Way (A Heart Breaks):
Ohhhh, this works so much better than having it happen in...I guess it would end up being Chapter 3?...of BtBR! Being much younger and still recovering from the trauma of losing her magic(which would help to offset Nanoha's exaggerated I'm-an-anime-kid-and-therefore-as-emotionally-mature-as-most-adults-if-not-moreso emotional development) makes it more likely she'd react first and think later--plus, she'd still be unused to having a lethal weapon at hand and therefore her combat reflexes would still be operating in terms of shoot-first-think-later that one can get away with when flinging around magic damage.

And don't think that I missed Elise's line (emphasis added): "A few years older than I was." You really do intend to torture her, don't you!

Overall, very nice--and I think with some slight rewriting it would go well as a flashback scene in BtBR, as well (good character-defining moments are worth preserving!).

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Hm...I'm going to join in with a couple of other people and agree with Syn becoming too accepting, too fast of Vivio's job after the extreme reaction she showed when she first found out. On the other hand, it got me to the point I wanted to see between them, so I don't think I'll complain too much. Especially since it makes me think that I was right and that it wasn't the content of the job so much as Vivio slept with Syn while withholding potential hot-button information that could have affected the relationship.

(It actually reminds me more and more of Fate and Nanoha's fight after the pole dance business in Saved by the Bell, the more it goes on; that is, the fight was all about the relationship subtext and not about the actual subject matter and therefore it's easy for them to come to an agreement about the externals since the externals didn't really matter anyway. My wife and I have had that fight, though never about sex, and it always works out that way.)

But that last paragraph...*shakes head* Way to drop a hammer on us! I always, always forget just who the heck Syn's family is (particularly since military matters are relevant here). Tip for Syn: make sure to say very fast that you had no idea what was going on; you do not want Vivio getting the idea that you were involved in some scheme to reunite her with her extended family, particularly when you're still feeling out your trust issues.

I'm going to go out on a limb here and predict that of all the series regulars, Hayate is the only person who "gets" what's going on with Vivio leaving home and how she ended up without major shock or angst.
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Old 2008-11-25, 22:23   Link #11194
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LOL! Yes sword chucks! You know a lot of people seem to get inspired in or right after a shower.
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A double post? Egads...

But anyway. A quick short that came to me today in school during study hall and wouldn't leave me alone. It's set in my Bless the Broken Road timeline, so Nanoha is only about... 12, I'd say, since it occurs after Elise gives her a gun. Consider this a gift to enjoy until I actually turn out the chapter itself.

Spoiler for This Is The Way (A Heart Breaks):
Aww, so cute/sad at the same time! It's pretty tough out there for Nanoha. Can't wait for a real chapter!
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Fate:Two fisted monkey Style!
Tia: What's that!?
Nanoha: I hope it involves their pants staying on....

P.S: I wrote today, just no internet to upload. as soon s I get lappy-chan up and going, I'll post it here.
Lol at Nanoha. Her mind's always in the gutter.
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Oh wow, that is so weird. I was going to mention how I really miss Nanoha and Fate because we always get Elena to give advice to Syn but Vivio doesn't have anyone. Also that wouldn't it be very interesting if Hayate and co. showed up and found Vivio and also found out what she is doing. But look! It seems like you're already on that track so I can't wait to see what happens.
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Old 2008-11-25, 22:44   Link #11195
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Lol at Nanoha. Her mind's always in the gutter.
Actually that is a reference to Kim Possible. (If i am right and remember well anyway)

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@DezoPenguin ...We need the glorious chainsword method...
@Satashi ...The plot... no already said... nice plot twist... though i doubt Vivio will acept if she knows about it so Syn has to forget to mention that detail...

*goes back to writing....sure writing << >>*
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Old 2008-11-25, 22:53   Link #11196
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Actually that is a reference to Kim Possible. (If i am right and remember well anyway)

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@DezoPenguin ...We need the glorious chainsword method...
@Satashi ...The plot... no already said... nice plot twist... though i doubt Vivio will acept if she knows about it so Syn has to forget to mention that detail...

*goes back to writing....sure writing << >>*
Kim possible says stuff like that? I mean I guess maybe since Ron's pants are always falling down but it's definitely different out of context. Well maybe its just my mind in the gutter.
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Old 2008-11-25, 22:53   Link #11197
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Actually that is a reference to Kim Possible. (If i am right and remember well anyway)
Sounds like it. But then, any time I hear "monkey style" and "pants falling off" anywhere near each other Ron Stoppable immediately springs to mind. It's inevitable.

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@Satashi ...The plot... no already said... nice plot twist... though i doubt Vivio will acept if she knows about it so Syn has to forget to mention that detail...

*goes back to writing....sure writing << >>*
Syn doesn't know the significance of it, though--she only knows that her family Thanksgiving dinner includes some bigwigs from the "6th Mobile Division"; Syn doesn't know that's basically Vivio's adoptive extended family. She's probably say something to Vivio like, "You're invited to Thanksgiving dinner; my parents want to meet you. Who's going to be there? My parents, and some other guests too, a bunch of big-shots from work."

The real question is, will Satashi get the Thanksgiving dinner chapter posted on Thanksgiving?
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Old 2008-11-25, 23:21   Link #11198
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O.O!

A confrontation aproaching....

>_>...

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Vita!!!
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Old 2008-11-26, 00:16   Link #11199
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As a apology from my postingless time i bring you

Crack

Enjoy

*Fleee.eeeees*

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Old 2008-11-26, 00:42   Link #11200
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As a apology from my postingless time i bring you

Crack

Enjoy

*Fleee.eeeees*

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*chortle* Vice should have known he was in trouble when Yuuno took the bait. Despite the fact that he was sitting...at a bar...with a girl Chrono and Vice had decreed to be "hot."

(Incidentally, was this meant to be a parody/takeoff on something else as well as just funny? It didn't ring any bells with me, but it had that kind of "you ought to recognize this" sense about it, if you know what I mean.)
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