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2008-11-30, 22:25 | Link #11261 |
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And thanks for the shout-out, giving Miyuki my ongoing problem with Kyon Kuon's name. Edit: Page claim for finding a deeply anticipated new chapter; a great way to wrap up an otherwise mediocre day (and for the Dolphins picking up a game on the entire division! That was good, too. ). Last edited by DezoPenguin; 2008-11-30 at 22:30. Reason: Page claim! |
2008-12-01, 01:19 | Link #11262 | |
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The intro was quite beautifull, very well planted Shamal can't cook LMAO, and the triangle heart you presented is quite funny On a random note: "Evil Rick grabs a shootgun and puts a bullet between the eyes of Lieutenant Altier" Sorry budy, Vita is MY girlfriend
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2008-12-01, 05:53 | Link #11265 | |
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Merry Christmas, Mid-Childa! Last edited by TerranReaper; 2008-12-01 at 06:16. |
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2008-12-01, 11:50 | Link #11266 |
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Posting from an IIT classroom during break time :3 thirty minute break, wow @_@
So far it's pretty fun. I havn't done anything but set up my student account and whatnot, but still it's neat. I'm not sure if I'll be able to write any while here but I'll see how it works. Maybe I can do it on Lappy-chan and then upload later when I get home. This'll slow down PS!Vivio a lot but it's allllmost done anyway. Oh, and thanks Evil rick for the picture I'll see if I can work it on soon for the story Can't PM now 'cause I'm in class Nanoha looked over Fate's shoulder and read the words on the screen. "What are you writing?" "a small short to make it stay on topic on my forums." Nanoha blinked. "Will that work?" "Has to." fate smiled and clicked the post button. @Quail: Loved the short :3
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2008-12-01, 12:49 | Link #11267 |
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I've done NanoFate crack, I've done Vivio crack, and I've even done crack-fics based on someone else's fics. But as yet, I haven't written any crack-fics for my third major series. Time for that to change.
Spoiler for Birthday Heart:
"Let's see...mother...daughter...sister...grandmother...a unt..." Yuuno Scrya murmured aloud as he looked through the shop's selection of birthday cards in the "For Her" rack.
"Hey, ferret-boy!" "Hi, Chrono." Yuuno didn't even bother looking up. Chrono Harlaown was the only person who routinely called him "ferret-boy." "Shopping for Fate's birthday?" "Niece...cousin...granddaughter...Yes, I am. It's next week, after all." Chrono reached out and plucked a card from the "sister" column. "Not having any luck?" "Friend...sister-in-law...daughter-in-law...mother-in-law..." He groaned and straightened up. "No, I'm not. I don't want to get her something generic, though." "That's a librarian for you. Everything's got to be properly labeled and put in its proper place. Just buy a generic card and write the message on the envelope." Yuuno shook his head. "It's not like that. I just don't want to do something to offend her, or even to look like I was doing a slapdash, last-minute job of shopping. It hasn't even been a year since the wedding, after all." "Geez, Yuuno, Fate's not going to take it like that." "I know, but we're just starting to find our footing in this relationship, you know? I don't want to make a mistake that could damage things." "I guess I can see that. I remember tiptoeing around stuff a lot as a newlywed." Yuuno sighed and straightened up. "Excuse me, miss?" he called to the shop clerk. "Yes, sir?" "Do you have any birthday cards for a wife-in-law?" She gave him a completely blank stare. "Excuse me, sir? A...wife-in-law?" "We figured if his wife's brother is a brother-in-law, then his wife's wife should be a wife-in-law," Chrono explained. "Is there some other term for it?" Last edited by DezoPenguin; 2008-12-01 at 17:39. |
2008-12-01, 17:29 | Link #11268 |
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2008-12-02, 19:14 | Link #11269 |
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Chapter 10
“No more, no more!” yelled a trainee as he fell to the ground. He was all bruised up and his device was broken into half. Some trainees were hospitalized while others got knocked out as their training with Nanoha took the toll on them. “C’mon people, surely you can’t lose to a girl now,” said Nanoha. From afar, Virgil and Agito looked at the training with interest. “Well then, they really don’t call her the White Devil for nothing. Nanoha sure hasn’t lost her charm,” said Virgil. “You said it. Look how she tortured her trainees. She doesn’t even bother if they were girls or boys,” said Agito laughingly. After the wounded trainees were dispersed, only one trainee was left unhurt and standing tall. “What is your name, kid?” asked Nanoha. The young man saluted and said, “Private Roy Howardson, ma’am.” Nanoha inspected him and nodded in satisfaction. “You certainly are a tough guy I give you that. I want you to report to General Kassel, he can always use someone like you,” she said. The private nodded and left just as Virgil came up to Nanoha. “You do a fine job, Takamachi. You downed 15 trainees in just 5 minutes and demoralized the others one minute later,” laughed Virgil. “It’s the least I could do after so many centuries. Besides, I’m long due for a work out,” said Nanoha. As for Fate…well, she isn’t really meant for training. Trainees liked her instead of feared her as her method of training just wasn’t harsh enough. “That is all for today. Now I want you all to go home and do some practice, okay?” asked Fate. The others beamed and nodded. “Okay, Miss Fate!” they all said. As soon as the trainees left, Nanoha, Virgil and Agito came by. “Whoa, you just made the whole lot of them like you,” said Agito. Fate laughed and scratched her head. “Well, I’m not meant to train newbies and I just have a soft heart,” she said. “Sure you do. Anyway, let’s go get us some breakfast. I’m starving so badly I could eat a whale right now,” said Virgil. “Speaking of whales, look at the sky,” said Fate while pointing at the sky. There was a piece of starship wreckage falling from the sky and it splashed not far from the shore so only its tail stuck out of the water. “That was a Belkan starship. I reckon it tried to enter Earth but got shot. Perfect, with a close to intact enemy wreckage, we can look for important things!” said Virgil. “What about your breakfast?” asked Nanoha. “That can wait. This wreck may provide us some things we have to know about those damned Belkans,” said Virgil. Gallagher and his team of soldiers have successfully infiltrated one of the three lesser towers, intending to find about Jail and the whereabouts of Hayate. Chrono was with them but he didn’t like it one bit. “Spread out and take cover, we don’t know what type of booby traps this tower has,” said Gallagher. At the centre of the tower, one stair led up to the very top while the other led down to somewhere. “We’ll split into two groups. First group will go downstairs while the other goes upstairs. I and Chrono and a few of you will be in Group 1 while the others will be group two. Keep silence and stay off the COMM,” said Gallagher. The soldiers saluted and went their respective ways. The stairs spiraled down into what looked like a bottomless pit. It took them quite a long time just to reach to the bottom. “Why can’t we just use the elevator?” asked Chrono as he pointed towards an elevator next to the spiral stairs. Gallagher just scratched his head and shrugged. “You’re right. Why didn’t we use the elevator instead?” There was a door nearby but it was locked. It needed a security code to open, not exactly what Gallagher had in mind. “I expected some fancy schmancy lock but you ask for a security code instead? Pathetic,” he mumbled. The group’s engineer was a hacker so he did everything he can to break the code. “Lucky for me, I studied Belkan language. I’m inside the system now…hacking…matching possible codes…overriding…bingo, I’ve got it!” the engineer said. “Impressive,” Chrono thought. They entered a lab with many tubes filled with liquid medium, each containing a fetus with different characteristics. Some had horns and tails while others have wings and even claws. “Whoa, is this some kind of mutant circus? I’m seeing freak shows here,” someone muttered. Gallagher took some pictures of it and sent it back to Earth, proving that the Belkans were toying with life. “This is the evidence we’ve been looking for many years now. We were trying to prove our hypothesis that the Belkans were messing around with the wrong thing,” said Gallagher. The lab was cramped and they had just enough space to move. However when they proceeded further, they reached an open circular chamber and what they saw was just both scary and magnificent. The chamber was a housing unit for life support tubes and the walls were full of them. There had to be a thousand of mutants here. “If I hadn’t known better, this reminded me like the work of Jail Scaglietti,” Chrono said to Gallagher. The latter just nodded grimly. He held up his energy rifle and shot one of the tubes. The glass cracked and liquid flowed out along with the mutant fetus in it. He examined it and stroked his chin. “This thing…it has just been born. I think there might be a carrier somewhere,” Gallagher muttered. “Right you are, Terran. You are a smart one,” a voice boomed. They looked around but saw no one. Just then out from a dark corner, Jail came out with Hayate strapped onto a metal table. Her clothes were torn and her mouth was covered by a piece of cloth. She looked tired and half-dead. “This is the carrier you’re mentioning. She has been particularly useful because she is the only one with the Ancient Belkan magic system,” said Jail with a maniacal grin. “What have you done to my officer?” growled Chrono. “Oh nothing, I just made her give birth to the thousands of these super soldiers that will wreck you’re pitiful little lives. It looks like she overdid it and I need a new carrier,” Jail said. One soldier aimed his rifle at Jail’s head but a whip wrapped around it and yanked it from his grasp. Turning to the source of the attack, he saw Quattro. She has a whip and a hammer of lightning and her hair was untied. “You want Dr. Jail, you go through me first,” she said. Gallagher looked at her and raised an eyebrow. “Chrono, did she ever carry weapons like these?” he asked. Chrono shook his head. “Well then, I guess we’ll play her little game. Everyone, switch to energy swords,” he commanded. He brandished an energy sword and the other soldiers followed. Quattro laughed and lashed her whip at them. “The time has come. Unseal the casket in 5 seconds,” a medical officer said. In a Terran hospital at Midway Island, the time has come to revive Caro from her slumber. No one but high ranking officers were there to watch. Agito had been sent by Virgil to oversee the reviving for him since he was busy investigating a wreck. The casket vented gas and opened up slowly. There laid the heroine who battled for Earth and was critically wounded. Now, she looked better but her eyes were still closed and her skin was pale. Someone injected her with green liquid and backed away. Her color returned and her eyes fluttered open moments later. “Welcome to the future, Miss Caro Ru Lushe,” a medical officer said. Caro looked around and got out from the casket. Her armor was still intact and it seems like it coped well with the cryo freeze. “Where am I?” she asked. One of them stepped forward. “You’re on Midway Island, ma’am, 5 centuries in the future. It took us many years to heal your wounds but we managed. We welcome you back from the dead,” said the officer. Caro nodded and searched for Friedrich but he wasn’t there, unknown to her that he died 2 years after Caro went into cryo sleep. “I’m sorry ma’am but your dragon is no longer alive. He had no will to live on without you and our medical team can’t do much about his condition,” a medical staff replied. Caro nodded bitterly and turned to face the officer who first spoke to her. ‘‘I need to see your commanding general. I need to get a task done,” she said. KOTR comes later . |
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2008-12-03, 00:42 | Link #11270 |
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@Thread: Wow the thread is dying. It's been two days and there are only 5 posts since my last.
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2008-12-03, 01:00 | Link #11271 |
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Before the Strom Spoiler for Chapter 25:
Dairou City
Train station "It's a riddle" Nanoha said "What?" Fate asked a bit confused for the words of Nanoha "'Dark, cold vault', what that clown said... it's some kind of riddle" "Cold vault... hmm... It could be..." Fate tried to figurate it out, but Nanoha figurated "A refrigerator!" Nanoha almost screamed "Yes... yes, you'r right! But... but a refrigerator sound's a bit..." "No, not any refrigerator, a big one, like the one used by the groceries stores, to freeze the meet..." Nanoha moved to a person who was passing at their side "Escuse me sr, were is the nearest mall?" xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxx TSAB Infirmary "Okay... repeat it agin... were is Zaphira?" Hayate asked to Signum who was resting in a bed, recovering from her injuries after the battle against Marksellus "He swaped places with this girl who attacked me... or at least that's what I think, she said something about some 'Krimsom forest', If she was there and then she was were Zaphira was... maybe Zaphira is were she was before, in this Krimsom forest" The words of Signum were totally confusing, Hayate even tough that she was dilerating, but she knew that Signum never delirates "And were is this 'Krimsom forest'" Hayate asked "I... I don't know... but that girl, Marksellus, she for sure knows, you must find her!" Signum almos jumped out of bed while saing this, Shamal quickly grabed her, making her rest again over the bed "Good... first Vivio, then Vita, now Zaphira, what the Hell is hapening?!" The frustration could be seen on the face of Hayate, suddenly, the things were going out of control, and it seemed that Hayate couldn't do anything to protect the people she cared about, Signum and Shamal knew this, and altough Hayate tried to look strong, it was obvius that she was desperated "Hayate... relax, they are all fine I know we... we will discover what is happening, you... you should go and rest a bit, you have been very exalted latelly, I don't want to have you on the infirmary too" Shamal said, tring to help her misstress "You... you probably are right I... I should sleep a bit, if there is anything related to Vivio, Vita or Zaphira, let me know inmediatly" After saing this,m Hayate leaved the room and walked to away Only when Hayate was far away was when Shamal started to cry "What is hapening Signum?!" Shamal asked to her friend, cleaning the tears from her face "I... I don't know..." Signum added, huging her friend who just sat at her side "But I think that it is all linked to Vita" "What?" Shamal asked "Let me tell you what hapened before Zaphira disapeared, some one pretending to be you, told something strange... that.... that our loyalty was only to Vita, not to Hayate and that we must help Vita to complete some... quest and to protect her from someone named 'The Silver Queen'" "Wait... pretending to be... me?" "Yes, well, he or... she looked like you, his voice was exactly like your's and... I could swear that it was you, but it was an impostor... like the one who pretended to be Fate and tricked Nanoha" "Oh my... you mean... someone who could change his form, his appearance at will?" "Probably... but I'm nots sure" Signum added "The point is... that I think that we must go and find Vita" "But that's what we are doing! We have an entire section of the..." Before Shamal could end the phrase, Signum stoped her grabing her hand "I mean that we must find her... just the 3 of us, Zaphira, you and me" "But... why? Why just us? Why not Hayate, Nanoha and the others?" Signum remained silent for a bit, analising her words before saing anything, she finally released the phrase "Because they could die, I don't know why, but all the things that are happening, are linked with Vita... with us, and it's only our matter" Shamal opened her mout, but she closed it again before saing anything, without been totally sure, she somehow knew that Signum was telling the true xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Long Enterprises "Hey Buck! Still getting fat?" The guard took the oportunity to mock the obese man who was just coming inside the main edifice of Long Enterprises, pulling a car with 2 big containers, the 2 filled with water "Very funny you su@%&$!" The guy replied, keeping his way ignoring the laughs of the two guards, he leaved the car at the entrance of the elevator, he the ran in direction to the rest rooms After some seconds, the car started to shacke, one of the containers throwed all the water outside and Vivio came out of it taking a big breath, Karil did the same from the other container "Gahhhh... I think I was gonna die!" Vivio said, placing a foot out of the water container "Hah! My plan worked, my calculations were right, those milkshakes needed to get out somehow from that guy" Karil replied, Vivio helped her to get out of the container, while Abe shakde himself from all the cold water [Escuse me ladies, I think you'r forgeting that I gave you those air bubbles so you could breath all this time inside those containers, I think I deserv some "Thankyou" words] "Yes Falling Soul, I know that, thankyou very much" Karil said "Is the least thing he could do" Vivio added [I will turn your jacket barrier into a bunny costume for that] "If you ever dare...!" Before Vivio could continue her discusion with her device, Karil pulled her into the stair section who was at the side of the elevators "Come on Vi, we must find Mr. Long" Karil said xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Botan Jungle "This is... right?" Vita asked to Kai at the entrance of the big estructure who was just in fron of her "Do you see any other temple around here?" Kai's words revealed that Vita's question was pointless, it was obvius that the big temple of rock was the one pointed by the Village chief "Okay... I guess that I better get in and found... whatever I'm looking" "Hmmm?" "Ehm... I'll just get in there and then get out as fast as I can" "Okay... let's go" Kai aproached to the door of rock, in it, there were images of dragons marked on the old stone, 2 pillars at the side of the entrance with a skull at the top, this temple was quite scary, Kai pushed the door, making a space big enough to come in, Vita took a deep breath and then she move inside the estructure Renders: Spoiler for The Silver Queen:
Note: This chapter is named "Before the Storm" for one reason, the REAL battles will star on the next chapter and the way to World War Vita will begin >:3
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Anyway Spoiler for Another random shot brought to you by angst :3:
”Do I know you?” She asks to the person beside her. Her brain reaches to the logic conclusion that she must as she is accompanying her and is looking over her but she asks anyway just to make sure. Her mind can find an excuse as to why she would be here if she didn’t know her but… “I think you do,” she says smiling but her smile reflects sadness. But why would she be sad? There was no reason to be sad unless she had forgotten about her. But she couldn’t have forgotten about her. Because if she had her heart would tell her. Or at least that was what she thought after reading or rather hearing romance novels. “I do?” she asks not sure about it. She had forgotten another thing as well. This was not one of the fictional worlds that existed. This was reality and that didn’t apply to reality. “Yes but you can’t remember right now,” she is still smiling. Her face still doesn’t show tears or the smile fading away but deep inside her, she knows that she should be doing that. After all it was what any normal person would do. But she had forgotten, not surprising of course, how she was. Before she could reply back, a hand was placed above her head and ruffled her hair. “Just rest okay?” the unknown but not unknown person said. She just nodded, not knowing what else she could do. The forgotten but not forgotten person smiled one last time at her and walked away. She wondered why it felt so familiar if she didn’t know her. Perhaps she was right and she did know her but she couldn’t remember. She tried to remember where did she met the unknown person, what is her name and more importantly what is their relationship. Her mind drifts to unconscious without reaching the answer. She would feel frustrated later when she was better. ------- The forgotten but not forgotten person stepped out of the room. How could she remain calmed after having to suffer that was something that she didn’t know but she wished to so she could do it again on her visit tomorrow. Her red eyes were starting to tear but she tried to push that feeling away. It certainly wasn’t the first time and it certainly wouldn’t be the last time. “Rest well… Nanoha,” she whispers at the door. She knows that is useless but she does it anyway. How long will she had to endure that? It was a question without answer. And that gave her hope. *Returns to school related things~*
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Knights of the Reich: Chapter 2
“Now I’m gonna go through this slowly so you can think about what you’ve done. One wrong move and it is over,” said Subaru while eyeing Teana seriously. Teana on the other hand was not deterred by what Subaru said. She just snorted and said, “You have a lot of guts to take on someone my level and age, Subaru. You can always surrender now or face humiliation.” Subaru stared at Teana for a while and smiled. “Fine. Checkmate, Tia. You lose,” Subaru said happily as she moved her chess piece against the queen. “Gahh, why do I always lose to you in chess?!” Teana yelled while grabbing her hair. “You’ve beaten me 3 times in a row!” she continued. Subaru shrugged and checked her watch. Good, it was time for their duty. “C’mon Tia, we have patrolling duties to do,” said Subaru. They left the cafeteria table and armed themselves with their devices. When they were patrolling around the front yard of the Capital Defense Force HQ, they noticed Big Al talking to some guards before entering the building. Behind him was a man in black armor with a bit of blue tinge. Half his face was covered and he had a monocle. “Who is that guy?” asked Subaru. “You mean Big Al?” asked Teana. “No, I mean that guy behind Big Al, the guy with half his face covered. I never seen him before,” said Subaru. Teana had a closer look and shook her head. “No, I’ve never seen him before as well,” replied the orange-haired girl. Just then, Nanoha tapped on Teana’s shoulder. “Teana, you’ll be guarding Wing B. Subaru you guard where you are now. Make sure you keep vigilant because we heard that the anarchists maybe trying to assassinate Big Al,” Nanoha said. The two saluted and went to their respective posts. Nanoha looked around and noticed more troopships coming down from the skies. The Mid-Childans have opened a dimension portal to allow Terran troopships through along with a limited number of tanks. There isn’t a threat now but the Terrans were cautious. After 3 hours of patrolling, Nanoha was tired so she went to a nearby café to have a drink since she was off duty for an hour. She saw Signum sitting alone, drinking some coffee while reading the daily news. “Good afternoon, Signum,” Nanoha said with a smile. Signum looked at her and greeted her back. She was smoking on Salem cigarettes that were given to her by a Mid-Childan administrator to Earth. “Since when did you start smoking, Signum?” asked Nanoha. “Since Administrator Montier got me these pack of Salems. I admit, they’re nice to smoke on,” said Signum. (Warning, never smoke. It’s bad for you.) Nanoha threw a knife blade at the cigarette and sliced it in half. “Hey, why did you do that?!” Signum yelled. “I just can’t stand cigar smoke and neither can I understand what is so enjoyable about smoking,” said Nanoha grimly. Signum took out another cigar and smoked on it. “Bah, you’re making me nauseate. I’ll see you later, Signum. Hope you get better from your food poisoning,” said Nanoha. “Which reminds me that I’ll have to kill Shamal sooner or later,” Signum said darkly. She’s scary, Nanoha thought. Nanoha bought a cup of latte and drunk it in one gulp. The afternoon sun was scorching and even the Terrans and Mid-Childan guards couldn’t take it. It was 2 p.m. Mid-Childan time and the talks were not even over yet. The guards sat under trees or anywhere that provided a shadow against the sun. They were tired and hungry. Fate was also feeling fatigued but Nanoha returned with a cup of cold mocha for her. “Thanks, I really needed that,” said Fate. Just then, the doors of the building opened. Big Al came out smiling and even the officers present during the meeting were also smiling. “Hah, I reckon they have come to a good conclusion. Perhaps now we have a more adequate orbital defense,” said Fate. Nanoha nodded but said nothing. Big Al entered a troopship along with his guards. One by one, the troopships entered the portal and returned back to Earth. It was a good day and Nanoha had to admit, it was better than she expected. That night, everyone came for dinner at Hayate’s home. They were having…oh, what’s this? Burnt steak and dried chicken? “Eh heh, sorry everyone, I’m still bad at cooking,” said Shamal with a nervous laugh. “I’ll call pizza delivery,” Vita grumbled. “So, everything went well I presume?” asked Fate. Hayate nodded with a smile so bright that it reminded Nanoha of the smile when they first became friends. “Yes, it went very well and Big Al was generous enough to offer additional protection,” said Hayate. “What additional protection is that?” asked Vivio. “Orbital Precision Strike Ion Cannons,” said Hayate gleefully. Fate gave a low whistle. The Ion Cannons were Earth’s most deadly ground strike low orbit cannons. The officers, including Fate and Nanoha, have seen demonstrations of it firing before. The ion beams can obliterate a base in a flash of blue light and disrupt electronic equipments. That explained a certain malfunction in Raging Heart and Bardiche after it fired. The electronic parts in the devices were fried and it cost them a lot just to get them replaced. “Well, damn generous of them I’ll say. So Vivio, who is this new friend of yours you met in school today that you kept telling me about earlier? You seem to like that particular person,” asked Nanoha. “It’s a secret, mama. I’m inviting her over tomorrow and you’ll see her for yourself,” Vivio said with a smile. After the pizza have arrived, everyone showed down on it. Signum stared at the pepperoni pizza and made a disgusted expression. “Ugh, you can’t pay me to eat that. I’m better of eating Shamal’s fish paste than that junk,” she complained. Everyone stared at her with surprised faces. “Are you feeling okay, Signum? You seem to despise a lot of foods lately,” said Yuuno. Shamal examined her and nodded with a smile. “I see, she just needs a little tweak in her system,” said Shamal. After that was done, Signum seems better. There was a knock on the door and in came Lieutenant Altier. “Ah, you arrived at last. Please have a sit,” said Hayate. Altier smiled but Signum noticed it wasn’t a sincere one. “Don’t mind me, Hayate, I’ve brought a few Terran friends along,” he said. In came two Terran soldiers. One was a male, the other a female. “Everyone, I’d like you to meet two members of the Terran Backup Protection Force stationed at Northport City to provide additional security. Their names are Jenna Howardson and Lance Valentine,” said Altier. Yuuno looked at Lance with narrow eyes. “Hey, you’re that guy who followed Big Al around,” he said. Lance just stared at him and nodded. He looked at his watch and looked at Altier. “Well, are we gonna eat something or what? I’m a very busy man and I have no time for chatter,” said Lance. His voice was low and dangerous and it is no surprise that he had a mysterious feel around him. He looks like those people who don’t talk much. “Of course, you’re the leader of the security force and you have a lot of things to do. Uhm, pizza?” asked Altier, his voice hinting some fear in it. “That’ll do. Jenna please take first,” said Lance. After dinner, Yuuno played some board games with Vivio while Fate, Hayate and Nanoha had a talk. “That Lance Valentine is really a dangerous guy. I heard the TSAB call him the ‘Demon in Black Armor’, or so I’ve heard,” said Hayate. “So it’s him? Is he always that serious?” asked Fate. “No, he isn’t. I have a friend who is a friend to him for 10 years. She said that when he was younger, he wasn’t like that, not until someone betrayed his father and mother to their deaths. Not only that, he suffered hardship by staying with his uncle and this drove him to become a vengeful guy. Despite that, I think he is just lonely even if he has friends now. Perhaps we should go talk to him,” said Hayate. “Oh no, he might growl at us and eat us up,” said Nanoha while making a growling face. Fate chuckled. “Anyway, we have more guarding duty tomorrow. This time, Big Al and General Alphonse will be coming for the initiation,” said Hayate. Fate and Nanoha nodded. What a day for them. They were really looking forward towards the summer holidays where they can play at the beach all day. Sadly, that is only a dream…they’re not kids anymore . Pick a name for Vivio's friend: A)Karyl B)Arin C)Sana Or if you have a better name, do tell. Oh yes, I have two characters making a cameo appearance. Guess who . Last edited by TerranReaper; 2008-12-03 at 09:53. |
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2008-12-03, 05:29 | Link #11276 |
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This chapter is so good! Elise and Nanoha's relationship soooo cool. |
2008-12-03, 08:06 | Link #11277 |
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Happy Birthday Wanwan (since it's the third in my timezone now :P )
I'll try my best to post some shorts soon XD Spoiler for short short!:
Angel passed all of her Finals, and then she happily slept for about 9 hours. The end! Good luck Angel!
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Silver Queen was sort of a surprise. Whenever I hear Silver next to Queen I though about somebody literarly shiny. This lady looks outright dead. Oh well, it helps to be scary looking, that's not a face I'd like to meet in a dark alley. Quote:
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2008-12-03, 11:55 | Link #11279 | |
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@thread: slow thread *poke pokes* our authors are busy maybe...or they may be writing epic stuff *o*... or the plot bunnies are being shot down by some unknown force..must be that elmer fudd guy. oO!!! but whatever it is, i hope all of you are ok. i will happily wait for stories. also... *gives a big hug to ffc* thanks guys. ^^ p.s i still think the sailormoon x nanoha crack must be written *flails* *pokes blue-phoenix, tss, allquall, and the others* *fleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees* X3!!!!!!!!!! |
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2008-12-03, 18:08 | Link #11280 |
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Only for you wanwan
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Brightly colored orbs of EVIL from the NEGAVERSE swirl around the unsuspecting moon and into the depths of the strangely blue space. The screen fades into a giant orange eye of EVIL That is in reality the eye of a shadow blob monster thing. Oh who could save us from such a threat! Fighting evil by moonlight~ A gloved hand of JUSTICE rises in front of the moon. The hand is that of Sailor Moon also known as Nanoha Takamchi! Sailor Moonoha strikes a gallant pose as the screen fades Making friends by daylight~ To briefly show the rather haggard looking masked tuxedo clad mystery blond who's definitely not Fate... definitely not. As it fades we see Nanoha in her school uniform looking remarkably like her super self... seriously shouldn't she wear a mask or something? She runs in front of what looks remarkably like a certain painting and runs towards a blond prince who is also definitely not Fate... they're completely different... entirely. Never running from a real fight~ Nanoha takes her magical tiara from her head, ready to toss it at her opponent when she realizes tiara's are for sissies and gets out her magical staff and blasts the baddy to next tuesday. She is the one named Sailor Moon! Nanoha pretends to look interested as her boring mcnonsailor scout friends who are destined to mysteriously never be mentioned again, Arisa and Suzuka, talk to her on the phone. She will never turn her back on a friend~ Another image shows brave Sailor Moon surrounded by her concerned fellow sailor scouts as she cradles her unconsious boring mclamely lame friends. She is always there to defend~ Nanoha preforms and intricate sparkley stock footage move only to just chuck her magical staff at her enemy. She is the one on who we can depend~ Nanoha and her band of merry scouts twirl through the air with their aptly colored scarves. She is the one named Sailor.......... Sailor Venus The brunette short haired Sailor Venus grins cattishly as she twirls her "chain" *coughwhipchough* around. Sailor Mars The little red head warningly aims her hammer of fire at the screen. Sailor Jupiter The tall pink haired woman glares sternly at the screen while lightning buzzes about. Sailor Mercury The Final Scout makes a dramatic entrance. Hi- er her mighty muscles ripple as the white haired ma-girl showers light bubbles all about with true manli-womanliness. Her secret powers are so new to her In a scene that spoils the whole friggin' season Sailor Moon in full moon princess gear holds her magic wand aloft while her friends assist through the power of friendship. Music interlude~ A bunch of drama and symbolism that were the actual opening theme video in the original Japanese version but have been reduced to filler play by. The only thing that really matters is the Evil Queen Percia of the NEGAVERSE striking a dramatic pose. Fighting evil by moonlight In another spoilerific scene brave Sailor Moon Breaker's the evil queen to little bitty pieces. Making Friends by daylight Nanoha poses and sparkles for the camera. With her Sailor Scouts to help fight, The Scouts raise their gaunlets of ro- magic power in preparation to kick some EVIL villain booty. She is the one named Sailor Moon! Nanoha twirls around as she transforms into the one the only... She is the one named Sailor Moon Sailor Moon! She poses once again in front of the moon in case you weren't quite sure what her shtick was yet. She is the one... Sailor Moon and her posse pose for one last shot SAILOR MOON! Spoiler for Extra:
Sailor Nanoha: In the name of the Moon You will be my friend! Skipping to season three... Ooo~ ooo~ ooo ooo ooo~ *Cherry blossom petals fall all around in a romantic fashion as two people walk away* Nanoha *watching*: Wow I can't believe I thought Yuuno was a girl. He and Chrono sure are close cousins. Hayate: They seemed more like lovers to me Nanoha: Don't be silly they're cousins Hayate: I think they're making out over there Nanoha:... they're just saying bye... yeah... bye. What? You can't have a crack parody and base it on the original . Though since it is the english version I guess everyone needs new names Nancy, Haley, Vivian, Simone and Barbara it is Yes... Zaffy is now Barbara *giggle* Fate can stay the same I guess |
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