2009-11-22, 11:17 | Link #12524 |
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Well you also gained my respect, Ayu-san
katiemirmo: 8.4/10...I agree with ganbaru, you should sharpen the focal more...and is it me, or does it looks like you made a background and slapped the render on it? o.o''....I suggest you integrate the render just a little bit more and you should try to make the glowing spots really glow ...damn..I am doing a lot of criticizing today
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2009-11-22, 13:21 | Link #12526 |
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Spectacular nice image, I'm just not sure about the choice of colour for the text and border. Here's a tip, try to make a mini colour palette of the colours used in your render/image, and then try to pick one colour out of them to be your border. You can apply that to text aswell. I rate it at 7.5/10.
katie-chan seems like that's a popular render. Seeing as everyone else has said about its 'blurryness', I'll comment on something else. It seems a bit too 'washed-out'. I can see you used a purple/magenta photo-filter right? Well where the 'red eye' is, try erasing part of the photo-filter on that bit to make the red stand out a bit more. I'm not sure what the original render's colour were like, but maybe there are some other areas where you can do that to maybe bring out the colour. I rate it at 8.5/10. Sorry for the long winded rates people |
2009-11-22, 20:27 | Link #12535 |
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Alchemist007: I can't read the text any more, and I really think it needs a border, 6.5/10.
ayu-smepai: I think the border works better on this particular one than some of your other sigs. Sweet image, too. 9/10 suiryoku: It looks like Naruto's render was just slapped on... But not too bad. 7.8/10
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2009-11-23, 12:29 | Link #12538 |
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ayu-chan nice sig, although I'm not sure about the half-border. 8/10
suiryoku much better. I think the text is very well done. If you make the smaller 'suiryoku' even smaller, I think it would look even better 8/10 |
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