2011-12-12, 09:38 | Link #12701 |
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@ Senpai - How do you think Tatenashi should be in Kanzashi's daydream? Someone who's distant (representing her resentment of her) or someone who's trying to get alon with her (representing her desire to fix their relationship)?
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2011-12-12, 12:51 | Link #12703 |
Tenshi's Defense Squadron
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I don't think that tatenashi is an S character but she just has a trolling personality through her action and words. she doesn't seem to care about formalities that much, as she tells ichika to call her Tatenashi rather than seito kaichou.
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2011-12-12, 13:40 | Link #12704 |
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It wasn't a serious draft>_> I just made it up on the spot. Besides, her actual life Arc is tame and focuses more on her feelings and on the pressures of being the eldest child for the Sarashiki family and how Ichika being there helped her calm down. Also, Ichika's a butler here and you know how uptight that guy can be when he has to.
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2011-12-12, 17:41 | Link #12707 | |
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@Kazuma Does any of the OC is related to Canon character? (it was set in the future right?)
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2011-12-12, 17:51 | Link #12708 |
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alright i am going to have a little bit of fun with the next character i make for my fan fiction. it shall be a random draw, so please anyone wishing to be involved simply reply to this submitting your name. 1st winner chooses what country the character will be from, second winner gets to choose the personality and alignment, third winner gets to choose specifically how the female character will look, and fourth winner gets to choose the specifications for the IS unit.
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2011-12-12, 18:21 | Link #12713 |
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Uh, Akabane I remember, but Tenshi is.....
I'm very sorry, but to keep thing safe for everyone, can you quote both post? (This often happens considering there's about 20-100 new post a day...)
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2011-12-12, 18:31 | Link #12714 | |
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[QUOTE=kazuma via america;3801752]
Character Name: Akabane Hinida Gender : Male Looks: Short black spiked forward hair, slightly point ears, light blue eyes, thin pencil shaven eyebrows, small slightly lengthy smooth lips, small nose with slightly edged nose bridge and rounds nostrils, short facial hair just on the chin, strong jaw bone, mid sized neck, 5ft. 6 or 168 cm tall, strong body build both upper body and arms, long legs, mid sized arms, mid sized torso, broad shoulders, wears standard male uniform except with a hoodie edition made at the top and with pockets on both sides of the top of uniform, wears black with blue shade on sides sneakers with black shoe laces, wears gold thin metaled ring with blue saphire stone on right hand on ring finger, and wears a small gold chain necklace around neck. Alignment: Good Personality: Akabane is a intelligent young man who believes the only way to fight an opponent is with ones own hands and feet. invisions himself as a true martial artist that is both a good ally and a worthy opponent. friendly towards anybody but does hold a grudge aganist those who he hates. Romantic and is midly shy towards girls. Protective of friends, family or loved ones. Special abilities equipped to IS: Boost (increases flying speed by 70%), IS arms and legs have been customized to be as flexible as the pilots (allowing for superior manuverability and allows for martial arts techinque capabilities), shield has been specially designed to be condensed and hardened in certain areas for hand to hand combat capabilities but does not do damage to the unit itself due to special power sources being added in arms and legs. Background: When he was only 3 his parents had died in an accident in the U.S.A. was put up for adoption. Adopted by the hinida family in Japan. A family that ran a shrine and taught in there family for many generations martial arts and bushido. went through his childhood living in japan. always scoring high on his exams but also very friendly towards the other kids in his class. many years later he was found to possess IS capability. Was then invited to join the IS Academy. Additional weapons added: 4 small shield piercers. two equipped in the lower sections of both arms and two equipped in the lower sections of legs. as to act as a way to do damage using elbows and knees. Due to the lack of heavy weapons or ranged weapons Akabane's dark blue IS unit, his IS has high manuverability as well superior speed to many IS. [/QUOT Quote:
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2011-12-12, 18:58 | Link #12717 |
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I'm familiar with Akabane's unit because the spec is similar to what I write in the concept of a Crossover fic, so far it's good and plausible (not OP).
Akabane himself looks like a likable nice guy, all you need is to put him into draft. Also, Tenshi is an unreasonably jealous girl? You might want to change that, fans tend to cry "NOT ANOTHER ONE" about that... but of course it's up to you, maybe other writers will gave better pointer.
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2011-12-12, 19:00 | Link #12718 | |
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2011-12-12, 20:41 | Link #12720 |
Extra Superior Otaku
Join Date: Sep 2008
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Kamachi "The Ockham" Tetsuya
Age 26 Background : Has degree on Advance engineering and advance computer science. A Renaissance Man. Personality trait Calm and collected for most of the time , he mellowed out form his impulsive and bash actions as he dubbed it his youth's irrational exuberance Likes anime and gunpla/mech kits collector see Tabane (Houki elder sister) as a bitter rival and believe she plotting something Weapons. Has an small army of 20 cm mecha under his command ( That are model after Gundam/ Macross kits) Qoute " Tabane !!! I don't give damn in what kind of just reason you have, All that I can see it your self centered ego!! I swear on my fist that I will shatter that egotistical illusion of yours !!" I came up with this idea with a lack of sleep and watching to many anime |
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fanfic ideas, fanfiction, ff.net, harem, is fanfic, warning fanfic spoilers, wincest |
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