Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[AshLikeSnow]

A ha ha ~

New chappy. Here's a link. Tell me what you guys think? :3

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4099527/2/

[Master Kosa]

Originally Posted by Satashi

7 hours? So when I post my stuff late at night you get it right when you're waking up lol :P

Wow, amazing how we interact so much when you think about it.

Teaser for chapter 16 (yes 16! no spoilers :P )

Spoiler for We all saw this coming....:

"Fate Testarossa! Get your butt in here right this instant!" Precia's voice came neatly through the walls into the blonde's room.

'Oh crap...she got the bill...' Fate swallowed and smiled nervously at Nanoha. "I'll... be back in a moment."

Heh it's going to be interesting.

Originally Posted by Gillian

ah crap
I thought we are in the same timezone
but I'm by +1 hour

normally Satashi-sama posts between 17-18 his time
so it is only 1 or 2 in the morning by us ;D
:

Same here man. I hope this time Satashi will post soon, or I might fall asleep at my keyboard waiting.

@Sam the Onion I'm going to read all tomorrow, now I hadrly see anything.

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by AshLikeSnow

A ha ha ~

New chappy. Here's a link. Tell me what you guys think? :3

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4099527/2/

woah
good chapter

poor Nanoha, should be severe damage...
hope Fate don't go crazy

crap it, I will read SbtB tomorrow...

[Junkedcat]

Originally Posted by AshLikeSnow

A ha ha ~

New chappy. Here's a link. Tell me what you guys think? :3

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4099527/2/

That was very nice. Details fail you not. It must be so troublesome to write in so many details but in a story like this, its all worth it.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Sam the Onion

She's been using the taco teaser too much for us to believe anything she posts in teasers

Spoiler for TACO!:

Chapter 15 of SbtB:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/15/

Enjoy~

Thank you Angel for proofing.

[AshLikeSnow]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for TACO!:

Chapter 15 of SbtB:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/15/

Enjoy~

Thank you Angel for proofing.

Omg yay! Thanks Sata-chan. Reading now ~

[mercurianangel]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for TACO!:

Chapter 15 of SbtB:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/15/

Enjoy~

Thank you Angel for proofing.

My pleasure~
Twas the least I could do....now that I'm 2 chapters behind T______________T
I didn't do very well on the tests T__T

[Krinen]

Ideas....

The gaps are filling. The WIP is starting.
Now all I need is someone, possibly later on, to help me keep in character... >.>

[Junkedcat]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for TACO!:

A taco was here

Chapter 15 of SbtB:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/15/

Enjoy~

Thank you Angel for proofing.

Spoiler for You know whats here...:

Mmmmm… nice

Shiro is to be feared by Fate. I think if he is ever alone in the living room with Fate he would take the opportunity to mention that he is not afraid of going back to jail.

The lunch was genius. Nanoha, no matter what, has a thing for the sky and for her to have the opportunity to seem like she is flying… That is a real gift. Speaking of gifts, the RH scene was nice too. Seems like the girls are really starting to click together, knowing what it is that makes them happy.

Now to Fate’s room. I got worried for a second there, but at some point I got the safe feeling that they were theer to cuddle and such not ummm… they’re not there yet. Nanoha willing to let herself be photographed knowing that she is going to be looked at with perverted eyes shows a lot of trust is flowing between the two. Nanoha is putting up a “for your eyes only” sign that might make Fate feel more comfortable about her job. Anyways it seemed tasteful and not some nose explosion scene. I do have one complaint though, why is Nanoha the one that’s always getting naked and getting the service? It might be time for Fate to coax Nanoha into treating her. Might just make her more comfortable and willing to… how do I put this… learn? Nanoha is getting use to being touched, now maybe she should start to get use to touching. I have full faith in Fate letting Nanoha learn…. I hope I’m not coming off as a pervert but I think part of the relationship is knowing each other not just one person doing all of the work. I also would approve of Fate spending some time over at Nanoha’s, even if she is getting the death glare.

Precia getting through the holiday… That’s expected (even if I didn’t expect it…). Fate did the right thing though by making sure she was ok, and telling her she is not alone.

Nanoha getting busted… Well it’s not like she’s going around and letting it all lose for Fate. Maybe she ought to easy their worries (or spread more) by telling her parents that she has Fate on a leash when it comes to what she does and doesn’t do. And that leash has most defiantly shortened the blonde’s range.

Can’t wait to see what is next! And don’t rush we can wait a reasonable period of time.

Originally Posted by Krinen

Ideas....

The gaps are filling. The WIP is starting.
Now all I need is someone, possibly later on, to help me keep in character... >.>

ohs noes the gears are turning! run for the hills!
I see good things

[Krinen]

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

ohs noes the gears are turning! run for the hills!
I see good things

You're gonna have to run farther than that. *evilgrin*

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by AshLikeSnow

A ha ha ~

New chappy. Here's a link. Tell me what you guys think? :3

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4099527/2/

Will read tomorrow

@Thread: If Fate had to get a job, what job do you see her getting? For some reason, picturing her in a fast food uniform is really cute. With the little cap and headset and everything, making an ice cream cone for a little girl much lol. (not saying she'll get a job in SbtB. she's a registered chiropractor after all)

[Momo Chan]

Originally Posted by AshLikeSnow

A ha ha ~

New chappy. Here's a link. Tell me what you guys think? :3

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4099527/2/

Ah! Cool story. Poor Nanoha. And Fate's not taking it too...ahem....well....

Did she faint or did someone (Signum) hit her? Because Signum wouldn't be too happy with Testarossa yelling at Shamal like that.

[AshLikeSnow]

Originally Posted by Gillian

woah
good chapter

poor Nanoha, should be severe damage...
hope Fate don't go crazy

crap it, I will read SbtB tomorrow...

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

That was very nice. Details fail you not. It must be so troublesome to write in so many details but in a story like this, its all worth it.

Originally Posted by Momo Chan

Ah! Cool story. Poor Nanoha. And Fate's not taking it too...ahem....well....

Did she faint or did someone (Signum) hit her? Because Signum wouldn't be too happy with Testarossa yelling at Shamal like that.

Waaa I'm receiving much love-ness. thankies :3
and yeh, Momo-chan, she fainted of her own accord ;-;

Originally Posted by Satashi

Will read tomorrow

@Thread: If Fate had to get a job, what job do you see her getting? For some reason, picturing her in a fast food uniform is really cute. With the little cap and headset and everything, making an ice cream cone for a little girl much lol. (not saying she'll get a job in SbtB. she's a registered chiropractor after all)

oh oh oh. Fate-o with a part time job ~
Bikini car washer !! lol j/k .. sorta. maybe :3 haha

mm.. how abouts a... blackjack dealer ! she gets to wear pants and tie, AND and and, don't forget..

Saved by the Bell Collectible Card Game!

Card: Fate Testarossa
Secret desire: To pole-dance at a famous casino

proximity gives chances ! *keeps dreaming*

oh btw, I read chappy 15 Sata-chan. really enjoyed it ~ the atmosphere felt just perfect and im glad that their relationship didn't progress too far too quickly. overall, another really good chapter

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for TACO!:

Chapter 15 of SbtB:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/15/

Enjoy~

Thank you Angel for proofing.

nice chapter
you fooled me*thought they would go a step further *
but the suprise was better
NanohaxFate are both too cute in the chapter

the diary entry was hilarious again
poor Nanoha^^

Originally Posted by Satashi

Will read tomorrow

@Thread: If Fate had to get a job, what job do you see her getting? For some reason, picturing her in a fast food uniform is really cute. With the little cap and headset and everything, making an ice cream cone for a little girl much lol. (not saying she'll get a job in SbtB. she's a registered chiropractor after all)

ah job, don't know
maybe she could work in a cafe, like the takamachi cafe
would be much fun, with shiro watching her and when she gets to near to Nanoha

@Mercurianangel
maybe we can get a pic with Fate in the china dress
would absolutely awesome

but only, when you have enough time

thank you both of you

edit:

Originally Posted by AshLikeSnow

Waaa I'm receiving much love-ness. thankies :3
and yeh, Momo-chan, she fainted of her own accord ;-;

I thought she got some drugs to calm her down
would be bad if fate would go on with her outburst

[Junkedcat]

Originally Posted by Satashi

@Thread: If Fate had to get a job, what job do you see her getting? For some reason, picturing her in a fast food uniform is really cute. With the little cap and headset and everything, making an ice cream cone for a little girl much lol. (not saying she'll get a job in SbtB. she's a registered chiropractor after all)

If we are talking about something in reason, yea i see her as a waitress at some kind of normal restaurant. That or as a clerk at a convenience store standing behind a counter looking cute...

But a little more out of reason... I could see her as a grounds keeper/Landscaper. Fate in soiled work cloths sweating it out in the sun with her hair tied up is a interesting image. If Nanoha came to visit to see what she was doing Fate could always take a break to chug down some water for a bottle, giving Nanoha the eye while she poses just a little bit.

umm anyways yea Fate would probably end up as a clerk at a convenience just for the reason of lost potential. She could have been working at a cafe or somewhere looking real nice but ends up getting the grave yard shift at 7/11 and ringing up someones slushie.

[Eagle8819]

Heads up.

Incognizant

Thoughts welcomed, per usual, and also particularly since I don't work with first person's POV very often. Enjoy.

[BPHaru]

Originally Posted by Satashi

@Thread: If Fate had to get a job, what job do you see her getting?

It must be RMT
Maybe babysitter or something like that... anyways, doesn't she get paid for helping Precia with the massages?

BTW nice chapter Satashi, I'm waiting for 16~

Saludos, Haru

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by BPHaru

It must be RMT
Maybe babysitter or something like that... anyways, doesn't she get paid for helping Precia with the massages?

BTW nice chapter Satashi, I'm waiting for 16~

Saludos, Haru

Fate as an RMT! LOL!!! She has the dress for it now XD And yes, Fate gets paid for working at Testarossa Touch periodically. I wasn't asking for SbtB job but for curious reasonings.

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

But a little more out of reason... I could see her as a grounds keeper/Landscaper. Fate in soiled work cloths sweating it out in the sun with her hair tied up is a interesting image. If Nanoha came to visit to see what she was doing Fate could always take a break to chug down some water for a bottle, giving Nanoha the eye while she poses just a little bit.

win. You, good sir, deserve a cookie. *cookie*

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Eagle8819

Heads up.

Incognizant

Thoughts welcomed, per usual, and also particularly since I don't work with first person's POV very often. Enjoy.

poor fate
yeah, Nanoha cheated on Yunno

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Eagle8819

Heads up.

Incognizant

Thoughts welcomed, per usual, and also particularly since I don't work with first person's POV very often. Enjoy.

I personally liked it :3 Keep up the good work :3