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I've been reading through my Negima volumes, and I keep thinking that instead of blubbering and weeping as Mikuru does, Mitsuru might be more of the Run In Little Circles And Panic type. Basically how Negi (or, for that matter, most Akamatsu characters) panics: arms flap, "awawawawa", chibi mode.
The goal is to take what is technically a serious case of despair and hopelessness for the character, and turn it into cute/funny comedy. Maybe Mitsuru keeps pacing up and down while he tries to come up with increasingly unlikely solutions. |
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Link #16904 |
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I do realize that it's a different feel, but Mitsuru has rather less wiggle room in being useless. For Mikuru, it's all part of her moe appeal (regardless of whether the viewer likes it; it's mostly for Kyon's benefit) that she's helpless and can't do much on her own.
Mitsuru has to balance on an even thinner line between Cute Kid Brother and Pathetic Loser. In my view, that means he should at least make a token effort to come up with something, although he'll fail miserably. In fact, he doesn't have to come up with anything, but merely try to. I'm not sure if the distinction is coming across, sorry. |
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Link #16906 |
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I'm working on a zillion things at once, sorry. Some of them are even relevant to continued existence and meals (although it's not like I'm living in borderline poverty, so there's a substantial buffer, but still). I'm on the forums because of that weird human trait where I'm supposed to do something, but I suddenly want to do everything else...
Gut feeling likes the idea of making Itsuko the Really Worried One this scene, to the point where Kyonko (who usually doesn't like to associate with Itsuko more than necessary) notices that she's on the verge of an epic freakout. However, that may be my Itsuko bias speaking, and Itsuko really doesn't have as much reason to panic as Mitsuru does. And I can't see Kyonko panicking that much either. |
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Link #16910 |
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I'm watching the raw for Endless Eight (second iteration), and the scene where Haruhi punts the beach ball into Mikuru's face gives me all sorts of bizarre mental images for the genderbent version.
"Here we go, Mitsuru-kun! Clench your teeth!" "Okay~" -WHAM- |
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ナナオーくん
Join Date: May 2008
Age: 32
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Link #16912 | |
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Oooh, I can't believe I missed this before ... Nice. Will there be a follow-up? ... Or has there already been one? ^^; |
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Sensei, aishite imasu
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: Hong Kong Shatterdome
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How did I miss this? This is awesome
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Kneel Before Your King!
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. . . wow... old story is old ![]() That's the project I had on indefinite hold, due to the fact that I started slipping into outright copying the "source" material... I've really been meaning to start it back up, honest ![]()
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If we take cues from the novels, the boys will fall asleep. Do you think, they'd snore? |
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性転換 団長
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I feel like I'm writing bad shoujo.
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