2012-01-13, 07:02 | Link #17763 |
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My standard:
Shotacon = Okay Rape/non-con = Okay. Villains only. Shotacon Rape = Hell no! Villains only, serious as fuck (pun intended) @Demi I'd rather use fruit, though in mine Twin!Madoka = Lavender. Charl = Sunflower/Chrysanthemum. Houki = Jasmine.
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2012-01-13, 07:05 | Link #17765 |
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@ Demi - I'm guessing it's the flower that they resemble most in color.
Tell me about it! @ Senpai - The only problem I had was the age. Ichika seems to be getting a lot of action for being 10 years old. Seriously, how do you rape a 10 year old? That's not even physically possible.
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2012-01-13, 07:10 | Link #17766 |
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Hey, it's rape! That aside, even 10 years old can have erection, usually not from sexual stimulus, but natural morning wood. Even then, it is possible that his body can react anyway. (I remember a shotacon porn that make me vomit, and I was near invulnerable to porn mind you)
And boy, this is why I said it's not okay to tackle with shotacon rape. You'll spend a lot of time just make it bearable to readers.
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2012-01-13, 07:13 | Link #17767 |
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@ Senpai - Honestly, since it was female on male (and the female in question was Chifuyu) I think the archive will be fine with it. I'm only changing his wording so I'm not at liberty to take off anything. Ah well, I think it'll be fine.
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2012-01-13, 07:26 | Link #17770 |
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Yes please
*goes back to gopel fight and revise anything* Anyway Age, do you have comment about Gospel's insane entrance? Gospel seems to be developed outside I.S. academy, or I was wrong again?
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2012-01-13, 07:47 | Link #17773 |
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@ Senpai - That I have to decide on yet since I need to turn her character into someone who's clueless about the darker side of PT or willfully allows it because she thinks she can't do anything about it. Her daughters know, but they've been raised to be loyal to PT so they ain't doing shit.
Side note - The earlier plan was a bit darker: Irish nearly breaks down when he saw a kid was part of the one's fighting. He tries his best to defend him and manages to down everyone else, but got injured in the process. The result? Kid stabs him in the back while he wasn't looking
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2012-01-13, 07:50 | Link #17774 | ||
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Though I understand the kid's reaosn, that's still fucked up.
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2012-01-13, 08:01 | Link #17775 |
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@ Senpai - Do you think he should find out they're related to each other at this point or not yet? He only gets to meet them because the his two siblings saw his face on the monitor and kept saying he looked familiar.
It's more symbolism. Irish sees the kid covered in blood as he's passing out, but he only sees himself as a child holding the knife. In the past, given the chance, he would've done the same thing if he was in the kid's position. At least his efforts weren't completely useless: The fights were meant to show how males were supposedly aggressive, selfish, and cared only for themselves. Seeing someone defend a child and not even trying to get revenge when he got stabbed in return made them think on it.
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2012-01-13, 08:22 | Link #17777 | ||
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2012-01-13, 08:29 | Link #17779 |
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Sounds like a good start for a love triangle fic If you can, who do you want to win? I can put it in Daydreams. I've already got the dialogue thought out
@ Senpai - Of course, this leads to him nearly getting raped Good thing I'm subverting sex at any opportunity
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2012-01-13, 08:33 | Link #17780 |
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@zero: There's a little something called, sneaking in. That and I already wanted to establish that the place was a bit... seedy.
@Eratas: I haven't thought out who'd win yet I just found the thought of Rin in a bar out of place, then it snowballed from there |
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fanfic ideas, fanfiction, ff.net, harem, is fanfic, warning fanfic spoilers, wincest |
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