Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[USB500]

Replying before I post more updates?

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

I would think that there are more moans than weird symbols.

I was trying to be readers-friendly.

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Enjoy your weekend then. I know I will. Am still bumming at home and parents just can't stop nagging at me to get a job, which I guess I should really get to real soon.

Haha, same with me.

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Well we all know what will happen to him once Eva gets wind of him 'screwing' around with her.

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

More madness. Lu-chan turns Basilisk? Lapis? Evil eyes!

Fear Rori Raida.

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Originally Posted by Tormenk

Rori-Raida inherits the deadly trait of Mommy-Raida.

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Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Rori Raida is actually doing a rori version of Raida's Medusa Eyes!!!

USODA!!!

*Turned to stone by Rori Raida Medusa eyes*

*sees Aaron's stoned body*

Lutecia: I don't like it when people makes fun of me.

*looks around for Erio*

Erio, someone needs your comfort!

*runs from Lutecia*

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Originally Posted by LoweGear

WANT NAO

*runs*

It will be made of superior hawt, steamy, sensual, sexy, stormy and intimate relationship.

*runs*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

I want to do that too

*runs from Chachazero*

Me too.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Lutecia really takes after her alternate universe mother

Don't make her angry, though.

Although I don't mind getting stoned by Rori Raida's Medusa Eyes <.<

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Originally Posted by Nightengale

Any... Alnel?

Alnel makes up the best fanfics over at the Star Ocean segment. My Big Fat Aquios Wedding is still one of my favourites, evar.

Huh?

Originally Posted by Nightengale

If it means having the chance to see Nanoha pull a 'final battle of Takamichi Nanoha' (( not her dying battle )) filled with turmoil of emotions as she shatters her own dreams with each beam spam, and makes her friends, etc watching/afar tearful, asking her to stop it etc etc, then it's worth it.

DO IT NAO

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Hmm...

Maybe Hayate can get herself a raccoon familiar. :3

I agree. :3

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Well, to be fair, it was an easy scene to write since there's a base to use from Gankutsuou...

Now if only...

Jail: Stai dicendo che si possono capire le sofferenze e il crepuscolo del mio amico? Il suo desiderio, la sua vendetta, i suoi sogni?

Fate: That is...

Jail: Il contratto è completa. Il mio nome è ... orfano di desiderio, Gankutsuou.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

If you're used to crack, it's not hard... It's no more than 50 words. >_<

In other words, take a lot of cracks. :3

*runs from Anti-Drug Enforcers*

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Originally Posted by Tormenk

Spoiler for Jack of Spades:

Basic Information
Name: Jac Kal
Alias: Jack of Spades
Gender: Male
Home World: unknown
Birth date: unknown
Age: 26 as of MC 075
Relatives: unknown
Eye color: Green
Hair color: Black
Height: 185cm
Build: Tall and thin

Mage Information
Affiliations: The Prize
Magic Type: Neo-Belkan
Magic Color: Dark Purple
Mage Rank: AAA+
Magic potential
Combat style: melee to short range
Element Affiliation: None

Device: Specineff (Scythe Armed Device)
Device modes : Scythe mode, Rifle Mode, Hybrid Mode

Background/History
Leader of the Jacks, a team of assassin mages within the Prize. Jac been part of the Prize since young and is familiar with its operations and procedures. He possesses some degree of power and influence throughout the organization. Noted as the fastest in speed among the four.

Personality/Behavior
Well-mannered and polite at all times, Jac exudes the presence of a gentleman with his bespectacled appearance and careful conduct. A slight smile is ever present no matter the situation and he has never lost his temper even when dealing with the more hard to handle members of his team and other people in the Prize. Also has a knack for quickly resolving urgent situations.

Jac personally takes care and sees to the needs of his team though he remains detached from them all. Being the only person who can cook among them, he’s the source of any decent nourishment when the team is out on extended missions. Off-missions, Jac enjoys reading and cooking. His fondness for bikes is another oddity among many of this unusual man.

In combat he retains his usual demeanor. An unnerving trait among those of his profession that some have taken to calling him the Ripper for the relaxed but brutal manner he cuts down any opposition. Jac’s combat style uses pure speed for everything to the extend he eschews any magic usage beyond what is necessary.

Spoiler for Jack of Hearts:

Basic Information
Name: Jag Blu
Alias: Jack of Hearts
Gender: Male
Home World: unknown
Birth date: unknown
Age: 23 as of MC 075
Relatives: unknown
Eye color: yellow
Hair color: blue
Height: 180cm
Build: Buff and well-built

Mage Information
Affiliations: The Prize
Magic Type: Neo-Belkan
Magic Color: Dark Blue
Mage Rank: AAA
Combat style: berserker style of melee combat
Element Affiliation: Wind

Device: Rampage (massive bastard sword Armed/Storage hybrid Device)
Device forms: Sword and Halberd Form

Background/History
Jag’s youth marked was marked by constant violence and drugs until he joined the Prize for reasons unknown when he was 15. There he was instilled with some degree of control and discipline but the stubborn young man remained largely the same throughout. Records of his current history has disobedience in duties showing up as frequently as well as the number of kills he has gathered through out the many assassination missions he has carried out, though collateral accounts for a number of them. Noted to have both the highest magic and destructive potential in his team.

Personality/Behavior
Easily bored and always looking for entertainment, Jag’s lazy bone is a mile longer than his sword. Since he often ends up in trouble, Jag relies on Jac to constantly rein him in when he goes out of line or pushes his limits too far, partially having to do with Jac being the only person Jag will obey and follow on a regular basis.

Jag possesses a rough and roguish charm that either draws people in or repulses them on first impression. Jat is an exception, frequently seen around him despite her prominent displays of vehemence at his actions every so often. He has shown interest in Jat though rarely reciprocated by the other party, at least not in public. He treats Jec, the youngest of the Jacks, like a little girl sometimes but otherwise sees her as harmless and leaves her be.

The most eager to fight at any opportunity, Jag displays a great degree of bloodlust in every fight. His abuse of drugs boosts his performance to a great degree, though it only worsens his violent tendencies and makes him extremely erratic in combat. After effects include extended mood swings and other harmful physical conditions, at which point Jac burns his stash and reprimands him again while Jat has to take care of him until he recovers, though he’s likely to receive a swing from her device once he has some semblance of consciousness. The next few weeks would be spent on constant checking on whether Jag is up to his usual tricks again.

Spoiler for Jack of Diamonds:

Basic Information
Name: Jec Yel
Alias: Jack of Diamonds
Gender: Female
Home World: unknown
Birth date: unknown
Age: 16 as of MC 075
Relatives: unknown
Eye color: purple
Hair color: Red
Height: 162cm
Build: Slim and well-built

Mage Information
Affiliations: The Prize
Magic Type: Mid
Magic Color: Yellow
Mage Rank: Synthetic AA+
Combat style: support and control
Element Affiliation: none

Device: Mercurius ( Gauntlet Intelligent Device with 12 smaller disc Storage Devices.)

Device in active form covers all the way from hands to forearms. Appearance takes the form of 6 discs mounted onto a carrier rack on each arm, with the core of the ID split onto each arm and beneath lies protective covering. The racks can flip put out and double as tongfers in melee combat though her skill with them is nothing spectacular. One of the most complex devices within the Prize, it was given to her by Jac after recognizing Jec’s ability and potential in utilizing such an device. Device capabilities will be addressed in the future.

Background/History
Jec’s parents were killed by Prize members when they tried to take stop them from forcibly taking their daughter away in their search for powerful mages. Jec has no recollection of this and was brought up in a underground training and research facility of the Prize. The girl’s first memory of the outside world was a nighttime training exercise out in the deserts of the world the facility was based on. The first thing she saw was the massive moon of that planet and she would have continued being utterly absorbed by the natural satellite if not for the more urgent matter at hand. The later part of her mission had her trudging under the burning sun to reach a designated location had left her dehydrated to the point of collapse, which left her in admiration of moons and nighttime while very much detesting sunlight.

Personality/Behavior
Jec is the little sister figure among her team though not often recognized as such. Overly serious and stiff in manner sometimes and coupled by her slightly ditzy and innocent actions, Jec has drawn more than her fair share of shaking heads and amusement from the rest of her team and is always being told to relax . Sharp and direct, the pale gril is the team’s secondary coordinator in combat after Jac, though only in slight merit of being able to maintain some sense of what’s going on once things get shot to hell. Jec can be considered the most naïve and pure out of the four, though not much by common people standards anyway. Very obedient though she still has her fair share of issues of what she does even until now.

Jec looks up to Jac for being the authoritative figure and holds him in high regard, seeking him out whenever possible. She is put off by Jag’s actions sometimes though otherwise she thinks him as a great but lazy guy. She regards Jat as a close sister figure, often going to her and speaking out since she’s the only other female in contact with. Jec has a terrible habit of telling jokes no one gets or laughs at, except for Jac, though whether he truly gets it or is simply an act to humor her is an unknown.

Spoiler for Jack of Clubs:

Basic Information
Name: Jat Elis
Alias: Jack of Clubs
Gender: Female
Home World: unknown
Birth date: unknown
Age: 19 as of MC 075
Relatives: unknown
Eye color: blue
Hair color: Green
Height: 168cm
Build: Well endowed and curvy

Mage Information
Affiliations: The Prize
Magic Type: Mid
Magic Color: Orange
Mage Rank: AA+
Combat style: marksman and shooting magic specialist, fire support and suppression
Element Affiliation: none

Device: Vayeate ( high powered buster rifle class Intelligent Device)
Device modes: Rifle Frame, Bombardment Frame and Close Frame

Background/History
Jat was recruited into the Prize when she ran away from home at age 14 due to her abusive parents. Her path in the Prize was the toughest out of the Jacks, suffering from the setbacks of multiple failures and looked down upon by others. Jat managed to suck it up and push herself from her mistakes, eventually letting her skills as a marksman trump her other competitors. Given a device to supplement her natural skills, Jat’s efficiency at claiming her kills gave her recognition and was one of the first to be considered as part of the Jacks from many other candidates.

Personality/Behavior
Jat is a loud and outspoken personality whose foul mouth is only overtaken by her fouler temper. She frequently turns to alcohol and other vices to escape from her problems, some of them inflicted from young and others stemming from her lack of confidence. On the rare occasion she is able to forget about her problems, Jat’s hyperactive manner is strong enough to affect everyone else, even indulging in some pretty crazy acts. Jag puts it best as he said, “When that girl’s happy, no one is happier than she is.”

Jat respects Jac for holding the team together for so long and taking the ire of the higher-ups whenever the team screws up and tries not too give him any trouble beyond what she can manage reasonably well.

Jat gets along fairly well with the rest of her team though her temper does flare up occasionally. She has a love-hate relationship with Jag since he’s always pestering her whenever he’s bored and this irritates her to no end everytime. Her temper explodes whenever Jag goes off to do his own thing, which often results in her being busy covering his defenseless ass aside from her duties in combat. That and when Jag knocks himself out with his “girly pills” often has Jat swinging her device into Jag’s face when everything is over.

Jat didn’t like Jec on first sight, regarding her as young and unsuitable, aggravated by the fact the young girl was on equal standing with her. That fortunately changed over time with the two being partners and forced to look out for each other. The young woman takes care of Jec whenever she can and tries to share Jec’s problems as well but has no one to turn to for her own problems and hence has a lot of built-up frustration and anger.

Some information about the organization they're under in.

Spoiler for The Prize:

The Prize is an insidious and shady organization that has been around for an undetermined period of time. It is involved in a large variety of illegal operations, mainly dealing with arms production and distribution onto the black market, such as device, cartridges, conventional weaponry and ammunition. Responsible for up to 30% of the arms circulation on the market, the Prize is also into weapons development as well as research into forbidden areas outlawed long ago though for what reasons or purposes remains an unknown like most other information about it. The Prize also deals in various operations from well-paying clients such as sabotage, transportation of materials, assassinations as well as guarding and the occasional theft of Lost Logias. The Prize has its own forces to safeguard their interests as well as recruiting an arm of mercenary mages to run external operations. The TSAB has recently detected them from their pattern of crime but has yet to find out any solid information about its specifics such as operational procedure or strength of members or the stretch of its influence.

The Jacks is a team of 4 mages picked out from its pool and has been in operation for the better part of 7 years now and have been employed to carry out a number of missions for the Prize. Highly successful in their attempts, the four are well-known among the internal members and are widely recognized as some of the best within their ranks. The Jacks enjoy some privileges, having first pick among new acquirement of technological or related needs, though just a slight reward for their continued service. The members do enjoy a game of bridge between themselves during whatever off-time they can afford, being one of the few means they can get together among their line of work.

Tired. Though I should be able to continue another two pieces I want to finish by next week.

@haiz: Welcome back.

Me hearts Jat I wonder if we can have Jat meet Frieda.

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Originally Posted by LoweGear

So the Jacks are Super Sentai now?

SHUFFLE SENTAI!!!!!!

JACK RANGER!!!!!!!

*runs*

LOWE! WHAT KIND OF WINNING SONG YOU POSTED IS THIS??????

Although I was reminded more of the El Dora V when I read the Jacks profile. :

*runs*

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Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

Touka Gettan...

"A Hikki and Widuri exist in every generation and they are always destined for each other...

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Originally Posted by Nightengale

Spoiler for crack teaser:

His smile was gentle, unabashed... yet so... beautiful. God, I can't believe I'm describing him... like...like this. He told me in the sexie... manliest voice I’ve ever heard from him: “I love you.”

His voice was that close, his face was that close. And it was getting closer. He was going to kiss me. No, that's an understatement. My God, he wanted to make babies with me! And, worst of all, I felt like I wanted to have his babies!

His head dipped down to my face- lips almost brushing mine- and the horrors of it all was that I responded by lifting my face up to meet his–

*runs away very very fast*

NIGHTY HAS STRUCK TRIPLE JACKPOT WITH HIS SUPERIOR CRACK!!!!

[Aaron008R]

Before backlog-breaking... Trailer time!

Spoiler for MGLN OVA: GenerationS:

We see several flashes of lightning, highlighting a mansion besides the sea…

I have seen …

A silhouette of an elderly man, Luozorl von Mazda staring out one of the windows, gripping what seems to be a glass of liqueur.

I have seen… the future…

Another flash of lightning, this time highlighting the silhouette of a small number of people behind Luozorl.

Ineptitude…

*TSAB main HQ is shown, zooming in to Hayate, the Knights and Aurion.*

Aurion: <clutching a data pad> Well, that’s the summary. You are to be my bodyguards until this mission concerning the possible Lost Logia activity in the planet…… <eyes narrow> Duraxyll… 2. Are you ready?

Hayate: Hai!

The rest: Roger!

The fall…

Clear skies over a field; Grandis can be seen leaning on a boulder. A bird flutters into his hand as he raises it. He begins talking to the bird.

Grandis: Someday… I’ll do it; In order to finally put them to rest… <The bird flutters off as Gottes Racher forms in his hand>

*Two diagonal slashes appear on the screen. One trailing frost while the other trails embers of flames*

*the boulder is slashed into four; one slash mark is frozen and intersects with another that has molten rock*

Grandis: <Aligns the blade, still trailing bits of frost and flames with his face, a look of cold fury carved on his face> Kanarasu…

The rebirth…

*The Knights can be seen soaring in the sky, being pursued by several dragon-like entities*

Vita and Agito: Unison IN! <Followed by a brief flash of light>

*Vita, with the black parts of her outfit turned to gold while the red ones are turned into purple flies thru the flash of light*

Graf Eisen: [Raketenform!]

Agito: Flammen-

Vita: Raketen HAMMEEERRRR!!! <spins around with a literally blazing rocket hammer and smashes the pseudo-dragon> Kuso! What’s with these monsters?!

Agito: Like it matters! I’ll just burn them all! Try and keep up, Vita!

Vita: That’s my line, midget!

Agito: Looks who’s talking!

Vita: What did you say?!

*a dragon roars and attempts to bite off Vita’s head*

Vita and Agito: URUSAI!!!

Graf Eisen: [Gigantform!]

*The dragon’s head is smashed off with a blazing hammer*

Retribution…

*Tesla is bouncing on several rock protrusions as she dodges the incoming fire from seven ‘dragons’. Her eyes and hair are light blue while her outfit is primarily white. The dragons are unable to maneuver well in the maze of narrow rock formations.*

Tesla: <smiles gamely> In position, Rein?

Rein: Hai, desu!

Tesla: Yosh! <Raises Gungnir, causing several bolts of electricity to fall from the sky and charge it with energy> Gungnir!

Gungnir: [Jawohl!]

Tesla: Sturmzeichen!!! <She hurls her spear of lightning at the largest one, skewering and making it crash with the next one. This causes a chain reaction where the rest of the dragons are caved-in by an avalanche of rocks>

Rein: Striiiike!, Desu~!

Tesla: <balancing on a narrow rock spike with one foot, the other leg crossed under the first>*giggle* Seven birds with one stone! <She raises her arm, making Gungnir fly obediently to her hand>

Rein: !!! Tesla-chan, behind!!!

Tesla: !!! <jumps up and twirls Gungnir around, using her waist as leverage. She twirls in the air as well, making several circular slashes that eliminates several incoming projectiles. Upon ending the spin, she takes a defensive stance> Sniper?

*a lone figure is see fast approaching, carrying a heavy rifle device*

Gun-wielder: <flying around completely erratically> Ne, blue-haired Onee-chan. Is it alright if I beat you?

Tesla: ……

Gun-wielder: Kotae wa kitenai! (I can’t hear your answer!) <starts shooting>

A new rule…

*several clangs of metal against metal can be heard*

Aurion: You… Do I know you?!

Grandis: Heh… I see you can still recognize me, eh?! <slashes upward from the ground, causing several rock spikes to rush towards Aurion> Aniki?

Aurion: <punches the ground to counter the rock spikes with energy spikes. He then stands up and gapes in disbelief> It can’t be… You survived? Grandis?

Grandis: Aah. <Grins and takes a stance> I won’t die until I’ve made you pay for your crimes, murderer… <several cracks forms on the ground underneath his feet. The skies start to darken as several thunderclaps can be seen and heard. Gottes Racher’s color begins pulsing from white and blue to black and red> I’ve waited my whole life for this day… Aurion Dauer!

The future… has been decided…

*Three people surround Hayate, Signum, Shamal and Zafira <human form>. Each carrying large red sword, a blue halberd and a rust-colored giant axe*

Signum: Mistress! Please stand back!

Zafira: I won’t let you lay a finger on her!

Sword-wielder: Ba~ka! Less talk, more action! Ikuze, ikuze, ikuze! <charges in and is intercepted by Signum>

Axe-wielder: Hehe… I’ll make you CRY!!! <fights with Zafira>

Halberd-wielder: *flies slowly around Hayate and Shamal* Ahh~, to be left to dance with two beautiful young lasses. My luck is the greatest. <Detaches the halberd's blade, which is attached by a chain to the shaft.> Jaa, ojou-sama-tachi… <starts swinging around the chain while humming a tune> Will you dance with me?

This… is the beginning of the end… For the sake of the future...

*resounding steps can be heard as Luozorl approaches, casually playing with Yggdrasil on his hands*

For the sake of future generations, I will be the devil…

~ ~ SKILL: By JAM Project ~ ~

(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kCw1HsHeck8 Time: 3:40 onwards)

~Harukana Oozora ni Hikari no Ya wo Hanatsunda!~
(Launch an Arrow of Light into the distant Great Sky!)

*On a black background, Hayate and Grandis are shouting at each other.*

Hayate: And you! Can you really call what you’re doing as justice?!

Grandis: It’s not justice! That much I know! It’s just revenge. It’s just my life!

Hayate: I won’t let you… I won’t let you!!! This won’t lead to anything good! You’ll only end up hating yourself more!

Grandis: You’ll never understand!

~I can fly! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly! (Hey) Motto! Motto!~

Cipher and Pixy zip past several of the pseudo-dragons, a trail of explosions following them.

~I can fly! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly! (Hey) Motto! Motto!~

Felix and O’Neil ducks under several debris and shooting back at the rampaging dragons; with Felix spewing out profanity at a faster rate than his firing speed. Jack cracks a joke while firing.

~I can fly! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly! (Hey) Motto! Motto!~

The Knights (sans Signum and Agito) are duking it out with the four enemy mages.

~I can fly!! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly!! (Hey)~

*Signum in Unison is facing off against the largest ‘dragon’, Laevantine in Bogenform at the ready*

Signum: I won’t fail again!

Agito: STURM-

Signum + Agito: PHEONIX!!!

~Motto, Motto~...~

Aurion: So this is… your ideal future?

~Motto, Motto~...~

Luozorl: Not mine, but for the holders of our future…

~Motto, Motto~!~

Aurion: Sorry. I refuse to let that happen…

Luozorl: That’s a shame. Then… <glows with a frightening purple aura>

Aurion: Awaken, Astranagant…

*a picture of Hayate, hugging her book and bound by four chains like in A’s can be seen. She’s wearing the black minidress of her Knight Armor.*

~Skill my Heart~
(Skill my Heart)

*Gottes Racher is seen floating in air*

Grandis: Kako… (Past…)

*one chain is broken*

~Ginga no Hate made~
(To the Edge of the Galaxy)

*Schwertkreuz appears, crossing lightly with Gottes Racher*

Hayate: Genzai… (Present…)

*the second chain is broken*

~Atsui Yume wo Moyase~
(Burn your Passionate Dreams)

*Yggdrasil appears between the crossed staff and sword*

Luozorl: Mirai… (Future…)

*the third chain is broken*

~All I can do!~
(All I can do!)

Aurion: Eien… (Infinity)

*the last chain is broken and Hayate opens her eyes.*

~Skill my soul~
(Skill my soul)
~Tamashii wo Yobi Samase~
(Cry awake your Soul)

*random scenes of intense fighting alternates with the scene where the rest of Hayate’s armor forms around her body. Her eyes are closed again.*

~Jidai ga Ore wo Michibiku Kagiri Muteki sa!!~
(As long as the Era guides me I am Invincible!!)

*A gargantuan shaft starts to rise from beneath the ground, a purple orb at the base. Hayate’s hair goes light blonde as she once again open her eyes, now electric-blue in color.*

~ALL RIGHT!!!~

*Schwertkreuz appears before her and she grabs it at ‘All right!’.*

~Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh~!~

*Hayate's black wings burst open as she raises Schwertkreuz; the Tome of the Night Sky opens and flips thru several pages*

~MIRAI EIGO ZENKAI BATTLE!!!~
(FUTURE ETERNAL FULL-FORCE BATTLE!!!)

Hayate: Ragnarok!

*A Belkan Array appears in front of her*

~Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh~!~

Hayate: BREAKER!!!

*Ragnarok breaker shoots right at the screen.*

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha OVA: GenerationS:
A Story of Dreams, Love and Revenge

~We're going to the space over the future.~

Hayate: A story encompassing three generations…

~We're looking for the place under the shining star.~

Hayate: Our hopes, our feelings, our courage and our convictions…

~We're try to sing a song for new world...~

Hayate: A Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha OVA: GenerationS. A Story of Dreams, Love and Revenge… Coming soon…

That was fun as hell to make.
How was it?

[USB500]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Before backlog-breaking... Trailer time!

Spoiler for MGLN OVA: GenerationS:

We see several flashes of lightning, highlighting a mansion besides the sea…

I have seen …

A silhouette of an elderly man, Luozorl von Mazda staring out one of the windows, gripping what seems to be a glass of liqueur.

I have seen… the future…

Another flash of lightning, this time highlighting the silhouette of a small number of people behind Luozorl.

Ineptitude…

*TSAB main HQ is shown, zooming in to Hayate, the Knights and Aurion.*

Aurion: <clutching a data pad> Well, that’s the summary. You are to be my bodyguards until this mission concerning the possible Lost Logia activity in the planet…… <eyes narrow> Duraxyll… 2. Are you ready?

Hayate: Hai!

The rest: Roger!

The fall…

Clear skies over a field; Grandis can be seen leaning on a boulder. A bird flutters into his hand as he raises it. He begins talking to the bird.

Grandis: Someday… I’ll do it; In order to finally put them to rest… <The bird flutters off as Gottes Racher forms in his hand>

*Two diagonal slashes appear on the screen. One trailing frost while the other trails embers of flames*

*the boulder is slashed into four; one slash mark is frozen and intersects with another that has molten rock*

Grandis: <Aligns the blade, still trailing bits of frost and flames with his face, a look of cold fury carved on his face> Kanarasu…

The rebirth…

*The Knights can be seen soaring in the sky, being pursued by several dragon-like entities*

Vita and Agito: Unison IN! <Followed by a brief flash of light>

*Vita, with the black parts of her outfit turned to gold while the red ones are turned into purple flies thru the flash of light*

Graf Eisen: [Raketenform!]

Agito: Flammen-

Vita: Raketen HAMMEEERRRR!!! <spins around with a literally blazing rocket hammer and smashes the pseudo-dragon> Kuso! What’s with these monsters?!

Agito: Like it matters! I’ll just burn them all! Try and keep up, Vita!

Vita: That’s my line, midget!

Agito: Looks who’s talking!

Vita: What did you say?!

*a dragon roars and attempts to bite off Vita’s head*

Vita and Agito: URUSAI!!!

Graf Eisen: [Gigantform!]

*The dragon’s head is smashed off with a blazing hammer*

Retribution…

*Tesla is bouncing on several rock protrusions as she dodges the incoming fire from seven ‘dragons’. Her eyes and hair are light blue while her outfit is primarily white. The dragons are unable to maneuver well in the maze of narrow rock formations.*

Tesla: <smiles gamely> In position, Rein?

Rein: Hai, desu!

Tesla: Yosh! <Raises Gungnir, causing several bolts of electricity to fall from the sky and charge it with energy> Gungnir!

Gungnir: [Jawohl!]

Tesla: Sturmzeichen!!! <She hurls her spear of lightning at the largest one, skewering and making it crash with the next one. This causes a chain reaction where the rest of the dragons are caved-in by an avalanche of rocks>

Rein: Striiiike!, Desu~!

Tesla: <balancing on a narrow rock spike with one foot, the other leg crossed over the first>*giggle* Seven birds with one stone! <She raises her arm, making Gungnir fly obediently to her hand>

Rein: !!! Tesla-chan, behind!!!

Tesla: !!! <jumps up and twirls Gungnir around, using her waist as leverage. She twirls in the air as well, making several circular slashes that eliminates several incoming projectiles. Upon ending the spin, she takes a defensive stance> Sniper?

*a lone figure is see fast approaching, carrying a heavy rifle device*

Gun-wielder: <flying around completely erratically> Ne, blue-haired Onee-chan. Is it alright if I beat you?

Tesla: ……

Gun-wielder: Kotae wa kitenai! (I can’t hear your answer!) <starts shooting>

A new rule…

*several clangs of metal against metal can be heard*

Aurion: You… Do I know you?!

Grandis: Heh… I see you can still recognize me, eh?! <slashes upward from the ground, causing several rock spikes to rush towards Aurion> Aniki?

Aurion: <punches the ground to counter the rock spikes with energy spikes. He then stands up and gapes in disbelief> It can’t be… You survived? Grandis?

Grandis: Aah. <Grins and takes a stance> I won’t die until I’ve made you pay for your crimes, murderer… <several cracks forms on the ground underneath his feet. The skies start to darken as several thunderclaps can be seen and heard. Gottes Racher’s color begins pulsing from white and blue to black and red> I’ve waited my whole life for this day… Aurion Dauer!

The future… has been decided…

*Three people surround Hayate, Signum, Shamal and Zafira <human form>. Each carrying large red sword, a blue halberd and a rust-colored giant axe*

Signum: Mistress! Please stand back!

Zafira: I won’t let you lay a finger on her!

Sword-wielder: Ba~ka! Less talk, more action! Ikuze, ikuze, ikuze! <charges in and is intercepted by Signum>

Axe-wielder: Hehe… I’ll make you CRY!!! <fights with Zafira>

Halberd-wielder: *flies slowly around Hayate and Shamal* Ahh~, to be left to dance with two beautiful young lasses. My luck is the greatest. <Detaches the halberds blade, which is attached by a chain to the shaft.> Jaa, ojou-sama-tachi… <starts swinging around the chain while humming a tune> Will you dance with me?

This… is the beginning of the end… For the sake of the future...

*resounding steps can be heard as Luozorl approaches, casually playing with Yggdrasil on his hands*

For the sake of future generations, I will be the devil…

~ ~ SKILL: By JAM Project ~ ~

(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kCw1HsHeck8 Time: 3:40 onwards)

~Harukana Oozora ni Hikari no Ya wo Hanatsunda!~
(Launch an Arrow of Light into the distant Great Sky!)

*On a black background, Hayate and Grandis are shouting at each other.*

Hayate: And you! Can you really call what you’re doing as justice?!

Grandis: It’s not justice! That much I know! It’s just revenge. It’s just my life!

Hayate: I won’t let you… I won’t let you!!! This won’t lead to anything good! You’ll only end up hating yourself more!

Grandis: You’ll never understand!

~I can fly! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly! (Hey) Motto! Motto!~

Cipher and Pixy zip past several of the pseudo-dragons, a trail of explosions following them.

~I can fly! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly! (Hey) Motto! Motto!~

Felix and O’Neil ducks under several debris and shooting back at the rampaging dragons; with Felix spewing out profanity at a faster rate than his firing speed. Jack cracks a joke while firing.

~I can fly! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly! (Hey) Motto! Motto!~

The Knights (sans Signum and Agito) are duking it out with the four enemy mages.

~I can fly!! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly!! (Hey)~

*Signum in Unison is facing off against the largest ‘dragon’, Laevantine in Bogenform at the ready*

Signum: I won’t fail again!

Agito: STURM-

Signum + Agito: PHEONIX!!!

~Motto, Motto~...~

Aurion: So this is… your ideal future?

~Motto, Motto~...~

Luozorl: Not mine, but for the holders of our future…

~Motto, Motto~!~

Aurion: Sorry. I refuse to let that happen…

Luozorl: That’s a shame. Then… <glows with a frightening purple aura>

Aurion: Awaken, Astranagant…

*a picture of Hayate, hugging her book and bound by four chains like in A’s can be seen. She’s wearing the black minidress of her Knight Armor.*

~Skill my Heart~
(Skill my Heart)

*Gottes Racher is seen floating in air*

Grandis: Kako… (Past…)

*one chain is broken*

~Ginga no Hate made~
(To the Edge of the Galaxy)

*Schwertkreuz appears, crossing lightly with Gottes Racher*

Hayate: Genzai… (Present…)

*the second chain is broken*

~Atsui Yume wo Moyase~
(Burn your Passionate Dreams)

*Yggdrasil appears between the crossed staff and sword*

Luozorl: Mirai… (Future…)

*the third chain is broken*

~All I can do!~
(All I can do!)

Aurion: Eien… (Infinity)

*the last chain is broken and Hayate opens her eyes.*

~Skill my soul~
(Skill my soul)
~Tamashii wo Yobi Samase~
(Cry awake your Soul)

*random scenes of intense fighting alternates with the scene where the rest of Hayate’s armor forms around her body. Her eyes are closed again.*

~Jidai ga Ore wo Michibiku Kagiri Muteki sa!!~
(As long as the Era guides me I am Invincible!!)

*A gargantuan shaft starts to rise from beneath the ground, a purple orb at the base. Hayate’s hair goes light blonde as she once again open her eyes, now electric-blue in color.*

~ALL RIGHT!!!~

*Schwertkreuz appears before her and she grabs it at ‘All right!’.*

~Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh~!~

*Hayate raises Schwertkreuz as the Tome of the Night Sky opens and flips thru several pages*

~MIRAI EIGO ZENKAI BATTLE!!!~
(FUTURE ETERNAL FULL-FORCE BATTLE!!!)

Hayate: Ragnarok!

*A Belkan Array appears in front of her*

~Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh~!~

Hayate: BREAKER!!!

*Ragnarok breaker shoots right at the screen.*

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha OVA: GenerationS:
A story of Dreams, Love and Revenge

~We're going to the space over the future.~

Hayate: A story encompassing three generations…

~We're looking for the place under the shining star.~

Hayate: Our hopes, our feelings, our courage and our convictions…

~We're try to sing a song for new world...~

Hayate: A Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha OVA: GenerationS. A story of Dreams, Love and Revenge… Coming soon…

That was fun as hell to make.
How was it?

An MLGN OVA Trailer with JAM PROJECT's song? SHOUNIN!!!!!!!!

A taste of what to come.

Spoiler for preview:

“Do you care of your masters so much you decided to take their life as to prove your devotion?” Nanoha asked.

“Why should I ever care for them?!” Halcyon screamed and fired a Reppuken that was calmly blocked by a Round Shield. “I had been treated as a tool of destruction! They never regarded me as anything else! I was just a device!”

“They why bearing the grudge against this world? Why killing Hikki? They have nothing to do with your past.” Again, Nanoha was bombarded by streams of Reppuken but stayed firmly at her spot. “Why are you acting like someone who has been robbed of her freedom? Why are you acting like you’ve lost your most precious treasure? A device wouldn’t show such act without having emotion, would it?”

“I don’t need emotion or anything!” Halcyon charged at Nanoha and slammed the katana onto the shield. Calmly Nanoha accepted the attack before she commanded Raising Heart to detonate the shield, sending Halcyon back to the ground. “Why? Why? WHY????”

“Halcyon, if Hikki’s more important than anything else in this world, then why all these troubles? Why fighting against us when you could simply tell him you want to live with him?”

I detect emo ahead.

[haiz123321]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Well... I just did a Kha and claim Hayate.

Grandis Lacetti

Sorry.

Don't worry about it, nice character though

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

BTW, Double-Unison?! 0_0

Spoiler for Hayate + Rein + Agito = ???:

UNPOSSIBLE!!!

[Jimmy C]

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

Again, artillery is useful, but if it's the god of war why the hell the the Navy get outta the battleship business? Battleship guns are basially floating artillery!

Primarily range. Even the biggest, most powerful naval guns can barely reach more than 50 miles from the shore. Unless the target is an island or a narrow peninsula, a battleship has virtually no effect far inland.
Carrier-based attack planes can hit targets up to hundreds of miles inland. As a result, carriers can dominate sea AND land.
That, plus their slow speed relative to carrier task forces and vulnerability to aircraft attack, are the primary reasons Battleships became obsolete.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Inaantok, tinatamad, masyadong maaga, nakakalimutan...

COVERING FIRE!!!!!

Metal Slug! Ahh... Memories. That guy never dies and returns each series...

Originally Posted by Nightengale

You should, Alnel makes up a lot of the good stories in the FF thread.

I will then.

Hmm... ideas.

If I ever intend to kill off someone, this might be the way to go as a plot-device.

Unison-Sentai Zerstroranger?

Spoiler for GATTAI DA!:

Hmm... a glass diamond perhaps. @_@

Though metaphorically speaking, the composition of a diamond's chain-structures is very much like the core of a family holding one another, trusted and bound by everything. In a sense, it makes up Hayate's role... a little on her whole core of RF6 thing, or at least, Wolkenritter.

Nice. And EPIC!

Hmm... there is this crack I'm still undecided WHO to give it to... Hayate, Shamal or Tesla...

It's something inspired from what I read a long time ago... can't remember where I saw it though...

Spoiler for crack teaser:

His smile was gentle, unabashed... yet so... beautiful. God, I can't believe I'm describing him... like...like this. He told me in the sexie... manliest voice I’ve ever heard from him: “I love you.”

His voice was that close, his face was that close. And it was getting closer. He was going to kiss me. No, that's an understatement. My God, he wanted to make babies with me! And, worst of all, I felt like I wanted to have his babies!

His head dipped down to my face- lips almost brushing mine- and the horrors of it all was that I responded by lifting my face up to meet his–

*runs away very very fast*

Well... Saga can have a power-saving mode, since he is a Unison Device.

But the rest of the Zerstro are yeah, Wolkie-like.

Sooo... When can we see him Unison with anyone?

True.

I mean... EVEN Yuuno has decent melee skills, and he's far more of a support than Hayate. Hell, he's not even a soldier.

Even taking into account to 'process-speed' excuse, aren't there alternatives? Like training to use low-key magical spells that are far quicker to process than to emphasis purely on heavy-hitters? Improve her aerial-skills? Create a familiar with her hueg mana pool as a double-team to improve her situation? Use cards like the Liezes, pooled with her mana to speed up magic usage?

I said it before, it's like she's not even bothering to up her potential, simply because... 'lol I never found a need to', along with how her weaknesses made her say 'sigh, that's my limit' rather than 'how do I go-around it'?

Yeah! I don't understand why they seem to be so fixated on making Hayate appear as severely lacking in pretty much darned EVERYTHING.

Bleh! Not if I can help it!

I already have some system-upgrades and skill-raising plans running in my head.
Most notably the 'Bookmark System' and 'Upload System' for her tome while Rein gets her upgrade as well. Of course, I'd have Hayate learn 'some' skills from Tesla.

Originally Posted by Tk3997

I don't think she could do much to Nanoha honestly she seems a tad too desne to be attacked psychologically (she probably wouldn't even "get" the taunts ) and if you piss her off she'll just blast your ass into next week.

Really though these "manipulators" types often just make me roll my eyes in general. There is really very seldom a reason the person should sit around and listen to their bullshit (or give two shits what some random villain they've never met has to say about them). If they're getting annoying though they should just shot them, that'll shut them up...

Evil Manipulator: Think about it dose your family really lov--
*bang*
Evil Manipulator: You shot me! I can't believe you fucking shot me!
Hero: I came here to fight not listen to you wax philosophical about my personal life for half and hour.

Add that the Hero List:
"If I'm the hero I'm under no obligation to oblige my enemy his long winded monologue aimed at either weakening me or persuading me to join his side, in fact while he's thusly distracted is an ideal time for a sneak attack."

More heroes should follow this. But that kinda ruins the plot for a lot of stories...

You do have like a year or two to play with as well. That ought to be enough time for her to realize that relying totally on others to defend her might not be the optimal arrangement and try to improve herself.

Originally Posted by humbug23

It'll look up a little next chapter. From this chapter and the next, she seems to have a decent cast time, but relatively slow compared to N+F.

In a modern air combat perspective, I guess it's comparable to her spamming her Phoenixes and Amoses at them before they can close in with AMRAAMs, Sidewinders, Alamos and Adders.

Minimum reprise? Ah, well. That's certainly better than nothing.

Thanks for the effort!

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Well, that's Hayate for you
Though, she should at least have some melee training, her staff is an armed device after all, even if it doesn't have a cartrige system...

She will. In my timeline.

Originally Posted by Keroko

*smacks Kha across the head with a fan* Forgetting someone?

Good to se someone on my side.

No no, its not that bad. You won't see a ridiculous amount of copy-pasta from me, but I will make sure that Coil Magic is easilly recognisable.

Tk should like it, as its a magic type that will be more technical and less mystical.

I've only seen episode 2. And I'm interested.

Concidering the chapter is more centered around the forwards and Co, don't expect too much. I'm also breaking my head at making Keroko and Tesla say something new (especially since Vita stole Keroko's lines )

I had a version with Aurion in the conversations. But I scrapped it for too much crack...

Although I did note the arival of the sugestive Griffith/Lucino piece...

Even the manga isn't fixing this, huh?

Seems so...

Originally Posted by humbug23

Well she wasn't bragging, so I'm going to be careful with the translation and interpretation of that. But yes, that was what she meant(without the haughtiness, of course, but with confidence).

Better.

Nothing Aaron can't fix, definitely.

Makasete!

Hoping for a Christmas release.

Looking forward to it!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Old School Good Times my friend

"Rocket Lawnchair!!!!"

I loved the part where they get big from getting too much food.

"Uhoh, BIG!"

Originally Posted by USB500

*sees Aaron's stoned body*

Lutecia: I don't like it when people makes fun of me.

*looks around for Erio*

Erio, someone needs your comfort!

*runs from Lutecia*

Sorry...

Originally Posted by USB500

An MLGN OVA Trailer with JAM PROJECT's song? SHOUNIN!!!!!!!!

A taste of what to come.

Spoiler for preview:

“Do you care of your masters so much you decided to take their life as to prove your devotion?” Nanoha asked.

“Why should I ever care for them?!” Halcyon screamed and fired a Reppuken that was calmly blocked by a Round Shield. “I had been treated as a tool of destruction! They never regarded me as anything else! I was just a device!”

“They why bearing the grudge against this world? Why killing Hikki? They have nothing to do with your past.” Again, Nanoha was bombarded by streams of Reppuken but stayed firmly at her spot. “Why are you acting like someone who has been robbed of her freedom? Why are you acting like you’ve lost your most precious treasure? A device wouldn’t show such act without having emotion, would it?”

“I don’t need emotion or anything!” Halcyon charged at Nanoha and slammed the katana onto the shield. Calmly Nanoha accepted the attack before she commanded Raising Heart to detonate the shield, sending Halcyon back to the ground. “Why? Why? WHY????”

“Halcyon, if Hikki’s more important than anything else in this world, then why all these troubles? Why fighting against us when you could simply tell him you want to live with him?”

I detect emo ahead.

Nanoha's tanking her now with minimal effort?!

Need more grunt and hard implications that Nanoha is having a hard time blocking.
Otherwise, awaiting good emo scenes!

Originally Posted by haiz123321

Don't worry about it, nice character though

Thanks, and thanks.

UNPOSSIBLE!!!

[USB500]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Nanoha's tanking her now with minimal effort?!

Need more grunt and hard implications that Nanoha is having a hard time blocking.
Otherwise, awaiting good emo scenes!

then I'll unleash more dragons.

will do.

Note to self: just watched Clannad 1 & 2. Tomoyo is love.

[Liingo]

Right, I'm back. I'll get pictures up soon.

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Backlog Piler activate! Drown him in backlog and cheese when he gets back.

It doesn't seem to have worked

On to the spell list, etc.

For someone who's "primary element" is fire, she still has a lot of ice/water spells...

Her auto guard spell seems a little too powerful as well for automatic defences. Personally, I'd drop it to A-/A.

Spell casting can continue as normal while invisible? All of the spells? Or just some of them?

Having a time limit to the invis/doppelganger spells would be good as well. Likewise for the transformation spell.

She can cast up to 8 elementals? This is while she's doing other things as well? How much mana does she have? It looks like you're trying to have her be like a mage from warcraft.... yet this is far beyound their power. More details?

Is Breaker always active? We're not even going to be able to touch her with the things you've given her....

What exactly does element field do?

50 meters in a sphere for the AMF??

The rest seem fine for the moment.

Spoiler for for h4xx limits:

On the other hand, far off future plans will include her obtaining devices. She will possibly scrape the limit and hover between SS+ and SSS- once she obtains Mastema and the Grimoire, which will eliminate her disadvantage of being deviceless and imbue her with an arsenal of powerful spells from all categories.

*runs from h4xxbusters*

Right.......

On the Jacks:

They seem fine at the moment.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Luozorl is also planned to have a version of offensive-AMF as well. It's range is almost point-blank at three-meters maximum. Requires long charging and lots of mana in exchange for a short (very short) burst of extremely powerful anti-magilink pulses, rendering up to maybe SS nullification like what happened to Hayate and Nanoha in episode 25 (God, I hate that scene.) followed directly by prepared follow-up spell upon the end of the AMF-burst that'll more often than not instantly defeat the momentarily defenseless enemy...

Hmm... Ideas. Must give my most powerful OC some logically HAXX abilities to warrant his rank as SS. (or maybe even higher since his retirement...)

*runs*

So how exactly is he going to deal a winning blow when the area around them is staurated in an AMF, thus rendering his attacks useless as well? Unless you're saying that this guy is some super powerful guy at SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS whose attacks still get through the field........

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

*nodding* I can see she'd be a formidable foe... and would probably be able to do a real number on the Assault Platoon when she attacks when they aren't expecting her. Something like this:

Spoiler for Katrina vs Franz!:

"Oh, you have GOT to be shittin' me!"

"Suck it up Griggs!" snarled Franz angrily, hastily taking cover against the barrage of spells coming from Katrina. "I'm taking more fire than you, so fucking cover us! You're the LMG gunner!"

"One without his LMG!"

While the OFM used weapons from Erusia, for the most part, Franz had been quietly looking into conventional weapons from Earth. There were a few reasons: One, Erusia's remaining stocks of conventional weapons were running really low, since most of those had been blown up by the TSAB and Gardai during the occupation. Two, Earth was closer to Mid-Childa than Erusia. Three: he found the idea of the Mk 48 LMG to be absolutely wicked sick: a light machine gun firing 7.62mm rounds like the assault rifle, but with 100-round or 200-round mags.

However, they were not carrying conventional weapons. Why?

Because a certain Lieutenant Franz Jaeger, in mission planning, had carefully said, "Well, there doesn't appear to be any AMF concentrations or anything big, so I think we can leave our guns behind. Just sidearms or light gear. We need to move fast."

Griggs popped up and leveled his Device at Katrina, firing Stinger Ray, cursing as none of the beams made it past her barrier. The rest of the Assault Platoon weren't doing too well: Katrina was effortlessly supressing them, keeping them from moving, while maintaining the capture barrier against them. She knew as well as they did that to take out the capture barrier meant either punching a hole through the barrier or neutralising the mage casting the barrier, and was keeping them away from her.

"Alright, I think I have a good bead on her," said Franz, risking another peek. "All snipers, head up. Prepare to engage target on my mark." So saying, he shifted Cortana into Rifle Form and worked the bolt once, chambering a cartridge.

[Plasma Sniper.]

"Report status."

A chorus of "click-click" sounded in his ears, and he nodded. "Alright. On my mark. FIRE!"

6 bolts of various magical energy flew out towards Katrina... and dissolved into nothingness, as her AMF went online.

Franz cursed silently, his mind churning. AMF meant that they were unable to use magic, but that was ordinarily not a problem for the OFM... except that the Assault Platoon members only carried their sidearms, not their rifles...

Then, out of nowhere, a loud crack! sounded, the smoke trail giving notice to what it was: an APFSDS projectile fired from a sniper rifle, followed by another crack! as another sniper rifle fired.

"The Sergeant Major and the Master Chief," realised Griggs, as Franz nodded.

That's right. Who the fuck does she think we are?! With the Sergeant Major and the Master Chief on our side, we can't lose!

Almost reflectively, he added to himself, "I hate bitches named Katrina. Like the last one."

Obviously, this is crack. ^^;; 10-minute crack.

Nice short

Also, in other news: The people have spoken. The new flag of Great Britain.

"It represents shouting "UNION!" and joining together; kicking reason to the curb and doing the impossible; fighting the power, and piercing the heavens.'

*facepalm*

Originally Posted by Nightengale

It's something inspired from what I read a long time ago... can't remember where I saw it though...

Spoiler for crack teaser:

His smile was gentle, unabashed... yet so... beautiful. God, I can't believe I'm describing him... like...like this. He told me in the sexie... manliest voice I’ve ever heard from him: “I love you.”

His voice was that close, his face was that close. And it was getting closer. He was going to kiss me. No, that's an understatement. My God, he wanted to make babies with me! And, worst of all, I felt like I wanted to have his babies!

His head dipped down to my face- lips almost brushing mine- and the horrors of it all was that I responded by lifting my face up to meet his–

*runs away very very fast*

It doesn't really fit with anyone in Nanoha though.......... the lack of available males sort of prevent that

Originally Posted by USB500

A taste of what to come.

Spoiler for preview:

“Do you care of your masters so much you decided to take their life as to prove your devotion?” Nanoha asked.

“Why should I ever care for them?!” Halcyon screamed and fired a Reppuken that was calmly blocked by a Round Shield. “I had been treated as a tool of destruction! They never regarded me as anything else! I was just a device!”

“They why bearing the grudge against this world? Why killing Hikki? They have nothing to do with your past.” Again, Nanoha was bombarded by streams of Reppuken but stayed firmly at her spot. “Why are you acting like someone who has been robbed of her freedom? Why are you acting like you’ve lost your most precious treasure? A device wouldn’t show such act without having emotion, would it?”

“I don’t need emotion or anything!” Halcyon charged at Nanoha and slammed the katana onto the shield. Calmly Nanoha accepted the attack before she commanded Raising Heart to detonate the shield, sending Halcyon back to the ground. “Why? Why? WHY????”

“Halcyon, if Hikki’s more important than anything else in this world, then why all these troubles? Why fighting against us when you could simply tell him you want to live with him?”

I detect emo ahead.

D: NICE!

@Krisslanza: Looking good

@Flame: Nice stuff

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Liingo

So how exactly is he going to deal a winning blow when the area around them is staurated in an AMF, thus rendering his attacks useless as well? Unless you're saying that this guy is some super powerful guy at SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS whose attacks still get through the field........

Don't get me wrong. The AMF only lasts for a second or two at best. He's outside it. As in, he fires off a short AMF in front of him not around him. And gets to charge the shot outside the effective radius and fires it once the field dissipates, usually making it too late for the target to mount a suitable counteroffensive despite having their magic unblocked. Split-second blocking of a powerful shot beyond most mages, right.

[FlameSparkZ]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Before backlog-breaking... Trailer time!

Spoiler for MGLN OVA: GenerationS:

We see several flashes of lightning, highlighting a mansion besides the sea…

I have seen …

A silhouette of an elderly man, Luozorl von Mazda staring out one of the windows, gripping what seems to be a glass of liqueur.

I have seen… the future…

Another flash of lightning, this time highlighting the silhouette of a small number of people behind Luozorl.

Ineptitude…

*TSAB main HQ is shown, zooming in to Hayate, the Knights and Aurion.*

Aurion: <clutching a data pad> Well, that’s the summary. You are to be my bodyguards until this mission concerning the possible Lost Logia activity in the planet…… <eyes narrow> Duraxyll… 2. Are you ready?

Hayate: Hai!

The rest: Roger!

The fall…

Clear skies over a field; Grandis can be seen leaning on a boulder. A bird flutters into his hand as he raises it. He begins talking to the bird.

Grandis: Someday… I’ll do it; In order to finally put them to rest… <The bird flutters off as Gottes Racher forms in his hand>

*Two diagonal slashes appear on the screen. One trailing frost while the other trails embers of flames*

*the boulder is slashed into four; one slash mark is frozen and intersects with another that has molten rock*

Grandis: <Aligns the blade, still trailing bits of frost and flames with his face, a look of cold fury carved on his face> Kanarasu…

The rebirth…

*The Knights can be seen soaring in the sky, being pursued by several dragon-like entities*

Vita and Agito: Unison IN! <Followed by a brief flash of light>

*Vita, with the black parts of her outfit turned to gold while the red ones are turned into purple flies thru the flash of light*

Graf Eisen: [Raketenform!]

Agito: Flammen-

Vita: Raketen HAMMEEERRRR!!! <spins around with a literally blazing rocket hammer and smashes the pseudo-dragon> Kuso! What’s with these monsters?!

Agito: Like it matters! I’ll just burn them all! Try and keep up, Vita!

Vita: That’s my line, midget!

Agito: Looks who’s talking!

Vita: What did you say?!

*a dragon roars and attempts to bite off Vita’s head*

Vita and Agito: URUSAI!!!

Graf Eisen: [Gigantform!]

*The dragon’s head is smashed off with a blazing hammer*

Retribution…

*Tesla is bouncing on several rock protrusions as she dodges the incoming fire from seven ‘dragons’. Her eyes and hair are light blue while her outfit is primarily white. The dragons are unable to maneuver well in the maze of narrow rock formations.*

Tesla: <smiles gamely> In position, Rein?

Rein: Hai, desu!

Tesla: Yosh! <Raises Gungnir, causing several bolts of electricity to fall from the sky and charge it with energy> Gungnir!

Gungnir: [Jawohl!]

Tesla: Sturmzeichen!!! <She hurls her spear of lightning at the largest one, skewering and making it crash with the next one. This causes a chain reaction where the rest of the dragons are caved-in by an avalanche of rocks>

Rein: Striiiike!, Desu~!

Tesla: <balancing on a narrow rock spike with one foot, the other leg crossed over the first>*giggle* Seven birds with one stone! <She raises her arm, making Gungnir fly obediently to her hand>

Rein: !!! Tesla-chan, behind!!!

Tesla: !!! <jumps up and twirls Gungnir around, using her waist as leverage. She twirls in the air as well, making several circular slashes that eliminates several incoming projectiles. Upon ending the spin, she takes a defensive stance> Sniper?

*a lone figure is see fast approaching, carrying a heavy rifle device*

Gun-wielder: <flying around completely erratically> Ne, blue-haired Onee-chan. Is it alright if I beat you?

Tesla: ……

Gun-wielder: Kotae wa kitenai! (I can’t hear your answer!) <starts shooting>

A new rule…

*several clangs of metal against metal can be heard*

Aurion: You… Do I know you?!

Grandis: Heh… I see you can still recognize me, eh?! <slashes upward from the ground, causing several rock spikes to rush towards Aurion> Aniki?

Aurion: <punches the ground to counter the rock spikes with energy spikes. He then stands up and gapes in disbelief> It can’t be… You survived? Grandis?

Grandis: Aah. <Grins and takes a stance> I won’t die until I’ve made you pay for your crimes, murderer… <several cracks forms on the ground underneath his feet. The skies start to darken as several thunderclaps can be seen and heard. Gottes Racher’s color begins pulsing from white and blue to black and red> I’ve waited my whole life for this day… Aurion Dauer!

The future… has been decided…

*Three people surround Hayate, Signum, Shamal and Zafira <human form>. Each carrying large red sword, a blue halberd and a rust-colored giant axe*

Signum: Mistress! Please stand back!

Zafira: I won’t let you lay a finger on her!

Sword-wielder: Ba~ka! Less talk, more action! Ikuze, ikuze, ikuze! <charges in and is intercepted by Signum>

Axe-wielder: Hehe… I’ll make you CRY!!! <fights with Zafira>

Halberd-wielder: *flies slowly around Hayate and Shamal* Ahh~, to be left to dance with two beautiful young lasses. My luck is the greatest. <Detaches the halberd's blade, which is attached by a chain to the shaft.> Jaa, ojou-sama-tachi… <starts swinging around the chain while humming a tune> Will you dance with me?

This… is the beginning of the end… For the sake of the future...

*resounding steps can be heard as Luozorl approaches, casually playing with Yggdrasil on his hands*

For the sake of future generations, I will be the devil…

~ ~ SKILL: By JAM Project ~ ~

(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kCw1HsHeck8 Time: 3:40 onwards)

~Harukana Oozora ni Hikari no Ya wo Hanatsunda!~
(Launch an Arrow of Light into the distant Great Sky!)

*On a black background, Hayate and Grandis are shouting at each other.*

Hayate: And you! Can you really call what you’re doing as justice?!

Grandis: It’s not justice! That much I know! It’s just revenge. It’s just my life!

Hayate: I won’t let you… I won’t let you!!! This won’t lead to anything good! You’ll only end up hating yourself more!

Grandis: You’ll never understand!

~I can fly! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly! (Hey) Motto! Motto!~

Cipher and Pixy zip past several of the pseudo-dragons, a trail of explosions following them.

~I can fly! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly! (Hey) Motto! Motto!~

Felix and O’Neil ducks under several debris and shooting back at the rampaging dragons; with Felix spewing out profanity at a faster rate than his firing speed. Jack cracks a joke while firing.

~I can fly! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly! (Hey) Motto! Motto!~

The Knights (sans Signum and Agito) are duking it out with the four enemy mages.

~I can fly!! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly!! (Hey)~

*Signum in Unison is facing off against the largest ‘dragon’, Laevantine in Bogenform at the ready*

Signum: I won’t fail again!

Agito: STURM-

Signum + Agito: PHEONIX!!!

~Motto, Motto~...~

Aurion: So this is… your ideal future?

~Motto, Motto~...~

Luozorl: Not mine, but for the holders of our future…

~Motto, Motto~!~

Aurion: Sorry. I refuse to let that happen…

Luozorl: That’s a shame. Then… <glows with a frightening purple aura>

Aurion: Awaken, Astranagant…

*a picture of Hayate, hugging her book and bound by four chains like in A’s can be seen. She’s wearing the black minidress of her Knight Armor.*

~Skill my Heart~
(Skill my Heart)

*Gottes Racher is seen floating in air*

Grandis: Kako… (Past…)

*one chain is broken*

~Ginga no Hate made~
(To the Edge of the Galaxy)

*Schwertkreuz appears, crossing lightly with Gottes Racher*

Hayate: Genzai… (Present…)

*the second chain is broken*

~Atsui Yume wo Moyase~
(Burn your Passionate Dreams)

*Yggdrasil appears between the crossed staff and sword*

Luozorl: Mirai… (Future…)

*the third chain is broken*

~All I can do!~
(All I can do!)

Aurion: Eien… (Infinity)

*the last chain is broken and Hayate opens her eyes.*

~Skill my soul~
(Skill my soul)
~Tamashii wo Yobi Samase~
(Cry awake your Soul)

*random scenes of intense fighting alternates with the scene where the rest of Hayate’s armor forms around her body. Her eyes are closed again.*

~Jidai ga Ore wo Michibiku Kagiri Muteki sa!!~
(As long as the Era guides me I am Invincible!!)

*A gargantuan shaft starts to rise from beneath the ground, a purple orb at the base. Hayate’s hair goes light blonde as she once again open her eyes, now electric-blue in color.*

~ALL RIGHT!!!~

*Schwertkreuz appears before her and she grabs it at ‘All right!’.*

~Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh~!~

*Hayate's black wings burst open as she raises Schwertkreuz; the Tome of the Night Sky opens and flips thru several pages*

~MIRAI EIGO ZENKAI BATTLE!!!~
(FUTURE ETERNAL FULL-FORCE BATTLE!!!)

Hayate: Ragnarok!

*A Belkan Array appears in front of her*

~Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh~!~

Hayate: BREAKER!!!

*Ragnarok breaker shoots right at the screen.*

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha OVA: GenerationS:
A Story of Dreams, Love and Revenge

~We're going to the space over the future.~

Hayate: A story encompassing three generations…

~We're looking for the place under the shining star.~

Hayate: Our hopes, our feelings, our courage and our convictions…

~We're try to sing a song for new world...~

Hayate: A Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha OVA: GenerationS. A Story of Dreams, Love and Revenge… Coming soon…

That was fun as hell to make.
How was it?

MASSIVE!!!

Nicely done!!

[Saint X]

*Hides the Magun and Soil samples*

*Hides a copy of the canon of Kigen Arts and this month's Issue of Ray=Out*

*Hides the Velkan Valkyrie Project*

"Just dropping in a prologue- much improved than the previous version"

Spoiler for Lost: Prologue:

Blag!

The sound of bodies falling on hard earth was somehow muffled yet sickening. And the area where the bodies landed was relatively undisturbed; no signs of them falling from any great height, but still the impact was still audible. A prolonged and eerie silence reigned for a few minutes as the bodies showed no signs of life. But after a few tense minutes, movement- al least someone survived it. Within fifteen seconds of initial movement, sounds of pain emanated from the pair that landed one on top of the other- it was a definite sign of life.

“What the…” a faint moan from what seemed to be a male came out. “Where… how…”

A sudden glint of sunlight flashes thru his eyes, a sudden reminder of the event that happened just a few minutes ago, the reason of their being in this strange land.

*Flashback*

In Orbit around a planet known as EL-6125, Sector 213, Inner Orange Zone.
It was a losing battle, against seemingly imbalanced odds. They were now on the verge of recovering one of the “Feathers of Sacred Memory” from a ruin on the planet when suddenly, a mysterious man bearing the name of Viscount Kairos of the Lotus Order suddenly bore his forces and himself upon the three ships (actually four, one of them was the armored tender Fumi Maru) that made up the Recovery Task Force- the GDI Ship Azure Memory, the Royal Earlian Flagship Kagatsuchi, and the TSAB Elite Ship Silvana. He sent out two forces, attacking both those on the surface, namely the Aces and other senior personnel, and in orbit, namely those left behind to guard, namely the Forwards and some of the younger personnel. So far, the surface was already clear, thanks to the fast actions of those on the ground, but back up in space, things were reaching critical point. The Kagatsuchi, being the weakest of the 3 ships, already had extensive damages to her engines, wings and bow, so much so that her main gun, the Nano-Particle cannon was offline- only the VD-Class fighters were providing a shield for the stricken ship- themselves vulnerable to being attack, being unable to move. The Silvana was faring better, Tannhauser antimatter cannon already fired, managing to destroy the mass of the attack, shields still holding up. The Azure Memory, being made out of much tougher stuff and made by an equally tough GDI, was still, in relative, doing fine and unscathed. What was left now was the Viscount and a few tough enemies.

“Cease Fire!” Kyla commanded over the intercom as the Viscount simply defied logic against such mass of firepower, his remaining minions proving effective.

“Already tired?” the viscount simply mocked, voice somehow emanating from him thru space, sending chills to all who heard. “What boring playmates. Well never mind… I have to get what I came here to grab… and take you down as well.”

“OH SHUT UP!!!” a voice, still going strong came out of the opposite direction, from where the ships are.

*End Flashback*

The sound of chirping birds, wind and flowing water brought him back to the reality that he was not sure of being real.

“Shut… up…” he could only moan as he slowly moved himself, carefully so that the person that used him as a cushion was not disturbed.

As he carefully moved his now confirmed female companion, he could only breathe sigh of relief, awkwardness and nervousness, relief as because he heard her breathe softly- a good sign, awkwardness and nervousness because first of all, some of her areas were on him, giving him mixed feelings of tension and joy- he had only touched a girl’s skin only once- this particular girl’s to be exact, and secretly, he had long to touch it again and secondly, he had to move her without doing “anything funny”, as some would say- let’s say that that particular day a month ago was still fresh on his mind. He managed thru the ordeal, laying her down upright and managing to sit himself; leaning on a tree. He managed to gather enough strength to stand up and carefully listen to the nature around him. He closed his eyes, allowing himself to take in the flow of energy around him allowing him to sense danger by virtue of his Dei teaching. None so far, he managed to zero out one sound among others, flowing water…

“… Flowing, falling water.” He could only think as he picked up his pace, heading towards the only thing that can produce such sounds with water.

A waterfall, and not just any waterfall, it was a waterfall marking the edge of a tall cliff, overlooking what seemed to be a combination of temperate forest, farmland and a small town on the ground and in the sky, there were clouds, and landmasses floating, stark contrast to the wide blue sky. And dominating the skyline, not overwhelming but still a focus of attention, a giant sphere that seemed to be artificial, taking the aura of an eye in the sky. It was a scene that the old (sorry Kyla) admiral would label as “strange”, it was something that, if using the common dictionary, was the word “surreal”- it was simply too vast of a scope to explain it fully, but… it can be summed in a single sentence.

“This is not our world…”

Comment please

@ Keroko, i took your advice in giving more detail... i'll do my best for that

===

@ Aaron: just re-read Grandis's profile...

Picked up by the GDI huh?

hmmm...

*Hides a picture of a boy surrounded by GDI soldiers with the note "an honorary member" pointed at the boy*

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Before backlog-breaking... Trailer time!

Spoiler for MGLN OVA: GenerationS:

We see several flashes of lightning, highlighting a mansion besides the sea…

I have seen …

A silhouette of an elderly man, Luozorl von Mazda staring out one of the windows, gripping what seems to be a glass of liqueur.

I have seen… the future…

Another flash of lightning, this time highlighting the silhouette of a small number of people behind Luozorl.

Ineptitude…

*TSAB main HQ is shown, zooming in to Hayate, the Knights and Aurion.*

Aurion: <clutching a data pad> Well, that’s the summary. You are to be my bodyguards until this mission concerning the possible Lost Logia activity in the planet…… <eyes narrow> Duraxyll… 2. Are you ready?

Hayate: Hai!

The rest: Roger!

The fall…

Clear skies over a field; Grandis can be seen leaning on a boulder. A bird flutters into his hand as he raises it. He begins talking to the bird.

Grandis: Someday… I’ll do it; In order to finally put them to rest… <The bird flutters off as Gottes Racher forms in his hand>

*Two diagonal slashes appear on the screen. One trailing frost while the other trails embers of flames*

*the boulder is slashed into four; one slash mark is frozen and intersects with another that has molten rock*

Grandis: <Aligns the blade, still trailing bits of frost and flames with his face, a look of cold fury carved on his face> Kanarasu…

The rebirth…

*The Knights can be seen soaring in the sky, being pursued by several dragon-like entities*

Vita and Agito: Unison IN! <Followed by a brief flash of light>

*Vita, with the black parts of her outfit turned to gold while the red ones are turned into purple flies thru the flash of light*

Graf Eisen: [Raketenform!]

Agito: Flammen-

Vita: Raketen HAMMEEERRRR!!! <spins around with a literally blazing rocket hammer and smashes the pseudo-dragon> Kuso! What’s with these monsters?!

Agito: Like it matters! I’ll just burn them all! Try and keep up, Vita!

Vita: That’s my line, midget!

Agito: Looks who’s talking!

Vita: What did you say?!

*a dragon roars and attempts to bite off Vita’s head*

Vita and Agito: URUSAI!!!

Graf Eisen: [Gigantform!]

*The dragon’s head is smashed off with a blazing hammer*

Retribution…

*Tesla is bouncing on several rock protrusions as she dodges the incoming fire from seven ‘dragons’. Her eyes and hair are light blue while her outfit is primarily white. The dragons are unable to maneuver well in the maze of narrow rock formations.*

Tesla: <smiles gamely> In position, Rein?

Rein: Hai, desu!

Tesla: Yosh! <Raises Gungnir, causing several bolts of electricity to fall from the sky and charge it with energy> Gungnir!

Gungnir: [Jawohl!]

Tesla: Sturmzeichen!!! <She hurls her spear of lightning at the largest one, skewering and making it crash with the next one. This causes a chain reaction where the rest of the dragons are caved-in by an avalanche of rocks>

Rein: Striiiike!, Desu~!

Tesla: <balancing on a narrow rock spike with one foot, the other leg crossed over the first>*giggle* Seven birds with one stone! <She raises her arm, making Gungnir fly obediently to her hand>

Rein: !!! Tesla-chan, behind!!!

Tesla: !!! <jumps up and twirls Gungnir around, using her waist as leverage. She twirls in the air as well, making several circular slashes that eliminates several incoming projectiles. Upon ending the spin, she takes a defensive stance> Sniper?

*a lone figure is see fast approaching, carrying a heavy rifle device*

Gun-wielder: <flying around completely erratically> Ne, blue-haired Onee-chan. Is it alright if I beat you?

Tesla: ……

Gun-wielder: Kotae wa kitenai! (I can’t hear your answer!) <starts shooting>

A new rule…

*several clangs of metal against metal can be heard*

Aurion: You… Do I know you?!

Grandis: Heh… I see you can still recognize me, eh?! <slashes upward from the ground, causing several rock spikes to rush towards Aurion> Aniki?

Aurion: <punches the ground to counter the rock spikes with energy spikes. He then stands up and gapes in disbelief> It can’t be… You survived? Grandis?

Grandis: Aah. <Grins and takes a stance> I won’t die until I’ve made you pay for your crimes, murderer… <several cracks forms on the ground underneath his feet. The skies start to darken as several thunderclaps can be seen and heard. Gottes Racher’s color begins pulsing from white and blue to black and red> I’ve waited my whole life for this day… Aurion Dauer!

The future… has been decided…

*Three people surround Hayate, Signum, Shamal and Zafira <human form>. Each carrying large red sword, a blue halberd and a rust-colored giant axe*

Signum: Mistress! Please stand back!

Zafira: I won’t let you lay a finger on her!

Sword-wielder: Ba~ka! Less talk, more action! Ikuze, ikuze, ikuze! <charges in and is intercepted by Signum>

Axe-wielder: Hehe… I’ll make you CRY!!! <fights with Zafira>

Halberd-wielder: *flies slowly around Hayate and Shamal* Ahh~, to be left to dance with two beautiful young lasses. My luck is the greatest. <Detaches the halberd's blade, which is attached by a chain to the shaft.> Jaa, ojou-sama-tachi… <starts swinging around the chain while humming a tune> Will you dance with me?

This… is the beginning of the end… For the sake of the future...

*resounding steps can be heard as Luozorl approaches, casually playing with Yggdrasil on his hands*

For the sake of future generations, I will be the devil…

~ ~ SKILL: By JAM Project ~ ~

(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kCw1HsHeck8 Time: 3:40 onwards)

~Harukana Oozora ni Hikari no Ya wo Hanatsunda!~
(Launch an Arrow of Light into the distant Great Sky!)

*On a black background, Hayate and Grandis are shouting at each other.*

Hayate: And you! Can you really call what you’re doing as justice?!

Grandis: It’s not justice! That much I know! It’s just revenge. It’s just my life!

Hayate: I won’t let you… I won’t let you!!! This won’t lead to anything good! You’ll only end up hating yourself more!

Grandis: You’ll never understand!

~I can fly! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly! (Hey) Motto! Motto!~

Cipher and Pixy zip past several of the pseudo-dragons, a trail of explosions following them.

~I can fly! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly! (Hey) Motto! Motto!~

Felix and O’Neil ducks under several debris and shooting back at the rampaging dragons; with Felix spewing out profanity at a faster rate than his firing speed. Jack cracks a joke while firing.

~I can fly! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly! (Hey) Motto! Motto!~

The Knights (sans Signum and Agito) are duking it out with the four enemy mages.

~I can fly!! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly!! (Hey)~

*Signum in Unison is facing off against the largest ‘dragon’, Laevantine in Bogenform at the ready*

Signum: I won’t fail again!

Agito: STURM-

Signum + Agito: PHEONIX!!!

~Motto, Motto~...~

Aurion: So this is… your ideal future?

~Motto, Motto~...~

Luozorl: Not mine, but for the holders of our future…

~Motto, Motto~!~

Aurion: Sorry. I refuse to let that happen…

Luozorl: That’s a shame. Then… <glows with a frightening purple aura>

Aurion: Awaken, Astranagant…

*a picture of Hayate, hugging her book and bound by four chains like in A’s can be seen. She’s wearing the black minidress of her Knight Armor.*

~Skill my Heart~
(Skill my Heart)

*Gottes Racher is seen floating in air*

Grandis: Kako… (Past…)

*one chain is broken*

~Ginga no Hate made~
(To the Edge of the Galaxy)

*Schwertkreuz appears, crossing lightly with Gottes Racher*

Hayate: Genzai… (Present…)

*the second chain is broken*

~Atsui Yume wo Moyase~
(Burn your Passionate Dreams)

*Yggdrasil appears between the crossed staff and sword*

Luozorl: Mirai… (Future…)

*the third chain is broken*

~All I can do!~
(All I can do!)

Aurion: Eien… (Infinity)

*the last chain is broken and Hayate opens her eyes.*

~Skill my soul~
(Skill my soul)
~Tamashii wo Yobi Samase~
(Cry awake your Soul)

*random scenes of intense fighting alternates with the scene where the rest of Hayate’s armor forms around her body. Her eyes are closed again.*

~Jidai ga Ore wo Michibiku Kagiri Muteki sa!!~
(As long as the Era guides me I am Invincible!!)

*A gargantuan shaft starts to rise from beneath the ground, a purple orb at the base. Hayate’s hair goes light blonde as she once again open her eyes, now electric-blue in color.*

~ALL RIGHT!!!~

*Schwertkreuz appears before her and she grabs it at ‘All right!’.*

~Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh~!~

*Hayate's black wings burst open as she raises Schwertkreuz; the Tome of the Night Sky opens and flips thru several pages*

~MIRAI EIGO ZENKAI BATTLE!!!~
(FUTURE ETERNAL FULL-FORCE BATTLE!!!)

Hayate: Ragnarok!

*A Belkan Array appears in front of her*

~Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh~!~

Hayate: BREAKER!!!

*Ragnarok breaker shoots right at the screen.*

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha OVA: GenerationS:
A Story of Dreams, Love and Revenge

~We're going to the space over the future.~

Hayate: A story encompassing three generations…

~We're looking for the place under the shining star.~

Hayate: Our hopes, our feelings, our courage and our convictions…

~We're try to sing a song for new world...~

Hayate: A Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha OVA: GenerationS. A Story of Dreams, Love and Revenge… Coming soon…

That was fun as hell to make.
How was it?

Wow, that was intense. Which makes me wonder... what is your image of Tesla in unision with Rein?

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Good to se someone on my side.

Present and acounted for.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

I've only seen episode 2. And I'm interested.

Watch 4. Seriously, watch episode 4.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

I had a version with Aurion in the conversations. But I scrapped it for too much crack...

Not much crack in mine. Teana defends Keroko, and goes to ask Tesla for her point on the case. Keroko hears her thinking out loud and gets involved. Haven't decided on the details from that point, though.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

MASSIVE!!!

Nicely done!!

Thanks!

Originally Posted by Saint X

*Hides the Magun and Soil samples*

*Hides a copy of the canon of Kigen Arts and this month's Issue of Ray=Out*

*Hides the Velkan Valkyrie Project*

"Just dropping in a prologue- much improved than the previous version"

Spoiler for Lost: Prologue:

Blag!

The sound of bodies falling on hard earth was somehow muffled yet sickening. And the area where the bodies landed was relatively undisturbed; no signs of them falling from any great height, but still the impact was still audible. A prolonged and eerie silence reigned for a few minutes as the bodies showed no signs of life. But after a few tense minutes, movement- al least someone survived it. Within fifteen seconds of initial movement, sounds of pain emanated from the pair that landed one on top of the other- it was a definite sign of life.

“What the…” a faint moan from what seemed to be a male came out. “Where… how…”

A sudden glint of sunlight flashes thru his eyes, a sudden reminder of the event that happened just a few minutes ago, the reason of their being in this strange land.

*Flashback*

In Orbit around a planet known as EL-6125, Sector 213, Inner Orange Zone.
It was a losing battle, against seemingly imbalanced odds. They were now on the verge of recovering one of the “Feathers of Sacred Memory” from a ruin on the planet when suddenly, a mysterious man bearing the name of Viscount Kairos of the Lotus Order suddenly bore his forces and himself upon the three ships (actually four, one of them was the armored tender Fumi Maru) that made up the Recovery Task Force- the GDI Ship Azure Memory, the Royal Earlian Flagship Kagatsuchi, and the TSAB Elite Ship Silvana. He sent out two forces, attacking both those on the surface, namely the Aces and other senior personnel, and in orbit, namely those left behind to guard, namely the Forwards and some of the younger personnel. So far, the surface was already clear, thanks to the fast actions of those on the ground, but back up in space, things were reaching critical point. The Kagatsuchi, being the weakest of the 3 ships, already had extensive damages to her engines, wings and bow, so much so that her main gun, the Nano-Particle cannon was offline- only the VD-Class fighters were providing a shield for the stricken ship- themselves vulnerable to being attack, being unable to move. The Silvana was faring better, Tannhauser antimatter cannon already fired, managing to destroy the mass of the attack, shields still holding up. The Azure Memory, being made out of much tougher stuff and made by an equally tough GDI, was still, in relative, doing fine and unscathed. What was left now was the Viscount and a few tough enemies.

“Cease Fire!” Kyla commanded over the intercom as the Viscount simply defied logic against such mass of firepower, his remaining minions proving effective.

“Already tired?” the viscount simply mocked, voice somehow emanating from him thru space, sending chills to all who heard. “What boring playmates. Well never mind… I have to get what I came here to grab… and take you down as well.”

“OH SHUT UP!!!” a voice, still going strong came out of the opposite direction, from where the ships are.

*End Flashback*

The sound of chirping birds, wind and flowing water brought him back to the reality that he was not sure of being real.

“Shut… up…” he could only moan as he slowly moved himself, carefully so that the person that used him as a cushion was not disturbed.

As he carefully moved his now confirmed female companion, he could only breathe sigh of relief, awkwardness and nervousness, relief as because he heard her breathe softly- a good sign, awkwardness and nervousness because first of all, some of her areas were on him, giving him mixed feelings of tension and joy- he had only touched a girl’s skin only once- this particular girl’s to be exact, and secretly, he had long to touch it again and secondly, he had to move her without doing “anything funny”, as some would say- let’s say that that particular day a month ago was still fresh on his mind. He managed thru the ordeal, laying her down upright and managing to sit himself; leaning on a tree. He managed to gather enough strength to stand up and carefully listen to the nature around him. He closed his eyes, allowing himself to take in the flow of energy around him allowing him to sense danger by virtue of his Dei teaching. None so far, he managed to zero out one sound among others, flowing water…

“… Flowing, falling water.” He could only think as he picked up his pace, heading towards the only thing that can produce such sounds with water.

A waterfall, and not just any waterfall, it was a waterfall marking the edge of a tall cliff, overlooking what seemed to be a combination of temperate forest, farmland and a small town on the ground and in the sky, there were clouds, and landmasses floating, stark contrast to the wide blue sky. And dominating the skyline, not overwhelming but still a focus of attention, a giant sphere that seemed to be artificial, taking the aura of an eye in the sky. It was a scene that the old (sorry Kyla) admiral would label as “strange”, it was something that, if using the common dictionary, was the word “surreal”- it was simply too vast of a scope to explain it fully, but… it can be summed in a single sentence.

“This is not our world…”

Lost in another world. So we take a different approach with Subaru and Ashton, eh? interesting.

@ Aaron: just re-read Grandis's profile...

Picked up by the GDI huh?

hmmm...

*Hides a picture of a boy surrounded by GDI soldiers with the note "an honorary member" pointed at the boy*

I was planning on having the GDI save him and later getting handed over to Luozorl initially before Saint Church.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Wow, that was intense.

Thanks.

Which makes me wonder... what is your image of Tesla in unision with Rein?

Hmmm... Basically Tesla with electric-blue eyes and almost cobalt hair... Glowing even. The outfit would also be converted to primarily white and light blue. BTW, does she have a VA already?

Watch 4. Seriously, watch episode 4.

Will do.

Not much crack in mine. Teana defends Keroko, and goes to ask Tesla for her point on the case. Keroko hears her thinking out loud and gets involved. Haven't decided on the details from that point, though.

Sounds interesting. verbal sparring match with the logical one and the stubborn one...

[Liingo]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Don't get me wrong. The AMF only lasts for a second or two at best. He's outside it. As in, he fires off a short AMF in front of him not around him. And gets to charge the shot outside the effective radius and fires it once the field dissipates, usually making it too late for the target to mount a suitable counteroffensive despite having their magic unblocked. Split-second blocking of a powerful shot beyond most mages, right.

yes but is that even possible? If it was so easy to do, it would have been done already. The AMF was projected around the drones, no in any specific direction. At best, you could say that it was more potent in a specific direction, but even then the field was still quite close to the drone itself. Such close ranges would mean that he would be at risk from a mellee attack during the AMF. Also you have to take into consideration that you'd need another 2-3 seconds to charge your finisher. That's already a good 3-4 seconds for them to close and whack you, something that's easy for the melee OC/CC, and a little harder for the ranged OC/CC.

you didn't seriously think that they would just stand there in the AMF and wait to get blasted did you.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Not much crack in mine. Teana defends Keroko, and goes to ask Tesla for her point on the case. Keroko hears her thinking out loud and gets involved. Haven't decided on the details from that point, though.

Sounds fun.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Liingo

yes but is that even possible? If it was so easy to do, it would have been done already. The AMF was projected around the drones, no in any specific direction. At best, you could say that it was more potent in a specific direction, but even then the field was still quite close to the drone itself. Such close ranges would mean that he would be at risk from a mellee attack during the AMF. Also you have to take into consideration that you'd need another 2-3 seconds to charge your finisher. That's already a good 3-4 seconds for them to close and whack you, something that's easy for the melee OC/CC, and a little harder for the ranged OC/CC.

Like I said, spellcasters, right? And you also have to factor in location. Mages in flight would get stunned in the air for about 1 to 2 seconds at most (episode 25) seconds before dropping. plenty of time for him to blast appropriate targets. Of course Luozorl wouldn't come in charging if the enemy is a Knight!

you didn't seriously think that they would just stand there in the AMF and wait to get blasted did you.

No I didn't. And to ask you a question, do you seriously consider me to assign this as an all-situation "I WIN!" move? Please... And do you expect everyone to just expect him to come in with a sudden AMF blast? This is more of a surprise coup de grace to an unsuspecting opponent. And of course, there should be around a second of delay due to surprise, as well as another few subseconds to regain your bearings to mount an attack. By that time, it would already be too late.

And just to clarify a point, this is a very difficult and draining spell that can only be used in select appropriate situations; factoring in the environment, the enemy and their prior knowledge about this spell. This is by no means a spammable one-two kill move if that's what your worried about.

[Tk3997]

Originally Posted by Liingo

yes but is that even possible? If it was so easy to do, it would have been done already. The AMF was projected around the drones, no in any specific direction. At best, you could say that it was more potent in a specific direction, but even then the field was still quite close to the drone itself. Such close ranges would mean that he would be at risk from a mellee attack during the AMF. Also you have to take into consideration that you'd need another 2-3 seconds to charge your finisher. That's already a good 3-4 seconds for them to close and whack you, something that's easy for the melee OC/CC, and a little harder for the ranged OC/CC.

you didn't seriously think that they would just stand there in the AMF and wait to get blasted did you.

Plus even if they did nothing and this happened while they’re in the air this super-AMF would almost certainly cause them to lose lift and fall out of the field in about half a second, then regain it somewhere below at which point they ought to be able to just keep diving and evade. This AMF isn't going to be anywhere near as big as what the Cradle projected so they'd quickly leave it once they lost lift, I don't know how large you intended it to be but even simple acceleration from gravity would carry them about 10 meters downward in about one second.

I rematched the scene in the Cradle and their is no "stunning" IMO, it's more like surprise they suddenly lost all lift the flight spells cancel pretty much instantly when the AMF strengthens and they drop to the floor in less then one second with the equivalent of a "huh?!"

[haiz123321]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Before backlog-breaking... Trailer time!

Spoiler for MGLN OVA: GenerationS:

We see several flashes of lightning, highlighting a mansion besides the sea…

I have seen …

A silhouette of an elderly man, Luozorl von Mazda staring out one of the windows, gripping what seems to be a glass of liqueur.

I have seen… the future…

Another flash of lightning, this time highlighting the silhouette of a small number of people behind Luozorl.

Ineptitude…

*TSAB main HQ is shown, zooming in to Hayate, the Knights and Aurion.*

Aurion: <clutching a data pad> Well, that’s the summary. You are to be my bodyguards until this mission concerning the possible Lost Logia activity in the planet…… <eyes narrow> Duraxyll… 2. Are you ready?

Hayate: Hai!

The rest: Roger!

The fall…

Clear skies over a field; Grandis can be seen leaning on a boulder. A bird flutters into his hand as he raises it. He begins talking to the bird.

Grandis: Someday… I’ll do it; In order to finally put them to rest… <The bird flutters off as Gottes Racher forms in his hand>

*Two diagonal slashes appear on the screen. One trailing frost while the other trails embers of flames*

*the boulder is slashed into four; one slash mark is frozen and intersects with another that has molten rock*

Grandis: <Aligns the blade, still trailing bits of frost and flames with his face, a look of cold fury carved on his face> Kanarasu…

The rebirth…

*The Knights can be seen soaring in the sky, being pursued by several dragon-like entities*

Vita and Agito: Unison IN! <Followed by a brief flash of light>

*Vita, with the black parts of her outfit turned to gold while the red ones are turned into purple flies thru the flash of light*

Graf Eisen: [Raketenform!]

Agito: Flammen-

Vita: Raketen HAMMEEERRRR!!! <spins around with a literally blazing rocket hammer and smashes the pseudo-dragon> Kuso! What’s with these monsters?!

Agito: Like it matters! I’ll just burn them all! Try and keep up, Vita!

Vita: That’s my line, midget!

Agito: Looks who’s talking!

Vita: What did you say?!

*a dragon roars and attempts to bite off Vita’s head*

Vita and Agito: URUSAI!!!

Graf Eisen: [Gigantform!]

*The dragon’s head is smashed off with a blazing hammer*

Retribution…

*Tesla is bouncing on several rock protrusions as she dodges the incoming fire from seven ‘dragons’. Her eyes and hair are light blue while her outfit is primarily white. The dragons are unable to maneuver well in the maze of narrow rock formations.*

Tesla: <smiles gamely> In position, Rein?

Rein: Hai, desu!

Tesla: Yosh! <Raises Gungnir, causing several bolts of electricity to fall from the sky and charge it with energy> Gungnir!

Gungnir: [Jawohl!]

Tesla: Sturmzeichen!!! <She hurls her spear of lightning at the largest one, skewering and making it crash with the next one. This causes a chain reaction where the rest of the dragons are caved-in by an avalanche of rocks>

Rein: Striiiike!, Desu~!

Tesla: <balancing on a narrow rock spike with one foot, the other leg crossed over the first>*giggle* Seven birds with one stone! <She raises her arm, making Gungnir fly obediently to her hand>

Rein: !!! Tesla-chan, behind!!!

Tesla: !!! <jumps up and twirls Gungnir around, using her waist as leverage. She twirls in the air as well, making several circular slashes that eliminates several incoming projectiles. Upon ending the spin, she takes a defensive stance> Sniper?

*a lone figure is see fast approaching, carrying a heavy rifle device*

Gun-wielder: <flying around completely erratically> Ne, blue-haired Onee-chan. Is it alright if I beat you?

Tesla: ……

Gun-wielder: Kotae wa kitenai! (I can’t hear your answer!) <starts shooting>

A new rule…

*several clangs of metal against metal can be heard*

Aurion: You… Do I know you?!

Grandis: Heh… I see you can still recognize me, eh?! <slashes upward from the ground, causing several rock spikes to rush towards Aurion> Aniki?

Aurion: <punches the ground to counter the rock spikes with energy spikes. He then stands up and gapes in disbelief> It can’t be… You survived? Grandis?

Grandis: Aah. <Grins and takes a stance> I won’t die until I’ve made you pay for your crimes, murderer… <several cracks forms on the ground underneath his feet. The skies start to darken as several thunderclaps can be seen and heard. Gottes Racher’s color begins pulsing from white and blue to black and red> I’ve waited my whole life for this day… Aurion Dauer!

The future… has been decided…

*Three people surround Hayate, Signum, Shamal and Zafira <human form>. Each carrying large red sword, a blue halberd and a rust-colored giant axe*

Signum: Mistress! Please stand back!

Zafira: I won’t let you lay a finger on her!

Sword-wielder: Ba~ka! Less talk, more action! Ikuze, ikuze, ikuze! <charges in and is intercepted by Signum>

Axe-wielder: Hehe… I’ll make you CRY!!! <fights with Zafira>

Halberd-wielder: *flies slowly around Hayate and Shamal* Ahh~, to be left to dance with two beautiful young lasses. My luck is the greatest. <Detaches the halberd's blade, which is attached by a chain to the shaft.> Jaa, ojou-sama-tachi… <starts swinging around the chain while humming a tune> Will you dance with me?

This… is the beginning of the end… For the sake of the future...

*resounding steps can be heard as Luozorl approaches, casually playing with Yggdrasil on his hands*

For the sake of future generations, I will be the devil…

~ ~ SKILL: By JAM Project ~ ~

(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kCw1HsHeck8 Time: 3:40 onwards)

~Harukana Oozora ni Hikari no Ya wo Hanatsunda!~
(Launch an Arrow of Light into the distant Great Sky!)

*On a black background, Hayate and Grandis are shouting at each other.*

Hayate: And you! Can you really call what you’re doing as justice?!

Grandis: It’s not justice! That much I know! It’s just revenge. It’s just my life!

Hayate: I won’t let you… I won’t let you!!! This won’t lead to anything good! You’ll only end up hating yourself more!

Grandis: You’ll never understand!

~I can fly! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly! (Hey) Motto! Motto!~

Cipher and Pixy zip past several of the pseudo-dragons, a trail of explosions following them.

~I can fly! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly! (Hey) Motto! Motto!~

Felix and O’Neil ducks under several debris and shooting back at the rampaging dragons; with Felix spewing out profanity at a faster rate than his firing speed. Jack cracks a joke while firing.

~I can fly! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly! (Hey) Motto! Motto!~

The Knights (sans Signum and Agito) are duking it out with the four enemy mages.

~I can fly!! (Hey) You can fly!? (Hey)We can fly!! (Hey)~

*Signum in Unison is facing off against the largest ‘dragon’, Laevantine in Bogenform at the ready*

Signum: I won’t fail again!

Agito: STURM-

Signum + Agito: PHEONIX!!!

~Motto, Motto~...~

Aurion: So this is… your ideal future?

~Motto, Motto~...~

Luozorl: Not mine, but for the holders of our future…

~Motto, Motto~!~

Aurion: Sorry. I refuse to let that happen…

Luozorl: That’s a shame. Then… <glows with a frightening purple aura>

Aurion: Awaken, Astranagant…

*a picture of Hayate, hugging her book and bound by four chains like in A’s can be seen. She’s wearing the black minidress of her Knight Armor.*

~Skill my Heart~
(Skill my Heart)

*Gottes Racher is seen floating in air*

Grandis: Kako… (Past…)

*one chain is broken*

~Ginga no Hate made~
(To the Edge of the Galaxy)

*Schwertkreuz appears, crossing lightly with Gottes Racher*

Hayate: Genzai… (Present…)

*the second chain is broken*

~Atsui Yume wo Moyase~
(Burn your Passionate Dreams)

*Yggdrasil appears between the crossed staff and sword*

Luozorl: Mirai… (Future…)

*the third chain is broken*

~All I can do!~
(All I can do!)

Aurion: Eien… (Infinity)

*the last chain is broken and Hayate opens her eyes.*

~Skill my soul~
(Skill my soul)
~Tamashii wo Yobi Samase~
(Cry awake your Soul)

*random scenes of intense fighting alternates with the scene where the rest of Hayate’s armor forms around her body. Her eyes are closed again.*

~Jidai ga Ore wo Michibiku Kagiri Muteki sa!!~
(As long as the Era guides me I am Invincible!!)

*A gargantuan shaft starts to rise from beneath the ground, a purple orb at the base. Hayate’s hair goes light blonde as she once again open her eyes, now electric-blue in color.*

~ALL RIGHT!!!~

*Schwertkreuz appears before her and she grabs it at ‘All right!’.*

~Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh~!~

*Hayate's black wings burst open as she raises Schwertkreuz; the Tome of the Night Sky opens and flips thru several pages*

~MIRAI EIGO ZENKAI BATTLE!!!~
(FUTURE ETERNAL FULL-FORCE BATTLE!!!)

Hayate: Ragnarok!

*A Belkan Array appears in front of her*

~Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh~!~

Hayate: BREAKER!!!

*Ragnarok breaker shoots right at the screen.*

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha OVA: GenerationS:
A Story of Dreams, Love and Revenge

~We're going to the space over the future.~

Hayate: A story encompassing three generations…

~We're looking for the place under the shining star.~

Hayate: Our hopes, our feelings, our courage and our convictions…

~We're try to sing a song for new world...~

Hayate: A Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha OVA: GenerationS. A Story of Dreams, Love and Revenge… Coming soon…

That was fun as hell to make.
How was it?

Yet another one... UNPOSSIBLE!
I reckon Grandis is Hayate's love? (I forgot the name of the guy u made so I'm guessin)

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Tk3997

Plus even if they did nothing and this happened while they’re in the air this super-AMF would almost certainly cause them to lose lift and fall out of the field in about half a second, then regain it somewhere below at which point they ought to be able to just keep diving and evade. This AMF isn't going to be anywhere near as big as what the Cradle projected so they'd quickly leave it once they lost lift, I don't know how large you intended it to be but even simple acceleration from gravity would carry them about 10 meters downward in about one second.

Yes, of course. But like I said, I'm basing this on the effects shown by the super AMF by the cradles. There, Hayate and Nanoha were overwhelmed by the AMF-waves and stay suspended for at least 2 seconds (confirmed in episode 25).<~(following in-show timing.) The size of my intended projection would be around three meters diameter with a power-level of about S+. By that time, the following blast (around AA+ in attack power) would have been too fast to dodge.

Of course, enemies that are expecting this move would be able to mount a successful countermeasure. But I'm also factoring in the element of surprise. How would someone like, say, Nanoha react if she raised her hand to block with a round shield then just suddenly her magic is blown away? I don't expect her to suddenly react accordingly to the situation because she would gasp in surprise first.

I rematched the scene in the Cradle and their is no "stunning" IMO, it's more like surprise they suddenly lost all lift the flight spells cancel pretty much instantly when the AMF strengthens and they drop to the floor in less then one second with the equivalent of a "huh?!"

I made a mistake with my wording. It's 'suspended' in mid-air.

Originally Posted by haiz

Yet another one... UNPOSSIBLE!
I reckon Grandis is Hayate's love? (I forgot the name of the guy u made so I'm guessin)

Yes, he is. And it's not really flattering to know that you instantly forgot the name of my OC within the day...

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Hmmm... Basically Tesla with electric-blue eyes and almost cobalt hair... Glowing even. The outfit would also be converted to primarily white and light blue. BTW, does she have a VA already?

Cobalt? Hmm, I'll try that one later. For now I present a little idea of mine, and the reason why Tesla doesn't unision much. It makes Hayate... uncomfortable.

Spoiler:

And no, I haven't looked for a VA yet.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Cobalt? Hmm, I'll try that one later. For now I present a little idea of mine, and the reason why Tesla doesn't unision much. It makes Hayate... uncomfortable.

Spoiler:

And no, I haven't looked for a VA yet.

I see why indeed...

But that kinda destroys the trend of Unison w/ Rein = lighter hair color and light blue eyes...


Gotta run now. My mom is starting to get an anger for computers that are on for the time being...